Romance Waqt.....

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I hope,,, you understand

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[Arjun Singh 72]

Thanks kamdev99008 bhai....

You are right about no religious content...

But what I think, the post leads to religious content when we write specific name of god.

Also I didn't mean to hurt any religious community as I didn't use any improper words for god or any religious things. And If I did without my knowledge I apologise for that.

But your point out on word Khuda seems lead to specific religious... So I thought I need to use proper word instead of used Khuda... It will take time to change but I will edit every update where it seems content leads to religious one...

And also tries not to use any of them without proper reason. and if I will use then I will also put some counter part that balance everything.

Is that right?

Correct bhai

 

[kamdev99008]

But what I think, the post leads to religious content when we write specific name of god.

But your point out on word Khuda seems lead to specific religious... So I thought I need to use proper word instead of used Khuda... It will take time to change but I will edit every update where it seems content leads to religious one...

my comment was not to warn you but to suggest ......... tthis mistake can lead you to moderator warning...........
never mention cast, religion group name.... like pandit, thakur musalman ........... god names... bhagwan, allah, khuda, jesus christ...............etc
because these names are restricted under IT Act.............. if anyone objects.... a legal action can be possible

aur ek khas baat ................ meine abhi dhyan diya to hansi aa gayi................. bahut odd hai.... lekin apki kahani achchhi thi isliye jyada dhyan nahin diya tha............................
"aapki story mein khuda bolne wala koi bhi character muslim nahin hai.......................... aur reality mein koi bhi hindu.... khuda nahin bolta.......... jaisa ki apki kahani mein bar-bar a raha tha"
ye common sense ki bat hai...................... gaur karna

kahani bahut romanchak daur se gujar rahi hai............................
agle update ka besabri se intzar hai..................

 

[GaBBaR is BacK]

my comment was not to warn you but to suggest ......... tthis mistake can lead you to moderator warning...........
never mention cast, religion group name.... like pandit, thakur musalman ........... god names... bhagwan, allah, khuda, jesus christ...............etc
because these names are restricted under IT Act.............. if anyone objects.... a legal action can be possible

aur ek khas baat ................ meine abhi dhyan diya to hansi aa gayi................. bahut odd hai.... lekin apki kahani achchhi thi isliye jyada dhyan nahin diya tha............................
"aapki story mein khuda bolne wala koi bhi character muslim nahin hai.......................... aur reality mein koi bhi hindu.... khuda nahin bolta.......... jaisa ki apki kahani mein bar-bar a raha tha"
ye common sense ki bat hai...................... gaur karna

kahani bahut romanchak daur se gujar rahi hai............................
agle update ka besabri se intzar hai..................

I got it.. I will avoid that names of god you mentioned.

Yeah... I write mostly Khuda because that word contain less spelling compared with bhagwan. But sometimes I also used that name bhagwan or upper wala.

Also different names of gods doesn't matter the only thing that matters is what we believes. And what I believe is all gods are one and he lives around us inside of every living species as pure soul.

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

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Story Connection - 4

Story Connection - 2


Ye vo Waqt tha jab Pavan ko paheli baar khud ke Shaitaan hone par sawal utha tha... Ye vo Waqt tha jab Pavan apne papa se kah raha tha ki vo Shaitaan nahi banana chahata.... Vo apni Chutki ko bata raha tha ki vo Shaitaan nahi banega lekin uska Hero banega...


Ye vo pal tha jiska jawab dene uske pass koi nahi tha.... Aur aakhir mai Pavan uss daldal me fas chuka tha... vo khichad me maila ho hi gaya... vo Shaitaan ban hi gaya..


Aek sawal jo aapke man me jarur uthana chahiye ki agar Pavan ko chutaki ka hero banana tha phir vo Shaitaan kese ban gaya?


