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Shaurya ek veer ek veerta ki kahani kya kya karname kiye hai is mahaan shaksh ne kya kya saha hai woh sab apko padne ko milega

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Raniganz ek chota sa gaon hai usme savitri apne 11 saal ka beta jiska naam ayush hai aur 2 saal ki beti jiska naam komal hai aur apne sharaabi pati Mahesh ke sath rehti hai.

Mahesh eeth ke Bhatti mai mazduri ka kaam karta hai,jo kamata hai use sharaab mai uda deta hai woh kabhi bhi apni biwi aur bachon ke bare main nhi sochta,shuru shuru savitri iska virodh karti thi jab bhi woh virodh karti Mahesh use marta pithta chup kara deta,Mahesh insaan nhi sala haivaan hai.

Savitri mazburi mai apne bachon ke dekhbaal ke liye eeth ke Bhatti mai mazduri ka kaam karne lagi hai,udhar bhi uska jeena haraam hi tha,wahan ke malik use gandi nazar se dekhte the,jab mazduri dene ka samay ata savitri ko gandhe tarike se hath pakadte the,Savitri jhatak deti thi,savitri sab kuch sehen kar rahi thi apne bacho ki parvarish ke liye isliye kuch bolti nhi thi apna kaam karti thi.

Savitri ka Bada Beta Ayush bada honhaar ladka hai wahi ke vishwvidhyalaye mai padta hai,Chahavi kasha mai hai humesha padai mai pratham ata hai,padhai ke sath woh khel khud mai bhi aage rehta hai usme bhi humesha pratham ata dusra use deshbhakti ka bhi bahut shauk hai who humesha kitabon mai mahaan logon ke bare mai padta hai,ya kabhi samachar mai dekhta hai,uska seena garv se phul jata hai,ayush bhi apne desh ke liye kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar rehta hai,aur apni maa ka chaheta bhi hai,jab bhi apni maa ko taklif mai dekhta hai uske ankh mai anshu aa jata hai,woh apne pita se bahut nafrat bhi karta hai uski wajih se savitri ko bahut taklif uthani padti hai,ayush ke zindagi ka ek hi lakshya hai,woh apni maa aur behen ko is papi jagah se nikalna chahta hai aur apne desh ke liye kuch karna chahta hai.

Komal woh abhi 2 saal ki choti si bachi hai,uski nandani ko dekhkar sabka man laga rehta hai,bhai ki godi mai baithkar humesha chahakti muskurati rehti hai,mummy ke anshu jab who mehsus karti hai apne naram hathon se unke ankh pochti hai jaise keh rahi papa bahut bure hai roz apko marte dekhna maa mai badi hungi yeah sab ka badla lungi.

Raat ke 12 baj gye hai Savitri ayush aur komal ke sath soyi thi tabhi kisi ke ane ki awaaz savitri ko sunai deti samaj jati hai is samay kaun aya hoga woh uth jati hai kamre ko bahar se kadi lagakar darwaza kholne jati hai.

Woh koi aur nhi Mahesh tha jo sharaab ke nashe mai dhut ghar aya hai,jaise ghar mai ata hai,savitri par gussa karne lagta hai,jor se chillane lagta hai

Mahesh:- Sali Haramzadi chinaal,darwaza kholne mai itna waqt lagati hai kiske sath muh kala kar rahi thi Sali kuttiya.

Savitri Mahesh ke muh se yeah sab sunkar Savitri ke ankh mai anshu aa jate hai,phir bhi woh apne pati ko rokhti hai

Savitri:-Hath jodti hun apke aage aaram se boliye bache so rahe hai,uth jayenge.

Mahesh:-Sali apne pati se jubaan ladati ha,ruk abhi tujhe batata sara tere nakhre nikalta hun.

