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Naina

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Hahaha paison ki tangi ya phir koi aur khel hai iska to pata aage hi chalega... :D
Thanks naina ji :hug: :woohoo:

Wahi ayega ab... :D
Finally :sweat:

I know aap kidhar ishara kar rahe ho, lekin aap log hi kafi ho.. Vaise bhi 1st Part padna jaruri hai :D
ye huyi na baat... best suspense thrill horror writer... aur story ki kya kahne.. ek swag +attitude bemisal combo.. . ek level hoti hai har ek kirdaar ki.. jaise woh kirdaar, kirdaar na hoke realty mein hai :bow: .. aapse kuch sikhna chahiye baakio ko :bow:
 
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ye huyi na baat... best suspense thrill horror writer... aur story ki kya kahne.. ek swag +attitude bemisal combo.. . ek level hoti hai har ek kirdaar ki.. jaise woh kirdaar, kirdaar na hoke realty mein hai :bow: .. aapse kuch sikhna chahiye baakio ko :bow:

Madam, mera motiv hai jo mein likhta hu dil se likhta hu aur yahi umeed karta hun ki padne walon mein se 90% logon ka padne mein apna time dena vasool ho jaye. Baki ek likhne wala apne readers se writer banta hai and i have got gem of readers isliye mei bemisal nahi padne walle bemisal hai :bow: I welcomed everyone aur jo hai usme khush hai apun :D

Haweli pukar rahi hai ab apko :love:
 

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Madam, mera motiv hai jo mein likhta hu dil se likhta hu aur yahi umeed karta hun ki padne walon mein se 90% logon ka padne mein apna time dena vasool ho jaye. Baki ek likhne wala apne readers se writer banta hai and i have got gem of readers isliye mei bemisal nahi padne walle bemisal hai :bow: I welcomed everyone aur jo hai usme khush hai apun :D

Haweli pukar rahi hai ab apko :love:
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haweli ko aaj puri tarike se khangalni hai..search Operation mein ek ek kami hai.. chintu222 mochai gayab hai :D
 
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haweli ko aaj puri tarike se khangalni hai..search Operation mein ek ek kami hai.. chintu222 mochai gayab hai :D

Han bahut time se meri use baat nahi hui hai. Sab kaam dhande mein busy ho gaye vo bhi bsy ho gaya aur shayad vo ab yahan ata nahi us time meri story par hi ata tha vo mostly.
 
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Han bahut time se meri use baat nahi hui hai. Sab kaam dhande mein busy ho gaye vo bhi bsy ho gaya aur shayad vo ab yahan ata nahi us time meri story par hi ata tha vo mostly.
Btw woh baad mein bhi yahin tha....
 
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" fuck..... devdoot, where is our convoy "

" 15 seconds ETA sir, uske baad vo compound mein enter ho jayenge "

" kuch hi second hai tumhare pass isliye bevkufi chhodo aur in sab logon ko azad kar do "

" 8 second " jisne apni gardan civilian ke piche se hatai thi usne jab apni baat kahi to security wala officer sun kar achambit ho gaya kyun ki awaz audio tune hokar ayi thi jise vo puri tarah se badal gayi thi. Bank ke camera mein kaid ho rahi puri vardat vo apne telivision par dekh raha tha. Usne apni ghadi mein time dekha, " 3 second bas, convoy time par hoga " usne remote se change kiya aur bahar wale camere ki tassverein telivision par aa gayi.

Convoy ki ek ke baad ek gadiyan bank ke compund mein charon taraf aa ruki jiske andar armed forces maujud the. Bank ke samne ek police ki van khadi thi jispar sabhi ne apni banduk taan di. Police wan hone ke bavajud uspar charon taraf devdoot likha hua tha. " convoy is in command, read to engage " officer ne apne mic par kaha aur sabhi ek sath aage badhe.

