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Fabulous update bhai superUpdate-1
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Dono traf se Goliyan chal rhi theen aur us se jo shor uth raha tha us se pura elaqa deshat main tha.
Ladka: (cover se goliyan chalatey huey) Bc phone nai utha raha merey pass goliyan bhi khatam honey ko hn kch sochna parey ga werna aaj mera aakhri din hai.
Us Ladkey ne cover se goliyan chalatey huey peechay hatna shuru kr dia ek goli chalata aur peechay ki traf cover main chala jata doosri traf se jo fire kr rahey they who bhi fire krtey huey aagey berhney lagey k tabhi unhey gadi start honey ki awaz aaye aur unhey samjhney main deir nai lagi k jis pe who fire kr rahey they who wahan se bhaag gya hai.
Ladka: (gadi chalatey huey phone pe) Bc kitni deir se tujhey phone kr raha hn kahan mar gya tha tu.
Samney se:
Ladka: Haan haan theek hai sun mujh pe attack hua hai ho na ho yeh usi ka kaam hai mein kisi trhah wahan se bhaag nikla hn mujhey lagta hai who mera peecha kr rahey hn mein terey se baad main baat krta hn aur haan mein ne jo tujhey kaam dia tha ab waqt aa gya hai tu who kr.
Samney se:
Ladka: Theek hai ager mujhey kch hota hai tou phr bhi yeh kaam her haal main hona chaiey aur haan us secret room main Ladki hai usey sahi salamat bheijh dein.
Ladka full speed se gadi chala raha tha aur side mirror se peechay bhi deikh raha tha us k peechay 4 gadiyan lagi hui theen peechay se fire ho rahey they tabhi do goliyan tyre pe lageen jis se gadi un balanced ho gai aur samney pull tha aur gadi seedha badi Nehar main chali gai kiun k pani ka bahao taiz tha jis sey gadi kch hi sec main wahan se ghaib ho gai.
Aadmi: (phone pe) Sir kaam ho gya.
Samney se:
Aadmi: Badi Nehar main gadi giri hai bachney k chances 0% hn.
Samney se:
Aadmi: Theek hai sir raat tuk ruktey hn ager bahir nikla bhi tou maar dein gey jo k mujhey nai lagta kiun k ab tuk tou who doob k bht door nikal gya ho ga Goliyan bhi lagi theen usey so bachney k chances nai hn.
Samney se:
Aadmi: Theek hai sir.
Ek hall jis main ek table aur us k her traf rakhi chair pe beithey kch log kisi baat ko le k charcha kr rahey they k kisi ek ko phone aaya aur phone sunney k baad who wahan beithtey huey hi hansney laga jo log us k pass beithey they who heran they.
Aadmi: Kia hua hans kiun rahey ho aur yeh kis ka phone aaya tha.
Aadmi 2: Merey aadmi ka phone tha kaam ho gya hai humarey rastey ka sab se bada kanta hat gya maar dala merey aadmion ne usey.
Yeh baat suntey hi wahan jasan ka sama tha en ko yehi shodtey hn chaltey hn ek Mehal numa ghar yahan pe bhi jasan ka sama tha ghar ko sajaya gya tha aur ghar main log kaam main masroof they.
Aurat: Jaldi se kaam khatam karo mera beta pounchney wala hai jaldi se sarey khaney tyaar honey chaiey aaj 22 saal baad milun gi usey mein (apni beti se) Beta aap k baba gaey usey Airport se leney k nai.
Ladki: G maa who chaley gaey hn.
1 Year Later:
Ladki: Bhaiya aap ko babajani bula rahey hn.
Ladka: Haan Gudiya bas yeh thoda sa kaam reh gya hai baba ko kaho mein kaam khatam kr k aata hn.
Ladki: Acha jaldi aa jana mein jati hn wapis ghar aap k liey khana garam krney.
Ladka kheit main kaam kr raha tha es waqt who dhoti aur kurta main tha aur apni zameen pe kheiti bari kr raha tha jesay hi us ka kaam khatam hua apna samaan samait k who wahan se nikal para apney ghar ko andheira honey laga tha ghar pouncha tou hath muh dho k charpai pe beith gya.
Ladki: Bhaiya pani.
Ladkey ne Paani pia aur apney baba k room main chala gya.
Ladka: G baba jani aap ne mujhey bulaya kch kaam tha kia.
Baba: Haan beta kaam tha tum se aao beitho.
Es sey pehley k baat aagey hoti bahir se koi ladkey ko awaz laganey laga jab ladka bahir gya tou us ka dost samney khada tha.
