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Update-22 (A) (Megha Update)
halanki usey bura nahin lag raha tha hari jo roz uske bra aur panty par apna virya girata tha to................balki wo to khus ho rahi thi ki wo kisi na kisi tarah se uski madad kar rahi hain...............jissey uski tadap to kum ho rahi............saath hi saath thoda bahut sukoon bhi usey mil raha tha.................ye sab khyaal aate hi aasma ke chehrey par muskaan aa jati hain aur wo neend ke aagosh mein doobati chali jati hain..................................
Ab Aage..............................................................................
Har roz ki tarah subeh ke 8 baje hari aur shanti apne kaam pe pahunch jate hain...............jab ghar ki door bell bajti hain to aasma ke chehrey par ek pyari si muskaan tair jati hain..................kahin na kahin wo bhi hari ke aane ka aab intezar kar rahi thi...............jaise hi wo darwaza kholti hain samney sirf shanti khadi thi..................apne haathon mein jhadoo aur poocha liye hue....................ye dekhkar aasma ka chehra utar jata hain....................jo khushiyaan aabhi kuch der pehle uske chehrey par jhalak rahi thi uski jagah aab mayoosi ne gher li thi........magar wo shanti ke samney zara bhi zaahir nahin hone deti ki wo hari ke naa aane se dukhi hain...........
" shanti tum....................aur hari kahan hain...............wo nahin aayega kya aaj kaam pe........................" aur aasma apne charon taraf ek nazar daudati hui fir se shanti ke chehrey ki taraf dekhney lagti hain wahin shanti mooh banati hui ander aati hain aur aasma ki taraf dekhti hui dheere se fir muskura deti hain............
" memsaheb.................aapko pata hain na hari poora baill (ox) hain.............wo humesha apni wali hi karta hain.....................subeh se apna shirt lekar baitha hua hain.................uske shirt ke do button toot gaye hain aur wo kafi der se sui mein dhaaga dal raha...........................magar ussey wo dhaaga nahin jaa raha...............to wo bhi aaj zidd par ada hua hain ki aaj wo kuch bhi ho jaye apni shirt ki bataam lagakar hi manega...............aab kaun samjhaye us baill ko.............." aur shanti mooh bichkatey hue dheere se bol padti hain wahin aasma jawab mein dheere se hans padti hain..................
" to kya hua..............tum sui mein dhaaga dal deti...............agar ussey dhaaga nahin padh raha to................." aur aasma shanti ko taaney deti hui bol padti hain wahin shanti bura sa mooh banatey hue.............thoda sa itratey hue.................... bol padti hain.................
" wo dega mujhe tab na...................zidd par ada hain ki main hi sui mein dhaaga dalunga.................to dalunga................kaun samjhaye usey...............main chali kaam pe memsaheb.................agar aap chahe to jakar usey dekh sakti hain..............." aur shanti apni gand matkatey hue .............thoda apni pawn failatey hue dheere dheere chalney lagti hain ye dekhkar aasma fauran bol padti hain...............
" tumhari chaal ko kya hua shanti............pairon mein kuch takleef hain kya........................" aur aasma bade gaur se shanti ko sir se lekar pawn tak niharney lagti hain wahin shanti ke chehrey ka rang thoda feeka padh jata hain.............aab wo apni memsaheb ko kya batati ki uski chaal to hari ne kharab kar di hain.....................chod chod ke.................
" wo memsaheb..................bus yu hi................" aur shanti thoda hadbada jati hain aur bilkul chup ho jati hain.................wahin aasma taktaki lagaye shanti ke chehrey ko bus dekhey jaa rahi thi..............
" periods ki wajah se aise problems aksar aate hain...........tum pad use karti ho naa........................." aur aasma dheere se muskura deti hain wahin shanti haan mein apna sir hilati hui upar ke kamrey ki taraf jane lagti hain...............
