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mashish

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Update 38
Viren baas Kabir ko hi dekh raha tha. Raj aage badh ke Viren ko gale laga liya, Kabir bhi aage aaya per Viren ke bagal se nikal gaya. To Viren udas ho gaya. Raj ne Viren ke kandhe pe hath rakha jo ki baas Kabir ko jate huye dekh raha tha.
Raj : tu janta hai na usse..bhaw kha raha hai baas...
Viren bhi han mai sar hilata hai aur aur teeno Viren, Raj aur Ruhi ander aate hai. Anu aur Zara jese hi Kabir ko dekhti hai to bhag ke uske paas aati hai. Zara to Kabir ke gale lag jati hai.
Zara : miss u bhaijaan...really miss you....
Kabir bhi Zara ko kaas ke gale lagate huye,
Kabir : miss u alot choti..bahut miss kiya tujhe maine..abu ka gussa mujhpe bhi nikala tunne to....
Zara : sorry bhai....
Kabir : chal chod tu ye saab....
Jesse hi Kabir Zara se alag hota hai Anu ne usse jakad liya aur chilane lagi....
Anu : welcome partner......6 mahine..6 mahine baad mil rahe hai...miss you alot partner.
Kabir bhi Anu ko gale lagake bahut khush tha. Per Viren jaab ander aata hai to dono ko dekh ke usse gussa bahut aata hai. Gusse mai Viren ne apni dono hatho ki muthi band kar li. Raj ne Viren ka chehra dekh liya tha per aab wo Anu aur Kabir ko bhi dekh raha tha jo ek sath chilla kar ek dusre ke gale lage huye thy. Anu Kabir se aalag huyi aur Ruhi ko dekh ke bhag ke aake Ruhi ke gale lag gayi.
Anu : di..welcome back....
Ruhi : acha aagayi meri yaad..mujhe to laga Kabir ko dekh ke tum mujhe, tumhare bhai ko bhul hi gayi....
Anu : sorry di.. partner se itne din baad mili na to...wese aap partner ke sath hi aaye ho lagta hai to kessa laga mera partner....
Ruhi : bilkul tere jesse natkhat aur sararati....
Anu (haste huye) : han wo to hai....
Viren ye saab sunke bahar chala gaya aur garden mai jake khada ho gaya, ander kisine bhi Viren ke taraf dhyaan hi nahi diya tha. Rohan aur Kabir ek dusre se mil rahe thy aur Zara bhi sath mai hi thy. Raj bhi inko Mallik sahab se huyi baate bata di, Ruhi bhi Raj ke sath hi thy, Raj ke baat sunke Rohan aur Zara bhi khush thy.
Anu Kabir se dhyaan hata to aas paas dekhne lagi to usse Viren kahi nazar nahi aaya.
Anu badbadate huye Viren ko dhund ne lagti hai,
Anu : aab ye kanha gaye. Aaj saab sath hai aur ye pata nahi kanha chale gaye.
Anu jesse hi bahar aayi to Viren dikh gaya, to wo doud me uske paas aagayi. Viren ke paas aake,
Anu : to aap yanha ho....
Viren kuch nahi bolta baas samne ki aur dekhta rehta...jaab koi jawab na payi to Anu bhi chup chap khadi hoke baas Viren ko hi dekhti rahi.
Thodi der baad jaab koyi awaj na huyi to Viren ko laga ki Anu wapas chali gayi to Viren jesse hi mudne laga to Anu uske sath hi khadi thy aur baas usse hi dekhe ja rahi thy.
Viren : bacha ander chalte hai....
Jesse hi Viren ander jane lagta hai to Anu uska hath pakad ke rok leta hai, to Viren bhi palat ke Anu ko dekhne lagta hai. Anu bhi der na karte huye Viren ko apni aur khinch leti hai aur uske pair mai khadi ho jati hai aur sidhe apne honth ko uske honth mai rakh deti hai, Anu ki ye harkat se Viren to bilkul jaam sa gaya tha.
Anu kuch der tak Viren ko kiss karti rahi fir Viren se alag hoke khadi ho gayi, Viren to baas Anu ko herani se dekh raha tha...
Anu : aab apko pata lag gaya na ki mai bachi nahi hun...ye kehke ander bhag jati hai....
Per Viren to uss yehsas se bahar hi nahi aaraha tha. Viren ko to abhi bhi Anu ki sanse mehsus ho rahi thy, tabhi wanha Raj bhi aagaya aur Viren ke kandhe pe hath rakh diya to Viren Anu ke khyal se bahar aaya.
Raj : tujhe hi pehel karni hogi..baat tujhe hi pehle karni hogi usse....
Viren jiska dimag mai abhi bhi Anu hi ghum rahi thy.... Wo Raj ki baate samajh nahi paya ki wo kis baare mai baat kar raha hai...
Viren : kis..kiske sath....
Raj : Kabir se..aur kis se....
Viren : han..han..chal karta hun baat usse....
Viren aur Raj dono ander aate hai to Kabir Viren ko andekha karta hai to Viren kitchen mai jata hai aur frizer se ek Bowl le kar aata hai, aur Kabir ke aage kar deta hai aur samne khada ho jata hai.
Kabir dekhta hai to samne kheer thy wo bhi thandi jesse usse pasand tha.
Kabir gusse se khada hoke Viren ko dekhta hai,
Kabir : kamine..tujhe pata hai ki kese kise manna hai..per ye galat hai..mai kheer to kha lunga kyun ki itne dino baad tere hath ka kheer khane ko mil rahi hai per naraz rahunga mai.....
Kabir kheer khane lagta hai fir khate khate hi ro padta hai aur Viren ke gale lag jata hai. Viren ki bhi ankhe naam ho jati hai. Rohan aur Raj ki bhi...fir aage badh ke Raj aur Rohan un dono ko bhi gale lag jate hai, Ruhi aur Zara in charo dosto ko gale lage huye dekhti rehte hai aur khush bhi thy, per Anu ka kuch ata pata nahi tha.
Anu to apne kamre mai dubak ke bethi huyi thy aur jo kar ke aayi thy uske baare mai soch rahi thy.
Anu (apne mai) : ye kya kar diya maine..per wo bhi to har samay bacha bachi karte rehte hai mai koi bachi nahi rahi..aab pata lag gaya hoga aur wese bhi kiss hi to kari hai aur puri life unke sath rehna hai unko hi kiss karni hai....baas ye saab sochte huye sarma rahi thy....
Charo dost ek dusre ka sath pake bahut khush thy aur baato mai lage huye thy. Ruhi aur Zara bahut der se inko dekh rahe thy, jaab inn dono se aur bardast nahi hua to Ruhi ne jor se bolti hai,
Ruhi : sabhi baas ladkiyo ko hi dosh dete hai ki jaab milti hai to baate hi khatam nahi hoti hai aur saab kuch bhul jati hai, per idhar dekho charo mil kya gaye hame hi bhul gaye, ham dono bhi yanha hai aur hamari tisri pata nahi kanha bhag gayi per ham to hai na....
Raj uthke jata hai aur Zara aur Ruhi ka hath pakad se sabhi ke bicho bich lake betha deta hai aur Anu ko bhi awaj deta hai, Anu bhi Raj ki awaj pake niche aajati hai per Viren ke taraf dekhti bhi nahi hai, Raj Anu ko bhi Zara aur Ruhi ke paas betha deta hai.
Raj : mere liye tum teeno hi bahut mayene rakhte ho. Mere yaar meri jindegi hai to mere jinne ki wajah Anu hai maa papa ke jane ke baad iske liye hi ji raha tha. Aur meri dhadkan tum ho Ruhi jaab se tumhe dekha tha baas dil tumhare liye hi dhadakta hai.
Aur Zara tum meri sabse achi dost rahi 3 saalo mai har samay mera sath diya aur mere dost ki jindegi ban gayi aur meri bhabhi aur aab to aur mayene rakhti ho kyunki bhabhi maa jesi hoti hai to aaj se wanhi jagah hogi tumhari baas maa ki jagah behen ko dunga kyun ki teri beijati bhi karni hai aage bhi..hehehe....
Aab pata chala ki kya ho tum saab....
Rohan : ye saab chod ye bata ki tum dono ne ek dusre ko bol diya...
Anu : han bhai..Ruhi di apke dil ki dhadkan kesse....
Zara : Rajveer..Ruhi ke liye apka dil dhadakta hai kya baat hai...
Kabir : ye saab mere karan hi hua hai warna ye dono to pata nahi kaab bolte...
Fir Kabir sabko hotel wala kissa bata deta hai to Ruhi uth ke bhag jati hai....
Raj : kya kar rahe ho yaar...
Raj bhi Ruhi ke piche chala jata hai aur Rohan bhi Zara le paas aake uska hath pakad ke garden ki aur jata hai to Kabir bol padta hai....
Kabir : tum dono kanha chale....
Rohan : teri behen ko meri jindegi mai uski ehmiyat batane....
Kabir hasne lagta hai, Anu to baas Viren ko andekha kar rahi thy to Kabir ke paas jake khadi ho gayi..per Anu ki taqdeer kahiye ya Viren ki taqdeer ussi time Kabir ko koyi call aajati hai to wo uthke upar kamre mai chala jata hai.
