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Hero - Raj (20 sal)
Raj ki maa - Sakshi (42 sal) - Main Heroine
Raj ki Behen - Neha (18 sal)
Raj ke papa(late) - Rajdeep

Raj ki Mausi - Radha (43 sal)

Radha ki Beti - Preeti (19 sal)


Out off family

Sakshi ki Best Friend from her school = Naina (35 sal)
Raj's Best Friend from his childhood = Saurabh
Raj's classmate = Shreya (20 sal)



Amit Sir(Sports Teacher) - 45 sal = Tharki (Ladkibaazi se badnaam hai)

Vineet(Awara Student) - 18 sal = Neha ki class me padhta hai
 
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UPDATE-9

Raj ne ek cigarette ka packet khareeda aur seedha Yamuna nadi wale pul par chala gaya.


(Raat ka waqt, Yamuna nadi ke pul par. Hawa mein sannata, bas nadi ki dheemi aawaz.
Raj ek cigarette ka pack liye khada hai, uski aankhein laal, haath kaanp rahe hain.
Wo hi pul jahan Rajdeep ne Sakshi ko shaadi se pehle propose kiya tha... aur wo same pul jo Rajdeep ne Raj ko bhi dikhaya tha apni maut se pehle... jab wo car chala raha tha)

Raj: (Apne aap se badbadate hue) "Tune yahan pul pe aakar kya paaya? Yaadein? Wo bhi aisi yaadein jinmein tu tha hi nahin..."

(Wo cigarette nikalta hai, jalata hai. Raj, pehli baar cigarette pee raha tha, dhuein ka andar lete hi khaansi lagti hai, par wo rukta nahin. Aankhon se aansoo behne lagte hain.)

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Raj: (Tooti aawaz mein) "Mera pyaar... mujh par bharosa nahin karta. Aaj main fail ho gaya..."

(Wo cigarette ko zor se phenk deta hai, gusse mein jor se chillata hai, phir achaanak uthta hai.)

(Saurabh ka ghar. Raat ke andhere mein 2 baje, bina kisi call ke Zordaar dastak)
Raj seedha apne dost Saurabh ke ghar pahuncha.

Saurabh neend mein uthta hai aur darwaza kholta hai , Raj ko buri haalat mein dekhkar hairan ho jata hai.

Saurabh: (Aankhein malte hue) "Kaun? Oye! Raj?! Tu"

Saurabh: "Bhai itni raat ko... teri haalat dekhkar lag raha hai jaise bhooton ne peecha kiya ho!"

Raj: (Kaanpti aawaz mein) "Bhoot nahin, yaar... meri hi kamzori ne mujhe kha liya hai."

(Raj andar ghusta hai.)

(Raj ka chehra dekhkar wo chaunk jata hai. Raj ki aankhein laal sooji hui, kapde ast-vyast. Chehre par aansoo sookhe hue. Wo bina kuch kahe andar ghus jata hai. Wo sofe par girte hue baith jata hai.)

Saurabh: (Chintit) "Yaar, tu theek toh hai na? Kya hua? Tu aisa kabhi nahin dikha."

Raj: (Kaanpti aawaz mein) "Saurabh... wo Amit... wo saale ne—"


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(Wo ruk jata hai, uske gale se shabd nahin nikalte. Saurabh shaanti se baith jata hai, uske kandhe par haath rakhta hai.)

(Saurabh gambhir ho jata hai, Raj ke paas baithta hai.)

Saurabh: "Bol, yaar. Main hoon na?"

Saurabh toh ekdam shaant aur samajhne wala banda hai. Raj ne apna poora dil khol diya.

(Raj dheere-dheere batata hai—Amit ke baare mein, Sakshi ko lekar apne dar ke baare mein.
Usne Amit aur Sakshi ko bachane ki apni poori ichcha ke baare mein bataya,

lekin apne ghar ke drama ke baare mein kuch nahin bola, Ghar ka drama chhupa leta hai. Saurabh sirf sunta hai.


Saurabh ne use aaraam se suna aur use shaant karne ki poori koshish ki.

Raj: (Tooti aawaz mein) "Saurabh... aaj pehli baar cigarette pi." (Wo hansta hai, maano khud par hi gussa ho.)

