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nice start..!!Vidhwaa maa ki Hawas
Ye kahani meri chudasi maa priya ki hai...asha karta hu aapko pasand aayegi...issme bahoot sara gandi bhasa ka istmal kiya hai...aur gandi kand hai...to kriypa jo log gandi kahani padhna pasand karte hai wahi ise pade aur apna pyaar de comments se...ye ek kalpanik kahani hai muje ye kuch saal Pehle padi thi...lekin writer ne kahani ko adhura choda tha..maine usse apne tarike aur imagination se aage continue kar raha hu to apna Samantha de...enjoy
Update 1
Hi mera Naam rohit Verma hai main 21 saal ka hu....main Delhi ka rehne wala hu...ye kahani meri Maa priya Verma aur mere bare main hai...
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Rohit age..21..dikhne main handsome bodybuiler...smart dashing....bachpana haram kisam ka ladka...isse bachpan main hi bigad gaya tha...isse bigad ne wali bhi isski maa hi thi...wo aapko aage pata chalega...
Priya age 38...dikhne main bikul sexy hot hai...38 ki age main bhi....lagti nahi 29 saal se jayda...bhaoot hi kamuk aur chudasi aurat....issne aapni sari hawas apne andar chipa kar rahi thi...wo aapne sare gandi baate Sirf apni ek secret dairy main likhti thi...uski jawani main jo kand usne dekhe the...kiye the...aur wo aur kya karna chahti thi...ye sab ussne apni diary main likhe the...wo humesha bistar par kabhi khush nahi rahi uske pati...uska ye frustration ek alag mood pe lekar aaya usse...pati ki nashe ki lat chudhane ki ussne bahoot koshish ki lekin nahi hoo paya usse...
Ramesh Verma...pitaji jo ab iss duniyaa main nahi hai..ye ek ayash kisam ka Insaan tha...isne kabhi priya ki izzat nahi ki...usse kabhi bistar par charamsukh nahi de paya..humesha...sharab Pina...ganja Pina...apne dosto ke sath ayashi karna...ghar kA wo paise wala tha koi kaam kaj ka tension nahi thaa. ...nashe ki lat usse zindagi nigal gayi..lekin usse ek hi acha kaam kiya tha wo ek tagde ladke ko paida karke gaya jo aage jaakar aapni maa ki seva karega...ya karwaye ga...priya aapna patni hone ka farj pura kiya thaa ...aakhiri dum tak usne Ramesh ka sath nibhaya tha...
nice update..!!Update 2
Priya shadi hoo gayi thi 18 saal ki Seth Verma ke bete Ramesh Verma se jo uss Waqt 27 saal ka tha...Verma seth ka sone chandi ke ghehne ka kariyam tha aur achi khashi paise aur jamin jaydad kama rahi thi.. lekin paise jesa aata wo sath main barbadiyaa bhi latha hai...uska beta Ramesh ek ayash kisam ka ladka hoo gaya tha..baap ka paisa jue aur sharab main udta tha...jab Verma seth ko apne ladkee ki galat aadato ka pata chala...to ussne aapne secretary se Keh use liye achi ladki khojne ki tayaari ki...jo use bete ko sambhal sake aur ghar ko bhi apna le...riste to bahoot sare aaye Ramesh ke liye lekin ladki walo ko usi buri aadato ke wajah se nahi hoo paya...aakhir main seth Verma ke secretary ne usse salah di ki Hume Delhi se baahar ki ladki dekhni chaahiye..Verma seth ne bhi Haa kardi..aur secretary ne bhi aapna malik ko khush karne ke liye...priya rishta dhoondh kar le aaya...priya ki.jab uski shadi hui tab tak 12 pass kar chuki thi...aapne sari saheliyan main sab se sundar thi...usse aage aur padhna tha usse bhi bade sapne the main..maa baap