Hello bro ... Mujhe bhi story bnani hai mai bhi lambe time se achha reader hu but mere pass utna time nhi hai ki likh paau . But Mai tmhre sath milkr likhne me help kr skta hu fantasy kaisi bdaai jaaye ...tmne bro story achhi likhi hai lekin thoda speed me likh di hai iss story ko bahut aage tk lekr jana chahiye and thoda or effect dalana chahiye.

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