Raj: "Pata hai? Maine socha tha ki ye dhuan shayad dard ko kam kar dega... par usne bas meri galti aur yaad dila di."
(Aankhon se aansoo girte hain, wo ladkhadate hue bolta hai.)

Achaanak Raj apna phone nikalta hai, Sakshi ki tasveer dekhta hai.

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(Phir achanak gusse mein wo uthta hai aur deewar par zor se mukka maarta hai! Ek... do... teen baar.
Uske haath se khoon nikalne laga..)
Vo shayad soch raha tha ki sharirik dard se dil ka dard kam ho jayega.

Saurabh(Jhapatkar pakadte hue): "Bas, bhai! Bas! Paagal ho gaya hai kya, tu khud ko kyun maar raha hai!"
(Saurabh use pakadkar bithata hai.)

Raj: (Hanste hue, aankhon mein aansoo) "Dard... bahar nikal jayega... aise..."

Raj: (Shaant, par dridh) "Saurabh... main sirf usko protect nahin karna chahta. Main..."

Raj (mann mein) "Main shayad usko pyar karne laga hoon..."

Raj: (Man hi man) "Maaf karna, Sakshi... main taiyaar hokar aaoonga. Jab tak main poori tarah shaant nahin ho jata... nahin aaoonga. Par jab aaoonga... toh tumhare liye ek naya Raj bankar aaoonga."

Akele mein,
Raj apne phone mein Sakshi ki photo ko ekatak dekh raha tha,
Raj: (Gehri saans lekar) "Koi tumhe dekh bhi lega... toh main uski jaan le loonga."

Kai ghanton tak khud se baat karne ke baad, Raj ek naye aur mazboot faisle par pahuncha.
Usne socha ki wo sirf Sakshi ko sharirik roop se hi nahin bachaega, balki uski azaadi ko samjhega aur use pyar karega.
Usne shaanti se maan liya ki Sakshi ki azaadi hi uski taakat hai. Usne shayad tabhi ghar lautne ka faisla kiya jab wo poori tarah se shaant aur clear ho gaya ki Sakshi se kaise baat karni hai.

Sach mein, is poore bahar ke nazare ne Raj ko pyar ko sirf suraksha se badhkar samajhne mein madad ki.

Ab wo pyar ko aur bhi gehre aur izzat wale tareeke se samajhne laga tha. Sakshi ke liye uske andar ki commitment aur bhi pakka ho gaya.
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## Raj aur Sakshi: Ek Bekarar Raat (Raj and Sakshi: A Restless Night)

Wah! Kya baat hai. Aaj toh Raj aur Sakshi dono hi bechain the. Ek taraf Raj ka dil toota, toh doosri taraf Sakshi ko apni baaton ka pachtawa ho raha tha.

Aaj toh Sakshi ka bhi bura haal tha. Ghar mein Raj hi toh iklauta mard hai, uska sabse pyara insaan poori duniya mein.
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### Sakshi ki Raat Bhar ki Bechani aur Ehsaas (Sakshi's Sleepless Night and Realization)

(Raat ke 2 baje. Ghar mein sannata.
Neha so chuki hai. ghar mein sannata tha aur Sakshi akeli baithi hai, aankhon mein neend nahi, bas... ek dar. Uska dil bhaari hai)

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Sakshi: (Khud se badbadaate hue) "Maine use kya keh diya... Mera Raj... meri duniya ka aakhri aadmi..."

(Vah sofay par baithkar apne ghutno se sir chhupa leti hai. Aankhen band karti hai, aur Raj ki yaadein use gher leti hain...)

Use apni kahi baaton ka bojh mehsoos ho raha tha, jaise woh shabd use andar hi andar kuchal rahe hon. Kuch khane ka man hi nahi kar raha tha. Uska dimag bas Raj ke saath bitaaye palon mein khoya hua tha.

Woh bechari bahut zyaada soch rahi thi, aur der raat tak use neend nahi aayi.
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### Yaadon ka Sailaab aur Gehrata Ehsaas (Flood of Memories and Deepening Realization)

Tabhi use khaas taur par woh pal aaye jab Raj ne niswarth bhav se usko pyar kiya tha, Raj ne apni zarooraton se pehle use rakha tha. Shayad uske bachpan ka koi aisa lamha jab usne Sakshi ke liye kamaal ki maturity ya protective instinct dikhayi thi. Use Raj ki bhavnaon ki gehrai ka ehsaas hua aur ye bhi samajh aaya ki woh us par kitna depend ho gayi hai aur use kitna pyar karti hai. Ye ehsaas kisi aam Maa ke pyar se kahin badhkar tha.