" jis din aap hari ke lund ke neechay aayengi na..............us din aapko khud ba khud pata chal jayega ki aurat ki chaal kaise kharab hoti hain...............hari jaisa lund agar har
mard ke paas ho to aurat ki chaal to waise bhi kharab ho hi jayegi.................jaise us kaminey ne meri kar di hain............kamina mujhe itna zyada pelta hain ki meri bur ki dhaajiyaan uda deta hain..................aur jab main mootney jati hoon to mooh se bus.... ahhhhhhhh.... hi nikalti hain..............moot nahin.....................jis din aapki chaal kharab hui us din main bhi aapse yehi sawal karungi...................fir main bhi dekhungi ki aap kya jawab deti hain............." aur shanti munn hi munn bahut si cheezein sochti hui upar jane lagti hain..................
idher aasma hari ke na aane se bechain thi..................wo bahut asmanjash mein fansi thi ki wo uske kamrey mein jaye ki nahin............agar wo jati hain to hari uske jane ka galat matlab zaroor niklega...............jo wo nahin chahti thi..................ye bhi ho sakta hain ki wo ye baat jaan jaye ki main usey aab pasand karney lagi hoon to wo mera galat fayda uthayega.......................aabhi tak to wo mere saath double meaning mein sirf baatein karta tha..................ye bhi ho sakta hain ki wo mera haath padak le............aur mujhe idher udher chuye.................mere badan ke har hissey par apna haath bhi lagaye................
aur hari agar aisa mere saath karta hain to main usey shayad aab mana nahin kar pawungi...............kyon ki main bhi chahti hoon ki hari mere badan ko chuye..............mere badan ke un hisson ko chuye jispar adhikar sirf aur sirf mere shohar ka hain................aur kisi ka nahin......................magar ye galat hain.................main apna ye haseen badan kisi aur ko aise chooney nahin de sakti....................ye paap hain............gunaah hain..............magar is gunaah ko karney se agar kisi ka bhala ho sakta hain to ..................mujhe is gunaah ko karney mein koi aitraaz nahin hain.....................
wo bhi to barson se kisi aurat ke liye tadap raha hain...............agar usney mere badan par haath rakh bhi diya to kaun sa gunaah ho jayega..............kum se kum wo to santusht rahega na mujhse..............main uske saath sex thodi na karungi..................bus usey apne badan ka maza karney doongi...........bus................issey zyada aur kuch nahin......................" aasma apne khyalon mein khoyi hui darwaze par aabhi tak khadi thi tabhi usey samney se hari aata hua dikhayi diya....................usney neechay lower pehna rakha tha aur upar sirf banyaan.........................uske ek haath mein wahin purani wali shirt thi................jispar wo bahut der se button laga raha tha jo shayad aab tak nahin lag paya tha......................
jaise hi uski nazar aasma par padi uski aankhein fr se chamak gayi......................aasma bade gaur se usey hi dekh rahi thi...........hari bhale hi sanwla tha magar uska badan kafi gathila tha...............gym mein jaise log body banate hain kuch waise hi cutts uske badan par bhi they...............magar ye sirf mehant aur kaam karney se aise nazar aa rahe they.....................pet thoda tha magar kafi healthy tha.................wajan uska kareeb 90 kg se kum nahin hoga..........................
" memsaheb aap yahan....................der se aane ke liye mujhe maaf kar dijiye..................ye kambhakt subeh se is shirt ne mujhe pareshan karke rakha hain....................aur ye sui hain ki ismein dhaga ghus nahin raha................." aur hari gussey mein aasma ki taraf dekhta hua badbadaney lagta hain wahin aasma uske taraf dekhti hui dheere se muskura deti hain.............
" kya ghus nahin raha .............dhaga...................lawo mujhe do.................main ghusa deti hoon................" aur aasma haule se bol padti hain wahin usey apni galti ka ehsaas hota hain ki jane anjane mein usney hari ko kehney ka dubara se mauka de diya.......................magar aab teer kaman se nikal chuka tha...................hari aasma ki baateion ko sunkar dheere se muskura deta hain............
