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Dosto next update bahut bada ho raha tha isliye isse do update main divide kiya hai
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Aur pahela update bas kuch hi der me aapke hatho me aa jayegaa....
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bahut khoob................... yani 2-2 update milne wale hain......................
kahani ab bahut rochak mod par pahunch chuki hai..............
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Update - 32
Ye vo aanshu the jinke liye koi shabd nahi the... ye vo aanshu the jo dil ke ahesaas ko baha rahe the lekin unn ahesaas ko mahesoos karna shayad kisi ke bas ka nahi tha.. aur inn ahesaaso ka likhana bilkul bhi mumkin nahi tha kyu ki ye ahesaas sare shabdo se pare tha... aur inn ahesaas ko likhana shayad uss ahesaas ki tohin thi...
Ye saaf saaf jalak raha tha aek aek shabd likhate Waqt Pavan ki aankho se itne aanshu bahe the ki shayad uss Waqt vo Pavan ko kisine dekh bhi liya hota to uski dil ki dhadakane hi ruk jaati... uski saanse hi tham jaati...
Ab aage.....
Paridhi ke liye Dyari me likha huva aek aek shabd padh pana bahut muskil ho raha tha lekin ye date 07/03/2008 bahut mayne rakahti thi aur jesi likhavat Pavan ne Dyari me likhi thi uss se saaf saaf Paridhi ko pata chal raha tha ki ye din Pavan ki jindagi se utana hi mayane rakhata tha jitna Paridhi ke jivan me...
Aur isiliye Paridhi ka dil pahele se bhi jyada bechain ho gaya aur dil ki dhadakane itni tej ho gayi ye jan ne ke liye ki kya huva tha Pavan ki jindagi me?... vo ab aur khud ko nahi rok paa rahi thi ye jaan ne ke liye...
Paridhi ko bhale hi aek aek shabd ko padhane ke liye muskil ho rahi thi lekin phir bhi usne apni puri koshish karte huve Dyari ke iss din ko padhane ki shuruaat ki...
Date - 07/03/2008
Maa.... Mai pichale 3 dino se lagatar Paridhi ko dekhane ke liye uske school jaa raha tha aur mai itna khush tha inn 3 dino me aapko bata bhi nahi sakata Maa... lekin itna jarur kah sakata hu ki ye 3 din ese bite jiske sahare main apni puri jinadagi kaat sakata hu...
Uss Jannat ki Pari ko dekhane ke aek aek pal muje itni takat de rahe the..... jiss se mera tan man itni roshani se bhar utha tha ki mai uss roshani ke aek aek kiran ke sahare apne iss andar ke Shaitaan ko khud pe puri tarah se havi hone se rok sakata tha....
Aur mai Waqt ke har pal ke sath uss khuda se yahi mangta raha tha ki iss kamal ke phool pe, iss Jannat ki Pari pe koi aanch naa aaye... usse har burai se bachae.... sirf bachae hi nahi balki kisi burai ki parachai bhi uspe na padane de.... mere jese shaitaan ki bhi parachai uspe na pade... Khuda se meri sari mange bas uss Jannat ki Pari ke liye hi nikal rahi thi....
Lekin ab main roj roj uss Jannat ki Pari ko dekhane nahi jaa sakata tha varana Munna ko pata lag jaata aur kuch aur hi jamela khada ho jata.... isliye aaj maine aur Aadi ne school nahi jaane ka faisla kiya...
Aur aaj ke din kya karna tha vo bhi mene soch liya tha... Maine aaj phir se usi ring me ladane jane ka faisla liya... kyu ki muje Aadi ke ilaaj ke liye jitni jaldi ho shake paise ikkatha karana chahata tha... aur isliye muje aaj kisi ko bina bataye aur apni pahechan kisi ke samane naa aaye iss tarah se ladana tha aur mene faisla kiya ki me apana naam aur apna chahera chipake ring me ladane ke liye jaunga....
Aadi muje mana kar raha tha vo muje phir se uski wajah se kisi ka khoon nahi karne dena chahata tha lekin mere pass aur koi vikapl bhi nahi tha jiss me dher sare paise kama saku... isliye mene Aadi ki baat naa mante huve kamare se bhigi aakho se nikal gaya...
Main nikal gaya khud ke andar ke Shaitaan ko phir se jagane ke liye.... Main nikal gaya khud ke andar ke Shaitaan ko aek aur bali chadhane ke liye... Main nikal gaya tha aek kadam phir se iss khichad me badhane ke liye...
