Adultery KALYUG ( Antt Hi Aarambh Hai ) { Incest , Fantasy , Romance , Thriller }

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( KALYUG... Part... 14 )


( Life is Unfair... )





Late Night... 2:10 AM...


Location... ****** Hospital...


...Sir aap ise Apne Hospital mein kyun laye hai... Isse kisi Sarkari Hospital me daal dete wanha bhi Inka ilaaj ho hi jata... Aapne itni takleef kyun ki...


Aadmi.... Sssshhhhhh... Tumse jitna kaha jaye utna Karo... Jayada faltu ke sawaal mat pucha Karo kitni baar samjhaun tumhe...


Aurat... ( Darte hue ) Ji sir... maaf kijiyega...


Aadmi... Huhhh... Jaldi se inhe ander le jao aur operation theatre taiyaar karo... Tab tak mujhe thoda kaam h... Dhyaan rahe inhe kuch nhi hona chahiye...


Aurat darte darte dono ko ander le jati hai... Sabhi Doctor ko info kar treatment shuru kar diya jata hai... Wanhi aadmi kahi aur wanha se nikal jata hai... Jaha iss waqt ek Ladki ventilator par leti hui thi... Saas dheeme chal rahi thi... Shayad koma mai ho kehna muskill magar koi halchal nahi ho rahi thi uske shareer mai...


Aadmi dheere dheere chalte hue uss ladki ke pass jata h... uske sir par hath ferte hue uske aankh se aasun ki bund uske chehre par girti hai... Magar ladki ke shareer me koi hulchul nahi hoti... Woh ladki ka haath pakad wanhi uske saath baith jata h...



Aadmi... ( Aankhon se aansun ponchte hue ) Sukku... yaaddd hai tumne kaha thaaa tumhe apni maa tarah doctor banna hai... Aur maine tumse wada kiya tha tumhe bhut bada doctor banaunga... Ab tu aise bister par leti rahegi toh kaise mai tera sapna poora kar paunga... Rukmini pehle hi mujhe chodd kar jaa chuki hai... Agar tujhe kuchh ho gya toh... mai jee nahi paunga betiii... Uthh jaa Sukku tujhe apni maa ki tarah Doctor banna hai apna sapna poora karna hai uth Jaa Sukku... sukkkkuuuuu sunai de raha h tumhe... Mai tumse kuchh keh raha hunnnnn... Uthhhh jaaaa.... Sukkkkuuuuu....


Aadmi rote rote chinkhne lagta hai... Jiski awaaz ki wazah se baju mai nusre jo Ladki ke monitoring ke liye rakhi gayi thi woh kamre mai aake aadmi ko shant karne lagti hai... Aadmi bhi sthiti ko dekhte hue shant ho jata hai woh apni beti se hath chuda ek baar uski taraf dekhta hai toh uski aankhein aansun bahane lagti hai...


Ladki khuli aankhon se use hi dekh rahi thi uski aankhein bhi nam ho gayi thi... apne pita ko iss halat mai dekh Puri himmat jator woh unse kuch kehna chahti hai magr uska shareer uska saath nahi de raha tha... Woh poori koshish krti hai tabhi uske seene Mai tez dard uthata hai aur woh aankhein band kar jor jor Se saansein lene lagti hai...


Aadmi yeh dekh ghabra jata Turant Doctor ko phone ghuma use yaha aane ka aadesh deta hai... Nurse bhi jaldi se Ladki ko check karne lagti hai... Tabhi thodi hi der mai ek doctor ki team aati h aur ladki ko apne saath lekar OT me chali jaati hai.... Aadmi bhi unke peeche peeche bhagte hue ander jaa phunchta hai... Lekin baaki Doctor's use Bahar rukne ka bol apna kaam karne lagte hai...


Woh bhi OT ke bahar baith jata h... Ghabrahat se uska shareer kaamp raha tha aane waale kuch samay uske liye nikalna bhut muskill ho raha tha...


Kaafi Time beet jata h... Aadmi usi awastha mai OT ke bahar baith hi tha tabhi Ek Nusre unke samne aati h... Aadmi ko soch mai gum woh kehti hai...



Nurse... ( Darte hue ) sorry Sir humne poori koshish ki but she's 'NO MORE'...


Early Morning... Time... 6:15 AM...


Location... Basti... TONY House...


...Yashoda... ...Yashoda... Aankh khuli nahi kya teri jaldi se aaja maine nal par no. Laga diya hai jaldi kar nahi toh paani chala jayega... Yashoda... So rahi kya abhi tak... Huhhhh yehhhh sabbb Kyaaaaaaaa hai... Yashodaaaaaaa....


Kanta kab se Yashoda ko paani bharne ke liye awaaz de rahi thi... Aaj uski bhi neend pta nhi kyun deri se khuli thi woh jaldi se uthkar paani ka ghada uthati hai... Nal par phunch kar dekhti hai toh Yashoda bhi ab tak nahi aayi thi woh apne aage waali aurat ko apna ghada dekar Yashoda ko dekhne aati hai... Magar kaafi der tak aawaz dene ke baad Yashoda nahi uthati use lagta hai kahi woh bhi meri tarah so toh nahi gayi... Isliye ghar ke gate par jaise hi haath rakhti hai gate khul jata hai... Ander ka nazara dekh uski aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi thi...


Ander aagan mai poora saaman bikhara pada hai... dekh kar use anhoni ka ehsaas ho jata hai... Tabhi woh Yashoda ko awaaz deti hai lekin koi uski aawaz nahi sunta tabhi uska dyaan angan mai pade dande par jata hai jisper khoon laga hua tha... Use dekh uske haath pair fool gye the tabhi thoda aage khoon ka jamabda laga hua tha pehle usne usper dhyaan nhi diya magar use dekhte hi uski cheenkh nikal gayi...


Kanta... ( Rote hue ) Yashodaaaaa.... Nanduuuuu.... Betaaaa.... Yashodaaaa....


Kanta ander maujud har ek jagah ko check karti hai magar use Yashoda na hi Nanduu... Milta h... Woh wanhi baith kar Rone lagti hai... Uske Rone ki awaaz sun pados ki ek mahila bhi ander ghuss aati hai... Aur nazara dekh use kuch samjh nahi aata toh woh bahar doud kar baaki sab ko madad ke liye bulati hai... baaki mahilaye bhi ander ka nazara dekh hairaan ho jaati hai... Kuch aage jaake Kanta ko sambhalne ki koshish karti hai jo kabse Roye jaa rahi thi...



Ab sabko lag raha tha kanta ko Shayad pta ho kya huaa hai yaha... magar sabka anumaan galat tha... Kanta Roye jaa rahi sab chup karane ki koshish kar rahe the magar woh Nandu... Mera Nandu keh roye jaa rahi thi... Sabko laga shayad Nandu ke saath kuch hua hai jo kanta ko pata h... Uski madat ke liye pehle uska chup hona zaroori tha...


Tabhi kisi ki awaaz sun Sab palat kar uss aur dekhte hain jiske dekh kuch mahilayen ka paseena nikal aaya tha... Wanhi Kanta ka rona bhi achanak se band ho jata h... Aane waale Pal ke baare mai soch uske roongte khade ho gye the... Saath me uska Rona bhi siskiyon me badal gya tha...


...kya ho raha hai yaha... Aur tum sabne itni bheed kyun laga rakhi hai... Huhhhh... Kya hua kanta sab theek hai na kisi ne kuch kiya h...



Tony ki awaaz sun kanta ko samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya jawaab de aur kaise... Qki abhi use bhi nahi pta yaha kya hua hai... Lekin jo kuch bhi yaha hua h woh bhut hi khofnaak hai... Kantako kuch na kehte dekh Tony uske paas jata hai... Uske saath jo mahilayen baithi thi woh uth khadi ho jaati hain... Tony ek nazar kanta ko dekhta h fir sabko...


Tony... ( Hairaan hote hue ) Kya hua btao bhi itni bheed kyun lga rakhi hai tum sabne mere ghar mai... Kanta tu ro kyun rahi hai sab theek hai na...


Magar koi use jawaab nahi deta tabhi woh sab log ko gaur se dekhta h... Sabhi mahilayen usse nazrein chura Rahi thi... Yashodaaaaaa... Nanduuuuu...

Tony ke man main do naam aate ho use dikhai nahi de rahe the... Dono ko awaaz deta h magar woh dono jawaab dene ke liye wanha the hi nahi... Uska dil ghabrane lagta hai woh idher udher dono ko dhoodne ki nakaam koshish karta h... Tabhi uski nazar angaan mai pade dande par padti hai... Uski aankhein aansun use gusse mai laal ho jaati h... Paas mai hi jama khoon dekh uske dare ke maare halat kharab ho gayi thi...



Woh paas jakar dekhta hai khoon taza hi tha matlb abhi ka hoga... Woh dono hath lagakar use Chuta hai uske haath laal ho jate hai... Woh palt kar Kanta ke pass phunchta hai... Gussa uski aankhein mai aansun ban kar beh raha tha... Use samjhna tha aakhir yaha hua kya hai... Kanta ko rote dekh woh Gusse me usse puchta h...


Tony... Kyaaaa huaaa hai yaha.... Yashoda kaha hai... Aur mera beta Nandu... Kya woh tumhare saath hai....


Kanta ko samjh nahi aata woh kya jawab de... Tony ko woh rote hue bass Na mai sir hila deti hai...


Tony... Kantaaaaaaa main tumse kuch puch raha hoon... Kya hua hai yaha... Yashoda aur Nandu kaha h...