Ladka: Haan kia hua Kashi.
Kashi: Kch behroopion ko gaun main deikha gya hai un k pass Asla(weapon) bhi hai aur pata chala hai k who Ch saab k ghar humla krney waley hn merey khyaal se kr bhi dia ho ga.
Ladka: Kia? Behroopiey who bhi apney gaun main aur who bhi asley k sath.
Kashi: Haan.
Ladka: Theek hai tu ja mein deikhta hn.
Ladka ander gya aur baba k kamrey main chala gya.
Baba: Kia baat hai beta kon tha.
Ladka: Baba Kashi tha ek zaroori kaam aan para hai mein deikh k aata hn.
Baba: Theek hai beta jaldi aana khana bhi khana hai.
Ladka: G baba.
Ladka ghar se nikal k andheirey main chalta hua Ch k ghar ki traf nikal para jo k gaun k ek side pe veeran jagah pe tha jis k aas pass bht zyada zameeney theen Ladka thodi deir main Haveli k samney tha lekin usey haveli k bahir 2 logon ko tehltey deikha Ladka bht hi hoshyaari k sath un k pass gya aur andheirey ka faida uthatey huey ek k muh pe hath rakh k us ki gardan marod di aur agley hi pal main doosrey k sath bhi aesa hi kia.
Us k baad chup k ander gya tou usey main gate pe bhi ek aadmi nazer aaya jo k es gaun ka nai tha ladka peechay se us k pass gya aur us k sath bhi wesa hi kia jo k bahir k logon k sath kia tha us k pass pistol thi Ladkey ne who pistol uthayee aur uper waley ko yaad kr k ander dhakhil ho gya lekin aram se.
Thoda hi aagey gya tha k hall se usey awazein aaney lageen kisi k roney ki tou kisi k bolney ki Ladkey ne deir na krtey huey sheeda hall main chala gya wahan pe sab us ladkey ko deikh k chownk gaey ab situation kia thi wahan ki who bhi bata doon.
Hall main sofey rakhey they aur un pe Ch saab ki family beithi thi Female ek side theen jo k dari aur sehmi hui si theen aur un se alag sofey pe akela Ch beitha tha aur un k aas pass 4 aadmi thi hathyaar k sath.
Aadmi: Kon hai be tu Yahan kia kr raha hai.
Ladka: Koi merey ghar main asla le k ghusey aur mein rokney aaun tou ulta usi se sawal k tu kon hai wah.
Aadmi: Lekin tu tou Ch k ghar se nai hai phr.
Ladka: Yeh gaun mera ghar hai yahan k basney waley merey apney.
Aadmi: Bakwaas bnd kr aur tu ander aaya kesay merey admion ne tujhey roka kiun nai.
Ladka: Maar dala unhey mein ne.
Ladkey ki baat sun k wahan sab shocked they aur un gundon ko gussa bhi tha k yeh achanak se kahan se aa gya ulta aadmi bhi maar diey abhi who kch keh patey 4 goliyan chali jo k ladkey ne chalayee theen ab who thehra gaun ka, professional shooter tou tha nai charon ki charon goliyan lageen lekin kisi k hath pe kisi k pait pe kisi k kandhey pe tou kisi k muh pe.
Jis k muh pe lagi who tou usi waqt mar gya jis k pait main lagi who gir k tadapney laga jis k kandhey pe lagi tou kandha pakad k dard ki wajah se cheikhney laga ab jis k hath pe lagi thi who kch kr pata k ladkey ne phr se gun us ki traf kr k goli chala di jo us k dill pe lagi aur who bhi gir para.
Ladka: (Ch ko gun deitey huey) Ch saab yeh lijeay ab jo aap en k sath krna chahein kr saktey hn mein chalta hn.
Ch: Tum Fazal k betey hona.
Ladka: G.
Yeh keh k Ladka chala gya apney ghar ko wahan ja k phr se hath muh dhoey ladki ne khana lagaya sab ne khana khaya aur apni jagah pe soney chaley gaey. Subhah hui Ladka ne fresh ho k nashta kia aur kheton ki traf nikal gya abhi thodi deir hi hui thi us ladkey ko Khet main aaye k us k pass us ki behn aa gai.
Ladka: Kia hua Gudya aaj itni jaldi koi kaam hai kia.
Ladki: G bhaiya aap ko baba ne bulaya hai.
Ladka: Kheiriat?
Ladki: Pata nai who koi aaya hai ghar pe usi wajah se bulaya hai.
