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Mai ak new Story liknay ja raha hun. jo ki pori tarah sai kalpnik ha. Yai many english mai kisi site par padi thi, mai isko apni tarah sai liknay ki kosis kar raha hun.
yai ak fantashi story hai . jo ki ak aam ladkay or kuch unicorn kai gird ghumti hai. is mai maney kuch story us pichli story sai li hai or baki ki mai apnay hisab sai liknay ki kosis karnga. agar kahin par galti hoo to apna chota bhai samaj kar maf kar dena.
yai ak fantashi story hai . jo ki ak aam ladkay or kuch unicorn kai gird ghumti hai. is mai maney kuch story us pichli story sai li hai or baki ki mai apnay hisab sai liknay ki kosis karnga. agar kahin par galti hoo to apna chota bhai samaj kar maf kar dena.
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Mera naam Mahesh hai. Mai himalya kai pass ak choty sai kasbay mai rahta hun. Jiski aabadi jyada nahi hai. Bus 100 kai karib ghar hain. Mere mata pita bachpan mai he pahari sai fisal kar mar gaye thay. Mai apnay dada g kai sath unkay ghar mai rahta hun. Jo ki yahan par ak choti si dukan chalaty hain.jo ki ghar kai bahri hisay mai he hai. Unkai pass a sab ka bagicha bhi hai jo ki unhonay mere naaam kar rakha hai. Ghar mai ak kam wali subah sham ghar kai kam kai liya rakhi hui hai. Jo ki subah aa kar khana banati hai . fir safai karnai kai bad kapry dho kar vapis chali jati hai. Mai abhi ------ sal ka hun.
Jasay ki many pahlay he bataya ki mai jab 2 sal ka tha mere mom dad dono he pahar par land slide kai karan mar gaye thay. Tab sai dada g nai is kam wali ko ghar par rakh liya tha. Yahi mujey sambhalti thi. Or mere sabhi kam karti thi. Mere ghar mai kisi or kai na hony kai karan mai kafi sarmila or daboo saw tha. Kyonki mujey bachpan sai he yai kamwali nahlati thi or mere sabhi kam yahi karti thi. To mai isko he apni maa ki tarah manta tha. Iska nam bindu hai. Iska bhi ab koi nahi hai. Iaka pati bhi isay bacha na honay kai karan isko chod kar bahar kam karnay kai liya chala gaya tha. Jo ki kabi bhi wapis lout kar nahi aaya. Yai akaeli rahti thi to dada g nai isko apnay he ghar mai bahri side ak kamray mai rahnay ki jagah de di or isko kam par rakh liya.
Pichlai 15 salo sai yai hamary ghar ko sambhalti aai hai. Bindu nai he mujey pala hai. To mai isko ma ki tarah he manta hun. Gav kai school mai mai 10th tak padai kiya hun. Or ab mai 12th ki padai open sai ghar par bath kar hre kar raha hun. Mere is kasbay mai koi jyada dost nahi hain. Kyonki mai jyadatar apnay khet ya ghar par he rahta hun. Hamara khet or bagh ghar sai thori duri par he hai jiskai ander 1 kamra hamnay vahan par saman kai liya banaya hua hai. meri kad kathi koi jyada to nahi par mai 6 feet lamba or khet mai bachpan sai he kam karnay karan sahi ssehat ka hun. jab sai mai 12 sal ka hua hun tab sai jyadatar samay mera khet kai kamry mai he raha hun. kyonki ghar par dada g sirf dukan par he samay de sakty hain vo ab bahar ka kam nahi dekh paty.dr. nai unko jyada chaalany firnay sai mana kiya hua hai.
Jasay ki many pahlay he bataya ki mai jab 2 sal ka tha mere mom dad dono he pahar par land slide kai karan mar gaye thay. Tab sai dada g nai is kam wali ko ghar par rakh liya tha. Yahi mujey sambhalti thi. Or mere sabhi kam karti thi. Mere ghar mai kisi or kai na hony kai karan mai kafi sarmila or daboo saw tha. Kyonki mujey bachpan sai he yai kamwali nahlati thi or mere sabhi kam yahi karti thi. To mai isko he apni maa ki tarah manta tha. Iska nam bindu hai. Iska bhi ab koi nahi hai. Iaka pati bhi isay bacha na honay kai karan isko chod kar bahar kam karnay kai liya chala gaya tha. Jo ki kabi bhi wapis lout kar nahi aaya. Yai akaeli rahti thi to dada g nai isko apnay he ghar mai bahri side ak kamray mai rahnay ki jagah de di or isko kam par rakh liya.
