Romance Shaadi ka Bandhan

[Rashmi Kumari]

Kese ho dosto me Rashmi..aap sab ki dost aur is kahani ki writer.. ye kahaani he ek ladaki ki jis ki shaadi ek bade Ghar ke ek ladke ke kar di jati he.. Bina uski marzi ko jane...

Character list

Rashmi - 25
Rashmi ke pitaji - 60
Rashmi ki Maa Sumitra - 45
Rashmi ka Bhai - 18
Vikram Singh - 45
Vikram ki bhabhi - 48
Vikram ka beta adi 18 (from first wife)
Dever Vikram ka sotela bhai 24 Sal

 

[mashish]

Kese ho dosto me Rashmi..aap sab ki dost aur is kahani ki writer.. ye kahaani he ek ladaki ki jis ki shaadi ek bade Ghar ke ek ladke ke kar di jati he.. Bina uski marzi ko jane...

Character list

Rashmi - 25
Rashmi ke pitaji - 60
Rashmi ki Maa Sumitra - 45
Rashmi ka Bhai - 18
Vikram Singh - 45
Vikram ki bhabhi - 48
Vikram ka beta adi 24 (from first wife)

story kya intro per hi end ho gayi

 

[Rashmi Kumari]

Update 01

"Kitani khubsurat he nai Bahu kisi ki Nazar na Lage" sasu maa ne bade pyar se bola... Lekin muje in sab se ab koi fark nahi pad Raha tha...na koi Khushi na kuch..bas aakho me aasu the aur aane vali rat ka dar..

Sasu maa ne unki aankho se kajal le kar mere Kan ke piche laga diya.aur boli badi Bahu me jati hu tum do devrani jethani baate karo....

Muje unke Jane pero ki aavaj sunai di..ki vo ja Rahi he.. lekin me abhi tak dekha nahi Rahi thi kahi bas aakhe niche kar ke bethi thi...

"Devarani ji ab itna bhi mat aasu nikalo abhi rat ke liye bacha ke rakho" bhabhi mere pass aake boli.. unki aavaj me bahot sararat thi..muje vo ched ne ki kosis kar Rahi thi...

Mera koi jawab na ane par vo aur bolati he "accha baba maaf kar do.. lekin ese nahi chalegaa thoda toh baat karo Teri jethani hu mere se kya sarama Rahi ho... pahli baar he is liye dar rahi ho ya Ghar se dur ho gai ho is liye sab ki yaad aa Rahi he aap ko..." Bhabhi jaldi jaldi bol Rahi thi jese meri bahot purani saheli ho... lekin vo toh mere maa se bhi do teen sal Umar me badi thi.. lekin kya karati is ajan Ghar me kisi ke aage toh khud ka dard nikal dena tha aur ab bahot der se ese bethe nahi ja taha tha me jor se rote hue unko kas ke gale se laga li....

Thodi der hum dono mese koi kuch na bola na harakat ki.. syad ab unko meri halat smaj aa Rahi thi..vo bhi muje unki beti ke jese pyar se sahalane lagi...

"Aaa bacchi rote nahi me hu na kya hua itana bhi kya aap abhi bacchi nahi ho aap..aur do din me Ghar Jana he aap ko fir se..." Bhabhi muje Sahara dete hue boli...

Kuch der tak vo mer sath kuch na kuch baate karte rahe aur me bas ha na me sar ya kuch bol ke jawab de Rahi thi...

Jese hi vo Jane Lage..mere mu se nikal hi Gaya..."aap mat jao na please"
Sayad ye baat unko samaj aa gai ki muje kya hota dikkat he..vo mere aur dekhi aur mere paas aake boli "tum aaram se so jao.. aur mujhe pata he ye shaadi tumhari marzi se toh nahi hua he par me kuch nahi kar sakti hu.." aur vo mere mathe par chum li... sayad me unki beti age ki hoti agar unka koi beti hoti...

Me bahot der Tak unki jagati Rahi lekin vo nahi aai..aur muje bhi pata nahi chala kab meri aankh lag gai...

Me har roj ke jese bahot late jagati hu lekin koi muj uthane nahi aata he.. me shaadi ki thakan se bhi bahot gahari nind me soi thi syad..pata nahi chala hi koi aaya bhi ho toh..

Muje bahot accha lag raha tha..jese me kisi Mahal me hu vesa vo Kamara tha.. lekin muje ab Nazar aa raha tha kal rat toh me kuch hos me hi nahi thi..me khud se hi boli " pagal Kitana soti he chal naha le.. maa ko pata chala toh bahot sunai gi" aur me maa ki nakal karate hue khud ko datane bhi lagati hu... aur bahot acche se sajane lagti hu... Lekin dheere dheere muje yaad aane laga sab ki meri shaadi kis se kata di gai he..ha pesa dolat soharat sab tha yaha lekin muje nahi chahiye tha ye sab....me fir se udas ho jati hu..