Anu dekhti hai ki Viren usse hi dekh raha hai to jaldi se niche ke sabse karib wale kamre mai bhag jati hai aur wanha per khidki ki aur chehra karke khadi ho jati hai.
Viren bhi Anu ke piche jata hai aur kamre mai jake darwaja dhire se band kar deta hai.
viren janna chahta tha ki Anu ne yesa kyun kiya..kya chal raha hai Anu ke dimag mai..wo Kabir aur Anu ko leke bhi thoda confused tha. Per yese Anu ke achanak kiss se dimag hi band ho gaya tha uska. Wo apna sara sawal ka jawab Anu se chahta tha.

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Ajay

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Update 33
Raj aaj sab kuch clear kar dena chahta tha, kyun ki wo nahi chahta tha ki pichli baar ki tarah iss baar bhi galat-fhemi ki wajah se dono alag ho jaye.
Raj : Ruhi mai nahi janta ki abhi tumhare mann kya hai mere liye, per mai tumhe pichle 7 saalo se pyaar kar raha hun...bina kisi umid ke, bina kisi intezar ke, baas tumse pyaar kiya hai Ruhi....
Jaab pehli baar tumhe apne office mai dekha to taab hi pehchan gaya tha mai ki tum meri Ruhi ho.
kyun ki maine tumhe dekha hua tha school mai hi, mai janta tha ki tum kesi dikhti ho per maine koyi dokha nahi diya hai tumhe....
Tumhe maine pehli baar ek puppy ko bachate huye dekha tha tum puri bhig gayi thy aur tumhari ankhe jo mere dil le gayi thy ussi time. Fir kitne din tum mujhe dikhi nahi fir ek din library mai tumhe dekha, jaab tak mai tum tak ja pata tum chali gayi thy per ek kitab gir gayi mere aage, maine dekha to mujhe samajh aaya ki tum ye padh ti ho baas fir hamari baate suru ho gayi.
uss din annual function mai tumhe mil kar saab kuch batana chahta tha per usse pehle hi tumne mujhe galat samajh liya. Mujhe laga ki aagar mai yanha raha to tumhe dukh hoga isiliye Bangalore aagaya per pyaar baas tumse hi kiya baas yanhi sochta raha ki tumhari nafrat mere liye kaam hogi ya badhegi.
jaab mai iss position mai pahuncha to tumhe dhundna mere baye hath ka kaam tha, per maine yesa kiya hi nahi, kyun ki mai nahi chahta tha ki tumhare samne aake tumhe dukh dun.
per jaab tumhe dekha to tum badal gayi thy jo Ruhi hamesha hasti rehti thy jiske ankho mai hamesha ek sararat rehti thy wo kanhi kho gayi thy, isiliye tumhe hamesha tang karta rehta tha, gussa karta tha jisse tum bolne lagi thy jiss din tumne nashe mai kaha ki tum Raj se pyaar karti ho to mera mann kitna khush tha ye mai bata nahi sakta.
roya tha uss din mai bahut per khushi se per ye jaan na chahta tha ki akeli kyun ho tum isiliye bataya nahi ki mai hi Raj hun..chahta tha ki mere karib aane se pehle apni family ke karib aao isiliye tumse dur raha, per..tumne...tumne....mujhe dhund liya....
mai..mujhe samajh nahi aaya ki kya karu..fir tumne kaha dost..to mai samajh nahi paya ki yesa kyun bola tumne kyun ki aur dur rehna mere baas mai nahi tha...itne saalo ke ander hi ander roya tha, bahut roya tha mai..aab aur nahi rona chahta hun..aagar tum han kehti ho to yanhi ro dunga tumhare samne..per na hai to fir se wanhi mukhota daal lunga apne face pe baas tum apne dil per koi bojh maat rakhna..jo dil chahta hai bol do....
Ruhi piche mud ke sidhe Raj ko ek thapad mar deti hai aur rote huye Raj ke gale lag jati hai. Raj ko kuch samajh nahi aaya ki ye kya hua.
Ruhi kuch der tak roti rahi fir Raj se alag hoke ek aur thapad mar di,
Ruhi (gusse se) : tum ek number ke gadhe ho, pagal ho...jyada hi dusro ke bare mai sochte ho....
Ruhi ne ek aur thapad laga diya, Raj ka to dil hi tut gaya. Usse kuch samajh nahi aaraha tha aur upar se usse 3 thapad bhi paad gaye thy, aur gaal pura laal ho gaya tha.
Ruhi baas usse gusse se dekh rahi thy. Raj ka pata hi nahi chala kaab uski ankho se anshu nikal ke uske gaal pe aagaya tha.
Ajib sa dard ho raha tha Raj ko, uska haat uske dil per chala gaya jo dard kar raha tha aur ek hath apne sar per rakh kar piche ki aur jane laga to piche carpet se atak kar gir gaya aur itni jor se gira ki ek hath jo dil pe tha uske upar pura body weight aagaya.
Ruhi jaldi se Raj ke paas gayi aur usse uthake bed pe betha diya, Raj ke hath mai dard tha per dil tutne ke dard ke samne usse mehsus nahi hua...
wo kuch nahi bola, Ruhi baas usse dekhti rahi, fir;
Ruhi : pagal ho tum ek number ke pagal....mere bholu ram...I love you mere bholu ram....per mai abhi gussa hun tumse....
itna bolke Ruhi ne Raj ko gale laga liya, Raj Ruhi ki baate sunke uski jesse sans hi lout aayi ho.
thodi der gale lagne ke baad Ruhi Raj se alag hoti hai aur Raj ka chehra apne hatho mai le ke raj ke mathe pe kiss karti hai, fir Raj ki ankho pe, Raj to baas ankhe band kiye huye iss paal ko ji raha tha, Raj ne Ruhi ko kamar se pakad ke apni aur khinch liya, aur apni ankhe khol ke Ruhi ko dekhne laga.
Ruhi bhi Raj ki bhigi ankho mai hi kho gayi aur wanhi haal Raj ka bhi tha. Pata nahi dono kitne der tak yese hi ek dusro ko apne baho mai bhare rahe.
jesse hi Raj Ruhi ke chehre pe aarahe baal ko hatane ke liye apna hath badhaya to uske hath mai ek dard ki leher doud gayi.
Raj : aaahhhh.....
Ruhi : kya hua?
Raj : sayad jaab gira to body weight hath per aagaya tha to sayad strain ho gaya hai hath....
Ruhi : hath dikhao apka....
Raj : apka..abhi to gusse se tum keh rahi thy aab fir se aap....
Ruhi : wo..wo to mai gusse mai thy....
Raj ne Ruhi ko apne dusre hath se apne karib ek aur baar khincha aur uski ankho mai dekhte huye bola,
Raj : to aab gusse mai ho....
Ruhi : na..nahi...han..han....
Raj aage badh ke Ruhi ke gal pe kiss kar deta hai, to Ruhi ne apni ankhe band kar li.
Raj : aab bhi gusse mai ho....
Ruhi kya bolti uski to bolti hi band ho gayi thy.
Raj : wese gussa kis baat ka hai ye to bata do..teen teen thapad mar liya aur to aur hath bhi tut gaya.
Ruhi Raj ko chod ke reception per phone karne lagi to Raj ne Ruhi ke hath se phone le liya aur rakh diya.
Ruhi : Raj apka hath mai bahut chot lagi hai dekhiye Sujan bhi aagaye hai, apko ilaz ki jarurat hai.
Raj : mai thik hun Ruhi baas thodi se chot hai thik ho jayega per pehle tum mujhe ye batao kyun gusse mai thy.
Ruhi : Raj...pehle aap....
Raj ne Ruhi ke honth le apna hath rakh diya....
Raj : Ruhi mai nahi chahta fir se koyi baat dil mai hi reh jaye..mujhme aab aur himmat nahi hai ki kisi galat-fhemi ko sehne ki..please Ruhi....
Ruhi bhi Raj ka dil haal samajh jati hai,
Ruhi : pehla thapad apko ye sach chipane ke liye ki apne mujhe dekha tha, per taab ham bache thy to ye galti maaf....
Dusra thapad isiliye jaab mujhe pehchan liya tha to dur kyun rahe....
Tisra isiliye ki itne ache kyun ho aap dusro ke baare mai sochte ho..jaab ye pata chala gaya tha ki mai bhi pyaar karti hun apse to kyun pehle family ko milwana tha fir baad mai apne dil ki baat karni thy taab tak agara der ho jati to....isiliye gussa hun baas....
Raj ne apni dil pe hath rakh diya,
Raj : haaye...mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itni besabar ho mere paas ane ke liye...pehle pata hota to jiss din mili thy usi din gale laga ke saab kuch bata deta meri lady hulk..chalo aab gussa chod do....
Ruhi : pehle hath check....
Raj : ok..ruko mai phone karta hun....
Raj ne kisi ko phone karke room bula leta hai, kuch der baad ek doctor room mai aagaya aur Raj ke hath ko check karke,
Doctor : sir apke hath ki bone mai fracture aagaya hai aur thodi Sujan bhi badh gayi hai to plaster karna padega aap niche wale floor pe ajayiye wanha pe saab kuch arrangement hai.
