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Romance TANHAI KE SAHARE

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Vicky
- sala role mat kadh jaanta hoon tujhe man maine to laddu phut rahe honge abhi acting dikha raha hai .

Iss baat se dono has padte hain …

tabhi ritesh bolta hai ..

ritesh –“aare dipika aao betho “
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vicky dipika ka naam sun ke piche moodta hai par tabhi chatak ke sath uske gaal pe ek thapad padti hai aur ye thapad itna jor ka tha ki vicky jo khada ho raha tha wo wapas usi chair pe gir jaata hai ..
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Ab Aage
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. vicky – kya hua ?
“chatak”
Ritesh wanha se aake dipika ko rokta hai ..
Ritesh- kya hua tum iise kyun maar rahi ho ..
Dipika- ritesh mera hath chod de aaj yeh mere se nahini bachega ..isne mujhe itna badi baat chupaya tha .. kanhi tu bhi ismain shamil nahni hai ..phir to tu bhi pitega mere hath se.
Ritrsh- nahini kya maine nahin hun kisimaine bhi .. tu kis bare maine puch rahi hai .. tu isse hi maar maine bich maine nahin aaunga ..
Dipika- thi hai side maine hi reh maine to iski ..
Vicky- aare jaan maine kiya kya hai kam se kam yeh to batao . maien tum se kya chupaya hai ..
Dipika- thak ke wanhi beth jati hai ..pass maine rakha pani ka glass pura ek hi baar maine khali kar deti hai ..
Vicky- aaram se ..
Dipika- tum mujh se barsha wali baat kyun chupaya ..
Vicky- konsa si baat tumhe kaise pata . mujhe nahin pata kuch iss bare maine to ..
Dipika- vicky mere mood already kharab hai tum chup chap bataoge ya phir tumhara naak hi tod dun ..
Ritesh- kya baat hai koi mujhe bhi batayega .. kya hua barsha ko ..
Dipika- wo to ye batayega abhi .. barsha se ye contact maine hai aur barsha college iss liye nahin chodi thi ki usse koi family problem thi balki wo RB aur swati ke riste ki wajha se college chhod di thi ..
Ritesh- aur wo kyun bhala ..oye saale ab tu sab batayege barna .chal suru kar ..
Vicky- to suno **********************tab phir maine usko train maine bithake chala aaya . par wo baad maine wo mujhe RB ke baare maine jaan ne ke liye call karke pucha karti thi par .par wo jitna RB aur swati ke bare maine jaanti thi usse utna hi bura lagta tha isiliye maine usse iss bare maine batana mana kardiya . phir maine usse samjhaya ki wo khud ko iss pyar ke jaal se nikale kyun ki RB aur swati to sath maine hai, khamokhan wo dukh seh rahi hai .
Dipika – aur tune itni badi baat hum sab se chupake rakhi thi .
Ritesh uthke vicky ke sar pe ek ulta hath kka deta hai ..
Ritesh- aur yeh mere taraf se .. sala kuch dimag kaam karta hai tera ..
Dipika- to barsha ko abhike situation ke bare maine kuch nahinh pata hai ..
Vicky – nahini exam wagera the uske aur agar usko pata chalta ki RB ka aisa halat hua hai aur khash karke wo accident ke baat to yanha aa jati aur uski padhai aur exam dono suffer karti ..
Dipika- chalo ye baat tumne sahi socha .. wo chodo dekhte hain iss bare maine kuch ..
Ritesh- Dipika hum kya soch rahe the abhi kuch hi din baki hai uske baad hamara college life khatam ho jayega chal na kanhi ghoomne jay e..
Dipika- han kyun nahin.
Ritesh- chal ho gaya plan ..
Vicky- thik hai RB aur Anita ko bhi bata de ..ek date fix kardete hain phir chalnge ..
Ritesh- ok baki kisi ko puchna hai kya .
.vikcy – bakiyon se tera kya matlab .
Ritesh- wo maine .
Dipika- tu swati ke bare maine bol raha hai wo nahini jayegi agar wo jana bhi chahe tab bhi maine usse jane nahini dungi uske jaane se khamokhan RB ki dil dukhega . kyun ki wo akeli to aayegi nahin jarur sooraj ke sath aayegi ..
Ritesh- hm ye bhi sahi baat hai . dekho saitaan ka naam liya aur saitaan hajir ..par ye kiske sath hai ..
Dipika aur vicky bhi ritesh ke dekhne ke direction main dekhne lagte hain ..
Swati ek ladke ke sath restaurant ke andar jaa rahi thi ..
Dipika- ye kabhi nahini sudharne wali ..
Vicky- ab ye kon hai ..
Ritesh- kya pata . tu ruk maine abhi aata hoon .
Vicky- kanha jaa raha hai be .
Ritesh – unke baatein sun ne ka koi jugad lagane pata to chale ki ye sal ahai kon
Dipika- ritesh rook maine bhi chalti hoon ..
Vicky- aare faida kya hai usse karne do jo karna hai tumhe kyun farak padta hai .
Dipika- tujh se kisine pucha aana hai to aa barna betha reh ..
Vicky- hmm. Chalo sab chalte hain ..
Group pura usi taraf chal padte hain . swati aur wo ladka jis restaurant ke nadar gaye the wanhi chale jaate hain .
Vicky- kya hua ab kaise unke batein sunoge wo to private cabin maine chale gaye .
Ritesh- tu ruk do min maine kuch jugad bhidata hoon ..
Ritesh wanha se jaldi se manager ke pass jata hai aur unke pass wala cabin book kareleta hai usek pass wo ek waiter ke pass jata hai aur usse kuch bolta hai aur wapas aa jata hai .
Vicky- kya hua be
Ritesh apna phone de na
Vicky- kya karega
Ritesh- tu phone to de pehle
Dipika- meri phone le le
Ritesh dipika ka phone leke pehle apne phone pe kuch karta hai phir dipika kae phone maine phir wo waiter ko ishare se bulata hai . waiter ke aane ke baad ritesh ussse apna mobile de deta hai .
Ritesh- thik se kardega na ..
Waiter- ji sir aap tension na le ho jayega ..
Ritesh- chal ab jaldi se jaa .
Uske baad witer wanha se chala jata hai ..
Ritesh dipika aur vicky ko leke cabin ke andar chala jata hai ..
Ritesh – awaaz mat karna
Ritesh phone ko speaker p erakh deta hai ..
Kuch der tak faltu awaaz aati rehti hai phir jab waiter unn logon ko serve karte time mobile chupake aagaya tha ab inko awaz clear aane lagi thi .
Awwaz- tum to aaj kal milte hi nahini ho pehle to shkal bhi nahini dikha rahi thi abhi kuch din se jaa rahi ho to mujh se mile bina hi chale aa rahe ho ..
Swati- waisa nahini hai Rocky . pehle mujhe didi se kiya wada nibhana tha unke saamne maine waise unke asli genhagaar ko rulaye bina kaise chali jaati ..