Lekin Pavan Shaitaan kis ke liye bana?... use kis ke liye sab kuch banana manjur tha?... Pavan ko kis ke liye shaitaan banana manjur tha?... kon tha jiske liye Pavan duniya ki sari daulat bhi chodane ke liye taiyaar tha?...


Aek hi to sahara tha Pavan ka jiss se vo sabse jyada pyaar karata tha... khud se bhi jyada...


Kon tha jo Pavan ki jindagi me har uss chij jyada mayane rakhata tha?... kon tha jiske liye Pavan har dard ko sah sakata tha.... har gum ko bhula sakata tha... har aanshu ko pi sakata tha...


"Aadi"


Aadi hi to tha jiske liye Pavan ko kuch bhi manjoor tha... Aadi ke liye kisi ka khoon karana bhi manjoor tha aur Aadi ke liye hi khud ke dil ke tukde karana bhi manjoor tha....


Aek taraf Pavan Aadi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakata tha aur doosri taraf Aadi ko bhi Pavan ka ghoot ghoot kar jina saha nahi jaa raha tha....


Ab sawal ye hai ki ye date 07/03/2008 kya esa kuch lane wali thi jo sab ki jindagiya badalne wali thi... jisme Pavan shamil tha.. Jisme Paridhi judi huyi thi... Jisme ab Aadi bhi jud chuka tha...


Ab Pavan ke liye Aadi hi sab kuch tha so Aadi ka bhi iss date 07/03/2008 se judna tay hi tha... Aadi hi wajah tha Pavan ka Shaitaan ban ne ka... to kya Aadi hi vo wajah banega jiss se Chutki ka Hero Shaitaan se wapis hero ban payega?

Aadi...


Pavan ka dost, Pavan ka bhai, Pavan ka Pariwar..... Pavan ko chod kahi esi jagah chala gaya jaha se uske wapas aane ka koi jariya nahi tha.... Esi jagah jaha koi bhi jinda insan nahi pahunch sakata....


Pavan ko jiske liye sab kuch karna manjoor tha, sab kuch banana manjoor tha... Pavan ne jiske liye kichad me pair rakha tha... Pavan jiske liye shaitaan bana tha....


Vo Aadi ab Pavan se bahut door jaa chuka tha...

Ab sawal ye hai ki ye date 07/03/2008 kya esa kuch lane wali thi jo sab ki jindagiya badalne wali thi... jisme Pavan shamil tha.. Jisme Paridhi judi huyi thi... Jisme ab Aadi bhi jud chuka tha...


Ab Pavan ke liye Aadi hi sab kuch tha so Aadi ka bhi iss date 07/03/2008 se judna tay hi tha... Aadi hi wajah tha Pavan ka Shaitaan ban ne ka... to kya Aadi hi vo wajah banega jiss se Chutki ka Hero Shaitaan se wapis hero ban payega?

Lekin Aadi ne jate jate Pavan ko unn logo se dur kar diya jaha uske andar ka shaitaan aur bhi fal ful sakata tha...


Pavan ko uss khichad se khinch liya jisme Pavan ne Aadi ki wajah se pair dala tha... Pavan ko iss daldal se nikalane ka aek mauka mila... mauka mila khudko bahetar bana ne ka.... mauka mila khud ke liye phir se nayi shuruaat karne ka...

Story Connection - 3


Kya kiya hai usne mere liye?....


Kya kar sakata hai vo mere liye?.....


Ye sawal bhale hi Paridhi ke dil se nahi lekin dimag se nikale the lekin kahete hai na banduk se nikali goli aur muh se nikali boli kabhi wapas nahi aati....


Aur isliye uss Khuda ko bhi ye sawal chubh gaye... isiliye Waqt ka bhi dil chir gaya....


Shayad Paridhi ke dimag ne abhi vo Pyaar ki takat hi kaha dekhi thi...


Shayad Paridhi ka dimag abhi bhi Pariwar ki takat ko nahi jaan paya tha...