Raj ne sar ko han mai hila diya aur doctor ke sath chal pada aur Ruhi ko wanhi pe rukhne ko kaha.
bahar aake Raj ne doctor ka gardan pakad liya,
Raj : mere hath mai baas dawab ke karan Sujan aagayi hai tu mere hath plaster laga raha hai, aur konsa doctor without X-ray mai bata deta hai ki bone fracture ho gaya hai....
Doctor : s...si...sir....sir...mujhe...Kabir...sir..ne kaha tha....jaab apka phone aaya to sir...mere sath hi thy to sir ne kaha ki apko jo bhi hua ho madam ke samne kuch jyada...hi bolna....to....
Raj : ye nahi sudhrega....chal tu aab baas dressing kar de....
Doctor : ji sir....
Raj jaab wapas aata hai kamre mai to baas uske hath mai dressing huyi thy jisse dekh ke Ruhi bhi uske paas aajati hai.
Ruhi : apko to....
Raj : thik hun Ruhi mai, koyi plaster nahi lagega...wo mera dost hi hai, aur wese hi bol raha tha Kabir ke kehne pe..taki tum mera ache se jyada dyaan rakho....
Ruhi : Kabir pagal hai..mai to wese bhi apka khyal rakhti....
Raj : sachi....
Ruhi sar ko han mai hila ke Raj ke gale lag jati hai, aur Raj bhi Ruhi ko apne baho mai bharke Rahat ki sanas leta hai.
Raj : tumhe pata hai iss pal ka intezar jaane kabse tha mujhe, jaab mere paas mere sath hogi meri Ruhi ban kar, baas Raj ki Ruhi....
Ruhi : mujhe bhi Raj....
Fir dono alag hoke balcony mai aake beth jate hai, Ruhi Raj ke kandhe pe sar rakh deti hai, aur dono hi apne ankhe band kar lete hai aur baas ek dusre ko mehsus kar rahe thy.
pata nahi kitne dino ya mahino ya saalo se ya khwab dekhe thy jo aaj pura hua hai.
Isse hi to taqdeer kehte hai kaab kya ho jaye kesse ho jaye kisse pata hai.
Mast update bhai
 

Ajay

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Update 34
Chaliye thoda Mumbai ghum aate hai,
Apko yaad to hoga hi Anu kisi ladke ke sath baat kar rahi thy aur ro rahi thy,
Anu : apko itni chot kese lagi sar pe...
ladka : Anu kuch nahi hua hai ye chot to do din pehle ki hai dekho....
Anu : aap kabhi meri baat nahi mante na..hamesha se yese hi karte hai aap aur mujhse har baat manwa lete ho....
Wo ladka hasne lagta hai Anu ki baate sunke....
Anu : Viren ji ander Rohan Bhai bhi hai...
Ji han wo ladka Viren hi tha Raj ka dost, Viren bhi Anu ki baate sunke haste haste chup ho gaya aur Anu ko dekhne laga.
Viren : janta hun Anu...ussi se milne aaya hun..mujhe pata hai ki Raj yanha nahi hai aur Rohan yanha hai akele.
Anu (dhire se) : han apko to saab kuch pata hota hai....
Viren Anu ke sar pe ek chapat lagake,
Viren : han mujhe saab pata hota hai aab chalo....
Anu : apko hamesha kese pata chal jata hai ki mai kya bol rahi hun dhire se....
Viren kuch nahi bolta baas muskura deta hai. Fir dono ander aate hai to hall mai Rohan betha tha. Rohan ne jesse hi Viren ko dekha to khada ho jata hai. Viren bhi bilkul uske samne jake khada ho jata hai aur muskura ke apna hath fela leta hai.
Rohan kuch pal khada raha to Viren ne jese hi hath niche kiya Rohan aage badh ke usse gale laga leta hai. Dono bina kuch bole gale lage rehte. Zara bhi bahar aagayi jaab Anu itne time nahi aayi to, jesse hi Zara ne Viren ko dekha to heran reh gayi.
Zara : Viren bhaijan aap..yanha....
viren bhi Zara ko dekh ke heran tha....
Viren : choti tu yanha....
Rohan : aap dono jante ho ek dusre ko....
Viren : Rohan Zara apne Kabir ki behen hai....
Rohan : kya....sach mai....
Viren : han...
Rohan ko to viswas hi nahi ho raha tha to wo firse Viren ki aur dekhne laga
Viren : choti hostel mai thy jaab tum log wanha thy, teen saal pehle ye hostel se aayi thy.
Rohan : han yaad aaya Kabir kabhi kabhi baat karta tha. Per kabhi socha nahi tha ki Zara apne Kabir ki behen hogi.
Zara : ye ko kya raha hai koi mujhe bhi bataye.
Anu : bhabhi, to aap Kabir ji ki behen ho aur Kabir ji aur Viren ji bhai aur Rohan Bhai ke dost hai. 6 saal purane dost....
Zara herani se sabko dekhne lagti hai.
Zara : to Rohan aap Abu ko bhi jante honge....
Rohan : nahi kabhi mila nahi per Mallik sahab ke bare mai Raj se kafi kuch janta hun, wo sach mai bahut ache admi hai....
Zara : han wo sab ke sath ache hi hai sirf mujhe chod ke....
Zara ki baate sunke Rohan usko herani se dekhne lagta hai.
Rohan : yesa kyun?
Viren : kyun ki unhone Zara ko hostel bhej diya tha aur ye nahi jana chahti thy, taab se ye unse dur dur rehti hai aur janke jeans pehnti hai kyun ki unhe pasand nahi....hehehehe
Rohan bhi hasne lagta hai to Zara Rohan aur Viren ko gusse mai dekhti hai fir apne kamre mai chali jati hai.
Rohan Zara ko awaj deta hai per wo aansuna kar deti hai to Viren Rohan ko jane ke liye kehta hai.
Rohan : per Viren hamme bhi to baat....
Viren Rohan ko bich mai hi rok ke bolta hai,
Viren : dekh hamare bich kabhi koyi galat-fhemi nahi hai na hogi dur reh ke bhi ek dusre ko samajhte thy per Zara aur tera rishta naya hai to ja uske paas....
Rohan han mai sar hila ke Viren ke gale milta hai fir Zara ke paas chala jata hai.
Anu taab se baas Viren ko hi dekh rahi thy. Jesse hi Viren ne Anu ko dekha to Anu ke hath se uska phone chut gaya to Viren ne pakad liya.
Viren : tum bilkul nahi badli ab bhi chize girati rehti ho.
Anu (mann mai) : jaab aap aas paas hote to taab hi yesa hota hai.
Viren Anu ke paas aake Anu ko hilata hai.
Viren : kya hua..kanha kho gayi...
Anu kuch nahi kehti hai baas Viren ke gale laag jati hai.
Viren : Anu..bacha...aab baas rona nahi....
Anu ke ankho mai anshu thy per Viren ki baato pe uske face pe smile aagayi.
Anu : pure 3 saal baad aap mile rahe ho...wese to mera best friend ho per 3 saal tak mujhse bhi baat nahi ki apne..mai gussa hun apse...wo bhi kitna..aur mujhe bacha nahi kehna aab mai badi ho gayi hun.
Viren : ok sorry...aab mai kuch mahine yanhi hun tum sabhi ke sath.
Anu khushi se Viren alag hoke usse dekhne lagti hai.
Anu : sachi....
Viren han mai apna sar hila deta hai to Anu firse khushi se Viren ke gale lag jati hai, aur usse jor se pakad leti hai.
Viren (mann mai) : janta hun Anu tum aab badi ho gayi ho per mai ye nahi samajh na chahta kyun ki jo mai tumhare liye mehsus karta hun wo ham dono ke liye sahi nahi hai baas isiliye khud ko yaad dilata hun ki tum 5 saal choti ho mujhse....
Viren Anu se alag hoke,
Viren : Anu mujhe abhi aram karna hai to mera kanra bata dogi mujhe....
Anu han mai sar hila deti hai aur apne room ke sath wala room Viren ko bata deti hai.
Viren fresh hone jata hai aur Anu wanhi pe beth jati hai.
Anu (mann mai) : pata nahi kaab samajhoge aap ki aap aab mere liye mere best friend hi nahi mere saab kuch ho jaab se pyaar ko samajha hai baas apko hi saab kuch samajha hai aur aap abhi bhi mujhe bachi hi samajhte ho.
Chaliye thoda Raj aur Ruhi ko dekh aate hai....
Raj aur Ruhi dono yese hi bethe thy balcony mai, kuch der baad jab Raj ne Ruhi ko dekha to Ruhi so chuki thy.
Raj (mann mai) : aaj bhi so gayi pata nahi ye ladki itna kese so leti hai. Pagal....
Raj ne Ruhi ko goud mai utha liya aur bed per le jake lita diya. Aur blanket bhi de diya. Raj wanhi kuch der beth kar Ruhi ko dekhta raha fir kuch der baad apne kamre mai chala jata hai, aur khidki per khada ho jata hai aur Ruhi ke baare mai sochne lagta hai.
