Entertainment Story chain

[jaanvi sen]

Namaste sabhi doston aur sabhi sadasyon!

Phorum ke tamam threads ke beechh, Aaj ek aur bahut mazedaar thread shuru kar rahe hu story chain!
Yeh bahut saral aur rochak hai. kabhi na kabhi toh sunahi honge - 'Story chain' Phir bhi thoda explain kar hi dete hu, jinko pata nahi woh dhiyan se sune.

Main pehle ek/Kuchh vaakya se kahani shuru karungi, phir dusrae sadasya ko vaakya jodna hai, jo pichhli line se judkar kahani ko aage badhayega. Har aagla sadasya khahani ko apni twist, creativity se aage badhata hai. Bas itna hi.

Aur niyan : main Admin thodi hu jo niyam rakhu. Bas sabhi sadasya phorum ke niyamo ko follow kare.

 

[jaanvi sen]

Main suru Karta hun



Ek chhote se gaon mein, barish ki raat thi aur bijli chamak rahi thi….... tabhi jungle ke kinare wale purane peepal ke ped ke neeche se ek halki si awaaz aayi aise koi ladka dheeme se ro raha ho

 

[maleeba]

Namaste sabhi doston aur sabhi sadasyon!

Phorum ke tamam threads ke beechh, Aaj ek aur bahut mazedaar thread shuru kar rahe hu story chain!
Yeh bahut saral aur rochak hai. kabhi na kabhi toh sunahi honge - 'Story chain' Phir bhi thoda explain kar hi dete hu, jinko pata nahi woh dhiyan se sune.

Main pehle ek/Kuchh vaakya se kahani shuru karungi, phir dusrae sadasya ko vaakya jodna hai, jo pichhli line se judkar kahani ko aage badhayega. Har aagla sadasya khahani ko apni twist, creativity se aage badhata hai. Bas itna hi.

Aur niyan : main Admin thodi hu jo niyam rakhu. Bas sabhi sadasya phorum ke niyamo ko follow kare.

Shubhkamna

 

[sam21003]

Peepal ke paid neeche ek larki rooo rahi thi

Ab aage

Sunsaan raat aur adheri me ek larki ki aawaz soon me darr gaya aur sochne laga kya musibat hai yrr
Phir bhi dharakte dil ke sath khud ko
Dharas badahie
Main mann hi mann bhagwan ji ko yaad karte hue aage bada aur
Kaapti awaz pe darte darte pocha kaun ho
Magar larki sirr jhakaye ro rahi thi meri baat ka koi jawab nahi diya maine bhi
Socha jo hoga dekha jayega aur himmat
Juta kar larki ke pass pahuch gaya
Main; dharakte dil ke sath larki ke kandhe se hilaya aur wo bus sirr jhukaye
Sisaak rahi thi

 

[jaanvi sen]

Peepal ke paid neeche ek larki rooo rahi thi

Ab aage

Sunsaan raat aur adheri me ek larki ki aawaz soon me darr gaya aur sochne laga kya musibat hai yrr
Phir bhi dharakte dil ke sath khud ko
Dharas badahie
Main mann hi mann bhagwan ji ko yaad karte hue aage bada aur
Kaapti awaz pe darte darte pocha kaun ho
Magar larki sirr jhakaye ro rahi thi meri baat ka koi jawab nahi diya maine bhi
Socha jo hoga dekha jayega aur himmat
Juta kar larki ke pass pahuch gaya
Main; dharakte dil ke sath larki ke kandhe se hilaya aur wo bus sirr jhukaye
Sisaak rahi thi

Ladka confused ho gaya, thoda ghabrahat Mein usne phir poochha per is bar ladki dekhte hi dekhte chudail mein Badal gai ladka ye dekh dar ke waha se ulte pair bhag pada... Lekin badkismati se tabhi barish shuru Hui Aur bichhal Ke vah ek Khai Mein gir Gaya jaha magarmacch pahle Se upsthit the, magarmacch Ne ladke ko kha liya buri tarah Se....

 

[rhyme_boy]

Ladka confused ho gaya, thoda ghabrahat Mein usne phir poochha per is bar ladki dekhte hi dekhte chudail mein Badal gai ladka ye dekh dar ke waha se ulte pair bhag pada... Lekin badkismati se tabhi barish shuru Hui Aur bichhal Ke vah ek Khai Mein gir Gaya jaha magarmacch pahle Se upsthit the, magarmacch Ne ladke ko kha liya buri tarah Se....