Rocky- par didi aap ko to masi ne mana kiya tha ye sab ke liye
Swati- mummy ke keh dene se kya ho gaya . maine pani ritu didi ko aise hi chod nahini sakti .. maine didi ko uss haal maine dekha hai jiss halat maine gara tu unhe dekhta to ab tak tu inn logon ka qatal kar chuka hota . wo to pata nahini papa aur mummy iss mamle ko kyun daba diya .. unko apni reputation ki bohat parwa thi na .. ye khabar bahar aati to unki badnami ho jati ki dekho diwang ji ki ristedaar ke sath aisa hua ..
Rocky- didi aap thoda shant ho jao ..
Swati- nahini rocky tu didi ko uss halat maine nahini dekha hai jiss halat maine maine unhe dekha hai mout se ladhte hue .. unke sath jo darindgi hua waisa to koi haivan bhi kisi ke sath na kare . kya galti thi unki pyar karne ki .. aare unhone to sirf pyar kiya tha bharosha kiya tha par kya mila unhe aakhirkaar dhoka aur haivaniyat ..mujhe aaj bhi wo din yaad hai rocky jis din didi mere pass aayee thi . wo kitne khus thi ki wo maa ban ne wali thi . unke dil maine iss baat ka dar nahini tha ki agar ghar walon ko pata chal jaye to kya hoga .. unhe sara jamana ko apne pyar ke saamne thokar maar diya tha .. wo gayee thi uss Harami Nihar ko batane iss khusk kabhri ke bare maine usse ye baat batake surprise dene ko par hua kya unhe hi surprise mila wanah pe .. un logon ko mere di ke sath aisa karne se pehle thodi si bhi sharam nahini aaye .. wo Niahr jise wo pyar karti thi uss RB jinhe wo apni debar nahini balki bhai ki tarha maan ne lagi thi .. unhone ne hi unke sath chi .. aur sath maine unke jaan lene kikosis bhi ki .. chi ..
Unhe to sirf didi ke jism aur unke paise se matlab tha .. kash didi pehle hi papa ke baat maan jate ..
Rocky- didi nahini aap ro mat .. abhi to didi sahi hai n na doctor ka kehna hai ki unke halat ab bohat jaldi se sahi ho raha hai agar aisa hi chalta raha wo jaldi hi coma se bhi sahi ho jayengi ..
Swati- usi din ka to maine kab se intejaar kar rahi hoon rocky .. didi bas ek baar sahi ho jaye apne munh kholke phir se mujh se baat karne lag jaye .. unke ek gunehgaar ko to bhagwaan ne saja diya hai usko to maine didi ke liye chod rakha hoon .. usse to didi uski gunha ka hisaab karengi ..par iss RB ko maine rulaungi itna ki uske aankh se aansoo bhi sukh jaye ..
Rocky- pata hai didi mujhe jab pehle pata chala aap RB ke sath reltion maine hai maine to shock ho gaya . maine soch rha tha aap ko sab pata hai phir bhi .. aap uss se pyar .
Swati- pyar aur wo bhi uss fatichar se ..uss se agar kuch hai to sirf nafrat sirf aur nafrat .abhi to kuch nahini hai aage aage dekho main usse kaise tadpati hoon ..
Rocky- par didi abhi to aap sooraj ke stah relation maine ho aur phir aap ki shgai bhi kuch hi din maine hogi aap use filhaal ke liye jaane do usse maine dekh loonga ..
Swat- nahini .. usse koi kuch nahinii kareg a.. agar usse sirf chot ponhachani hoti to ye kaam to sachin bhaiya kab ke kar chuke hote . par mujhe usko chot nahini ponhachani hai usse rulana hai .. aur maine ache se jaanti hoon kaise karna hai .. abhi wo na jee payega na hi mar payega .. sir royega ..
Rocky- par did abhi to college khatam ho gaya wo yanah se kanhi aur chala jayega phir .
Swati- to tujhe kya lagta hai maine usse chod dongi nahini .. usse bohat rulaungi .. jab tak didi sahi nahini ho jati unke sare gunhegaar royenge .. khaskar ke iss RB ko .. wo Nihar to abhi pagal ho gaya hai usse khud ka koi hosh nahini usse abhi kuch kiya bhi to usse apne galti ka paschtatap nahini hoga . usse ek baar sahi hojaane do phir uska bhi number aayega tab tak .. isko to maine ..
Rocky- bas didi bas aap pehle khud ko sambhalo .. ye na ho uske chakar maine aap ko kuch ho jaye aap tension mat lo ab maine bhi aap ke sath hoo .. aap ye pani piyo first aur apna face wash kar ke aao .. socho aap ka aisa halat maine agar Ritu didi dekhengi to unhe kya feel hoga .
Swati- nahini mera mood ab bilkool acha nahini chal maine freash ho aati hoon phir nikalte hain ..
Rocky- thik hai di ..
Phir swati jaake freash hoke aati ahi aur phir wo nikal jaate hain unke jaane ke baad wohi waiter phone laake ritesh ko deta hai .. ritesh apne pocket se kuch notes nikal ke uske hath maine pakda deta hai aur wo bhi thank you kehke nikal jaat hai ..
Vicky aur dipika abhi bhi bhoot ki tarha bethe hue the ..
Ritesh – kya hua .. ye kya bol rahi thi kya ye sach hai ..
Dipika ab sar utha ke vicky ke taraf dekhti hai par vicky abhi bhi mano khaosh kuch gehri yadonmaine khoya hua tha ..
Dipika- kya hua tumhe vicky .kya hua //
Dipika- ritesh chalo yanah se kanhi bahar
Ritesh- yanhi pich eke tarraf hi ek park hai wanhi chalte hain ..
Dipiak aur ritesh kaise karke vicky ko uss park maine leke aate hain ..
Ritesh – yaar tu mujhe bata wo kya bol rahi thi ye ritu kon hai nihar kon hai wo RB ke bare maienkya bol rahi thi sab kuch mujhe bata .. jaldi se ..
Vicky- upar ke taraf dekhta hai phir dipika ke traf dekh ke pani ka ishara karta hai . dipika usse bottle deti ahi ..
Pani pine ke baad vicky ek gehra saan leta hai .. aur apne pocket se phone nikalta hai ..
Aur ek number dial karta hai ..
Vicky- hlw kanha pe hai ..
Uss tarf- *******
Vicky- RB hai ya chala gaya .
Uss taraf-********
Vicky sun kaise bhi karke usse apne sath rakhna jab tak maine call na karun .. kuch bhi ho jaye .. thik hai .
Uss taraf-***
Vicky phone cut karta hai aur mobile ko pocket maine daal deta hai .
Ritesh –ab bata kya hua ..
Vicky – hmm dekho mujhe to pura nahini pata iss bare maine aur aaj jo suna ussmaine kya sach hai kya jhut ye nahini bata sakta maine par ..