Mahesh apne belt utharta hai uske knuckle se savitri ko marne lagta hai,bahut jor se jor se marta hai,savitri sab sehen kar rahi hai,kuch nhi bolti bas maar kha rahi hai,Mahesh use bedardi se maar raha hai,wahi kamre mai baithe ayush sab dekh raha hai apni muthi bandhe sab dekh raha hai mazbur tha darwaza bahar se bandh tha kholne ki koshish kiya nhi khul raha tha apne maa ko maar khata dekh ro raha hai.

Mahesh Savitri ko tab tak mara jab tak thak nhi gya,uske baad bolta hai

Mahesh:-Sali aisi roz maar khane layak hai tu samjhi.

Aise bolkar Mahesh wahan se chala jata hai,Savitri wahi pade rone lagti hai,uske pith hath se khun aa raha hai.aur apne kismat ko koshti hue uthti hai kamre mai zane lagti hai……………….

 

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:congrats: For starting new story thread.....

 

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Update 2​

Mahesh Savitri ko tab tak mara jab tak thak nhi gya,uske baad bolta hai

Mahesh:-Sali aisi roz maar khane layak hai tu samjhi.

Aise bolkar Mahesh wahan se chala jata hai,Savitri wahi pade rone lagti hai,uske pith hath se khun aa raha hai.aur apne kismat ko koshti hue uthti hai kamre mai zane lagti hai……………….

AB AAGE...

Thodi der baad Savitri himmat karke kamre mai ati hai use ayush dikh jata hai,apni maa ko is haalat mai dekhkar uske ankhon mai anshu aa jate hai,ayush apni maa ka hath pakadkar udhar jameen par baithata hai aur dawa lagane lagta hai,rone lag jata hai.

Savitri jab ehsaas hota ayush ro raha hai apni ankhon ka anshu pochkar uske ankhon ka anshu pochne lag jati hai aur bolne lagti hai

Savitri:-Beta ro mat,dekh tu royega mere ankh se bhi anshu nikal ayenge,apni maa ka pyara beta hai na,phir rona band karde

Ayush:-Aap ko is haalat mai dekhkar mai rona band kar dun,maa kyu sehti ho yeah sab,hum sab yahan se chale kyu nhi jate hai,kyun is narak mai reh rahe hai.

Savitri:-Beta,pati ka ghar hi patni ka ghar hota hai,jeena bhi idhar hai,marna bhi idhar,par marne se pahile mai yeah jarur chahti hun tu aur komal bada admi bane aur ek acha aur sacha insaan bane.

Ayush:-Apko kuch nhi hone dunga maa,dekhna maa bada hokar jab mai bada admi banunga apko aur komal ko is narak se le jaunga khub khyal rakhunga maa apko,apko koi taklif nhi hone dunga wada karta hun maa.

Savitri ayush ki batein sunkar uski ankhon mai anshu aa jate hai aur ayush ko apne seene se chikkakar lad karne lagti hai phir sula deti hai,ayush bhi apni maa ke god mai so jata hai.Savitri apne bete ko dekhti haiapne man mai bolti hai kitna masoom sa hai mera laal apni maa ko dard mai nhi dekh sakta,tere aur komal ke liye abhi tak zinda hun beta,warna kab ka shayad mar jati,upar wale se yehi dua karti hun tu bade hokar ek acha insaan ban ja phir aram se is duniya ko chorkar ja sakungi,meri komal ke liye tu toh hai hi,maa/baap dono ka pyar use de sakega.

Aise hi sochte sochte Savitri so jati hai,ayush unke godh mai so jata hai.

Agle Din subah savitri uth gyi thi ghar ka kaam karne mai vyasth ho gyi thi,tabhi usi samay komal uth jati hai jab woh apne bhai ko dekhti soya hai,khil khilakar apne masoom hathon se ayush ka gaal sehlati hai aur bha,bha bolti hai bhaiya nhi bol pati thi isliye bhaiya hi bolti thi.