" ghusane ka kaam to sirf mard karte hain memsaheb................aurtein nahin......................aurtein to sirf ghuswana janti hain................chahe ghusane wala cheez kitna bada hi kyon na ho................wo apne ander poora ghuswa hi leti hain................." aur hari is baar jaan boojhkar aasma ke samney apne lower ke upar se apne lund ko masal deta hain jissey aasma ki sansein fir se tezz hone lagti hain..............kal tak to hari sirf double meaning mein baatein kar raha tha magar aaj to wo ek dum khule aur open words use kar raha tha.....................jissey aasma sharam se laal ho jati hain.............wahin uska gorey chehre ka rang laal padh jata hain................
" aab dikkat ye hain ki iska ched bahut chota hain aur ................ye mota.................kambhakt ye ander ghus nahin raha................kahin kahin jagon par jab cheezein ander nahi ghusati hain to bahut pareshani hoti hain.............koi aur jagah hoti to kuch na kuch main jugaad kar leta................yahan kya karun!!!!!!! " aur hari aasma ki ore ajeeb si nazreion se dekhney lagta hain wahin aasma sharam se apni nazrein upar nahin kar pat..............uska kaleja zoron se dhadak raha tha................hari aabhi tak haath mein sui aur dhaaga liye hue wahin khada tha.................
Really great update! Very very nice writing! Awesome descriptions! Fantastic build up.Update-22(B) (Megha Update)
" agar aap chahe to dalwa sakti hain...............main to dal dal kar thak gaya hoon magar ye ander jane ka naam hi nahin le raha...................chote ched mein aksar yehi dikkat hoti hain..............." aur hari is baar aasma ke taraf us sui aur dhaagey ko dheere se badha deta hain wahin aasma sharam se laal ho jati hain..............uske tangon ke beech fir se gilapan badhney laga tha..............hari bol to sahi raha tha magar tarika humesha ki tarah uska galat tha.................jo wo aasma ko samjhana chahta tha wo aasma bahut aachey se samajh rahi thi..............ye sochkar uska kaleja zoron se dhadak raha tha..............hari ki baatein usey aachi lag rahi thi magar sharam ki wajah se wo kuch bol nahin paa rahi thi wahin hari uski sharam ko khatam karta jaa raha tha................aur usey dheere dheere besharam banata jaa raha tha..........
" lawo.............hari..........main koshish karti hoon..........." aur aasma hari ke haathon se sui aur dhaagey ko apne haathon mein leti hain aur pehle us dhaagey ko apne daanton se katati hain fir us dhaagey ko apne thook se gila karti hui us sui ke chote se ched mein ander dalney lagti hain.......do teen koshishon ke baad bhi wo dhaga idher udher chala jata hain ye dekhkar hari fir se bol padta hain...........
" main na kehta tha ye kaam aurton ke bus ka nahin hain...............wo sirf dalwana janti hain..............dalna nahin.......................is sui ka ched bahut palta hain.............is liye ye ander nahi ghus raha..........upar se dhaga bhi mota hain..............ye ismein kaise jayega................" aur hari aasma ke badan ko ghoorta hua fir se bol padta hain wahin uska lund dheere dheere harkat kar raha tha...............aasma ke samney wo itna kuch keh raha tha wahin aasma usey ek bhi baar na rok rahi thi.........aur na hi usey kisi baat ke liye mana kar rahi thi.........isi wajah se uski himmat din ba din aab badhney lagi thi...............
" tum to expert ho na chote se ched mein badi moti cheez ghusane ko..............us din pipe jab laga rahe they to ye lumbe lumbe updesh de rahe they..............aab kya hua..............nikal gayi sari hekdi..............mana ki ye kaam aurton ke bus ka nahin hain to tum bhi to itne der se is sui mein dhaagey dalney ki koshish kar rahe they.............gaya kya ........nahin na............." aur aasma ek baar fir se koshish karti hain aur is baar us sui mein dhaaga ander chala jata hain wahin hari jawab mein muskura deta hain...............
