Fantasy Who I am
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Us raat baarish nahi ho rahi thi, phir bhi zameen geeli thi jaise kuch aisa hone vala ho jo nahi hona chahiye par kahte hai na jo hona hai .
Hokar hi rahega.
Ansh Rudrayan ( hero of the story. ) sirf 5 saal ka tha. Maa ki god mein sar rakh kar so raha tha. Ghar ke bahar neem ke patte hawa mein sarsara rahe the aur maa apne bete ko sote hoye dekh rahi thi —sab kuch bilkul normal.
Phir… ek awaaz.
Gate par pehla dhamaka hua.
Ansh ke pita Acharya Devvrat Rudrayan uth khade hue. Aankhon mein darr nahi tha—sirf tayyari. Unhone Ansh ko uthaya, maa ki taraf dekha.
"Bas jo ho, bachche ko zinda rakhna," unhone dheere se kaha.
Maa - dar to lag raha tha par ha me gardan hila di aur ansh ko kas kar pakad liya aur
Agli pal, ghar par attack shuru ho chuka tha.
Mask pehne aadmi- andar aya aur uske piche aur bhi mask pehne aadmi andar aye aur un sab ke hatho me Automatic rifles thi. Perfect timing. Ye chori nahi thi—yeh safaya tha.
To vahi Devvrat Rudrayan ne ek purani tijori kholi. Andar se ek lal dhaga, ek rudraksha, aur ek chhota sa kagaz nikala.
Aur maa ko diya aur hath me gun lekar gundo pe fire karne lage
Idhar "Isse kabhi alag mat hone dena," maa ne Ansh ke gale mein dhaga baandha.
Tabhi Goli chali.
Jo ansh ko lagne vali thi tabhi
Devvrat ne Ansh ko peeche se dhakka diya—
"Bhaago!"
Usi pal unke seene mein goli lagi.
Khoon ansh ke chehre par fail Gaya.
Ansh ne pehli baar khoon dekha vo bhi apne pita ka girte hue bhi unke chehre par maut ka koi dar nahi tha ha ek dukh jarur tha ki vo apni parivar ki rakcha nahi kar paye aur vahi gir pade
Ansh jaldi se apne papa ke pass gaya aur rone laga 5 saal ka baccha vo kya hi kar sakta tha
Papa kya ho gaya apko papa papa
TO vahi devvrat jo muskil se hi ankhe khol pa raha tha vo ansh se sirf itna hi bole apni maa ka khayal rakhna
Idhar Uski maa ne cheekhna chaha, par awaaz gale mein atak gayi. Padosi gharon ki lights jalne lagi. Aur Ghar bhi jal raha tha.
Kisi ne Ansh ko uthaya par vo apne papa ko chodne hi nahi chahta tha —Shivam Singh ( hero ka dost ) ke pita. Peechhe se Sumit Verma ( hero ke dost ) ke chacha cover de rahe the. Teen parivaar ek hi gali se bhage.
Aur Ansh ki maa?
Dhuein ke beech ek haath chhuta.
"Maa!" Ansh chillaya.
Par sirf aag ka jawab mila.
Fhir achanak barish shuru ho gayi jase aasman bhi ro raha ho.
Subah hui.
Police valo ne chan bhin ki to devvrat ki body mili par ansh ke maa ki nahi mili
Aur fir Devvrat Rudrayan ka antim sanskaar hua.
Maa lapata thi.
Baaki parivaar zinda the—par toot chuke.
Usi din faisla hua:
Shehar chhodna
Naam badalna
Pehchaan mita dena
Teen parivaar dusri jagah shift ho gaye.
Ansh se uska bachpan cheen liya gaya.
Par uske gale ka rudraksha aur lal dhaga zinda rahe.
Raat ko jab Ansh ne poocha:
"Papa kahan gaye?"
Jawab
sirf itna mila:
"Andhere mein."
