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Should I add sex in this story


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Itachi_Uchiha

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Mai puri kosis karunga ki 1 Tarik Tak naya Update post kar du.
Ab naye update se story puri mere hisab se chlegi. To ab se week me ek hi update aaya karega. Kosis karunga ki Kam din me bhi update de du.
Aur sbs important baat is story me actual me sex nahi hai. To mi aap logo se puchna chta hu ki kya mi story me sex add Karu ya jise story chal Rahi hai waise chlne du.
nd ab se mujhe apne update par Kam se Kam 60 likes cahiye hi cahiye.
 
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Rohit1988

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UPDATE NO - 11
( PEERLESS GENIUS - 2 )




“ Main kitne lambe time se apni life waste kar raha tha. ”


Fat old man ne apni chest pe punch karte huye kaha. Aur wah Skinny old man ne to lagbhag rona hi start kar diya tha. Un sab ke dimag mein bas ek hi thought tha ki wo sab ek Alchemist ke roop mein apni entire life waste karte aa rahe hai.


Jai bhi khud ko sambhal nahi paa raha tha, uski aankhe bhi 100% effectiveness wali Pills ko dekhne se ruk nahi rahi thi. Wo bhut jyada excited ho gaya tha. Trio ne kuch minutes mein khud calm kar liya. Unka Atharva ko dekhne ka nazariya bhi badal chukka tha aur wo ek cheez samajh gaye they ki Genius sach mein hote hai, bus unko common sense se nahi dhundha jaa sakta.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, aur ingredients ka intezam karwaiye. ”


Jai “ What ? "
" Tum aur Pills Concoct karna chahte ho ? ”


Jai firse shock ho gaya tha. Jab ek Alchemist Pills concot karta hai to Yuan Power aur Soul Power bhut jaldi khatam ho jaati hai. Halanki Restoration Pills ek basic Pills hai lekin 100% effectiveness ke sath Concoct karna person ki power normal speed se jaldi khatam karta hai. Lekin dekhne se aisa lagta hai jaise Atharva ki energy loss nahi huyi hai itni Pillss Concoct karne ke baad bhi.


Atharva “ Is Pills Shop ko bachane ke liye mujhse jo hoga wo main karunga. ”


Wo dubara kyu Pills Concoct karna chahta hai iske piche bhi ek reason tha. Wo abhi The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate kar raha tha to uski Yuan QI Pillss ki need wo bhut jyada thi. Yuan QI Pillss wo cheez thi jo uske Cultivation Path mein bhut kaam aane wali thi. Restoration Pillss bhi ek Yuan QI Pillss hi hai, isse upper aati hai Earth Restoration Pills aur Heaven Restoration Pills. Cultivation World mein Restoration Pillss ko currency ki tarah bhi use kiya jaata hai. Sirf Fragrant Sky City ke log hi money ka use karte hai Restoration Pillss buy karne ke liye.


Ye Restoration Pillss itni basic hai ki apni past life mein Atharva inhe kisi Trash ki tarah dekhta tha lekin abhi usko khudke liye bhi yahi Pillss prepare karni padegi.


' jab mein Saint Cliff ke upper mar gaya tha 100 years pehle tab meri Soul damaged ho gayi thi, lekin ab 2 soul ek sath merge ho jaane se main MORTAL CORE level ki Soul Power use kar sakta hu. Mere ko apni Soul Power khatam ho jaane ka koi dar nahi hai kyuki mere paas ‘Soul Derivation Skill’ hai jo mujhe unlimited amount mein Soul Power supply karti hai. '


Atharva ne khudke mann mein socha aur halka sa has diya. Uski past life ka experience, uski memories, Cultivation aur Skill ki knowledge uska sabse bada treasure tha ab.


Saint Origin Universe mein jo Skill kisi ki Soul ko train kar sakti hai usko milna bhut muskil hai. Aur Fragrant Sky City mein to impossible hi hai. Aur yahi reason tha ki yaha ke Alchemist high effectiveness ki Pillss nahi Concoct kar paate. Divine Continent ke bache bhi 80% se 90% ke bich Pills Concoct kar lete hai.


The Mighty Soul Derivation Skill is world mein sabse powerful Skill thi jo kisi ki Soul ko train kar sake. Jo is Skill ko practice karte hai unhe ye unlimited Soul Power provide karwati hai.


The Dragon Transformation Skill aur The Soul Derivation Skill ke combination se Atharva ki QI, body aur Soul same time pe train ho rahi thi. Usey kam se kam 10 years lagenge wapis se Saint banne mein aur wo tab apni Past Life ko bhi surpass kar dega. Aur sayad wo Saint Realm ke baad Immortal Realm mein breakthrough kar le aur ek God ban jaaye.


Jai Furnace Room ke bahar khada tha usne ek lambi saans li aur fir baaki doono se bola.


Jai “ Tum dono yahi ruko aur Young Master ka dhyan rakho aur kisi ko batana mat ki Young Master Pills Concoct kar sakte hai. Main Mayor se milke aata hu. ”


Atharva ek Genius Alchemist ban gaya ye ek good news thi isliye Mayor ko inform karna jaroori tha.



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Mayor Mansion



Jabse Atharva ne Kamalnath ko Cultivation Skill di thi tabse Kamalnath se apna jyadatar time Cultivation mein hi laga diya tha. Uska talent limited tha aur itni advance level ki Skill ko Cultivate karna bilkul bhi asaan nahi tha. Atharva ke according agar Kamalnath 1 month mein is Skill ki Foundation ko bhi touch kar lete hai to wo bhi achi baat hogi.


Knock! Knock! Knock!