Sakshi ke andar ki ye uthal-puthal use sirf pachtave se nahi, balki Raj ke liye apne gehre pyar ka ehsaas kara rahi thi.

(Flashback: Raj bachpan mein. Sakshi bimar padi hai, bukhar tez. Raj, jo khud sirf 10 saal ka hai, poori raat jaagkar uske sir par pani ki patti rakhta hai. Subah tak uski aankhen laal ho jaati hain, par wah muskurata hai.)

Chhota Raj: (Thaki awaaz mein) "Maa... tum theek ho na? Mein aapse bahut pyar karta hun maa... Aap jaldi theek ho jao please"

(Sakshi uski masoomiyat, uska pyar yaad karke sihar uthti hai. Aankhen bhar aati hain.)

(Wapas vartman. Sakshi ka phone uthati hai, Raj ki tasveer dekhti hai. Ungliyan uske chehre par trace karti hain.)

Sakshi: (Kaanpte honthon se) "Maine tujhe daant diya... Maaf karna, Raj..."
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### Bechani aur Raj ka Intezar (Restlessness and Waiting for Raj)

(Raat ke 3 baje the, achaanak Sakshi ko bahar Raj ki bike ki awaaz sunai di. Sakshi ka dil dhadak uthta hai. Wah bina chappal pahne hi darwaze ki taraf bhagti hai.)

Sakshi: (Utsukta se) "Raj?!"

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Woh nange pair hi daudkar dekhne gayi, lekin woh bas hawa thi. Usne raat ka khana chhua tak nahi.

Uski jagah usne Raj ke pasandida aloo ke parathe banaaye (jo baad mein thande hi pade rahe).

(Phone uthati hai. Raj ko call karne ki koshish karti hai... 10 baar. Har baar ring hoti hai, par koi jawab nahi. Message likhti hai—)

Message: "Raj wapas aaja beta... Maa maaf karegi..."

(Lekin delete kar deti hai. Phir se likhti hai, phir delete. Aise hi 11 baar.)

Aur phir saare delete kar diye.

(Achaanak uske dimag mein bure, negative khayal aane lagte hain. Wah sir pakadkar baith jaati hai.)

Sakshi: (Dar se kaanpte hue) "Nahi... nahi... mere Raj ko kuch nahi hua hoga. Agar use kuch ho gaya toh... main apni jaan de doongi!"

Sakshi ko laga ki usne Raj ko daantne mein had par kar di thi. (Wah zor se sir hilaati hai, maano khayalon ko bhaga rahi ho. Phir achaanak khud par gussa aata hai.)

Sakshi: (Gusse mein khud se) "Tune bahut zyaada kar diya, Sakshi! Use daantkar bhaga diya... ab tu hi bhugat rahi hai!"

(Wah phir se Raj ki tasveer dekhti hai, aur is baar ek nayi bhavna uske dil mein uthti hai... sirf mamta nahi, kuch aur... kuch gehra. Wah sihar uthti hai.)

Sakshi: (Dheeme se) "Ye... ye kya ho raha hai mujhe...?"

(Bahar hawa ka ek jhonka khidki se takrata hai. Sakshi ki aankhen band ho jaati hain. Wah jaanti hai—raat beetne wali nahi. Na jaane kab tak ye intezar khatam hoga...)

Is scene mein Sakshi ki bhavnaen mamta se aage badhkar ek gehre, ankahe pyar tak pahunchti hain. Wah ab sirf uski Maa nahi rahi... wah uske liye kuch aur ban chuki hai.
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(Saurabh ke ghar ki balcony. Raat ke 3 baje. Raj cigarette ke dhuein mein apna dard dhoondhne ki koshish kar raha hai. Uski aankhein sooji hui, haathon mein kharonchein. Saurabh plate mein khana lekar aata hai.)

Raj ne na kuch khaya na piya. Saurabh ne use khane ke liye poocha bhi, par Raj ne kuch nahi khaya.

Raj: (Sunn awaaz mein) "Bhookh nahi hai... dard se bhara pet... khana nahi pachega."
(Raj khaali ghoorta hua deewar ki taraf dekhta hai. Saurabh ki taraf nahin.)