Jab me kamare se nikal raha tha.. tabhi muje Munna ka beta Vijay dikha... vo bhi apne baap hi ki tarah bana tha... Lekin ye kahena uss se bhi jyada munasib tha ki vo Munna se kai gunna gaya gujara tha... pura hevan ban shuka tha.... uss ke liye kuch bhi bura kaam karna jese khel tha... kisi ka bhi murder haste haste aur khelte khelte kar deta... Vo Munna ke har business me apna khof jamane ke liye mashoor tha....
Vo abhi 17-18 saal ki umr ka hi hoga... lekin phir bhi hevano ki duniya me vo sab se bada haivaan tha... mai bhi khud ko uske sath kabhi kabhi compare kiya karta tha khud ki thodi tassali ke liye... iss tassali ke liye ki main abhi bhi utna bada shaitaan nahi hu jitna vo tha... Munna ko jaha bhi dahesahat aur apna khof failana hota vo Vijay ko hi bhej deta...
Maine sir niche juka liya... vo mere samne dekh hasa...
Vijay - "Kutta.. sala"
Aur vo chala gaya... Aur uske piche uske sare chamche bhi nikal gaye.... Lekin Vijay yaha Munna ke office se bahar nikala tha matalab ki aaj koi iski havaaniyat ka sikar hone wala tha...
Maine aek mask kharid liya jiss se mera chahera puri tarah se dhak jata tha... aur pahunch gaya uss ladai ki jagah pe.... uss din ke jesse hi aaj bhi bahut sari bhid thi... waha jake mene apana nam likhwaya... Mene apna naam Yamraaj likhava diya... Pata nahi Yamraaj kyu likhavaya lekin uss Waqt mere man me yahi naam aaya..
Mera aur mere samane ladane wale ka naam liya gaya.... Uska naam Sonu tha... Lekin uska chahera uske naam se bilkul mail nahi khaa raha tha.... aur mujpe boli lagani shuru ho gayi... mujpe 10000 rupye ki boli lagi... paheli baar se kam thi lekin mere liye abhi ke liye bahut thi.... Ring me ham dono ke pahunch ne ke baad fight shuru huyi....
Fight mushkil jarur thi lekin ab jese ye meri doosri fight thi muje jyada dikkat nahi huyi fight ko jitne ke liye....
Fight ke ant me aek kshan tha jab mere samane Sonu jamin pe gira huva tha pura khoon se lathpath aur mere samane hath jod raha tha rahem ke liye use naa marane ke liye... Uss Waqt meri aankho me saaf saaf khoon jalak raha tha lekin uska mere liye rahem ke liye hath jodana meri aankho se khoon ka nasha utaar diya...
Main aek pal Sonu ki aur dekhata raha... aur phir mene aaspass dekha jaha khade sare log muje usko maar dalane ka bol rahe the... mene phir se Sonu ki aur dekha meri aankho se aanshu chalak uthe... agar muje jitna tha to muje Sonu ko marana hi tha uske baad hi muje jit ke pasie milane wale the...
Meri aankho ke samane Aadi ka chahera aa gaya... Muje uske liye ye paise chahiye hi the... Aur uske sath hi aamkho mai phir se khoon utar aaya....
Aur jese hi main use marne ke liye apna kadam uski aur badaya ussi pal mere samane vo chahera aaya jisne muje roshani di thi.... jisne meri jindagi me achhai ke liye jine ki aash di thi... jiss phool ki khushbu ne hi muje iss duniya ki achhai ke liye jine ka maksad diya tha... Uss Jannat ki Pari ka chahera samane aa gaya...Meri aankho me aaye aanshu mere galo pe bikhar gaye...
Main ye nahi kar sakata tha... Main Shaitaan bhale hi tha lekin majboori ke karan tha... Main itna nahi gir sakata ki main kisi pe rahem bhi naa sakata tha......
Maine kya karu? muje samaj nahi aa raha tha muje Aadi ke liye paise ki sakht jaroorat thi...
Lekin uss Pari ka chahera mere samane se jaa hi nahi raha tha... aur jese uss Pari ka chahera mujse kah raha tha ki chod de abhi bhi mujme kuch achhai bachi hai... abhi bhi vo achhai kahi chipi hai jiske liye mene jine ka maksad banaya tha...
Aur phir main kya karata?.. chod diya mene Sonu ko.... main aek najar Sonu pe dali aur ring se bahar nikal gaya... Aur uske sath hi jese dil se bada boj kam ho gaya....