Achank se door khula aur Jai andar chala gaya. Jaise hi Kamalnath ne jai ko dekha to usey ek bad feeling aane lagi. Wo apne Cultivation mein itna busy ho gaya tha ki wo Pills Business ke baare mein to jaise bhoool hi gaya tha. Ab agar Jai khud aaya to koi na koi bad news leke hi aaya hoga.


Kamalnath “ Pills Shop mein kuch hua hai kya ? ”


Jai “ Mayor, mere paas ek good news hai aapke liye. Apni Pills Shop mein ek Peerless Genius aaya hai jo 100% effectiveness wali Pills Concoct kar sakta hai. "
" Jo JADHAV Family ki 70% effectiveness wali Pillss hai wo apni Pillss ke comparison mein bilkul trash hai. ”


Jai ne haste huye kaha.


Kamalnath “ 100% effectiveness wali Pillss ? "
" Jai kya ye sach hai ? ”


Kamalnath ne apni seat se khade hote huye pucha.


Jai “ Of course, ye sach hai. Aur mayor aap us Alchemist ko bhi jaante ho. ”


Kamalnath “ Main jaanta hu. Kon hai wo ? ”


Jai “ Ye person filhal apni Pills Shop mein hai. Mere sath chaliye aapko pata lag jaayega ki wo kon hai ? ”


Kamalnath jldi se “ Lets go. ”



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Pills Shop, Furnace Room



Atharva ne abhi tak hundred se jyada Pills Concoct kar di thi. Agar is City mein koi ye baat sun leta to wo to shock se hi mar jaata. Jo Alchemist Divine Core Realm mein hote hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath itni jaldi hundred se jyada Pills Concoct nahi kar paate. Lekin fir bhi itni der se ek hi cheez pe concentrate karne ki wajah se Atharva ko tired feel hone laga tha.


“ Halanki The Dragon Transformation Skill meri Yuan QI aur body ko strong banati hai aur Soul Derivation Skill mujhe unlimited Soul Power provide karti hai, lekin ye body abhi bhut jyada Weak hai. Lagta hai mujhe body ko iski roots se improve karne ka tarika dhoondna hoga. ”


Problem Clear thi aur wo thi uski Body. Is body ne beshak 10 years se precious Pillss aur Elixirs consume kiye ho lekin is body ke roots abhi bhi kaafi weak they.


“ Agar main Tiger Restoration Pills Concoct kar leta hu to ye meri body ke roots ki strength ko increase to karegi hi sath mein ye meri body kisi better cheez mein badal degi. Lekin meri body high level ki tiger Restoration Pills ko sehen nahi kar paayegi, isliye mujhe low level ki Tiger Restoration Pills Concoct karke usey consume karna hoga. ”


Usne Furnace Room mein se hi ek Pen aur Paper liya aur uspe Tiger Restoration Pills ke ingredients likhne laga. Ingredients milna muskil baat nahi thi specially YADAV Family jaise badi Family ke liye. Dikkat aa rahi thi wo sirf ek ingredient mein aa rahi thi aur is ingredient ko substitute bhi nahi kiya jaa sakta tha.


“ Agar mujhe Mortal Core Level ki Tiger Demon ki Soul mil jaati hai to perfect hoga. Lekin wo Fragrant Sky City mein bhut rare hai. Main isko QI HAI level ki Tiger Demon Soul se replace kar dunga. ”


Fragrant Sky City ke most powerful warrior bas QI Hai level ke hai. To mortal core level ki beast ka yaha milna impossible hai. Usey replacement se hi kaam chalana padega.


Saare ingredient likhne ke baad Atharva Furnace Room se bahar aa gaya. Kamalnath aur baaki sab Furnace Room ke bahar kaafi time se wait kar rahe they. Jaise hi Kamalnath ne Atharva ko room se bahar nikalte dekha to wo bhut jyada surprise ho gaya.


Atharva “ Dad, aap yaha kya kar rahe ho ? ”


Kamalnath Mujhe dekhne ke baad Jai ki taraf dekhte hue kehte hai “ jai, ye mat kehna ki jo Genius Alchemist hai wo Atharva hai. ”


Jai smile krte hue “ Haa, yahi hai wo Genius. ”


Kamalnath “ Impossible, ye ladka bas Pillss khaane mein expert hai Pills banane mein nahi. Tum log mera majak banane ke liye yaha laaye ho na. ”


Atharva “ Dad, aap khus nahi ho kya ? ”


Kamalnath kuch nahi bola kuch moments tak, fir wo jor jor se hasne laga aur Atharva ko jaake Hug kar liya. Wo is time bhut khus tha aur apne man me god ko thanks keh raha tha. Kamalnath bhut jyada excited tha akhir konsa parents apne bacho ki achievement dekh ke khus nahi hoga.


Atharva “ Dad, Uncle Jai ye lo 100% effectiveness wali 20 Pillss. ”


“ itni jyada. ”


Trio ne chillate huye kaha.


Kamalnath “ hahaha, perfect ! Ab main dekhna chahta hu JADHAV Family ki Pills Shop kaise survive karegi. ”


Sabhi log bhut jyada excited they. YADAV Family ke paas ek Genius Alchemist tha aur usne Pills Business ko khatam hone se bacha liya hai.


“ hum kal se hi 100% effectiveness wali Pillss sell karna suru kar denge. ”


Fat old man ne kaha.


“ lekin sirf Young Master hi 100% effectiveness wali Pills produce kar sakte hai. Aur Fragrant Sky City mein Restoration Pillss ki demand bhut jyada hai. Young Master ke liye bhi ye impossible hoga. ”


Jai ne apne hath failate huye apni helplessness show ki. Agar kal se 100% effectiveness wali Pillss sell hone lag jaayengi to unka kya kaam reh jaayega yaha pe.