Ritesh- aabe tu paheli mat khel bata jaldi se ye ritu kon hai swati kya bol rahi thi ..
Vicky- to suno .. Nihar bhiaya ko to jaante ho na wo RB ke cousin hai . wo aur ritu college maine ek doosre ko pasand karte the . wo dono ek doosre ki bina ek pal bhi nahini reh pate the .. yanha tak ki jab bhi nihar bhaiya gaon aate the Ritu didi bhi unke sath hi gaon aajati thi ghar maine bahan bana ke .. wo RB ko aur mujhe bohat pyar karti thi . RB to mano unka dusra chota bhai tha .
Par pata nahini achanak kya hua unke Ritu did bohat pareshan rehne lagi thi .. hum jab puchte the to tab wo nahini batati thi par baad maien h pata chala ki ritu didi ke ghar maine unke riste ke bare maien jaan gaye the . pehle to unke ghar wale thoda bohat gussa hue par wo phir raji hoagye the par baad maien unke kuch relatives bich maine aagaye jo ki iss shadi ke shakt khilaaf the .. unhone uss time kitne baar nihar bhaiya ko dhamkaya gunde bhi bheje par na hi nihar bahiya na hi ritu didi iss bat se koi farak pad raha tha .. ab ritu didi bhi apne ghar walo ke saamne khulke saamne aagyee thi .. to aakhir kaar unke ghar wale raji ho gaye par ..unka kehna tha ki shadi yanah tak ki shagai bhi abhi nahini kara sakte kyun ki kuch problem hai kundli maine .. iss liye unhone 6 mahine baad karane ko bol diya .. sab kuch thiktha .. hum bhi khsu the ..
Par ek din bhaiya apne kuch colleg ke dosto ke sath ek dost ke ghar maien party kar rah ethe wanha wo nahini jaante par shyad daaru ke nashe maine wo aur ek ladki physical ho gaye ki wanha Ritu didi ponach gayee wo ye sab dekh ke bohat gussa hui .. wo uske baad Nihar bhaiya se baat karna band kardiya .. aur unse milna bhi band kardiya .. Nihar bahiya unhe samjhane ka bohat kosis kiya par wo nahini mani .. wo to keh diya tha ki unhe distrube na kare kyun ki wo kanhi aur shadi karne wali hai .. Nihar bahiya ab Ritu Didi se milne ke liye nikal gaye .. didi uss time ghar se hi bahar nahini nikalti thi .. par raste maien hi bhiaya ka accident ho gaya .. wo marte marte bache the par uss chot se wo pagal hoagyee din bhar sirf Ritu didi ke naam leke wo ote rehte the .. pata nahini kuch bhi bolne lagte the kabhi kabhi chillane lagte the ..
Phir ek din khabar aaye ki Ritu didi ne shadi kar liya hai aur wo Canada shift ho gayee hain ..
Par mujhe aaj pata chal raha hai ki Ritu didi yanah pe hai aur wo coma maine hai .. par swati RB aur Nihar bhaiya ko kyun gunehgaar maan rahi hai aur agar ritu didi yanhi pe thi to unhone Nihar Bhaiya ke baare maine jaan ke bhi unse mili kyun nahini ..
Dipika- aake vicky ke aankhon se beh rahe aansoo ko pochti hai ..
Dipika- tum tension na lo hum pata karenge ki kya hua hai .. aur wo aisa kyun kar rahi hai ..
“maine batati hoon maine aisa kyun kar rahi hoon . aadha kahani to tumne suan diya baki ka bhi sun lo “
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Awesome Update to ab aakhir sach saamny aa hi gaya lekin aadha ab jldi se wait krty hain k q Ritu Nihar se ni mili or swati RB and Nihaar ko q gunehgaar maan kr RB se badla le rhi hai.
 

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Update No 60
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Vicky
- sala role mat kadh jaanta hoon tujhe man maine to laddu phut rahe honge abhi acting dikha raha hai .

Iss baat se dono has padte hain …

tabhi ritesh bolta hai ..

ritesh –“aare dipika aao betho “
.

vicky dipika ka naam sun ke piche moodta hai par tabhi chatak ke sath uske gaal pe ek thapad padti hai aur ye thapad itna jor ka tha ki vicky jo khada ho raha tha wo wapas usi chair pe gir jaata hai ..
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Ab Aage
.
. vicky – kya hua ?
“chatak”
Ritesh wanha se aake dipika ko rokta hai ..
Ritesh- kya hua tum iise kyun maar rahi ho ..
Dipika- ritesh mera hath chod de aaj yeh mere se nahini bachega ..isne mujhe itna badi baat chupaya tha .. kanhi tu bhi ismain shamil nahni hai ..phir to tu bhi pitega mere hath se.
Ritrsh- nahini kya maine nahin hun kisimaine bhi .. tu kis bare maine puch rahi hai .. tu isse hi maar maine bich maine nahin aaunga ..
Dipika- thi hai side maine hi reh maine to iski ..
Vicky- aare jaan maine kiya kya hai kam se kam yeh to batao . maien tum se kya chupaya hai ..
Dipika- thak ke wanhi beth jati hai ..pass maine rakha pani ka glass pura ek hi baar maine khali kar deti hai ..
Vicky- aaram se ..
Dipika- tum mujh se barsha wali baat kyun chupaya ..
Vicky- konsa si baat tumhe kaise pata . mujhe nahin pata kuch iss bare maine to ..
Dipika- vicky mere mood already kharab hai tum chup chap bataoge ya phir tumhara naak hi tod dun ..
Ritesh- kya baat hai koi mujhe bhi batayega .. kya hua barsha ko ..
Dipika- wo to ye batayega abhi .. barsha se ye contact maine hai aur barsha college iss liye nahin chodi thi ki usse koi family problem thi balki wo RB aur swati ke riste ki wajha se college chhod di thi ..
Ritesh- aur wo kyun bhala ..oye saale ab tu sab batayege barna .chal suru kar ..
Vicky- to suno **********************tab phir maine usko train maine bithake chala aaya . par wo baad maine wo mujhe RB ke baare maine jaan ne ke liye call karke pucha karti thi par .par wo jitna RB aur swati ke bare maine jaanti thi usse utna hi bura lagta tha isiliye maine usse iss bare maine batana mana kardiya . phir maine usse samjhaya ki wo khud ko iss pyar ke jaal se nikale kyun ki RB aur swati to sath maine hai, khamokhan wo dukh seh rahi hai .
Dipika – aur tune itni badi baat hum sab se chupake rakhi thi .
Ritesh uthke vicky ke sar pe ek ulta hath kka deta hai ..
Ritesh- aur yeh mere taraf se .. sala kuch dimag kaam karta hai tera ..
Dipika- to barsha ko abhike situation ke bare maine kuch nahinh pata hai ..