Main bhale hi aaj paise nahi jit paya uska muje dukh ho raha tha lekin aek ahesaas muje aur bhi khush kar raha tha ki abhi bhi mujme kuch achhai baki hai... Aur iss achhai ko mere samane vo Jannat ki Pari layi thi... Maine dil hi dil me uska aabhar mana muje apni kuch bachi kuchi achhai se rubaru karavane ke liye....
Ring se bahar nikal kar main aage badh raha tha charo aur se muje galio ki aawaj sunai de rahi thi... lekin meri aankho ke samane abhi bhi Paridhi ki chavi hi thi... jo muje bata rahi thi ki maine jo bhi mene kiya vo bilkul sahi kiya.... bus muje yahi to chahiye koi esa jo muje bata sake ki main sahi hu.... jo muje bata sake ki main kaha galat tha... jo mere Pariwaar ki kami ko pura kar sake...
Jab main uss jagah se bahar nikal gaya tabhi mere samane aek Aadmi aake khada ho gaya... Vo Aadmi dikane se kafi achhe gharane se lag raha tha...
Aadmi - "Kyu ladane aaye the yaha?..."
Main - "Aap se koi matalab?"
Aadmi - "Mai yaha kafi baar fight dekhane aata hu... Aaj paheli baar dekha ki kisine kisi ko mare bina hi jinda chod diya tha... aur jab tumne yaha bahar aake apne chahere se ye mask utara maine tumhari aankho ke aanshu bhi dekh liye.... tum jarur hi Paiso ke liye ladnae aaye the... mai bas itna puch raha hu hi kyu?"
Main - "Apne bhai ko uske pairo pe khada karna chahata hu..."
Aadi ka naam aate hi meri aankho se aanshu bahene lage kyu ki aaj main aek bhi paisa nahi jit paya tha...
Vo Aadmi meri aankho ko hi dekh raha tha jese vo kuch padhane ki koshish kar raha tha...
Aadmi - "Kya mai jaan sakata hu ki kya huva hai aapke bhai ke sath?"
Muje pata nahi kya huva... main uss Aadmi ko kuch nahi batana chahata tha lekin phir Paridhi ka chahera samane aaya aur kahene laga ki sab bata du iss Aadmi ko..
Aur phir mene uss Aadmi ko sab kuch bata diya... Apne aur Aadi ke bare me sab kuch bata diya... meri aankho se lagatar aanshu bahene lage the...
Usne pata nahi kya dekha hoga?... Lekin muje esa laga jese usne meri aankho me sachhai dekh li thi... usne mera hath pakada aur uspe aek bag rakh di...
Mene bag kholkar dekha... bag paiso se bhara huva tha... Meri aankhe chaunkne se badi ho gayi... mene aek tak uss pasio ki aur dekh raha tha aur uss Aadmi ke chahere ki aur.... Paise dikhne se pata lag raha tha ki bahut sare the...
Aadmi - "Aaj main yaha pe ye 2 lakh paise lagane aaya tha.... lekin muje lagata hai ki iss Paiso ki jarurat tumhe sabse jyada hai... mere liye to ye sab aek jugar hai aaj sochunga ki mai sare paise haar gaya... main sare paise kisi ki sachhai ke samane haar gaya..."
Main uss Aadmi ki aur dekh hi raha tha aur aankho se aanshu bahene lage... aaj kisi ne itne sare paise mere dost Aadi ke ilaj ke liye diye the... 5 saal baad koi esa samane aaya jisne Aadi ke ilaj ke liye apna hath aage badhaya tha....
Main itna khush ho chuka tha ki aawaj bhi thik se nikal nahi rahi thi - "Aapka.... aapka bahut bahut dhanywad... Aap.. Aap apna pata aur naam bata dijiye... Main ye sare paise aapko wapas de dunga.. jab mere pass khud ke paise hoge..."
Uss Aadmi ne mere khandhe pe apna hath rakhate huve - "Nahi... uski koi jaroorat nahi hai... mere pass khuda ka diya huva sab kuch hai..."
Main - "Nahi.. ham bhale hi garib hai.. lekin hamara swabhimaan hi hamari amiri hai... aap please muje apna pata bata dijiye..."
Uss Aadmi ki aankhe bhi bhig gayi - "Nahi muje nahi chahiye pasie.... lekin phir bhi tum dena chahate hi ho to kisi ese ko dena jisse tumhare jese hi paiso ki jaroorat jyada hai..."
Main - "Aapka dil bahut bada hai... kabhi bhi aapko meri jaroorat ho muje bas bata dena... aapke samne hajir ho jaunga... "
Uss Aadmi ne mere khandho ko thapthapaya aur waha se chala gaya...