Kanta... ( Rote hue himmat jutate hue ) mujheee nahi pata... Main jab yaha thodi der pehle aayi toh gate khula hua tha... Yashoda Nandu ko awaaz di magar unhone koi jawaab nahi diya Yaha adner aaker kamre ko dekh mujhe mujhe laga ki Yashoda yaa Nandu ko kuch hua h...



Kanta ke muhh se Yashoda aur Nandu ko kuch hua h sun... Uski aankhein se baadh aa jati h woh wanhi neeche baith jata h... Gusse se uski mutthi kass gayi jise woh pass ki dewaar par de maarta h... Tabhi Kamala ghar ke ander daakhil hoti hai... Woh bhi bheed ko dekh ghabra jaati hai... Ander phunch Tony aur Kanta ko dekh woh ghabrate hue unke pass phunchti hai...


Kamala... ( Ghabrate hue ) kyaaa hua bahu tu ro kyun rahi hai... Aur Tony tujhe kya hua tu bhi bacchon jaise ro raha hai sabkuch theek toh hai na.... Mera dil ghabra Raha hai... Koi jawaab kyun nahi de raha... Bahu kyun ro rahi hai bta mujhe...


Tony Kamala ko koi jawaab nahi deta bas chup chap baitha rehta hai... Kamala kanta ki taraf dekhti hai jo ek ek kar sab kuch use bta deti hai jise sunn uski aankhon se aansun girne lagte hai... Ghar mai matam ka mahuol ban gya tha...



Sweety bhi kaafi der se apni mummy ki raah dekh rahi thi jab usse na raha gya toh woh chalkar mummy ko dekhne bahar aati hai magar Nandu ke ghar mai bheed dekh daudte hue waha phunchti hai uski saansein bhi upar neeche ho rahi thi... Use dekh sab aur rone lagte hai Kanta use gale laga kar rone lagti hai... Sweety ka dil ghabra Raha sabko rote dekh uska bhi rona nikal aata hai...


Kanta Rote rote use sab bta deti hai... Nandu ka sun... Sweety ghabra jaati hai aur shock lagne ke karan behosh ho jaati hai... Sab log use sambhalte hai Kamala sweety ko check kar use hosh mai laati hai aur paani pilati hai... Sweety hosh mai aati hi Nanduu ka naam lete hue rone lagti hai... Wanhi Tony chup chaap sab dekh raha tha usne iss beech kuch nahi bola tha...


Kamala... ( Rote hue ) chup ho jaa bacchi kuch nahi hua Humare Nandu ko mai abhi Police ko khabar karti hoon woh pta laga lenge Nandu kaha hai... Meri hi Matt maari gayi thi jo mai Nazim ke kehne par ***** jagah darshan karne chali gayi thi... Agar mai wanha nahi gayi hoti toh shayad yaha kuch na hua hota...



Aur sweety se lipat kar rone lagti h... Uski baat sun sab log shaant the siway ek jo yeh sun chonk jata hai...


Tony... Kya kaha tumne Aayi... ek baar fir se kehna...


Kamala... ( Rote hue )... Huhhhh matlb...


Tony... Ek baar fir se kehna Jo abhi tumne kaha...


Kamala... ( Tony ki baat sun chonk jati h use kuch samjh nahi aata ) agar mai nahi gayi hoti...


Tony...( Beech mai hi ) woh nahi usse pehle....


Kamla... ( Chonkte hue ) meri Matt maari gayi thi jo Nazim ke kehne par... Huhhhhh...


Tony... Yahi ruk jao... Kantaaaaaaa Nazim kha hai kya Ghar par hai...



Kanta... ( Chonkte hue ) nahi woh kal raat se nahi aaya... Lekin tum kehna kya chahte ho kahi tummmmm...


Tony kuch nahi kehta aur ghar se bahar nikalne ko hota hai... Tabhi Ek aadmi bhaagta hua uske pass aata hai...


...Tonyyy....


Tony... Huhhh Roshan Tum yaha... aur iss tarah bhaag kyun rHe ho...


Roshan... ( Hafte hue ) hhhhh wohhhh ****** Aspataal se phone aaya tha... Woh keh rahe the ki 'YASHODA AB NAHI RAHI'



( I know guys update late hai sorry for that... Time nahi mill paya election aur ganpati mai promise bhi kaafi break hue... Kuch kar nahi sake aage badhna chahiye ab se update apne time par aayenge... Sun/wed morning / night... Fix nahi hai... )

( I also know kuch logo ko story line se shikayat hai Tone kaafi emotional hai... But koshish kar raha hoon... Bas 2 update aur emotional thel lo baaki Romance / fantasy / action chaalu ho jayega....)


keep supporting....


keep loving...

Ab kya hoga nandu ka ... sach to btana hi padega tony ko ki kya hua tha kal raat me ..aur nazim ne kya Kiya yashoda ke sath ....

but Bhai ek baat samjh nhi aayi jab nandu raat me apni aai ke Ghar gya tha help ke liye tab kisi ne gate nhi khola ...
kya nazim ne unko kuch khane me khila Diya tha jisse kisi ko kuch sunaayi nhi diya ...jab nandu help ke liye chilla rha tha

 

