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Dosto ye update chota jarur tha lekin muje lagata hai ki chota paket bada dhamaka tha...

Emotions se bharpur update tha hi lekin sath me suspence ki aag lagane wala bhi tha....

Lekin iske sath jesa ki mene bataya tha ki pichhe wale updates me diye gaye kuch hints, kuch sawal, kuch bate, kuch suspence ko aane wale updates ke sath relate karata rahunga....

Isliye update-31 ka relation subah tak post kar dunga... aur muje lagata hai ye relation kuch iss tarah se karunga ki aapki suspnce ki aag me petrol ki tarah kaam kare aur shayad kuch hints bhi mil jaye...:yippi:


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Awesome mind blowing update bhai ad aage diary me kya likha hai.pls jaldi update do bhai
 

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to ye tha wo waqt 7/3/2008 jisne paridhi ki hi nahin pawan ki jindgi mein sabse bada dard...bhar diya

lekin hua kya tha us din....................

naina ne is diary ko pura padha bhi hai....
Dekhte hain kya likha hai...
 
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Awesome mind blowing update bhai ad aage diary me kya likha hai.pls jaldi update do bhai
Jab aap bole paridhi aur Pawan ki story about aapas main Jude go laga tha aaj ke update main aap kuch hint ya complete karoge lakin mujhe ye adura hi update laga
Hope night main ek update aur do
to ye tha wo waqt 7/3/2008 jisne paridhi ki hi nahin pawan ki jindgi mein sabse bada dard...bhar diya

lekin hua kya tha us din....................

naina ne is diary ko pura padha bhi hai....
Dekhte hain kya likha hai...
Refer to this post that I post as reserved...

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Jab aap bole paridhi aur Pawan ki story about aapas main Jude go laga tha aaj ke update main aap kuch hint ya complete karoge lakin mujhe ye adura hi update laga
Hope night main ek update aur do
Update adhura kaho ya kuch aur.....

lekin yahi aek lekhak ki pahechan hai ki vo readers ko ese bandhe rakhe ki ve aane wale har aek chapter ko padh ne ke liye hakka bakka ho jaye...:winkiss:

Aur realation wali post subah tak mil jayegi...
 
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to ye tha wo waqt 7/3/2008 jisne paridhi ki hi nahin pawan ki jindgi mein sabse bada dard...bhar diya

lekin hua kya tha us din....................

naina ne is diary ko pura padha bhi hai....
Dekhte hain kya likha hai...
Naina ne kaha Dyari puri padhi thi...... usne Dyari ko aek jagah aake chod diya tha padhana... kyu ki ab uss se aur nahi padha jaa raha tha... vo kaha pe ruki thi ye bhi aapko pata chal hi jayega Waqt ke sath :)
 
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Update – 12
Paridhi - "Kya samjata hai apne aap ko?... Oh God me pagal ho jaungi agar ye yahi raha to... usne pahele hi din sab ke samane apna achha impression jama diya... iski over samrtness ko agar uda na diya na to mera naam bhi Paridhi Chauhan nahi..."


Paridhi gusse me bad bada rahi thi...


Lekin iss Waqt ko kuch aur hi manjoor tha... aakhir Waqt se bhag bhi kon sakta hai.... Paridhi ko Waqt ne abhi kuch ese hi mod pe khada kiya tha jiss se uski jindgi badalne vali thi... Kaafi kuch badlne vala tha... Kya ye mod Avinash ke Paridhi ki life me aane se badlane vala tha ya phir kuch aur bhi tha jo abhi dikh nahi raha tha...


Waqt se kon bhag sakata hai bhala.... Vo konsa mod tha jispe Waqt ne Paridhi ko khada kar diya tha?....



Abhi tak samaj nahi paye...


Ye vo mod tha jaha Paridhi ko Pavan ki Dyari mili thi... Ye vo mod tha jaha Paridhi Pavan ki Dyari ko padh apanepan ka ahesaas mahesoos kar rahi thi.... Ye vo mod tha jaha Paridhi ka dil Pavan ko paheli baar milne se huve ahesaas ko phir se jiya tha....


