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Story ki female lead kise hona chahiye???

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डबल क्रास गेम्स खेलकर किंगशुक ने जेम्स को रास्ते से हटाया और अपने बंदे को सीटी कालेज का हेड बना डाला।
किंगशुक सबकुछ अपने अंदर बसे स्मगलर के दिल के निर्देशानुसार कर तो रहा है लेकिन दिमाग का इस्तेमाल वही कर रहा है।
यह देखकर काफी आश्चर्य हुआ था कि एक बार के लिए तो जेम्स ने किंगशुक के दोस्तों को भी अपने जाल मे फांस लिया था। इससे लगता है , उसके दोस्त कहीं मौके पर दगा न दे जाए !

जिस तरह से मरहूम स्मगलर ने शनाया का जिक्र किया था उससे लगता है शनाया का अतीत काफी दर्द भरा रहा होगा। उसे प्रेम की निहायत ही आवश्यकता है और किंगशुक को इसके लिए पहल भी करनी चाहिए।

उदय भास्कर साहब से मरहूम स्मगलर का जरूर कोई पुराना हिसाब किताब चुकाना बाकी है। या शायद शनाया से भी ! लेकिन यह साहब है किस प्रोफेशन मे ?

बेहतरीन अपडेट स्वराज भाई। आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट।
 

Swaraj

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"ab kya??" kingshuk ne poocha

"uday bhasker" awaz bol padi

"wo koun hai???" kingshuk ne poocha, lekin jawab mil paata tab tak shanaya a chuki thi wahan

Track suit me aayi thi wahan

"yahan chai pee rahe ho??" shanaya ne poocha

"oh hi shanaya" kingshuk ne aakhiri ghoont peekar bola

"canteen me bhi to chai hai na, fir yahan??" shanaya ne poocha

"wo yahan ka samosa bohut acha rehta hai" kingshuk bola

"lekin maine suna ki gurukul ke samose sabse best hai??" shanaya boli

"Haan lekin wo swaad badalna bhi chahiye na" kingshuk bola

Shanaya ko yakeen nahi a raha tha ki ye wahi hai jisne levelfield ko football me haraya, Tyson ko boxing me haraya aur ab iska danka har jagah baj raha hai

"OYE...." achanak cheekh pada kingshuk

Shanaya ne dekha ki kingshuk tezi se ja raha hai ek jagah jahan do teen ladke maar rahe the ek ladke ko

"koun hai be tu??" ek ladke ne poocha kingshuk se

"gurukul ka kingshuk" kingshuk bola to paasaa ulta pad gaya
Ladke sab pair pakadne lage kingshuk ke

"ainda ye sab nahi karna aur agar karte dikhe to...." kingshuk bola

"s sorry bhai, uday sir ka hukm tha" ek ladka bola

"koun uday??" kingshuk ne poocha

Jawab me teen ladke ne ek doosre ko dekha aur bhaag gaye

"wo hamari ladai nahi thi kingshuk" awaz bol padi

"tumhari na sahi, meri thi" kingshuk bola

"kyun gaye the wahan chaudhry banne??" shanaya ne poocha

"mai kamzor ko maar khate nahi dekh sakta shanaya" kingshuk bola

"aur agar wo tumse taqatwar nikla to??" shanaya ne poocha

"agar nikla to.... Maar kha lunga, lekin isse agar koi bach jaaye to kya problem hai" haste hue kingshuk bola

Shanaya ne haste hue kingshuk ko dekha,ladka bohut seedha hai. Duniyadari nahi maalum ise

"waise tumhe meri fikr karne ki zaroorat nahi hai shanaya" kingshuk bola

Chaunk gayi shanaya

"m mujhe koi interest nahi hai tumhare life me taang adane ki, wo to mai bas ek dost ke hisab se Keh rahi thi" shanaya boli

"lekin hum dost kab bane??" bol kar soch me pad gaya kingshuk

"idiot, I hate you" pair patak kar chali gayi shanaya

"Arey?? Ise kya hua" kingshuk ne poocha

"shanaya" ek lambi Saans lekar awaz bol padi

"mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki shanaya ko jaante ho tum??" kingshuk bola

"wo important nahi hai kingshuk, important ye hai ki shanaya jaanti hai uday ke baare me, uday ko bina hataye tum kuch nahi kar sakte" awaz boli