garib ghar se the...jayda kharcha wo nahi kar paye.. wo priya ke padhai pe...jab ek acha rishta aaya wo bhi bade ghar se to na nahi keh paye aur unhone foray Haa kardi.. Delhi ke pass ke gaav se the....priya ek khubsurat ladki thi...uska sharir bhi jaldi bada hoo gaya tha uski umar ki ladkiyon ke maamle main...mast sudol chuhiya jo bhari barkam mast ubri hui gaand..jo kisi bhi mard ki kamzori hooti hai...usse apni jawani pe bahoot gurur tha aur ho bhi kyo naa..jab wo gaon main apni saheliyon ke sath bazar main nikalti ache acha mardo..ke pant main tambu khade hoo jaate...chahe budha hoo jawan..har koi uska diwana thaa...lekin priya ne kabhi kisi ko glass nahi daali...wo chahti thi ki usse koi dewan ki tarah pyaar karne wala mile...usi ko apan jewan sathi mile jo usse duniya bar ki khushiyan de...gaon ke bahoot se ladke ...uske ghar ke chkar. Marte uski ek jalak Paani ke liye....lekin wo kabhi kisi ke niseb main nahi thi...priya ke baap harilal ne jab usse bataya ki uske liye Delhi se rista aaya hai...to priya Pehle to mana kar diya ....usse abhi shadi nahi karni...aur padhna hai...beti ke marzi ke bager shadi karna uske baap ko bhi theek nahi laga..ussne Seth Verma ko apna jawab bhej diya..
Seth Verma niras hoo gaye...lekin wo ye rista hath se nahi jaane dens chahte the...unhone hiralal se kaha..ki wo priya ko aur padhyenge aur college main bhi bhejenge.. usse ki tarah ki koi taklif ka samna nahi karna padega...sari sukh suwidaye milegi...usse hiralal aur uske pariwar ko apne ghar bulaya...Verma seth ke ghar ki chaka chond dekh kar ...hiralal aur uska pariwar bhi khush hoo gaya...ghar aakar ussne jab priya ko bataya to wo bhi apne naye zindagi ki sapne bune lagi...jab ussne apni saheliyon ko ye baat batai to unhone ne bhi uske sath diya aur ameer ghar ki bahu bane ka sapna usse dikhaya..jo har ladki ki kismat main nahi hoota...priya ne bhi shadi ko Haa krh diya..aur dekhte dekhte 1 mahinee uski shadi Ramesh Verma se hoo gayi....
nice update..!!Update 3
Kuch readers ko shayad jaldi chudai ki maa bete ke beech main.. asha hoogi kahani main...sorry lekin thoda samay lagega...kyo ki priya ka past jaana jaruri hai...to aage ki kahani ke liye jaruri hai...ko please kindly wait...
Ramesh shadi se Pehle hi randiya choda karta tha...uske kai aurto ke sath sambandh the wo...ek hawasi ladka tha...lekin aaj tak usne kabhi koi kachi kali ki nahi li thi...wo aksar chudai ke doran galiya baki karta tha...aur usse isme maja bhi aata tha..usne jab priya ko dekha to buss usskke andar ek ajib sa bukh lagi thi Paane ke liye ...uske dosto ne bhi priya ke jawan jism ka Raspan kar rahe shadi ke mandap main...Saare jal rahe Ramesh ki kismat pe...isse harami ko..inti kaamsin kali kese mil gayi...apni khubsurat bahu ka diwaana to Verma seth bhi hoo gaya tha...Verma seth ki biwi ko guzre 12 saal hoo gaye the...Verma ne apne aap ko kaam main busy kar liya tha...lekin uska bhi ek raaz tha...uske ghar main kaam karne wali noorani shanti bai ke sath uske sambandh the...shanti ke pati ko mare 10 saal hoo gaye the..uska pati birju Vermaseth ka Driver hua karta tha...Verma seth ne birju ko apne bangle ke piche ek 1bhk ghar banwa k.diya tha..lekin sharab pine ki