Romance Waqt.....

[Akki ❸❸❸]

Story ka ye 30th update tha, aur saath hi coincidence se mera bhi apki story pe ye 30th comment h, pavan ne naina ko bhi pechan liya,,,Bhot bdiya update,,,,, story gajab chal rahi h, umeed karte h age bhi isi tarah se regular update ate rahenge,,,,,

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Awesome update
Is update main Naina last main focus Kiya h to Kya Naina hi gudiya h
Keep posting

 

[kamdev99008]

Dosto ummid hai ye story aapke dil ko chu rahi hogi....

Aaj iss story ko 30 updates pure huve hai... aur inn sare updates me mene kai jagah kuch hints di thi..... kuch baate kahi thi..... kuch suspence create ki thi....

Aur ab unn sab ko aane wale updates ke sath relate bhi karunga... jo ki muje lagata hai ki unn bato ko aek doosre se relate dekh aapko bhi aur bhi achha lagega...

Story me sath bane rahene ke liye bahut bahut dhanywad...


~ Gabbar is Back

aapki kahani ne aisa baandh liya hai mujhe ki .............kahne ko shabd nahi milte..........................

khaskar apka narration..........................

mein emotions ko samne nahin la paata .... shayad meri jindgi ne mujhe emotionless kar diya

WAQT................... mujhe apki kahani padhkar laga ki ek aise mahaul mein pawan itna emotional kaise bana rah
jabki mein isse kafi .................balki am insanon se behtar mahaul mein raha apne bachpan mein
fir bhi emotions khatm ho gaye mere

haan! ek samanta rahi mere aur pawan ke bachpan ki ................
ghar-pariwar aur mata-pita ka sath.......................hum dono ko hi nahin mila
pawan ek bandhan mein tha...............isliye wo unko pane ke ahsas ko jinda banaye raha
mein kisi bandhan mein nahi tha...............balki ek tarah se awanchhit tha............mujhe tyag diya gaya
mera bhavishya banane ke nam par......................................mere mata-pita ko ya pariwar ko chahe jo mahsoos hua
lekin mujhe aisa lagne laga ki mein ...............kabad ki tarah tha ghar mein.... bina wajah, bina jarurat ka
isliye mujhe hata diya gaya.............................aur isiliye............. mere andar se bhavnayein hi khatm ho gayin.....
pyar, sneh, mamta hi nahin.........................dar, nafrat aur ghrina bhi..................bhavshunya ho gaya mein
jabse hosh samhala

isiliye meri kahani mein emotions apki tarah ubharkar nahin ate......................kyonki meine unhein kabhi jiya hi nahin

bahut kuchh kah diya...................ab aage dekhte hain is katha mein kya hota hai..................
pawan-adi, pari-naina ke sath

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

Story ka ye 30th update tha, aur saath hi coincidence se mera bhi apki story pe ye 30th comment h, pavan ne naina ko bhi pechan liya,,,Bhot bdiya update,,,,, story gajab chal rahi h, umeed karte h age bhi isi tarah se regular update ate rahenge,,,,,

Thanks Akki ❸❸❸ bhai...

Aapka sath aur support pahele update se bana raha hai... aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad...

ummid to muje bhi ki iso tarah roj update diya karu Aur vese bhi ummid pe to duniya kayam hai...

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

Awesome update
Is update main Naina last main focus Kiya h to Kya Naina hi gudiya h
Keep posting

Thanks Arjun Singh 72 bhai...

Dil se jude huve riste hai pata nahi kis tarah se samane aayenge dekhate hai...

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

aapki kahani ne aisa baandh liya hai mujhe ki .............kahne ko shabd nahi milte..........................

khaskar apka narration..........................

mein emotions ko samne nahin la paata .... shayad meri jindgi ne mujhe emotionless kar diya

