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[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Update 3

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Mujhe aaise sochte huye dekh or meri ankhe nam hoti dekh kr thakurain mere pass aayi or boli,

Thakurain : “ main nahi janti ki tum dukhi kyu ho, parantu meri ek baat yaad rakhna aaj se tum yaha rahoge to ye bhi tumhari hi family hai. Tum yaha kaam karte ho to kya hua. Yaha tumhe koi kami nahi hogi.” Ye kehte huye unhone mere sar par pyar se haath fera. Our me jhat se unke pairo me baith kar unke pair chhu liye.



Tabhi thakur ji bole ,



Thakur : “ chalo ab bohot hua kyu rula rahi ho is bichare ko, ab kaam ki baate karte hai – ab suno shree – aaj se tum kheto ki dekhbhal karoge raat me, pritam singh tumhe sari baate bata denge sath hi sare khet bhi dikha denge or tumhare liye kheto me ek room banwa diya jayega. Or haan din me yaha aajaya karna, tumhare khane pine ka bhi sara intejam ho jayega. Ab jao naha lo or aaram karna.” Unke nokar raamu ko bulate huye, “ ramu , jao ise tumhare bagal wala room dikha do.”



Chalo sabhi jaao aaram karlo ye keh kar thakur jib hi apne room ki taraf chale gaye.



Me chup chap raamu ke piche-piche chal raha tha. Raamu ne mujhe room dikha diya or nahane ke lye jagah bhi dikha di. Mardo kin aha ne ki jagah khulle me thi or oraton ke liye ek bathroom banaya gaya tha.



{{Iska ek vishesh karan bhi hai, puratan kaal se hi khulle me nahane ki pratha bani huyi hai is do karan hai.

• Dharmik roop se kaha jaye to nahane ka samay suraj ke ugte samay ka hona chahiye , suraj ko naman karke snan karna chahiye , ta ki hamara pura din nirmal or santi se bhara hua ho , isase hamari aatmshaki ko badhava prapt hota hai. Or hamari umra lambi hoti hai. Ye sirf manane walo or jo is kriya ko karte hai unhe hi iska ahsas bakhubi pata hota hai.
• Dusra ye karan hai ki agar vigyan ke anusar khulle aasman ke niche nahane se , hamari aaspas behne wali hawa hamare sharer ki thakavat ko nikaldeta hai or sharer ko halka bana deti hai, pani or hawa ka mishran sharer ki rog partikarak shakti ko badhava deti hai. Jisase hum majbut ban jate hai. Hame pure din kaam karne me utsah prapt hota hai,

Sirf ek week khulle me nahakar dekhiye sabhi log fir result khud hi pata chal jayega. ( mahilaon ke liye anurodh hai ki aap log ye try naa kare kyu ki aaj ka jamana digital hai, siliye aapke liye ye uchit nahi hoga.)



Kahani par aate hai wapis }}



Ramu mujhe room dikhakar wapis chala gaya, mai room me gaya waha har wo vastu mojud thi jiski jarurat har insane ko hoti hai. Ek charpayi jise hum bed kehte hai, 2 takiye, 2-3 chadar. Ek matka pani se bhara hua, or bhi bohot kuch tha. Tab tak ramu badali ek naya towal or kuch mere size ke kapde leke aaya tha our nahane ko kehkar chala gaya.



Maine towal uthai or bahar nahane chala gaya. Pani kafi thanda tha, fir bhi me nahane laga. Socha itne acche family me noukar hun to ache se rehna hoga warna nikal denge mujhe. Isi liye ache se ragad ragad kr nahane laga. 15-20 minute ho gaye mai abhi bhi naha raha tha, par achanak mujhe aaisa laga ki koi mujhe nahate dekh raha hai. Maine piche mud kar idhar udhar dekha pr koi nahi dikhai diya. Me fir vyast ho gaya. Nahane ke baad me touliya se khud ke sharer ko ponch raha tha. Ki meri najar haweli ke upar ahunch gayi, uraj ki roshani aankho par pad rahi thi isiliye wo kaon hai ye mujhe nahi dikh paa raha tha or shayad wo mujhe thik acche se dekh sakti thi.

