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bhai padh ke comment kar ke jarur batana ki kaisa laga.
waise abhi to kahani ki shuruat hi ho rahi hai aur charectar ko build kar raha hu. lekin agar kuch problem dikhe yaa kahi koi kami dikhe to jarur batana. agar feedback doge to mujhe bhi pata chalta rahega ki main kaisa likh raha hu.
thankyou for your support
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