“ Synthetic Pillss ! ”


Trio ne Atharva ki taraf dekha unhe bilkul samajh nahi aaya Atharva ne kya bola hai.


Atharva “ Pillss Concoct karna bhut hi complex process hai, lekin Synthetic Pillss produce karna bhut simple hai. Main tum logo se chuppana nahi chahta lekin mere paas ek method hai jisse Synthetic Pillss produce ki jaa sakti hai. Tum mujhe 2, 60% effectiveness wali Pillss doge main un dono ko merge karke 100% effectiveness wali bana dunga. Tum log Pills Concoct karoge main unhe Syntesize karunga. Hum sirf Restoration Pillss hi sell nahi karenge is shop mein, ek Pills aur hai jo main chahta hu ki tum log Concoct karo. ”


“ What ? "
" Two 60% effectiveness Pillss ko combine karke 100% effectiveness Pillss bana dena ? "
" Ye kaise Possible hai ? ”


Fat old man ne shock hote huye kaha. Kyuki usne aisa method kabhi nahi suna tha. Suna bhi kaise hoga kyuki ye log ek well mein baithe frogs they jo isi ko ocean samajhte they.


Atharva “ Mujhe pata hai tum logo ko shock lag raha hai lekin ye method bhut normal hai. Yelo ek Skill jo tumhari Soul ko train karegi, isse tum logo ko bhut help milni chahiye. ”


Atharva ne paper pe ek simple si Skill likh di jo Soul ko train karti hai. Ye Skill Soul Derivation Skill ke Comparison mein to kuch bhi nahi hai lekin baaki ordinary Soul training Skill se to achi hi hai. Trio ka expression Skill ko dekh ke hi badal gaya. Kyuki jo Skill wo practice kar rahe they wo kisi trash se kam nahi thi. Atharva ko koi surprise nahi hua trio ke reaction se kyuki jo usne unhe diya tha wo ordinary nahi tha. Soul training Skill beshak Atharva ke liye kisi trash jaisi ho lekin QI Province ke most Famous Clan bhi is Skill ke liye Fight kar jaayenge.


Kamalnath “ hahaha, Great ! Jab hum Pillss Sell karna start kar denge to JADHAV Family ka kya reaction hoga ? ”


Atharva “ OF course, hum kal hi apni Pills Shop ke bahar apne prices ka board laga denge. Ek single 100 % effectiveness Restoration Pills ki keemat 4 Gold coin hogi. Aur two 60% effectiveness Pillss aur 3 Gold Coins ke badle single 100% effectiveness Pills se exchange karenge. ”


“ hahaha, aap kitne brilliant ho Young Master, hum unki hi Pills use karke unhe wapis denge badle mein 3 Gold Coins bhi lenge. Aap to Business Genius bhi ho. ”


Fat old man ne Atharva ko thumbs up dete huye kaha.


Atharva “ Sabse important baat hum JADHAV Family se kharidi huyi Pillss ko exchange nahi karenge. Main chahta hu future mein single person bhi unki Pills Shop se Pillss na kharide. Ek aur baat kisi ko mat batana ki main Alchemist hu, bas bol dena humne koi Master Alchemist Hire kiya hai. ”


Atharva ne baat bolte huye sir hillaya. Kabhi bhi apne enemies ko pata mat chalne do ki tumhare paas kitni hidden tricks hai.


Atharva “ Oh, Dad, is list mein jitney ingredients hai unko collect kar dijiye. ”


Kamalnath “ Maine saare ingredients Collect kar dunga lekin QI Hai Level Tiger Demon Beast ki Soul milna muskil hai. ”


Demon beast ke pass usually strong body aur bhut jyada amount mein Yuan QI hoti hai. Agar wo kisi same level ke human se fight kare to human ke haarne ke chance 90% hote hai. Genius hote hai wo hi same Realm ke Demon Beast ko asani hai maar paate hai.


Kamalnath “ Lekin main tumhare liye jaroor arrange kar dunga. ”










TO BE CONTINUED…..


Fantastic update bro
 

Bhupinder Singh

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UPDATE NO - 11
( PEERLESS GENIUS - 2 )




“ Main kitne lambe time se apni life waste kar raha tha. ”


Fat old man ne apni chest pe punch karte huye kaha. Aur wah Skinny old man ne to lagbhag rona hi start kar diya tha. Un sab ke dimag mein bas ek hi thought tha ki wo sab ek Alchemist ke roop mein apni entire life waste karte aa rahe hai.


Jai bhi khud ko sambhal nahi paa raha tha, uski aankhe bhi 100% effectiveness wali Pills ko dekhne se ruk nahi rahi thi. Wo bhut jyada excited ho gaya tha. Trio ne kuch minutes mein khud calm kar liya. Unka Atharva ko dekhne ka nazariya bhi badal chukka tha aur wo ek cheez samajh gaye they ki Genius sach mein hote hai, bus unko common sense se nahi dhundha jaa sakta.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, aur ingredients ka intezam karwaiye. ”


Jai “ What ? "
" Tum aur Pills Concoct karna chahte ho ? ”


Jai firse shock ho gaya tha. Jab ek Alchemist Pills concot karta hai to Yuan Power aur Soul Power bhut jaldi khatam ho jaati hai. Halanki Restoration Pills ek basic Pills hai lekin 100% effectiveness ke sath Concoct karna person ki power normal speed se jaldi khatam karta hai. Lekin dekhne se aisa lagta hai jaise Atharva ki energy loss nahi huyi hai itni Pillss Concoct karne ke baad bhi.


