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कहानी बहुत बढ़िया है महोदय।Update - 12
Vikram - mere raste me mat aana warna ek baar fir tumhara tamasha poora ghar aur poora shahar dekhega . Mai to kahta hoon is baar poora india dekhega .
Vikram ki baat sun Jiya ke chehre par dar fail gaya lekin agle hi pal wo khud ko samhalti huyi apne room me chali gayi .
Jiya ko kal se hi pata tha ki aaj subah Vikram se samna hoga , wo mansik roop se taiyar bhi thi iske liye lekin koi kitni bhi koshish kare apni maut ko nahi sah sakta hai aur Jiya to pichhle 5 saalon me kayi mautein mar chuki thi . Wo apni nafarat ko chah kar bhi nahi chhipa pa rahi thi .
Kamre me pahunchte hi uske saiyam ka baandh toot gaya aur wo foot foot kar ro padi . Uske sare ghaw wapas chhil gaye the . Sab yaad aane laga ki usne kya kya khoya hai aur sabse jyada yaad aa rahi thi Maa , Jiya rote rote hi badbadai ,
Jiya - " Maa aap bahut yaad aa rahi hain aaj . Agar aap aaj mere paas hoti to kaise bhi kar ke samhal leti mujhe mai janti hoon par maa mai bilkul akeli pad gayi hoon is duniya me . Sab taraf sirf bure log hain maa . Kyu muh fer liya aap ne bhi mujhse , kiske paas apna dukh kahoon maa itni badi duniya me mai bilkul akeli padd gayi hoon . Mujhse milne aa jaiye maa mujhe aap ki god me sir rakh kar rona hai "
Jiya jis wakt sari duniya se bekhabar khud se baatein kar rahi thi usi wakt Tarun bhi aa gaya wahan ,
Tarun - kya hua Fairy tum ro kyu rahi ho ?
Jiya - tumse matlab Tarun , aaj mera man kar raha hai rone ko .
Tarun - kyu Kya tumko bhi Vikram ne kuchh kaha ?
Jiya - kya bola wo behuda insan tumko ?
Jiya ko samjhte der nahi lagi ki Tarun ko Vikram ne kuchh kaha hai .
Tarun - wo mera majaq uda raha tha aur sab has rahe the .
Jiya - jane do wo sab bure log hain unki baatein nahi sochte .
Tarun - to tum kyu soch rahi ho Fairy , mat socho . Bure logon ko saja unka" KARMA " deta hai .
Jiya - tum to bure nahi the na Tarun to tumko ye saja kyu mili ?
Jiya Tarun ko kandhon se hilati huyi boli .
Tarun - kya matlab ?
Jiya - " kya tumko kuchh bhi yaad nahi ? Kya mai bhi yaad nahi ? Kya sath bitaye lamhe bhi bhool gaye ya kisi gunaah se bachne ke liye pagalpanti ka labada odh liya hai tumne ? Jawab do Tarun ."
Tarun - mujhe kuchh bhi samjh nahi aa raha hai ki tum kya bol rahi ho ?
Jiya - tumhara hi badhiya hai . Sab kuchh bhool kar wapas bachpan me chale gaye ho khair tumhe to meri parwah kabhi thi hi nahi tabhi to uss rat ......
Jiya bolte bolte ruk gayi .
Tarun - rat ko kya Fairy ?
Jiya- tum sach me pagal ho , get out , ( gusse se ) . mai tumhari surat ek second bhi bardasht nahi kar sakti chale jao please for god sac
Tarun - tum bhi buri ho Fairy , i hate you fairy .
Tarun bhagta hua chala gaya wahan se . Tarun ke jane ke bad Jiya ko ahsas hua ki usne kya kar diya hai . Bahut bura lag raha tha Jiya ko khud ka bartaw . Wo khud ko kosti huyi Tarun ko khojne lagi .
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( Vikram ke dost Tony aur Kriti baat karte huye )
Tony - Vikram ke dimag me fir koi khurafat chal rahi hai .
Kriti - kyu abb kya kiya usne ?
Tony - bol raha tha kisi ke maje lene ke liye .
Kriti - nooo ,
Tony - yes ,
Kriti - ye galat hai Tony .
Tony - jakar Vikram se bol , waise usne kaha hai ki Melisa kuchh bhi bhanak nahi lage kyu ki Melusa ko lekar wo bahut serious hai .
Kriti - dikh rahi hai seriousness wo bhi overloaded .
Tony - kaun rok sakta hai use yaar wo kar ke hi manega .
Kriti - ye galat hai .
Tony - janta hoon par kya kar sakta hoon . Na tab kuchh kar paya tha na hi abb kuchh kar paunga .
Tony apni baat poori kar ke wahan se uth gaya lekin Kriti baithi rahi . Tony ke jane ke baad Kriti ne apna phone kaan ke paas lagaya jo poore baat cheet ke dauran on tha aur Tony isase anjan tha . Kisi ko Kriti poori baatein suna rahi thi .
कहानी पूरी मिस्टीरियस होती जा रही है। हर बढ़ते भाग के साथ कहानी में थ्रिल और सस्पेन्स बढ़ता जा रहा है। कभी लगता है कि जिया तरुण के लहिलाफ़ है तो कभी लगता है कि वो तरुण के साथ है। दिल की चकरघिन्नी हुई पड़ी है। वैसे आपकी लेखनी बहुत कमाल की है। मज़ा आ रहा है कहानी में।।
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बहुत ही बेहतरीन कहानी महोदय।।
आपने तो रोमांटिक प्रेम कहानी के नाम पर सस्पेन्स और थ्रिलर अपने पाठकों के सामने पेश कर दिया। लेकिन जो भी था दिल को छूने वाला था। हर अपडेट के साथ कहानी और रोचक होती गई और आखिर में हर राज से पर्दा उठा।।
कहानी सच मे बहुत लाजवाब थी। मज़ा आ गया पढ़कर।।।
आपने तो रोमांटिक प्रेम कहानी के नाम पर सस्पेन्स और थ्रिलर अपने पाठकों के सामने पेश कर दिया। लेकिन जो भी था दिल को छूने वाला था। हर अपडेट के साथ कहानी और रोचक होती गई और आखिर में हर राज से पर्दा उठा।।
कहानी सच मे बहुत लाजवाब थी। मज़ा आ गया पढ़कर।।।
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