Ayush jab apni komal ki baat sun leta hai woh bhi uthkar apni gudiya ko laad karne lagta hai bolta hai

Ayush:-arey pyari gudiya uth gyi tu,aj mera din bahut acha jayega tujhe jo dekh liya,muah muah karke apni behen ke gaal ko puppy dene lagta hai aur pyar karta hai

Komal bhi khil khilakar has deti hai jaise bol rahi ho,aap humesha mujhe dekha karo,apka din humesha acha jayega.

Savitri Kamre mai ati hai ayush ko uthane ke liye dekhti ayush pahile se uthkar apni behen ko khelane mai laga hua hai,Savitri meetha sa gussa karke bolti hai

Savitri:-Mere pyare laal,tujhe vidyalaye jane mai deri nhi ho rahi,jab dekho apni ladli behen ke sath khelta rehta hai,chal uth aur taiyaar ho iska kya hai na ise padhna hai na likhna bas bha,bha karke dimaag khati hai.

Jaise savitri aisa bolti komal apni maa ko dekhti hai,aisa lagta hai woh samaj gyi thi maa kya keh rahi hai,toh rone lag jati hai,ayush apni behen ko rota dekhkar uske dil mai dard hone lagta hai isliye woh apne gudiya ko uthake bolta hai

Ayush:-Rote nhi,Rote nhi,tumhara bhai hai na,tu badi hoja tujhe bhi bhai vidyalaye bhejega padayega,likhayega,tu bhi bade hokar ek acha insaan banegi,hum dono milkar maa ko is narak se dur le jayenge.

Komal apne bhai ki baat sunkar khil khilakar has deti hai jaise keh rahi ho aap sahi keh rahe hai bhaiya,mai apki baat se sehmat hun.

Savitri apne ayush ki batein sunti uske ankhon mai anshu aa jate hai apni ankhon ka anshu pochkar bolti hai,

Savitri:-Bahut ho gya laad pyar chal jaldi uthkar taiyaar ho ja vidyalaye ke liye late ho raha aur mujhe bhi kaam par jana hai.

Ayush:-Ji maa

Ayush aisa bolkar komal ko apni maa ke hath mai de deta hai aur taiyaar hone jata hai……………….

 

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UPDATE 1​

Raniganz ek chota sa gaon hai usme savitri apne 11 saal ka beta jiska naam ayush hai aur 2 saal ki beti jiska naam komal hai aur apne sharaabi pati Mahesh ke sath rehti hai.

Mahesh eeth ke Bhatti mai mazduri ka kaam karta hai,jo kamata hai use sharaab mai uda deta hai woh kabhi bhi apni biwi aur bachon ke bare main nhi sochta,shuru shuru savitri iska virodh karti thi jab bhi woh virodh karti Mahesh use marta pithta chup kara deta,Mahesh insaan nhi sala haivaan hai.

Savitri mazburi mai apne bachon ke dekhbaal ke liye eeth ke Bhatti mai mazduri ka kaam karne lagi hai,udhar bhi uska jeena haraam hi tha,wahan ke malik use gandi nazar se dekhte the,jab mazduri dene ka samay ata savitri ko gandhe tarike se hath pakadte the,Savitri jhatak deti thi,savitri sab kuch sehen kar rahi thi apne bacho ki parvarish ke liye isliye kuch bolti nhi thi apna kaam karti thi.

Savitri ka Bada Beta Ayush bada honhaar ladka hai wahi ke vishwvidhyalaye mai padta hai,Chahavi kasha mai hai humesha padai mai pratham ata hai,padhai ke sath woh khel khud mai bhi aage rehta hai usme bhi humesha pratham ata dusra use deshbhakti ka bhi bahut shauk hai who humesha kitabon mai mahaan logon ke bare mai padta hai,ya kabhi samachar mai dekhta hai,uska seena garv se phul jata hai,ayush bhi apne desh ke liye kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar rehta hai,aur apni maa ka chaheta bhi hai,jab bhi apni maa ko taklif mai dekhta hai uske ankh mai anshu aa jata hai,woh apne pita se bahut nafrat bhi karta hai uski wajih se savitri ko bahut taklif uthani padti hai,ayush ke zindagi ka ek hi lakshya hai,woh apni maa aur behen ko is papi jagah se nikalna chahta hai aur apne desh ke liye kuch karna chahta hai.