WAQT................... mujhe apki kahani padhkar laga ki ek aise mahaul mein pawan itna emotional kaise bana rah
jabki mein isse kafi .................balki am insanon se behtar mahaul mein raha apne bachpan mein
fir bhi emotions khatm ho gaye mere

haan! ek samanta rahi mere aur pawan ke bachpan ki ................
ghar-pariwar aur mata-pita ka sath.......................hum dono ko hi nahin mila
pawan ek bandhan mein tha...............isliye wo unko pane ke ahsas ko jinda banaye raha
mein kisi bandhan mein nahi tha...............balki ek tarah se awanchhit tha............mujhe tyag diya gaya
mera bhavishya banane ke nam par......................................mere mata-pita ko ya pariwar ko chahe jo mahsoos hua
lekin mujhe aisa lagne laga ki mein ...............kabad ki tarah tha ghar mein.... bina wajah, bina jarurat ka
isliye mujhe hata diya gaya.............................aur isiliye............. mere andar se bhavnayein hi khatm ho gayin.....
pyar, sneh, mamta hi nahin.........................dar, nafrat aur ghrina bhi..................bhavshunya ho gaya mein
jabse hosh samhala

isiliye meri kahani mein emotions apki tarah ubharkar nahin ate......................kyonki meine unhein kabhi jiya hi nahin

bahut kuchh kah diya...................ab aage dekhte hain is katha mein kya hota hai..................
pawan-adi, pari-naina ke sath

Thanks kamdev99008 bhai.....

Bhai aapse meri puri tarah se hamdardi judi hai...

Waqt ko hum pichhe to nahi ghuma sakate ki jiss se life me jo bhi huva use badala jaa sake

lekin meri taraf se aek ummid jarur hai ki aapne iss kahani ke jariye aap aapke dil ke kahi khoye huve emotions phir se ji rahe hoge.. aapke dil ke emotions phir se bah bah kar samane aa rahe hoge... jo aapko Waqt ke uss palo ko wapis jine ka sahara bane hoge jinhe aap ji nahi paaye hai... aur sach maniye aage bhi aapko ese hi emotions se bharpur updates milege jiss se muje ummid hai ki aapke jivan ko aek baar phir se emotions ke sagar me duba denge...

Mai aek lekhak hu aur apni soch ko aur dil ke emotions ko kagaj pe utar raha hu...

Lekin aek sach jarur hai ki Pawan ka patr kalpanik jarur hai lekin dil ke ahesaas sach hi hote hai aur yahi do wajah hai ki ye kahani hame kalpanao ke sagar me ese gote lagavati hai jese hum khud hi unn patro ko ji rahe hai esa pratit hota hai...

Pawan jo apne Pariwar se bichada jarur tha lekin aek aash jarur thi ki vo wapis unhe jarur dhundh nikalega... aur ye aash isliye bandhi thi ki use uski maa ke sath ke aakhari sawand yaad the ki Pawan ki maa use bahut bahut pyaar karti hai...

Aur aage bhi emotions sr bharpur updates aayege... kuch emotions khushi ke aanshu layege kuch dard ke aanshu layege...

story ke sath bane rahene ke liye dhanyawad kamdev99008 bhai....

 

[kamdev99008]

aur ye aash isliye bandhi thi ki use uski maa ke sath ke aakhari sawand yaad the ki Pawan ki maa use bahut bahut pyaar karti hai...

aur meine apni maa ko apni yaad mein pahli bar.............kisi aur ke batane par samjha aur dekha tha...........aur maan liya tha ki...agar sab kah rahe hain to shayad ye hi meri maa hain

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

aur meine apni maa ko apni yaad mein pahli bar.............kisi aur ke batane par samjha aur dekha tha...........aur maan liya tha ki...agar sab kah rahe hain to shayad ye hi meri maa hain

Bhai aapke bite kal ko imagine karane se hi muje emotional kar diya... aur aapne to ye bite kal ko jiya hai... phir me ab iss se aage kya bolu?...

Lekin aek baat jo mene kahi padhi thi.. jo muje acchi lagi thi... vo me jarur likhunga...

[Mahabharat ke Waqt Arjun Shri Krishna se aek diwar ki aur ishara karate huve kaheta hai ki...

Arjun - "Hai Keshav, Aap muje iss diwar pe kuch esa likhake de jise padh kar muje sukh me dukh ho aur dukh me sukh mahesoos ho..."

Shri Krishna hase aur phir unhone diwar pe likha - "Ye Waqt bhi bit jayega."]

Pata nahi uss Waqt Arjun aur Shri Krishna ke bich ye baat huyi thi ya nahi lekin hame uss se kya lena dena.... lekin yahi vo sikh hai jo ki Waqt labj ka kadava sach hai...