Vicky – nahini exam wagera the uske aur agar usko pata chalta ki RB ka aisa halat hua hai aur khash karke wo accident ke baat to yanha aa jati aur uski padhai aur exam dono suffer karti ..
Dipika- chalo ye baat tumne sahi socha .. wo chodo dekhte hain iss bare maine kuch ..
Ritesh- Dipika hum kya soch rahe the abhi kuch hi din baki hai uske baad hamara college life khatam ho jayega chal na kanhi ghoomne jay e..
Dipika- han kyun nahin.
Ritesh- chal ho gaya plan ..
Vicky- thik hai RB aur Anita ko bhi bata de ..ek date fix kardete hain phir chalnge ..
Ritesh- ok baki kisi ko puchna hai kya .
.vikcy – bakiyon se tera kya matlab .
Ritesh- wo maine .
Dipika- tu swati ke bare maine bol raha hai wo nahini jayegi agar wo jana bhi chahe tab bhi maine usse jane nahini dungi uske jaane se khamokhan RB ki dil dukhega . kyun ki wo akeli to aayegi nahin jarur sooraj ke sath aayegi ..
Ritesh- hm ye bhi sahi baat hai . dekho saitaan ka naam liya aur saitaan hajir ..par ye kiske sath hai ..
Dipika aur vicky bhi ritesh ke dekhne ke direction main dekhne lagte hain ..
Swati ek ladke ke sath restaurant ke andar jaa rahi thi ..
Dipika- ye kabhi nahini sudharne wali ..
Vicky- ab ye kon hai ..
Ritesh- kya pata . tu ruk maine abhi aata hoon .
Vicky- kanha jaa raha hai be .
Ritesh – unke baatein sun ne ka koi jugad lagane pata to chale ki ye sal ahai kon
Dipika- ritesh rook maine bhi chalti hoon ..
Vicky- aare faida kya hai usse karne do jo karna hai tumhe kyun farak padta hai .
Dipika- tujh se kisine pucha aana hai to aa barna betha reh ..
Vicky- hmm. Chalo sab chalte hain ..
Group pura usi taraf chal padte hain . swati aur wo ladka jis restaurant ke nadar gaye the wanhi chale jaate hain .
Vicky- kya hua ab kaise unke batein sunoge wo to private cabin maine chale gaye .
Ritesh- tu ruk do min maine kuch jugad bhidata hoon ..
Ritesh wanha se jaldi se manager ke pass jata hai aur unke pass wala cabin book kareleta hai usek pass wo ek waiter ke pass jata hai aur usse kuch bolta hai aur wapas aa jata hai .
Vicky- kya hua be
Ritesh apna phone de na
Vicky- kya karega
Ritesh- tu phone to de pehle
Dipika- meri phone le le
Ritesh dipika ka phone leke pehle apne phone pe kuch karta hai phir dipika kae phone maine phir wo waiter ko ishare se bulata hai . waiter ke aane ke baad ritesh ussse apna mobile de deta hai .
Ritesh- thik se kardega na ..
Waiter- ji sir aap tension na le ho jayega ..
Ritesh- chal ab jaldi se jaa .
Uske baad witer wanha se chala jata hai ..
Ritesh dipika aur vicky ko leke cabin ke andar chala jata hai ..
Ritesh – awaaz mat karna
Ritesh phone ko speaker p erakh deta hai ..
Kuch der tak faltu awaaz aati rehti hai phir jab waiter unn logon ko serve karte time mobile chupake aagaya tha ab inko awaz clear aane lagi thi .
Awwaz- tum to aaj kal milte hi nahini ho pehle to shkal bhi nahini dikha rahi thi abhi kuch din se jaa rahi ho to mujh se mile bina hi chale aa rahe ho ..
Swati- waisa nahini hai Rocky . pehle mujhe didi se kiya wada nibhana tha unke saamne maine waise unke asli genhagaar ko rulaye bina kaise chali jaati ..
Rocky- par didi aap ko to masi ne mana kiya tha ye sab ke liye
Swati- mummy ke keh dene se kya ho gaya . maine pani ritu didi ko aise hi chod nahini sakti .. maine didi ko uss haal maine dekha hai jiss halat maine gara tu unhe dekhta to ab tak tu inn logon ka qatal kar chuka hota . wo to pata nahini papa aur mummy iss mamle ko kyun daba diya .. unko apni reputation ki bohat parwa thi na .. ye khabar bahar aati to unki badnami ho jati ki dekho diwang ji ki ristedaar ke sath aisa hua ..
Rocky- didi aap thoda shant ho jao ..
Swati- nahini rocky tu didi ko uss halat maine nahini dekha hai jiss halat maine maine unhe dekha hai mout se ladhte hue .. unke sath jo darindgi hua waisa to koi haivan bhi kisi ke sath na kare . kya galti thi unki pyar karne ki .. aare unhone to sirf pyar kiya tha bharosha kiya tha par kya mila unhe aakhirkaar dhoka aur haivaniyat ..mujhe aaj bhi wo din yaad hai rocky jis din didi mere pass aayee thi . wo kitne khus thi ki wo maa ban ne wali thi . unke dil maine iss baat ka dar nahini tha ki agar ghar walon ko pata chal jaye to kya hoga .. unhe sara jamana ko apne pyar ke saamne thokar maar diya tha .. wo gayee thi uss Harami Nihar ko batane iss khusk kabhri ke bare maine usse ye baat batake surprise dene ko par hua kya unhe hi surprise mila wanah pe .. un logon ko mere di ke sath aisa karne se pehle thodi si bhi sharam nahini aaye .. wo Niahr jise wo pyar karti thi uss RB jinhe wo apni debar nahini balki bhai ki tarha maan ne lagi thi .. unhone ne hi unke sath chi .. aur sath maine unke jaan lene kikosis bhi ki .. chi ..
Unhe to sirf didi ke jism aur unke paise se matlab tha .. kash didi pehle hi papa ke baat maan jate ..
Rocky- didi nahini aap ro mat .. abhi to didi sahi hai n na doctor ka kehna hai ki unke halat ab bohat jaldi se sahi ho raha hai agar aisa hi chalta raha wo jaldi hi coma se bhi sahi ho jayengi ..
Swati- usi din ka to maine kab se intejaar kar rahi hoon rocky .. didi bas ek baar sahi ho jaye apne munh kholke phir se mujh se baat karne lag jaye .. unke ek gunehgaar ko to bhagwaan ne saja diya hai usko to maine didi ke liye chod rakha hoon .. usse to didi uski gunha ka hisaab karengi ..par iss RB ko maine rulaungi itna ki uske aankh se aansoo bhi sukh jaye ..
Rocky- pata hai didi mujhe jab pehle pata chala aap RB ke sath reltion maine hai maine to shock ho gaya . maine soch rha tha aap ko sab pata hai phir bhi .. aap uss se pyar .