Andar security chief ke member ko jab ye sunai diya to uske chehre par muskan cha gayi " devdoot, tum ab charon taraf se ghir chuke ho isliye behtar hoga ki tum in logon ko chhod kar surrender kar do " usne apni baat puri bhi nahi ki thi ki devdoot ne apna sar vapis civillian ke piche kar liya. Security cheif ko samajh nahi aya ki akhir ho kya raha hai, bahar se convoy ki military bas andar ane hi vali hogi aur ye log abhi tak apni jagah se hille tak nahi hai, akhir ye karna kya chahte hain?
Usne abhi itna hi socha tha ki use mehsus hua ki emergency wala signal band ho chuka hai aur uske band hote hi ek alaram baja jise sunte hi uski ankhein badi ho gayi.

" ye sach nahi ho sakta, who raise the lockdown alaram " vo chillaya par der ho chuki thi. Alaram bajte hi entrance gate aur emergency exit band hone shuru ho gaye. Matr 20 second dur tha convoy entrance lekin vo pahunch patte use pehle darwaja seal ho gaya. " gate's are closing " ek officer turant bola.

" officer gate kyun band ho rahe hain? andar kya ho raha hai?" formal kapdon mein gaddi se utarte hue ek admi bola jo is convoy ka commanding officer tha. Is sawal ka jawab ata use pehle jahan se compund shuru hota hai uske niche farsh mein se uski surroundings ko band karne ke liye fence bahar ane laga.

" ye kya ho raha hai... " officer ne jab dekha to vo hairan reh gaya. Us jagah par convoy ki kuch gadiyan khadi thi aur kuch officer bhi khade the. Officer to piche ho gaye lekin gadiyan nahi bach payi aur vo us fence mein fans gayi aur fence ke sath hi uppar jane lagi. " officer we are getting trap, close this shit, sun rahe ho tum, we are getting trap " andar ye baat sunte hi security chief ke mathe se pasina nikal aya. Uske sath sabhi staff ne ye awaz suni jise sun kar sab uski taraf dekhne lagi.

" how the fuck did this happen? " vo ek baar phir chillaya lekin agle hi pal use yaad aya ki abhi ek aur chiz baki hai jise sochte hi vo fauran apne mic par chillaya.

" officer don't touch the fence, don't " officer ne convey to kiya lekin bahut der ho gayi thi. Kuch officers ne fence ko katne ki tayari kar li thi. Aur jaise hi unhone apne cutter ko fence se joda usi waqt electric shock lagte hi vo buri tarah jal kar kankal ban gaye jisme dhuan nikalne laga. Ek sath kai officer ke sath aisa hi hua. Command in officer ye dekhte hi hakka-bakka reh gaya " stay away from the fence, stay away " vo pgalon jaisa chillaya. Fence ke piche khadi ikhati hui bheed piche ki taraf bhagi aur habad mein kai log niche gir kar kisi na kisi ke pairon ke niche aa gaye. " i need medic " vo apni gaddi ke mic par chillaya aur phir bahar aa khada hua, uske samne uske kayi officer zameen par jale hue pade the. 20 foot ka fence jisme najanekitne volt ka current daud raha tha aur vo sabhi uske is baar fans chuke the. Bank ke charon taraf is fence ki deewar khadi ho chuki thi. Apne officer ko khone ke baad uske chehre par aseem gussa tha aur vo usi gusse mein mic par cheekha.

" what the hell was that, officer kya kuch aur bhi baki hai jo tum hume baad mein bataoge, mere kai officer ki jali hui laash meri ankhon ke samne hai " officer ki baat sun kar security chief ki awaz hi nahi nikli " kya mujhe koi batayega ki andar kya ho raha hai, we are blind from here "

" its dev...doot sir " security chief ne haklate hue jawab diya to samne ek pal sanata chaya raha.