Sochte huye aaj Raj ke chehre pe muskurahat thy khushi ke. Raj ne phone check kiya to uske chehre pe aur jyada khushi aagayi, Viren aur Rohan ki gale lagne wali photo thy jo usse Anu ne bheji thy.
Raj : to Viren aaj hi aagaya chalo acha hai per aaj usse Anu se kon bachayega...pichle 3 saal ki baate aaj hi karegi uss se..hehehehe.....
Mujse aur Rohan se bhi jyada Anu Viren ke karib hai per ho bhi kyu na..jitna khyal Viren ne 3 saal tak uska rakha sayad hi koyi yesa karta.
Mai janta hun Anu ke dil mai Viren ki jagah bahut khass hai, per Viren ke dil ka mujhe nahi pata....
Per meri Anu ko Viren se acha koyi mil hi nahi sakta, hey bhagwan aap hi saab sahi rakhna.
Jese Raj soch raha tha idhar Anu ne Viren ko Rohan aur Zara ki Love story bata di aur pichle 3 saal ki jo bhi jaruri, bekar saab tarah ki baate batayi ja rahi thy.
Viren baas han mai sar hila kar jawab de raha tha. Aur Zara ki kamre mai Rohan Zara ko mana raha tha, to koyi bhi Viren ko Anu se bachne ka uska koyi chance hi nahi tha.
Anu to yese Viren ko saab bata rahi thy jese wo baas yehi saab sunne aaya hai yanha. Bate karte karte jaab Anu ne Viren ko dekha to Viren so chuka tha wo bhi gehri nind mai.
Nice update bhai
 

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Jaab Anu ne Viren ko sota hua dekha to usko gussa aagaya ki kesse wo meri baat sune bina hi so gaye.
Anu : wese to koyi mission ho to puri puri raat jaag lenge aur aab dekho meri bato se hi nind aagayi inhe....
Anu bhi wanhi Viren ke goud mai sar rakhke so jati hai.
Idhar hotel mai Ruhi, Raj, Kabir apne apne apne room mai so rahe thy, Raj ka phone baaj ta hai to Raj bina dekhe hi apna phone utha leta hai....
Raj (nind mai) : hello....
call ke dusre taraf Rohan hi tha....
Rohan : oo..uth ja mere yaar...aaj mai bahut khush hun...
Raj Rohan ki awaj sunke ek hi jhatke mai uth jata hai.
Raj : Rohan kya hua bada khush lag raha hai.
Rohan : han yaar, Viren aaya hai ghar..mai..mai 3 saal baad usse mila..Raj mai bata nahi sakta ki mai kitna khush hun..aur tujhe pata hai Zara apne Kabir ki behen hai.
wait..wait..tujhe pata hi hoga ye ki Zara Kabir ki behen hai...tune mujhe bataya kyun nahi...
Raj : yaar kabhi mouka hi nahi mila aur dimag mai bhi wo baat nahi aayi....
Rohan : chal koyi baat nahi..per aab Kabir se bhi milne ka bahut mann kar raha hai yaar....
Raj : aab to tera sala ban gaya hai wo..mil lena jaab Zara ke ghar walo se uska hath mangne jayega.
Rohan : Zara ke papa to Mallik sahab hai..yaar mai kabhi unse nahi mila..baas tumse suna hai..to....
Raj : yaar mai aaraha hun ghar fir mil kar baat karte hai taab tak tu Viren ko Anu se bacha le....
Rohan : aare han yaar kal raat Zara ke chakar mai usse Anu ke sath akela chod diya tha pata nahi Anu ki baate sunkar kya haal hua hoga mai dekh ke aata hun..bye...
Raj (haste huye) : bye....
fir Raj tayar hoke apne room se bahar aata hai, aur Kabir ke room ka door knock karta hai.
Kabir ne bhi nind mai hi darwaja khola to samne Raj ko dekhta hai fir apne bed pe chala jata hai sone ke liye.
Raj : iska kuch nahi ho sakta hai, jaab bhi kaam se chuti leta hai to pura aalsi ho jata hai.
Raj sidha bathroom mai jata hai aur balti bhar ke pani utha leta hai aur sidha bahar aake Kabir ke upar fenk deta hai, Kabir ek jhatke mai uth ke beth jata hai aur idhar udhar dekhne lagta hai, jaab samne dekhta hai to Raj hath mai khali balti liye khada hua tha.
Kabir (gusse se) : saale..kamine..tune meri jindegi kharab kar di hai..hamesha se meri pyari nind ke piche pada rehta hai...kutte...kya bigada hai meri nind ne tera...aab utha hi diya hai to aaja gale lag ja....
Raj Kabir ka dil ki baat samajh gaya ki ye abhi mujhe pakad ke dhoyega to Raj kamre se bhag jata hai bahar ki taraf, Ruhi bahar hi khadi thy.
Ruhi Raj ko yese bhagte huye dekh ke,
Ruhi : kya subha subha hotel ke corridor ko race ka maidan banaya hai...kya hua..kyun bhag rahe ho aap...
Raj kuch jawab deta uss se pehle Kabir bhi bahar aajata hai, aur Kabir ki halat dekh ke Ruhi hasne lagti hai. Kabir pura gila hua pada tha aur kapde baal se pani ke bund tapak rahe thy.
Ruhi : lagta hai barish baas aap per hi huyi hai wo bhi kamre mai hi....hehehe....
Kabir : aare bhabhi ji..baas iss barish ki kuch bunde apke love per bhi girana chahte hai jinki wajah se meri ye halat huyi hai.
Raj : yaar tu uthta nahi to..chal maaf karde aur tayar ho kar aaja ham tere khane per wait kar rahe hai.
Aur Ruhi ko leke bhag jata hai, aur piche Kabir baas chila ta raha...
Kabir : han..han..ja..ja..dekh lunga tujhe mai, bhabhi bhi meri wajah se hi mili hai tujhe....
Ruhi aur Raj bhagte huye lift ke ander ghus gaye aur niche jane lage, aur lift mai baas ye dono hi thy.
Raj ne Ruhi ko dekha jo apni ankhe band kiye huye hi hanf rahi thy. Raj Ruhi ke bilkul karib aagaya aur dono hatho se Ruhi kr aas paas baho ka ghera bana liya. Ruhi ankhe khol ke Raj ko itne karib dekha to uski ankhe jhuk gayi.
Raj ko Ruhi ki iss aada per aur bhi pyaar aagaya. Raj ne Ruhi ke galo ko apne hath mai bhara aur uske mathe pe kiss kar deta hai aur kiss karne ke baad Ruhi ko dekhne laga to Ruhi ne apni ankhe jhuka li....
Raj : Ruhi baas ek baar dekho meri taraf...
Raj ke itne pyaar se kehne pe Ruhi ne apni ankhe upaar utha ke Raj ke ankho mai dekhne lagi, dono ke hi ankho mai ek dusre ke liye bepanha pyaar tha.
Idhar Rohan phone rakh ne ke baad Viren ko dekhne me liye uske kamre ki aur chala gaya to wanhi darwaja pe hi jake ruk gaya.
Viren betha betha hi so raha tha aur Anu ka sar uske goud mai tha, Rohan ye dekhke muskura utha, Raj ki tarah Rohan bhi Anu ki dill ki baat samajhta tha per Viren ki nahi.
Rohan aage jane hi wala tha ki Anu uthne lagi to Rohan wanhi darwaja ke paas hi ruk gaya.
Anu uthi aur nind bhari ankho mai hi Viren ko dekhne lagi to uske chehre pe badi si muskurahat aagayi. Kuch der tak Anu Viren ko dekhti rahi fir Viren ke kaan ke paas ja kar jor se bolti hai...
Anu : Viren.....ji......
Anu ki itne jor se bolne ki wajah se Viren hadbada ke uth jata hai fir jaab usne Anu ko dekha to....
Viren : Anu..mujhe bolti ho ki bachi nahi ho per ye kya harkar hai....
Anu : ye apki saza raat ko meri puri baate na sunn ke sone ke liye..abhi pichle mahine ki baate bachi hai jaab mai yanha aayi thy.
Viren herani se Anu ko dekhne lagta hai to Rohan bhi ander aajata hai....
Rohan : Viren mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai to chal mere sath....aur Viren ko ankh mar deta hai....
Viren bhi samajh gaya wo bhi subha subha Anu ki bate sunne ke mood mai nahi tha...
Viren : han..han..chal mujhe bhi kuch baate karni hai tere rishtey ke bare mai hi chal....
Fir Rohan aur Viren jaldi se bhag jate hai garden mai, garden mai aake ek dusre ko dekh ke jor jor se hasne lagte hai.
Rohan (haste huye) : wese tune hi Anu ko itna bigada hai..kisi ko kuch bolne nahi deti hai aab bhugat tu....
Viren : han to kya hua..wo doll si hai koyi kuch kese bole usse mujhse nahi bardast hota.
Rohan : han wo hamara Anu doll hai puri baas ye doll chup hi achi lagti hai jaab bolna suru kar hai to kya tum, mai, Raj koyi kuch nahi keh sakta.
Viren : han per ek banda hai jo usse chup karwa sakta hai....
Fir dono ek sath bolte hai...
dono : wo hai..hamara Kabir.....
Rohan : han wo to hai....
