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Thriller Talwaar

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Shahr ki sunsaan galiyan raat ka ghana andhera sannata charo taraf is tarah se pasra hua tha jaise apne aagosh se ye kabhi is alam ko azaad nahi hone dega isi sannate me ek shaks sharab ke nashe me dhutt haath me ek whisky ki botal liye sadak pe chala jaa raha thauska kad kareeb 6 feet hoga chahre pe halki halki dadhi garadan tak aate uske lambe badan pe keemti suit aur daye haath me ka bracelet saaf bata rahe the ki ye koi mamooli insaan nahi hai wo abhi kuch door hi chala hoga ki ek blcak pajero uske bagal me aa ke rukti hai wo us mese usi ki kad kathi wala ek shaks bahar nikalta hai fark sirf itna tha ke uske baal saleeke se kate hue the aur chahre pe dadhi bhi nahi thi wo shaks tezi chalta hua uske paas ata hai aur kahta .

Shks – rudra tum party chhod kar kyu chale aye mujhe saath bhi nahi liya .

Rudra – party huh my foot sab ke sab mere baap chamche the waha

Shks – theek magar tujhe akele aane ki kya jarurat thi mujhe toh saath me le leta .

Rudra – kyu vicky kya tumhare boss ko meri fikr hone lagi hai .

Vicky – wo mere boss nahi tere papa bhi hai aur mai tera guard nahi tera dost bhi hun chal gadi me baith.

Rudra – vicky mujhe akela chhod de kuch der ke kiye hi sahi .

Vicky – nahi bilkul nahi tu janta hai tune poore shahr ki gangs ko apna dushman bana liya hai mai tujhe chhod ke nahi ja sakta .

Rudra – umr bhar kaun nibhata hai talluk itna
ae miri jaan ke dushman tujhe allah rakhe .

Vicky – chal mere baap ghar chal .

Rudra – ghar me tha kya wo jo rakhte the hasrat e ummed so hai .

Kahte hue rudra gadi me baith jata hai vicky bhi driving seat sambhal leta hai .

Vicky – rudra tumhare papa ne kaha hai ki kal gold ki delivery lene tumhe jana hai .

Rudra – theek hai don’t worry .

Vicky – aur han kal suhana bhi ghar aa rahi hai uske college ki chhuttiyan shuru hogai hai .

Rudra – use lene mai station pe pahuch jaunga train kitne baje ki hai .

Vicky – subah 11 baje ki .

Rudra – aur delivery .

Vicky – shaam ko 7 baje .

Rudra gud chal farmhouse chal .

Vicky – farmhouse kyu ghar kyu nahi .

Rudra – kyuki ghar pe mera baap hoga aur mai abhi uski shukl nahi dekhna chahta .

Vicky kuch nahi bolta kyunki wo janta tha ki agar rudra ka samna is waqt apne baap se hua toh bahut bada bawaal khada ho sakta hai kai baar aisa ho chuka hai rudra ke baap chaudhary balwant singh is shahar ke sabse bade don the aur unka sara bussiness rudra hi sambhalta hai kai baar usne jaan pe khel kar apne baap ki jaan bachai thi magar phir bhi wo apne baap se nafart karta hai pata nahi kyu wajah chahe jo bhi ho hogi bahut badi .

Dono log khamoshi se apni manzil ki taraf badhe jaa rahe the tabhi unhe kisi cheekh sunai di .

Rudra – vicky gadi rok koi museebat me hai .

Vicky – wo toh theek hai magar humara isse kya lena dena .

Vicky ne gadi rokte hue kaha gadi rukte hi rudra gadi se bahar nikal ata hai uske peeche peeche vicky bhi bahar aa jata hai ek baar phir kisi ladki ki dard bhari cheekh goonjti hai .

Rudra aur vicky dono awaaz ki taraf badhne lagte hai waqt ki nazakat ko samjhte hue vicky apni pistol nikal leta hai kuch door aage jane baad ek chhota magar ghana jungle shuru hota hai awaaz usi taraf se aa rahi thi rudra tezi se awaaz ki taraf badh raha tha uske peeche peeche vicky bhi haath me pistol liye chal raha abhi dono log jungle kr andar kuch hi kadam chale honge ke achanak ek ladki bhagte hue aati hai aur rudra se takra jati hai magar rudra use sambhal lete hai wo badhawasi me bolti .