aadat ne uski Jaan lelo thi...shanti ko uss samay paiso ki sahare ki jarurat thi uska beta Bholu tab 6 saal ka tha jab uska pati ne duniya se chala gaya tha..Verma seth ne garib aurat ko sahara diya..... aur dekhte dekhte wo dono karib aa Gaye the...Shanti ek shatir aurat thi...ussne Verma seth ko apne husn ke jal main barabar phasa liya tha...taki aage jakar usse bhi uske bete ko dar dar ki thakre na kahani pade...lekin ek raat jab woo...apne malik ke sath humbistar hoo rahi thi apne ghar main to usse apne bete ne range hatho pakad liya...lekin bholu bhi ek tharki ladka thaa.bachpan se wo apni maa ka diwana tha...wo aksar apni maa kosoch kar muth martha..jab shanti Verma sethke gharmain kaam karti bholu moka dekh kar gandi gandi chudai ki kitane padta...aksar wo apni maa kabhi ko sungta aur chodne ke sapne dekhta.....dekhte dekhte Waqt bita gata.. aur apni maa ko chodne ki bholu ki ichcha samay ke sath aur jayda badti gayi...usse bhi aapni maa par kafi samay se shaq tha...Verma seth ka unpar itna Meher baan hoona...aur usko nokri dena...uski dukan main...usse ye to pata tha ki kuch na kuch badle main Verma seth jarur leke rahega...lekin jab ussne aapni maa ko chudai karte hue dekha wo...samaj gaya ki uski maa...chudakkad aurat hai...usne uski...usse apni maa ko chodte hue dekh gussa apni charam pe chala gaya.. lekin usse land bhi tan chuka tha...uska hath ne dhire dhire ka kaam karna suru kar diya aur dimag ne bhi...usse apni maa ko Maar mar kar chodne ki Icha hoone lagi...wo Maan main apni maa ko gandi galiya dene laga...
BHOLU-Sali randi agar chudna hi tha...muje bolti kutiya... haramzadi Sali...ab tu gayi kaam se kasam muje mere mare baap ki...Sali nahi tuje apni randi bana kar choda aur Verma seth se apna badla liya to mera Naam bholu nahi.....Sali do take ki randi tuje to main apna moot bhi pilaunga...Sali randi maa meri dekh kese aapni gaand uchal kar chudwa rahi Sali...kutiya....burchodi kahi...mere samne sati savitri banke ghumta hai...randi Sali...isiliye humesha tere chehra pe bahoot chamak rahti burchodi kahi ki..tu to gayi randi aab to ...chudai karni ki soch li...kisi bhi kimat par...yaha kamre main shanti aur seth aapne kaam main lage hue the...
VERMA seth- aaahhh shanti kya mast chut hai teri meri chinal...aur uchal aapni mastani gaand...ufff aur hila kar chud Sali...
Shanti- haha mere malik....bahoot maja aa raha hai...uffff apka ye motha lund meri chut ki dhajiya uda raha...uffff....kya kismat hai...meri...ufffff..Kehte hue apni gaand uchal kar chudwane lagi....bholu ko unki aawaj nahi aa rahi thi khidki ke kach bandh the...lekin parda thoda khula tha...ussne jab dukan bandh karke ghar pe aaya to usse ghar kA darwaja bandh mila...lekin ghar ke bahar ussne Verma seth ke shoes dekh liye itni raat ko 11 baje Verma seth ko apne ghar pe kya kaam isiliye wo piche se ghar ki taraf ghum ke gaya aur andar jo nazara usne dekha wo dekh kar wo dang reh gaya.. Andhra ka fayda utha usne apni pant nikli aur apna 7 inch lamba motha lund hila ne laga aapni maa ki chudai dekhne laga...
Kuch di der main Verma seth aapne charam par poocha...
Verma seth- aaaahhhh meri Jaan main aane wala hu....kaha nikalo apna maall jaldi bol kutiya...