Atharva “ Is Pills Shop ko bachane ke liye mujhse jo hoga wo main karunga. ”


Wo dubara kyu Pills Concoct karna chahta hai iske piche bhi ek reason tha. Wo abhi The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate kar raha tha to uski Yuan QI Pillss ki need wo bhut jyada thi. Yuan QI Pillss wo cheez thi jo uske Cultivation Path mein bhut kaam aane wali thi. Restoration Pillss bhi ek Yuan QI Pillss hi hai, isse upper aati hai Earth Restoration Pills aur Heaven Restoration Pills. Cultivation World mein Restoration Pillss ko currency ki tarah bhi use kiya jaata hai. Sirf Fragrant Sky City ke log hi money ka use karte hai Restoration Pillss buy karne ke liye.


Ye Restoration Pillss itni basic hai ki apni past life mein Atharva inhe kisi Trash ki tarah dekhta tha lekin abhi usko khudke liye bhi yahi Pillss prepare karni padegi.


' jab mein Saint Cliff ke upper mar gaya tha 100 years pehle tab meri Soul damaged ho gayi thi, lekin ab 2 soul ek sath merge ho jaane se main MORTAL CORE level ki Soul Power use kar sakta hu. Mere ko apni Soul Power khatam ho jaane ka koi dar nahi hai kyuki mere paas ‘Soul Derivation Skill’ hai jo mujhe unlimited amount mein Soul Power supply karti hai. '


Atharva ne khudke mann mein socha aur halka sa has diya. Uski past life ka experience, uski memories, Cultivation aur Skill ki knowledge uska sabse bada treasure tha ab.


Saint Origin Universe mein jo Skill kisi ki Soul ko train kar sakti hai usko milna bhut muskil hai. Aur Fragrant Sky City mein to impossible hi hai. Aur yahi reason tha ki yaha ke Alchemist high effectiveness ki Pillss nahi Concoct kar paate. Divine Continent ke bache bhi 80% se 90% ke bich Pills Concoct kar lete hai.


The Mighty Soul Derivation Skill is world mein sabse powerful Skill thi jo kisi ki Soul ko train kar sake. Jo is Skill ko practice karte hai unhe ye unlimited Soul Power provide karwati hai.


The Dragon Transformation Skill aur The Soul Derivation Skill ke combination se Atharva ki QI, body aur Soul same time pe train ho rahi thi. Usey kam se kam 10 years lagenge wapis se Saint banne mein aur wo tab apni Past Life ko bhi surpass kar dega. Aur sayad wo Saint Realm ke baad Immortal Realm mein breakthrough kar le aur ek God ban jaaye.


Jai Furnace Room ke bahar khada tha usne ek lambi saans li aur fir baaki doono se bola.


Jai “ Tum dono yahi ruko aur Young Master ka dhyan rakho aur kisi ko batana mat ki Young Master Pills Concoct kar sakte hai. Main Mayor se milke aata hu. ”


Atharva ek Genius Alchemist ban gaya ye ek good news thi isliye Mayor ko inform karna jaroori tha.



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Mayor Mansion



Jabse Atharva ne Kamalnath ko Cultivation Skill di thi tabse Kamalnath se apna jyadatar time Cultivation mein hi laga diya tha. Uska talent limited tha aur itni advance level ki Skill ko Cultivate karna bilkul bhi asaan nahi tha. Atharva ke according agar Kamalnath 1 month mein is Skill ki Foundation ko bhi touch kar lete hai to wo bhi achi baat hogi.


Knock! Knock! Knock!


Achank se door khula aur Jai andar chala gaya. Jaise hi Kamalnath ne jai ko dekha to usey ek bad feeling aane lagi. Wo apne Cultivation mein itna busy ho gaya tha ki wo Pills Business ke baare mein to jaise bhoool hi gaya tha. Ab agar Jai khud aaya to koi na koi bad news leke hi aaya hoga.


Kamalnath “ Pills Shop mein kuch hua hai kya ? ”


Jai “ Mayor, mere paas ek good news hai aapke liye. Apni Pills Shop mein ek Peerless Genius aaya hai jo 100% effectiveness wali Pills Concoct kar sakta hai. "
" Jo JADHAV Family ki 70% effectiveness wali Pillss hai wo apni Pillss ke comparison mein bilkul trash hai. ”


Jai ne haste huye kaha.


Kamalnath “ 100% effectiveness wali Pillss ? "
" Jai kya ye sach hai ? ”


Kamalnath ne apni seat se khade hote huye pucha.


Jai “ Of course, ye sach hai. Aur mayor aap us Alchemist ko bhi jaante ho. ”


Kamalnath “ Main jaanta hu. Kon hai wo ? ”


Jai “ Ye person filhal apni Pills Shop mein hai. Mere sath chaliye aapko pata lag jaayega ki wo kon hai ? ”


Kamalnath jldi se “ Lets go. ”



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Pills Shop, Furnace Room



Atharva ne abhi tak hundred se jyada Pills Concoct kar di thi. Agar is City mein koi ye baat sun leta to wo to shock se hi mar jaata. Jo Alchemist Divine Core Realm mein hote hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath itni jaldi hundred se jyada Pills Concoct nahi kar paate. Lekin fir bhi itni der se ek hi cheez pe concentrate karne ki wajah se Atharva ko tired feel hone laga tha.


“ Halanki The Dragon Transformation Skill meri Yuan QI aur body ko strong banati hai aur Soul Derivation Skill mujhe unlimited Soul Power provide karti hai, lekin ye body abhi bhut jyada Weak hai. Lagta hai mujhe body ko iski roots se improve karne ka tarika dhoondna hoga. ”


Problem Clear thi aur wo thi uski Body. Is body ne beshak 10 years se precious Pillss aur Elixirs consume kiye ho lekin is body ke roots abhi bhi kaafi weak they.