"uday ke baare me jaanti hai shanaya" kingshuk ne poocha

"hmm jaanti hai aur wo usi ko dhoond rahi hai yahan" awaz boli

"samjha nahi" kingshuk bola

"abhi tum sirf itna samjho ki shanaya ko tumhari zaroorat hai kingshuk" awaz boli

"hmm sahi hai, lekin is uday bhaskar ka kya??" kingshuk bola

"tum sirf shanaya ko help karne ki socho kingshuk, uday se link juda hua hai uska" awaz boli

"sahi hai" bol kingshuk uth khada hua
-------------------------------------------------------------------
MUMBAI
tv par news sekh rahe shaks ne uske Saamne khade hue shaks ko dekha

"uday tumko boss ne school aur college ki zimmedari di hui thi"

"hmm"

"to fir kya hua??"

"kabhi kabhi hamare samajh paane se pehle sab kuch khatam hota rehta hai gafoor bhai" uday bola

Gafoor Naam Ka shaks ek lambi Saans lekar khada hua

"Humne sahi nahi kiya uday, aise aadmi ke peeth par chura bhok diya jisne hamare kiye kya nahi kiya" gafoor bola

"lekin gafoor bhai uski taqat khatam ho rahi thi, ladki ke chakkar me padne laga tha wo" uday bola

"tu abhi kuch nahi jaanta uday, wo empire khada hua tha uske liye, aaj dekh ek ek kar Nigeria, Australia aur Afghanistan haath se gaye" gafoor bola

"mujhe samajh nahi a raha hai ki aap usko hamesha se support kyun karte a rahe hai, hamare naye boss me kya kami hai" uday bola to has pada gafoor

"tu abhi bachha hai uday, khair us ladke ko ab kisi ke sahare nahi chodna, khud nipat. Mai sambhal lunga james ki mout ko" gafoor bola

"thik hai gafoor bhai, ab aap dekhna kaise us machharko masalta hoon waise bhi bohut din ho gaya maidan me utre hue" uday bola
 
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Riky007

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"ab kya??" kingshuk ne poocha

"uday bhasker" awaz bol padi

"wo koun hai???" kingshuk ne poocha, lekin jawab mil paata tab tak shanaya a chuki thi wahan

Track suit me aayi thi wahan

"yahan chai pee rahe ho??" shanaya ne poocha

"oh hi shanaya" kingshuk ne aakhiri ghoont peekar bola

"canteen me bhi to chai hai na, fir yahan??" shanaya ne poocha

"wo yahan ka samosa bohut acha rehta hai" kingshuk bola

"lekin maine suna ki gurukul ke samose sabse best hai??" shanaya boli

"Haan lekin wo swaad badalna bhi chahiye na" kingshuk bola

Shanaya ko yakeen nahi a raha tha ki ye wahi hai jisne levelfield ko football me haraya, Tyson ko boxing me haraya aur ab iska danka har jagah baj raha hai

"OYE...." achanak cheekh pada kingshuk

Shanaya ne dekha ki kingshuk tezi se ja raha hai ek jagah jahan do teen ladke maar rahe the ek ladke ko

"koun hai be tu??" ek ladke ne poocha kingshuk se

"gurukul ka kingshuk" kingshuk bola to paasaa ulta pad gaya
Ladke sab pair pakadne lage kingshuk ke

"ainda ye sab nahi karna aur agar karte dikhe to...." kingshuk bola

"s sorry bhai, uday sir ka hukm tha" ek ladka bola

"koun uday??" kingshuk ne poocha

Jawab me teen ladke ne ek doosre ko dekha aur bhaag gaye

"wo hamari ladai nahi thi kingshuk" awaz bol padi

"tumhari na sahi, meri thi" kingshuk bola

"kyun gaye the wahan chaudhry banne??" shanaya ne poocha

"mai kamzor ko maar khate nahi dekh sakta shanaya" kingshuk bola

"aur agar wo tumse taqatwar nikla to??" shanaya ne poocha

"agar nikla to.... Maar kha lunga, lekin isse agar koi bach jaaye to kya problem hai" haste hue kingshuk bola

Shanaya ne haste hue kingshuk ko dekha,ladka bohut seedha hai. Duniyadari nahi maalum ise

"waise tumhe meri fikr karne ki zaroorat nahi hai shanaya" kingshuk bola

Chaunk gayi shanaya

"m mujhe koi interest nahi hai tumhare life me taang adane ki, wo to mai bas ek dost ke hisab se Keh rahi thi" shanaya boli