Main wapis se uss Paiso ki aur dekhne laga.. 2 lakh rupye.. itni badi rakam... mera dil itni teji se nachane laga jese kabhi nahi nacha tha... mere dost... mere bhai.... mere Aadi ka ilaaj ab tay tha...
Aur itne sare sirf ilsiye mile the kyu ki ring me jab meri aankhe khoon se bhari huyi thi tab uss Paridhi ne kaha tha ki muj me abhi bhi achhai bachi hai...
"Paridhi"
Jab se meri aur Aadi ki jindagi me ye Paridhi naam ki ladki aayi thi tab se jese hamare phir se jine ki aash khil chuki thi... iss Jannat ki Pari ka ahesaan pata nahi main kese chuka saku?... lekin mere dil se duva jarur nikalegi ki uss Pari ki jindagi usi Jannat ki tarah ho jaha se vo aayi thi...
Main pasio ki bag leke ham jaha itne salo se paise chipa rahe the waha pe pahunch gaya... Main Aadi ke bare me hi soch raha tha... main ye soch ke utna kush ho raha tha ki jab main use itne sare paiso ke bare me bataunga tab vo kitna khush hoga....
Meri aankho ke samane Aadi ki vo chavi aane lagi jo apne pairo pe khada tha... jo muje door se hath hila raha tha... vo muje hath hilake uske pairo ki aur dekhane ko kah raha tha... aur phir vo khushi se kudane laga... vo nachane laga... aur use uske pairo pe nachate dekh meri aankho se khushi ke ese aanshu bahene lage jisse main bata bhi nahi sakata....
Aur sach kahu to hamare dil aapas me itne jude huye the ki main uske ilaaj hone ki khushi ko mahesoos kar sakata tha... hamare dil ese jude the ki ham aek doosre ke dard, khushi ko kahi se bhi mahesoos kar sakate the...
Main jab paise chippa raha tha tab main Aadi ke bare me hi soch raha tha phir jese achhanak hi mere dil ko kuch ajib sa mahesoos hone laga...
Jese mera dil rone laga tha... dil me bahut tej dard hone laga.. jese koi mere dil ko kat raha ho... dil ka dard Waqt ke har aek pal me itna tej ho raha tha ki mere liye bardast ke bahar hone laga... Ye dard ab tak mene sahe huye sare dard se bhi badatar tha... ye dard sabse badatar tha... ye dard muje jese meri maut ka ahesaas dila raha tha..
Main puri tarah se bechain ho gaya... Aur iss dil me badhate har aek dard ke sath muje Aadi ka chahera dikhai dene laga... Dil me esa dar utha jo mene aaj tak kabhi nahi mahesoos kiya tha.... Dar kuch bahut bura hone ka... dar jo dard ke sath ese bahene laga jiss se mera pura sharir pasine se bhig gaya.... meri saanse puri tej ho gayi... saanse lene me takalif hone lagi...
Lekin muje Aadi ka chahera samane dikhana aur bhi dara raha rha.... mene jaldi se paise waha rakhe... aur wapas aane ke liye chala... main chal nahi raha tha jese daud raha tha... mere pair itni teji se pahele kabhi nahi daude the.... daudte daudte mera sharir pura kaamp raha tha... kuch bahut buri anhoni hone ka ahesaas ho raha tha...
Mai jese hi gate pe pahuncha mene teji se use dhakka dete huve andar aa gaya... mai teji se ander aaya..
Lekin gate pe hi mere pair jese jakad gaye... mere pair jamin pe dhans gaye samane ka najara dekhate huve.... samne charo aur khoon pada tha.... aur gate ke kuch door aek ladka khoon se lathpath pet ke bal doosri aur muh kiye pada tha..
Dil ki dhadakene kabu se bahar ho gayi jab uske pass hi mene vo stand dekha jo Aadi isteman karata tha uske khade rahene ke liye... meri dil ki dhadakane aek pal ke liye itni tej dhadaki aur uske doosre hi pal dil ne dhadakana hi band kar diya....
Mai - "Aadi...."
"Aadi"
~ Gabbar is Back
Ye vo aanshu the jinke liye koi shabd nahi the... ye vo aanshu the jo dil ke ahesaas ko baha rahe the lekin unn ahesaas ko mahesoos karna shayad kisi ke bas ka nahi tha.. aur inn ahesaaso ka likhana bilkul bhi mumkin nahi tha kyu ki ye ahesaas sare shabdo se pare tha... aur inn ahesaas ko likhana shayad uss ahesaas ki tohin thi...