“ Agar main Tiger Restoration Pills Concoct kar leta hu to ye meri body ke roots ki strength ko increase to karegi hi sath mein ye meri body kisi better cheez mein badal degi. Lekin meri body high level ki tiger Restoration Pills ko sehen nahi kar paayegi, isliye mujhe low level ki Tiger Restoration Pills Concoct karke usey consume karna hoga. ”


Usne Furnace Room mein se hi ek Pen aur Paper liya aur uspe Tiger Restoration Pills ke ingredients likhne laga. Ingredients milna muskil baat nahi thi specially YADAV Family jaise badi Family ke liye. Dikkat aa rahi thi wo sirf ek ingredient mein aa rahi thi aur is ingredient ko substitute bhi nahi kiya jaa sakta tha.


“ Agar mujhe Mortal Core Level ki Tiger Demon ki Soul mil jaati hai to perfect hoga. Lekin wo Fragrant Sky City mein bhut rare hai. Main isko QI HAI level ki Tiger Demon Soul se replace kar dunga. ”


Fragrant Sky City ke most powerful warrior bas QI Hai level ke hai. To mortal core level ki beast ka yaha milna impossible hai. Usey replacement se hi kaam chalana padega.


Saare ingredient likhne ke baad Atharva Furnace Room se bahar aa gaya. Kamalnath aur baaki sab Furnace Room ke bahar kaafi time se wait kar rahe they. Jaise hi Kamalnath ne Atharva ko room se bahar nikalte dekha to wo bhut jyada surprise ho gaya.


Atharva “ Dad, aap yaha kya kar rahe ho ? ”


Kamalnath Mujhe dekhne ke baad Jai ki taraf dekhte hue kehte hai “ jai, ye mat kehna ki jo Genius Alchemist hai wo Atharva hai. ”


Jai smile krte hue “ Haa, yahi hai wo Genius. ”


Kamalnath “ Impossible, ye ladka bas Pillss khaane mein expert hai Pills banane mein nahi. Tum log mera majak banane ke liye yaha laaye ho na. ”


Atharva “ Dad, aap khus nahi ho kya ? ”


Kamalnath kuch nahi bola kuch moments tak, fir wo jor jor se hasne laga aur Atharva ko jaake Hug kar liya. Wo is time bhut khus tha aur apne man me god ko thanks keh raha tha. Kamalnath bhut jyada excited tha akhir konsa parents apne bacho ki achievement dekh ke khus nahi hoga.


Atharva “ Dad, Uncle Jai ye lo 100% effectiveness wali 20 Pillss. ”


“ itni jyada. ”


Trio ne chillate huye kaha.


Kamalnath “ hahaha, perfect ! Ab main dekhna chahta hu JADHAV Family ki Pills Shop kaise survive karegi. ”


Sabhi log bhut jyada excited they. YADAV Family ke paas ek Genius Alchemist tha aur usne Pills Business ko khatam hone se bacha liya hai.


“ hum kal se hi 100% effectiveness wali Pillss sell karna suru kar denge. ”


Fat old man ne kaha.


“ lekin sirf Young Master hi 100% effectiveness wali Pills produce kar sakte hai. Aur Fragrant Sky City mein Restoration Pillss ki demand bhut jyada hai. Young Master ke liye bhi ye impossible hoga. ”


Jai ne apne hath failate huye apni helplessness show ki. Agar kal se 100% effectiveness wali Pillss sell hone lag jaayengi to unka kya kaam reh jaayega yaha pe.


“ Synthetic Pillss ! ”


Trio ne Atharva ki taraf dekha unhe bilkul samajh nahi aaya Atharva ne kya bola hai.


Atharva “ Pillss Concoct karna bhut hi complex process hai, lekin Synthetic Pillss produce karna bhut simple hai. Main tum logo se chuppana nahi chahta lekin mere paas ek method hai jisse Synthetic Pillss produce ki jaa sakti hai. Tum mujhe 2, 60% effectiveness wali Pillss doge main un dono ko merge karke 100% effectiveness wali bana dunga. Tum log Pills Concoct karoge main unhe Syntesize karunga. Hum sirf Restoration Pillss hi sell nahi karenge is shop mein, ek Pills aur hai jo main chahta hu ki tum log Concoct karo. ”


“ What ? "
" Two 60% effectiveness Pillss ko combine karke 100% effectiveness Pillss bana dena ? "
" Ye kaise Possible hai ? ”


Fat old man ne shock hote huye kaha. Kyuki usne aisa method kabhi nahi suna tha. Suna bhi kaise hoga kyuki ye log ek well mein baithe frogs they jo isi ko ocean samajhte they.


Atharva “ Mujhe pata hai tum logo ko shock lag raha hai lekin ye method bhut normal hai. Yelo ek Skill jo tumhari Soul ko train karegi, isse tum logo ko bhut help milni chahiye. ”


Atharva ne paper pe ek simple si Skill likh di jo Soul ko train karti hai. Ye Skill Soul Derivation Skill ke Comparison mein to kuch bhi nahi hai lekin baaki ordinary Soul training Skill se to achi hi hai. Trio ka expression Skill ko dekh ke hi badal gaya. Kyuki jo Skill wo practice kar rahe they wo kisi trash se kam nahi thi. Atharva ko koi surprise nahi hua trio ke reaction se kyuki jo usne unhe diya tha wo ordinary nahi tha. Soul training Skill beshak Atharva ke liye kisi trash jaisi ho lekin QI Province ke most Famous Clan bhi is Skill ke liye Fight kar jaayenge.