Swati- pyar aur wo bhi uss fatichar se ..uss se agar kuch hai to sirf nafrat sirf aur nafrat .abhi to kuch nahini hai aage aage dekho main usse kaise tadpati hoon ..
Rocky- par didi abhi to aap sooraj ke stah relation maine ho aur phir aap ki shgai bhi kuch hi din maine hogi aap use filhaal ke liye jaane do usse maine dekh loonga ..
Swat- nahini .. usse koi kuch nahinii kareg a.. agar usse sirf chot ponhachani hoti to ye kaam to sachin bhaiya kab ke kar chuke hote . par mujhe usko chot nahini ponhachani hai usse rulana hai .. aur maine ache se jaanti hoon kaise karna hai .. abhi wo na jee payega na hi mar payega .. sir royega ..
Rocky- par did abhi to college khatam ho gaya wo yanah se kanhi aur chala jayega phir .
Swati- to tujhe kya lagta hai maine usse chod dongi nahini .. usse bohat rulaungi .. jab tak didi sahi nahini ho jati unke sare gunhegaar royenge .. khaskar ke iss RB ko .. wo Nihar to abhi pagal ho gaya hai usse khud ka koi hosh nahini usse abhi kuch kiya bhi to usse apne galti ka paschtatap nahini hoga . usse ek baar sahi hojaane do phir uska bhi number aayega tab tak .. isko to maine ..
Rocky- bas didi bas aap pehle khud ko sambhalo .. ye na ho uske chakar maine aap ko kuch ho jaye aap tension mat lo ab maine bhi aap ke sath hoo .. aap ye pani piyo first aur apna face wash kar ke aao .. socho aap ka aisa halat maine agar Ritu didi dekhengi to unhe kya feel hoga .
Swati- nahini mera mood ab bilkool acha nahini chal maine freash ho aati hoon phir nikalte hain ..
Rocky- thik hai di ..
Phir swati jaake freash hoke aati ahi aur phir wo nikal jaate hain unke jaane ke baad wohi waiter phone laake ritesh ko deta hai .. ritesh apne pocket se kuch notes nikal ke uske hath maine pakda deta hai aur wo bhi thank you kehke nikal jaat hai ..
Vicky aur dipika abhi bhi bhoot ki tarha bethe hue the ..
Ritesh – kya hua .. ye kya bol rahi thi kya ye sach hai ..
Dipika ab sar utha ke vicky ke taraf dekhti hai par vicky abhi bhi mano khaosh kuch gehri yadonmaine khoya hua tha ..
Dipika- kya hua tumhe vicky .kya hua //
Dipika- ritesh chalo yanah se kanhi bahar
Ritesh- yanhi pich eke tarraf hi ek park hai wanhi chalte hain ..
Dipiak aur ritesh kaise karke vicky ko uss park maine leke aate hain ..
Ritesh – yaar tu mujhe bata wo kya bol rahi thi ye ritu kon hai nihar kon hai wo RB ke bare maienkya bol rahi thi sab kuch mujhe bata .. jaldi se ..
Vicky- upar ke taraf dekhta hai phir dipika ke traf dekh ke pani ka ishara karta hai . dipika usse bottle deti ahi ..
Pani pine ke baad vicky ek gehra saan leta hai .. aur apne pocket se phone nikalta hai ..
Aur ek number dial karta hai ..
Vicky- hlw kanha pe hai ..
Uss tarf- *******
Vicky- RB hai ya chala gaya .
Uss taraf-********
Vicky sun kaise bhi karke usse apne sath rakhna jab tak maine call na karun .. kuch bhi ho jaye .. thik hai .
Uss taraf-***
Vicky phone cut karta hai aur mobile ko pocket maine daal deta hai .
Ritesh –ab bata kya hua ..
Vicky – hmm dekho mujhe to pura nahini pata iss bare maine aur aaj jo suna ussmaine kya sach hai kya jhut ye nahini bata sakta maine par ..
Ritesh- aabe tu paheli mat khel bata jaldi se ye ritu kon hai swati kya bol rahi thi ..
Vicky- to suno .. Nihar bhiaya ko to jaante ho na wo RB ke cousin hai . wo aur ritu college maine ek doosre ko pasand karte the . wo dono ek doosre ki bina ek pal bhi nahini reh pate the .. yanha tak ki jab bhi nihar bhaiya gaon aate the Ritu didi bhi unke sath hi gaon aajati thi ghar maine bahan bana ke .. wo RB ko aur mujhe bohat pyar karti thi . RB to mano unka dusra chota bhai tha .
Par pata nahini achanak kya hua unke Ritu did bohat pareshan rehne lagi thi .. hum jab puchte the to tab wo nahini batati thi par baad maien h pata chala ki ritu didi ke ghar maine unke riste ke bare maien jaan gaye the . pehle to unke ghar wale thoda bohat gussa hue par wo phir raji hoagye the par baad maien unke kuch relatives bich maine aagaye jo ki iss shadi ke shakt khilaaf the .. unhone uss time kitne baar nihar bhaiya ko dhamkaya gunde bhi bheje par na hi nihar bahiya na hi ritu didi iss bat se koi farak pad raha tha .. ab ritu didi bhi apne ghar walo ke saamne khulke saamne aagyee thi .. to aakhir kaar unke ghar wale raji ho gaye par ..unka kehna tha ki shadi yanah tak ki shagai bhi abhi nahini kara sakte kyun ki kuch problem hai kundli maine .. iss liye unhone 6 mahine baad karane ko bol diya .. sab kuch thiktha .. hum bhi khsu the ..
Par ek din bhaiya apne kuch colleg ke dosto ke sath ek dost ke ghar maien party kar rah ethe wanha wo nahini jaante par shyad daaru ke nashe maine wo aur ek ladki physical ho gaye ki wanha Ritu didi ponach gayee wo ye sab dekh ke bohat gussa hui .. wo uske baad Nihar bhaiya se baat karna band kardiya .. aur unse milna bhi band kardiya .. Nihar bahiya unhe samjhane ka bohat kosis kiya par wo nahini mani .. wo to keh diya tha ki unhe distrube na kare kyun ki wo kanhi aur shadi karne wali hai .. Nihar bahiya ab Ritu Didi se milne ke liye nikal gaye .. didi uss time ghar se hi bahar nahini nikalti thi .. par raste maien hi bhiaya ka accident ho gaya .. wo marte marte bache the par uss chot se wo pagal hoagyee din bhar sirf Ritu didi ke naam leke wo ote rehte the .. pata nahini kuch bhi bolne lagte the kabhi kabhi chillane lagte the ..
Phir ek din khabar aaye ki Ritu didi ne shadi kar liya hai aur wo Canada shift ho gayee hain ..
Par mujhe aaj pata chal raha hai ki Ritu didi yanah pe hai aur wo coma maine hai .. par swati RB aur Nihar bhaiya ko kyun gunehgaar maan rahi hai aur agar ritu didi yanhi pe thi to unhone Nihar Bhaiya ke baare maine jaan ke bhi unse mili kyun nahini ..