Shanti- ..malik mere much main nikaliye apna maal baoot din hoo gaye apka maal pi kar...aaaahhh...Verma seth ne apna 6 inch mota lund shanti ke mujhe main daal diya...aur shanti mooh chodne lage...2min main uska maal shanti ke much main girne laga..jisse shanti ne bade chav se pi liya...aur lund ko chaat kar saaf kar diya...apni maa ko Asa karta dekh bholu aur bhi jaydq gusse main aa gaya...aur galiya bakte hue jharne laga
BHOLU...aaah Sali burchodi..kya maal pine ki diwani hai tu...Sali kya gajab ki chudati hai...randi tu...aaaahhh meri kutiyaahhh maa.. chinal..kahi bol kar jharne laga...aaj tak uska itna maal kabhi nahi nikla thaa..
Ji aag bhai story maa bete ki hi hai...lekin kuch character bhi hai story build up ke liye jo priya ki life main important role play karte hai..nice start..!!
bhai story maa bete ke bich hi rahegi na..matlab koi teesra na aaye toh hi achha hai..!!
nice update..!!Update 4
Verma seth shanti ko chodne kar apne ghar main chala gaya...bholu bhi gusse se ghar se nikla...aur ghar ke pass wale..ek medical store pe gaya jaha se ussne men's high power ki viagra ki kuch galiya kharida...jisse wo bilkul bekabu...saand ban jaye aur apni chudasi maa ki thakre kar sake...ussne dukan se nikal kar 2 goliya Khali aur 2 bacha ke rakhi apni maa ke liye.. ramesh bhi piii kar soo chuka tha...apne kamre main...shanti bistar se uthi aur bathroom main jaakar apni chut main ungli karne lagi shayad usse aur jayda chudas chadi thi...tabhi darwaze par dastak hui ....usne apna ek purana gaon nikala aur bina bra party ke pehn liya...uski bade se mumme ussme umar kar samne aa rahe the usske nipples bhi abhi tak taane hui the....jaise hi usne darwaaza khola samne bholu khada tha...ussne muskurakar usse andar aane ko kaha...bholu usska chehra dekh kar gusse main ghar ghussa
Shanti- aare beta aaj badi der laga di tune aane main
Bholu- ( Maan main bola Haa kutiya tabhi to tuje chudta hua dekh paya aur tera ye randi wala asli chehra mere samne aaya) Haa aaj wo seth ne kuch hisab ki files de rahki thi...usse kar raha...isiliye late hoo gaya...Kehte hue..wo bedroom main gaya...
Jesse hi bholu ne bistar ki halat dekhi uski aankhon ke samne kuch der pahile ki aur uska lund khada hoona suru hoo gaya... ghatna ghum ne lagi kese ussi chudasi maa ussi bistar par apne seth ka lund liye gaand hila kar chud rahi thi...abhi ..bhi uske maal pi kar itni khushi se darwaza kholi ...tabhi shanti ne awaz lagayi...
Shanti- aare beta Bholu jaldi se kapde badal le aur nahale main tere liye khana lagati hu...