Komal woh abhi 2 saal ki choti si bachi hai,uski nandani ko dekhkar sabka man laga rehta hai,bhai ki godi mai baithkar humesha chahakti muskurati rehti hai,mummy ke anshu jab who mehsus karti hai apne naram hathon se unke ankh pochti hai jaise keh rahi papa bahut bure hai roz apko marte dekhna maa mai badi hungi yeah sab ka badla lungi.

Raat ke 12 baj gye hai Savitri ayush aur komal ke sath soyi thi tabhi kisi ke ane ki awaaz savitri ko sunai deti samaj jati hai is samay kaun aya hoga woh uth jati hai kamre ko bahar se kadi lagakar darwaza kholne jati hai.

Woh koi aur nhi Mahesh tha jo sharaab ke nashe mai dhut ghar aya hai,jaise ghar mai ata hai,savitri par gussa karne lagta hai,jor se chillane lagta hai

Mahesh:- Sali Haramzadi chinaal,darwaza kholne mai itna waqt lagati hai kiske sath muh kala kar rahi thi Sali kuttiya.

Savitri Mahesh ke muh se yeah sab sunkar Savitri ke ankh mai anshu aa jate hai,phir bhi woh apne pati ko rokhti hai

Savitri:-Hath jodti hun apke aage aaram se boliye bache so rahe hai,uth jayenge.

Mahesh:-Sali apne pati se jubaan ladati ha,ruk abhi tujhe batata sara tere nakhre nikalta hun.

Mahesh apne belt utharta hai uske knuckle se savitri ko marne lagta hai,bahut jor se jor se marta hai,savitri sab sehen kar rahi hai,kuch nhi bolti bas maar kha rahi hai,Mahesh use bedardi se maar raha hai,wahi kamre mai baithe ayush sab dekh raha hai apni muthi bandhe sab dekh raha hai mazbur tha darwaza bahar se bandh tha kholne ki koshish kiya nhi khul raha tha apne maa ko maar khata dekh ro raha hai.

Mahesh Savitri ko tab tak mara jab tak thak nhi gya,uske baad bolta hai

Mahesh:-Sali aisi roz maar khane layak hai tu samjhi.

Aise bolkar Mahesh wahan se chala jata hai,Savitri wahi pade rone lagti hai,uske pith hath se khun aa raha hai.aur apne kismat ko koshti hue uthti hai kamre mai zane lagti hai……………….

Nice and beautiful start of the story....

 

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Nice and beautiful start of the story....

Thank you brother keep supporting

 

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Update 2​

Mahesh Savitri ko tab tak mara jab tak thak nhi gya,uske baad bolta hai

Mahesh:-Sali aisi roz maar khane layak hai tu samjhi.

Aise bolkar Mahesh wahan se chala jata hai,Savitri wahi pade rone lagti hai,uske pith hath se khun aa raha hai.aur apne kismat ko koshti hue uthti hai kamre mai zane lagti hai……………….

AB AAGE...

Thodi der baad Savitri himmat karke kamre mai ati hai use ayush dikh jata hai,apni maa ko is haalat mai dekhkar uske ankhon mai anshu aa jate hai,ayush apni maa ka hath pakadkar udhar jameen par baithata hai aur dawa lagane lagta hai,rone lag jata hai.

Savitri jab ehsaas hota ayush ro raha hai apni ankhon ka anshu pochkar uske ankhon ka anshu pochne lag jati hai aur bolne lagti hai

Savitri:-Beta ro mat,dekh tu royega mere ankh se bhi anshu nikal ayenge,apni maa ka pyara beta hai na,phir rona band karde

Ayush:-Aap ko is haalat mai dekhkar mai rona band kar dun,maa kyu sehti ho yeah sab,hum sab yahan se chale kyu nhi jate hai,kyun is narak mai reh rahe hai.