"lekin hum dost kab bane??" bol kar soch me pad gaya kingshuk

"idiot, I hate you" pair patak kar chali gayi shanaya

"Arey?? Ise kya hua" kingshuk ne poocha

"shanaya" ek lambi Saans lekar awaz bol padi

"mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki shanaya ko jaante ho tum??" kingshuk bola

"wo important nahi hai kingshuk, important ye hai ki shanaya jaanti hai uday ke baare me, uday ko bina hataye tum kuch nahi kar sakte" awaz boli

"uday ke baare me jaanti hai shanaya" kingshuk ne poocha

"hmm jaanti hai aur wo usi ko dhoond rahi hai yahan" awaz boli

"samjha nahi" kingshuk bola

"abhi tum sirf itna samjho ki shanaya ko tumhari zaroorat hai kingshuk" awaz boli

"hmm sahi hai, lekin is uday bhaskar ka kya??" kingshuk bola

"tum sirf shanaya ko help karne ki socho kingshuk, uday se link juda hua hai uska" awaz boli

"sahi hai" bol kingshuk uth khada hua
-------------------------------------------------------------------
MUMBAI
tv par news sekh rahe shaks ne uske Saamne khade hue shaks ko dekha

"uday tumko boss ne school aur college ki zimmedari di hui thi"

"hmm"

"to fir kya hua??"

"kabhi kabhi hamare samajh paane se pehle sab kuch khatam hota rehta hai gafoor bhai" uday bola

Gafoor Naam Ka shaks ek lambi Saans lekar khada hua

"Humne sahi nahi kiya uday, aise aadmi ke peeth par chura bhok diya jisne hamare kiye kya nahi kiya" gafoor bola

"lekin gafoor bhai uski taqat khatam ho rahi thi, ladki ke chakkar me padne laga tha wo" uday bola

"tu abhi kuch nahi jaanta uday, wo empire khada hua tha uske liye, aaj dekh ek ek kar Nigeria, Australia aur Afghanistan haath se gaye" gafoor bola

"mujhe samajh nahi a raha hai ki aap usko hamesha se support kyun karte a rahe hai, hamare naye boss me kya kami hai" uday bola to has pada gafoor

"tu abhi bachha hai uday, khair us ladke ko ab kisi ke sahare nahi chodna, khud nipat. Mai sambhal lunga james ki mout ko" gafoor bola

"thik hai gafoor bhai, ab aap dekhna kaise us machharko masalta hoon waise bhi bohut din ho gaya maidan me utre hue" uday bola
उदय भाई की लंका लगने वाली है
 
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Bhupinder Singh

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"ab kya??" kingshuk ne poocha

"uday bhasker" awaz bol padi

"wo koun hai???" kingshuk ne poocha, lekin jawab mil paata tab tak shanaya a chuki thi wahan

Track suit me aayi thi wahan

"yahan chai pee rahe ho??" shanaya ne poocha

"oh hi shanaya" kingshuk ne aakhiri ghoont peekar bola

"canteen me bhi to chai hai na, fir yahan??" shanaya ne poocha

"wo yahan ka samosa bohut acha rehta hai" kingshuk bola

"lekin maine suna ki gurukul ke samose sabse best hai??" shanaya boli

"Haan lekin wo swaad badalna bhi chahiye na" kingshuk bola

Shanaya ko yakeen nahi a raha tha ki ye wahi hai jisne levelfield ko football me haraya, Tyson ko boxing me haraya aur ab iska danka har jagah baj raha hai

"OYE...." achanak cheekh pada kingshuk

Shanaya ne dekha ki kingshuk tezi se ja raha hai ek jagah jahan do teen ladke maar rahe the ek ladke ko

"koun hai be tu??" ek ladke ne poocha kingshuk se

"gurukul ka kingshuk" kingshuk bola to paasaa ulta pad gaya
Ladke sab pair pakadne lage kingshuk ke

"ainda ye sab nahi karna aur agar karte dikhe to...." kingshuk bola

"s sorry bhai, uday sir ka hukm tha" ek ladka bola

"koun uday??" kingshuk ne poocha

Jawab me teen ladke ne ek doosre ko dekha aur bhaag gaye

"wo hamari ladai nahi thi kingshuk" awaz bol padi

"tumhari na sahi, meri thi" kingshuk bola

"kyun gaye the wahan chaudhry banne??" shanaya ne poocha

"mai kamzor ko maar khate nahi dekh sakta shanaya" kingshuk bola

"aur agar wo tumse taqatwar nikla to??" shanaya ne poocha

"agar nikla to.... Maar kha lunga, lekin isse agar koi bach jaaye to kya problem hai" haste hue kingshuk bola