Bholu- ( Maan main bola kutiya aaj to main tuje kahunga sali ...aaj ki raat se tu roj mere lund pe beth kar muje khana khilayegi...randi sali) Haa aata hu 10 min main...bholu turant bathroom main gaya aur kapde badal liye ussne apni underwear nikal li aur ek lungi lapet li...ek baniyaan pehenkar hall main jaakar beth gaya kuch der main shanti aakar usse kahana parosne lagi..shanti daal paroste waqt jhukna pada jisse usske bade se 38 ke mamme bolu ki nazar aa Gaye.. viagra ne bhi apna asar dikhana suru kar diya tha...uski lungi main ab tamboo bane laga samne ka nazara dekh kar...apne bete ko apne mamme ko ghurte dekh..shanti ne dekh liya....lekin usne bholu ko kuch nahi kaha aur khaana paroskar wo kitchen main jaane lagi...bholu ne apni nazar uski gaand pe tika di...achanak shanti palti usse bholu ko apni gaand ko Ghurte dekh uski aankhe chamak gayi...kyoki bholu ne apne lund ko lungi ke upar ek dum se masal diya...kitchen main jaakar shanti ne chup ke bholu pe nazar mara to uski lungi main bane tamboo ko dekh kar sihar uthi...uski chut main achanak usse ek ajib sa gila pan aa gaya jo aaj tak usse nahi aaya tha...apne bete ko gaand aur mamme ko ghurte hue usne aaj tak kai bar dekha lekin jisse tarike se aaj bholu ne apne lund ko masla tha aur uski lund ki akar dekh kar uske andar ki chudas ek baar bhi jaag uthi...ussne jese these apno bavnaoo par kabu kiya aur..bholu ke sath beth kar khana kha ne lagi...khate Waqt uska Dhyaan apne bete ke tambo par tha...aur bholu ki nazar apne mamme pe wo saaf mehsus kar rahi thi...bholu ki aankhen laal hoo chuki thi..uska lund apni aukat se jayda full chuka tha..bikul taan chuka tha...aapni maa ka Dhyaan se dekha to ussne shanti ko apne lund ko ghurta paya...uske chehre pe ajib se gandi wali hasi aa gayi...shanti bhi uski taraf dekh kar hasne lagi...
Bholu- maa aaj khana bahot acha bana hai...kya baat hai...Maan kar raha tere hatho ko chumlu
Shanti- aare beta kya baat aaj mere khane ki itni tarif kar raha hai..khana to roj ki tarah se bana hai..
Bholu- nahi wo baat nahi tu sab kuch acha hi banati hai...lekin aaj baat kuch aur hai
Shanti- acha asi kyaa baat hai...
Bholu- aaj tere chehre pan ek ajib sa sukun hai...lekin thodi thaki thaki se bhi lag rahi...jayda kaam kar rahi thi kya bangle par aaj...
Shanti- kaam to roj hi karti hu beta lekin aaj kuch jayda hi thaki hu..mera badan bhi Dard kar raha hai...
Bholu- aare maa tension . Maat le aaj tera beta teri sari thakan nikal dega...
Shanti usski baat sunkar aankhen thodi badi ho gayi
Shanti- kya matlab tera...
Bholu - aare maa main bhi aaj thoda badan Dard kar raha hai...to aate Waqt maine medical se badan Dard kam karne ki goliya leke aaya hu tu khana khale fir main tuje goli khilata hu...kehte hue ussne apne lund ko ek jhatka diya...jisse shanti ne bhi dekh liya..aur muskurakar boli...
Shanti- beta acha hua jo tu dawai le aaya..kitna khayal hai tuje chudta apni maa ka...Kehte hue wo aur jhuk gayi aur apna maame dikha kar khana lagati hai...
Bholu waha se uth kar nikal ta hai kitchen main plate rakhta hai..hall se guzarte Waqt shanti pe nazar markar kamre main jaa raha tha usse ne shanti ko apne tane hue lund ko ghurte hue dekha wo aur uske chehre pe muskan aa gayi...
Shanti yaha hall main beth kar soch rahi thi ki..
Bholu ka lund usske mamme dekh kar itna khada hoo gay tha...wo bhi bina ksi Sharam ke usse dekha kar ghar main ghum raha hai...usski chut ne bhi Paani aane laga tha...wo apne aap ko bete ke lund ko ghurne se nahi rok paa rahi thi...pata nahi aaj wo itni chudasi kyo hoo rahi thi...room main jaa kar apni pant ki jebh se bholu ne dono goliya nikal ke shanti ke pass gaya...shanti bhi khana khatam kar chuki thi aur kitchen main plate rakh rahi thi...bholu uske piche jaa ke khada hoo gaya achanak shanti palti aur bholu se takrah gayi...bholu ka taane hue lund usne apne pet par chub gaya..uski muhh se ek chudasi siskari nikali...aaaahh..uff kya karta hai beta..
Bholu- aare maa tuje to main tuje dawai dene aaya tha...ussne shanti ke hath main dawai di aur apne bedroom main jaa kar dawai ke asar ka intazar karne laga...