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( KALYUG... Part... 14 )( Life is Unfair... ) Late Night... 2:10 AM...Location... ****** Hospital......Sir aap ise Apne Hospital mein kyun laye hai... Isse kisi Sarkari Hospital me daal dete wanha bhi Inka ilaaj ho hi jata... Aapne itni takleef kyun ki...Aadmi.... Sssshhhhhh... Tumse jitna kaha jaye utna Karo... Jayada faltu ke sawaal mat pucha Karo kitni baar samjhaun tumhe...Aurat... ( Darte hue ) Ji sir... maaf kijiyega...Aadmi... Huhhh... Jaldi se inhe ander le jao aur operation theatre taiyaar karo... Tab tak mujhe thoda kaam h... Dhyaan rahe inhe kuch nhi hona chahiye...Aurat darte darte dono ko ander le jati hai... Sabhi Doctor ko info kar treatment shuru kar diya jata hai... Wanhi aadmi kahi aur wanha se nikal jata hai... Jaha iss waqt ek Ladki ventilator par leti hui thi... Saas dheeme chal rahi thi... Shayad koma mai ho kehna muskill magar koi halchal nahi ho rahi thi uske shareer mai...Aadmi dheere dheere chalte hue uss ladki ke pass jata h... uske sir par hath ferte hue uske aankh se aasun ki bund uske chehre par girti hai... Magar ladki ke shareer me koi hulchul nahi hoti... Woh ladki ka haath pakad wanhi uske saath baith jata h...Aadmi... ( Aankhon se aansun ponchte hue ) Sukku... yaaddd hai tumne kaha thaaa tumhe apni maa tarah doctor banna hai... Aur maine tumse wada kiya tha tumhe bhut bada doctor banaunga... Ab tu aise bister par leti rahegi toh kaise mai tera sapna poora kar paunga... Rukmini pehle hi mujhe chodd kar jaa chuki hai... Agar tujhe kuchh ho gya toh... mai jee nahi paunga betiii... Uthh jaa Sukku tujhe apni maa ki tarah Doctor banna hai apna sapna poora karna hai uth Jaa Sukku... sukkkkuuuuu sunai de raha h tumhe... Mai tumse kuchh keh raha hunnnnn... Uthhhh jaaaa.... Sukkkkuuuuu....Aadmi rote rote chinkhne lagta hai... Jiski awaaz ki wazah se baju mai nusre jo Ladki ke monitoring ke liye rakhi gayi thi woh kamre mai aake aadmi ko shant karne lagti hai... Aadmi bhi sthiti ko dekhte hue shant ho jata hai woh apni beti se hath chuda ek baar uski taraf dekhta hai toh uski aankhein aansun bahane lagti hai...Ladki khuli aankhon se use hi dekh rahi thi uski aankhein bhi nam ho gayi thi... apne pita ko iss halat mai dekh Puri himmat jator woh unse kuch kehna chahti hai magr uska shareer uska saath nahi de raha tha... Woh poori koshish krti hai tabhi uske seene Mai tez dard uthata hai aur woh aankhein band kar jor jor Se saansein lene lagti hai...Aadmi yeh dekh ghabra jata Turant Doctor ko phone ghuma use yaha aane ka aadesh deta hai... Nurse bhi jaldi se Ladki ko check karne lagti hai... Tabhi thodi hi der mai ek doctor ki team aati h aur ladki ko apne saath lekar OT me chali jaati hai.... Aadmi bhi unke peeche peeche bhagte hue ander jaa phunchta hai... Lekin baaki Doctor's use Bahar rukne ka bol apna kaam karne lagte hai...Woh bhi OT ke bahar baith jata h... Ghabrahat se uska shareer kaamp raha tha aane waale kuch samay uske liye nikalna bhut muskill ho raha tha...Kaafi Time beet jata h... Aadmi usi awastha mai OT ke bahar baith hi tha tabhi Ek Nusre unke samne aati h... Aadmi ko soch mai gum woh kehti hai...Nurse... ( Darte hue ) sorry Sir humne poori koshish ki but she's 'NO MORE'...Early Morning... Time... 6:15 AM...Location... Basti... TONY House......Yashoda... ...Yashoda... Aankh khuli nahi kya teri jaldi se aaja maine nal par no. Laga diya hai jaldi kar nahi toh paani chala jayega... Yashoda... So rahi kya abhi tak... Huhhhh yehhhh sabbb Kyaaaaaaaa hai... Yashodaaaaaaa....Kanta kab se Yashoda ko paani bharne ke liye awaaz de rahi thi... Aaj uski bhi neend pta nhi kyun deri se khuli thi woh jaldi se uthkar paani ka ghada uthati hai... Nal par phunch kar dekhti hai toh Yashoda bhi ab tak nahi aayi thi woh apne aage waali aurat ko apna ghada dekar Yashoda ko dekhne aati hai... Magar kaafi der tak aawaz dene ke baad Yashoda nahi uthati use lagta hai kahi woh bhi meri tarah so toh nahi gayi... Isliye ghar ke gate par jaise hi haath rakhti hai gate khul jata hai... Ander ka nazara dekh uski aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi thi...Ander aagan mai poora saaman bikhara pada hai... dekh kar use anhoni ka ehsaas ho jata hai... Tabhi woh Yashoda ko awaaz deti hai lekin koi uski aawaz nahi sunta tabhi uska dyaan angan mai pade dande par jata hai jisper khoon laga hua tha... Use dekh uske haath pair fool gye the tabhi thoda aage khoon ka jamabda laga hua tha pehle usne usper dhyaan nhi diya magar use dekhte hi uski cheenkh nikal gayi...Kanta... ( Rote hue ) Yashodaaaaa.... Nanduuuuu.... Betaaaa.... Yashodaaaa....Kanta ander maujud har ek jagah ko check karti hai magar use Yashoda na hi Nanduu... Milta h... Woh wanhi baith kar Rone lagti hai... Uske Rone ki awaaz sun pados ki ek mahila bhi ander ghuss aati hai... Aur nazara dekh use kuch samjh nahi aata toh woh bahar doud kar baaki sab ko madad ke liye bulati hai... baaki mahilaye bhi ander ka nazara dekh hairaan ho jaati hai... Kuch aage jaake Kanta ko sambhalne ki koshish karti hai jo kabse Roye jaa rahi thi...Ab sabko lag raha tha kanta ko Shayad pta ho kya huaa hai yaha... magar sabka anumaan galat tha... Kanta Roye jaa rahi sab chup karane ki koshish kar rahe the magar woh Nandu... Mera Nandu keh roye jaa rahi thi... Sabko laga shayad Nandu ke saath kuch hua hai jo kanta ko pata h... Uski madat ke liye pehle uska chup hona zaroori tha...Tabhi kisi ki awaaz sun Sab palat kar uss aur dekhte hain jiske dekh kuch mahilayen ka paseena nikal aaya tha... Wanhi Kanta ka rona bhi achanak se band ho jata h... Aane waale Pal ke baare mai soch uske roongte khade ho gye the... Saath me uska Rona bhi siskiyon me badal gya tha......kya ho raha hai yaha... Aur tum sabne itni bheed kyun laga rakhi hai... Huhhhh... Kya hua kanta sab theek hai na kisi ne kuch kiya h...Tony ki awaaz sun kanta ko samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya jawaab de aur kaise... Qki abhi use bhi nahi pta yaha kya hua hai... Lekin jo kuch bhi yaha hua h woh bhut hi khofnaak hai... Kantako kuch na kehte dekh Tony uske paas jata hai... Uske saath jo mahilayen baithi thi woh uth khadi ho jaati hain... Tony ek nazar kanta ko dekhta h fir sabko...Tony... ( Hairaan hote hue ) Kya hua btao bhi itni bheed kyun lga rakhi hai tum sabne mere ghar mai... Kanta tu ro kyun rahi hai sab theek hai na...Magar koi use jawaab nahi deta tabhi woh sab log ko gaur se dekhta h... Sabhi mahilayen usse nazrein chura Rahi thi... Yashodaaaaaa... Nanduuuuu...Tony ke man main do naam aate ho use dikhai nahi de rahe the... Dono ko awaaz deta h magar woh dono jawaab dene ke liye wanha the hi nahi... Uska dil ghabrane lagta hai woh idher udher dono ko dhoodne ki nakaam koshish karta h... Tabhi uski nazar angaan mai pade dande par padti hai... Uski aankhein aansun use gusse mai laal ho jaati h... Paas mai hi jama khoon dekh uske dare ke maare halat kharab ho gayi thi...Woh paas jakar dekhta hai khoon taza hi tha matlb abhi ka hoga... Woh dono hath lagakar use Chuta hai uske haath laal ho jate hai... Woh palt kar Kanta ke pass phunchta hai... Gussa uski aankhein mai aansun ban kar beh raha tha... Use samjhna tha aakhir yaha hua kya hai... Kanta ko rote dekh woh Gusse me usse puchta h...Tony... Kyaaaa huaaa hai yaha.... Yashoda kaha hai... Aur mera beta Nandu... Kya woh tumhare saath hai....Kanta ko samjh nahi aata woh kya jawab de... Tony ko woh rote hue bass Na mai sir hila deti hai...Tony... Kantaaaaaaa main tumse kuch puch raha hoon... Kya hua hai yaha... Yashoda aur Nandu kaha h...Kanta... ( Rote hue himmat jutate hue ) mujheee nahi pata... Main jab yaha thodi der pehle aayi toh gate khula hua tha... Yashoda Nandu ko awaaz di magar unhone koi jawaab nahi diya Yaha adner aaker kamre ko dekh mujhe mujhe laga ki Yashoda yaa Nandu ko kuch hua h...Kanta ke muhh se Yashoda aur Nandu ko kuch hua h sun... Uski aankhein se baadh aa jati h woh wanhi neeche baith jata h... Gusse se uski mutthi kass gayi jise woh pass ki dewaar par de maarta h... Tabhi Kamala ghar ke ander daakhil hoti hai... Woh bhi bheed ko dekh ghabra jaati hai... Ander phunch Tony aur Kanta ko dekh woh ghabrate hue unke pass phunchti hai...Kamala... ( Ghabrate hue ) kyaaa hua bahu tu ro kyun rahi hai... Aur Tony tujhe kya hua tu bhi bacchon jaise ro raha hai sabkuch theek toh hai na.... Mera dil ghabra Raha hai... Koi jawaab kyun nahi de raha... Bahu kyun ro rahi hai bta mujhe...Tony Kamala ko koi jawaab nahi deta bas chup chap baitha rehta hai... Kamala kanta ki taraf dekhti hai jo ek ek kar sab kuch use bta deti hai jise sunn uski aankhon se aansun girne lagte hai... Ghar mai matam ka mahuol ban gya tha...Sweety bhi kaafi der se apni mummy ki raah dekh rahi thi jab usse na raha gya toh woh chalkar mummy ko dekhne bahar aati hai magar Nandu ke ghar mai bheed dekh daudte hue waha phunchti hai uski saansein bhi upar neeche ho rahi thi... Use dekh sab aur rone lagte hai Kanta use gale laga kar rone lagti hai... Sweety ka dil ghabra Raha sabko rote dekh uska bhi rona nikal aata hai...Kanta Rote rote use sab bta deti hai... Nandu ka sun... Sweety ghabra jaati hai aur shock lagne ke karan behosh ho jaati hai... Sab log use sambhalte hai Kamala sweety ko check kar use hosh mai laati hai aur paani pilati hai... Sweety hosh mai aati hi Nanduu ka naam lete hue rone lagti hai... Wanhi Tony chup chaap sab dekh raha tha usne iss beech kuch nahi bola tha...Kamala... ( Rote hue ) chup ho jaa bacchi kuch nahi hua Humare Nandu ko mai abhi Police ko khabar karti hoon woh pta laga lenge Nandu kaha hai... Meri hi Matt maari gayi thi jo mai Nazim ke kehne par ***** jagah darshan karne chali gayi thi... Agar mai wanha nahi gayi hoti toh shayad yaha kuch na hua hota...Aur sweety se lipat kar rone lagti h... Uski baat sun sab log shaant the siway ek jo yeh sun chonk jata hai...Tony... Kya kaha tumne Aayi... ek baar fir se kehna...Kamala... ( Rote hue )... Huhhhh matlb...Tony... Ek baar fir se kehna Jo abhi tumne kaha...Kamala... ( Tony ki baat sun chonk jati h use kuch samjh nahi aata ) agar mai nahi gayi hoti...Tony...( Beech mai hi ) woh nahi usse pehle....Kamla... ( Chonkte hue ) meri Matt maari gayi thi jo Nazim ke kehne par... Huhhhhh...Tony... Yahi ruk jao... Kantaaaaaaa Nazim kha hai kya Ghar par hai...Kanta... ( Chonkte hue ) nahi woh kal raat se nahi aaya... Lekin tum kehna kya chahte ho kahi tummmmm...Tony kuch nahi kehta aur ghar se bahar nikalne ko hota hai... Tabhi Ek aadmi bhaagta hua uske pass aata hai......Tonyyy....Tony... Huhhh Roshan Tum yaha... aur iss tarah bhaag kyun rHe ho...Roshan... ( Hafte hue ) hhhhh wohhhh ****** Aspataal se phone aaya tha... Woh keh rahe the ki 'YASHODA AB NAHI RAHI'( I know guys update late hai sorry for that... Time nahi mill paya election aur ganpati mai promise bhi kaafi break hue... Kuch kar nahi sake aage badhna chahiye ab se update apne time par aayenge... Sun/wed morning / night... Fix nahi hai... )( I also know kuch logo ko story line se shikayat hai Tone kaafi emotional hai... But koshish kar raha hoon... Bas 2 update aur emotional thel lo baaki Romance / fantasy / action chaalu ho jayega....)keep supporting....keep loving...

Nice update

 

[Shahrukh]

Nice and fantastic update bhai keep posting

 

[urc4me]

Romanchak. Tony ko saaj aa gaya ki yeh kartute Nazim ki hai. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

 

[Naik]

( KALYUG... Part... 14 )


( Life is Unfair... )





Late Night... 2:10 AM...


Location... ****** Hospital...