Mai turant hi room me ghus gaya, raamu khana rakh kar gaya tha. Maine khana kha liya. Or aaram karne ke liye let gaya. “ wo thi kon? Or aaise kaise koi gair ko nahate dekh sakta hai?” sochte huye mujhe kab nind lag gayi pata hi nahi chala.

Awesome update

 

[u.sir.name]

hero ki intro ka abhi time nahi aaya hai. parantu juld hi woh bhi update kahani me add kar diya jayega , aap sabhi ka sukhriya dosto .
me online work karta hun. sketches or paintings in sab ko manage kar ke mujhe kahani likhne ke liye wakt nikalna padta hai dost , isi liye kahani ke naye update milne ka koi time fix nahi hai fir bhi kuch din tak ek din me ek hi update de sakta hun , uske baad din me 2 ya 3 update dene ki koshish karunga

Pressure mat lo aaram se likho....jab waqt mile tab liklo aur update dedo....

 

[Black water]

Update 3

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Mujhe aaise sochte huye dekh or meri ankhe nam hoti dekh kr thakurain mere pass aayi or boli,

Thakurain : “ main nahi janti ki tum dukhi kyu ho, parantu meri ek baat yaad rakhna aaj se tum yaha rahoge to ye bhi tumhari hi family hai. Tum yaha kaam karte ho to kya hua. Yaha tumhe koi kami nahi hogi.” Ye kehte huye unhone mere sar par pyar se haath fera. Our me jhat se unke pairo me baith kar unke pair chhu liye.



Tabhi thakur ji bole ,



Thakur : “ chalo ab bohot hua kyu rula rahi ho is bichare ko, ab kaam ki baate karte hai – ab suno shree – aaj se tum kheto ki dekhbhal karoge raat me, pritam singh tumhe sari baate bata denge sath hi sare khet bhi dikha denge or tumhare liye kheto me ek room banwa diya jayega. Or haan din me yaha aajaya karna, tumhare khane pine ka bhi sara intejam ho jayega. Ab jao naha lo or aaram karna.” Unke nokar raamu ko bulate huye, “ ramu , jao ise tumhare bagal wala room dikha do.”



Chalo sabhi jaao aaram karlo ye keh kar thakur jib hi apne room ki taraf chale gaye.



Me chup chap raamu ke piche-piche chal raha tha. Raamu ne mujhe room dikha diya or nahane ke lye jagah bhi dikha di. Mardo kin aha ne ki jagah khulle me thi or oraton ke liye ek bathroom banaya gaya tha.



{{Iska ek vishesh karan bhi hai, puratan kaal se hi khulle me nahane ki pratha bani huyi hai is do karan hai.

• Dharmik roop se kaha jaye to nahane ka samay suraj ke ugte samay ka hona chahiye , suraj ko naman karke snan karna chahiye , ta ki hamara pura din nirmal or santi se bhara hua ho , isase hamari aatmshaki ko badhava prapt hota hai. Or hamari umra lambi hoti hai. Ye sirf manane walo or jo is kriya ko karte hai unhe hi iska ahsas bakhubi pata hota hai.
• Dusra ye karan hai ki agar vigyan ke anusar khulle aasman ke niche nahane se , hamari aaspas behne wali hawa hamare sharer ki thakavat ko nikaldeta hai or sharer ko halka bana deti hai, pani or hawa ka mishran sharer ki rog partikarak shakti ko badhava deti hai. Jisase hum majbut ban jate hai. Hame pure din kaam karne me utsah prapt hota hai,

Sirf ek week khulle me nahakar dekhiye sabhi log fir result khud hi pata chal jayega. ( mahilaon ke liye anurodh hai ki aap log ye try naa kare kyu ki aaj ka jamana digital hai, siliye aapke liye ye uchit nahi hoga.)