Fir Rohan chup ho jata hai, to Viren ne Rohan ke kandhe pe hath rakh deta hai aur kehta hai ki,
Viren : aab wo bhi mil jayega....
Rohan bhi Viren ki baate sunke han mai apna sar hila deta hai.
Nice update bhai
 

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Raj aur Ruhi ek dusre mai hi khoye huye thy. Ruhi baas raj ki ankho mai apne liye pyaar hi pyaar dekh rahi thy. Raj ne Ruhi ke sar se apna sar laga diya aur ankhe band karke iss lamhe ko mehsus karne laga.
Ruhi dhire dhire Raj ke aur karib aagayi aur ankhe band karke apne honth ko Raj ke honth ke paas le aayi per jese hi Ruhi kiss karne hi wali thy ki Raj thoda sa jhuk gaya jisse honth ji jagah Raj ke naak mai kiss ho gayi.
Ruhi ankhe khole herani se Raj ko dekhne lagi.
Raj : tumhari hi wish thy ki meri naak pe kiss karke mera sara gussa khatam karne ki to baas wanhi pura kiya hai aur rahi baat iss kiss ki to ye to mai kabhi bhi le sakta hun per shadi ke baad na...ya abhi..wese mujhe to koyi pareshani nahi hai..aur ankh mar deta hai....
Ruhi saram ke mare Raj ke gale lag jati hai aur Raj hasta hua usse banho mai bhar leta hai.
Ruhi abhi dhyaan deti hai ki lift to chal hi nahi rahi hai to Raj se alag hoke dekhne lagti hai to dekhti hai ki lift ka stop button daba hua tha.
Raj : maine hi lift roki thy thoda time tumhare sath spend karne ke liye.
Ruhi : acha ji..to ye baat hai per mujhe aab bhuk lagi hai to chale....
Raj : jo hukum madam....
Fir dono niche aajate hai aur dekhte hai ki Kabir pehle se hi niche betha unka intezar kar raha hai. Kabir ki nazar jaab in dono pe padi to inko ghurne laga.
Kabir : itni der tak kanha thy tum dono....
Raj : aare yaar lift atak gayi thy to....
Kabir : sale atak gayi thy ya atka di thy...chal chod..khana khate hai, dekh tera to pata nahi per mere bhabhi ko jarur bhuk lagi hogi....
Ruhi : han Kabir ji.....
Raj : to chalo suru karte hai....
Fir teeno khana khane lagte hai.
chaliye thoda Raj ke mumbai ke ghar mai ghum aate hai....
Anu ready hoke dinning table pe bethi thy aur Zara bhi uske sath beth ke kuch kaam kar rahi thy. Rohan aur Viren dono hi kitchen mai thy.
Rohan to baas khada hoke Viren ko dekh raha tha aur Viren khana bana raha tha.
Rohan (herani se) : ye saab punjabi khana kaab sikh gaya tu....
Viren : aab itne mahine Punjab mai raha to sikh hi gaya aur tujhe pata hai na ki mujhe....
Rohan bich mai hi Viren ki baate karke,
Rohan : tujhe ye saab karna acha lagta hai wo bhi haam saab ke liye.
Viren : chal aab ye saab bahar le jane mai meri madat kar....
Rohan han mai sar hilake uski madat karta hai, jaab sabhi kahan aagaya dinning table pe Zara bhi apna kaam band karke khane ko dekhne lagti hai aur Anu to baas gin rahi thy kya kya hai....
Anu : wooooo...hooooo....itna sara khana maza aagaya. Mai to kitne dino se bhai ke hath ka khana miss kar rahi thy per Viren ji apne to kamal kar diya..sach mai...wait nahi ho raha hai...kya ham suru kar sakte hai.....
Viren : han..han..kyun nahi.....
Fir sabhi khane lagte hai aur sabhi Viren ki khane ki tarif kar rahe thy.
Idhar Bangalore se Ruhi, Raj aur Kabir mumbai ke liye nikal gaye khana khane ke baad.
Ruhi aab Raj ke bagal ki seat mai bethi thy aur Kabir piche ke seat mai beth ke apni nind puri kar raha tha.
Raj : Ruhi kya tum mujhe bataogi ki tumhe pyaar ka yehsas kaab hua tha?
Ruhi : mai...wo....
Raj Ruhi ko dekhte huye : please Ruhi mere liye....
Ruhi : thik hai.....
Jaab 11th mai annual day per tumne mujhse kaha tha ki tum milna chahte ho mujhse aur kuch kehna chahte ho to mai bhi kuch batana chahti thy tumhe...apne dil ki baat yanhi ki mujhe tumse pyaar ho gaya hai....
Tumhari baato se, tumhari sayari se, tumse...bahut pyaar karne lagi thy tumhe bina dekhe hi..ye baat maine baas Palak ko batayi thy.
Uss din Palak hamari class ke kuch ladko ko mere paas leke aagayi....
Palak : yaar Ruhi dekh tu meri best friend and childhood friend bhi hai aur mai nahi chahti ki tu hurt ho....
Ruhi : baat kya hai Palak, saaf saaf bol....
Palak : yaar Raj ne tujhse dosti baas ek sart jitne ke liye ki thy..wo koyi tera dost nahi hai usse baas sart ke paise chahiye...baas..wo anath hai aur wese bhi yese loog rishtey ko nahi samajhte hai....
Ruhi : nahi Palak tujhe koi galat-fhemi huyi hai....
Palak : ye dono mere bhi dost hai Ruhi aur jaab maine inhe tere Raj ke bare mai bataya to ye saab mujhe inhi se hi pata chala..ye dekh video....
Video mai Raj kisi sart ke liye han bol raha tha. Ye dekh ke Ruhi tut gayi thy. Taab bhi usne kisi ko bhej ke Raj ko bulati hai.
Ruhi dusri taraf munh karke khadi thy aur baas Raj se itna hi puchi ki,
Ruhi : tumne inn dono se koi bet lagaya tha....
Raj : han...per....
Palak : baas..koyi per...bar...nahi....
Ruhi (rote huye) : I hate you Raj...I really hate you...I don't want to see your face...I trust you but you break my trust...chale jaao yanha se....
Raj ko kuch samajh nahi aaraha tha,
Raj : Ruhi hua kya hai..mere taraf dekho Ruhi...
Ruhi : maine kaha na jao..go away..tumhe samajh nahi aaraha...aagar kabhi mujhe dost bhi samajha hai to jao yanha se aur kabhi mere samne maat aana.
fir ek mahina taak maine kisi se baat nahi ki baas Palak se baat hoti thy. Jese hi 12 class suru huyi to ek din maine Palak aur un ladko ki baate sun li thy..kese Raj ko fasaya tha aur ye saab kuch plan Palak ka tha..baas fir kisi per bhi bharosha nahi raha.. Palak se bhi alag ho gayi aur sabse kinara kar liya.
Papa to wese bhi kaam ki wajah se hamesha dur rehte hai mujhse to mere dur rehne se unhe koyi farak nahi pada..aur America isiliye nahi gayi kyun ki tumse milne ki umid nahi khona chahti thy.
Itna saab sunke Raj Ruhi ko apne karib karta hai aur uske mathe pe kiss karta hai.
Raj : aab saab kuch thik hoga Ruhi..saab kuch...
Ruhi bhi han mai sar hilati hai. Tabhi Kabir bhi uth jata hai.
Kabir : bhabhi....
Ruhi : ji....
Kabir : aap aage ki hamari kahani nahi sunogi....
Ruhi : aap to so hi gaye thy mujhe to sunni thy....
Kabir : to suno aab mai batata hun aage kya hua tha....
Nice update bhai
 

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Jesse hi Viren ka sach Raj aur Rohan ko pata chala to unhe bahut acha laga. To un dono ne bhi self defence ke liye Viren se sikhna suru kar diya. Viren ke sath Kabir yani ki maine bhi test diya tha per mai select nahi hua tha to maine IPS ki tayari suru kar di thy. Per Raj ka to bada admi banna tha jisme Rohan hamesha uske sath tha.
Raj aur Rohan school jate fir koyi na koyi kaam karke paisa ikatha karte. Ek saal tak dono ne yesa hi kiya aur taab tak hamari dosti bahut gehri ho gayi thy.
Anu aab Rohan se bhi jyada Viren ke sath rehti thy kyun ki Raj aur Rohan jyada samay bahar kaam karte thy. Meri aur Anu ki to kamal ki bonding hai. Ek sher to dusra sawa sher....
Anu sari sararate mujhse hi sikhi hai. Viren kabhi kabhi mujhpe bhadak bhi jata tha per Anu ko kuch nahi kehta baas bacho ki tarah samajha deta aur wo maan bhi jati.
Yese hi hamara school khatam ho gaya to maine graduation karne laga Viren bhi mere sath hi tha per aab wo puri tarah se agent ban gaya tha. Raj aur Rohan ki bhi personality kisi solider jesi lagti thy. Per un dono ne private hi padhayi suru kar di aur apne kaam karke paisa ikatha karne lage, unhe apni company kholni thy to har kisi construction company ke under dono alag alag koyi na koyi kaam karke sikh rahe thy. Ek saal tak dono ko apni umar se jyada hi experience ho gaya tha aur dono ne mil kar jamin kharidi ki thy. Thodi madat mere Abu yani ki Mallik sahab ne bhi ki thy mere aur Viren ke kehne pe aur Raj se wo mil chuke thy.