Shayad Paridhi ke dimag ne abhi bhi dil se jude risto ke dhago ki takat ko nahi pahechana tha....


Aur isliye ab Waqt ne bhi faisala kar hi liya Paridhi ke dimag ke inn Sawalo ke jawab dene ka... Waqt ne bhi ab sahi Waqt ko chun hi liya.... Waqt ne bhi 07/03/2008 date ko chun hi liya....


Waqt ne inn sawalo ke alawa aek aur bhi chij thi jise sun li thi....


Paridhi - "Dost bhi dekho aek langda vo bhi uske jesa hi..."


Ye Bhai shabd hi kitna bada tha shayad ye Paridhi ke dimag ko pata nahi tha..


Ye Bhai shabd uss khoon ke riste se bhi pare tha shayad ye Paridhi ke dimag ko pata nahi tha...


Ye Bhai shabd bahen ko uss kavach me bandh deta hai jiski raksha karne ke liye vo Bhai hi sabse aage khada hota hai shayad ye Paridhi ke dimag ko pata nahi tha...


Waqt iss ka bhi jawab dena chahata tha... Waqt ye batana chahata tha ki kuch choti mulakate shayad hamare liye aek aam mulakat ho lekin doosro ke liye ye aek choti mulakat kisi amrut se kam nahi hoti... Paridhi ka Aadi ko bhai kahena Aadi ke jivan me phir se jine ki roshani laya tha... Phir se jine ki ummid laya tha... aur ye bina kisi khoon ke riste se kaha gaya Bhai labj kya kar sakata hai vo Waqt bhi batana chahata tha...


Isiliye Waqt ne bhi sahi Waqt ko chun hi liya... Waqt ne bhi 07/03/2008 date ko chun hi liya.

Ye date 07/032008 esa tufan leke aayi ki sab kuch badal chuka tha....


Aadi aur Pavan do bachhe... pyaar ke bhukhe, apnepan ke bhukhe esi andheri duniya me ji rahe the ki vaha kabhi roshani nahi khil sakati thi... jine ki koi ummid nahi thi...


Lekin aek din aek Pari aayi.... Jannat se utarkar inn do bachho ke pass.... aur jine ka naya jariya de gayi... jine ka naya najariya de gayi...


Sochiye ki uss choti mulakat me agar Paridhi ne Aadi aur Pavan ke dilo me pyaar, hamdardi, apnepan ka ahesaas jagane ke bajay chid, ghrina, nafarat, amiri-garibi ke ahesaas jagaye hote to kya Paridhi kabhi unn bhediyo se bach pati...


Paridhi khud ko Aadi aur Pavan ke sath risto ki esi dor bandh ke gayi ki ye dor jaan se bhi jyada mayane rakhati thi...


Aadi iss riste ki dor se ese bandha ki ye rista khoon ke riste se bhi bada ban gaya... ye rista khud ki jaan se bhi jyada ahemiyat rakhane laga...


Ye rista esi misal bana ki jisne aek badi sikh sikha di ki choti mulakate mayane nahi rakhati balki inn mulakato me dil se nikale pyaar bhare do bol kahi jyada mayne rakhate the...... vo amiri-garibi ki pahechan mayane nahi rakhti balki dilo me jaga hamdardi aur apnepan ka ahesaas kahi jyada mayne rakhata hai... aur esi mulkato se bandhe riste todane ki koshish se bhi nahi tut te, bhulane ki koshish se bhi nahi bhulaye jate...


Waqt.. Waqt ne Paridhi ke dimag ko jawab de diya ki pyaar ke risto ki dor se bandhe log unn risto ki hifajat ke liye jaan bhi de sakate hai aur jaan le bhi sakate hai....


Waqt ka ye khel abhi bahut lamba chalane wala hai... aur Waqt bhi itezar kar raha hai sahi Waqt ka aur sabhi hisso ke samane aane ka....


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[Arjun Singh 72]

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