Ye saaf saaf jalak raha tha aek aek shabd likhate Waqt Pavan ki aankho se itne aanshu bahe the ki shayad uss Waqt vo Pavan ko kisine dekh bhi liya hota to uski dil ki dhadakane hi ruk jaati... uski saanse hi tham jaati...
Ab aage.....
Paridhi ke liye Dyari me likha huva aek aek shabd padh pana bahut muskil ho raha tha lekin ye date 07/03/2008 bahut mayne rakahti thi aur jesi likhavat Pavan ne Dyari me likhi thi uss se saaf saaf Paridhi ko pata chal raha tha ki ye din Pavan ki jindagi se utana hi mayane rakhata tha jitna Paridhi ke jivan me...
Aur isiliye Paridhi ka dil pahele se bhi jyada bechain ho gaya aur dil ki dhadakane itni tej ho gayi ye jan ne ke liye ki kya huva tha Pavan ki jindagi me?... vo ab aur khud ko nahi rok paa rahi thi ye jaan ne ke liye...
Paridhi ko bhale hi aek aek shabd ko padhane ke liye muskil ho rahi thi lekin phir bhi usne apni puri koshish karte huve Dyari ke iss din ko padhane ki shuruaat ki...
Date - 07/03/2008
Maa.... Mai pichale 3 dino se lagatar Paridhi ko dekhane ke liye uske school jaa raha tha aur mai itna khush tha inn 3 dino me aapko bata bhi nahi sakata Maa... lekin itna jarur kah sakata hu ki ye 3 din ese bite jiske sahare main apni puri jinadagi kaat sakata hu...
Uss Jannat ki Pari ko dekhane ke aek aek pal muje itni takat de rahe the..... jiss se mera tan man itni roshani se bhar utha tha ki mai uss roshani ke aek aek kiran ke sahare apne iss andar ke Shaitaan ko khud pe puri tarah se havi hone se rok sakata tha....
Aur mai Waqt ke har pal ke sath uss khuda se yahi mangta raha tha ki iss kamal ke phool pe, iss Jannat ki Pari pe koi aanch naa aaye... usse har burai se bachae.... sirf bachae hi nahi balki kisi burai ki parachai bhi uspe na padane de.... mere jese shaitaan ki bhi parachai uspe na pade... Khuda se meri sari mange bas uss Jannat ki Pari ke liye hi nikal rahi thi....
Lekin ab main roj roj uss Jannat ki Pari ko dekhane nahi jaa sakata tha varana Munna ko pata lag jaata aur kuch aur hi jamela khada ho jata.... isliye aaj maine aur Aadi ne school nahi jaane ka faisla kiya...
Aur aaj ke din kya karna tha vo bhi mene soch liya tha... Maine aaj phir se usi ring me ladane jane ka faisla liya... kyu ki muje Aadi ke ilaaj ke liye jitni jaldi ho shake paise ikkatha karana chahata tha... aur isliye muje aaj kisi ko bina bataye aur apni pahechan kisi ke samane naa aaye iss tarah se ladana tha aur mene faisla kiya ki me apana naam aur apna chahera chipake ring me ladane ke liye jaunga....
Aadi muje mana kar raha tha vo muje phir se uski wajah se kisi ka khoon nahi karne dena chahata tha lekin mere pass aur koi vikapl bhi nahi tha jiss me dher sare paise kama saku... isliye mene Aadi ki baat naa mante huve kamare se bhigi aakho se nikal gaya...
Main nikal gaya khud ke andar ke Shaitaan ko phir se jagane ke liye.... Main nikal gaya khud ke andar ke Shaitaan ko aek aur bali chadhane ke liye... Main nikal gaya tha aek kadam phir se iss khichad me badhane ke liye...
Jab me kamare se nikal raha tha.. tabhi muje Munna ka beta Vijay dikha... vo bhi apne baap hi ki tarah bana tha... Lekin ye kahena uss se bhi jyada munasib tha ki vo Munna se kai gunna gaya gujara tha... pura hevan ban shuka tha.... uss ke liye kuch bhi bura kaam karna jese khel tha... kisi ka bhi murder haste haste aur khelte khelte kar deta... Vo Munna ke har business me apna khof jamane ke liye mashoor tha....
Vo abhi 17-18 saal ki umr ka hi hoga... lekin phir bhi hevano ki duniya me vo sab se bada haivaan tha... mai bhi khud ko uske sath kabhi kabhi compare kiya karta tha khud ki thodi tassali ke liye... iss tassali ke liye ki main abhi bhi utna bada shaitaan nahi hu jitna vo tha... Munna ko jaha bhi dahesahat aur apna khof failana hota vo Vijay ko hi bhej deta...