Lekin iss choti si kahani main apni aur se ye jarur likhunga ki ye jo Waqt ka chota hissa jo din ka sukh ya raat ka dukh ban ke hamare jivan me abhi chal raha hai ye hum par nirbhar karta hai ki iss Waqt ko hum kese jite hai... varana Waqt to chalega din ke baad raat layega aur raat ke baad din...

Aur me bhi manata hu ki mere liye kahena aasan hai lekin karana bahut muskil kyu ki mene bhi kisi aur roop me din aur raat ko jiya hai...

Yahi to vo jivan hai jise hame jina hai...

Aur mai aasha karta hu ki aapka jivan bhi raat se nikalakar abhi subah ki roshani se khila hoga.... aur biti raat ko bhulake naye din ki roshani aapko har tarah ke dil ke emotions se rubaru karvaye....

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

Bhai aapke bite kal ko imagine karane se hi muje emotional kar diya... aur aapne to ye bite kal ko jiya hai... phir me ab iss se aage kya bolu?...

Lekin aek baat jo mene kahi padhi thi.. jo muje acchi lagi thi... vo me jarur likhunga...

[Mahabharat ke Waqt Arjun Shri Krishna se aek diwar ki aur ishara karate huve kaheta hai ki...

Arjun - "Hai Keshav, Aap muje iss diwar pe kuch esa likhake de jise padh kar muje sukh me dukh ho aur dukh me sukh mahesoos ho..."

Shri Krishna hase aur phir unhone diwar pe likha - "Ye Waqt bhi bit jayega."]

Pata nahi uss Waqt Arjun aur Shri Krishna ke bich ye baat huyi thi ya nahi lekin hame uss se kya lena dena.... lekin yahi vo sikh hai jo ki Waqt labj ka kadava sach hai...

Lekin iss choti si kahani main apni aur se ye jarur likhunga ki ye jo Waqt ka chota hissa jo din ka sukh ya raat ka dukh ban ke hamare jivan me abhi chal raha hai ye hum par nirbhar karta hai ki iss Waqt ko hum kese jite hai... varana Waqt to chalega din ke baad raat layega aur raat ke baad din...

Aur me bhi manata hu ki mere liye kahena aasan hai lekin karana bahut muskil kyu ki mene bhi kisi aur roop me din aur raat ko jiya hai...

Yahi to vo jivan hai jise hame jina hai...

Aur mai aasha karta hu ki aapka jivan bhi raat se nikalakar abhi subah ki roshani se khila hoga.... aur biti raat ko bhulake naye din ki roshani aapko har tarah ke dil ke emotions se rubaru karvaye....

Aur story me bhi Pavan ke jivan me chal rahe raat ke andhere ko vo sir uthake jina chahata tha phir uski wajah koi bhi ho...

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

Updates - 31


Abhi bhi wahi khila chahera... aur wahi mithi muskan... Uske sath uski saheli bhi thi... dono school bus me beth chale gaye.


"Paridhi aur Naina"


Aaj pura din yahi do naam mere hotho pe aa rahe the... yahi do naam baar baar dil ko teji se dhadaka rahe the... yahi do naam dil ko khushi se bhar rahe the...


Ab aage......


Present Date - 16/02/2016


Paridhi jitana apna naam Pavan ki Dyari me dekh ke khush ho rahi thi utani hi Naina ka naam dekh hairaan bhi thi... Pavan ne Naina ko dekh ke use kesa mahesoos huva ye saaf saaf likha tha... lekin esa kyu huva vo abhi sawal hi tha... Aur iss sawal ka jawab Waqt ke alawa koi nahi de sakata tha...


Paridhi bhi ab iss sawal ko side me rakh phir se Dyari padh ne lagi... Aek baat aur bhi thi jo Paridhi ne notice ki thi ki vo vahi school padhi thi jiss school ka jikr Pavan ne kiya tha...


"School of Achiever"


Yaani ki Pavan ne sach me use dekha tha... Paridhi padhate padhate jab bhi Dyari me likha aek din pura kar rahi thi uski chahere ki khushi aur bhi badh rahi thi....