Dipika- aake vicky ke aankhon se beh rahe aansoo ko pochti hai ..
Dipika- tum tension na lo hum pata karenge ki kya hua hai .. aur wo aisa kyun kar rahi hai ..
“maine batati hoon maine aisa kyun kar rahi hoon . aadha kahani to tumne suan diya baki ka bhi sun lo “
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Bahut badhiya update hai bhai........ Swaty or vicky ka kahani to milte hi nhi dono alag alag baat keh raha hai.....koun sach bol rahe hai pata nhi......dekhte hai sach kya hai........ Or ye banda hai koun jo aadhi kahani batane aaye hai....dekhte ye janab/janaba kya batate hai.......w
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Awesome update bhai
Awesome Update to ab aakhir sach saamny aa hi gaya lekin aadha ab jldi se wait krty hain k q Ritu Nihar se ni mili or swati RB and Nihaar ko q gunehgaar maan kr RB se badla le rhi hai.
Gjb
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Bahut badhiya update hai bhai........ Swaty or vicky ka kahani to milte hi nhi dono alag alag baat keh raha hai.....koun sach bol rahe hai pata nhi......dekhte hai sach kya hai........ Or ye banda hai koun jo aadhi kahani batane aaye hai....dekhte ye janab/janaba kya batate hai.......w
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Behtareen update,
Please yaar jaldi se agala update do, ye suspense na bardast nahi hota.
Bhai buhaut shandar update hai
Is update ke baad twist aayega kyonki dekhna ye hai ki kon Sahi h Swati ya RB???
Thank you alll
 
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Update No 61
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Par mujhe aaj pata chal raha hai ki Ritu didi yanah pe hai aur wo coma maine hai .. par swati RB aur Nihar bhaiya ko kyun gunehgaar maan rahi hai aur agar ritu didi yanhi pe thi to unhone Nihar Bhaiya ke baare maine jaan ke bhi unse mili kyun nahini ..


Dipika- aake vicky ke aankhon se beh rahe aansoo ko pochti hai ..
Dipika- tum tension na lo hum pata karenge ki kya hua hai .. aur wo aisa kyun kar rahi hai ..
“maine batati hoon maine aisa kyun kar rahi hoon . aadha kahani to tumne suan diya baki ka bhi sun lo “

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swati- haan maine .kya hua vicky inhe pura kahani nahini sunaya ya phir tumhko bhi wohi jhut sunaya hai RB aur Bihar ne ..
ritesh- konsi baat aur tum wo andar kya baat kar rahi thi aur ritu ko I meam ritu didi ko kya hua .
swati- sabar rakho tum waise bhi maine tum logon ko batane to nahini wali thi par kya kare tum log ab tak sachai nahini jaante to tum log aaj bhi unn dono ghatiya aadmiyon ko acha maan rahi ho .. aaj unn dono bhaiyon ki mahanata ki baat tumhe bata ti hoo ..
swati- kya galti thi meri behan ki .. kya nahini tha uske pass .. paisa aishon aaram sab to uske pass pehle se tha sirf usne sacha pyar aur bharosha manga tha .. par ek galti uss se ho gayee aur wo thi aadmi pehchan ne main jiss ko wo apna har halat maine sath dene wala insaan mana tha wo to ek hawsi bhediya nikla ..
Meri didi to uske pyar maine pure gharwalon se ladh gayee thi yyanah tak mere papa ko bhi usne mana liya tha .. par faida kya hua . ek din mere didi bohat khusi se isse ye baat batane gaye the ki ghar wale inke shadi ke liye maan gay ehain par wo wanah kya dekhne ko paye ki unk apyar kisi aur ke bahon bistar maine pada hua hai .. uss raat didi kitna royee tjhi ye baat sirf maine hi jaanti hoon.. puri raat ro ro ke unke halat kharab ho gayee thi ..
Par agle din hi wo apna masoom chehera wal anakab pehen ke aagaya didi ke saamen didi ne usse milne ko mana kardiya . kuch din tak ye aise hi chalta raha par didi usse bohat pyar karti thi to iss liye usse aakhir kaar galti ke bawwjood maaf kardiya .
Par ek din didi aur maine market jaa rahe the ki wo ladki aagyee aur didi ko na jaan ekitna kuch sunaya .jab didi iss bare maine nihar se baat kiya to nihar ne unhe ye kaha ki mana kardiya ki wo baat karega didi tension na le .. par uske do din baad jab didi uske room maine usse bina batye ponhach gayee to wo phir se usi ladki ke sath bistar maine pada hua tha iss baar didi usse maaf karne ko tayar nahini thi didi ko itna ghussa aagya tha ki wo ghar walon ke pasand maine shadi karne ko ready ho gayee .. par wo kala din aaya jo sab badal ke rakh diya ..
Ek din didi ghar maine chup chap bethi hui thi .. maine wanha gayee hui thi to maine didi ko pucha tab mujhe didi ne batya ki wo pregnant hain..
Unhone ab ghar walo se shadi karne ko mana kardiya aur nihar ko ophir se ek baar maaf karne ko socha kyun ki ab bache ka sawaal tha .. ghar wale bhi iss baat se raji haogaye .. didi Nihar komilne ke liye bulaya .to usne didi ko ek jagha milne bulya a..
Kash uss din maine bhi didi ke sath chali jati ya didi ko jaane hi nahini deti ..
Uss ghatiya inssan se didi ko wanha bulaya .. phir wo aur uske bhai RB ne milke didi ka rape kiya phir didi ko jaan se maarne ki kosish ki hamien unke body nadi ke kinare mili unke pet maine sariya ghusa diya gaya tha unke sar
Pe bhi gehra chot aaya tha ..
maine uss time ek trip pe gayee hui thi . jab yanha aaye mujhe didi ke bare maien pata chala .. unke pet maien jo shariya ghusa tha uss se unka bacha mar gaya tha aur .. aur unke sar maine chot ke wajha se wo coma maine chali gayee thi ..
vicky- bolkool jhoot .. tumhari didi to shadi karke chali gayee thi .. aur nihar bhaiya ke bare maine tum aisa ghatiya ilzaam lagane ki kosis bhi mat karna .. ye to acha hua RB yanah nahini hai barna Nihar Bhaiya ke bare maien agar wo ye baat sunta to tum soch bhi nahini sakti wo tumhara kya karta ..
swati- aare waah itna bharosha hai tumhe apne uss Nahar bhaiya pe .. acha ek baat bato tumhare Nihar bhaiya uss time pe kanha gayab ho gaye the .. 3 mahine ke liye ..
vicky- gayab kyun ho gaye the wo unka tabiyat kharab tha isi liye wo medical maien admit the ..
swati- sach maine .. aur RB uska kya bahan doge ..