Ye vo mod tha jaha Paridhi ke jivan me Avinash ka aana huva tha... Ye vo mod tha jaha Paridhi ki nafarat ko Avinash badal paya tha... Ye vo mod tha jaha Paridhi aur Avinash karib aa chuke the...


Lekin inn sab me vo konsa mod tha jiski wajah se Paridhi ki jindagi badal dene wali thi.... Kya Paridhi ki jindagi Avinash ke uski life me aane se badalane wali thi ya phir Pavan ki Dyari se juda Paridhi aur Pavan ka esa past tha jiss se Paridhi ki jindagi badalane wali thi...


Ye aapko sochana hai ki kese aur kis wajah se Paridhi ki jindagi badalane wali thi.....



Apne vichar comment karke jarur batayega...


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Update – 13
Maa... kya mai kisi ke maut ki bajah ban ke khud shaitan nahi ban gaya na maa?....


Me kya karu Maa... muje kuch samaj nahi aa raha... Muje apki madad chahiye maa... aapke bete ko aapki madad chahiye....


Pappa aapko pata hai aaj mere Dil ko lagata hai ki maine sahi kiya aur meri sabse achhi dost kitabo me bhi yahi likha hai ki sabki madad karni chahiye... mene sahi kiya na papa?... kya aap muje nahi bataoge ki me galat hu ya sahi?.... kya kisi ke madad ke liye kisi ki jaan lena galat hai?...


Aur agar galat hai to phir mai bhi aaj vo kitabo vala shaitan ban gaya na papa.... muje shaitan nahi banana papa muje to apni chutki ka hero banana hai... agar mai shaitan ban gaya to kya muje chutki pahechan payegi?... Papa muje shaitan nahi banana papa.... muje aap jesa banana hai...



Aap ko pata hai papa maine kitabo me padha hai ki shaitan kese hote hai abhi bhi me unn sab ko apne aaspass mahesoos kar sakata hu papa... Kya inn sab ke bich rah ke me bhi unn jese hi ban jaunga?... Kya mai bhi esa hi ban jaunga papa?..




Chutki dekh na koi sun hi nahi raha... dekh na maa aur papa bhi koi jawab nahi de rahe... tu darna mat chutki tera bhaiya shaitan nahi banega... tera bhaiya hero banega.. ha... bata raha hu.... aur na jab me tum sab ko dundh lunga na mai hero banke hi aaunga...


Ye vo Waqt tha jab Pavan ko paheli baar khud ke Shaitaan hone par sawal utha tha... Ye vo Waqt tha jab Pavan apne papa se kah raha tha ki vo Shaitaan nahi banana chahata.... Vo apni Chutki ko bata raha tha ki vo Shaitaan nahi banega lekin uska Hero banega...


Ye vo pal tha jiska jawab dene uske pass koi nahi tha.... Aur aakhir mai Pavan uss daldal me fas chuka tha... vo khichad me maila ho hi gaya... vo Shaitaan ban hi gaya..


Update – 15
Lekin muje khane ki koi chij nahi chahiye thi muje paise chahiye the... muje mere bhai Aadi ke ilaj ke liye pasie jodane the... mai uska ilaaj aek bade se hosptial me karavana chahata tha... aur vapis use uske pairo pe khada karana chahata tha..


Mai bhuka so sakata hu... mai maar kha sakata hu... mai apne uper kiye gaye ham julm ko sahen kar sakata hu... lekin mera bhai... mera bhai Aadi ghut ghut ke ji raha tha... mai use ese nahi dekh sakata.... mai use tadapata nahi dekh shakata... Aakhir Aadi mera aek lauta bhai tha... mera aek lauta Pariwar tha...


Aek sawal jo aapke man me jarur uthana chahiye ki agar Pavan ko chutaki ka hero banana tha phir vo Shaitaan kese ban gaya?


Usne muje apni car ke darwaje se dhakka laga diya... mai kuch door ja gira... meri kohni chil gayi... vaha se khoon nikal ne laga.... Aadi bhi apni jagah se apne pairo pe khud ko ghasit ta huva mere pass aa gaya... mene jab use dekha mai fauran uth gaya... aur use phir se uthake uski jagah bitha diya... uski aankho aanshu se bhig chuki thi..