Ladki – plese mujhe bacha lijiye wo log mujhe mar dalenge .

Rudra – kaun log .

Ladki – wo wo mere peeche hai .

Vicky – aap shant ho jaiye apko kuch nahi .

Tabhi wahan 5 6 log aa jate hai un mese ek admi kahta .

Admi – ae launde is laundiya ko humare hawale kar aur nikal yahan se .

Andhera hone ki wajah se kisi ko bhi kuch saaf nZar nahi aa raha tha Rudra ladki ko khud se alag hai aur jeg se ek cigarette nikal kar jalata hai jab wo log lighter ki raushni Shahr hi hun chal gadi me baith.

Rudra – vicky mujhe akela chhod de kuch der ke kiye hi sahi .

Vicky – nahi bilkul nahi tu janta hai tune poore shahr ki gangs ko apna dushman bana liya hai mai tujhe chhod ke nahi ja sakta .

Rudra – umr bhar kaun nibhata hai talluk itna
ae miri jaan ke dushman tujhe allah rakhe .

Vicky – chal mere baap ghar chal .

Rudra – ghar me tha kya wo jo rakhte the hasrat e ummed so hai .

Kahte hue rudra gadi me baith jata hai vicky bhi driving seat sambhal leta hai .

Vicky – rudra tumhare papa ne kaha hai ki kal gold ki delivery lene tumhe jana hai .

Rudra – theek hai don’t worry .

Vicky – aur han kal suhana bhi ghar aa rahi hai uske college ki chhuttiyan shuru hogai hai .

Rudra – use lene mai station pe pahuch jaunga train kitne baje ki hai .

Vicky – subah 11 baje ki .

Rudra – aur delivery .

Vicky – shaam ko 7 baje .

Rudra gud chal farmhouse chal .

Vicky – farmhouse kyu ghar kyu nahi .

Rudra – kyuki ghar pe mera baap hoga aur mai abhi uski shukl nahi dekhna chahta .

Vicky kuch nahi bolta kyunki wo janta tha ki agar rudra ka samna is waqt apne baap se hua toh bahut bada bawaal khada ho sakta hai kai baar aisa ho chuka hai rudra ke baap chaudhary balwant singh is shahar ke sabse bade don the aur unka sara bussiness rudra hi sambhalta hai kai baar usne jaan pe khel kar apne baap ki jaan bachai thi magar phir bhi wo apne baap se nafart karta hai pata nahi kyu wajah chahe jo bhi ho hogi bahut badi .

Dono log khamoshi se apni manzil ki taraf badhe jaa rahe the tabhi unhe kisi cheekh sunai di .

Rudra – vicky gadi rok koi museebat me hai .

Vicky – wo toh theek hai magar humara isse kya lena dena .

Vicky ne gadi rokte hue kaha gadi rukte hi rudra gadi se bahar nikal ata hai uske peeche peeche vicky bhi bahar aa jata hai ek baar phir kisi ladki ki dard bhari cheekh goonjti hai .

Rudra aur vicky dono awaaz ki taraf badhne lagte hai waqt ki nazakat ko samjhte hue vicky apni pistol nikal leta hai kuch door aage jane baad ek chhota magar ghana jungle shuru hota hai awaaz usi taraf se aa rahi thi rudra tezi se awaaz ki taraf badh raha tha uske peeche peeche vicky bhi haath me pistol liye chal raha abhi dono log jungle kr andar kuch hi kadam chale honge ke achanak ek ladki bhagte hue aati hai aur rudra se takra jati hai magar rudra use sambhal lete hai wo badhawasi me bolti .

Ladki – plese mujhe bacha lijiye wo log mujhe mar dalenge .

Rudra – kaun log .

Ladki – wo wo mere peeche hai .

Vicky – aap shant ho jaiye apko kuch nahi .

Tabhi wahan 5 6 log aa jate hai un mese ek admi kahta .

Admi – ae launde is laundiya ko humare hawale kar aur nikal yahan se .