Kahani par aate hai wapis }}



Ramu mujhe room dikhakar wapis chala gaya, mai room me gaya waha har wo vastu mojud thi jiski jarurat har insane ko hoti hai. Ek charpayi jise hum bed kehte hai, 2 takiye, 2-3 chadar. Ek matka pani se bhara hua, or bhi bohot kuch tha. Tab tak ramu badali ek naya towal or kuch mere size ke kapde leke aaya tha our nahane ko kehkar chala gaya.



Maine towal uthai or bahar nahane chala gaya. Pani kafi thanda tha, fir bhi me nahane laga. Socha itne acche family me noukar hun to ache se rehna hoga warna nikal denge mujhe. Isi liye ache se ragad ragad kr nahane laga. 15-20 minute ho gaye mai abhi bhi naha raha tha, par achanak mujhe aaisa laga ki koi mujhe nahate dekh raha hai. Maine piche mud kar idhar udhar dekha pr koi nahi dikhai diya. Me fir vyast ho gaya. Nahane ke baad me touliya se khud ke sharer ko ponch raha tha. Ki meri najar haweli ke upar ahunch gayi, uraj ki roshani aankho par pad rahi thi isiliye wo kaon hai ye mujhe nahi dikh paa raha tha or shayad wo mujhe thik acche se dekh sakti thi.

Mai turant hi room me ghus gaya, raamu khana rakh kar gaya tha. Maine khana kha liya. Or aaram karne ke liye let gaya. “ wo thi kon? Or aaise kaise koi gair ko nahate dekh sakta hai?” sochte huye mujhe kab nind lag gayi pata hi nahi chala.

Super fantastic update bhai

 

[u.sir.name]

Update 3

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Mujhe aaise sochte huye dekh or meri ankhe nam hoti dekh kr thakurain mere pass aayi or boli,

Thakurain : “ main nahi janti ki tum dukhi kyu ho, parantu meri ek baat yaad rakhna aaj se tum yaha rahoge to ye bhi tumhari hi family hai. Tum yaha kaam karte ho to kya hua. Yaha tumhe koi kami nahi hogi.” Ye kehte huye unhone mere sar par pyar se haath fera. Our me jhat se unke pairo me baith kar unke pair chhu liye.



Tabhi thakur ji bole ,



Thakur : “ chalo ab bohot hua kyu rula rahi ho is bichare ko, ab kaam ki baate karte hai – ab suno shree – aaj se tum kheto ki dekhbhal karoge raat me, pritam singh tumhe sari baate bata denge sath hi sare khet bhi dikha denge or tumhare liye kheto me ek room banwa diya jayega. Or haan din me yaha aajaya karna, tumhare khane pine ka bhi sara intejam ho jayega. Ab jao naha lo or aaram karna.” Unke nokar raamu ko bulate huye, “ ramu , jao ise tumhare bagal wala room dikha do.”



Chalo sabhi jaao aaram karlo ye keh kar thakur jib hi apne room ki taraf chale gaye.



Me chup chap raamu ke piche-piche chal raha tha. Raamu ne mujhe room dikha diya or nahane ke lye jagah bhi dikha di. Mardo kin aha ne ki jagah khulle me thi or oraton ke liye ek bathroom banaya gaya tha.



{{Iska ek vishesh karan bhi hai, puratan kaal se hi khulle me nahane ki pratha bani huyi hai is do karan hai.