Yanha per se hamari life mai turning point aagaya.....
Kuch gundo ne hamari jamin per kabja kar liya wo land mafia thy per hamare Raj aur Rohan ne unhe yesa dhoya..baas pucho hi maat..Viren se sikha kaam aagaya aur dono baan gaye saab ke liye Raj bhai aur Rohan bhai...inn dono ne do mahine mai Bangalore ka pura mafia hi khatam kar diya, baas chipke se chale jate aur apna kaam khatam karke aajate. Sara mafia ne bhi inko dhundna chalu kar diya tha jo bhi aaya wo kabhi wapas hi nahi gaya.
ye kaam dekhke dono ko offer bhi aaya ETF chief ki aur se join hone ka..per Raj ka sapna bich mai aaraha tha. Ye offer Viren hi leke aaya tha. Raj ka mind taab do soch mai divide ho gaya tha. Iss baat per Rohan ka Viren se jhagda ho gaya ki usse pata tha ki Raj ka sapna kya tha....
Per Raj ka mann bhi desh ke liye jhuk gaya per Rohan ne mana kar diya wo Raj aur apna sapna pura karne ke lag gaya fir Raj ne ye sart rakhi ki wo apna profession nahi badlega balki issi profession mai reh ke desh ki seva karega.
Aur ye baat chief sir ko bhi sahi lagi kyun ki koyi businessman agent nahi tha aur iss field mai bahut kuch pata lagta hai to wo bhi maan gaye. Do saal se Raj bhi secret agent hai aur sabse chup kar apna kaam kar raha hai.
Ruhi ek dam se bol padi zor se jaab Kabir se secret agent wali baat suni....
Ruhi : kya!!!!!!! secret agent........
Ruhi ke yese chilane se Raj bhi car ka break laga deta hai.
Kabir : bhabhi dhire yaar...kitna jor se bolti ho aap.....
Ruhi : baat hi yesi hai...Raj aap....
Raj : yaar tum fir se ye aap per aagayi.....
Ruhi : ye baat chodiye..aap..aap sach mai....
Raj : han sach mai..aur Rohan ko bhi pata hai usne hi kaha tha ki mai dil ki sunu to...aur 6 mahine se hamare Kabir ji bhi IPS Kabir Mallik ban gaye hai.
Kabir : aur mai....
Kabir ki baat ko bich mai hi kat te huye,
Raj : aur ye abhi kuch dino ki chuti le kar aaya hai....
Fir kuch ishara kar deta hai Kabir ko....
Ruhi : ooh...aap saab kitne chupe rustom nikle....
Raj : aaj itne dino baad haam saab sath honge....
Kabir : han yaar....to chale....
Fir Raj car ki speed increase kar deta hai jald se jald mumbai pahunchne ke liye.
Idhar Anu ne pure ghar ko hi theatre bana liya hai. Hall mai andhera kar ke samne bada sa tv pe baas superheros wali movie laga di hai aur saab ko sath mai bitha ker hath mai pop corn liye bethi movie enjoy kar rahi thy, subha se 4 movies dekh chuke thy sabhi....
Rohan aur Zara to baas hath mai hath dalle apne mai hi busy thy per Viren hi halat bahut buri thy. Ye movies Viren ko pasand thy aur Viren ne hi Anu ko dekhne ki adat dali thy per aaj Viren khud pachta raha tha.
Screen pe jesse hero punch maar raha tha villian ko Anu bhi wese hi kar rahi thy aur Viren ko saab kuch paad rahi thy, bichara Viren Rohan ko mann hi mann gali de raha tha ki bacha nahi sakta mujhe....
Sham hone ko aayi thy sabhi bahar se khana order karke kha rahe thy aur movies dekh rahe thy.
Akhir kar Rohan bol hi pada,
Rohan : yaar Anu baas kar koyi romantic si movie laga na baas ho gaya tera ye superhero movies....
Anu : bhai baas abhi last movie hi bach gayi hai meri favourite....
Viren : Anu baas karo wo ham raat mai dekh lenge aab baas....
Anu : ok then....
Rohan : wah bhai..mai bol raha tha taab to suni nahi mere baat....
Anu : aab maan gayi hun na..aap to wese bhi bhabhi ke sath romance karne mai lage thy movie to wese bhi apne nahi dekhi.
Aab bichara Rohan kya bolta to Zara ne command le liya,
Zara : aab baas karo tum dono..Viren bhaijan abu maan jayenge na mere aur Rohan ke liye....
Viren : Rohan hai hi yesa baas dusro ke bare mai sochta hai ek dam perfect hai tere liye, wo kyun nahi manenge...mai hun na wese bhi Raj bhi mana hi lenga unhe....
Rohan : baas kaar yaar itna acha nahi hun mai, aagar hota to tujhse dur nahi rehta per darta tha ki tujhe kesse face karunga kyun ki tu bhi sahi tha apni jagah desh ke liye aur maine jhagda kar liya.
Viren : jhagda tune dost ke sapne me liye kiya tha yaar....chal baas aab purani baate nahi hogi. Wese tera to pata tha ki tu maan jayega main baat to Kabir ki hai wo gussa ho kar betha hai ki maine usse kyun nahi liya apni team mai..pagal...ye saab mere hath mai nahi hai wo ye samajh nahi paya....
Rohan : wo bhi samajh jayega....
Anu : han...mera partner aab aur jyada smart, handsome, intelligent ho gaya hai..
Anu ki baat sunke Viren apni dono eye bros ko upar karke Anu ko dekhke bolta hai,
Viren : Anu tujhe bada pata hai uska....
Anu bhi thodi attitude ke sath bolti hai,
Anu : han to 3 saal se mere sath wanhi baat karte thy aap to nahi karte thy...aur wese bhi mujhe lagta hai ki aab mere partner mujhe apse jyada hi samajhte hai.
Viren kuch nahi bolta hai baas Anu ko dekhta hai aur bahar ki taraf chala jata hai, tabhi bahar Raj ki car aake rukti hai. car mai Raj, Ruhi aur Kabir bahar nikal te hai.
Viren ne jesse hi Raj aur Kabir ko dekha jo gussa tha sayad Anu se wo khatam ho gaya. Raj aur Kabir bhi samne Viren ko dekh ke unku ankhe bhi naam ho gayi.
Teeno dost aab baas ek dusre ko dekh ke khade hi rahe. Ruhi ne teeno dekha to samajh gayi ki ye jarur Viren hi hoga, to wo aage badh ke Viren ki pair chune lagi to Viren ek dam piche ho jata hai aur herani se Ruhi ko dekhne lagti hai.
Viren : aap ye kya kar rahe hai...kon hai aap...
Ruhi ki ye harkat se Raj aur Kabir bhi heran thy ki Ruhi kya kar rahi hai.
Kabir : Raj..bhabhi ko kya hua hai..kar kya rahi hai...
Raj : yaar samajh nahi aaraha kar kya rahi hai...
Aur jese hi dono Viren ki sakal dekhi to hasne lage. Ruhi to baas Viren ki pair pakad ke beth thy aur bol rahi thy....
Ruhi : jeth ji ashirbad de mujhe..please..jeth ji...
Viren baas ghabra ke Ruhi se apni pair chudane ki kosis kar raha tha.
Viren : dekhiye....
Raj : Viren de de ashirbad nahi to ye tera pair chodegi nahi..ye..teri...
Viren : Ruhani bhabhi hai.
Ruhi khadi ho gayi aur teeno Viren ko dekhne lage...
Viren : mai kahi bhi rahu per tum saab ke baare mai saab kuch pata hota hai mujhe...
Superb update bhai
 

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Viren baas Kabir ko hi dekh raha tha. Raj aage badh ke Viren ko gale laga liya, Kabir bhi aage aaya per Viren ke bagal se nikal gaya. To Viren udas ho gaya. Raj ne Viren ke kandhe pe hath rakha jo ki baas Kabir ko jate huye dekh raha tha.
Raj : tu janta hai na usse..bhaw kha raha hai baas...
Viren bhi han mai sar hilata hai aur aur teeno Viren, Raj aur Ruhi ander aate hai. Anu aur Zara jese hi Kabir ko dekhti hai to bhag ke uske paas aati hai. Zara to Kabir ke gale lag jati hai.
Zara : miss u bhaijaan...really miss you....
Kabir bhi Zara ko kaas ke gale lagate huye,
Kabir : miss u alot choti..bahut miss kiya tujhe maine..abu ka gussa mujhpe bhi nikala tunne to....
Zara : sorry bhai....
Kabir : chal chod tu ye saab....
Jesse hi Kabir Zara se alag hota hai Anu ne usse jakad liya aur chilane lagi....
Anu : welcome partner......6 mahine..6 mahine baad mil rahe hai...miss you alot partner.
