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Fantasy TMKOC - Ek Nayi Pahal

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To Jaisa Ki App Title Se Samajh Hi Chuke Hoge Ki Yeh Kahani jane mane show Tarak Mehta ka ooltah chashma pe adharit hai, apko logo ko sare characters ke bare me to pata hi hoga.

To chaliye shuru karte hai,

To yaha mohol bada gambhir tha, kyuki ye hospital tha, jaha pe icu me Bhide leta hua tha, aur uske ward ke bahar sare Gokuldham ke gents khade the, aur vaha pe madhvi aur sonu bhi the,

Kyuki Bhide ka aur sakharam ka accident ho gaya tha,

Aur madhvi bohot pareshan thi, aur sab log bhagvane se pray kar rahe the ki Bhide ko kuch na ho,

Aur phir do teen ghante baad doctor ate hai aur reportsabhi jents ko dikhate hai,

Aur aab society me, sabhi jents ghar aa jate hai, sivaay popatlal aur hathi bhai ke Kyuki vo vaha pe agar koi jarurat pade is liye thehre the,

Sab aurate Tarak ke ghar se bahar ate hai, aur sab ke chehre par tension tha, ki kya report ayi hai,

Aur tabhi Anjali tark ke pas jake usse puchti hai,

Anjali : Tarak kya hua Bhide huai ko, kya kaha doctor ne ?

Ye sunte hi sabhi ke chehre pe udasi cha jati hai,

Aur phir Sodhi report sunata hai, jisme likha hua tha, ki Sodhi kamar ke niche pura paralysed ho gaya hai, aur uska ilaj sirf Foreign country me hi ho sakta hai,

Aur yaha sab tention me aa jate hai,

1 Saal Bad

Ab yaha sab badal gaya tha, Bhide yaha nahi tha, vo America gaya tha, kyuki Jethalal aur society ke sare logo ne Bhide ke ilaj ke liye madat ki thi, aur uske sath popat lal bhi vaha gaya tha,

Aur vaha kisi varsha naam ki ladki ke sath uski shadi ho jati hai,

Aur yaha society ke meeting me madhvi ko naya secretary banaya jata hai,

Aur Abdul ko secretary assistant banaya jata hai,

Is sal aur bhi kuch bura hota hai, kisi bimari ke karan dr.hathi ki mrityu ho jati hai, Jiske Bad Komal Aur Goli Apne Nani ke pas rehne chale jate hai, aur unka flat Abdul ko diya jata hai, aur ha Bagha ki aur bawri ki shadi ho jati jiske bad vo aur natukaka Karry ka flat kharid lete hai emi pe, Yeh to bas ek prologue tha update jaldi ayega watl for it and give me Suggestions if you have any.
 

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Hello Guys I Hope You Like This Story,
But I Have A Question For You Guys, Does Anyone Have Any Off Or Link Of " TMKOC - Ek Naya Andaz " Story Were " Anjali Was Whore And Babita Was Living In Gada House "
 

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Naye Jivan Ka Naya Intro :-

Gada Family :-

Jethalal : Ye To Serial Ke Hero Hai, Aap Toh Jante Hi Honge Inhe, Yeh Vaise Hi Hai Jaise The, But Inka Daily Life Thodi Change Ho Gai Hai, Pehle Bhide Tha Pareshan Karne Aab Bhaga Aur Natukak Hai,

Champak lal : Yeh Bhi Ek Dam Serial Me Vaisa Hi Hai, But Thoda Jyada Hi Pelne Lage hai, Are bhai gyan Pelne Lage hai,

Daya : Are Inke Bare Me Age Baat Karenge,

Tapu : Ye Abhi Baccha Nahi Raha Bada Ho Chuka Hai, College Me Jata Hai, Aur Ha Ek BF Bhi, Nahi Sonu Nahi Koi Aur Vo Apko Age Pata Chalega,

Bhide Family :-

Atmaram : Yeh To Foreign Me Hai,
Madhvi : Jabse Bhide Foreign Gaya Tha Tabse Tut Chuki Thi Aur Aise Kaise To Khudko Sambhala hai, Aur Logo ka karza hai, aur Vaha Bhide ka foreign me rehna ka kharcha is ke liye Raat din kaam karti hai,
Sonu : Isne Bhi Apni Padhai Bada di thi, ki scholarship mile aur iske maa se chup chup ke ye morden generation ki tarah online works karti hai,

Sodhi Family :-

Sodhi : Yeh To hamesha ki tarah party shatty ke hi mood me rehta hai, Aur Isko to apni Roshan aur Roshan ki chut aur gand ki hi padi rehti hai,

Roshan : Isko Bohot Bura Laga Tha, Ki Bhide Ko Chot Ayi, Kyuki Isi Ke Vajah Se Chot Ayi Thi, vo apko kahani me aage pata chalega,