Andhera hone ki wajah se kisi ko bhi kuch saaf nZar nahi aa raha tha Rudra ladki ko khud se alag hai aur jeg se ek cigarette nikal kShahr ki sunsaan galiyan raat ka ghana andhera sannata charo taraf is tarah se pasra hua tha jaise apne aagosh se ye kabhi is alam ko azaad nahi hone dega isi sannate me ek shaks sharab ke nashe me dhutt haath me ek whisky ki botal liye sadak pe chala jaa raha thauska kad kareeb 6 feet hoga chahre pe halki halki dadhi garadan tak aate uske lambe badan pe keemti suit aur daye haath me ka bracelet saaf bata rahe the ki ye koi mamooli insaan nahi hai wo abhi kuch door hi chala hoga ki ek blcak pajero uske bagal me aa ke rukti hai wo us mese usi ki kad kathi wala ek shaks bahar nikalta hai fark sirf itna tha ke uske baal saleeke se kate hue the aur chahre pe dadhi bhi nahi thi wo shaks tezi chalta hua uske paas ata hai aur kahta .

Shks – rudra tum party chhod kar kyu chale aye mujhe saath bhi nahi liya .

Rudra – party huh my foot sab ke sab mere baap chamche the waha

Shks – theek magar tujhe akele aane ki kya jarurat thi mujhe toh saath me le leta .

Rudra – kyu vicky kya tumhare boss ko meri fikr hone lagi hai .

Vicky – wo mere boss nahi tere papa bhi hai aur mai tera guard nahi tera dost bhi hun chal gadi me baith.

Rudra – vicky mujhe akela chhod de kuch der ke kiye hi sahi .

Vicky – nahi bilkul nahi tu janta hai tune poore shahr ki gangs ko apna dushman bana liya hai mai tujhe chhod ke nahi ja sakta .

Rudra – umr bhar kaun nibhata hai talluk itna
ae miri jaan ke dushman tujhe allah rakhe .

Vicky – chal mere baap ghar chal .

Rudra – ghar me tha kya wo jo rakhte the hasrat e ummed so hai .

Kahte hue rudra gadi me baith jata hai vicky bhi driving seat sambhal leta hai .

Vicky – rudra tumhare papa ne kaha hai ki kal gold ki delivery lene tumhe jana hai .

Rudra – theek hai don’t worry .

Vicky – aur han kal suhana bhi ghar aa rahi hai uske college ki chhuttiyan shuru hogai hai .

Rudra – use lene mai station pe pahuch jaunga train kitne baje ki hai .

Vicky – subah 11 baje ki .

Rudra – aur delivery .

Vicky – shaam ko 7 baje .

Rudra gud chal farmhouse chal .

Vicky – farmhouse kyu ghar kyu nahi .

Rudra – kyuki ghar pe mera baap hoga aur mai abhi uski shukl nahi dekhna chahta .

Vicky kuch nahi bolta kyunki wo janta tha ki agar rudra ka samna is waqt apne baap se hua toh bahut bada bawaal khada ho sakta hai kai baar aisa ho chuka hai rudra ke baap chaudhary balwant singh is shahar ke sabse bade don the aur unka sara bussiness rudra hi sambhalta hai kai baar usne jaan pe khel kar apne baap ki jaan bachai thi magar phir bhi wo apne baap se nafart karta hai pata nahi kyu wajah chahe jo bhi ho hogi bahut badi .

Dono log khamoshi se apni manzil ki taraf badhe jaa rahe the tabhi unhe kisi cheekh sunai di .

Rudra – vicky gadi rok koi museebat me hai .

Vicky – wo toh theek hai magar humara isse kya lena dena .

Vicky ne gadi rokte hue kaha gadi rukte hi rudra gadi se bahar nikal ata hai uske peeche peeche vicky bhi bahar aa jata hai ek baar phir kisi ladki ki dard bhari cheekh goonjti hai .

Rudra aur vicky dono awaaz ki taraf badhne lagte hai waqt ki nazakat ko samjhte hue vicky apni pistol nikal leta hai kuch door aage jane baad ek chhota magar ghana jungle shuru hota hai awaaz usi taraf se aa rahi thi rudra tezi se awaaz ki taraf badh raha tha uske peeche peeche vicky bhi haath me pistol liye chal raha abhi dono log jungle kr andar kuch hi kadam chale honge ke achanak ek ladki bhagte hue aati hai aur rudra se takra jati hai magar rudra use sambhal lete hai wo badhawasi me bolti .

