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Sci-FI Tha Prince of Universe

Great story , Thik thak hi , story close kardo , Nice story

  • Story thik nhai hi

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Achi hi

    Votes: 5 55.6%
  • Close kardo

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Great story

    Votes: 4 44.4%

  • Total voters
    9
  • This poll will close: .

Nevil singh

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Character introduction ............

Hero............ Raj Thakur ............. ( Hero of story duniya me sb se pyar karte hi aur jindagi inki Bhen hi Priya us ke ik bar khne se ye apni jan vhi de sakte hi )

Sister of hero ............. Priya Singh Thakur............. ( Bhut achi hi padhne me bhut achi hi I . C . S . E board ki class 10 me national topper hai Indian certificate secondary education ne inke study ka half kharcha Uthata hi aur baki half kon uthata hi ye story me pata chalega )

Mother of hero .............. Shalini Singh Thakur ............ ( Inki death ho gayi hi inke Pita ka nam tha Raj bir Singh Rathod jo ki bhut bade biasness man the )

Father of hero ................. Raja Thakur ..................... ( India ke top 10 biasness man me ek hi ye inki company ka name hi A . K group of industries Pvt. Ltd Ye apne bete se nafrat karte hi )


Step Mother of Hero ............. Kabya Thakur ............... ( Ye pehle Raja Thakur ki personal assistant Thi company mein
bad me Raja se shadi kr li dikhne me bhut achi hi)


Step Sister of Hero............. Anjali Singh Thakur ............. ( Ye Kabya Thakur aur Raja Thakur ki beti hi Raj se nafrat karti hi
Padhne me inteligent aur khubsurat hi )


Brother of step mother ................. Sakti kumar ............. ( Duniya me ager harami logo ka compatition ho jay to ye bhai sahab 1 st number pr jarur ayege inka ik beta hi inka kam hi aram se rhna khana pina aur moj udana mhengi - mhengi chijo ka bhut shok hi)

Son of Sakti kumar ................ kartik Kumar ........... ( Ye duniya ke second sabse bade harami insan hi kyoki 1st wala to inka baap hi na hahaha inke bare me story me janege )

Raju ............... Friends of hero

kirti ................ Girl friend of Raju .......... (hero inhe apni behan manta hi )
Damdaar sahib
 

Nevil singh

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Update number..........One ( 1 )

Mere baap ka nam hi Raja Thakur khne ke liye
India ke sbse bade biasness king me inka nam ata hi
Ye aur meri maa ik hi school me padhte the
ye bhi amir ghar se the aur meri maa vhi
pehle dono ache dost the lekin bad me pyar ho

gya aur dono ne shadi kr li kuch salo ke bad me
peda hua dono bhut kush ho gye aur fir hui

jan Priya mere baap ka biasness vhi acha chl
rha tha fir ek din meri maa ka car ki
break fail ho jane se death ho gyi mere
baap ne iska karn meri choti behen ko man
lia aur use bhut bura brtaw karte

the fir ek din unhone apni personal assistant
jiska nam Kabya tha usse shadi kr li
aur ghar le aye uske sath uska bhai vhi
ghar a gya jo ki bhut harami insan

tha kabya ne meri aur meri bhen ki jindagi narak
bana kr rakh di jb me apne baap se uski
sikayat karta to wo khte aur maro
is manush ladki ko Isi ke karn

meri Shalini mugjhe chod kr chali gyi
ese hi kuch mahine bet gye fir aya wo din jb Subha
meri nend khuli to mene dekha ki mera baap
meri behan ko kahi le ja rha hi aur meri bahan
ro rhi hi

mujhe ye dekh bhut gussa aye
me.......... Dad app Priya ki kha le ja rhe hi
Dad ( gusse se ) .......... Is manush ko sada sada ke liye
apni jindagi se utha kr fekh rha hu tum chup
chap apne kamre me jao
nhai to mujh se bura koi nhai hoga

me ......... Nhai dad me app ko nhai jane dunga
maa mujh se hrdm khti rhti thi ki
apni behan ka hmesa khayal rakhna