Savitri:-Beta,pati ka ghar hi patni ka ghar hota hai,jeena bhi idhar hai,marna bhi idhar,par marne se pahile mai yeah jarur chahti hun tu aur komal bada admi bane aur ek acha aur sacha insaan bane.

Ayush:-Apko kuch nhi hone dunga maa,dekhna maa bada hokar jab mai bada admi banunga apko aur komal ko is narak se le jaunga khub khyal rakhunga maa apko,apko koi taklif nhi hone dunga wada karta hun maa.

Savitri ayush ki batein sunkar uski ankhon mai anshu aa jate hai aur ayush ko apne seene se chikkakar lad karne lagti hai phir sula deti hai,ayush bhi apni maa ke god mai so jata hai.Savitri apne bete ko dekhti haiapne man mai bolti hai kitna masoom sa hai mera laal apni maa ko dard mai nhi dekh sakta,tere aur komal ke liye abhi tak zinda hun beta,warna kab ka shayad mar jati,upar wale se yehi dua karti hun tu bade hokar ek acha insaan ban ja phir aram se is duniya ko chorkar ja sakungi,meri komal ke liye tu toh hai hi,maa/baap dono ka pyar use de sakega.

Aise hi sochte sochte Savitri so jati hai,ayush unke godh mai so jata hai.

Agle Din subah savitri uth gyi thi ghar ka kaam karne mai vyasth ho gyi thi,tabhi usi samay komal uth jati hai jab woh apne bhai ko dekhti soya hai,khil khilakar apne masoom hathon se ayush ka gaal sehlati hai aur bha,bha bolti hai bhaiya nhi bol pati thi isliye bhaiya hi bolti thi.

Ayush jab apni komal ki baat sun leta hai woh bhi uthkar apni gudiya ko laad karne lagta hai bolta hai

Ayush:-arey pyari gudiya uth gyi tu,aj mera din bahut acha jayega tujhe jo dekh liya,muah muah karke apni behen ke gaal ko puppy dene lagta hai aur pyar karta hai

Komal bhi khil khilakar has deti hai jaise bol rahi ho,aap humesha mujhe dekha karo,apka din humesha acha jayega.

Savitri Kamre mai ati hai ayush ko uthane ke liye dekhti ayush pahile se uthkar apni behen ko khelane mai laga hua hai,Savitri meetha sa gussa karke bolti hai

Savitri:-Mere pyare laal,tujhe vidyalaye jane mai deri nhi ho rahi,jab dekho apni ladli behen ke sath khelta rehta hai,chal uth aur taiyaar ho iska kya hai na ise padhna hai na likhna bas bha,bha karke dimaag khati hai.

Jaise savitri aisa bolti komal apni maa ko dekhti hai,aisa lagta hai woh samaj gyi thi maa kya keh rahi hai,toh rone lag jati hai,ayush apni behen ko rota dekhkar uske dil mai dard hone lagta hai isliye woh apne gudiya ko uthake bolta hai

Ayush:-Rote nhi,Rote nhi,tumhara bhai hai na,tu badi hoja tujhe bhi bhai vidyalaye bhejega padayega,likhayega,tu bhi bade hokar ek acha insaan banegi,hum dono milkar maa ko is narak se dur le jayenge.

Komal apne bhai ki baat sunkar khil khilakar has deti hai jaise keh rahi ho aap sahi keh rahe hai bhaiya,mai apki baat se sehmat hun.

Savitri apne ayush ki batein sunti uske ankhon mai anshu aa jate hai apni ankhon ka anshu pochkar bolti hai,

Savitri:-Bahut ho gya laad pyar chal jaldi uthkar taiyaar ho ja vidyalaye ke liye late ho raha aur mujhe bhi kaam par jana hai.

Ayush:-Ji maa

Ayush aisa bolkar komal ko apni maa ke hath mai de deta hai aur taiyaar hone jata hai……………….

Nice and lovely update....