" arey waah!!!!!!........... ye to ander ghus gaya.................aapne to ander dalwa hi liya................aapka bahut bahut shukriya.........................khair.................wo us din ki baat alag thi memsaheb..............jismein ghusaya jaye wo cheez agar mazboot ho to usmein koi bhi cheez ander chali jati hain..................chahe uska ched mota ho ..........ya patla..................wo apni jagah khud bana hi legi..............magar yahan to jismein ghusaya jaa raha wo cheez hi kamzor hain to kya khaak ghusega................jismein ghusaya jaye wo cheez najuk ho aur ghusane wala cheez mazboot to ched kaisa bhi kyon na ho................ander to ghuskar hi rahega........................" aur hari aasma ke samney fir se gandi tarike se hans padta hain wahin aasma us sui aur dhaagey ko hari ke haathon mein thamati hui.................fauran wahan se apne room ki taraf jane lagti hain.............
hari ki baatein uske tan badan mein fir se aag laga rahi thi...................aab uska wahan rukna ek pal bhi mushkil hota jaa raha tha.................aasma ki choot fir se poori gili ho chuki thi.............badan fir se aag ke bhattey ke saman tapp raha tha................aasma ko aise jaate hue dekhkar hari fir se bol padta hain............
" memsaheb aaj bhi main naasta karke nahin aaya hoon...............thoda naasta lekar aayeiga to aapki badi meharbani hogi..............." aur hari fir se aasma ke thirakti hui gand ko dekhney lagta hain saath hi apne haath se ek baar fir se wo apne lund par le jata hain aur usey aasma ke samney fir se masal deta hain................wahi aasma ka chehra surkh laal padh jata hain................wo jawab mein ek lafz kuch nahin bol pati aur seedha kitchen ki ore chali jati hain....................
jaise hi aasma kitchen mein jati hain uska kaleja zoron se dhadakney lagta hain...................lumbi lumbi sansein leti hui wo apne dono haath kitchen ke slap par fir se rakhi hain aur apne bekabu ho rahe sanson ko sambhalney ki koshish karti hain................magar hari usey kahan aab sambhalney dene wala tha..................wo har roz har waqt uske choot mein aag bharta jaa raha tha...............usey open karta jaa raha tha...............
aasma freeze se do andey (egg) nikalti hain aur uska omlet bananey lagti hain............wo ek baar fir se apne ungliyon ko apne choot par le jati hain aur uska pani paas mein rakhe bread par kal ki tarah laganey lagti hain............ek baar fir se wo bread uski choot rus se san chuka tha aur uska taste hulka namkeen sa ho gaya tha...............wo us bread ko waise hi omlet ke saath rakhi hui ek bottle pani leti hain aur usey tray mein rakhti hui seedha hari ke kamrey ki taraf chal padti hain.................ek baar fir se uski bechaini badh chuki thi...........
hari ki nazrein jab dubara se aasma par padi uski aankhein dubara se chamak uthi........................wo to khud bechain tha aasma jaisi pari ko paane ke liye...............usey apne lund ke neechay sulaney ke liye.......................magar wo aasma ko aab poori tarah se khoolna chahta tha................uske ander ki sharam aur jhijhak ko humesha humesha ke liye door karna chahta tha................taki kal ko wo uske lund ke neechay aaye to wo uske ek isharon par wo sab kuch kare jo wo uske saath karna chahta hain..............usey is baat par yakeen nahin ...............balki poora vishwaas tha.....................
hari fir se us bread ko aise hi khane lagta hain aur aaj bhi us bread ka taste thoda namkeen jaisa lagta hain............ye dekhkar hari fir se aasma ki taraf dekhta hua dheere se muskura deta hain................
" waise jo bhi kahiye memsaheb..........is bread ka taste wakai mein bahut aacha hain.................khaata khaata namkeen sa................ye swaad mujhe kuch yaad dilata hain............." aur hari aasma ke taraf dekhta hua dheere se bol padta hain wahin aasma ka dil zoron se dhadak uthatha hain ye sochkar ki kahin hari jaan to nahin gaya ki wo khaata khaata namkeen sa pani kya hain..................ye khyaal aate hi aasma ka chehra sharam se fir laal padh jata hain..............