Sakti kumar ............ Dekha jija ji me kahta tha ki
is sapole ko na Palo ajj rang dikha dia apna
app se juban Lada raha hi avi se jb thoda bada ho jayega
pata nhai kya krega ye

kabya ............ Ha ji Bhiya sahi kh rhe hi jaban to dekho abi se itni lambi ho gyi hi me to khti hu
ise vhi is manush ke sath anath aashram chod
Awo

Me ........ Nhai meri behan anath aashram nhai jayegi
wo anath nhai hi uska bhai avhi jinda hi me vhi dekhta
hu kon use anath aashram le jata hi mere rhte hue
Meri baat sun kr mere baap ko bhut gussa aya

Dad ( gusse se ) jao tum bhi chle jao apni is manush
behan ko lekar dubara kabhi apni sakal na dikhana
mujhe

me ......... ( Rote hue ) ager app ka yahi phesla
hi to thik hi

uske baad mene apni behan meri jan Priya ko
liya aur ghar se nikal gya
mere ghar se jane se sabse jada kush Sakti
kumar tha aur kabya
sare noukar vhi dukhi the laki

wo kuch kr nhai sakte the

me ghar se nikal kr bahr chal dia mujhe kuch samajh me nhai a rha tha kha jau aur kaha na jau
us samay meri umar lagbhag 10 year ki thi aur Priya ki
Lagbhag 6 sal

jb me hua tha to mere baap ka bisness bhut age nikal
gya aur jb se meri behan hui thi tab se unka
Bisness me bhut nukshan hone lage the is
liye mera baap meri behan ko
bilkul pyar nhai karta tha

meri behan ko bukhar tha maa jb
doctor ko bulane gayi to unki mout ho gayi
tbse mera baap aur jada nafrat karne laga tha

ME apni choti jan Priya ko apni baho me
lakar chala ja rha tha
mujhe ye nhai pata tha ki mujhe jana kaha hi
bs me ye nhai chahta tha ki meri behan ko

koi anath khe

jate jate mujhe laga ki meri jan bhukhi ho
gayi hogi to mene dekha ki bagal me hi ik dukan

hi me us dukan pr gaya

me ......... Chacha thoda dudh milega kya meri behan
bhut bukhi hi

Dukandar ........ Pese hi kya tere pas
me .......... Nhai chacha
Dukandar ( gusse se ) ........... Chal ht yaha se pata nhai kaha kaha se a jate hi
bhikhari kahi ke
uski baat sun kr mujhe laga ki jau aur uska
sina chir dil nikal lu


Priya ............ Pyare bhau mujhe bhukh lagi hi
meri ki baat sun kr jese laga kisi ne
kalega jala dia hi
ajj meri behan ko bukh lagi hi aur ye duniya wale

mera baap bs dekh rhe hi me vhi in sb ko
Brbad kr dunga

me ........ Bs meri gudiya Rani jan thodi der aur fir me tujhe khana dunga

ankho se pani gir rha tha ager ajj koi khta ki
mujhe dudh ke badle tumhara khun chahiye
to me use dugna de deta ta

me soch rha tha b kya karu kaha se lau
dudh apni jan ke liye
mene apne hath pr dekha to meri ugli me hire
ki ik ring thi meri jeb me pata nhai kese lakin

2000 ke kuch rupaye the
mujhe laga syad kamla maa ne diye honge
wo vhi bechari ajj mere liye wo bhgwan se kam nhai
thi

kamla maa meri dai maa thi jo ki mera
Dyan rakhti thi bechari mujhse bhut pyar karti
thi mene socha ki in rupayo se mujhe
bacha kr rakhne honge

me jake ik dukan se dudh lekr aya
aur use apni behan ko pilaya
jb usne kaha ki pyare bhau meri
bhukh mit gayi hi to
me bhut kush hua
Fantastic update mitr
 

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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hind section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.



Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 

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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).


"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.



Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader 750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 
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