Kabir bhi Anu ko gale lagake bahut khush tha. Per Viren jaab ander aata hai to dono ko dekh ke usse gussa bahut aata hai. Gusse mai Viren ne apni dono hatho ki muthi band kar li. Raj ne Viren ka chehra dekh liya tha per aab wo Anu aur Kabir ko bhi dekh raha tha jo ek sath chilla kar ek dusre ke gale lage huye thy. Anu Kabir se aalag huyi aur Ruhi ko dekh ke bhag ke aake Ruhi ke gale lag gayi.
Anu : di..welcome back....
Ruhi : acha aagayi meri yaad..mujhe to laga Kabir ko dekh ke tum mujhe, tumhare bhai ko bhul hi gayi....
Anu : sorry di.. partner se itne din baad mili na to...wese aap partner ke sath hi aaye ho lagta hai to kessa laga mera partner....
Ruhi : bilkul tere jesse natkhat aur sararati....
Anu (haste huye) : han wo to hai....
Viren ye saab sunke bahar chala gaya aur garden mai jake khada ho gaya, ander kisine bhi Viren ke taraf dhyaan hi nahi diya tha. Rohan aur Kabir ek dusre se mil rahe thy aur Zara bhi sath mai hi thy. Raj bhi inko Mallik sahab se huyi baate bata di, Ruhi bhi Raj ke sath hi thy, Raj ke baat sunke Rohan aur Zara bhi khush thy.
Anu Kabir se dhyaan hata to aas paas dekhne lagi to usse Viren kahi nazar nahi aaya.
Anu badbadate huye Viren ko dhund ne lagti hai,
Anu : aab ye kanha gaye. Aaj saab sath hai aur ye pata nahi kanha chale gaye.
Anu jesse hi bahar aayi to Viren dikh gaya, to wo doud me uske paas aagayi. Viren ke paas aake,
Anu : to aap yanha ho....
Viren kuch nahi bolta baas samne ki aur dekhta rehta...jaab koi jawab na payi to Anu bhi chup chap khadi hoke baas Viren ko hi dekhti rahi.
Thodi der baad jaab koyi awaj na huyi to Viren ko laga ki Anu wapas chali gayi to Viren jesse hi mudne laga to Anu uske sath hi khadi thy aur baas usse hi dekhe ja rahi thy.
Viren : bacha ander chalte hai....
Jesse hi Viren ander jane lagta hai to Anu uska hath pakad ke rok leta hai, to Viren bhi palat ke Anu ko dekhne lagta hai. Anu bhi der na karte huye Viren ko apni aur khinch leti hai aur uske pair mai khadi ho jati hai aur sidhe apne honth ko uske honth mai rakh deti hai, Anu ki ye harkat se Viren to bilkul jaam sa gaya tha.
Anu kuch der tak Viren ko kiss karti rahi fir Viren se alag hoke khadi ho gayi, Viren to baas Anu ko herani se dekh raha tha...
Anu : aab apko pata lag gaya na ki mai bachi nahi hun...ye kehke ander bhag jati hai....
Per Viren to uss yehsas se bahar hi nahi aaraha tha. Viren ko to abhi bhi Anu ki sanse mehsus ho rahi thy, tabhi wanha Raj bhi aagaya aur Viren ke kandhe pe hath rakh diya to Viren Anu ke khyal se bahar aaya.
Raj : tujhe hi pehel karni hogi..baat tujhe hi pehle karni hogi usse....
Viren jiska dimag mai abhi bhi Anu hi ghum rahi thy.... Wo Raj ki baate samajh nahi paya ki wo kis baare mai baat kar raha hai...
Viren : kis..kiske sath....
Raj : Kabir se..aur kis se....
Viren : han..han..chal karta hun baat usse....
Viren aur Raj dono ander aate hai to Kabir Viren ko andekha karta hai to Viren kitchen mai jata hai aur frizer se ek Bowl le kar aata hai, aur Kabir ke aage kar deta hai aur samne khada ho jata hai.
Kabir dekhta hai to samne kheer thy wo bhi thandi jesse usse pasand tha.
Kabir gusse se khada hoke Viren ko dekhta hai,
Kabir : kamine..tujhe pata hai ki kese kise manna hai..per ye galat hai..mai kheer to kha lunga kyun ki itne dino baad tere hath ka kheer khane ko mil rahi hai per naraz rahunga mai.....
Kabir kheer khane lagta hai fir khate khate hi ro padta hai aur Viren ke gale lag jata hai. Viren ki bhi ankhe naam ho jati hai. Rohan aur Raj ki bhi...fir aage badh ke Raj aur Rohan un dono ko bhi gale lag jate hai, Ruhi aur Zara in charo dosto ko gale lage huye dekhti rehte hai aur khush bhi thy, per Anu ka kuch ata pata nahi tha.
Anu to apne kamre mai dubak ke bethi huyi thy aur jo kar ke aayi thy uske baare mai soch rahi thy.
Anu (apne mai) : ye kya kar diya maine..per wo bhi to har samay bacha bachi karte rehte hai mai koi bachi nahi rahi..aab pata lag gaya hoga aur wese bhi kiss hi to kari hai aur puri life unke sath rehna hai unko hi kiss karni hai....baas ye saab sochte huye sarma rahi thy....
Charo dost ek dusre ka sath pake bahut khush thy aur baato mai lage huye thy. Ruhi aur Zara bahut der se inko dekh rahe thy, jaab inn dono se aur bardast nahi hua to Ruhi ne jor se bolti hai,
Ruhi : sabhi baas ladkiyo ko hi dosh dete hai ki jaab milti hai to baate hi khatam nahi hoti hai aur saab kuch bhul jati hai, per idhar dekho charo mil kya gaye hame hi bhul gaye, ham dono bhi yanha hai aur hamari tisri pata nahi kanha bhag gayi per ham to hai na....
Raj uthke jata hai aur Zara aur Ruhi ka hath pakad se sabhi ke bicho bich lake betha deta hai aur Anu ko bhi awaj deta hai, Anu bhi Raj ki awaj pake niche aajati hai per Viren ke taraf dekhti bhi nahi hai, Raj Anu ko bhi Zara aur Ruhi ke paas betha deta hai.
Raj : mere liye tum teeno hi bahut mayene rakhte ho. Mere yaar meri jindegi hai to mere jinne ki wajah Anu hai maa papa ke jane ke baad iske liye hi ji raha tha. Aur meri dhadkan tum ho Ruhi jaab se tumhe dekha tha baas dil tumhare liye hi dhadakta hai.
Aur Zara tum meri sabse achi dost rahi 3 saalo mai har samay mera sath diya aur mere dost ki jindegi ban gayi aur meri bhabhi aur aab to aur mayene rakhti ho kyunki bhabhi maa jesi hoti hai to aaj se wanhi jagah hogi tumhari baas maa ki jagah behen ko dunga kyun ki teri beijati bhi karni hai aage bhi..hehehe....
Aab pata chala ki kya ho tum saab....
Rohan : ye saab chod ye bata ki tum dono ne ek dusre ko bol diya...
Anu : han bhai..Ruhi di apke dil ki dhadkan kesse....
Zara : Rajveer..Ruhi ke liye apka dil dhadakta hai kya baat hai...
Kabir : ye saab mere karan hi hua hai warna ye dono to pata nahi kaab bolte...
Fir Kabir sabko hotel wala kissa bata deta hai to Ruhi uth ke bhag jati hai....
Raj : kya kar rahe ho yaar...
Raj bhi Ruhi ke piche chala jata hai aur Rohan bhi Zara le paas aake uska hath pakad ke garden ki aur jata hai to Kabir bol padta hai....
Kabir : tum dono kanha chale....
Rohan : teri behen ko meri jindegi mai uski ehmiyat batane....
Kabir hasne lagta hai, Anu to baas Viren ko andekha kar rahi thy to Kabir ke paas jake khadi ho gayi..per Anu ki taqdeer kahiye ya Viren ki taqdeer ussi time Kabir ko koyi call aajati hai to wo uthke upar kamre mai chala jata hai.
Anu dekhti hai ki Viren usse hi dekh raha hai to jaldi se niche ke sabse karib wale kamre mai bhag jati hai aur wanha per khidki ki aur chehra karke khadi ho jati hai.
Viren bhi Anu ke piche jata hai aur kamre mai jake darwaja dhire se band kar deta hai.
viren janna chahta tha ki Anu ne yesa kyun kiya..kya chal raha hai Anu ke dimag mai..wo Kabir aur Anu ko leke bhi thoda confused tha. Per yese Anu ke achanak kiss se dimag hi band ho gaya tha uska. Wo apna sara sawal ka jawab Anu se chahta tha.
Mast update bhai
 

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Viren baas Kabir ko hi dekh raha tha. Raj aage badh ke Viren ko gale laga liya, Kabir bhi aage aaya per Viren ke bagal se nikal gaya. To Viren udas ho gaya. Raj ne Viren ke kandhe pe hath rakha jo ki baas Kabir ko jate huye dekh raha tha.
Raj : tu janta hai na usse..bhaw kha raha hai baas...
Viren bhi han mai sar hilata hai aur aur teeno Viren, Raj aur Ruhi ander aate hai. Anu aur Zara jese hi Kabir ko dekhti hai to bhag ke uske paas aati hai. Zara to Kabir ke gale lag jati hai.
Zara : miss u bhaijaan...really miss you....
