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anokha

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Update 1

( Kahani likhne se pahle ummid kartaa hu ki mai iss kahani me regular update dunga and aapne shayad hi aisi kahani x forum par padhi ho or isi tarah ki kahani kab se mai likhna chahta tha jo abhi tak kisi ne na padhi ho )

Kahani hai Radha Naam ki ek ladki ki jiski ek iccha hoti hai . Ek army women ban ne ki or wo banti bhi hai . Fir uski shadi ek army Wale ladke se hi ho jati hai or unke ek pyaare se ladke ka janam hota hai jiska naam hota hai "Vivek ".


Radha ki pic



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Par kahte hai na kismat ko kuch or manjoor hota hai baccha hone ke 2 saal baad hi Vivek ke pita ki ek army haadse me maut ho jaati hai .

(Ab maine ye nahi bataya hai ye kiss dekh ki army hai kyunki ki bhi desh ki army ke liye ye aisa likhna uchit nahi hai isi liye moderators iss chij ka khayal rakhe ki country ka naam nahi bataya hai baki places ke naam bhi fantasy wale hi honge )

Abhi "18 saal baad "

Radha age - 36 years

Vivek ka 18 va janamdin hota hai or wo ski kar raha hota hai wo bhi baraf ke pahado me .


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(Destination pe pahuch ke . )

EK aadmi ( badi kaali daadhi me ) - aamin mere bacche aamin kya junun kya speed hai tum inn baraf ke pahado ke sartaaj ban chuke ho .

Vivek haath chumte hue or haato ko apni aanko se lagate hue . - sab aapke sabak ka nateeja hai , aap bataiye aage kya karna hai.

Daadi wala aadmi - aao .

Or fir dono ek gaadi me baithte hai kaali color ki or nikal padte hai .


Scene ( army headquarters)

Radha - sir I want 2 days leave .


Major - but why .

Radha - sir , aaj mere bete ka birthday hai .

Major - wow great news , but 2 days leave soldier . Kyu !

Radha - sir aaj to evening ho jaayegi , kal ka pura din bete ke liye saath spend karna chahugi uske , kab se nahi mili hu .

Major - leave ( silent )

Radha - kya sir granted or not

Major - ( muskurate hue ) granted .

Radha ( khush hote hue ) - thanks sir , you are also invited you can come there in party.

Major - no dear it's you and your son enjoy there and be on your duty the day after tomorrow, got it soldier .

Radha( jor se ) - yes sir .

Major - leave .

Or fir Radha chali jaati hai .

Sidhe apna saman pack karti hai or nikal padti hai gahr ki taraf Jo ki headquarters se 50 km dur tha or usse shaam hone wali thi pahuchte pahuchte .

SHaam ka samay Radha ghar me enter hoti hai . ........

Iske aage ka baad me agle update me .
 

Achin_Saha18

Don't trust anyone blindly
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Update 1

( Kahani likhne se pahle ummid kartaa hu ki mai iss kahani me regular update dunga and aapne shayad hi aisi kahani x forum par padhi ho or isi tarah ki kahani kab se mai likhna chahta tha jo abhi tak kisi ne na padhi ho )

Kahani hai Radha Naam ki ek ladki ki jiski ek iccha hoti hai . Ek army women ban ne ki or wo banti bhi hai . Fir uski shadi ek army Wale ladke se hi ho jati hai or unke ek pyaare se ladke ka janam hota hai jiska naam hota hai "Vivek ".


Radha ki pic



images
Par kahte hai na kismat ko kuch or manjoor hota hai baccha hone ke 2 saal baad hi Vivek ke pita ki ek army haadse me maut ho jaati hai .

(Ab maine ye nahi bataya hai ye kiss dekh ki army hai kyunki ki bhi desh ki army ke liye ye aisa likhna uchit nahi hai isi liye moderators iss chij ka khayal rakhe ki country ka naam nahi bataya hai baki places ke naam bhi fantasy wale hi honge )

Abhi "18 saal baad "

Radha age - 36 years

Vivek ka 18 va janamdin hota hai or wo ski kar raha hota hai wo bhi baraf ke pahado me .


images-1


(Destination pe pahuch ke . )

EK aadmi ( badi kaali daadhi me ) - aamin mere bacche aamin kya junun kya speed hai tum inn baraf ke pahado ke sartaaj ban chuke ho .