Pichlai 15 salo sai yai hamary ghar ko sambhalti aai hai. Bindu nai he mujey pala hai. To mai isko ma ki tarah he manta hun. Gav kai school mai mai 10th tak padai kiya hun. Or ab mai 12th ki padai open sai ghar par bath kar hre kar raha hun. Mere is kasbay mai koi jyada dost nahi hain. Kyonki mai jyadatar apnay khet ya ghar par he rahta hun. Hamara khet or bagh ghar sai thori duri par he hai jiskai ander 1 kamra hamnay vahan par saman kai liya banaya hua hai. meri kad kathi koi jyada to nahi par mai 6 feet lamba or khet mai bachpan sai he kam karnay karan sahi ssehat ka hun. jab sai mai 12 sal ka hua hun tab sai jyadatar samay mera khet kai kamry mai he raha hun. kyonki ghar par dada g sirf dukan par he samay de sakty hain vo ab bahar ka kam nahi dekh paty.dr. nai unko jyada chaalany firnay sai mana kiya hua hai.
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Congratulations for new story
Nice start
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Congratulations for new story ke liye
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Mai ab ----- sal ka ho chukka hun . mai aaj bhi apnay ghar sai sai nasta kar kai khet ki taraf jar raha tha. Rasty mai kisi or ka khet parta hai. Jahan par kuch ped lagey huy hain. Mai un pedo ki taraf sai nikal kar ja he raha tha ki mujey vahan sai kuch aawajey sunai deti hain . mai ruk kar un aawajo ki taraf dhyan dene lagta hun. To vo aawajey kisi aadmi or orat kit hi. Mai ped kai pichey sai chup kar uki aawajey sun nay ki kosis karnay lagta hun. Jo ped kai pass aany sai mujey saf sunai dene lagti hain.
A. Bad mai kab aaogi. Pahlay mujey sahi time batao . tabhi mi tum ko jany dunga.
O. Maa 1 bajey pita g kay pass khet mai jaygi. Mai tab tumko yahin par milungi. Ab mujey jany do.
Tab aadmi us ladki ko chod deta hai. Or vo vahan sai chali jati hai. Mai ped kai pichy chupa hony kai karan unki sakal to nahi dekh paya par mujey bhi pata chal gaya tha ki ab vo is aadmi sai milnay kai liya 1 bajey vapis aaygi. Mai bhi chup chap vahan sai apnay khet kai liya nikal parta hun.
Mai khet mai aa kar apnay room mai sai charpai nikal kar kar bahar dal leta hun. Abhi subah kai 8 he bajey thay to khet mai kam karnay waly abhi nahi aaye thay. Mai vahan par bath kar sochnay lagta hun ki yai jo rasty mai many suna tha. Vo sab kyat ha. Vo dono kon thay. Or vo aadmi us ladki ko kyon rok raha tha.mere samaj mai kuch bhi nahi aa raha rha. Mai kafi der tak is bary mai sochta raha. Yahan tak ki kam karnay waly kab aany lagy mujey yai bhi nahi pata laga. Jab ik kam karnay wali nai aa kar mujey aawaj di to mera dhyan tuta. Or mai us ki taraf deknay laga.
Babu g aaj kiss ouch mai dubey huy ho. Mai kab sai aap ko pukar rahi hun. Aap jawab he nahi de rahey.
Mai us ko kya jawab deta jab mene kuch suna he nahi. Mai us ki taraf dekhta rahta hun. Fir mai us sai puchta hun ki wo mujey kyon bula rahi thi. Tab vo bolti hai ki usay kuch saman kamry mai sai nikalna hai. To mai us ko kamray mai sai saman nikal kar de deta hun. Vo saman lai kar kam karnay kai liya chali jati hai. Mai bhi vahan sai uth kar apnay kheto kai charo taraf 1 chakkar lagany lagta hun.