• Dharmik roop se kaha jaye to nahane ka samay suraj ke ugte samay ka hona chahiye , suraj ko naman karke snan karna chahiye , ta ki hamara pura din nirmal or santi se bhara hua ho , isase hamari aatmshaki ko badhava prapt hota hai. Or hamari umra lambi hoti hai. Ye sirf manane walo or jo is kriya ko karte hai unhe hi iska ahsas bakhubi pata hota hai.
• Dusra ye karan hai ki agar vigyan ke anusar khulle aasman ke niche nahane se , hamari aaspas behne wali hawa hamare sharer ki thakavat ko nikaldeta hai or sharer ko halka bana deti hai, pani or hawa ka mishran sharer ki rog partikarak shakti ko badhava deti hai. Jisase hum majbut ban jate hai. Hame pure din kaam karne me utsah prapt hota hai,

Sirf ek week khulle me nahakar dekhiye sabhi log fir result khud hi pata chal jayega. ( mahilaon ke liye anurodh hai ki aap log ye try naa kare kyu ki aaj ka jamana digital hai, siliye aapke liye ye uchit nahi hoga.)



Kahani par aate hai wapis }}



Ramu mujhe room dikhakar wapis chala gaya, mai room me gaya waha har wo vastu mojud thi jiski jarurat har insane ko hoti hai. Ek charpayi jise hum bed kehte hai, 2 takiye, 2-3 chadar. Ek matka pani se bhara hua, or bhi bohot kuch tha. Tab tak ramu badali ek naya towal or kuch mere size ke kapde leke aaya tha our nahane ko kehkar chala gaya.



Maine towal uthai or bahar nahane chala gaya. Pani kafi thanda tha, fir bhi me nahane laga. Socha itne acche family me noukar hun to ache se rehna hoga warna nikal denge mujhe. Isi liye ache se ragad ragad kr nahane laga. 15-20 minute ho gaye mai abhi bhi naha raha tha, par achanak mujhe aaisa laga ki koi mujhe nahate dekh raha hai. Maine piche mud kar idhar udhar dekha pr koi nahi dikhai diya. Me fir vyast ho gaya. Nahane ke baad me touliya se khud ke sharer ko ponch raha tha. Ki meri najar haweli ke upar ahunch gayi, uraj ki roshani aankho par pad rahi thi isiliye wo kaon hai ye mujhe nahi dikh paa raha tha or shayad wo mujhe thik acche se dekh sakti thi.

Mai turant hi room me ghus gaya, raamu khana rakh kar gaya tha. Maine khana kha liya. Or aaram karne ke liye let gaya. “ wo thi kon? Or aaise kaise koi gair ko nahate dekh sakta hai?” sochte huye mujhe kab nind lag gayi pata hi nahi chala.

Jabardast update brother.....
waise khule mein nahane ka alag hi Anand hai....
keep writing....
keep posting......

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome update bro

 

[Sniperx009]

Update 4​

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Sham ke panch baje ramu ne aakar mujhe uthaya,



Ramu : “ are bhai uthiye juldi, aapko thakur ji ne yaad kiya hai. Uthiye juldi.”



Mai : “ are ramu chacha aap inti aadar se naa baat kare hum aapse bohut chote hai, aap mujhe tut u boliye mujhe acha lagega. Samjhe aap?”



Ramu : “ samajh gaya beta, tum to thakur ji ke mehman ki tarah ho to thodi aadar to honi hi chahiye na ?”

Mai : “ aapki baat sahi hai, par me koi mehman nahi hun ek nokar hun to aap mujhe apne bête ki tarah hi bulaiye.”



( Ramu kaka : ye is ghar ke wafadar noukar hai. inki age 35 saal hai. Ye inki patni ke sath ghar ke khane pine ka sara intejam karte hai. Ye apne haatho se job hi banate hai pyar se banate hai. Subah ki coffiee se lekar sham ke khane tak. Haweli ko koi party ho ya koi karyakram sabhi ka sara intejam ye dono pati patni hi karte hai. Ramu kaka ka bachpan se lekar jawani tak saara jivan haweli me hi bit chukka hai . thakur ji or thakurain ji ne hi inki shadi karwai or inko naya jivan diya.

Kanta : Ramu kaka ki patni. Inki umar 31 saal hai. Dikhne me normal hai, Rang se saavli hai. 7th tak padhi likhi hai. Ye bhi apne pati ki tarah hi dil ki achi hai.