" tumhara dimag to kharab nahi ho gaya, ye baat tumne hume pehle kyun nahi batai damn it " command in officer ne apna mic utar diya aur apni team ke kuch officer ko apne pass bulaya. " we need strategy, enemy devdoot "

Camere mein ho rahi har vakye ko dekhte hue usne mode badla aur wapis screen par news dekhne laga. News mein abhi bhi kavya ki maut ke barre mein bataya jaa raha tha aur usi ke sath president ki security badha di gayi thi yahi news aa rahi thi. Lekin niche ab breaking news mein ane laga tha ki National Gold Bank mein hua hadsa, saare security protocal active kar diye gaye hain. Usne ghadi mein time dekha aur mode switch karke bank ke andar walle camera se badal diya.

" dekho mei abhi bhi keh raha hun ye sab chhod do kisi ko koi nuksan nahi hoga " security cheif ne bas itna hi bola.

" nuksan to tab bhi nahi hoga jab tum apni gun hamari taraf badha doge "

" tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai " security chief ke lehaze mein saaf na tha jise sunte hi unme se ek ne goliyan chalani shuru kar di aur phir dekha dekhi sabhi ne goliyan chalani shuru kar di. Sabhi security officer lait gaye kyun ki goliyun ka rukh unhi ki aaur tha. Bank ke andar chalti goliyun ka shor gunjne laga jo bahar tak jaa raha tha.

" officer kya ho raha hai andar, update me " command in officer chillaya.

" they are shooting sir "

" kill them then, kill them all "

" we can't sir, unhone apne aage civillians ko bandh rakha hai. Agar humne fire kiya to hume civillians ko marna hoga "

" no ... don't shoot, officer kisi bhi civillian ko kuch nahi hona chahie, you just stay put understand? "

" copy sir "

" i want everyone to search the entire area, koi to jagah hogi andar jane ki " itna bol kar vo apni gadi mein aya aur speaker utha kar bola " sir idhar bahut badi problem ho gayi hai, devdoot ne bank ko capture kar liya hai aur charon taraf bank ko fence se bandh kar diya hai, i repeat we are trap, mere kuch officer marre jaa chuke hain, i need more men, helicopters, i need all available units right here right now "

" copy that officer, lekin abhi hamara main focus president ki safety par hai. Ye situation robbery ki hai, i know you can handle this, talk to them, kya chahie unhe negotitate karo "

" aap samjhe nahi, mei fans chuka hun, i need some tools damn it "

" copy that officer, hum ek bird ka intezam kar sakte hain, baki aap ko hi sambhalna hai, over and out "

" fuck ..... devdoot " usne speaker wahin patka aur gaddi se bahar nikal aya.
 
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" fuck..... devdoot, where is our convoy "

" 15 seconds ETA sir, uske baad vo compound mein enter ho jayenge "

" kuch hi second hai tumhare pass isliye bevkufi chhodo aur in sab logon ko azad kar do "

" 8 second " jisne apni gardan civilian ke piche se hatai thi usne jab apni baat kahi to security wala officer sun kar achambit ho gaya kyun ki awaz audio tune hokar ayi thi jise vo puri tarah se badal gayi thi. Bank ke camera mein kaid ho rahi puri vardat vo apne telivision par dekh raha tha. Usne apni ghadi mein time dekha, " 3 second bas, convoy time par hoga " usne remote se change kiya aur bahar wale camere ki tassverein telivision par aa gayi.

Convoy ki ek ke baad ek gadiyan bank ke compund mein charon taraf aa ruki jiske andar armed forces maujud the. Bank ke samne ek police ki van khadi thi jispar sabhi ne apni banduk taan di. Police wan hone ke bavajud uspar charon taraf devdoot likha hua tha. " convoy is in command, read to engage " officer ne apne mic par kaha aur sabhi ek sath aage badhe.