Me kamare ke bahar jati hu aur vaha muje bhabhi aur sasi maa kitchen ke Kam karate hue mile.. jo muje dekh ke bahot khus ho gai.. lekin muje saram aa raha tha kyu ki me jaldi uth nai pai.. lekin unko kuch fark nahi pada...vo bahot acche se muje sab dekha Rahi thi Ghar aur kitchen..aur sirf naam ke liye mere pass thoda thoda kam karava Rahi thi kyu ki Aaj sab mere hath ka khaana khane vale the pahli baar...

Lekin muje esa laga jese bhabhi thik se chal nahi pa Rahi thi..aur unke jism par kisi ke katane ke nishan saf dekh rahe the...me kuch jada nahi socha...aur khana banane lagi...

Mene dekha ki ek ladka muje bahot der se baar baar chup ke se dekh raha tha lekin mere pass nahi aa raha tha Milne ke liye.. toh mene pucha bhabhi se "bhabhi vo kon he" "aap ka beta meri devrani"

Unki baat se me ek pal ke liye shocked ho kar unko dekhati Rahi fir.. yaad aaya unka ek beta aur ek beti bhi he...

Is sab ke bich hi vo kitchen me Pani lene aata he aur.. Jane lagata he ki bhabhi use piche se pakad ke boli "bhag kyu Raha he ha kab se intezar tha tuje Teri maa se milane ki ab kyu sarama raha he" bhabhi use kas ke unki baho me pakadi hue thi..aur vo Jane ki kosish me tha... Me man me soch Rahi thi dono kitane pyare lag rahe he jese maa beta hi ho...fir muje pata chal kuch din baad ki bhabhi ka koi baccha bhi nahi he toh dono ka esa rista aam baat thi....

Dubala patala sa vo ladaka muje dekh ke blushing kar Raha tha..mene uska hath mer hath me le kar bola.."hello me Rashmi aap?" Vo dheere se bahot Mithi aavaj me bola "Mummy..." Bas ye bol ke vo mer gale se lag gaya jese usko uski maa mil gai ho...uska muh mer sine par lag taha tha uski sase muje mahsus ho Rahi thi...na jane kitane sal se taras raha tha maa ke liye... lekin me kuch jada badi nahi thi us se is liye muje bete vali feeling kaha se aati vo muje mere Bhai jesa laga aur me bhi emotional ho gai...

Kuch der me khaana ready ho jata he sab dinning table par the..vaha muje dur se vo dekhe.. me unke samne Jane se na jane kyu dar Rahi thi jese vo muje kha Jane vale na ho... lekin bhabhi ke sath me vaha gai sab ko khana Diya..vo meri aur dekhe bhi nahi the.. sab meri bahot tarif kar rahe the lekin sab Mahant to bhabhi ne ki thi me bol bhi deti lekin vo muje rok li..jis me muje aur bura laga..aur mere din me unke liye respect aur bad gai...

Me mere room me Jake bed par Beth ke mere dosto se baat karane lagi..ki vo kamare me aate he aur kuch le kar Jane Lage..aur vo vapas aai jese kuch bhul gai ho...vo achanak mere pass aake bole..."muje maf kar dena kal me aaya nahi rat me..." Aur mere hath me ek Payal rakh di...aur chale gai..me ek pal ke liye bhi unki aakho me nahi dekh pai.. lekin jitana unko dekha vo dekh ke me soch me pad gai ki itani Umar bhi kitane Jawan lagate the.. lekin bal safed the thode to ye bhi samaj aa jata tha ki vo itne bhi young nahi he..unki height itni thi ki me unke sine tak aa sakti thi...kad khadi unki kisi pahalwan jesi thi...ya kahu to kesi film me hero jesi...unko itana pass se dekh ke muje bhi jese unse thodi der ke liye phisical attraction hua lekin..jada der raha nahi...

Kuch der baad muje mere sab se achhe dost ya kahu toh mere Dil ke rajkumar ka phone aata he..aur uski avaj sun ke hi mere aasu nikal jate he.."kesi he Rashu.."muje uska dard bhi samaj aa raha tha uski aavj me hi lekin ab sab khatm ho chuka tha.."thik hu tu kesa he" aur meri aakhe aasu se bhar gai aur mene use ye bol ke call cut kat Diya ki baad me karati hu.....

Yahi hota he jab hum kisi se pyar katate ho lekin bolate nahi he ha dono ko pata hota he lekin kyu itana der kar dete he teen words ko bolane me hum... lekin ab kya ab toh bas dosti rah gai thi....aur me bed par ese hi so jati hu.....


To be continued ( agar likhane ka mood hua toh)

 

[Delta101]

To be continued ( agar likhane ka mood hua toh)

lekin humaara agla update padhne ka mood hai... so continue it

 

[Delta101]

Rashmi Kumari agle update ki pratiksha hai...

 

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