(Raj bistar par pada hai, aankhein khuli hui. Ceiling ko ghoor raha hai. Uske dimaag mein bas ek hi vakya goonj raha hai =Sakshi ki awaaz (loop mein): "Tumne meri izzat kharab kar di!"

(Vah apne kaan band kar leta hai, par awaaz band nahi hoti. 100 baar? 200 baar? Use khud pata nahi)

Raj: (Dard mein muskurate hue) "Ab... andar ka dard... bahar aa gaya na?"

(Thodi der baad. Raj so jata hai, par neend mein bhi chain nahi)
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### Ek Bhayanak Sapna Aur Adhikar Ki Bhavna

Rote-rote Raj wahin so gaya, aur use ek bahut bura sapna aaya, jismein Amit Sakshi ke saath RAPE kar raha tha, Amit Sakshi ke upar haavi ho raha hai! Sakshi cheekh rahi hai!

Raj (neend mein): (Buri tarah karwatein badalte hue) "Nahi... Amit chhod use... Sakshi...!"

(Achanak vah zor se bolta hai)

Raj: (Neend mein phusphusate hue) "Kuch nahi hoga tumhe... ab se tum meri ho... sirf meri..."

(Gahri saans lekar) "Meri zindagi se bhi pehle... tum meri ho Sakshi... ab mujhe hi kuch karna padega"

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(Subah. Raj achanak chaunkkar uthta hai. Pasine se bheega hua. Use apne sapne yaad aate hain... aur vah khud se ghabra jata hai.)

Ye sab kuch aisa tha jaise vo apne andar ke us adhikar wali bhavna se lad raha ho, lekin kahin na kahin ye dikha raha tha ki Sakshi uske liye kitni mayne rakhti hai, shayad ek aise tareeke se jo usne khud kabhi nahi samjha tha.

Raj: (Khud se dara hua) "Ye... ye kya soch raha hoon main?!"

Agli subah, vo apne hi in vicharon se dar gaya. Use laga ye sab kya soch liya usne!
(Vah bathroom mein bhaagta hai. Cold shower chalu kar deta hai. Thanda paani uske badan par padta hai. Apne dimaag ko shant karne ke liye usne thande paani se shower liya.)
Wo cheekhna chahta hai par awaaz nahi nikalti.

Raj: (Kaampte honthon se) "Dimaag se ye gandagi nikal kyun nahi rahi hai..."

(Par paani se sirf badan dhulta hai... dimaag ki gandagi to abhi bhi wahin hai.)
 
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UPDATE-9

Raj ne ek cigarette ka packet khareeda aur seedha Yamuna nadi wale pul par chala gaya.


(Raat ka waqt, Yamuna nadi ke pul par. Hawa mein sannata, bas nadi ki dheemi aawaz.
Raj ek cigarette ka pack liye khada hai, uski aankhein laal, haath kaanp rahe hain.
Wo hi pul jahan Rajdeep ne Sakshi ko shaadi se pehle propose kiya tha... aur wo same pul jo Rajdeep ne Raj ko bhi dikhaya tha apni maut se pehle... jab wo car chala raha tha)

Raj: (Apne aap se badbadate hue) "Tune yahan pul pe aakar kya paaya? Yaadein? Wo bhi aisi yaadein jinmein tu tha hi nahin..."

(Wo cigarette nikalta hai, jalata hai. Raj, pehli baar cigarette pee raha tha, dhuein ka andar lete hi khaansi lagti hai, par wo rukta nahin. Aankhon se aansoo behne lagte hain.)

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Raj: (Tooti aawaz mein) "Mera pyaar... mujh par bharosa nahin karta. Aaj main fail ho gaya..."

(Wo cigarette ko zor se phenk deta hai, gusse mein jor se chillata hai, phir achaanak uthta hai.)

(Saurabh ka ghar. Raat ke andhere mein 2 baje, bina kisi call ke Zordaar dastak)
Raj seedha apne dost Saurabh ke ghar pahuncha.

Saurabh neend mein uthta hai aur darwaza kholta hai , Raj ko buri haalat mein dekhkar hairan ho jata hai.

Saurabh: (Aankhein malte hue) "Kaun? Oye! Raj?! Tu"

Saurabh: "Bhai itni raat ko... teri haalat dekhkar lag raha hai jaise bhooton ne peecha kiya ho!"