Andar security chief ke member ko jab ye sunai diya to uske chehre par muskan cha gayi " devdoot, tum ab charon taraf se ghir chuke ho isliye behtar hoga ki tum in logon ko chhod kar surrender kar do " usne apni baat puri bhi nahi ki thi ki devdoot ne apna sar vapis civillian ke piche kar liya. Security cheif ko samajh nahi aya ki akhir ho kya raha hai, bahar se convoy ki military bas andar ane hi vali hogi aur ye log abhi tak apni jagah se hille tak nahi hai, akhir ye karna kya chahte hain?
Usne abhi itna hi socha tha ki use mehsus hua ki emergency wala signal band ho chuka hai aur uske band hote hi ek alaram baja jise sunte hi uski ankhein badi ho gayi.

" ye sach nahi ho sakta, who raise the lockdown alaram " vo chillaya par der ho chuki thi. Alaram bajte hi entrance gate aur emergency exit band hone shuru ho gaye. Matr 20 second dur tha convoy entrance lekin vo pahunch patte use pehle darwaja seal ho gaya. " gate's are closing " ek officer turant bola.

" officer gate kyun band ho rahe hain? andar kya ho raha hai?" formal kapdon mein gaddi se utarte hue ek admi bola jo is convoy ka commanding officer tha. Is sawal ka jawab ata use pehle jahan se compund shuru hota hai uske niche farsh mein se uski surroundings ko band karne ke liye fence bahar ane laga.

" ye kya ho raha hai... " officer ne jab dekha to vo hairan reh gaya. Us jagah par convoy ki kuch gadiyan khadi thi aur kuch officer bhi khade the. Officer to piche ho gaye lekin gadiyan nahi bach payi aur vo us fence mein fans gayi aur fence ke sath hi uppar jane lagi. " officer we are getting trap, close this shit, sun rahe ho tum, we are getting trap " andar ye baat sunte hi security chief ke mathe se pasina nikal aya. Uske sath sabhi staff ne ye awaz suni jise sun kar sab uski taraf dekhne lagi.

" how the fuck did this happen? " vo ek baar phir chillaya lekin agle hi pal use yaad aya ki abhi ek aur chiz baki hai jise sochte hi vo fauran apne mic par chillaya.

" officer don't touch the fence, don't " officer ne convey to kiya lekin bahut der ho gayi thi. Kuch officers ne fence ko katne ki tayari kar li thi. Aur jaise hi unhone apne cutter ko fence se joda usi waqt electric shock lagte hi vo buri tarah jal kar kankal ban gaye jisme dhuan nikalne laga. Ek sath kai officer ke sath aisa hi hua. Command in officer ye dekhte hi hakka-bakka reh gaya " stay away from the fence, stay away " vo pgalon jaisa chillaya. Fence ke piche khadi ikhati hui bheed piche ki taraf bhagi aur habad mein kai log niche gir kar kisi na kisi ke pairon ke niche aa gaye. " i need medic " vo apni gaddi ke mic par chillaya aur phir bahar aa khada hua, uske samne uske kayi officer zameen par jale hue pade the. 20 foot ka fence jisme najanekitne volt ka current daud raha tha aur vo sabhi uske is baar fans chuke the. Bank ke charon taraf is fence ki deewar khadi ho chuki thi. Apne officer ko khone ke baad uske chehre par aseem gussa tha aur vo usi gusse mein mic par cheekha.

" what the hell was that, officer kya kuch aur bhi baki hai jo tum hume baad mein bataoge, mere kai officer ki jali hui laash meri ankhon ke samne hai " officer ki baat sun kar security chief ki awaz hi nahi nikli " kya mujhe koi batayega ki andar kya ho raha hai, we are blind from here "

" its dev...doot sir " security chief ne haklate hue jawab diya to samne ek pal sanata chaya raha.

" tumhara dimag to kharab nahi ho gaya, ye baat tumne hume pehle kyun nahi batai damn it " command in officer ne apna mic utar diya aur apni team ke kuch officer ko apne pass bulaya. " we need strategy, enemy devdoot "

Camere mein ho rahi har vakye ko dekhte hue usne mode badla aur wapis screen par news dekhne laga. News mein abhi bhi kavya ki maut ke barre mein bataya jaa raha tha aur usi ke sath president ki security badha di gayi thi yahi news aa rahi thi. Lekin niche ab breaking news mein ane laga tha ki National Gold Bank mein hua hadsa, saare security protocal active kar diye gaye hain. Usne ghadi mein time dekha aur mode switch karke bank ke andar walle camera se badal diya.