Hamary kheto kai 1 side jangal bhi lagta tha. To mai abhi jangal ki side he chal parta hun. Yahan par koi hinsak janwar nahi hoty tomai adhiktar yahan par gumata rahta hun. Mujey yahan par kisi sai bhi koi katra nahi mahsus hota. Kabhi kabhi koi bheria ya chota mota koi jangli janwar aa bhi jay to mai un ko koi nukshan nahi pahuchata. Or na hi vo mere jyada karib aaty hain.
Mai ab ----- sal ka ho chukka hun . mai aaj bhi apnay ghar sai sai nasta kar kai khet ki taraf jar raha tha. Rasty mai kisi or ka khet parta hai. Jahan par kuch ped lagey huy hain. Mai un pedo ki taraf sai nikal kar ja he raha tha ki mujey vahan sai kuch aawajey sunai deti hain . mai ruk kar un aawajo ki taraf dhyan dene lagta hun. To vo aawajey kisi aadmi or orat kit hi. Mai ped kai pichey sai chup kar uki aawajey sun nay ki kosis karnay lagta hun. Jo ped kai pass aany sai mujey saf sunai dene lagti hain.
- Mujey abhi jany do . mail lait ho rahi hun. Ghar par sab mera intjar kar rahey hain.
- Tumany kal bhi milanay ka wada kiya tha. Fir wapis he nahi aai.
A. Bad mai kab aaogi. Pahlay mujey sahi time batao . tabhi mi tum ko jany dunga.
O. Maa 1 bajey pita g kay pass khet mai jaygi. Mai tab tumko yahin par milungi. Ab mujey jany do.
Tab aadmi us ladki ko chod deta hai. Or vo vahan sai chali jati hai. Mai ped kai pichy chupa hony kai karan unki sakal to nahi dekh paya par mujey bhi pata chal gaya tha ki ab vo is aadmi sai milnay kai liya 1 bajey vapis aaygi. Mai bhi chup chap vahan sai apnay khet kai liya nikal parta hun.
Mai khet mai aa kar apnay room mai sai charpai nikal kar kar bahar dal leta hun. Abhi subah kai 8 he bajey thay to khet mai kam karnay waly abhi nahi aaye thay. Mai vahan par bath kar sochnay lagta hun ki yai jo rasty mai many suna tha. Vo sab kyat ha. Vo dono kon thay. Or vo aadmi us ladki ko kyon rok raha tha.mere samaj mai kuch bhi nahi aa raha rha. Mai kafi der tak is bary mai sochta raha. Yahan tak ki kam karnay waly kab aany lagy mujey yai bhi nahi pata laga. Jab ik kam karnay wali nai aa kar mujey aawaj di to mera dhyan tuta. Or mai us ki taraf deknay laga.
Babu g aaj kiss ouch mai dubey huy ho. Mai kab sai aap ko pukar rahi hun. Aap jawab he nahi de rahey.
Mai us ko kya jawab deta jab mene kuch suna he nahi. Mai us ki taraf dekhta rahta hun. Fir mai us sai puchta hun ki wo mujey kyon bula rahi thi. Tab vo bolti hai ki usay kuch saman kamry mai sai nikalna hai. To mai us ko kamray mai sai saman nikal kar de deta hun. Vo saman lai kar kam karnay kai liya chali jati hai. Mai bhi vahan sai uth kar apnay kheto kai charo taraf 1 chakkar lagany lagta hun.
Hamary kheto kai 1 side jangal bhi lagta tha. To mai abhi jangal ki side he chal parta hun. Yahan par koi hinsak janwar nahi hoty tomai adhiktar yahan par gumata rahta hun. Mujey yahan par kisi sai bhi koi katra nahi mahsus hota. Kabhi kabhi koi bheria ya chota mota koi jangli janwar aa bhi jay to mai un ko koi nukshan nahi pahuchata. Or na hi vo mere jyada karib aaty hain.