Vivek haath chumte hue or haato ko apni aanko se lagate hue . - sab aapke sabak ka nateeja hai , aap bataiye aage kya karna hai.

Daadi wala aadmi - aao .

Or fir dono ek gaadi me baithte hai kaali color ki or nikal padte hai .


Scene ( army headquarters)

Radha - sir I want 2 days leave .


Major - but why .

Radha - sir , aaj mere bete ka birthday hai .

Major - wow great news , but 2 days leave soldier . Kyu !

Radha - sir aaj to evening ho jaayegi , kal ka pura din bete ke liye saath spend karna chahugi uske , kab se nahi mili hu .

Major - leave ( silent )

Radha - kya sir granted or not

Major - ( muskurate hue ) granted .

Radha ( khush hote hue ) - thanks sir , you are also invited you can come there in party.

Major - no dear it's you and your son enjoy there and be on your duty the day after tomorrow, got it soldier .

Radha( jor se ) - yes sir .

Major - leave .

Or fir Radha chali jaati hai .

Sidhe apna saman pack karti hai or nikal padti hai gahr ki taraf Jo ki headquarters se 50 km dur tha or usse shaam hone wali thi pahuchte pahuchte .

SHaam ka samay Radha ghar me enter hoti hai . ........

Iske aage ka baad me agle update me .
Nice Start
Waiting for next update
 

Motaland2468

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Update 1

( Kahani likhne se pahle ummid kartaa hu ki mai iss kahani me regular update dunga and aapne shayad hi aisi kahani x forum par padhi ho or isi tarah ki kahani kab se mai likhna chahta tha jo abhi tak kisi ne na padhi ho )

Kahani hai Radha Naam ki ek ladki ki jiski ek iccha hoti hai . Ek army women ban ne ki or wo banti bhi hai . Fir uski shadi ek army Wale ladke se hi ho jati hai or unke ek pyaare se ladke ka janam hota hai jiska naam hota hai "Vivek ".


Radha ki pic



images
Par kahte hai na kismat ko kuch or manjoor hota hai baccha hone ke 2 saal baad hi Vivek ke pita ki ek army haadse me maut ho jaati hai .

(Ab maine ye nahi bataya hai ye kiss dekh ki army hai kyunki ki bhi desh ki army ke liye ye aisa likhna uchit nahi hai isi liye moderators iss chij ka khayal rakhe ki country ka naam nahi bataya hai baki places ke naam bhi fantasy wale hi honge )

Abhi "18 saal baad "

Radha age - 36 years

Vivek ka 18 va janamdin hota hai or wo ski kar raha hota hai wo bhi baraf ke pahado me .


images-1


(Destination pe pahuch ke . )

EK aadmi ( badi kaali daadhi me ) - aamin mere bacche aamin kya junun kya speed hai tum inn baraf ke pahado ke sartaaj ban chuke ho .

Vivek haath chumte hue or haato ko apni aanko se lagate hue . - sab aapke sabak ka nateeja hai , aap bataiye aage kya karna hai.

Daadi wala aadmi - aao .

Or fir dono ek gaadi me baithte hai kaali color ki or nikal padte hai .


Scene ( army headquarters)

Radha - sir I want 2 days leave .


Major - but why .

Radha - sir , aaj mere bete ka birthday hai .

Major - wow great news , but 2 days leave soldier . Kyu !

Radha - sir aaj to evening ho jaayegi , kal ka pura din bete ke liye saath spend karna chahugi uske , kab se nahi mili hu .

Major - leave ( silent )

Radha - kya sir granted or not

Major - ( muskurate hue ) granted .

Radha ( khush hote hue ) - thanks sir , you are also invited you can come there in party.

Major - no dear it's you and your son enjoy there and be on your duty the day after tomorrow, got it soldier .

Radha( jor se ) - yes sir .

Major - leave .

Or fir Radha chali jaati hai .

Sidhe apna saman pack karti hai or nikal padti hai gahr ki taraf Jo ki headquarters se 50 km dur tha or usse shaam hone wali thi pahuchte pahuchte .

SHaam ka samay Radha ghar me enter hoti hai . ........

Iske aage ka baad me agle update me .
Yaar kitni story adhuri chodoge.pehle jo chal rahi hai unko complete karo fir new story shuru karo
 
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