Thriller THE BODYGUARD (Completed)

[Swaraj]

Congratulations for new story
Fabulous update bhai

Thanks a lot bro
Arjun ka adventure soch se bhi bada hai, uske journey ko is story me dekhiye
Saath rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

बन्धुवर इस नयी कहानी के लिए शुभकामनायें।
कहानी का विषय अत्यन्त रोचक प्रतीत हो रहा है।
अगले भाग की प्रतीक्षा है।
धन्यवाद ???????

Dhanyawad mitr
Kahani aur rochak banegi, aur arjun ke shaurya gatha ko is kahani me dekhiye aur apna keemti raay zaroor batate rahiye

 

[Punnu]

Congrats brother for new story..
Start bdiya hai bhai... ek taraf Arjun ka senior Shahid or bechara ro bhi nhi sakta ..or kuch bol bhi nhi skta.. ..lgta hai Arjun apne dost kam bhai ki maut ka badla lene gya hai...pr wo shayad bhul gya aise time Josh nhi hosh se kaam lena chahiye...or to bhai dekhte hai aage kya hota hai..

 

[Swaraj]

Congrats brother for new story..
Start bdiya hai bhai... ek taraf Arjun ka senior Shahid or bechara ro bhi nhi sakta ..or kuch bol bhi nhi skta.. ..lgta hai Arjun apne dost kam bhai ki maut ka badla lene gya hai...pr wo shayad bhul gya aise time Josh nhi hosh se kaam lena chahiye...or to bhai dekhte hai aage kya hota hai..

Sabse pehle story se judne ke liye thanks bro
Arjun ka falsh back aayega aur usse pata chalega uske pyaar aur uske bhai jaisa senior ke saath jo bhai chara tha wo kaise hilakar rakh diya arjun jaise ek commando ko
Apne sahi kaha Josh me hosh khona kya hota hai wo shayad arjun ko pata chalega lekin uske gusse ko ab sirf laashein hi shan't kar sakti hai wo bhi un terrorist ki laashein jisne shahid kiya un logo se jinse lagav tha arjun ko
Uska safar lamba chalega
Saath rahiye

 

[Ristrcted]

"firing toli salami shastra" chillaya gaya

Aur insas rifles uth gaye haathon me, bigul baj gaya aur wo dhun koi shaurya dhun nahi thi
Thi gam aur udasi ki dhun, apne saathi ko khone ki dhun

GHAI GHAI GHAI GHAI

bandookon ne salami di, lekin shayad kam pad gayi, shaheedon ke

"salami toli, shok shastra"
Bandook jhuk gayi aur wapas neeche chali gayi sabhi army men ke jo wahan funeral drill me the

Baarish tez ho rahi thi, Eid ka din tha aaj aur aaj hi ke din kabristan me mitti nasib ho rahi thi ek khush kismat ko
Shayad khuda ka pyara banda tha

Arjun wahi khada tha, sab kuch uske Saamne ho raha tha, sab kuch uske Saamne hua tha jab uske Saamne shaheed hua tha major shabbir khan

"khali kar"

Fir se Bandook ki awaazein aur poore ke poore insas rifles ke magazines ko khali kiya gaya

"baju rakh"

Bandook wapas apne jagah ho gaye

Noor bhabhi roye ja rahi thi aur mushkil se khadi thi. Salute kar rahi thi apne shahid shauhar ko

Arjun ne dekha noor bhabhi ki aur, shayad abhi aur rona hai unko. Pyaar jo karti thi apne pati se
Imran chota hai abhi. Shayad use pata bhi nahi ki uske papa ne kaise 6 terrorist ko apne Bandook se udaya hai

Doosre din arjun ne major shabbir ki uniform li aur noor ko dene ke liye taiyyar hua. Lekin noor arjun ko dekhkar apne aap ko rone se na rok saki

Uniform liye khada arjun jaise hi noor ke Saamne aaya wo fafak fafak kar ro padi

"mujhe mera pati wapas la do bhaiyya" noor rote hue boli aur rote hue baith gayi aur arjun ke pair pakad liye usne