vicky- wo apne bua ke ghar gaya tha shimla ..
swati- acha aur wo kyun bhala .
vicky- unse milne ..
swati- milne ya phir police see bachne ke liye chupne ..
vicky- juaban sambhal ke bolo swati ..
swati- aur tumhare Pyare Nihar bahiaya koi medical maine bharti nahini the police ke hirasat maine the ..
vicky- bilkool jhoot .
swati- acha kya tum mile the unse hospital maine ya tumhe pata hai wo konse hospital maine the .
vicky- haan par mila tha ..
swati- haan par kab tum uss se uss time mile jab wo mental hone ka acting karke police station se nikal aaya ..
vicky- nahini..
swati- tum kuch nahini jaante ho abhi pehle jan lo ki kon kitna masoomiyat ka mukhota pehen rakha hai ..
swati- wo to uss time papa ne iss sab baton ko jada na badhane ki sochi kyun ki business maien ghata ho jata .. barna unn dono bhai koi mot ke munh se nahini bach asakta tha …puchna jaake apne nIhar Bhaiya ke mummy papa se agar unke bete itne hi shareef the to wo log har din hamare ghar ke saamne mere pap se ye kyun kehrahe the ki iss mamle ko kaise bhi karke khatam karde aur .. unke bete ko innn sab se nikal de..
vicky- par
swati- nahii pehle meri baat to sunlo .. unn dono bhai to police se bach gaye ek pagal hone ka acting karke aur ek minor hone ke kanooni khel khel ke ..
mere papa sirf ghar ke izzat ke liye police ko kaise bhi karke sambhal ke iss maamle ko daba diya aur na hi itna inn dodno bhai ko bhi police ke chungool se nikal diya ..
.par maine inn dono bhai ko nahini chodne ne wali .. uss Nihar ko Sab se jada RB se pyar tha na usko to dekho maine kya karti hoon … ek baar didi ko thik ho jaane do phir didi khud hi usko uske gunha ke saja dengi par iss RB ko to maine ab itna todungi ki wo soch bhi nahin sakta mere didi ne jitna bhi aansoo bahaya hai wo maien sab isi se badla loongi ..
Aur tum mere rastye maien aane ki sochna bhi mat bohat shouk hai na inn dono bhaiyon ko dusron ke jindegi auyr izzat se khelne ka .. maine chati thi to dono ko ek minute maine khatam karwa sakti thi .. par nahin maine inhe wohi dard duungi jo mere didi ne bhugta tha .. mere didi jis tarha pye maien tadpi thi isse bhi usi trah maine tad paungi ..
Dipika- par wo to ab tumhare sath nahini hai ..
Swati- maine kya usse aise hi chod dungi .. usse maine aise thodi na chod dungi usse to abhi aur bhi tadapana hoga ..
Sooraj- aare swati tum inke pass kya kar rahi ho maien tumhara uss die intezaar kar raha tha .
Swati- haan chalo maine abhi aati hoon ..
Sooraj ke jaane ke baad ..
Swati- I hope ki dipika tum ab jaan gaye hoge ki kon kya hai .. to bus aage se mujhko sawal mat karn a..aur haan jo baat hamare bich hui wo hamare bich hi rahe yehi acha hoga .. chalo chalti hoon bye ..
Uske baad swati wanha se chali jaati hai .
Ritesh- ye kya tu kuch bol raha hai wo kuch aur hi bol rahi hai ..aur wo bol rahi hai ki RB aur Nihar bhaiya ne Ritu ke sath aisa kiya ..
Dipika- jitna maine RB ko jaanti hoon wo aisa nahini kar sakta ..
Vicky- haan ye tumne thik kaha aur Nihar bhaiay ke baare maien aisa sochna bhiunke pyar ke khilaaf jadti hogi .. aare wo to Ritu ko itna pyar karte the ki uske shadi khabar sunke pagal hogay e..
Ritesh- ek minute iska matlab tu kehraha hai ki ritu ki yanah hone ki aur uske sath aisa hone ki tum ko khabar nahini thai ..
Vicky- janha tak mujhe pata hai humein to iss bare main kuch kahbar nahnini tha humein to pata tha ki ritu shadi karke canada chali gayee par wo yeh keh rahi hai .. aur yeh baat to maan hi nahini sakt ki bhiay ne aisa kiya hai par wo jo bol rahi hai uss maine kuch to sach lag raha hai .. mujhe pata karna padega asliyat maine kya hua tha ur haan tum iss baat RB ko nanhin bataogi ..
Ritesh- thik hai par humin iss bare maine jaldi se jaldi kuch karna padega ..
Vicky- tum ek kaam karo tum dono jao aur RB ka dhyan rakho usse swati ke aaspass bhi mat jane dena maine nahini chahat ki phir se uske sath kuch ho ..
Ritesh- aur tu
Vicky- maine jaa raha hoon kisi se milne jo mujhe sab kuch bata sake aakhirkaar sach kya hai ..
Dipika- maine bhi tumhare sath jaungi ..
Vicky- thikhai .
.ritesh- maine bhi chalta hoon phir.
Vicky- nahin tu RB ka dhyan rakh swati sooraj ya sachin se bas usse door rakhna kisi bhi halat maine tujhe jo karna pade kar bas jab tak sab pat ana lag jata usse inn sab se bas door rakhiyo ..
Ritesh- thik hai ..
Dipika- tum ek kaam karo .Anita aur RB ko leke hamare trip ke liye shopping karne chale jao ..
Ritesh – haan ye thik rahega ..
Ritesh wanha se chala jaat hai ..
Vicky bhi phone karke hostel se apna bike mangwa deta hai ..
Vicky aur Dipika chal padte hain ..
Dipika- tumhe kya lagta hai swati sach kehrahi hai ..
Vicky- kuch nahini keh sakta par itna sure hoon ki nihar bhiay aur RB ka iss maine kuch hath nahini hai aare nihar bhaiya ko bhi ye bhi nahini pata ki wo Ritu yanhi par hai kuch to baat hai jo alag hai . maine jitna samajh paa raha hoon uss time ke kuch batein hai jo hum se jaan bujh ke chupaye gaye hain .. puri baat kya hai wo pehle jan na hoga ..
Diipika – haan yeh tum thik keh rahe ho ..
Wanhi ritesh jaake RB ke pass ponhachta hai ..
RB abhi bhi apne doston ke sath ghoom raha tha .
Thodi der baat karne ke baad wo log bhi chale jaate hain ..
Ritesh- RB chal nikalte hain
RB – kis liye
Ritesh –aare college khatam hone wala hai na isiliye sab milke koi trip pe jaane ke bare maine soch rahe hain ..
RB – to
Ritesh- to ka kya matlab tu nahini jayega kya chal shopping karne chalte hain .. anita bhi aarahi hai ..
RB - haan to tu jaa na maine jaake kyun kabab maine haddi banu ..