In dono ki khushal zindagi me bas ek hi dag hai or wo h ki inke koi bacche nahi hai . bas yahi ek baat in dono ko thes pahunchati hai dukh de jati hai. Parantu ye baa two kisiko batate nahi the sara dard apne sine me chupaye rakhte the. Jitni koshish kar sakte the kar chuke the , or paiso ki kami ke karan sari koshishe chhod di thi unhone , kisi ko batana nahi chahate the . kyun ki izzat ka khatara ban sakta tha. )



Mai char payi se utha or fresh ho kar haweli ke piche ki taraf chala gaya. Waha thakur ji or pritam singh baat kar rahe the. Mai waha gaya.



Mai : “ babuji aapne mujhe bulaya ?”



Thakur : “ haa tum pritam ke sath jao , wo tumhe saari baate samjha dega. Ache se kaam karna , mai tumpar bharosa kar raha hun mera bharosa mat todna. Agar kuch galat lage ya koi galti kare to mujhe ya pritam singh ko bata dena.”



Mai : “ ji babuji , me aapka bharosa nahi todunga. Aapne mujh jaise anath ko sahara diya hai , our waise bhi maa ji ne to mujhe family ka hissa mana hai. To fir aap hi bataiye ek beta apne pariwar ka barosa kaise tod sakta hai . ye meri bhi to family hai na.”



Thakur : “ bate to badi achi kar lete ho. Thik hai jao iske sath.” Muskurate huye haweli ke andar chale gate hai.



Mai or pritam singh tractor me baith kar kheto ki taraf nikal jate hai, gaav se gujarte wakt har koi pritam singh ko pranam karta to koi unka haalchal puchta. Kaib 15 min baad hum kheto me pahunch gaye the.



Pritam singh ne bataya ki, “ Gaav ki saari jamin thakur ji ki hi hai. Kul mila kar 1000 yekad ki jamin hai unke 4 hisse kiye gaye the or har hisse pe bohot sare log kaam karte hai kuch logo ko kheto ki dekhbhal ke liye rakha gaya hai. Or ye hissa tum sambhalo ge bich bich me mai bhi yaha aaya karunga. Baki raat me tum torch or ek lakdi sath me rakha karo . bich bich me chakkar lagate rehna . or dekho shree yaha choriya bohot hoti hai isliye dhyan se kaam karna. Shikayat ka koi mouka mat dena.



Mai : “ji chote thakur .”



Pritam singh : “ are me koi thakur nahi hun, mujhe ye thakuro wale kaam pasand nahi ha . ye sab jane do , apne bare me kuch batao?” meri taraf dekhte huye smile kar dete hai.



Mai : “ mera kya hai me bas ek musafir hun jise khud ke bare me kuch nahi pata , khud ka koi wajud hi nahi hai yun samajh lijiye khud ki talash me hun.”



Pritam singh : “ hmm samasya thodi gambhir hai, par mere pass iska ilaj hai, agar tum mano to?” smile karte huye.



Mai : “ pata nahi pr aap kehte ho to maan leta hun, bataiye kya ilaj hai?”



Pritam singh : “ dekho tumhari pichli zindagi kaisi thi ye sab chhodo, or jo ab tumhe jindagi jine ke liye sari umar padi hai, khud ko akela samjhna chhodo or sabhi ko apna samjho . jaise ki is gaav ka har shaks apna hai . ye gaav ek pariwar hai. Inke sukh me dukh me shamil ho jao unhe apnao . fir dekhna ye sab log tumhe itna pyar denge kit um khud ko hi bhool jaoge samjhe buddhu.” Mere sar par haath ferte huye, “ dekho mai janta hun me tumse umar me bohot bada hun , parantu hum dost ban sakte hai, tum apne dil ki saari baate mujhe bata sakte ho kabhi bhi.”



Mai : “ kya aap sach me mere dost banenge?”