Shanaya ne haste hue kingshuk ko dekha,ladka bohut seedha hai. Duniyadari nahi maalum ise

"waise tumhe meri fikr karne ki zaroorat nahi hai shanaya" kingshuk bola

Chaunk gayi shanaya

"m mujhe koi interest nahi hai tumhare life me taang adane ki, wo to mai bas ek dost ke hisab se Keh rahi thi" shanaya boli

"lekin hum dost kab bane??" bol kar soch me pad gaya kingshuk

"idiot, I hate you" pair patak kar chali gayi shanaya

"Arey?? Ise kya hua" kingshuk ne poocha

"shanaya" ek lambi Saans lekar awaz bol padi

"mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki shanaya ko jaante ho tum??" kingshuk bola

"wo important nahi hai kingshuk, important ye hai ki shanaya jaanti hai uday ke baare me, uday ko bina hataye tum kuch nahi kar sakte" awaz boli

"uday ke baare me jaanti hai shanaya" kingshuk ne poocha

"hmm jaanti hai aur wo usi ko dhoond rahi hai yahan" awaz boli

"samjha nahi" kingshuk bola

"abhi tum sirf itna samjho ki shanaya ko tumhari zaroorat hai kingshuk" awaz boli

"hmm sahi hai, lekin is uday bhaskar ka kya??" kingshuk bola

"tum sirf shanaya ko help karne ki socho kingshuk, uday se link juda hua hai uska" awaz boli

"sahi hai" bol kingshuk uth khada hua
-------------------------------------------------------------------
MUMBAI
tv par news sekh rahe shaks ne uske Saamne khade hue shaks ko dekha

"uday tumko boss ne school aur college ki zimmedari di hui thi"

"hmm"

"to fir kya hua??"

"kabhi kabhi hamare samajh paane se pehle sab kuch khatam hota rehta hai gafoor bhai" uday bola

Gafoor Naam Ka shaks ek lambi Saans lekar khada hua

"Humne sahi nahi kiya uday, aise aadmi ke peeth par chura bhok diya jisne hamare kiye kya nahi kiya" gafoor bola

"lekin gafoor bhai uski taqat khatam ho rahi thi, ladki ke chakkar me padne laga tha wo" uday bola

"tu abhi kuch nahi jaanta uday, wo empire khada hua tha uske liye, aaj dekh ek ek kar Nigeria, Australia aur Afghanistan haath se gaye" gafoor bola

"mujhe samajh nahi a raha hai ki aap usko hamesha se support kyun karte a rahe hai, hamare naye boss me kya kami hai" uday bola to has pada gafoor

"tu abhi bachha hai uday, khair us ladke ko ab kisi ke sahare nahi chodna, khud nipat. Mai sambhal lunga james ki mout ko" gafoor bola

"thik hai gafoor bhai, ab aap dekhna kaise us machharko masalta hoon waise bhi bohut din ho gaya maidan me utre hue" uday bola
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Kala Nag

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"ab kya??" kingshuk ne poocha

"uday bhasker" awaz bol padi

"wo koun hai???" kingshuk ne poocha, lekin jawab mil paata tab tak shanaya a chuki thi wahan

Track suit me aayi thi wahan

"yahan chai pee rahe ho??" shanaya ne poocha

"oh hi shanaya" kingshuk ne aakhiri ghoont peekar bola

"canteen me bhi to chai hai na, fir yahan??" shanaya ne poocha

"wo yahan ka samosa bohut acha rehta hai" kingshuk bola

"lekin maine suna ki gurukul ke samose sabse best hai??" shanaya boli

"Haan lekin wo swaad badalna bhi chahiye na" kingshuk bola

Shanaya ko yakeen nahi a raha tha ki ye wahi hai jisne levelfield ko football me haraya, Tyson ko boxing me haraya aur ab iska danka har jagah baj raha hai

"OYE...." achanak cheekh pada kingshuk

Shanaya ne dekha ki kingshuk tezi se ja raha hai ek jagah jahan do teen ladke maar rahe the ek ladke ko

"koun hai be tu??" ek ladke ne poocha kingshuk se

"gurukul ka kingshuk" kingshuk bola to paasaa ulta pad gaya
Ladke sab pair pakadne lage kingshuk ke