...Sir aap ise Apne Hospital mein kyun laye hai... Isse kisi Sarkari Hospital me daal dete wanha bhi Inka ilaaj ho hi jata... Aapne itni takleef kyun ki...


Aadmi.... Sssshhhhhh... Tumse jitna kaha jaye utna Karo... Jayada faltu ke sawaal mat pucha Karo kitni baar samjhaun tumhe...


Aurat... ( Darte hue ) Ji sir... maaf kijiyega...


Aadmi... Huhhh... Jaldi se inhe ander le jao aur operation theatre taiyaar karo... Tab tak mujhe thoda kaam h... Dhyaan rahe inhe kuch nhi hona chahiye...


Aurat darte darte dono ko ander le jati hai... Sabhi Doctor ko info kar treatment shuru kar diya jata hai... Wanhi aadmi kahi aur wanha se nikal jata hai... Jaha iss waqt ek Ladki ventilator par leti hui thi... Saas dheeme chal rahi thi... Shayad koma mai ho kehna muskill magar koi halchal nahi ho rahi thi uske shareer mai...


Aadmi dheere dheere chalte hue uss ladki ke pass jata h... uske sir par hath ferte hue uske aankh se aasun ki bund uske chehre par girti hai... Magar ladki ke shareer me koi hulchul nahi hoti... Woh ladki ka haath pakad wanhi uske saath baith jata h...



Aadmi... ( Aankhon se aansun ponchte hue ) Sukku... yaaddd hai tumne kaha thaaa tumhe apni maa tarah doctor banna hai... Aur maine tumse wada kiya tha tumhe bhut bada doctor banaunga... Ab tu aise bister par leti rahegi toh kaise mai tera sapna poora kar paunga... Rukmini pehle hi mujhe chodd kar jaa chuki hai... Agar tujhe kuchh ho gya toh... mai jee nahi paunga betiii... Uthh jaa Sukku tujhe apni maa ki tarah Doctor banna hai apna sapna poora karna hai uth Jaa Sukku... sukkkkuuuuu sunai de raha h tumhe... Mai tumse kuchh keh raha hunnnnn... Uthhhh jaaaa.... Sukkkkuuuuu....


Aadmi rote rote chinkhne lagta hai... Jiski awaaz ki wazah se baju mai nusre jo Ladki ke monitoring ke liye rakhi gayi thi woh kamre mai aake aadmi ko shant karne lagti hai... Aadmi bhi sthiti ko dekhte hue shant ho jata hai woh apni beti se hath chuda ek baar uski taraf dekhta hai toh uski aankhein aansun bahane lagti hai...


Ladki khuli aankhon se use hi dekh rahi thi uski aankhein bhi nam ho gayi thi... apne pita ko iss halat mai dekh Puri himmat jator woh unse kuch kehna chahti hai magr uska shareer uska saath nahi de raha tha... Woh poori koshish krti hai tabhi uske seene Mai tez dard uthata hai aur woh aankhein band kar jor jor Se saansein lene lagti hai...


Aadmi yeh dekh ghabra jata Turant Doctor ko phone ghuma use yaha aane ka aadesh deta hai... Nurse bhi jaldi se Ladki ko check karne lagti hai... Tabhi thodi hi der mai ek doctor ki team aati h aur ladki ko apne saath lekar OT me chali jaati hai.... Aadmi bhi unke peeche peeche bhagte hue ander jaa phunchta hai... Lekin baaki Doctor's use Bahar rukne ka bol apna kaam karne lagte hai...


Woh bhi OT ke bahar baith jata h... Ghabrahat se uska shareer kaamp raha tha aane waale kuch samay uske liye nikalna bhut muskill ho raha tha...


Kaafi Time beet jata h... Aadmi usi awastha mai OT ke bahar baith hi tha tabhi Ek Nusre unke samne aati h... Aadmi ko soch mai gum woh kehti hai...



Nurse... ( Darte hue ) sorry Sir humne poori koshish ki but she's 'NO MORE'...


Early Morning... Time... 6:15 AM...


Location... Basti... TONY House...


...Yashoda... ...Yashoda... Aankh khuli nahi kya teri jaldi se aaja maine nal par no. Laga diya hai jaldi kar nahi toh paani chala jayega... Yashoda... So rahi kya abhi tak... Huhhhh yehhhh sabbb Kyaaaaaaaa hai... Yashodaaaaaaa....


Kanta kab se Yashoda ko paani bharne ke liye awaaz de rahi thi... Aaj uski bhi neend pta nhi kyun deri se khuli thi woh jaldi se uthkar paani ka ghada uthati hai... Nal par phunch kar dekhti hai toh Yashoda bhi ab tak nahi aayi thi woh apne aage waali aurat ko apna ghada dekar Yashoda ko dekhne aati hai... Magar kaafi der tak aawaz dene ke baad Yashoda nahi uthati use lagta hai kahi woh bhi meri tarah so toh nahi gayi... Isliye ghar ke gate par jaise hi haath rakhti hai gate khul jata hai... Ander ka nazara dekh uski aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi thi...


Ander aagan mai poora saaman bikhara pada hai... dekh kar use anhoni ka ehsaas ho jata hai... Tabhi woh Yashoda ko awaaz deti hai lekin koi uski aawaz nahi sunta tabhi uska dyaan angan mai pade dande par jata hai jisper khoon laga hua tha... Use dekh uske haath pair fool gye the tabhi thoda aage khoon ka jamabda laga hua tha pehle usne usper dhyaan nhi diya magar use dekhte hi uski cheenkh nikal gayi...


Kanta... ( Rote hue ) Yashodaaaaa.... Nanduuuuu.... Betaaaa.... Yashodaaaa....


Kanta ander maujud har ek jagah ko check karti hai magar use Yashoda na hi Nanduu... Milta h... Woh wanhi baith kar Rone lagti hai... Uske Rone ki awaaz sun pados ki ek mahila bhi ander ghuss aati hai... Aur nazara dekh use kuch samjh nahi aata toh woh bahar doud kar baaki sab ko madad ke liye bulati hai... baaki mahilaye bhi ander ka nazara dekh hairaan ho jaati hai... Kuch aage jaake Kanta ko sambhalne ki koshish karti hai jo kabse Roye jaa rahi thi...



Ab sabko lag raha tha kanta ko Shayad pta ho kya huaa hai yaha... magar sabka anumaan galat tha... Kanta Roye jaa rahi sab chup karane ki koshish kar rahe the magar woh Nandu... Mera Nandu keh roye jaa rahi thi... Sabko laga shayad Nandu ke saath kuch hua hai jo kanta ko pata h... Uski madat ke liye pehle uska chup hona zaroori tha...


Tabhi kisi ki awaaz sun Sab palat kar uss aur dekhte hain jiske dekh kuch mahilayen ka paseena nikal aaya tha... Wanhi Kanta ka rona bhi achanak se band ho jata h... Aane waale Pal ke baare mai soch uske roongte khade ho gye the... Saath me uska Rona bhi siskiyon me badal gya tha...


...kya ho raha hai yaha... Aur tum sabne itni bheed kyun laga rakhi hai... Huhhhh... Kya hua kanta sab theek hai na kisi ne kuch kiya h...



Tony ki awaaz sun kanta ko samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya jawaab de aur kaise... Qki abhi use bhi nahi pta yaha kya hua hai... Lekin jo kuch bhi yaha hua h woh bhut hi khofnaak hai... Kantako kuch na kehte dekh Tony uske paas jata hai... Uske saath jo mahilayen baithi thi woh uth khadi ho jaati hain... Tony ek nazar kanta ko dekhta h fir sabko...


Tony... ( Hairaan hote hue ) Kya hua btao bhi itni bheed kyun lga rakhi hai tum sabne mere ghar mai... Kanta tu ro kyun rahi hai sab theek hai na...


Magar koi use jawaab nahi deta tabhi woh sab log ko gaur se dekhta h... Sabhi mahilayen usse nazrein chura Rahi thi... Yashodaaaaaa... Nanduuuuu...

Tony ke man main do naam aate ho use dikhai nahi de rahe the... Dono ko awaaz deta h magar woh dono jawaab dene ke liye wanha the hi nahi... Uska dil ghabrane lagta hai woh idher udher dono ko dhoodne ki nakaam koshish karta h... Tabhi uski nazar angaan mai pade dande par padti hai... Uski aankhein aansun use gusse mai laal ho jaati h... Paas mai hi jama khoon dekh uske dare ke maare halat kharab ho gayi thi...



Woh paas jakar dekhta hai khoon taza hi tha matlb abhi ka hoga... Woh dono hath lagakar use Chuta hai uske haath laal ho jate hai... Woh palt kar Kanta ke pass phunchta hai... Gussa uski aankhein mai aansun ban kar beh raha tha... Use samjhna tha aakhir yaha hua kya hai... Kanta ko rote dekh woh Gusse me usse puchta h...


Tony... Kyaaaa huaaa hai yaha.... Yashoda kaha hai... Aur mera beta Nandu... Kya woh tumhare saath hai....


Kanta ko samjh nahi aata woh kya jawab de... Tony ko woh rote hue bass Na mai sir hila deti hai...


Tony... Kantaaaaaaa main tumse kuch puch raha hoon... Kya hua hai yaha... Yashoda aur Nandu kaha h...


Kanta... ( Rote hue himmat jutate hue ) mujheee nahi pata... Main jab yaha thodi der pehle aayi toh gate khula hua tha... Yashoda Nandu ko awaaz di magar unhone koi jawaab nahi diya Yaha adner aaker kamre ko dekh mujhe mujhe laga ki Yashoda yaa Nandu ko kuch hua h...