Aadi - "Kyu karta hai tu esa?... chala jana yaha se.... mere liye khud kyu iss nark me sad raha hai.... me to kabhi thik na ho paunga.... lekin tuje mere liye esa karte karte jaroor kuch ho jayega..."



Mai - "Nahi Aadi.... esa mat bol... tu mera bhai hai na..... aur me apne bhai ke liye sab kuch karunga..... mai na tera ilaz jaroor karvaunga.... tu phir se daude ga... dekh lena... tab na ham dono yaha se bhag jayenge.... aur tere iss ilaz ke liye agar muje bhagwan se bhi bhidna pade to me unse bhi lad lunga... muje kuch nahi chahiye aadi... muje sirf tu khush rahe... tera har sapana sahi ho yahi chahiye... aur tera khush rahena... muskurana meri uss bhukh ko bujata hai jiska mai bhuka hu... pyaar ki bhuk mitati hai meri.... aur iss ke liye duniya ki sari daulat me chod sakta hu.


Lekin Pavan Shaitaan kis ke liye bana?... use kis ke liye sab kuch banana manjur tha?... Pavan ko kis ke liye shaitaan banana manjur tha?... kon tha jiske liye Pavan duniya ki sari daulat bhi chodane ke liye taiyaar tha?...


Update – 21
Mai thoda dhime swar me bola - "Muje unke liye kaam karna hoga.... uss Munna ne muje uski gang me shamil kiya hai.. vo sab kuch karna hoga jo vo karte hai... isliye vo muje kal se sab kuch sikhayenge.."


Aadi mere kandho ko hilate huve - "Yaar kyu kiya tune esa?... kyu pair daal raha hai iss kichad me?..... Yaar tum hi to bolte ho ki tumhe apni chutki ke liye hero banana hai koi shaitan nahi.."


Mere dil mai chutki ka khyal aate hi mera dil pasis utha... meri aankhe bhar aayi.. ha mai banana chahta hu chutaki ka hero...



Mai - "Mai bhi chahata hu ki mai chutaki ka hero banu... lekin kab tak ham yuhi bikh mangte rahege.... aek na aek din wo hame kisi aur ko bech denge.. jese doosro ko bechte hai... aur tab pair pe padi janjiro se ham Kabhi nahi nikal payege..... aur agar yaha rahenge to hame goli maar denge.."


Mai rone laga.. mai kya karu?... muje kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha.... Pata hai Maa.. mai kabhi logo ka bura nahi chahta tha.. Maine padha tha ki burai aur achhai ki ladai me jeet hamnesha achhai ki hoti hai... aur abhi me jiska sath hu vo burai hai... mai harunga hi.... lekin agar burai ka sath nahi diya to vo log Aadi ko maar dalenge... mere bhai ko maar dalenge... sabkuch khatam ho jayega...


Pata nahi kyu? mera dil Munna ki har aek baat ke sath beth raha tha... esa lag raha tha ki mera dil ab samandar ki gaheraio me chip jayega.... iss burai ke khichad me mera dil kahi kho jayega.... aur mera dil kabhi Waqt ke ujjale ko nahi dekh payega...


Mai kya karu Maa... Papa aap kuch batayiye na... Mai nahi banana chahta koi shaitan... mai hamensha se hero hi banana chahata hu.... Mai kya karu?...


Aek hi to sahara tha Pavan ka jiss se vo sabse jyada pyaar karata tha... khud se bhi jyada...


Update – 25
Appu - "Tuje ye dono matake aek sath pani se bharake uthane hai.... aur yaad rahe agar pani ki aek bund giri ya phir ye matak futa to teri dost ki aaj hawa tight hogi.... samaja kya?.."


Mene dil pe Aadi ki tasavir aa gayi... Pata nahi ye Appu iss tarah Aadi ko marane ki dhamaki ya deke mujse aur kon kon se kaam karavayega?


Kon tha jo Pavan ki jindagi me har uss chij jyada mayane rakhata tha?... kon tha jiske liye Pavan har dard ko sah sakata tha.... har gum ko bhula sakata tha... har aanshu ko pi sakata tha...