Kamalnath “ hahaha, Great ! Jab hum Pillss Sell karna start kar denge to JADHAV Family ka kya reaction hoga ? ”


Atharva “ OF course, hum kal hi apni Pills Shop ke bahar apne prices ka board laga denge. Ek single 100 % effectiveness Restoration Pills ki keemat 4 Gold coin hogi. Aur two 60% effectiveness Pillss aur 3 Gold Coins ke badle single 100% effectiveness Pills se exchange karenge. ”


“ hahaha, aap kitne brilliant ho Young Master, hum unki hi Pills use karke unhe wapis denge badle mein 3 Gold Coins bhi lenge. Aap to Business Genius bhi ho. ”


Fat old man ne Atharva ko thumbs up dete huye kaha.


Atharva “ Sabse important baat hum JADHAV Family se kharidi huyi Pillss ko exchange nahi karenge. Main chahta hu future mein single person bhi unki Pills Shop se Pillss na kharide. Ek aur baat kisi ko mat batana ki main Alchemist hu, bas bol dena humne koi Master Alchemist Hire kiya hai. ”


Atharva ne baat bolte huye sir hillaya. Kabhi bhi apne enemies ko pata mat chalne do ki tumhare paas kitni hidden tricks hai.


Atharva “ Oh, Dad, is list mein jitney ingredients hai unko collect kar dijiye. ”


Kamalnath “ Maine saare ingredients Collect kar dunga lekin QI Hai Level Tiger Demon Beast ki Soul milna muskil hai. ”


Demon beast ke pass usually strong body aur bhut jyada amount mein Yuan QI hoti hai. Agar wo kisi same level ke human se fight kare to human ke haarne ke chance 90% hote hai. Genius hote hai wo hi same Realm ke Demon Beast ko asani hai maar paate hai.


Kamalnath “ Lekin main tumhare liye jaroor arrange kar dunga. ”










TO BE CONTINUED…..
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UPDATE NO - 11
( PEERLESS GENIUS - 2 )




“ Main kitne lambe time se apni life waste kar raha tha. ”


Fat old man ne apni chest pe punch karte huye kaha. Aur wah Skinny old man ne to lagbhag rona hi start kar diya tha. Un sab ke dimag mein bas ek hi thought tha ki wo sab ek Alchemist ke roop mein apni entire life waste karte aa rahe hai.


Jai bhi khud ko sambhal nahi paa raha tha, uski aankhe bhi 100% effectiveness wali Pills ko dekhne se ruk nahi rahi thi. Wo bhut jyada excited ho gaya tha. Trio ne kuch minutes mein khud calm kar liya. Unka Atharva ko dekhne ka nazariya bhi badal chukka tha aur wo ek cheez samajh gaye they ki Genius sach mein hote hai, bus unko common sense se nahi dhundha jaa sakta.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, aur ingredients ka intezam karwaiye. ”


Jai “ What ? "
" Tum aur Pills Concoct karna chahte ho ? ”


Jai firse shock ho gaya tha. Jab ek Alchemist Pills concot karta hai to Yuan Power aur Soul Power bhut jaldi khatam ho jaati hai. Halanki Restoration Pills ek basic Pills hai lekin 100% effectiveness ke sath Concoct karna person ki power normal speed se jaldi khatam karta hai. Lekin dekhne se aisa lagta hai jaise Atharva ki energy loss nahi huyi hai itni Pillss Concoct karne ke baad bhi.


Atharva “ Is Pills Shop ko bachane ke liye mujhse jo hoga wo main karunga. ”


Wo dubara kyu Pills Concoct karna chahta hai iske piche bhi ek reason tha. Wo abhi The Dragon Transformation Skill Cultivate kar raha tha to uski Yuan QI Pillss ki need wo bhut jyada thi. Yuan QI Pillss wo cheez thi jo uske Cultivation Path mein bhut kaam aane wali thi. Restoration Pillss bhi ek Yuan QI Pillss hi hai, isse upper aati hai Earth Restoration Pills aur Heaven Restoration Pills. Cultivation World mein Restoration Pillss ko currency ki tarah bhi use kiya jaata hai. Sirf Fragrant Sky City ke log hi money ka use karte hai Restoration Pillss buy karne ke liye.


Ye Restoration Pillss itni basic hai ki apni past life mein Atharva inhe kisi Trash ki tarah dekhta tha lekin abhi usko khudke liye bhi yahi Pillss prepare karni padegi.


' jab mein Saint Cliff ke upper mar gaya tha 100 years pehle tab meri Soul damaged ho gayi thi, lekin ab 2 soul ek sath merge ho jaane se main MORTAL CORE level ki Soul Power use kar sakta hu. Mere ko apni Soul Power khatam ho jaane ka koi dar nahi hai kyuki mere paas ‘Soul Derivation Skill’ hai jo mujhe unlimited amount mein Soul Power supply karti hai. '


Atharva ne khudke mann mein socha aur halka sa has diya. Uski past life ka experience, uski memories, Cultivation aur Skill ki knowledge uska sabse bada treasure tha ab.


Saint Origin Universe mein jo Skill kisi ki Soul ko train kar sakti hai usko milna bhut muskil hai. Aur Fragrant Sky City mein to impossible hi hai. Aur yahi reason tha ki yaha ke Alchemist high effectiveness ki Pillss nahi Concoct kar paate. Divine Continent ke bache bhi 80% se 90% ke bich Pills Concoct kar lete hai.


The Mighty Soul Derivation Skill is world mein sabse powerful Skill thi jo kisi ki Soul ko train kar sake. Jo is Skill ko practice karte hai unhe ye unlimited Soul Power provide karwati hai.