Kanta ke muhh se Yashoda aur Nandu ko kuch hua h sun... Uski aankhein se baadh aa jati h woh wanhi neeche baith jata h... Gusse se uski mutthi kass gayi jise woh pass ki dewaar par de maarta h... Tabhi Kamala ghar ke ander daakhil hoti hai... Woh bhi bheed ko dekh ghabra jaati hai... Ander phunch Tony aur Kanta ko dekh woh ghabrate hue unke pass phunchti hai...


Kamala... ( Ghabrate hue ) kyaaa hua bahu tu ro kyun rahi hai... Aur Tony tujhe kya hua tu bhi bacchon jaise ro raha hai sabkuch theek toh hai na.... Mera dil ghabra Raha hai... Koi jawaab kyun nahi de raha... Bahu kyun ro rahi hai bta mujhe...


Tony Kamala ko koi jawaab nahi deta bas chup chap baitha rehta hai... Kamala kanta ki taraf dekhti hai jo ek ek kar sab kuch use bta deti hai jise sunn uski aankhon se aansun girne lagte hai... Ghar mai matam ka mahuol ban gya tha...



Sweety bhi kaafi der se apni mummy ki raah dekh rahi thi jab usse na raha gya toh woh chalkar mummy ko dekhne bahar aati hai magar Nandu ke ghar mai bheed dekh daudte hue waha phunchti hai uski saansein bhi upar neeche ho rahi thi... Use dekh sab aur rone lagte hai Kanta use gale laga kar rone lagti hai... Sweety ka dil ghabra Raha sabko rote dekh uska bhi rona nikal aata hai...


Kanta Rote rote use sab bta deti hai... Nandu ka sun... Sweety ghabra jaati hai aur shock lagne ke karan behosh ho jaati hai... Sab log use sambhalte hai Kamala sweety ko check kar use hosh mai laati hai aur paani pilati hai... Sweety hosh mai aati hi Nanduu ka naam lete hue rone lagti hai... Wanhi Tony chup chaap sab dekh raha tha usne iss beech kuch nahi bola tha...


Kamala... ( Rote hue ) chup ho jaa bacchi kuch nahi hua Humare Nandu ko mai abhi Police ko khabar karti hoon woh pta laga lenge Nandu kaha hai... Meri hi Matt maari gayi thi jo mai Nazim ke kehne par ***** jagah darshan karne chali gayi thi... Agar mai wanha nahi gayi hoti toh shayad yaha kuch na hua hota...



Aur sweety se lipat kar rone lagti h... Uski baat sun sab log shaant the siway ek jo yeh sun chonk jata hai...


Tony... Kya kaha tumne Aayi... ek baar fir se kehna...


Kamala... ( Rote hue )... Huhhhh matlb...


Tony... Ek baar fir se kehna Jo abhi tumne kaha...


Kamala... ( Tony ki baat sun chonk jati h use kuch samjh nahi aata ) agar mai nahi gayi hoti...


Tony...( Beech mai hi ) woh nahi usse pehle....


Kamla... ( Chonkte hue ) meri Matt maari gayi thi jo Nazim ke kehne par... Huhhhhh...


Tony... Yahi ruk jao... Kantaaaaaaa Nazim kha hai kya Ghar par hai...



Kanta... ( Chonkte hue ) nahi woh kal raat se nahi aaya... Lekin tum kehna kya chahte ho kahi tummmmm...


Tony kuch nahi kehta aur ghar se bahar nikalne ko hota hai... Tabhi Ek aadmi bhaagta hua uske pass aata hai...


...Tonyyy....


Tony... Huhhh Roshan Tum yaha... aur iss tarah bhaag kyun rHe ho...


Roshan... ( Hafte hue ) hhhhh wohhhh ****** Aspataal se phone aaya tha... Woh keh rahe the ki 'YASHODA AB NAHI RAHI'



( I know guys update late hai sorry for that... Time nahi mill paya election aur ganpati mai promise bhi kaafi break hue... Kuch kar nahi sake aage badhna chahiye ab se update apne time par aayenge... Sun/wed morning / night... Fix nahi hai... )

( I also know kuch logo ko story line se shikayat hai Tone kaafi emotional hai... But koshish kar raha hoon... Bas 2 update aur emotional thel lo baaki Romance / fantasy / action chaalu ho jayega....)


keep supporting....


keep loving...

Tow Yashoda or nandu hospital pahoch gaye woh admi ki badolat
Lekin yeh Roshan kia bol raha ki hospital se phone aaya ki Yashoda nahi Rahi h ab sabse bada sawal ki hospital walo ko kaise pata ki Yashoda yaha rehti h or fir phone kisne dia yaha ka kia nandu ko hosh aa gaya jo usne apne baare m sab bataya ho ki woh kaha rehta h
Baherhal dekhte h ab tony kia kerta karega bhi nazim tow ab raha nahi or shayad Yashoda bhi
Or woh admi kon h or woh ladki kon h or use huwa tha jo iss halat m h
Baherhal dekhte h Sach kia h jo agle update m pata chalega jiska intijar rahega
Behtareen shaandar update bhai

 

[Iron Man]

Shandar update

 

[Dharmendra Kumar Patel]

जबरदस्त अपडेट

 

[montumass]

Superb story line _SMOOKER_X_ bhai

 

[Bhupinder Singh]

( KALYUG... Part... 14 )


( Life is Unfair... )





Late Night... 2:10 AM...


Location... ****** Hospital...


...Sir aap ise Apne Hospital mein kyun laye hai... Isse kisi Sarkari Hospital me daal dete wanha bhi Inka ilaaj ho hi jata... Aapne itni takleef kyun ki...


Aadmi.... Sssshhhhhh... Tumse jitna kaha jaye utna Karo... Jayada faltu ke sawaal mat pucha Karo kitni baar samjhaun tumhe...


Aurat... ( Darte hue ) Ji sir... maaf kijiyega...


Aadmi... Huhhh... Jaldi se inhe ander le jao aur operation theatre taiyaar karo... Tab tak mujhe thoda kaam h... Dhyaan rahe inhe kuch nhi hona chahiye...


Aurat darte darte dono ko ander le jati hai... Sabhi Doctor ko info kar treatment shuru kar diya jata hai... Wanhi aadmi kahi aur wanha se nikal jata hai... Jaha iss waqt ek Ladki ventilator par leti hui thi... Saas dheeme chal rahi thi... Shayad koma mai ho kehna muskill magar koi halchal nahi ho rahi thi uske shareer mai...


Aadmi dheere dheere chalte hue uss ladki ke pass jata h... uske sir par hath ferte hue uske aankh se aasun ki bund uske chehre par girti hai... Magar ladki ke shareer me koi hulchul nahi hoti... Woh ladki ka haath pakad wanhi uske saath baith jata h...



Aadmi... ( Aankhon se aansun ponchte hue ) Sukku... yaaddd hai tumne kaha thaaa tumhe apni maa tarah doctor banna hai... Aur maine tumse wada kiya tha tumhe bhut bada doctor banaunga... Ab tu aise bister par leti rahegi toh kaise mai tera sapna poora kar paunga... Rukmini pehle hi mujhe chodd kar jaa chuki hai... Agar tujhe kuchh ho gya toh... mai jee nahi paunga betiii... Uthh jaa Sukku tujhe apni maa ki tarah Doctor banna hai apna sapna poora karna hai uth Jaa Sukku... sukkkkuuuuu sunai de raha h tumhe... Mai tumse kuchh keh raha hunnnnn... Uthhhh jaaaa.... Sukkkkuuuuu....


Aadmi rote rote chinkhne lagta hai... Jiski awaaz ki wazah se baju mai nusre jo Ladki ke monitoring ke liye rakhi gayi thi woh kamre mai aake aadmi ko shant karne lagti hai... Aadmi bhi sthiti ko dekhte hue shant ho jata hai woh apni beti se hath chuda ek baar uski taraf dekhta hai toh uski aankhein aansun bahane lagti hai...


Ladki khuli aankhon se use hi dekh rahi thi uski aankhein bhi nam ho gayi thi... apne pita ko iss halat mai dekh Puri himmat jator woh unse kuch kehna chahti hai magr uska shareer uska saath nahi de raha tha... Woh poori koshish krti hai tabhi uske seene Mai tez dard uthata hai aur woh aankhein band kar jor jor Se saansein lene lagti hai...


Aadmi yeh dekh ghabra jata Turant Doctor ko phone ghuma use yaha aane ka aadesh deta hai... Nurse bhi jaldi se Ladki ko check karne lagti hai... Tabhi thodi hi der mai ek doctor ki team aati h aur ladki ko apne saath lekar OT me chali jaati hai.... Aadmi bhi unke peeche peeche bhagte hue ander jaa phunchta hai... Lekin baaki Doctor's use Bahar rukne ka bol apna kaam karne lagte hai...


Woh bhi OT ke bahar baith jata h... Ghabrahat se uska shareer kaamp raha tha aane waale kuch samay uske liye nikalna bhut muskill ho raha tha...


Kaafi Time beet jata h... Aadmi usi awastha mai OT ke bahar baith hi tha tabhi Ek Nusre unke samne aati h... Aadmi ko soch mai gum woh kehti hai...



Nurse... ( Darte hue ) sorry Sir humne poori koshish ki but she's 'NO MORE'...


Early Morning... Time... 6:15 AM...


Location... Basti... TONY House...


...Yashoda... ...Yashoda... Aankh khuli nahi kya teri jaldi se aaja maine nal par no. Laga diya hai jaldi kar nahi toh paani chala jayega... Yashoda... So rahi kya abhi tak... Huhhhh yehhhh sabbb Kyaaaaaaaa hai... Yashodaaaaaaa....