Uski cheekh sun kar gaon Wale bhaag kar waha pohochte hain.. aur dekhte hai ek kata hua haath talaab ke bahar padha hua hai..
Unhein andaza ho jata hai ke wo stree yhaan phir aayi thi... To bheed mein se ek aadmi nikal kar aagey ata hai.. haath mein laathi se rasta dekhta hua...jisse pata chalta hai ke wo dekh nahi sakta aur wo aagey aa kar kuch sunghta hai.... aur chaunk jata hai


Aur phir



puchhta hai...



Itna sannata kyu hai bhai..

 

[jaanvi sen]

Uski cheekh sun kar gaon Wale bhaag kar waha pohochte hain.. aur dekhte hai ek kata hua haath talaab ke bahar padha hua hai..
Unhein andaza ho jata hai ke wo stree yhaan phir aayi thi... To bheed mein se ek aadmi nikal kar aagey ata hai.. haath mein laathi se rasta dekhta hua...jisse pata chalta hai ke wo dekh nahi sakta aur wo aagey aa kar kuch sunghta hai.... aur chaunk jata hai


Aur phir



puchhta hai...



Itna sannata kyu hai bhai..

Woh Buddha aadami Jo sunghta Hai woh hota hai uski khud ki tatti kyunki woh gaon Mein vahi jagah hagta hai... Bheed Mein khareed log yah dekh foot foot ke hansne lagte Hain, mahaul intense se funny ho jata hai....

Lekin unhen pata nahin tha ki abhi bhi chudail upar Se Sab dekh rahi hai....

 

[rhyme_boy]

Woh Buddha aadami Jo sunghta Hai woh hota hai uski khud ki tatti kyunki woh gaon Mein vahi jagah hagta hai... Bheed Mein khareed log yah dekh foot foot ke hansne lagte Hain, mahaul intense se funny ho jata hai....

Lekin unhen pata nahin tha ki abhi bhi chudail upar Se Sab dekh rahi hai....

Jab ki wo chudail bhi dekh kar has rahi thi..lekin uske hasne ki wajah ..wo buddha ka mazak ban jana nahi tha...

Wo chudail apne agle shikar ko dekh kar has rahi thi.. jo us bheed mein se nikal kar ... Apne padosi ki darwaze mein uski biwi ke saath ghus gaya tha

 

[jaanvi sen]

Jab ki wo chudail bhi dekh kar has rahi thi..lekin uske hasne ki wajah ..wo buddha ka mazak ban jana nahi tha...

Wo chudail apne agle shikar ko dekh kar has rahi thi.. jo us bheed mein se nikal kar ... Apne padosi ki darwaze mein uski biwi ke saath ghus gaya tha

Woh padoshi ke darwaze mein gusha raha tha, padoshi ke Biwi ke saath jabardasti karne ki koshish kar raha tha vah aadami.... Lekin usse phele chudail us aurat ke sharir mein gush gaye.. woh Admi usse chu paata usse phele... Aurat ke andar woh chudail... Aadmi ko hawa Mein utha Ke uski private part kaat deta hai.... "Ladkiya pe Gandi Nazar dalne Wale... Yehi hashar hota Hai tujh Jaison ka" woh chikh ke kehti hai. Aadmi wahi ke wahi maut Ke Ghat utar jata hai.

Cheekh sunkar bheed ke sabhi log idhar aa ke yah Sara seen dekhte hain....

 

[rhyme_boy]

Woh padoshi ke darwaze mein gusha raha tha, padoshi ke Biwi ke saath jabardasti karne ki koshish kar raha tha vah aadami.... Lekin usse phele chudail us aurat ke sharir mein gush gaye.. woh Admi usse chu paata usse phele... Aurat ke andar woh chudail... Aadmi ko hawa Mein utha Ke uski private part kaat deta hai.... "Ladkiya pe Gandi Nazar dalne Wale... Yehi hashar hota Hai tujh Jaison ka" woh chikh ke kehti hai. Aadmi wahi ke wahi maut Ke Ghat utar jata hai.

Cheekh sunkar bheed ke sabhi log idhar aa ke yah Sara seen dekhte hain....

Aur udhar sabhi log dekhte hain ke wo aurat us laash par jhuk kar uska khoon pi Rahi thi... Aur side mein us marey hue ka saman kata padha hai..

Aur logo ke chehre par dar aa jata hai ke ye aurat kahi unke auzar par hamla na kar de