Kyu?... kyu ki Pavan ne likha tha ki vo uss din ke baad har roj Aadi ke sath school jata tha uss Jannat ki Pari ki vo muskurahat dekhane, uss Jannat ki Pari ka khila huva chahera dekhane, uss Jannat ki Pari ko dekh khud ke dil ko phir se dhadakata huva mahesoos karne... Pavan aur Aadi roj pura din vahi khade rahete Paridhi ke intejaar me...


Paridhi ko esa lag raha tha ki vo Dyari padh nahi rahi hai balki Pavan use khud uss Dyari se bol raha tha aur vo Pavan ki aawaj ke sur me kho si gayi thi...


Aage padhate padhate Paridhi ki aankhe aek date pe aake ruk gayi jese uss date ko dekh Paridhi ki aankhe kisi baat se chaunk gayi.... Pavan ki Dyari pe likhi vo date 07/03/2008 thi... Paridhi ki aankhe uss date pe ese tiki jese uska koi esa hissa iss Waqt ki date se ese juda tha ki vo jindagi bhar iss Waqt ki date ko kabhi nahi bhul sakegi...


Paridhi ki aankho ke rang jo abhi tak pyaar aur khushi se bhare the vo abhi badalane lage.... badalane lage uske chahere ke rang jo abhi tak khushi aur muskuraat se ghire the... badalane lage dil ke rang jo apnepan ke ahesaas se range the...


Aur inn khubsoorat rango ki jagah dar ke, nafarat ke, dard ke, dukh ke, kale rango ne le li... ye vo kale rang the jiss sab bhagana chahate the... ye vo kale rang the jinhe hum bhulana chahate the...


Paridhi ne uss date ke niche se shuru ho rahi likhavat ko dekh uski aankhe aur bhi chaunk gayi...


Kyu?... kyu ki ye jo likhavat Pavan ne likhi thi vo itne bhari hatho se likhi thi jiss se pure page pe kai jagah pen se huve bade ched ban gaye the... aur Pavan ki likhavat bhi aekdam se badal gayi thi.... ye likhavat bilkul kharab ho chuki thi... Paridhi ke liye aek aek shabd ko padh pana bhi bahut muskil ho raha tha...


Likhavat se saaf saaf jalak raha tha ki ye likhate Waqt Pavan ke hath bahut buri tarah se kaamp rahe hoge aur inn kampte hatho se likhane ke liye use bahut bhari hatho se likhana pada tha..... ye likhavt esi thi jese Pavan apne dil ka bahut bada boj iss chote se kagaj pe apne hatho ke jariye utaar ne ki nakam koshish kar raha tha..... ye saaf saaf dikh raha tha ki Pavan badi hi muskil se iss din ko likh paya hoga...


Dyari ke iss page pe likhe gaye har aek shabdo ki ink puri tarah se faili huyi thi... ye esa tha jesa ink ka paani se sampark me aane se hota hai... aur ye ink iss tarah se kyu faili thi ye bhi saaf saaf dikh raha tha... ye aanshu the jo Pavan ki aankho se bahe the.... ye dard ke aanshu the jo Pavan ke dil se nikale the... ye ghane kali raat ke andhere ke aanshu the jisne Pavan ke dil pe pura kabja kar liya tha... ye khud ke liye nafarat ke aanshu the jisne uske dil ko chalni chalni kar diya tha.... ye afsos ke aanshu the jo uske dil ko nark ki agni me jala rahe the... ye kampte rooh ki aawaj thi jo aanshuo se bah rahi thi...


Ye vo aanshu the jinke liye koi shabd nahi the... ye vo aanshu the jo dil ke ahesaas ko baha rahe the lekin unn ahesaas ko mahesoos karna shayad kisi ke bas ka nahi tha.. aur inn ahesaaso ka likhana bilkul bhi mumkin nahi tha kyu ki ye ahesaas sare shabdo se pare tha... aur inn ahesaas ko likhana shayad uss ahesaas ki tohin thi...


Ye saaf saaf jalak raha tha aek aek shabd likhate Waqt Pavan ki aankho se itne aanshu bahe the ki shayad uss Waqt vo Pavan ko kisine dekh bhi liya hota to uski dil ki dhadakane hi ruk jaati... uski saanse hi tham jaati...


~ Gabbar is Back