Kanta kab se Yashoda ko paani bharne ke liye awaaz de rahi thi... Aaj uski bhi neend pta nhi kyun deri se khuli thi woh jaldi se uthkar paani ka ghada uthati hai... Nal par phunch kar dekhti hai toh Yashoda bhi ab tak nahi aayi thi woh apne aage waali aurat ko apna ghada dekar Yashoda ko dekhne aati hai... Magar kaafi der tak aawaz dene ke baad Yashoda nahi uthati use lagta hai kahi woh bhi meri tarah so toh nahi gayi... Isliye ghar ke gate par jaise hi haath rakhti hai gate khul jata hai... Ander ka nazara dekh uski aankhein fati ki fati reh gayi thi...


Ander aagan mai poora saaman bikhara pada hai... dekh kar use anhoni ka ehsaas ho jata hai... Tabhi woh Yashoda ko awaaz deti hai lekin koi uski aawaz nahi sunta tabhi uska dyaan angan mai pade dande par jata hai jisper khoon laga hua tha... Use dekh uske haath pair fool gye the tabhi thoda aage khoon ka jamabda laga hua tha pehle usne usper dhyaan nhi diya magar use dekhte hi uski cheenkh nikal gayi...


Kanta... ( Rote hue ) Yashodaaaaa.... Nanduuuuu.... Betaaaa.... Yashodaaaa....


Kanta ander maujud har ek jagah ko check karti hai magar use Yashoda na hi Nanduu... Milta h... Woh wanhi baith kar Rone lagti hai... Uske Rone ki awaaz sun pados ki ek mahila bhi ander ghuss aati hai... Aur nazara dekh use kuch samjh nahi aata toh woh bahar doud kar baaki sab ko madad ke liye bulati hai... baaki mahilaye bhi ander ka nazara dekh hairaan ho jaati hai... Kuch aage jaake Kanta ko sambhalne ki koshish karti hai jo kabse Roye jaa rahi thi...



Ab sabko lag raha tha kanta ko Shayad pta ho kya huaa hai yaha... magar sabka anumaan galat tha... Kanta Roye jaa rahi sab chup karane ki koshish kar rahe the magar woh Nandu... Mera Nandu keh roye jaa rahi thi... Sabko laga shayad Nandu ke saath kuch hua hai jo kanta ko pata h... Uski madat ke liye pehle uska chup hona zaroori tha...


Tabhi kisi ki awaaz sun Sab palat kar uss aur dekhte hain jiske dekh kuch mahilayen ka paseena nikal aaya tha... Wanhi Kanta ka rona bhi achanak se band ho jata h... Aane waale Pal ke baare mai soch uske roongte khade ho gye the... Saath me uska Rona bhi siskiyon me badal gya tha...


...kya ho raha hai yaha... Aur tum sabne itni bheed kyun laga rakhi hai... Huhhhh... Kya hua kanta sab theek hai na kisi ne kuch kiya h...



Tony ki awaaz sun kanta ko samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya jawaab de aur kaise... Qki abhi use bhi nahi pta yaha kya hua hai... Lekin jo kuch bhi yaha hua h woh bhut hi khofnaak hai... Kantako kuch na kehte dekh Tony uske paas jata hai... Uske saath jo mahilayen baithi thi woh uth khadi ho jaati hain... Tony ek nazar kanta ko dekhta h fir sabko...


Tony... ( Hairaan hote hue ) Kya hua btao bhi itni bheed kyun lga rakhi hai tum sabne mere ghar mai... Kanta tu ro kyun rahi hai sab theek hai na...


Magar koi use jawaab nahi deta tabhi woh sab log ko gaur se dekhta h... Sabhi mahilayen usse nazrein chura Rahi thi... Yashodaaaaaa... Nanduuuuu...

Tony ke man main do naam aate ho use dikhai nahi de rahe the... Dono ko awaaz deta h magar woh dono jawaab dene ke liye wanha the hi nahi... Uska dil ghabrane lagta hai woh idher udher dono ko dhoodne ki nakaam koshish karta h... Tabhi uski nazar angaan mai pade dande par padti hai... Uski aankhein aansun use gusse mai laal ho jaati h... Paas mai hi jama khoon dekh uske dare ke maare halat kharab ho gayi thi...



Woh paas jakar dekhta hai khoon taza hi tha matlb abhi ka hoga... Woh dono hath lagakar use Chuta hai uske haath laal ho jate hai... Woh palt kar Kanta ke pass phunchta hai... Gussa uski aankhein mai aansun ban kar beh raha tha... Use samjhna tha aakhir yaha hua kya hai... Kanta ko rote dekh woh Gusse me usse puchta h...


Tony... Kyaaaa huaaa hai yaha.... Yashoda kaha hai... Aur mera beta Nandu... Kya woh tumhare saath hai....


Kanta ko samjh nahi aata woh kya jawab de... Tony ko woh rote hue bass Na mai sir hila deti hai...


Tony... Kantaaaaaaa main tumse kuch puch raha hoon... Kya hua hai yaha... Yashoda aur Nandu kaha h...


Kanta... ( Rote hue himmat jutate hue ) mujheee nahi pata... Main jab yaha thodi der pehle aayi toh gate khula hua tha... Yashoda Nandu ko awaaz di magar unhone koi jawaab nahi diya Yaha adner aaker kamre ko dekh mujhe mujhe laga ki Yashoda yaa Nandu ko kuch hua h...



Kanta ke muhh se Yashoda aur Nandu ko kuch hua h sun... Uski aankhein se baadh aa jati h woh wanhi neeche baith jata h... Gusse se uski mutthi kass gayi jise woh pass ki dewaar par de maarta h... Tabhi Kamala ghar ke ander daakhil hoti hai... Woh bhi bheed ko dekh ghabra jaati hai... Ander phunch Tony aur Kanta ko dekh woh ghabrate hue unke pass phunchti hai...


Kamala... ( Ghabrate hue ) kyaaa hua bahu tu ro kyun rahi hai... Aur Tony tujhe kya hua tu bhi bacchon jaise ro raha hai sabkuch theek toh hai na.... Mera dil ghabra Raha hai... Koi jawaab kyun nahi de raha... Bahu kyun ro rahi hai bta mujhe...


Tony Kamala ko koi jawaab nahi deta bas chup chap baitha rehta hai... Kamala kanta ki taraf dekhti hai jo ek ek kar sab kuch use bta deti hai jise sunn uski aankhon se aansun girne lagte hai... Ghar mai matam ka mahuol ban gya tha...



Sweety bhi kaafi der se apni mummy ki raah dekh rahi thi jab usse na raha gya toh woh chalkar mummy ko dekhne bahar aati hai magar Nandu ke ghar mai bheed dekh daudte hue waha phunchti hai uski saansein bhi upar neeche ho rahi thi... Use dekh sab aur rone lagte hai Kanta use gale laga kar rone lagti hai... Sweety ka dil ghabra Raha sabko rote dekh uska bhi rona nikal aata hai...


Kanta Rote rote use sab bta deti hai... Nandu ka sun... Sweety ghabra jaati hai aur shock lagne ke karan behosh ho jaati hai... Sab log use sambhalte hai Kamala sweety ko check kar use hosh mai laati hai aur paani pilati hai... Sweety hosh mai aati hi Nanduu ka naam lete hue rone lagti hai... Wanhi Tony chup chaap sab dekh raha tha usne iss beech kuch nahi bola tha...


Kamala... ( Rote hue ) chup ho jaa bacchi kuch nahi hua Humare Nandu ko mai abhi Police ko khabar karti hoon woh pta laga lenge Nandu kaha hai... Meri hi Matt maari gayi thi jo mai Nazim ke kehne par ***** jagah darshan karne chali gayi thi... Agar mai wanha nahi gayi hoti toh shayad yaha kuch na hua hota...



Aur sweety se lipat kar rone lagti h... Uski baat sun sab log shaant the siway ek jo yeh sun chonk jata hai...


Tony... Kya kaha tumne Aayi... ek baar fir se kehna...


Kamala... ( Rote hue )... Huhhhh matlb...


Tony... Ek baar fir se kehna Jo abhi tumne kaha...


Kamala... ( Tony ki baat sun chonk jati h use kuch samjh nahi aata ) agar mai nahi gayi hoti...


Tony...( Beech mai hi ) woh nahi usse pehle....


Kamla... ( Chonkte hue ) meri Matt maari gayi thi jo Nazim ke kehne par... Huhhhhh...


Tony... Yahi ruk jao... Kantaaaaaaa Nazim kha hai kya Ghar par hai...



Kanta... ( Chonkte hue ) nahi woh kal raat se nahi aaya... Lekin tum kehna kya chahte ho kahi tummmmm...


Tony kuch nahi kehta aur ghar se bahar nikalne ko hota hai... Tabhi Ek aadmi bhaagta hua uske pass aata hai...


...Tonyyy....


Tony... Huhhh Roshan Tum yaha... aur iss tarah bhaag kyun rHe ho...


Roshan... ( Hafte hue ) hhhhh wohhhh ****** Aspataal se phone aaya tha... Woh keh rahe the ki 'YASHODA AB NAHI RAHI'



( I know guys update late hai sorry for that... Time nahi mill paya election aur ganpati mai promise bhi kaafi break hue... Kuch kar nahi sake aage badhna chahiye ab se update apne time par aayenge... Sun/wed morning / night... Fix nahi hai... )

( I also know kuch logo ko story line se shikayat hai Tone kaafi emotional hai... But koshish kar raha hoon... Bas 2 update aur emotional thel lo baaki Romance / fantasy / action chaalu ho jayega....)


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At Home Time 11:23AM...