Ladki – plese mujhe bacha lijiye wo log mujhe mar dalenge .

Rudra – kaun log .

Ladki – wo wo mere peeche hai .

Vicky – aap shant ho jaiye apko kuch nahi .

Tabhi wahan 5 6 log aa jate hai un mese ek admi kahta .

Admi – ae launde is laundiya ko humare hawale kar aur nikal yahan se .

Andhera hone ki wajah se kisi ko bhi kuch saaf nZar nahi aa raha tha Rudra ladki ko khud se alag hai aur jeg se ek cigarette nikal kar jalata hai jab wo log lighter ki raushni ar jalata hai jab wo log lighter ki raushni me rudra ka chahra dekhte hai toh ghbra jate hai wo admi kahta .

Admi – maaf kar na rudra bhai humne aapko pahchana nahi .

Rudra – niklo yahan se .

Sab log waha se rafoochakkar ho jate hai unke jaane baad vicky kahta hai .

Vicky – aap kaun hai aur yahan kya kar rahi aur ye log kaun the .

Ladki – mera hasrat hai aur mai yahan naukri ki talash me aai thi magar ye log jabardasti mujhse dhanda karwana chahte the .

Vicky – aap yaha kaha rahti hai hum apko waha chhod dete hai .

Hasrat – ji mai kisi ko nahi janti mai aaj hi yaha aai hun .

Vicky uski baat samjh jata hai aur rudra ki taraf dekhta hai rudra use aankhon hi ankhon me sahmati de deta hai .

Vicky – aap humare saath chaliye kal aap ko apke ghar bhijwa denge .

Harsat vicky ki baat sunke soch me pad jati hai use sochta dekh rudra bolta hai .

Rudra – fikr mat karo hum logo se tumhe koi khatra nahi hai .

Hasrat – nahi wo baat nahi hai mai toh ye soch rahi ki kya wakai is duniya aap jaise lig bhi hai jo kisi anjaan ladki bewajah madad karne ke kiye taiyaar ho jate hai .

Vicky – aur kisi ka toh pata nhi magar hum log aise hi hai ab chaliye .

Teeno log gadi ki taraf chal dete hai chalte chalte hasrat vicky se poochti hai .

Hasrat – ji aone apna naam nahi bataya .

Vicky – mera naam vicky hai hai aur uska naam rudra .

Bate karte karte teeno ko gadi ke paas pahuch jate hai vicky gaadi ka pichhala darwaza khol kar hasrat ko baithne ka ishara karta hai hasrat bina kuch bole gadi me baith jati hai uske vicky aur rudra bhi gaadi me baith jate hai aur gadi farmhouse ki taraf daud padti hai
 

Shivay chauhan

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Doston ye meri dusri kahani hai isse paheli meri story ko aap sabhi ne bahut pyar diya halanki wo abhi kahani abhi tak poori nahi hui hai magar phir bhi mai ye thread shuru kar raha hun asha karta hun ki aap log is kahani ko bhi utna hi pyar denge jitna apne meri pahli kahani ko diya hai aur lagatar de rahe tha

Thanks doston
 

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Shivay chauhan

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Update 2


Teeno log farmhouse pahuch jate hai rudra seedhe apne kamre me chala jata hai hasrat ko uske room me pahucha kar vicky bhi rudra ke kamre me aa jata hai rudra is waqt bed se tek lagaye baitha hua deewar ko ghoore ja raha tha vicky rudra se kahta hai

Vicky – ab kya deewar me chhed karoge .

Rudra – us ladki ko kamre dikha diya .

Vicky – han abhi tak toh so gai hogi .

Dono log baten kar hi rahe the ki kamre ke darwaze pe dastak hoti .

Hasrat – hum adar aa sakte hai .

Vicky – han jaaiye

Rudra vicky ko ghoor ke dekhta hai .