Ladka: Chal theek hai chaltey hn.
Ladkey ne kaam bnd kia aur ladki k sath chal dia apney ghar ki traf jab ghar pounch gya tou usey pata chala k Ch saab aaye hn jin ko raat main bachaya tha us ladkey ne hath muh dhoya aur baba k kamrey main chala gya.
Ladka: G baba aap ne bulaya.
Baba: Haan beta yeh Ch saab aaye hn kch kaam hai tum se inhey.
Ladka: G Ch saab boliey kia kaam hai aap ko mujh se.
Ch saab: Beta sab se pehley tou sukriya k raat ko tum ne mujhey aur meri family ko bachaya mein bata nai sakta k mein kitna Ehsaan mand hn tumhara.
Ladka: Yeh tou mera farz hai aur wesay bhi koi merey gaun main hatyaar le k aaye ga tou mujhey bhi us ka muqabla krna ho ga.
Ch saab: Mein kisi kaam se aaya hn tumharey pass.
Ladka: G boliey.
Ch saab: Meri beti aa rahi hai aaj sham ko London se wahan who perhayee krney gai thi jo k khatam ho chuki hai mujhey darr hai k jis ne raat ko aadmi bheijey they kaheen who meri beti ko hi na kidnap kr le mujh se badla leney ko es liey mein chahta hn k tum usey leney jao.
Ladka: Lekin mein kesay.
Ch saab: Beta raat ko hi mujhey maloom ho gya tha k tum main bht hosla hai bahadur bhi ho dartey bhi nai merey pass bht se bndey hn jin k zariey mein apni Beti ko leney ja sakta hn lekin ager unho ne peechay se merey ghar main humla kr dia tou esi liey mein tuharey pass aaya hn.
Baba: Maan jao beta mujhey yakeen hai tum sahi salamat le k aao usey.
Ladka: Theek hai lekin mein pehchanu ga kesay mujhey tou maloom hi nai k kesey dikhti hn who.
Baba: Meri beti jaey gi tumharey sath.
Ladka: Theek hai kis waqt nikalna hai.
Ch saab: Bas thodi deir main kiun k airport pounchney main bhi time lagey ga.
Ladka: Theek hai mein aata hn aap k ghar.
Ch saab chaley gaey kamrey main Baba aur ladka hi reh gaey thodi deir khamoshi chayee rahi.
Baba: Beta kaam khaternaak hai lekin mujhey tum pe bharosa hai jab Ch ne kal raat ka waqiya bataya tou mujhey tum pe naaz hua tha ab bhi tum es kaam main kamyaab ho k hi lotna.
Ladka pounch gya tha Ch saab ki haveli main yahan Pajero kahdi thi black main ladka haveli main enter hua tou samney hi Ch saab k saath ek lady aur ek ladki khadi thi.
Ch saab: Aao beta tumhara hi intezaar tha.
Ladki: Salam Bhai.
Ladka: W Salam.
Lady: Beta meri Beti ko sahi salamat le k aana 8 saal baad aa rahi hai.
Ladka: Mein apni traf se puri koshish krun ga baqi madad krna uper waley ka kaam hai.
Ch saab: Haan beta bahir jo gadi hai who bullet aur bomb proof hai.
Ladka aur Ladki bahir aaye Ladki peechay beith gai aur Ladka aagey driver k sath beith gya Ch saab aur us ki begum bahir tuk aaye Gadi nikal pari gaun se bahir aaye phr Sehar ki traf rawana huey us k baad trafic se hotey huey Airport gaey jis main unhey 4 ghantey ho gaey es beech Ladkey ko koi khtra nai mehsoos hua.
Takreeban 45 min wait krney k baad Ladki ko apni behan bahir aati hui dikhayee di Ladki khushi se uchalti hui us k pass gai aur usey galey se laga lia Ladka khamoshi se waheen khara raha aur bahir ki traf deikhta raha ya aas pass deikh raha tha k kaheen koi gadbad tou nai.
Jab who ladki aur us ki behan Ladkey k pass aaye tou who wahan se nikal parey samaan itna zyada nai tha bas teen bag they gadi k pass aaye samaan ko gadi main rakha aur gadi main beith gaey Ladkiyan peechay beith gaeen aur Ladka aagey driver k sath.
Ladka: (driver se) Andheira honey laga hai mosam bhi thoda khraab hai barish ho sakti hai ab jitni jaldi ho sakey utni jaldi Gaun k pass pounchna bht zaroori hai ager kch hota bhi hai tou gaun se aadmi bulwa lein gey.