...Kamlaaaa.. ooo... Kamlaaa.... Dekh toh teri ladli ne kya gul khilaya hai... ek adedh umer ki aurat gate khat khtate hue Keh rahi hai jiske peeche peeche moholle ki kuch aurtain bhi jama ho chuki hain... Jo ghar ka kaam chod kar tamasha dekhne ke liye jama ho chuki thi... Aur aapas mai khusur pusur ki baatein bhi chal rahi thi...



Tabhi kamla gate kholti hai... kya hua Padma kyun chilla rahi hai... ( tabhi woh saamne khadi aurton ki itni saari bheed ko dekh chonk jaati hai... ) Tum sab yaha kyun jama hue ho kya hua...


( Tabhi uski nazar bheedh mai khadi apni beti par padti hai jise dekh use bhi jor ka dhakka lagta hai use samjh nahi aa raha tha ki kya chal raha hai... )



Kamla... Yashu.. yeh sab kya hai... Yeh baacha tumhare hath mai kiska hai aur yeh itni bheedh kyun ikkatha kar rahi hai...




Yashoda apni maa ko safayi de hi Rahi thi ki Tabhi Padma beech mai hi uski baat kaat deti hai...



Padma... Are usse kya puch rahi hai mujhse puch karmjali pta nahi kaha se muh kala karwa kar aayi hai... Chii tumhari ladki aisa kaam karti hai mujhe pata nahi tha maine toh ise sati Savitri samjh rakha tha... aacha hua Aaj hi mujhe iske baare mai pta chal gaya warna mere bete ki zindagi mai khud barbaad kar deti...



Kamla... ( hosh hi udh gaye the yeh sunkar ) Yeh sab kya keh rahi hai Padma aisa kuch nahi hai... Mai janti hun meri beti ko woh aisa kabhi nahi kar sakti... Hum ander chal kar baat karte hai iss baare mai... Aise sabke saamne tamasha toh na banao.....



Padma... Aahhh haa toh main jhooth bol rahi hun.... Aur yeh teri beti pta nahi kiska paap liye ghar aayi hai kuch jawab hai tumhare paas iss baat ka... Kiska baacha hai iski goad mai bata... Aur kya gharme kya baat karni hai.. yahi bol jawaab de hai tere paas jawaab kiska baccha hai yeh aakhir baaki sabko bhi toh pata chale teri beti kitni badi ran*..



Kamala aur kuch sun na saki aur ghar ke ander chali gayi... Abhi aage Padma kuch kehti usse pehle ek tezz awaaz goonjhti hai..

Basss bhut ho gaya tum sab ka kab se bole jaa rahe ho tum log... Ek baar meri beti se toh puch lo ki sacchai kya hai... Bina poori baat sune baat ka batangadh banaye jaa rahi ho... Mujhe poora bhorsha hai meri beti aisa koi kaam nahi kar sakti jaisa tum keh rahi ho... Agar tumhari baat sahi sabit hui toh main tumhare pairon mai girkar maafi maangunga aur nahi toh tumhe meri beti se sabke saamne maafi maangni hogi... ( Yeh awaaz kisi aur ki nahi balki yashoda ke pita Tej Singh ki hai )

Yashoda jo itni der se sab kuch sun rahi thi sehh nahi paati aur apne pita ke gale lag fut fut kar rone lagti hai... TejSingh bhi apni beti ko dulaar kar shant krne ki koshish kar raha tha...

Yashoda bhi apne pita ke seene se lag kuch had tak himmat bator leti hai... Aage poori kahani sabke saamne suna deti hai... Jise sun kar sabke muhh khule ke khule reh jate hai.. kisi se kuch bolte nahi ban raha tha... Sab jaha yashoda ko pehle galat nazron se dekh rahe wanhi ab hairan the jo usne kal raat se le kar ab tak kiya hai... Padma ke toh muhh par tamacha pada aisa haal ho gya tha... Usne kitna kuch nahi keh diya tha yashoda ko... uske charitr ke baare mai ab woh kis muh se maafi maange yehi soch rahi tabhi woh dekhti hai sabka dhyan yashoda par hai... Jo abhi bhi bacche ko hath me liye apne pita keseene se lag roye jaa rahi aur sabka dhyan bhi un dono ki taraf dekh woh chupke se ghar se nikal jati hai bina kisi ki nazron mai aaye...


Kuch der baad TejSingh jab Padma ko wanha nahi dekhta toh baaki sab bheed ko. Bhi bhaga deta hai... Tamasha laga rakha hai kya yaha jao sab apna apna kaam karo majak bana rakha hai sabne meri masoom bacchi ka jao sab... ( Yeh sabd sunte hi sab aise bhaage apne ghar ko jaise snaap dekh liya ho kuch hi der mai poora angan Khali ho jata hai aur TejSingh apni beti ko le ander chal padta hai.. )

Ander ghar mai ek chota sa kamra tha jisse lag kar charpai thi ek pankha latka hua jo ghoom raha hai... Ek choti si kitchen aur bathroom aur chota sa aangan yeh hai yashoda ka ghar jisme woh apne maa papa ke saath rehti hai... Dekhne se lag raha hai Jane kab se colour tak nahi hua ghar mai paint ki papdi har taraf se utar chuki hai... aur chath par seelen bhi dekh sakte hai jo raat mai shayad paani se pad gayi ho...


Kher TejSingh apni beti yashoda ko charpayi par bithata hai... Jo abhi tak aasun Baha rahi uski aankhein saaf darsha rahi aakhir uski kya galti thi jo yeh sab uske saath hua... Woh bas iss masoom ko bachana chaah rahi thi magar samaj ki yeh halat dekh use Rona aa raha tha... Jo Padma uske maa saman thi woh aaj usper itna bada iljaam sabke saamne daal di thi... Kyun kisliye sirf samaaj mai apna naam bada karne ke liye... Unhone ek baar mere baare mai nahi socha mai toh unki beti thi na... Yehi soch uske man mai rukne ka naam nahi le rahi thi...

Jaise taise woh khud ko shant karti hai apne pita ko tab se usko sambhal rahe the unko ek baar fir bahon Mai bhar chup ho jati hai... TejSingh bhi apni beti ko pyaar de rahethe woh samjh rahe the beti kya shithi se gujar rahi hogi... Woh bhi samaaj mai rehte hai har dusre din aise batain unhe sunne ko milti hai... Kisi ki ladki bhaag gayi kisi ki bahu ka dusre ke saath sambhadh yeh toh roz ki kahani thi iss samaaj ki jo aaj use apne ghar tak phunch gayi thi magar use apni beti par poora yakeen hi in sabme himmat de raha tha jisse usne datkar saamna kar samaaj ke muh par rakh kar tamacha diya hai... Jo shayad abhi ke liye kaafi tha sab kuch shant rakhne ke liye...


Kher kuch der mai Yashoda shant ho jati hai lekin shayad uski kismat mai aaj Rona likha hua tha.... TejSingh apni beti ko chup Kara apni dharampatni Kamla ko awaaz deta jo kaafi der se use dikh nahi Rahi thi jab se drama shuru hua usne kamla ko dekha nahi tha... Woh idher udher Kamla ko na Parker kitchen mai jaaker dekhta hai toh dhaak se neeche gir padta hai... Jane kitni hi takleefo mai TejSingh himaat se datkar lada tha kabhi uski aakhon ne uska saath nahi choda tha magar aaj uski aankhein bhi uska saath chod deti hai woh phut phut kar rone jagta hai...



Apne pita ki awaaz sun Yashoda bhi baache ko khaat par chod kar kitchen mai jaaker dekhti hai toh uska bhi haal apne pita se bura ho jata hai... Uski maa kitchen ke fash par giri hui hai jiske muh se jhaag nikal raha hai... Jo pata nahi kab se jhagda ke beech mein yaha punch kar yeh kadam utha li thi... Dono baap beti ek baar fir bahon mein rone lagte hai... Unki pukaar khokle samaaj tak nahi jaa rahi thi... Jo kuch der pehle uske ghar mai mojoud tha... Yashoda kuch der baad age badh maa ko check karti hai magar uski maa duniya chod jaa chuki thi...



Shayad Kamla samaaj ke samne beti ka iss tarah dutkaar dena Seh nahi paayi... Gereeb ghar mai ek ijjat hi hoti hai jiske sahare woh ab tak khadi hui thi... Paristhiti kaise bhi thi apni beti aur pati ke saath usne har cheez ka datkar saamna kiya... Magar shayad uska wishwas kamjor pad gaya ya yeh keh sakte hai ki jo samaaj uske saamne nahi peeth peeche auron par baat karta... wohi aaj usse uska saamna hua toh woh jhel nahi paayi... Kaise apni jaan se pyaari beti ko sablog gher kar doshi thera rahe the... Kaise ek maa apni baachi jise nazo se paala usne kaise yeh dard seh paati... Samaaj ke jhoothe iljaam ne usse uski saanse tak cheen li... Aur usko woh kadam uthane par majboor kar diya...



Time 2:39...



TejSingh apne kuch Doston ka sahara lekar apni patni jise woh behad pyaar karta uski Chita ke saamne khada hua hai... Uske hath mai jal rahi lakdi use kaise woh apni patni ko aag ke hawale kar de.. jise kabhi chot tak na phunchayi ho usne... Aaj usi kamla ki Chita ko aag dene ke samay uske haath kaamp rahe hai.. reh reh kar use kamla ki baatain yaad aa rahi ki... Jo kabhi majaak mai usse kha karti thi ki woh suhagan marna chahti thi... TejSingh ek nazar Kamla ke chehre par daalta hai use kamla ki maang mai sindoor haath mai chudi payal dekh khud ko rok nahi pata aur lakdi Chita par daal kar rone lagta hai... Jise uska dost sahara deta hai...