The Dragon Transformation Skill aur The Soul Derivation Skill ke combination se Atharva ki QI, body aur Soul same time pe train ho rahi thi. Usey kam se kam 10 years lagenge wapis se Saint banne mein aur wo tab apni Past Life ko bhi surpass kar dega. Aur sayad wo Saint Realm ke baad Immortal Realm mein breakthrough kar le aur ek God ban jaaye.


Jai Furnace Room ke bahar khada tha usne ek lambi saans li aur fir baaki doono se bola.


Jai “ Tum dono yahi ruko aur Young Master ka dhyan rakho aur kisi ko batana mat ki Young Master Pills Concoct kar sakte hai. Main Mayor se milke aata hu. ”


Atharva ek Genius Alchemist ban gaya ye ek good news thi isliye Mayor ko inform karna jaroori tha.



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Mayor Mansion



Jabse Atharva ne Kamalnath ko Cultivation Skill di thi tabse Kamalnath se apna jyadatar time Cultivation mein hi laga diya tha. Uska talent limited tha aur itni advance level ki Skill ko Cultivate karna bilkul bhi asaan nahi tha. Atharva ke according agar Kamalnath 1 month mein is Skill ki Foundation ko bhi touch kar lete hai to wo bhi achi baat hogi.


Knock! Knock! Knock!


Achank se door khula aur Jai andar chala gaya. Jaise hi Kamalnath ne jai ko dekha to usey ek bad feeling aane lagi. Wo apne Cultivation mein itna busy ho gaya tha ki wo Pills Business ke baare mein to jaise bhoool hi gaya tha. Ab agar Jai khud aaya to koi na koi bad news leke hi aaya hoga.


Kamalnath “ Pills Shop mein kuch hua hai kya ? ”


Jai “ Mayor, mere paas ek good news hai aapke liye. Apni Pills Shop mein ek Peerless Genius aaya hai jo 100% effectiveness wali Pills Concoct kar sakta hai. "
" Jo JADHAV Family ki 70% effectiveness wali Pillss hai wo apni Pillss ke comparison mein bilkul trash hai. ”


Jai ne haste huye kaha.


Kamalnath “ 100% effectiveness wali Pillss ? "
" Jai kya ye sach hai ? ”


Kamalnath ne apni seat se khade hote huye pucha.


Jai “ Of course, ye sach hai. Aur mayor aap us Alchemist ko bhi jaante ho. ”


Kamalnath “ Main jaanta hu. Kon hai wo ? ”


Jai “ Ye person filhal apni Pills Shop mein hai. Mere sath chaliye aapko pata lag jaayega ki wo kon hai ? ”


Kamalnath jldi se “ Lets go. ”



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Pills Shop, Furnace Room



Atharva ne abhi tak hundred se jyada Pills Concoct kar di thi. Agar is City mein koi ye baat sun leta to wo to shock se hi mar jaata. Jo Alchemist Divine Core Realm mein hote hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath itni jaldi hundred se jyada Pills Concoct nahi kar paate. Lekin fir bhi itni der se ek hi cheez pe concentrate karne ki wajah se Atharva ko tired feel hone laga tha.


“ Halanki The Dragon Transformation Skill meri Yuan QI aur body ko strong banati hai aur Soul Derivation Skill mujhe unlimited Soul Power provide karti hai, lekin ye body abhi bhut jyada Weak hai. Lagta hai mujhe body ko iski roots se improve karne ka tarika dhoondna hoga. ”


Problem Clear thi aur wo thi uski Body. Is body ne beshak 10 years se precious Pillss aur Elixirs consume kiye ho lekin is body ke roots abhi bhi kaafi weak they.


“ Agar main Tiger Restoration Pills Concoct kar leta hu to ye meri body ke roots ki strength ko increase to karegi hi sath mein ye meri body kisi better cheez mein badal degi. Lekin meri body high level ki tiger Restoration Pills ko sehen nahi kar paayegi, isliye mujhe low level ki Tiger Restoration Pills Concoct karke usey consume karna hoga. ”


Usne Furnace Room mein se hi ek Pen aur Paper liya aur uspe Tiger Restoration Pills ke ingredients likhne laga. Ingredients milna muskil baat nahi thi specially YADAV Family jaise badi Family ke liye. Dikkat aa rahi thi wo sirf ek ingredient mein aa rahi thi aur is ingredient ko substitute bhi nahi kiya jaa sakta tha.


“ Agar mujhe Mortal Core Level ki Tiger Demon ki Soul mil jaati hai to perfect hoga. Lekin wo Fragrant Sky City mein bhut rare hai. Main isko QI HAI level ki Tiger Demon Soul se replace kar dunga. ”


Fragrant Sky City ke most powerful warrior bas QI Hai level ke hai. To mortal core level ki beast ka yaha milna impossible hai. Usey replacement se hi kaam chalana padega.


Saare ingredient likhne ke baad Atharva Furnace Room se bahar aa gaya. Kamalnath aur baaki sab Furnace Room ke bahar kaafi time se wait kar rahe they. Jaise hi Kamalnath ne Atharva ko room se bahar nikalte dekha to wo bhut jyada surprise ho gaya.


Atharva “ Dad, aap yaha kya kar rahe ho ? ”


Kamalnath Mujhe dekhne ke baad Jai ki taraf dekhte hue kehte hai “ jai, ye mat kehna ki jo Genius Alchemist hai wo Atharva hai. ”


Jai smile krte hue “ Haa, yahi hai wo Genius. ”


Kamalnath “ Impossible, ye ladka bas Pillss khaane mein expert hai Pills banane mein nahi. Tum log mera majak banane ke liye yaha laaye ho na. ”


Atharva “ Dad, aap khus nahi ho kya ? ”


Kamalnath kuch nahi bola kuch moments tak, fir wo jor jor se hasne laga aur Atharva ko jaake Hug kar liya. Wo is time bhut khus tha aur apne man me god ko thanks keh raha tha. Kamalnath bhut jyada excited tha akhir konsa parents apne bacho ki achievement dekh ke khus nahi hoga.


