Fantasy Samay badl raha hai

[Thorishere]

Hlo friends , mei koi jha nya toh nhi hu but mei sirf read krta tha pr aajj se mei apni pehli story post krne jaa rha hu jo ke meri fantasy pr adharit hai ....... Isme kuch adultery content v hoga aur magical and horor tdka b hoga...asss krta hu k apko jeh kahani psand aayegi......
INTRODUCTION-
RITIK - HERO
MOM/DAD - SUMITA/SAMN
ANKIT AND RIMI - DOCTR ND HIS WIFE
KIWI - PLANET Z KA MUKHIYA ND RACKET KA BETA
GIPO - KIWI KA BETA
RAHUL ND KAMAL - RITIK KE DOST
KING BERLIN - PLANET O KA RAJA
FRENKIE - BERLIN KA SALAHKAR
Abhi or kirdar b aaye ge or kuch or kirdar honge jinka story mei jyda role nhi hoga toh unhe mention nhi kru ga mei.....

 

[Thorishere]

update -1
toh kahani suru hoti hai ek gaav se yha pe aajjj 1998 ko ek bache ka janam hua hai ......dikhne me toh aam bacho jesa hiii lgg rha hai pr kuch toh hai jo usko aam bacho se alg bna rha hai.....
kuch parjatiyan bhut khus hain toh kuch bhut jyda naraz par dekhte hai "" samay kab badlega""

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Aajjj bache ke janam ko ek month ho gya hai or kayi wachitr ghatnaye ght chukii hain jese ke cow ka bache ko utha ke baghna,, billi ka bache ke pass mra hua milna ja fr baz ka bache ke aas pas rehna in sb se bache ke maa bap pr bda bura asr kr rha hai......
Baap- samn joshi -45(present) je ek middle class marchent hain or kaffi khusmijaj hain
maa- sumita joshi - 40 - ye apne bache ke liye kuch b kr skti hai ,, ghrelu aaurt hai or jyda pdi likhi nhi hai fir b kaffi modren behaviour hai....
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lo bache ka nam toh mene bataya hi nhi chlo mei whi le chlta hu jha pe bache ka namkarn ho rha haii..
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Samn aur sumita apne bache ko lekr apne guru ke pass gye hue the ta jo uska namkarn ho ske
gurudev- age 60 yrs
Je bhut phunche hue sant hai or kafi devik saktiya hai enke pass.. inke paas inke shish b rehte hai
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iska nam hoga ""RITIK""" pr samay aane pr je suraj ki trah chmkega aur pure samaj ko andhere se bhr la kr roshni failayega - gurudev ne bache ko hath me lekar uchi aawaz mei khaa ..

jis karan sumita or samn ek doosre ki aur dekhne lggeeee aur thode sehme hue lafzo mei khaa "" gurudev kya yeh hamare pass nhi rhe ga.....

Gurudev:: mere bacho bhut samay beete ge or kathor samay aaye ge pr yeh tumhra hamesha sanskari rahe ga or hmesha khi baat maane ga....

Fir ritik ke maa baap thoda santusht dikhai diye....
Jab samn bache ko lekar utha or gurudev ko prnam kr ke agge chla gya or jab sumita uthi toh usne gurudev ko un wachitr ghatnayo ke ware mei bataya toh gurudev ne hans kr khaa:::
""SAMAY BADL RAHA HAI MERE BACCHHE""





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Agge kuch or patr aaye ge unka intro agle update mei or agr glti ho toh maaf lr dena """ apka apna Thor

 

[tpk]

nice start
congrats

 

[Ristrcted]

fir 1st story
Nice start
waiting for next update

 

[Ajay]

Hlo friends , mei koi jha nya toh nhi hu but mei sirf read krta tha pr aajj se mei apni pehli story post krne jaa rha hu jo ke meri fantasy pr adharit hai ....... Isme kuch adultery content v hoga aur magical and horor tdka b hoga...asss krta hu k apko jeh kahani psand aayegi......

Congratulations for new story bhai

 

[Ajay]

Hlo friends , mei koi jha nya toh nhi hu but mei sirf read krta tha pr aajj se mei apni pehli story post krne jaa rha hu jo ke meri fantasy pr adharit hai ....... Isme kuch adultery content v hoga aur magical and horor tdka b hoga...asss krta hu k apko jeh kahani psand aayegi......

Congratulations for new story bhai

 

[Ajay]

Hlo friends , mei koi jha nya toh nhi hu but mei sirf read krta tha pr aajj se mei apni pehli story post krne jaa rha hu jo ke meri fantasy pr adharit hai ....... Isme kuch adultery content v hoga aur magical and horor tdka b hoga...asss krta hu k apko jeh kahani psand aayegi......

Congratulations for new story bhai

update -1
toh kahani suru hoti hai ek gaav se yha pe aajjj 1998 ko ek bache ka janam hua hai ......dikhne me toh aam bacho jesa hiii lgg rha hai pr kuch toh hai jo usko aam bacho se alg bna rha hai.....
kuch parjatiyan bhut khus hain toh kuch bhut jyda naraz par dekhte hai "" samay kab badlega""

...
...
..
Aajjj bache ke janam ko ek month ho gya hai or kayi wachitr ghatnaye ght chukii hain jese ke cow ka bache ko utha ke baghna,, billi ka bache ke pass mra hua milna ja fr baz ka bache ke aas pas rehna in sb se bache ke maa bap pr bda bura asr kr rha hai......
Baap- samn joshi -45(present) je ek middle class marchent hain or kaffi khusmijaj hain
maa- sumita joshi - 40 - ye apne bache ke liye kuch b kr skti hai ,, ghrelu aaurt hai or jyda pdi likhi nhi hai fir b kaffi modren behaviour hai....
..
...
...
lo bache ka nam toh mene bataya hi nhi chlo mei whi le chlta hu jha pe bache ka namkarn ho rha haii..
...
...
..
Samn aur sumita apne bache ko lekr apne guru ke pass gye hue the ta jo uska namkarn ho ske
gurudev- age 60 yrs
Je bhut phunche hue sant hai or kafi devik saktiya hai enke pass.. inke paas inke shish b rehte hai
.
.
.
iska nam hoga ""RITIK""" pr samay aane pr je suraj ki trah chmkega aur pure samaj ko andhere se bhr la kr roshni failayega - gurudev ne bache ko hath me lekar uchi aawaz mei khaa ..

jis karan sumita or samn ek doosre ki aur dekhne lggeeee aur thode sehme hue lafzo mei khaa "" gurudev kya yeh hamare pass nhi rhe ga.....

Gurudev:: mere bacho bhut samay beete ge or kathor samay aaye ge pr yeh tumhra hamesha sanskari rahe ga or hmesha khi baat maane ga....

Fir ritik ke maa baap thoda santusht dikhai diye....
Jab samn bache ko lekar utha or gurudev ko prnam kr ke agge chla gya or jab sumita uthi toh usne gurudev ko un wachitr ghatnayo ke ware mei bataya toh gurudev ne hans kr khaa:::
""SAMAY BADL RAHA HAI MERE BACCHHE""





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Agge kuch or patr aaye ge unka intro agle update mei or agr glti ho toh maaf lr dena """ apka apna Thor

Nice update bhai

 

[ROOKIE彡MENTAL]

Congratulations for new thread

 

[crazyrex]

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[Vk248517]

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