Kabir bhi Zara ko kaas ke gale lagate huye,
Kabir : miss u alot choti..bahut miss kiya tujhe maine..abu ka gussa mujhpe bhi nikala tunne to....
Zara : sorry bhai....
Kabir : chal chod tu ye saab....
Jesse hi Kabir Zara se alag hota hai Anu ne usse jakad liya aur chilane lagi....
Anu : welcome partner......6 mahine..6 mahine baad mil rahe hai...miss you alot partner.
Kabir bhi Anu ko gale lagake bahut khush tha. Per Viren jaab ander aata hai to dono ko dekh ke usse gussa bahut aata hai. Gusse mai Viren ne apni dono hatho ki muthi band kar li. Raj ne Viren ka chehra dekh liya tha per aab wo Anu aur Kabir ko bhi dekh raha tha jo ek sath chilla kar ek dusre ke gale lage huye thy. Anu Kabir se aalag huyi aur Ruhi ko dekh ke bhag ke aake Ruhi ke gale lag gayi.
Anu : di..welcome back....
Ruhi : acha aagayi meri yaad..mujhe to laga Kabir ko dekh ke tum mujhe, tumhare bhai ko bhul hi gayi....
Anu : sorry di.. partner se itne din baad mili na to...wese aap partner ke sath hi aaye ho lagta hai to kessa laga mera partner....
Ruhi : bilkul tere jesse natkhat aur sararati....
Anu (haste huye) : han wo to hai....
Viren ye saab sunke bahar chala gaya aur garden mai jake khada ho gaya, ander kisine bhi Viren ke taraf dhyaan hi nahi diya tha. Rohan aur Kabir ek dusre se mil rahe thy aur Zara bhi sath mai hi thy. Raj bhi inko Mallik sahab se huyi baate bata di, Ruhi bhi Raj ke sath hi thy, Raj ke baat sunke Rohan aur Zara bhi khush thy.
Anu Kabir se dhyaan hata to aas paas dekhne lagi to usse Viren kahi nazar nahi aaya.
Anu badbadate huye Viren ko dhund ne lagti hai,
Anu : aab ye kanha gaye. Aaj saab sath hai aur ye pata nahi kanha chale gaye.
Anu jesse hi bahar aayi to Viren dikh gaya, to wo doud me uske paas aagayi. Viren ke paas aake,
Anu : to aap yanha ho....
Viren kuch nahi bolta baas samne ki aur dekhta rehta...jaab koi jawab na payi to Anu bhi chup chap khadi hoke baas Viren ko hi dekhti rahi.
Thodi der baad jaab koyi awaj na huyi to Viren ko laga ki Anu wapas chali gayi to Viren jesse hi mudne laga to Anu uske sath hi khadi thy aur baas usse hi dekhe ja rahi thy.
Viren : bacha ander chalte hai....
Jesse hi Viren ander jane lagta hai to Anu uska hath pakad ke rok leta hai, to Viren bhi palat ke Anu ko dekhne lagta hai. Anu bhi der na karte huye Viren ko apni aur khinch leti hai aur uske pair mai khadi ho jati hai aur sidhe apne honth ko uske honth mai rakh deti hai, Anu ki ye harkat se Viren to bilkul jaam sa gaya tha.
Anu kuch der tak Viren ko kiss karti rahi fir Viren se alag hoke khadi ho gayi, Viren to baas Anu ko herani se dekh raha tha...
Anu : aab apko pata lag gaya na ki mai bachi nahi hun...ye kehke ander bhag jati hai....
Per Viren to uss yehsas se bahar hi nahi aaraha tha. Viren ko to abhi bhi Anu ki sanse mehsus ho rahi thy, tabhi wanha Raj bhi aagaya aur Viren ke kandhe pe hath rakh diya to Viren Anu ke khyal se bahar aaya.
Raj : tujhe hi pehel karni hogi..baat tujhe hi pehle karni hogi usse....
Viren jiska dimag mai abhi bhi Anu hi ghum rahi thy.... Wo Raj ki baate samajh nahi paya ki wo kis baare mai baat kar raha hai...
Viren : kis..kiske sath....
Raj : Kabir se..aur kis se....
Viren : han..han..chal karta hun baat usse....
Viren aur Raj dono ander aate hai to Kabir Viren ko andekha karta hai to Viren kitchen mai jata hai aur frizer se ek Bowl le kar aata hai, aur Kabir ke aage kar deta hai aur samne khada ho jata hai.
Kabir dekhta hai to samne kheer thy wo bhi thandi jesse usse pasand tha.
Kabir gusse se khada hoke Viren ko dekhta hai,
Kabir : kamine..tujhe pata hai ki kese kise manna hai..per ye galat hai..mai kheer to kha lunga kyun ki itne dino baad tere hath ka kheer khane ko mil rahi hai per naraz rahunga mai.....
Kabir kheer khane lagta hai fir khate khate hi ro padta hai aur Viren ke gale lag jata hai. Viren ki bhi ankhe naam ho jati hai. Rohan aur Raj ki bhi...fir aage badh ke Raj aur Rohan un dono ko bhi gale lag jate hai, Ruhi aur Zara in charo dosto ko gale lage huye dekhti rehte hai aur khush bhi thy, per Anu ka kuch ata pata nahi tha.
Anu to apne kamre mai dubak ke bethi huyi thy aur jo kar ke aayi thy uske baare mai soch rahi thy.
Anu (apne mai) : ye kya kar diya maine..per wo bhi to har samay bacha bachi karte rehte hai mai koi bachi nahi rahi..aab pata lag gaya hoga aur wese bhi kiss hi to kari hai aur puri life unke sath rehna hai unko hi kiss karni hai....baas ye saab sochte huye sarma rahi thy....
Charo dost ek dusre ka sath pake bahut khush thy aur baato mai lage huye thy. Ruhi aur Zara bahut der se inko dekh rahe thy, jaab inn dono se aur bardast nahi hua to Ruhi ne jor se bolti hai,
Ruhi : sabhi baas ladkiyo ko hi dosh dete hai ki jaab milti hai to baate hi khatam nahi hoti hai aur saab kuch bhul jati hai, per idhar dekho charo mil kya gaye hame hi bhul gaye, ham dono bhi yanha hai aur hamari tisri pata nahi kanha bhag gayi per ham to hai na....
Raj uthke jata hai aur Zara aur Ruhi ka hath pakad se sabhi ke bicho bich lake betha deta hai aur Anu ko bhi awaj deta hai, Anu bhi Raj ki awaj pake niche aajati hai per Viren ke taraf dekhti bhi nahi hai, Raj Anu ko bhi Zara aur Ruhi ke paas betha deta hai.
Raj : mere liye tum teeno hi bahut mayene rakhte ho. Mere yaar meri jindegi hai to mere jinne ki wajah Anu hai maa papa ke jane ke baad iske liye hi ji raha tha. Aur meri dhadkan tum ho Ruhi jaab se tumhe dekha tha baas dil tumhare liye hi dhadakta hai.
Aur Zara tum meri sabse achi dost rahi 3 saalo mai har samay mera sath diya aur mere dost ki jindegi ban gayi aur meri bhabhi aur aab to aur mayene rakhti ho kyunki bhabhi maa jesi hoti hai to aaj se wanhi jagah hogi tumhari baas maa ki jagah behen ko dunga kyun ki teri beijati bhi karni hai aage bhi..hehehe....
Aab pata chala ki kya ho tum saab....
Rohan : ye saab chod ye bata ki tum dono ne ek dusre ko bol diya...
Anu : han bhai..Ruhi di apke dil ki dhadkan kesse....
Zara : Rajveer..Ruhi ke liye apka dil dhadakta hai kya baat hai...
Kabir : ye saab mere karan hi hua hai warna ye dono to pata nahi kaab bolte...
Fir Kabir sabko hotel wala kissa bata deta hai to Ruhi uth ke bhag jati hai....
Raj : kya kar rahe ho yaar...
Raj bhi Ruhi ke piche chala jata hai aur Rohan bhi Zara le paas aake uska hath pakad ke garden ki aur jata hai to Kabir bol padta hai....
Kabir : tum dono kanha chale....
Rohan : teri behen ko meri jindegi mai uski ehmiyat batane....
Kabir hasne lagta hai, Anu to baas Viren ko andekha kar rahi thy to Kabir ke paas jake khadi ho gayi..per Anu ki taqdeer kahiye ya Viren ki taqdeer ussi time Kabir ko koyi call aajati hai to wo uthke upar kamre mai chala jata hai.
Anu dekhti hai ki Viren usse hi dekh raha hai to jaldi se niche ke sabse karib wale kamre mai bhag jati hai aur wanha per khidki ki aur chehra karke khadi ho jati hai.
Viren bhi Anu ke piche jata hai aur kamre mai jake darwaja dhire se band kar deta hai.
viren janna chahta tha ki Anu ne yesa kyun kiya..kya chal raha hai Anu ke dimag mai..wo Kabir aur Anu ko leke bhi thoda confused tha. Per yese Anu ke achanak kiss se dimag hi band ho gaya tha uska. Wo apna sara sawal ka jawab Anu se chahta tha.
Nice update...
 
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