Atharva “ Dad, Uncle Jai ye lo 100% effectiveness wali 20 Pillss. ”


“ itni jyada. ”


Trio ne chillate huye kaha.


Kamalnath “ hahaha, perfect ! Ab main dekhna chahta hu JADHAV Family ki Pills Shop kaise survive karegi. ”


Sabhi log bhut jyada excited they. YADAV Family ke paas ek Genius Alchemist tha aur usne Pills Business ko khatam hone se bacha liya hai.


“ hum kal se hi 100% effectiveness wali Pillss sell karna suru kar denge. ”


Fat old man ne kaha.


“ lekin sirf Young Master hi 100% effectiveness wali Pills produce kar sakte hai. Aur Fragrant Sky City mein Restoration Pillss ki demand bhut jyada hai. Young Master ke liye bhi ye impossible hoga. ”


Jai ne apne hath failate huye apni helplessness show ki. Agar kal se 100% effectiveness wali Pillss sell hone lag jaayengi to unka kya kaam reh jaayega yaha pe.


“ Synthetic Pillss ! ”


Trio ne Atharva ki taraf dekha unhe bilkul samajh nahi aaya Atharva ne kya bola hai.


Atharva “ Pillss Concoct karna bhut hi complex process hai, lekin Synthetic Pillss produce karna bhut simple hai. Main tum logo se chuppana nahi chahta lekin mere paas ek method hai jisse Synthetic Pillss produce ki jaa sakti hai. Tum mujhe 2, 60% effectiveness wali Pillss doge main un dono ko merge karke 100% effectiveness wali bana dunga. Tum log Pills Concoct karoge main unhe Syntesize karunga. Hum sirf Restoration Pillss hi sell nahi karenge is shop mein, ek Pills aur hai jo main chahta hu ki tum log Concoct karo. ”


“ What ? "
" Two 60% effectiveness Pillss ko combine karke 100% effectiveness Pillss bana dena ? "
" Ye kaise Possible hai ? ”


Fat old man ne shock hote huye kaha. Kyuki usne aisa method kabhi nahi suna tha. Suna bhi kaise hoga kyuki ye log ek well mein baithe frogs they jo isi ko ocean samajhte they.


Atharva “ Mujhe pata hai tum logo ko shock lag raha hai lekin ye method bhut normal hai. Yelo ek Skill jo tumhari Soul ko train karegi, isse tum logo ko bhut help milni chahiye. ”


Atharva ne paper pe ek simple si Skill likh di jo Soul ko train karti hai. Ye Skill Soul Derivation Skill ke Comparison mein to kuch bhi nahi hai lekin baaki ordinary Soul training Skill se to achi hi hai. Trio ka expression Skill ko dekh ke hi badal gaya. Kyuki jo Skill wo practice kar rahe they wo kisi trash se kam nahi thi. Atharva ko koi surprise nahi hua trio ke reaction se kyuki jo usne unhe diya tha wo ordinary nahi tha. Soul training Skill beshak Atharva ke liye kisi trash jaisi ho lekin QI Province ke most Famous Clan bhi is Skill ke liye Fight kar jaayenge.


Kamalnath “ hahaha, Great ! Jab hum Pillss Sell karna start kar denge to JADHAV Family ka kya reaction hoga ? ”


Atharva “ OF course, hum kal hi apni Pills Shop ke bahar apne prices ka board laga denge. Ek single 100 % effectiveness Restoration Pills ki keemat 4 Gold coin hogi. Aur two 60% effectiveness Pillss aur 3 Gold Coins ke badle single 100% effectiveness Pills se exchange karenge. ”


“ hahaha, aap kitne brilliant ho Young Master, hum unki hi Pills use karke unhe wapis denge badle mein 3 Gold Coins bhi lenge. Aap to Business Genius bhi ho. ”


Fat old man ne Atharva ko thumbs up dete huye kaha.


Atharva “ Sabse important baat hum JADHAV Family se kharidi huyi Pillss ko exchange nahi karenge. Main chahta hu future mein single person bhi unki Pills Shop se Pillss na kharide. Ek aur baat kisi ko mat batana ki main Alchemist hu, bas bol dena humne koi Master Alchemist Hire kiya hai. ”


Atharva ne baat bolte huye sir hillaya. Kabhi bhi apne enemies ko pata mat chalne do ki tumhare paas kitni hidden tricks hai.


Atharva “ Oh, Dad, is list mein jitney ingredients hai unko collect kar dijiye. ”


Kamalnath “ Maine saare ingredients Collect kar dunga lekin QI Hai Level Tiger Demon Beast ki Soul milna muskil hai. ”


Demon beast ke pass usually strong body aur bhut jyada amount mein Yuan QI hoti hai. Agar wo kisi same level ke human se fight kare to human ke haarne ke chance 90% hote hai. Genius hote hai wo hi same Realm ke Demon Beast ko asani hai maar paate hai.


Kamalnath “ Lekin main tumhare liye jaroor arrange kar dunga. ”










TO BE CONTINUED…..
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Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Itachi_Uchiha bhai....
Nice and awesome update...
Aapka Sukriya parkas bhai.
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Nice update
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Story shandar ja rahi hai bhai...
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Bhai atharv ne dusri pill jo dono old men ko concont krne ko kaha h bo to bataya hi nhi konsi h
Wo ek Synthetic Pills thi bhai. Uska matlb hai do low level ki pills ko add karke ek high level ka pill banana.
baki aapka sukriya Adarsh8815 bhai.
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