Pritam singh : “ haa haa kyu nahi agar tum chaho to.”



Mai : “ haan hum dost hai. Or aapki har baat me samajh gaya, aaj se kabhi dukhi nahi hounga.



Pritam singh : “chalo me chalta hun, tumhara khana kisike haantho bhijwa dunga. Or savdhan rehna samjhe. Me chalta hun.” Pritam singh chale jate hai.



Abhi tak suraj dhala nahi tha isiliye me bhi kheto me ghumne chala jata hun ek torch or ek danda lekar .



( dosto is kahani me bohot sare romantic seens hai, bohot sara suspance bhi hai, mai kahani ko real feeling dene ka prayas kar raha hun , isiliye kahani thodi lambi khinch sakti hai. Me apni puri koshish karunga )

 

[Sniperx009]

aap sabhi ka shukriya , mai aap sabhi ki tarah romace specialist nahi hun , aap sabhi ko pata hai ki apni feeling ko kaise vyakt karna hai. me bhi koshish karunga pr aapke jitna ache se vyakt na kar pau ........

 

[Sniperx009]

mujhe reading ka bohot shouk hai , isiliye me jo bhi mile use pura padh kar hi dam leta hun , fir mujhe lihne ki echa hone lagi to maine likhna shuru kiya . jaise ki poems, shayaries, scipt for movies sirf 2 hi likhi hai . baki kuch na kuch karta rahta hun ......bz rehna mujhe pasand hahi.

fir adult stories padhne laga , likhne ka time ab mila

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Update 4

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Sham ke panch baje ramu ne aakar mujhe uthaya,



Ramu : “ are bhai uthiye juldi, aapko thakur ji ne yaad kiya hai. Uthiye juldi.”



Mai : “ are ramu chacha aap inti aadar se naa baat kare hum aapse bohut chote hai, aap mujhe tut u boliye mujhe acha lagega. Samjhe aap?”



Ramu : “ samajh gaya beta, tum to thakur ji ke mehman ki tarah ho to thodi aadar to honi hi chahiye na ?”

Mai : “ aapki baat sahi hai, par me koi mehman nahi hun ek nokar hun to aap mujhe apne bête ki tarah hi bulaiye.”



( Ramu kaka : ye is ghar ke wafadar noukar hai. inki age 35 saal hai. Ye inki patni ke sath ghar ke khane pine ka sara intejam karte hai. Ye apne haatho se job hi banate hai pyar se banate hai. Subah ki coffiee se lekar sham ke khane tak. Haweli ko koi party ho ya koi karyakram sabhi ka sara intejam ye dono pati patni hi karte hai. Ramu kaka ka bachpan se lekar jawani tak saara jivan haweli me hi bit chukka hai . thakur ji or thakurain ji ne hi inki shadi karwai or inko naya jivan diya.

Kanta : Ramu kaka ki patni. Inki umar 31 saal hai. Dikhne me normal hai, Rang se saavli hai. 7th tak padhi likhi hai. Ye bhi apne pati ki tarah hi dil ki achi hai.



In dono ki khushal zindagi me bas ek hi dag hai or wo h ki inke koi bacche nahi hai . bas yahi ek baat in dono ko thes pahunchati hai dukh de jati hai. Parantu ye baa two kisiko batate nahi the sara dard apne sine me chupaye rakhte the. Jitni koshish kar sakte the kar chuke the , or paiso ki kami ke karan sari koshishe chhod di thi unhone , kisi ko batana nahi chahate the . kyun ki izzat ka khatara ban sakta tha. )



Mai char payi se utha or fresh ho kar haweli ke piche ki taraf chala gaya. Waha thakur ji or pritam singh baat kar rahe the. Mai waha gaya.



Mai : “ babuji aapne mujhe bulaya ?”



Thakur : “ haa tum pritam ke sath jao , wo tumhe saari baate samjha dega. Ache se kaam karna , mai tumpar bharosa kar raha hun mera bharosa mat todna. Agar kuch galat lage ya koi galti kare to mujhe ya pritam singh ko bata dena.”