Raj: (Kaanpti aawaz mein) "Bhoot nahin, yaar... meri hi kamzori ne mujhe kha liya hai."

(Raj andar ghusta hai.)

(Raj ka chehra dekhkar wo chaunk jata hai. Raj ki aankhein laal sooji hui, kapde ast-vyast. Chehre par aansoo sookhe hue. Wo bina kuch kahe andar ghus jata hai. Wo sofe par girte hue baith jata hai.)

Saurabh: (Chintit) "Yaar, tu theek toh hai na? Kya hua? Tu aisa kabhi nahin dikha."

Raj: (Kaanpti aawaz mein) "Saurabh... wo Amit... wo saale ne—"

(Wo ruk jata hai, uske gale se shabd nahin nikalte. Saurabh shaanti se baith jata hai, uske kandhe par haath rakhta hai.)

(Saurabh gambhir ho jata hai, Raj ke paas baithta hai.)

Saurabh: "Bol, yaar. Main hoon na?"


Saurabh toh ekdam shaant aur samajhne wala banda hai. Raj ne apna poora dil khol diya.

(Raj dheere-dheere batata hai—Amit ke baare mein, Sakshi ko lekar apne dar ke baare mein.
Usne Amit aur Sakshi ko bachane ki apni poori ichcha ke baare mein bataya,

lekin apne ghar ke drama ke baare mein kuch nahin bola, Ghar ka drama chhupa leta hai. Saurabh sirf sunta hai.


Saurabh ne use aaraam se suna aur use shaant karne ki poori koshish ki.

Raj: (Tooti aawaz mein) "Saurabh... aaj pehli baar cigarette pi." (Wo hansta hai, maano khud par hi gussa ho.)

Raj: "Pata hai? Maine socha tha ki ye dhuan shayad dard ko kam kar dega... par usne bas meri galti aur yaad dila di."
(Aankhon se aansoo girte hain, wo ladkhadate hue bolta hai.)

Achaanak Raj apna phone nikalta hai, Sakshi ki tasveer dekhta hai.

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(Phir achanak gusse mein wo uthta hai aur deewar par zor se mukka maarta hai! Ek... do... teen baar.
Uske haath se khoon nikalne laga..)
Vo shayad soch raha tha ki sharirik dard se dil ka dard kam ho jayega.

Saurabh(Jhapatkar pakadte hue): "Bas, bhai! Bas! Paagal ho gaya hai kya, tu khud ko kyun maar raha hai!"
(Saurabh use pakadkar bithata hai.)

Raj: (Hanste hue, aankhon mein aansoo) "Dard... bahar nikal jayega... aise..."

Raj: (Shaant, par dridh) "Saurabh... main sirf usko protect nahin karna chahta. Main..."

Raj (mann mein) "Main shayad usko pyar karne laga hoon..."

Raj: (Man hi man) "Maaf karna, Sakshi... main taiyaar hokar aaoonga. Jab tak main poori tarah shaant nahin ho jata... nahin aaoonga. Par jab aaoonga... toh tumhare liye ek naya Raj bankar aaoonga."

Akele mein,
Raj apne phone mein Sakshi ki photo ko ekatak dekh raha tha,
Raj: (Gehri saans lekar) "Koi tumhe dekh bhi lega... toh main uski jaan le loonga."

Kai ghanton tak khud se baat karne ke baad, Raj ek naye aur mazboot faisle par pahuncha.
Usne socha ki wo sirf Sakshi ko sharirik roop se hi nahin bachaega, balki uski azaadi ko samjhega aur use pyar karega.
Usne shaanti se maan liya ki Sakshi ki azaadi hi uski taakat hai. Usne shayad tabhi ghar lautne ka faisla kiya jab wo poori tarah se shaant aur clear ho gaya ki Sakshi se kaise baat karni hai.

Sach mein, is poore bahar ke nazare ne Raj ko pyar ko sirf suraksha se badhkar samajhne mein madad ki.

Ab wo pyar ko aur bhi gehre aur izzat wale tareeke se samajhne laga tha. Sakshi ke liye uske andar ki commitment aur bhi pakka ho gaya.
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## Raj aur Sakshi: Ek Bekarar Raat (Raj and Sakshi: A Restless Night)

Wah! Kya baat hai. Aaj toh Raj aur Sakshi dono hi bechain the. Ek taraf Raj ka dil toota, toh doosri taraf Sakshi ko apni baaton ka pachtawa ho raha tha.