"ainda ye sab nahi karna aur agar karte dikhe to...." kingshuk bola

"s sorry bhai, uday sir ka hukm tha" ek ladka bola

"koun uday??" kingshuk ne poocha

Jawab me teen ladke ne ek doosre ko dekha aur bhaag gaye

"wo hamari ladai nahi thi kingshuk" awaz bol padi

"tumhari na sahi, meri thi" kingshuk bola

"kyun gaye the wahan chaudhry banne??" shanaya ne poocha

"mai kamzor ko maar khate nahi dekh sakta shanaya" kingshuk bola

"aur agar wo tumse taqatwar nikla to??" shanaya ne poocha

"agar nikla to.... Maar kha lunga, lekin isse agar koi bach jaaye to kya problem hai" haste hue kingshuk bola

Shanaya ne haste hue kingshuk ko dekha,ladka bohut seedha hai. Duniyadari nahi maalum ise

"waise tumhe meri fikr karne ki zaroorat nahi hai shanaya" kingshuk bola

Chaunk gayi shanaya

"m mujhe koi interest nahi hai tumhare life me taang adane ki, wo to mai bas ek dost ke hisab se Keh rahi thi" shanaya boli

"lekin hum dost kab bane??" bol kar soch me pad gaya kingshuk

"idiot, I hate you" pair patak kar chali gayi shanaya

"Arey?? Ise kya hua" kingshuk ne poocha

"shanaya" ek lambi Saans lekar awaz bol padi

"mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki shanaya ko jaante ho tum??" kingshuk bola

"wo important nahi hai kingshuk, important ye hai ki shanaya jaanti hai uday ke baare me, uday ko bina hataye tum kuch nahi kar sakte" awaz boli

"uday ke baare me jaanti hai shanaya" kingshuk ne poocha

"hmm jaanti hai aur wo usi ko dhoond rahi hai yahan" awaz boli

"samjha nahi" kingshuk bola

"abhi tum sirf itna samjho ki shanaya ko tumhari zaroorat hai kingshuk" awaz boli

"hmm sahi hai, lekin is uday bhaskar ka kya??" kingshuk bola

"tum sirf shanaya ko help karne ki socho kingshuk, uday se link juda hua hai uska" awaz boli

"sahi hai" bol kingshuk uth khada hua
-------------------------------------------------------------------
MUMBAI
tv par news sekh rahe shaks ne uske Saamne khade hue shaks ko dekha

"uday tumko boss ne school aur college ki zimmedari di hui thi"

"hmm"

"to fir kya hua??"

"kabhi kabhi hamare samajh paane se pehle sab kuch khatam hota rehta hai gafoor bhai" uday bola

Gafoor Naam Ka shaks ek lambi Saans lekar khada hua

"Humne sahi nahi kiya uday, aise aadmi ke peeth par chura bhok diya jisne hamare kiye kya nahi kiya" gafoor bola

"lekin gafoor bhai uski taqat khatam ho rahi thi, ladki ke chakkar me padne laga tha wo" uday bola

"tu abhi kuch nahi jaanta uday, wo empire khada hua tha uske liye, aaj dekh ek ek kar Nigeria, Australia aur Afghanistan haath se gaye" gafoor bola

"mujhe samajh nahi a raha hai ki aap usko hamesha se support kyun karte a rahe hai, hamare naye boss me kya kami hai" uday bola to has pada gafoor

"tu abhi bachha hai uday, khair us ladke ko ab kisi ke sahare nahi chodna, khud nipat. Mai sambhal lunga james ki mout ko" gafoor bola

"thik hai gafoor bhai, ab aap dekhna kaise us machharko masalta hoon waise bhi bohut din ho gaya maidan me utre hue" uday bola
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शनाया की तरफ अपना किंग्सुक खिंचा चला जा रहा है
और प्यार की पहली सीढ़ी पर पहुँचते ही पहला वाक्य आई हेट यु, हा हा हा बहुत बढ़िया उपस्थापन
किंग्सुक के दिल में धड़कने वाला और किंग्सुक का चरित्र में थोड़ा फर्क़ है पर दोनों को चरित्र को किंग्सुक इकट्ठे जीयेगा यही विडंबना है यही नियति है
अब तक कहानी में किंग्सुक अपने सफर में बहुत आगे निकल गया है अब उसके अनुरूप खतरे भी बढ़ने लगेंगे अब देखना यह है कि एक तरफ दिल की दिल्लगी और दुसरी तरफ उसी दिल की अजीबोगरीब ख्वाहिश
 
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