Mai : “ ji babuji , me aapka bharosa nahi todunga. Aapne mujh jaise anath ko sahara diya hai , our waise bhi maa ji ne to mujhe family ka hissa mana hai. To fir aap hi bataiye ek beta apne pariwar ka barosa kaise tod sakta hai . ye meri bhi to family hai na.”



Thakur : “ bate to badi achi kar lete ho. Thik hai jao iske sath.” Muskurate huye haweli ke andar chale gate hai.



Mai or pritam singh tractor me baith kar kheto ki taraf nikal jate hai, gaav se gujarte wakt har koi pritam singh ko pranam karta to koi unka haalchal puchta. Kaib 15 min baad hum kheto me pahunch gaye the.



Pritam singh ne bataya ki, “ Gaav ki saari jamin thakur ji ki hi hai. Kul mila kar 1000 yekad ki jamin hai unke 4 hisse kiye gaye the or har hisse pe bohot sare log kaam karte hai kuch logo ko kheto ki dekhbhal ke liye rakha gaya hai. Or ye hissa tum sambhalo ge bich bich me mai bhi yaha aaya karunga. Baki raat me tum torch or ek lakdi sath me rakha karo . bich bich me chakkar lagate rehna . or dekho shree yaha choriya bohot hoti hai isliye dhyan se kaam karna. Shikayat ka koi mouka mat dena.



Mai : “ji chote thakur .”



Pritam singh : “ are me koi thakur nahi hun, mujhe ye thakuro wale kaam pasand nahi ha . ye sab jane do , apne bare me kuch batao?” meri taraf dekhte huye smile kar dete hai.



Mai : “ mera kya hai me bas ek musafir hun jise khud ke bare me kuch nahi pata , khud ka koi wajud hi nahi hai yun samajh lijiye khud ki talash me hun.”



Pritam singh : “ hmm samasya thodi gambhir hai, par mere pass iska ilaj hai, agar tum mano to?” smile karte huye.



Mai : “ pata nahi pr aap kehte ho to maan leta hun, bataiye kya ilaj hai?”



Pritam singh : “ dekho tumhari pichli zindagi kaisi thi ye sab chhodo, or jo ab tumhe jindagi jine ke liye sari umar padi hai, khud ko akela samjhna chhodo or sabhi ko apna samjho . jaise ki is gaav ka har shaks apna hai . ye gaav ek pariwar hai. Inke sukh me dukh me shamil ho jao unhe apnao . fir dekhna ye sab log tumhe itna pyar denge kit um khud ko hi bhool jaoge samjhe buddhu.” Mere sar par haath ferte huye, “ dekho mai janta hun me tumse umar me bohot bada hun , parantu hum dost ban sakte hai, tum apne dil ki saari baate mujhe bata sakte ho kabhi bhi.”



Mai : “ kya aap sach me mere dost banenge?”



Pritam singh : “ haa haa kyu nahi agar tum chaho to.”



Mai : “ haan hum dost hai. Or aapki har baat me samajh gaya, aaj se kabhi dukhi nahi hounga.



Pritam singh : “chalo me chalta hun, tumhara khana kisike haantho bhijwa dunga. Or savdhan rehna samjhe. Me chalta hun.” Pritam singh chale jate hai.



Abhi tak suraj dhala nahi tha isiliye me bhi kheto me ghumne chala jata hun ek torch or ek danda lekar .



( dosto is kahani me bohot sare romantic seens hai, bohot sara suspance bhi hai, mai kahani ko real feeling dene ka prayas kar raha hun , isiliye kahani thodi lambi khinch sakti hai. Me apni puri koshish karunga )

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[Chinturocky]

Behtareen update,
Mujhe bhi lambi kahani pasand hai jaha her kirdar dheere dheere viksit hote hai. Aise hi likhate jaao.