"tumhe un sabhi lamhon ka wasta, us rakhi ka wasta jo maine tumhari kalai par baandh thi, please bhaiyya mere pati ko wapas la do, mai jee nahi paungi unke bina" noor ko do army walo ne uthaya aur le gaye jabki arjun but bankar khada tha, ro bhi nahi sakta tha wo
Kiske liye rota wo??? Apne senior aur bade bhai shabbir khan ke shahadat par rota ya rota inayat ke shahid hone par

Uska sab kuch cheen gaya ek jhatke me us din

"sir" army ke ek Lance naik ne arjun se wo uniform le liye
Lekin fir bhi arjun wahi khada raha
Jaise pathhar ka ban gaya ho.
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Subah ki chai ki chuski lete hue do log baithe the aaj 10 para sf ke heavily guard jungle ke area me

"Vikram dekh mai ek major general ke haisiyat se nahi ya samdhi hone ke wajah se nahi balki ek dost hone ki wajah se bol raha hoon, apne bete ko samajh warna der na ho jaye" praveen kumar ne vikram puri ke kandhe par haath rakhte hye bola

Colonel puri chupchap apne chai ki pyali par chammach se sugar ko milane laga

"mai wahi soch Raha hoon sir, short tempered hai aur apta nahi kyun lekin Indian army shayad uske liye hai hi nahi" Vikram puri soch me doob gaye

"operation was successful Vikram no doubt about it lekin. Casualties bhi hui hai
Hamara ek honhar major shaheed hua hai, aur Saath me wo ladki inayat wo bhi kamal ki thi.im amazed itni choti umra me uski maturity dekhne layak thi" praveen bola

"Haan sir, us ladki ki maturity arjun ke. Mukable dugni thi, arjun se har field me excel karti thi, agar aaj hamare Saath hoti to shayad arjun aur wo shaadi bhi kar lete lekin..." bolte bolte ruk gaye vikram
Dard chehre par dukh raha hai. Praveen ne aur bolna thik nahi samjha

" thik hai mai chalta hoon Vikram"praveen uthkar khada hua

Tabhi call aya vikram puri ke phone par

"jai hind bolo" Vikram me phone uthakar jawab diya

Lekin uske baad jo suna vikram ne use sunte hi chair se uthakar khada ho gaya

"WHAT???" Vikram chillaya

"kya hua??" praveen ne poocha

"Arjun ek ak 47 aur magazine ke saath gayab hai" Vikram ne praveen ko bola to uske haath se chai ki cup gir gayi sunkar

Jyada kuch pata nahi chalta pahle update se par itna pata chala Arjun ne abhi abhi bahut kuch khoya hai aur ab wo badla lene jaa raha hai ye dekhna mazzedar hoga kaise leta hai badla....

Great update

 

[Swaraj]

Jyada kuch pata nahi chalta pahle update se par itna pata chala Arjun ne abhi abhi bahut kuch khoya hai aur ab wo badla lene jaa raha hai ye dekhna mazzedar hoga kaise leta hai badla....

Great update

Story se judne ke liye thanks bro
Lekin msi pehle characters ka intro isliye nahi deta kyunki msi chahta hoon characters apni kahani khud bole, khud apni pehchaan banaye. Wo ya hero ho ya villain ya supporting character ho ya side character
Isliye meri stories me aapko intro nahi milegi
Arjun ki story hai, ek para sf commando ki
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Arjun ke is safar se judne ke liye thanks
Saath rahiye

 

[Mbindas]

bhai new story ke liye. Bohot hi interesting lag rahi hai ye story aur Indian army ke upar based hai to aur expectations badh gaye hai jaise agent thi.

Pehle hi update me dardnak mahol bana diya.

 

[Swaraj]

bhai new story ke liye. Bohot hi interesting lag rahi hai ye story aur Indian army ke upar based hai to aur expectations badh gaye hai jaise agent thi.

Pehle hi update me dardnak mahol bana diya.

Thanks bro sabse pehle story se judne ke liye thanks.
Sahi kaha Indian army ke para sf ke ek commando ki kahani hai
Story ki shuruat dardnak hote hue bhi story aage thrill, action aur romance se bharpoor hai
Saath rahiye

 

[Naik]

for new thread
excellent start brother
Thanks for lovely update

 

[Swaraj]

for new thread
excellent start brother
Thanks for lovely update

Thanks bro
Story se judne ke liye bohut bohut thanks
Arjun ka safar shuru ho chuka hai
Ek commando ke action ki kahani start ho chuki hai
Saath rahiye