Maine sir niche juka liya... vo mere samne dekh hasa...
Vijay - "Kutta.. sala"
Aur vo chala gaya... Aur uske piche uske sare chamche bhi nikal gaye.... Lekin Vijay yaha Munna ke office se bahar nikala tha matalab ki aaj koi iski havaaniyat ka sikar hone wala tha...
Maine aek mask kharid liya jiss se mera chahera puri tarah se dhak jata tha... aur pahunch gaya uss ladai ki jagah pe.... uss din ke jesse hi aaj bhi bahut sari bhid thi... waha jake mene apana nam likhwaya... Mene apna naam Yamraaj likhava diya... Pata nahi Yamraaj kyu likhavaya lekin uss Waqt mere man me yahi naam aaya..
Mera aur mere samane ladane wale ka naam liya gaya.... Uska naam Sonu tha... Lekin uska chahera uske naam se bilkul mail nahi khaa raha tha.... aur mujpe boli lagani shuru ho gayi... mujpe 10000 rupye ki boli lagi... paheli baar se kam thi lekin mere liye abhi ke liye bahut thi.... Ring me ham dono ke pahunch ne ke baad fight shuru huyi....
Fight mushkil jarur thi lekin ab jese ye meri doosri fight thi muje jyada dikkat nahi huyi fight ko jitne ke liye....
Fight ke ant me aek kshan tha jab mere samane Sonu jamin pe gira huva tha pura khoon se lathpath aur mere samane hath jod raha tha rahem ke liye use naa marane ke liye... Uss Waqt meri aankho me saaf saaf khoon jalak raha tha lekin uska mere liye rahem ke liye hath jodana meri aankho se khoon ka nasha utaar diya...
Main aek pal Sonu ki aur dekhata raha... aur phir mene aaspass dekha jaha khade sare log muje usko maar dalane ka bol rahe the... mene phir se Sonu ki aur dekha meri aankho se aanshu chalak uthe... agar muje jitna tha to muje Sonu ko marana hi tha uske baad hi muje jit ke pasie milane wale the...
Meri aankho ke samane Aadi ka chahera aa gaya... Muje uske liye ye paise chahiye hi the... Aur uske sath hi aamkho mai phir se khoon utar aaya....
Aur jese hi main use marne ke liye apna kadam uski aur badaya ussi pal mere samane vo chahera aaya jisne muje roshani di thi.... jisne meri jindagi me achhai ke liye jine ki aash di thi... jiss phool ki khushbu ne hi muje iss duniya ki achhai ke liye jine ka maksad diya tha... Uss Jannat ki Pari ka chahera samane aa gaya...Meri aankho me aaye aanshu mere galo pe bikhar gaye...
Main ye nahi kar sakata tha... Main Shaitaan bhale hi tha lekin majboori ke karan tha... Main itna nahi gir sakata ki main kisi pe rahem bhi naa sakata tha......
Maine kya karu? muje samaj nahi aa raha tha muje Aadi ke liye paise ki sakht jaroorat thi...
Lekin uss Pari ka chahera mere samane se jaa hi nahi raha tha... aur jese uss Pari ka chahera mujse kah raha tha ki chod de abhi bhi mujme kuch achhai bachi hai... abhi bhi vo achhai kahi chipi hai jiske liye mene jine ka maksad banaya tha...
Aur phir main kya karata?.. chod diya mene Sonu ko.... main aek najar Sonu pe dali aur ring se bahar nikal gaya... Aur uske sath hi jese dil se bada boj kam ho gaya....
Main bhale hi aaj paise nahi jit paya uska muje dukh ho raha tha lekin aek ahesaas muje aur bhi khush kar raha tha ki abhi bhi mujme kuch achhai baki hai... Aur iss achhai ko mere samane vo Jannat ki Pari layi thi... Maine dil hi dil me uska aabhar mana muje apni kuch bachi kuchi achhai se rubaru karavane ke liye....
Ring se bahar nikal kar main aage badh raha tha charo aur se muje galio ki aawaj sunai de rahi thi... lekin meri aankho ke samane abhi bhi Paridhi ki chavi hi thi... jo muje bata rahi thi ki maine jo bhi mene kiya vo bilkul sahi kiya.... bus muje yahi to chahiye koi esa jo muje bata sake ki main sahi hu.... jo muje bata sake ki main kaha galat tha... jo mere Pariwaar ki kami ko pura kar sake...