Aaj toh Sakshi ka bhi bura haal tha. Ghar mein Raj hi toh iklauta mard hai, uska sabse pyara insaan poori duniya mein.
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### Sakshi ki Raat Bhar ki Bechani aur Ehsaas (Sakshi's Sleepless Night and Realization)

(Raat ke 2 baje. Ghar mein sannata.
Neha so chuki hai. ghar mein sannata tha aur Sakshi akeli baithi hai, aankhon mein neend nahi, bas... ek dar. Uska dil bhaari hai)

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Sakshi: (Khud se badbadaate hue) "Maine use kya keh diya... Mera Raj... meri duniya ka aakhri aadmi..."

(Vah sofay par baithkar apne ghutno se sir chhupa leti hai. Aankhen band karti hai, aur Raj ki yaadein use gher leti hain...)

Use apni kahi baaton ka bojh mehsoos ho raha tha, jaise woh shabd use andar hi andar kuchal rahe hon. Kuch khane ka man hi nahi kar raha tha. Uska dimag bas Raj ke saath bitaaye palon mein khoya hua tha.

Woh bechari bahut zyaada soch rahi thi, aur der raat tak use neend nahi aayi.
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### Yaadon ka Sailaab aur Gehrata Ehsaas (Flood of Memories and Deepening Realization)

Tabhi use khaas taur par woh pal aaye jab Raj ne niswarth bhav se usko pyar kiya tha, Raj ne apni zarooraton se pehle use rakha tha. Shayad uske bachpan ka koi aisa lamha jab usne Sakshi ke liye kamaal ki maturity ya protective instinct dikhayi thi. Use Raj ki bhavnaon ki gehrai ka ehsaas hua aur ye bhi samajh aaya ki woh us par kitna depend ho gayi hai aur use kitna pyar karti hai. Ye ehsaas kisi aam Maa ke pyar se kahin badhkar tha.

Sakshi ke andar ki ye uthal-puthal use sirf pachtave se nahi, balki Raj ke liye apne gehre pyar ka ehsaas kara rahi thi.

(Flashback: Raj bachpan mein. Sakshi bimar padi hai, bukhar tez. Raj, jo khud sirf 10 saal ka hai, poori raat jaagkar uske sir par pani ki patti rakhta hai. Subah tak uski aankhen laal ho jaati hain, par wah muskurata hai.)

Chhota Raj: (Thaki awaaz mein) "Maa... tum theek ho na? Mein aapse bahut pyar karta hun maa... Aap jaldi theek ho jao please"

(Sakshi uski masoomiyat, uska pyar yaad karke sihar uthti hai. Aankhen bhar aati hain.)

(Wapas vartman. Sakshi ka phone uthati hai, Raj ki tasveer dekhti hai. Ungliyan uske chehre par trace karti hain.)

Sakshi: (Kaanpte honthon se) "Maine tujhe daant diya... Maaf karna, Raj..."
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### Bechani aur Raj ka Intezar (Restlessness and Waiting for Raj)

(Raat ke 3 baje the, achaanak Sakshi ko bahar Raj ki bike ki awaaz sunai di. Sakshi ka dil dhadak uthta hai. Wah bina chappal pahne hi darwaze ki taraf bhagti hai.)

Sakshi: (Utsukta se) "Raj?!"

Woh nange pair hi daudkar dekhne gayi, lekin woh bas hawa thi. Usne raat ka khana chhua tak nahi.

Uski jagah usne Raj ke pasandida aloo ke parathe banaaye (jo baad mein thande hi pade rahe).

(Phone uthati hai. Raj ko call karne ki koshish karti hai... 10 baar. Har baar ring hoti hai, par koi jawab nahi. Message likhti hai—)

Message: "Raj wapas aaja beta... Maa maaf karegi..."

(Lekin delete kar deti hai. Phir se likhti hai, phir delete. Aise hi 11 baar.)

Aur phir saare delete kar diye.

(Achaanak uske dimag mein bure, negative khayal aane lagte hain. Wah sir pakadkar baith jaati hai.)

Sakshi: (Dar se kaanpte hue) "Nahi... nahi... mere Raj ko kuch nahi hua hoga. Agar use kuch ho gaya toh... main apni jaan de doongi!"

