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Thriller The worst mistake of the life
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Prologue - Ishwariya satta ho chahe insani duniya niyam aur kaydon ne dono hi ko baandh rakha hai . Chahe manav ho ya danav jo bhi is niyam ko todta hai use kudarat khud saja deti hai aur kabhi kabhi ye saja bahut jyada bhayankar hoti hai jisase bachna mushkil hi nahi namumkin hota hai .
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Update - 1
Trip to the jungle : An introductory update
Ghane jangal ko cheerti sadak raat ke andhere me barish me bheeg kar kisi balkhati nagin si katawdar aur chamakili lag rahi thi . Rat ke teesre prahar me ek white fortuner gadi apni charam raftar ko pakde jangal ka seena cheerti huyi apne gantwya ki ore bhagi ka rahi thi .
Gadi me do ladke aur do ladkiya baithe huye the . Vikas , Sanju ,
Kuhu aur Neeti . Ye charon aapas me behad achchhe dost hone ke sath sath padosi bhi the . Sanju ke pita ke paas beshumar daulat thi to wahi Vikas ke pita ke paas satta thi . Rajniti ke galiyare me unka sikka chalta tha . Pita ji logon ko chahe wakt na mila ho apne daulat shohrat ka bhog karne ka par unki aulad poora maja le rahi thi .
Ladkiya bhi kam nahi thi . Dono hi ko upar wale apsaraon jaisa saundarya khule haathon se pradan kiya tha . Neeti air hostess thi to wahi Kuhu modelling ki duniya ka ubharta chaheta chehra thi .
Charon is biyawan jangle me Sanju ka birthday manane aaye the . Jangle ka bhayanak roop dekh Kuhu ke alawa baki ke teeno aseem khushi me doobe the par Kuhu darr se dohari ho rahi thi . Yanan ka andhera aur sannata dekh uske tirpan kaamp rahe the .
" Mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai Sanju " . Kuhu ki awaaj ki kapkapahat ko spashth taur par mahsoos kiya ja sakta tha .
" Ohh Come on Kuhu be brave yaar , dekho Neeti bhi to hai . Tumko hi itna dar kyu lag raha hai . " Sanju ne Kuhu ko samjhane ki nakam koshish ki . Vikas teeno ki baat ko ansuna kar ke ek tak jungle ki ore dekh raha tha .
" Vikas tu kis soch me dooba hua hai . "
" mujhe ye jungle Haunted lag raha hai . "
" isi liye to yahan aaye hai ." Sanju ne batteesi nikal di .
" Sanju tujhe to mai Delhi me dekh loongi par ye bata tune mujhe pahle kyu nahi bataya tha ki jungle bhootiya hai . " Kuhu gusse me badbadai .
" bata deta to tu aati hi nahi " Sanju ke jawab par Kuhu ko chhod baki sab has pade . Baaton hi baaton me wo log jungle ke beechon beech sthit purane guest house par pahunch gaye jo khud ek bhootiya haweli se kam nahi tha aur prakash ke naam par kuchh lalten type battiyan jal rahi thi . Jise dekh Kuhu ka dar dugna ho gaya .
" Mai yahan stay nahi kar sakti hoon Sanju. " Kuhu ne gadi se utarne se bhi mana kar diya .
" Ok chal jungle me machan banate hain ."
" mai tujhe dekh loongi. "
" isi liye to aaye hain yaha n par ." Vikas aur Sanju ne aankhon hi aankhon me ishara kiya . Vikas ne badh kar gadi ka door khola aur Sanju ne kheench kar Kuhu ko peeth par laad liya aur charon guest house ke andar chale gaye .
Trip to the jungle : An introductory update
Ghane jangal ko cheerti sadak raat ke andhere me barish me bheeg kar kisi balkhati nagin si katawdar aur chamakili lag rahi thi . Rat ke teesre prahar me ek white fortuner gadi apni charam raftar ko pakde jangal ka seena cheerti huyi apne gantwya ki ore bhagi ka rahi thi .
Gadi me do ladke aur do ladkiya baithe huye the . Vikas , Sanju ,
Kuhu aur Neeti . Ye charon aapas me behad achchhe dost hone ke sath sath padosi bhi the . Sanju ke pita ke paas beshumar daulat thi to wahi Vikas ke pita ke paas satta thi . Rajniti ke galiyare me unka sikka chalta tha . Pita ji logon ko chahe wakt na mila ho apne daulat shohrat ka bhog karne ka par unki aulad poora maja le rahi thi .
Ladkiya bhi kam nahi thi . Dono hi ko upar wale apsaraon jaisa saundarya khule haathon se pradan kiya tha . Neeti air hostess thi to wahi Kuhu modelling ki duniya ka ubharta chaheta chehra thi .
Charon is biyawan jangle me Sanju ka birthday manane aaye the . Jangle ka bhayanak roop dekh Kuhu ke alawa baki ke teeno aseem khushi me doobe the par Kuhu darr se dohari ho rahi thi . Yanan ka andhera aur sannata dekh uske tirpan kaamp rahe the .
" Mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai Sanju " . Kuhu ki awaaj ki kapkapahat ko spashth taur par mahsoos kiya ja sakta tha .
" Ohh Come on Kuhu be brave yaar , dekho Neeti bhi to hai . Tumko hi itna dar kyu lag raha hai . " Sanju ne Kuhu ko samjhane ki nakam koshish ki . Vikas teeno ki baat ko ansuna kar ke ek tak jungle ki ore dekh raha tha .
" Vikas tu kis soch me dooba hua hai . "
" mujhe ye jungle Haunted lag raha hai . "
" isi liye to yahan aaye hai ." Sanju ne batteesi nikal di .
" Sanju tujhe to mai Delhi me dekh loongi par ye bata tune mujhe pahle kyu nahi bataya tha ki jungle bhootiya hai . " Kuhu gusse me badbadai .
" bata deta to tu aati hi nahi " Sanju ke jawab par Kuhu ko chhod baki sab has pade . Baaton hi baaton me wo log jungle ke beechon beech sthit purane guest house par pahunch gaye jo khud ek bhootiya haweli se kam nahi tha aur prakash ke naam par kuchh lalten type battiyan jal rahi thi . Jise dekh Kuhu ka dar dugna ho gaya .
" Mai yahan stay nahi kar sakti hoon Sanju. " Kuhu ne gadi se utarne se bhi mana kar diya .
" Ok chal jungle me machan banate hain ."
" mai tujhe dekh loongi. "
" isi liye to aaye hain yaha n par ." Vikas aur Sanju ne aankhon hi aankhon me ishara kiya . Vikas ne badh kar gadi ka door khola aur Sanju ne kheench kar Kuhu ko peeth par laad liya aur charon guest house ke andar chale gaye .
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