" dekho mei abhi bhi keh raha hun ye sab chhod do kisi ko koi nuksan nahi hoga " security cheif ne bas itna hi bola.

" nuksan to tab bhi nahi hoga jab tum apni gun hamari taraf badha doge "

" tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai " security chief ke lehaze mein saaf na tha jise sunte hi unme se ek ne goliyan chalani shuru kar di aur phir dekha dekhi sabhi ne goliyan chalani shuru kar di. Sabhi security officer lait gaye kyun ki goliyun ka rukh unhi ki aaur tha. Bank ke andar chalti goliyun ka shor gunjne laga jo bahar tak jaa raha tha.

" officer kya ho raha hai andar, update me " command in officer chillaya.

" they are shooting sir "

" kill them then, kill them all "

" we can't sir, unhone apne aage civillians ko bandh rakha hai. Agar humne fire kiya to hume civillians ko marna hoga "

" no ... don't shoot, officer kisi bhi civillian ko kuch nahi hona chahie, you just stay put understand? "

" copy sir "

" i want everyone to search the entire area, koi to jagah hogi andar jane ki " itna bol kar vo apni gadi mein aya aur speaker utha kar bola " sir idhar bahut badi problem ho gayi hai, devdoot ne bank ko capture kar liya hai aur charon taraf bank ko fence se bandh kar diya hai, i repeat we are trap, mere kuch officer marre jaa chuke hain, i need more men, helicopters, i need all available units right here right now "

" copy that officer, lekin abhi hamara main focus president ki safety par hai. Ye situation robbery ki hai, i know you can handle this, talk to them, kya chahie unhe negotitate karo "

" aap samjhe nahi, mei fans chuka hun, i need some tools damn it "

" copy that officer, hum ek bird ka intezam kar sakte hain, baki aap ko hi sambhalna hai, over and out "

" fuck ..... devdoot " usne speaker wahin patka aur gaddi se bahar nikal aya.
is dev ki toh aisi ki taisi :bat:
bechare woh officers maare gaye iski wajah se...
bichare civilians :sigh:
Har cheez tod hai iske paas par burayi jitni badi kyun na ho, achhai ki aage chhoti hi rahti hai.. yeh joh kar raha hai iska anjam bhugtna hi padega ise.. :bat:
Kahin jaake chullu bhar pani mein dubke mar kyun nahi jata ye dev.. :mad:
are koi to rok lo ise.... :sigh2: atank machaya hua hua pure bank area mein :sigh2:
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let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill harshit ji :applause: :applause:
 
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is dev ki toh aisi ki taisi :bat:
bechare woh officers maare gaye iski wajah se...
bichare civilians :sigh:
Har cheez tod hai iske paas par burayi jitni badi kyun na ho, achhai ki aage chhoti hi rahti hai.. yeh joh kar raha hai iska anjam bhugtna hi padega ise.. :bat:
Kahin jaake chullu bhar pani mein dubke mar kyun nahi jata ye dev.. :mad:
are koi to rok lo ise.... :sigh2: atank machaya hua hua pure bank area mein :sigh2:
Khair
let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill harshit ji :applause: :applause:
Thank you naina ji :hug: :bow:
Puri planning karke aye hain. Tabhi to jo chahie vo pura hoga ...
Bhugatte nahi hai ye.. :D apna kaam karte hain bas....
Abhi to bacha hua hai... ;)
ab shayad chintu222 hi devdoot ko rok ne ke liye idea de sakta hai... chintu jaldi se darshan do :waiting1:
Vo gayab hai, kya pata andar unse hi mila hua ho :D
 
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