"mujhe kya pata................jahan se ye bread bankar aata hoga.............wey log jane............" aur aasma jaise hari ke samney safayi dene lagti hain wahin hari apne shirt ke dono button aab laga chuka tha..............aur aab wo usey pehananey wala tha................fir aasma ki taraf dekhkar wo us shirt ko wahin farsh par rakh deta hain aur fir dheere se muskura deta hain...............
" kya fayda is shirt ko pehananey se................aabhi pehnunga to fir se gande ho jayengey..............kaam khatam ho jayega to hi isey pehnunga.............waise memsaheb aap har kapdon mein bahut sunder lagti hain..............." aur hari aasma ke taraf dekhta hua dheere se hans padta hain wahin aasma jawab mein dheere se muskura deti hain..............hari to aise keh raha tha jaise wo bade saaf safayi se rehta hain.....................
" tumhari shadi ko kitne saal ho gaye hari................." aur achanak aasma hari se ye sawal kar baithi wahin hari kuch der tak khamosh rehta hain.............. fir wo dheere se bol pada................
"20 saal.............magar pichley 10 salon se main akela hi hoon..................bin aurat ke.................aap to meri takleef samajh sakti hain naa............ki agar ghar mein aurat na rahe to mard ki raatein akele kaate nahin katati.................na mard ko aurat ke bina.......aur na aurat ko mard ke bina.............." aur hari aab aasma se sari baatein khulkar kehney laga tha jissey aasma koi virodh nahin karti aur chup chaap se uski sari baatein sunti rehti hain................fir kuch sochkar wo dheere se bol padti hain..............
" 10 saal to tum apni biwi ke saath they naa fir.............tumhare koi baachey nahin hue kya..................." aur aasma ke is sawal ne hari ke munn mein hulchal zaroor macha di thi................wo aab aachey se samajh gaya tha ki aasma uske mooh se kya sunana chahti hain...................is liye wo thoda sa baat banatey hue apni baat aagey kehta hain...............usney soch liya tha ki usey aab kaha pe kya bolna hain..........kaise bolna hain...............wo aisa hi kuch mauka dhoodh raha tha................jo aaj aasma ne usey de diya tha..............
" aapki baat sahi hain memsaheb..................magar ......................jab wo pehli baar mere paas aayi thi to bahut dari dari si rehti thi.............suhagraat ke din usney mujhe apne paas aane hi nahin diya.................magar dusare din main uske paas gaya aur ussey batein ki........to wo kehney lagi ki usey mard se durr lagta hain.............fir maine usey bahut samjhaya tab jakar wo jaise taise mani............jab main uske paas raat mein gaya aur jab maine uske kapdey utarey to wo fir se durr gayi...............mujhe haath bhi nahi laganey diya............
aise hi ek hafta guzar gaya aur wo mere paas nahin aayi.............tab maine doston se is bare mein baat ki to usney bataya ki usey chudai wali film dikhawo.............jab wo chudayi wali film dekhegi tab wo garam hogi tab uska bhi chudney ko munn karega............" aur hari aasma ke samney gandey words jaan boojhkar usey karney laga jissey aasma ki ek baar fir se sansein tezz ho gayi..................wo apne bekabu ho rahe sanson ko sambhalti hui dheere se bol padi.................
" hari...............please.........aise gande words mere samney use mutt karo..............." aur aasma lumbi lumbi sansein leti hui dheere se bol padi.................sharam se uska chehra ek baar fir se laal padh gaya tha wahin hari aab kahan peechay rehney wala tha...................wo aaj bani banayi kahani aasma ke samney namak mirch ka tadka lagakar..........pooorey masaley ke saath.................. sab kuch uske samney pesh karney wala tha..............dekhna tha ki aasma aab khud ko kitna rok pati hain..........................
To Be Continued...........................................................