Gurucharan : Yeh Aaj kal Jyadatar Samay Gurudvare me hi bitaya hai, Kyuki Tapu ke pas uski gf hai, aur Pinku ke pas sonu, Aur Iske Pas Kya Hai Ganta,

Mehta Family :-

Same As Always

Hathi Family :-

Well Jabse hathi bhai gaye the, dono maa bete jaise Tut se gaye the, isi Vajah se vo mumbai chod kar apne mayke rehne chali gai aur goli ko bhi sath le gai,

Abdul :-

Yeh ab Hathi bhai ke flat me rehta hai, Madhvi to sirf naam ki secretary hai, sara kaam toh yeh karta hai,

Bagha Family :-

Bagha : Jabse Iski Shadi Hui Hai, Ye Kisi Aur Hi Duniya Me Rehta Hai, Khush Aur Sirf Khush,

Bawari : Same As Bagha Khush Hi Khush,

Natwarlal : Bhai Ye Jyada Khush Nahi Rehta Kyuki Kabhi Kabhi Koi Bhi Kaam Ho To Jethalal Ise Ghar Bula Leta hai, Aur Dusri Baat Bagha Aur Bawari Toj Raat Ko Jor Jor Se Sex Karte Hai Jisse Isko Problem ( Jalan ) Hoti Hai.

Popatlal family :

Shweta : Popat Ki With Intro Age Milega,


sorry vo intro likhna bor lag rah tha is liye aisa likha hai vaise kahani me to sab ke bare me detail me pata chal hi jayega,
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Aur haa age apke pas kisi aur character ke liye koi suggestion hai to batana
 
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Chinturocky

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Plot interesting hai, bas ise dusaron ki tarah ek Sex story mat Banana.
 

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Great update something different keep writing
 

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Ding Dong Jethalal Ke Darvaje Ki Ghanti Koi Baja Raha Tha,

Jethalal Nind Se uthate Huye : Are Aa Raha Hu..

Aur jake darvaja kholta hai, Aur Samne Bawri,

Jethalal : Bawri Tu Yaha Vo Bhi Subha Subha

Bawri : Ji Sethalal ji, vo daya sethani ji ne kaha tha ki apke aur chachaji ke liye nashta aur khane ka dhyan rakhu,

J : Are Tujhe Tention Leni Ki Zarurat Nahi Hai, ( Mhnn kay ka Dhyan, Bichare pehle jab bhi daya bahar jati thi to babuta ji ke hatho ka vo swadisht khana milta tha, aur ab )

B : Meethalal ji me andar ayu,

J : Ye Kisko Boli Tu Meethalal, Jethalal Hai Vo Jethalal, 3 mahine ho gayi hai, yaha Gokuldham society me ake abhi tak naam thik se nahi leti,

B : apne kano ko pakdte huye, sorry chethalal ji,

J : bhadkte huye, Bawri Tu....

Aur tabhi Champak, Natwarlal aur bagha vaha ate hai,

C : Ye jethiya, kyu chilla raha hai bichari Bawri beti pe,

J : Dekhiye na bapuji, jab dekho tab dekho tab mera naam ulta leti hai,

C : are tujhe to samhj me ata haina ki tujhe bula rahi hai bus to phir,

N : Yes, Sethij, Bapuji is right, practice make women's perfect,

J : Confuse hote huye, kya..

Bagha : Vo natukaka ye keh rahe hai ki, practice karte karte ho jayegi,

J : Are kab ho jayega, teen mahine ho gaye shadi ko abtak.. Jethalal ki bat kat te huye

C : ye jethiye, abhi rehne de chal Bawri beta hamare liye nashta layi hai,

J : Ji bapuji vo me nahake ata hu,

Aur Jethalal nashta karta hai aur teeno dukan ki taraf chale jate hai, apne car me, ha Jethalal ke pas suv hai, usko car chalani nahi ati thi, lekin jabse bagha society me shift hua hai, to usko driver ki hui job dedi,




Dopehar ka vakt, Sodhi house,

Roshan naha chuki thi, aur bhagwan se prathna kar rahi thi,

Roshan : mujhe maf kar do ji Bawa, us din agar mene bidhe bhai ko bahar ana bheja hota to, ajj vo hamare sath society me hote,




Aur Sham ho jati hai, sab soda voda pike ghar vapas aa gaye the,




Raat ke 11 baje the, Champaklal apne dost ke ghar se laut raha tha, to usko ekdam jor ki lagi, usse roka nahi ja raha tha is liye vo society ke garden me mutna chalu kar deta hai, tabhi use koi aurat society ke bahar jati hui dikhati hai, aur vo uska picha karta hai, aur vo aurat thodi age jati hai rod ki taraf jaha pe ek mehngi gadi khadi thi, aur vo usme baith jati hai, jab baith rahi thi tab uske muh se duptta hat jata hai, jisse Champak ko uska face Najar ata hai, aur vo hairan ho jata hai kivki oo aurat aur koi nahi madhvi thi,

to be continued...
 
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