Driver: G beta.
Driver ne Gadi ko chalana shuru kia aur thodi speed se hi chalney lagey yahan traffic hoti waheen slow hota baqi zyada speed se chala raha tha jo London se aaye thi us ne apni behn se isharey se pucha k yeh ladka kon hai.
Ladki: DD yeh wahi hn jinho ne raat ko humein bachaya tha aur baba ne hi inhey bheija hai takeh aap ko sahi salamat la sakein.
Ab us ladki ne gaur se deikha us ladkey ki traf tou lambey gungraaley baal jo kandhey tuk they aur lambi daarhi aur sath hi Gaun wala labaas Lekin aankhein jo us ne airport pe khadey ho k us Ladkey ki dekhein tou who blue theen jinhey deikh who hulki shocked hui thi kiun hui thi yeh shodiey baad main pata chaley ga.
Ab gaun se thodi hi doori thi takreeban 30 km k achanak un k aagey 2 pajero gariyaan aa gaen aur aagey ja k ruk gaen aur rasta block kr dia jis ki wajah se driver ko brake lagani parhi yeh sab deikh k tou ladkiyan ghabra gaen lekin Ladka still khamosh aur koi expression nai ab doosri gadiyon se aadmi nikal k bahir aa gaey.
Ladka: (driver se) Jab tuk mein na kahun koi lock nai kholna aur na hi koi bahir nikley sab ander hi beithey rehna theek hai.
Driver: G beta.
Ladka bahir nikla aur driver ne lock laga dia aur ladka jesay hi bahir nikal k aagey berhney laga usey kisi ne peechay se zor se sir pe waar kia jo k ek lohey ka Sariya tha (ab ager aap kisi ghubarey main ek chota sa tukra daal k usey phulayen aur jab ghubarey ko shake krein tou jo us piece k sath ho ga jo who takrayee ga ghubarey ki boundries k sath) wesa hi us ladkey k sath hua.
Us ladkey ko apney dimagh main koi cheez aesey hi hilti hui aur boundry k sath takratey huey feel hui aur who neechay gir gya us k sir se khoon bhi nikalney laga yeh sab deikh k tou Ladkiyan dar gaen aur unhey yeh bhi hosh nai tha k apney baba ko phone kr k surtehaal bata sakein Driver ne unhey nikalney se manah kia.
Ab who aadmi gadi k pass gaey lekin gadi nai khuli aadmiyon ne driver se kaha k chupchap khol de aur zinda bach jaey lekin Driver ne phr bhi nai khola ab unhey gussa aaney laga unhey ne driver pe goliyan chalayeen lekin sab bekaar goliyaan seeshay k sath takra k neechay gir gaen unho ne bht koshish ki lekin koi faida nai.
Aadmi ne wohi sariya pakra jis se us ladkey k sir pe waar kia tha us pe kapra lapeta takeh k grip achi bani rahey aur usey gadi k seeshay pe marney laga bht koshish k baad seeshay main darar perney lagi aur jab aakhri waar baqi tha k us aadmi ko mehsoos hua k kisi ne us ka hath pakad lia hai aur usi waqt barish bhi honey lagi us aadmi ne deikha k wohi Ladka doosri side muh kiey kch bol raha hai hulki awaz main.
Aadmi: Aey teri himmat doobara maar khaney ka irada hai kia mar jaey ga shod de mujhey.
Ladka: Saahu Saahu Saahu Saahu.
Aadmi: Kia bol raha hai be.
Achanak hi us ladkey ne apney muh ka rukh us aadmi ki traf kia.
Ladka: HAQSAAHU.
Yeh us ladkey ne chillatey huey kaha jis se who aadmi dar gya kiun k yeh lafz us ne kaheen sun rakha tha us ne hi nai us k sath aaye bandon ne bhi sun rakha tha abhi who es sey sambhaley hi nai they k ladkey ne who shariya us aadmi se lia aur us aadmi k gerdan se neechay se uper us ki khopri tuk aar paar kr dia yeh sab deikh k baqi aur darr gaey aur wahan se bhaag gaey apni gariyon main.
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for new story 
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Thank u for coming hereBrilliant update brother
Achi start hai action ke sath aur mere hisabs e ye wahi ladka hai jo nadi mein gura tha aur ab ye yaha reh raha hai bas aur ladki bhi isey sayad janti hai par baal aur beard badi hone se ppehchaan nahi paa rahi lekin aankho se pehchaan gayi hai.
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Thank ucongratulations for new story bro
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