Us din se, andhera Ansh ke andar rehne laga
Us raat baarish nahi ho rahi thi, phir bhi zameen geeli thi jaise kuch aisa hone vala ho jo nahi hona chahiye par kahte hai na jo hona hai .
Hokar hi rahega.
Ansh Rudrayan ( hero of the story. ) sirf 5 saal ka tha. Maa ki god mein sar rakh kar so raha tha. Ghar ke bahar neem ke patte hawa mein sarsara rahe the aur maa apne bete ko sote hoye dekh rahi thi —sab kuch bilkul normal.
Phir… ek awaaz.
Gate par pehla dhamaka hua.
Ansh ke pita Acharya Devvrat Rudrayan uth khade hue. Aankhon mein darr nahi tha—sirf tayyari. Unhone Ansh ko uthaya, maa ki taraf dekha.
"Bas jo ho, bachche ko zinda rakhna," unhone dheere se kaha.
Maa - dar to lag raha tha par ha me gardan hila di aur ansh ko kas kar pakad liya aur
Agli pal, ghar par attack shuru ho chuka tha.
Mask pehne aadmi- andar aya aur uske piche aur bhi mask pehne aadmi andar aye aur un sab ke hatho me Automatic rifles thi. Perfect timing. Ye chori nahi thi—yeh safaya tha.
To vahi Devvrat Rudrayan ne ek purani tijori kholi. Andar se ek lal dhaga, ek rudraksha, aur ek chhota sa kagaz nikala.
Aur maa ko diya aur hath me gun lekar gundo pe fire karne lage
Idhar "Isse kabhi alag mat hone dena," maa ne Ansh ke gale mein dhaga baandha.
Tabhi Goli chali.
Jo ansh ko lagne vali thi tabhi
Devvrat ne Ansh ko peeche se dhakka diya—
"Bhaago!"
Usi pal unke seene mein goli lagi.
Khoon ansh ke chehre par fail Gaya.
Ansh ne pehli baar khoon dekha vo bhi apne pita ka girte hue bhi unke chehre par maut ka koi dar nahi tha ha ek dukh jarur tha ki vo apni parivar ki rakcha nahi kar paye aur vahi gir pade
Ansh jaldi se apne papa ke pass gaya aur rone laga 5 saal ka baccha vo kya hi kar sakta tha
Papa kya ho gaya apko papa papa
TO vahi devvrat jo muskil se hi ankhe khol pa raha tha vo ansh se sirf itna hi bole apni maa ka khayal rakhna
Idhar Uski maa ne cheekhna chaha, par awaaz gale mein atak gayi. Padosi gharon ki lights jalne lagi. Aur Ghar bhi jal raha tha.
Kisi ne Ansh ko uthaya par vo apne papa ko chodne hi nahi chahta tha —Shivam Singh ( hero ka dost ) ke pita. Peechhe se Sumit Verma ( hero ke dost ) ke chacha cover de rahe the. Teen parivaar ek hi gali se bhage.
Aur Ansh ki maa?
Dhuein ke beech ek haath chhuta.
"Maa!" Ansh chillaya.
Par sirf aag ka jawab mila.
Fhir achanak barish shuru ho gayi jase aasman bhi ro raha ho.
Subah hui.
Police valo ne chan bhin ki to devvrat ki body mili par ansh ke maa ki nahi mili
Aur fir Devvrat Rudrayan ka antim sanskaar hua.
Maa lapata thi.
Baaki parivaar zinda the—par toot chuke.
Usi din faisla hua:
Shehar chhodna
Naam badalna
Pehchaan mita dena
Teen parivaar dusri jagah shift ho gaye.
Ansh se uska bachpan cheen liya gaya.
Par uske gale ka rudraksha aur lal dhaga zinda rahe.
Raat ko jab Ansh ne poocha:
"Papa kahan gaye?"
Jawab
sirf itna mila:
"Andhere mein."
Us din se, andhera Ansh ke andar rehne laga
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