Ritesh- aabe sala acting mat kar ab .. chal chup chap .
RB – thik hai ..
Dono wanha se aajate hain .ritesh Anita ko call karke bulati hai .. thodi der maine anita aur uski ek saheli aake ponhach jaate hain ..phir sab nikal padte hain ..
Jaisa ki hota hai mall maine ponhach ke ladkiyan to lag jaati hai ek shop se dooodre maine ghoomne maine ..
RB aur ritesh ussi floor maine bane ek waiting area maine beth jaate hain ..
RB – tujhe bol raha tha ki mujhe na aana tha .. isiliye ..
Ritesh- yaar sahi kaha chal na hamare liye kuch le lete hain ..
RB – haan jaa agar tereko dimag hi garam karna hai .. tu jitna time yanha ek saaman aur ek jeans ke dimaag kharab karega .. sadar bajar se 10 min maine pura stock utha layega .. ye shopping mall to ladkiyon ke liye bane hain .
Ritesh- ye tune sahi kaha sadar bajar to bas hamare liye jannat hai sala yanah se jitne maine kharidoonga uss se aadhe maine bhi wanha ache chiz mil jayenge .. sala kal wanhi se sab saaman uthaunga .. yanah kon faltu ka extraa kharcha karayega..
Tabhi anita aur uske dost rashmi wanha aajate hain ..
Anita – ritesh tum yanah kanha beth gaye chalo tum nahi kharidoge kuch ..
Ritesh- haan chalo ..
Ritesh wanha se chala jaat hai ..
RB –(dhire se ) fatu joru ka gulam)
Ritesh jaate hue RB ko ghoomke dekhta hai aur ishare se gaali deke nikla jata hai ..
Rashmi- RB tumhe kuch nahin kharidna hai ..
RB – nahini yaar mujhe kuch nahini kharina hai maine thik hoon tum jao ..
Rashmi- aare aise kaise maine suna tum log trip maine jaane wale ho .. to kuch to shopping karoge na .. aao tum
RB kuch bolta uss se pehel hi wo RB ka hath pakad ke wanha se le jaati hai ..

Rashmi ko ek shop se duusre shop leke uske liye apne pasand ka dress select karne maine lag gayee thi ..
RB – aare tum rehne do agar tumhe kuch pasand nahini aarah hai ..
Rashmi- pasand nahini aaraha hai nahini ho gaya hai .. ye lo ..
RB – kya yeh sab
Rashmi- haan lo jaldi try kar lo ..
RB – itna sab leke maine kya karunga do char hi de do ..
Rashmi uske baat sune bina hi usse wanah se trial room ke taraf dhaka de deti hai ..
RB kuch der maine sab try karke aata hai .. aur usse pack karne ko keh deta hai .
Rashmi- dekha kitni jaldi hogaya..
RB- haan thanks
Rashmi- nahini thanks se kaam nahini chalega ..
RB – aur
Rashmi- wo ..wo kya maine bhi chal sakti hoon tum logon ke sath ..
RB – thik hai ..
Rashmi- sach maine wo yeh bolke RB se gale lag jaati hai ..
Wanhi vicky aur dipika jaake ek jagha ponhachte hain ..
Dipika- yeh kanha aay e..
Vicky- ye Nihar bhaiya ka ek dost hai iss se sab kuch puchna hoga chaye kuch bhi karke ..
Dono andar jaate hain aur uss se milte hain ..
Vicky- manas bhaia hamien kuch jaan na hai aap se isi liye hum yanah aay ehain .
Manas – han batao ..
Vicky- dekho bahiya hum jo puchenge wo sab aapko sach batana hoga ..
Manas- kis baare maine
Vicky- nihar bhaiya aur ritu didi ke bare maine aap to unke saath hi the yeh to ho hi nahin sakta ki aap ko sab kuch pata na ho ..
Manas- par achanak ..
Vicky- wo swati hain na ritu di ki choti behan wo hamare sath hi padhti hai .. **************** wo hamain yeh sab boli .. par mujhe uski baat pe 1 % bhi bharosha nahini hai .. Niahar bahiay Aur RB ye to Impossible .. wo Nihar Bhaiya jo ki usse itna pyar karte the ki wo pagal ho gaye .. aur aap ko pata hai ritu yanhi pe hai
Mansa- haan mujhe pata hai ..
Vicky& dipika – kya
Vicky- aap hamain sab bataiye ..
Mans- thik hai ye baat kisi se batane ke liye mujhe mana kiya gaya tha par mujhe lagta hai ab tum logon ko bata dena sahi hoga ..to bat ye hai ki **********************************************(ye baad maine story main aayeg filhaal ke liye rehne dete hian )
Unke sab bolne ke baad vicky aur dipika ko apne kaam, maien bhi bharosha nahini ho raha tha ..
Vicky- bahrosha nahini hota hai yeh sab hamare saamne hi hua par humko pata bhi nahini chala yeh sab..
Dipika- par swati ko kya yeh pata nahin hai ..
Manas- jsike paas ye khabar jaise ponhacha gaya wo usse waisa hi maan liya ..
Dipika- to swati ko hum samjahyeneg to
Manas- koi faida nahini Nihar ne already kosis kiya tha ulta wo Nihar ko hi apne ghar walo se maar khilake police hawale kardiya tha .. aur mera mano to RB ko uss se jitna jaldi ho sake dur karo .. wo bilkool pagal ho chuki hai wo kuch bhi kar sakti hai ..
Vicky- thank s bhai ..
Uske baad wo wanha se bahar aajte hain ..
Vicky- matlab mera douby=t sahi tha koi kitna niche gir sakta hai .. chi .. humain RB ko swati se dur karna hoga kaise bhi karke uske dimaag se swati naam ka bhoot utarna hoga ..
Dipika- tum tension na lo mujhe pata hai kya karna hai ..
Wanhi doosre aur
Ritesh- aare chalo RB ke pass wo bore ho raha hoga ..
Anita- maine tumhe isiliye hi yanah le aayi thi
Ritesh- matlab
Anita – wo actually rashmi mujhe bol rahi thi ki wo RB ko like karti hai to maine usse RB ke sath akela chod diya
Ritesh- tum ek no ki( phir wo sochta hai ki acha hai kaise bhi karke RB ko swati se door karna hai to yeh rashmi kaam aa sakti ahi ) thikhai ..
Anita- tum gussa nahini ho na
Ritesh- maine tum pe gussa ho sakta hoon .. ohh shit ye yanah
Anita- kya hua
Ritesh- swati RB kanha hai ..
Anita – niche wale section maine honeg ..
Ritesh bhagta hua uss tarf jaata hai uske piche anita bhi bhagte hue jaati hai ..
Ye wohi waqt hota hai jab rashmi ne RB ko hug kar rahi thi ..usi time ek taraf se ritesh aur doosre taraf se swati ,ussi jagha pe ponhach jaate hain …
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