Jab main uss jagah se bahar nikal gaya tabhi mere samane aek Aadmi aake khada ho gaya... Vo Aadmi dikane se kafi achhe gharane se lag raha tha...
Aadmi - "Kyu ladane aaye the yaha?..."
Main - "Aap se koi matalab?"
Aadmi - "Mai yaha kafi baar fight dekhane aata hu... Aaj paheli baar dekha ki kisine kisi ko mare bina hi jinda chod diya tha... aur jab tumne yaha bahar aake apne chahere se ye mask utara maine tumhari aankho ke aanshu bhi dekh liye.... tum jarur hi Paiso ke liye ladnae aaye the... mai bas itna puch raha hu hi kyu?"
Main - "Apne bhai ko uske pairo pe khada karna chahata hu..."
Aadi ka naam aate hi meri aankho se aanshu bahene lage kyu ki aaj main aek bhi paisa nahi jit paya tha...
Vo Aadmi meri aankho ko hi dekh raha tha jese vo kuch padhane ki koshish kar raha tha...
Aadmi - "Kya mai jaan sakata hu ki kya huva hai aapke bhai ke sath?"
Muje pata nahi kya huva... main uss Aadmi ko kuch nahi batana chahata tha lekin phir Paridhi ka chahera samane aaya aur kahene laga ki sab bata du iss Aadmi ko..
Aur phir mene uss Aadmi ko sab kuch bata diya... Apne aur Aadi ke bare me sab kuch bata diya... meri aankho se lagatar aanshu bahene lage the...
Usne pata nahi kya dekha hoga?... Lekin muje esa laga jese usne meri aankho me sachhai dekh li thi... usne mera hath pakada aur uspe aek bag rakh di...
Mene bag kholkar dekha... bag paiso se bhara huva tha... Meri aankhe chaunkne se badi ho gayi... mene aek tak uss pasio ki aur dekh raha tha aur uss Aadmi ke chahere ki aur.... Paise dikhne se pata lag raha tha ki bahut sare the...
Aadmi - "Aaj main yaha pe ye 2 lakh paise lagane aaya tha.... lekin muje lagata hai ki iss Paiso ki jarurat tumhe sabse jyada hai... mere liye to ye sab aek jugar hai aaj sochunga ki mai sare paise haar gaya... main sare paise kisi ki sachhai ke samane haar gaya..."
Main uss Aadmi ki aur dekh hi raha tha aur aankho se aanshu bahene lage... aaj kisi ne itne sare paise mere dost Aadi ke ilaj ke liye diye the... 5 saal baad koi esa samane aaya jisne Aadi ke ilaj ke liye apna hath aage badhaya tha....
Main itna khush ho chuka tha ki aawaj bhi thik se nikal nahi rahi thi - "Aapka.... aapka bahut bahut dhanywad... Aap.. Aap apna pata aur naam bata dijiye... Main ye sare paise aapko wapas de dunga.. jab mere pass khud ke paise hoge..."
Uss Aadmi ne mere khandhe pe apna hath rakhate huve - "Nahi... uski koi jaroorat nahi hai... mere pass khuda ka diya huva sab kuch hai..."
Main - "Nahi.. ham bhale hi garib hai.. lekin hamara swabhimaan hi hamari amiri hai... aap please muje apna pata bata dijiye..."
Uss Aadmi ki aankhe bhi bhig gayi - "Nahi muje nahi chahiye pasie.... lekin phir bhi tum dena chahate hi ho to kisi ese ko dena jisse tumhare jese hi paiso ki jaroorat jyada hai..."
Main - "Aapka dil bahut bada hai... kabhi bhi aapko meri jaroorat ho muje bas bata dena... aapke samne hajir ho jaunga... "
Uss Aadmi ne mere khandho ko thapthapaya aur waha se chala gaya...
Main wapis se uss Paiso ki aur dekhne laga.. 2 lakh rupye.. itni badi rakam... mera dil itni teji se nachane laga jese kabhi nahi nacha tha... mere dost... mere bhai.... mere Aadi ka ilaaj ab tay tha...
Aur itne sare sirf ilsiye mile the kyu ki ring me jab meri aankhe khoon se bhari huyi thi tab uss Paridhi ne kaha tha ki muj me abhi bhi achhai bachi hai...
"Paridhi"
Jab se meri aur Aadi ki jindagi me ye Paridhi naam ki ladki aayi thi tab se jese hamare phir se jine ki aash khil chuki thi... iss Jannat ki Pari ka ahesaan pata nahi main kese chuka saku?... lekin mere dil se duva jarur nikalegi ki uss Pari ki jindagi usi Jannat ki tarah ho jaha se vo aayi thi...