Hasrat darwaza khol ke kamre me dakhil hoti hai ye pahli baar tha jab rudra ne use theek se dekha tha gol chahra gora rang badi badi kaali ankhen phool ki pankhuri jaise hothon lambe kamar tak aate baal peele rang ke salwar suit mathe pe chhoti si bindi kul mila kar perfect ladki thi jise dekhte hi koi bhi apna dil kho baithe wo aisi hi khamosh khadi rahti hai toh rudra kahta hai.

Rudra – kya baat hai apko kuch chahiye tha .

Hasrat – ji mujhe bhook lagi hai.

Rudra vicky ki taraf dekhta vicky kahta hai .

Vicky – yar is samay khana kaha milega koi restaurant bhi nahi khula hoga .

Hasrat mayoos ho jati hai toh rudra kahta hai .

Rudra – Don’t worry mai kuch intzaam karta hun .

Kah kar wo apna phone nikalta hai aur kisi se kuch baat karta hai kuch der baat karke wo phone rakh deta hai aur hasrat se kahta hai .

Hasrat – chaliye apke khaane ka intzaam ho gya .

Kah kar wo vicky ko ishara karta hai aur kamre se bahar nikal jata hai uske peeche peeche hasrat aur vicky bhi chal dete hai ab driving seat par rudra baitha tha uske bagal me vicky aur peeche waki seat pe hasrat kareeb 20 min chalne ke baad gadi ek 7 star restaurant ke bahar rukti hai teeno log gadi se utarte hai restaurant ke gate pe hi ek admi khada tha use dekhne se saaf pata chal raha tha ki wo abhi abhi so ke utha hai rudra vicky aur hasarat teeno us admi ke paas aate hai .

Admi – welcome rudra bhai apne kyu taqleef uthai mujh se kah diya hota khaja ghar pe pahucha deta .

Rudra – nahi uski koi jarurat nahi thi kya sab kuch ready hai .

Admi – ji bas apka hi intzaar ho raha tha .

Kah kar wo restaurant ke andar dakhil ho jata hai uske peeche peeche rudra vicky aur hasarat bhi andar ghus jaate hai teeno log ek table pe baith jate hai rudra hasrat ko menu card deta hai aur kahta hai .

Rudra – jo khana hai order kar do .

Hasrat menu card leti hai aur apna order de dene ke baad bolti hai .

Hasrt – aap kuch nahi khayenge .

Rudra – nahi .

Vicky – mai toh khaunga .

Phir vicky bhi apna order de deta hai kareeb 15 min baad khana ata hai hasrat aur vicky dono khana khane lagte hai tabhi ek inspector restaurant me aata hai use dekhte hi restaurant ka malik uske paas pahuch jata hai inspector usse bolta hai .

Inspector – ye raat ke 3 baje restaurant kyu khol rakha hai band karo .

Inspector ne kadak swar me kaha .

Uski baat su ke hasrat khana khana band kar deti hai magar vicky use continue karne ka ishara karta hai

Malik kuch kah pata usse pahle hi rudra uske paas ata hai aur kahta hai .

Rudra – restaurant mere kahne pe khula hai .

Rudra ko dekhte hi wo ek narm laheje me bolta hai .

Inspector – are rudra bhai aap hai yaha toh phir humara kya kaam .

Rudra – hmm theek kaha .

Kah kar wo 100 ki ek gaddi nikalta hai aur us inspector ko de deta hai gaddi lete hue inspector kahta hai .

Inspector – are iski kya zaroorat thi.

Rudra – rudra rakh lo kaam ayenge .

Hasrat se sab bade gaur se dekh rahi thi

Jab rudra vicky aur hasrat ke paas pahuchta hai toh wo log khana kha chuke magar hasrat ab rudra ko bahut gaur se dekh rahi thi shayad use samjhne ki koshish kar rahi thi ki kyu wo ek anjaan ladki ke liye ye sab kar raha tha khair iska pata toh aage hi chalega .

Teeno log wahan se wapas farmhouse pahuchte hai andar aane ke baad rudra aur vicky apne room me aur hasrat apne room me chali jati hai room me aane ke baad rudra vicky se kahta hai .

Rudra – vicky is ladki ke liye kisi naukri ka intzaam karo .

Vicky – theek magar ek sawal puchun .

Rudra – abhi nahi so jate hai kal bahut kaam hai .
 
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