Update – 29
Meri aankhe band ho rahi thi.. aur Terror abhi bhi meri pith pe late maar raha tha...


Tabhi muje jese Aadi dikahi diya... uss bhid me muje laga ki dur kone pe Aadi khada tha.. aur uske sir pe kisine gun taan rakhi thi.. Aadi uss kone se mera naam chikh raha tha.... aur ro bhi raha tha.... muje bahut guss aaya... aur mere najro ke samane Aadi ka chahera ghumne laga.. jo dard muje ho raha tha... vo jese pura gayab hi ho gaya..


Mai fat se pith ki bal fira aur jese hi Terror ka pair muj pe padane wala tha ki mene uske pair ko hawa me thi pakad liya aur phir puri takat se aek tej jataka diya.. Terror jamin pe muh ke bal gira aur iske sath hi aaspass se logo ki khushi se chillane ki aawaj gunjane lagi...


Mai apni jagah pe khada huva lekin muje mahesoos huva ki Terror ki laate padane se meri pasliyo pe kafi dard ho raha tha jisse laga ki waha ki haddi me crack huva hai.. mene thoda hilane ki koshish ki lekin aek tej dard ki lahar daud gayi.... Lekin phir bhi mene Terror pe apni aankhe jama ke hi rakhi thi... muje dard mahesoos ho raha tha lekin mai pichhe 5 saalo se jitna dard mahesoos kar raha tha uss se ye kafi kam hi tha...


Lekin ab baat mere aage badhane ki thi... ab baat mere hatho ko khoon se rangne ki thi... ab baat mere dil ke tukde karane ki thi... aek pal ke liye mere pair dagmaga gaye lekin doosre hi pal meri najro ke samen Aadi ka chahera ghumne laga... muje sab manjur tha... muje Aadi ke liye sab manjur tha... Aadi ke liye kisi ka khoon karana bhi manjoor tha.... Aadi ke liye khud ke dil ke tukde karana bhi manjoor tha...


"Aadi"


Aadi hi to tha jiske liye Pavan ko kuch bhi manjoor tha... Aadi ke liye kisi ka khoon karana bhi manjoor tha aur Aadi ke liye hi khud ke dil ke tukde karana bhi manjoor tha....


Update – 30
Maine jab Aadi ke samne gaya tab meri halat dekh usne mujse bahes kar hi di... Lekin main use bahes me na ulajate huve uske hatho me 5000 rupye thama diye... 5000 rupye Aadi apne hatho me dekh chaunk gaya... usne aek pal muje dekha aur doosre hi pal usne muje sare paise wapis thama diye...


Aadi - "Nahi chahiye ese pase... jo tere khoon se range ho.... yaar ese mera ilaz ho bhi jayega to uska kya matalb.... mere pass tu hi nahi rahega... phir kis ke liye jiyunga?.... tera ghoot ghoot ke jina ab mujse aur nahi saha jaa raha hai bhai...."


Meri aankhe bhar gayi... Aadi kitna pyaar karta tha mujse - "Aadi... Aadi.. mai tujse kabhi dur nahi hu... mai hamensha tumhare sath hi rahunga.. aur rahi baat meri to aek baat bata du jab tera ilaj ho jayegana tab ham dono yaha se kahi door bhag jayenge.... itni door ki Munna bhi kabhi hame dhundh na payega..."


Aek taraf Pavan Aadi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakata tha aur doosri taraf Aadi ko bhi Pavan ka ghoot ghoot kar jina saha nahi jaa raha tha....



Ab sawal ye hai ki ye date 07/03/2008 kya esa kuch lane wali thi jo sab ki jindagiya badalne wali thi... jisme Pavan shamil tha.. Jisme Paridhi judi huyi thi... Jisme ab Aadi bhi jud chuka tha...


Ab Pavan ke liye Aadi hi sab kuch tha so Aadi ka bhi iss date 07/03/2008 se judna tay hi tha... Aadi hi wajah tha Pavan ka Shaitaan ban ne ka... to kya Aadi hi vo wajah banega jiss se Chutki ka Hero Shaitaan se wapis hero ban payega?



Apne vichar comment karke jarur batayega...


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