Sakshi ko laga ki usne Raj ko daantne mein had par kar di thi. (Wah zor se sir hilaati hai, maano khayalon ko bhaga rahi ho. Phir achaanak khud par gussa aata hai.)

Sakshi: (Gusse mein khud se) "Tune bahut zyaada kar diya, Sakshi! Use daantkar bhaga diya... ab tu hi bhugat rahi hai!"

(Wah phir se Raj ki tasveer dekhti hai, aur is baar ek nayi bhavna uske dil mein uthti hai... sirf mamta nahi, kuch aur... kuch gehra. Wah sihar uthti hai.)

Sakshi: (Dheeme se) "Ye... ye kya ho raha hai mujhe...?"

(Bahar hawa ka ek jhonka khidki se takrata hai. Sakshi ki aankhen band ho jaati hain. Wah jaanti hai—raat beetne wali nahi. Na jaane kab tak ye intezar khatam hoga...)

Is scene mein Sakshi ki bhavnaen mamta se aage badhkar ek gehre, ankahe pyar tak pahunchti hain. Wah ab sirf uski Maa nahi rahi... wah uske liye kuch aur ban chuki hai.
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(Saurabh ke ghar ki balcony. Raat ke 3 baje. Raj cigarette ke dhuein mein apna dard dhoondhne ki koshish kar raha hai. Uski aankhein sooji hui, haathon mein kharonchein. Saurabh plate mein khana lekar aata hai.)

Raj ne na kuch khaya na piya. Saurabh ne use khane ke liye poocha bhi, par Raj ne kuch nahi khaya.

Raj: (Sunn awaaz mein) "Bhookh nahi hai... dard se bhara pet... khana nahi pachega."
(Raj khaali ghoorta hua deewar ki taraf dekhta hai. Saurabh ki taraf nahin.)

(Raj bistar par pada hai, aankhein khuli hui. Ceiling ko ghoor raha hai. Uske dimaag mein bas ek hi vakya goonj raha hai =Sakshi ki awaaz (loop mein): "Tumne meri izzat kharab kar di!"

(Vah apne kaan band kar leta hai, par awaaz band nahi hoti. 100 baar? 200 baar? Use khud pata nahi)

Raj: (Dard mein muskurate hue) "Ab... andar ka dard... bahar aa gaya na?"

(Thodi der baad. Raj so jata hai, par neend mein bhi chain nahi)
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### Ek Bhayanak Sapna Aur Adhikar Ki Bhavna

Rote-rote Raj wahin so gaya, aur use ek bahut bura sapna aaya, jismein Amit Sakshi ke saath RAPE kar raha tha, Amit Sakshi ke upar haavi ho raha hai! Sakshi cheekh rahi hai!

Raj (neend mein): (Buri tarah karwatein badalte hue) "Nahi... Amit chhod use... Sakshi...!"

(Achanak vah zor se bolta hai)

Raj: (Neend mein phusphusate hue) "Kuch nahi hoga tumhe... ab se tum meri ho... sirf meri..."

(Gahri saans lekar) "Meri zindagi se bhi pehle... tum meri ho Sakshi... ab mujhe hi kuch karna padega"

(Subah. Raj achanak chaunkkar uthta hai. Pasine se bheega hua. Use apne sapne yaad aate hain... aur vah khud se ghabra jata hai.)

Ye sab kuch aisa tha jaise vo apne andar ke us adhikar wali bhavna se lad raha ho, lekin kahin na kahin ye dikha raha tha ki Sakshi uske liye kitni mayne rakhti hai, shayad ek aise tareeke se jo usne khud kabhi nahi samjha tha.

Raj: (Khud se dara hua) "Ye... ye kya soch raha hoon main?!"

Agli subah, vo apne hi in vicharon se dar gaya. Use laga ye sab kya soch liya usne!
(Vah bathroom mein bhaagta hai. Cold shower chalu kar deta hai. Thanda paani uske badan par padta hai. Apne dimaag ko shant karne ke liye usne thande paani se shower liya.)
Wo cheekhna chahta hai par awaaz nahi nikalti.

Raj: (Kaampte honthon se) "Dimaag se ye gandagi nikal kyun nahi rahi hai..."

(Par paani se sirf badan dhulta hai... dimaag ki gandagi to abhi bhi wahin hai.)
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