Main pasio ki bag leke ham jaha itne salo se paise chipa rahe the waha pe pahunch gaya... Main Aadi ke bare me hi soch raha tha... main ye soch ke utna kush ho raha tha ki jab main use itne sare paiso ke bare me bataunga tab vo kitna khush hoga....
Meri aankho ke samane Aadi ki vo chavi aane lagi jo apne pairo pe khada tha... jo muje door se hath hila raha tha... vo muje hath hilake uske pairo ki aur dekhane ko kah raha tha... aur phir vo khushi se kudane laga... vo nachane laga... aur use uske pairo pe nachate dekh meri aankho se khushi ke ese aanshu bahene lage jisse main bata bhi nahi sakata....
Aur sach kahu to hamare dil aapas me itne jude huye the ki main uske ilaaj hone ki khushi ko mahesoos kar sakata tha... hamare dil ese jude the ki ham aek doosre ke dard, khushi ko kahi se bhi mahesoos kar sakate the...
Main jab paise chippa raha tha tab main Aadi ke bare me hi soch raha tha phir jese achhanak hi mere dil ko kuch ajib sa mahesoos hone laga...
Jese mera dil rone laga tha... dil me bahut tej dard hone laga.. jese koi mere dil ko kat raha ho... dil ka dard Waqt ke har aek pal me itna tej ho raha tha ki mere liye bardast ke bahar hone laga... Ye dard ab tak mene sahe huye sare dard se bhi badatar tha... ye dard sabse badatar tha... ye dard muje jese meri maut ka ahesaas dila raha tha..
Main puri tarah se bechain ho gaya... Aur iss dil me badhate har aek dard ke sath muje Aadi ka chahera dikhai dene laga... Dil me esa dar utha jo mene aaj tak kabhi nahi mahesoos kiya tha.... Dar kuch bahut bura hone ka... dar jo dard ke sath ese bahene laga jiss se mera pura sharir pasine se bhig gaya.... meri saanse puri tej ho gayi... saanse lene me takalif hone lagi...
Lekin muje Aadi ka chahera samane dikhana aur bhi dara raha rha.... mene jaldi se paise waha rakhe... aur wapas aane ke liye chala... main chal nahi raha tha jese daud raha tha... mere pair itni teji se pahele kabhi nahi daude the.... daudte daudte mera sharir pura kaamp raha tha... kuch bahut buri anhoni hone ka ahesaas ho raha tha...
Mai jese hi gate pe pahuncha mene teji se use dhakka dete huve andar aa gaya... mai teji se ander aaya..
Lekin gate pe hi mere pair jese jakad gaye... mere pair jamin pe dhans gaye samane ka najara dekhate huve.... samne charo aur khoon pada tha.... aur gate ke kuch door aek ladka khoon se lathpath pet ke bal doosri aur muh kiye pada tha..
Dil ki dhadakene kabu se bahar ho gayi jab uske pass hi mene vo stand dekha jo Aadi isteman karata tha uske khade rahene ke liye... meri dil ki dhadakane aek pal ke liye itni tej dhadaki aur uske doosre hi pal dil ne dhadakana hi band kar diya....
Mai - "Aadi...."
"Aadi"
~ Gabbar is Back
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Intejaar khatam... update aa gaya....
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Awesome fabulous update
Bhai aap ne bhot bada Wala jatka Diya h aamjh nahi aa RHA h control kaise karu apne questions ko
Kya adi jinda h ya Mar gaya aur adi ki ye halt kisne ki h aur jaha Tak mushje lag RHA h adi ne sucide bhi kar shakta hkyu ki wo apne bhai ko shaitan bante nahi dekh sakta
Bhai can't wait jaldi update dene ki koshish karna
Keep posting
Bhai aap ne bhot bada Wala jatka Diya h aamjh nahi aa RHA h control kaise karu apne questions ko
Kya adi jinda h ya Mar gaya aur adi ki ye halt kisne ki h aur jaha Tak mushje lag RHA h adi ne sucide bhi kar shakta hkyu ki wo apne bhai ko shaitan bante nahi dekh sakta
Bhai can't wait jaldi update dene ki koshish karna
Keep posting
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Dosto pura update 2 hisso me bhi nahi aa raha hai...
isliye iss update ko 3 hisso me divide kiya hai...
pahela update aapko mil chuka hai....
aur baki ke do update aapko baari baari se mil jayege....
Lekin wait karna to banata hai...