Kaafi samay tak sab khade kamla ki Chita ko jalte hue dekhte rehta hai... Fir ek ek kar sab TejSingh ko santavana ke aakhiri sabd keh apne apne ghar nikal jate hai... Magar ek shaks abhi wohi ruka hua tha woh usse kuch kehna chahta magar shayad yeh jagah sahi na lagi use... Ya sabke saamne kehne se Katra raha tha... Woh TejSingh ko sahara de kar khada karta hai..aur saath lekar ghar ki aur chal deta hai...



Ghar par auraton ka jumawada ek baar fir laga hua tha.. magar iss baar sabki aankhon Mai jhoothi sahanubhuti thi... Jo TejSingh samjh chuka aur kuch na kehte hua ghar ke ander phunch jata hai..wanha uski beti abhi tak roye jaa rahi thi... Kya hua uske saath ek hi din Mai sab kuch ujad gya... Har koi usse sambhalne ki koshish kar rahe the magar uska dukh koi nahi samjh sakta jispe bitti hai wohi jaanta hai...



Kher Kaafi samay tak jamawaada bana raha fir sab ek ek kar apne apne ghar ko chal diye... ab wanha sirf TejSingh aur uski beti reh gayi thi woh ek nazar apne beti ko dekhta aur dewaar se peeth tika kar baith jata uski beti bhi kuch shaant si ho gayi thi... Aankh se aansun sookh gye the woh khaat par baithi kal raat se abhi tak hui ghatanao ke baare mai soch rahi thi...


Kaafi samay tak kamre mai sannata pasra hua tha tabhi... Baccha ki rone ki awaaz se baap beti dono ka dhyan Tut jata hai... Yashoda jo soch mai gum thi bahar nikal kar baache ko ek Nazar dekhti hai toh use yaad aata hai subh se usne kuch bhi nahi khaya hai jabki paida hota hi sabse pehle use maa ka doodh ki zaroorat hoti hai... Yashoda use utha kar check karti hai toh uska badan bhi garam ho raha hota hai... Woh bhaag kar baache ko le kitchen mai jaati hai aur uske liye doodh garam karti hai... Jo woh saath mai layi thi magar itna sab ho gaya jisse uska dhyaan hi nahi gaya...



Garam doodh karne baad use paani mai daal thada kar rahi ho hai.. tabhi use yaad aata hai woh kaha par hai jiss jagah thodi der pehle uski maa use chod kar chali gayi thi... Yeh yaad aate hi uski aankhein bheeg jaati hai jisse tapak kar kuch boond doodh mai bhi gir rahi hoti hai magar uska dhyaan kahi aur hi tha... Tabhi baacha ek baar fir kilkaari maar rota hai jisse uska dhyaan tutta hai aur woh apne aansun ponch ek nazar use dekhti hai wahi baith katori aur chammach ki madat se use doodh pilati h...



Baacha bhi chup chaap dhoodh peene lagta lgta subh se bhookha hone ke karan woh doodh Peeta rehta hai kab woh so jata hai pta nahi rehta... Yashoda bhi jab dekhti hai baacha so Gaya hai toh use le wapas kamre mai dakhil hoti hai jaha uske pita use dekh rahe the.. jaise puchna chaah rahe the kya hua...


Yashoda kuch na keh bacche ko khaat par litane ko hoti hai ki tabhi uska dhyaan apne hath ki ungli par jata hai jise baache ne kass kar padke hue tha... Jise dekh Yashoda ke chehre par ek baar fir muskaan tair jaati hai woh ungli chudane ki koshish krti hai magar baacha use chodne ko raazi nahi hota... Woh ek tak use niharti hai fir ek kiss use maathe par kar ' natkhat nand kishore ' kehti hai... Jise bolte waqt uske chehre par muskaan thi...



TejSingh kaafi samay se dono ko dekh raha tha usko apni beti ko dekh thoda khush hua magar aage aane waale samay bhi uski chinta badhaye jaa raha tha... Ab uske paas na ghar hai na naukri na gehene sab kuch usne apni beti ko nurse banne ke liye daav par laga diya tha... Yaha tak ki apni patni ki antim kriya ke liye bhi usne paise apne dost se udhar liye the jo woh kaise dega soch raha tha... Qyuki usse yeh baat pata hai udhaar dene wala lene waale ke saath kaisa salook karta yeh sab usne mai samaaj rehkar dekha hai... Abhi woh sab chup hai qyuki woh khud bure nahi Banna chahte lekin aaj nahi toh kal woh firse yaha aayenge jaroor...


Yahi sab baatain soch hi Raha tha saath uski nazar beti par tiki hui thi... Jise thodi der pehle dekh lag raha tha iske shareer mai Jaan nahi hai... Abhi ek pyaari si muskan tair rahi hai.....



Aise hi baithe kaafi samay beet jata hai baacha jo so raha tha use fir se bhookh lag uthtati hai woh rone lagta hai.. jisse Yashoda ki aankh bhi khul jati hai jo uske sir par hath fer baithe baithe hi so gayi thi... Yashoda dekhti hai baacha fir se rone laga hai toh laad pyaar use chup karne ki koshish karti hai... Magar bacha jab chup nahi hota toh doad kar kitchen mai jaakr dekhti hai toh doodh khtam ho chuka tha... Woh turant wapas kamre mai aake apni chunni doodnti hai use daal chappal pehen bahar jaane ko hoti hai ya hi uske pita use aawaj dete hai...


TejSingh... Tum rehne do beti doodh mai le aata hun...



Shayad woh bina kahe samjh gaye the beti kya karne jaa rahi hai... Abhi mamla garam hi tha isliye woh apni beti ko ghar se bahar nahi jaane dena chahte the... Qki bhookhe bhediye aise hi moke ki talash mai rehte hai... Unhe fark nahi padta samne waala kya mehsoos kar raha hai... Bas akele paakar raat ke andhere mai apni hawas kisi na kisi se mita kar unhe chod dete hai... Fir dusre din dusre shikaar ki talaash mai baith jaate hai... Pta nahi kitni zindagi inlogo ne barbaad kar chuke honge... Magar koi inke khilaaf kuch nahi kar sakta ameeron ko kaha fark padta hai police tak khareed lete hai...


Kher itna keh TejSingh dukaan ki taraf chal deta hai.. aur doodh ka packet le ghar ko chal deta hai... Ghar mai ghuste samay ek baar woh apne ghar ko bahar se dekh kuch soch raha hota hai... Shayad yeh ghar bhi ab uska saath chod dega jald hi apne aapne waale zindagi ke baare mai soch raha tha tabhi use Yashoda ki awaaz sunayi deti hai jo kab se apne pita ka intezar kar rahi thi... Jab bahar nikal usne pita ko gate par khade sochte dekh toh usne hosh mai lane ke liye une jhakjhor diya... TejSingh bhi soch se bahar nikal jald hi ghar ke ander chal deta hai.. doodh ka packet bina kuch kahe Yashoda ko pakada deta hai... Jise Yashoda bhi bina kuch soche jaldi se lekar kitchen ki taraf bhaagti hai...



Yashoda ek baar fir doodh garam kar use thanda karke bacche ko pilane lagti hai.. thodi der jab baacha so jata hai toh use le kamre mai khaat par lita deti hai aur uske baaju mai khud let use niharti rehti hai... Ek haath sir par ferte kab uski neend lag jaati pata nahi chalta... Raat bhi bhut ho chuki poora din jo kuch bhi hua sab uske dimag mai chal raha tha... Wahi TejSingh bhi paas mai padi kursi par baith apni beti ko dekh raha tha... Fir aane waale kal kebaare mai ek baar fir sochte sochte kab uski neend laggayi pta hi nahi chala...


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Update was nice as always... Lekin update me kuch chaukaane wala nhi tha...

Padma wahi aurat hai jo asal jindagi me bhi kisi ki padosi hogi, iska bartaav chaukaane wala bilkul nhi tha... Lekin jiss tarah tejsingh ne ise jaane diya, usse nirasha jarur lagi... Shayad maahaul hi aisa tha ki wo baat ko aage badhana nhi chahte the..

Yasodha ki maa kamla... Maanshik roop se kaafi kamajor mahila thi, gareebi maanshikta majboot karti hai lekin kamla ke liye ye shayad ulta tha... Itni jaldi apne jeevan se haar maan lena, bevakoophee aur kaayarta ke siwa kuch nhi.

Use jiss waqt, apni beti ko sahara dena tha wo uss waqt apni beti ki ijjat neelaam hote huye dekh kar khud khushi karna sahi samjhi!!

Abhay-kun, jiss tarah tumne kroorta aur samaaj ke khokhale pan ko darshaya wo yakeenan taarif ke kaabil hai. Tumhe pata hai ki tum ek maa ki bebasi aur pita ki jimmedaaree ko darsha rahe ho, lekin kahi na kahi... Isme kuch nayapan nhi mujhe ab tak nazar nhi aaya!! Lekin ye bhi kehna galat hoga ki mujhe yasodha aur uske parivaar ke prati hamdardi nhi huyi hai.

Ummeed karungi aane wale kuch update me mujhe thoda jhatka jarur lage.

Tumne ab tak emotion se kahani ko bakhubi baandh rakha hai lekin suprise element is necessary to make this story a HIT!

Thanks for the update, abhay-kun

(Ps- uss chumtiya padma ko to 4-5 thappad raseedh kar lagane hi chahiye the aur ye gadhi kamla.. Pizzz me offf with her shizzz ... Phuck dizz society see ya in next update revo )