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Horror Saya. Dobara chudel ki prem kahani

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Saya ek chudel ki prem kahani. Part 1




 
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Me to har update par full review de hi rahi hu. Lagatar. Aage bhi aaenge hi. Thodi zalak MRD ki he to jyada maza aa raha he
AApne ekdam sahi kaha MRD ki tarah hi soft soft hain
 
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Dophar ho chali thi. Reeta aur kampar Mumbai se kafi aage nikal gae the. Sabhi atmao ko ek sath mukt karne ke lie Reeta gaya jana chahti thi.
Uske pas sari matkiya thi. Jinke alag alag aur kuchh me to bahot sari atma thi. Sabhi matkiyo par lal kapda bandha huaa tha. Sirf sharita jesi khatarnak pret ki matki par hi kala kapda aur lal kapda dono bandha gaya tha. Vo sabhi ko pichhli sheet par bandh diya gaya tha. Unki car ek bandh ke upar se gujar rahi thi.
2 line rode ke dono taraf gaherai aur pani tha. Agar excited hota to gadi bahot uchai se girti. Shukar tha ki us rode par kisi badi gadi ko gujarne ki ijajat nahi thi. Reeta bhi bahot thak gai thi. Usne apni ankhe band kar li. Aur thoda sustane ki kosis karne lagi. Par use achanak se nind aa gai. Mout hamesha mout ko khinchti he. Ye Reeta bhi janti he.
Sirf sharita ki atma hi gandi pret thi jo baki sab se jyada alag thi. Esi buri atmae kabhi mukti nahi pana chahti. Kyo ki vo janti he ki uska intjar narak( jahannum hell) karta he. Is lie esi atma jane ke wakt me bhag jati he. Unka shahara shetan banta he. Jo unhe kuchh shaktiya de deta he.
Badle me vo atma apne sath aur atmao ko jodti he. Is se shetan takatwar hone lagta he. Sharita ki atma bhi esi hi buri thi. Uska prabhav ki Reeta ko need lagi. Aur usne ek bura shapna dekha. Usne shapne me dekha ki veer uske karib aa raha he. Reeta aur Veer dono ke face par smaile he.
Dono hi ek dusre ko hug karte he. Veer ke hatho me ek red rosh tha. Hug kiye dono jese premi jode ho. Dono ke face par ek dusre ke lie pyar zalak raha tha. Dono ek dusre ko chhodna nahi chahte the.

Reeta ; (smaile ankhe band) I love you veer.

Veer ; (smaile ankhe band) love you too Reeta.

Dono ek dusre ko lip to lip kiss karne lage. Aur esi kiss jese duniya kho hi bhul gae ho.
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Atma man padhti he. Use uski chah dikhati he. Reeta ke man me kabhi premi vala pyar Veer ke lie jaga tha. Is lie use vahi kalpna Reeta ko shapne me dikhati he. Par achanak veer ko zatka lagta he. Us shapne me chupke se Reeta ne hi Veer ke pet me ek chaku bhi ghusa diya. Veer ab bhi Reeta ke baho me hi tha. Ankhe jese fat kar bahar aane vali ho.
Muh ekdam se khul gaya. Reeta ke shapne me Reeta ne hi apne bete ko jan se marne ki kosis ki. Reeta ek zatke se utthi.

Reeta ; (sock tez shanse) nahiiii..... .

Kampar ki hath steering par tha. Vo car ko bachane ki kosis kar raha tha. Car divainder tod kar damp se niche girne ki kosis kar rahi thi. Reeta ne turant hi hath steering par lagaya. Aur takat se moda. Car ekdam se rode par aai. Aur steering relif ho gaya.

Kampar ; (rahat ki shans) ha..... Achha huaa tumne bacha liya. Kab se bachne ki kosis kar raha hu. Kabhi car kisi dusre car me ghusne ki kosis karti to kabhi divainder tod car niche girne ki kosis karti he.

Reeta samaz pati. Us se pahele ek aur mushibat aa chuki thi. Police PCR ka siren. Jo unki car ke ekdam pichhe hi tha. Aur kampar ne galti bhi turant kar di. Usne accelerator daba diya. Car tez raftar se bhagi.

Reeta ; (sock gussa) bevkuf ho kya??? Tum bhaga kyo rahe ho.

Kampar ; (dar hafna) pata nahi police ko dekh kar muje kya ho jata he.

PCR ka siren bhi baj raha tha. Par kampar car rokne ki bajay bhagane laga tha. Tabhi ek goli Reeta ki car ko lagi. Jab firing huaa to kampar aur tez bhagane laga. Vo bechara to lootera hi tha. Police ko dekh kar use bhagne ka hi khayal aaya.

(5.1)

Nayna police station me apni team ko samza rahi thi.

Nayna ; tum uske residence ko nahi dhudh pa rahe ho. Akhir vo he kaha. Hakim ka ghar bhi khali he. Dono ek sath kese gayab ho sakte he.
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Police officer ; malum nahi mem. Vo aurat jo Kamini ko airport par mili thi. Kuchh din pahele use ek hotel me dekha tha. Uske sath koi ladka(Jeet) bhi tha. Par vo bhi ab nahi mil rahi.

Nayna ; to us ladke ko dhudho.

Tabhi nayna ke mobile par call aaya.

Khabri ; mem vo aurat mil gai.

Nayna ; kon aurat???

Khabri ; are vahi jo airport vali photo bheji thi aap ne. Vo kisi kale africai ke sath he. Vo Mumbai se bahar ki taraf ja rahi he.

Nayna turant hi vaha se nikal gai. Aur vo Reeta ke pichhe hi ja rahi thi.

(5.2)

Jab goli chali aur Reeta aur kampar ki car ko vo goli lagi. Tab Reeta chilla kar kampar ko car rokne ke lie bolti he.

Reeta ; (gussa chillana) tu kya kar raha he??? Vo police he. Tu gadi rok.

Par kampar ghabra raha tha. Kampar me itni bar pret atmao ko ghusaya nikala gaya is karan vo mastisk se kamjor ho gaya tha. Dimag me bahot hi alag alag khayal aa rahe the. Jis wajah se vo copret nahi kar pa raha tha.

Kampar ; (ghabrahat) nahi..... Vo log hame mar dalenge. Hamare pas hathiyar bhi nahi he.

Reeta ; bevkufi mat kar. Tu gadi rok.

Tab tak ek sath 2 goli unki car ko lagi.

Kampar ; (sock ghabrahat) dekha.... Aaj to gae ham.

Reeta bhi jor se chillai.

Reeta ; me kaheti hu tu car rok. Rok me kaheti hu.

Kampar ki car dhime hui to pichhe nayna bhi samaz gai ki car rukne vali he. Car ruki to nayna apni gipsy car ke aage laga deti he. Vo utar kar aai. Reeta aur nayna dono ne ek dusre ko dekha. Nayna bhi jaldi me akeli hi gipsy lekar nikal gai thi. Par vo bhi ek bahadur police officer thi. Par Nayna pahele kampar ki taraf gai. Usne door khola aur sidha kampar ki kolar pakad kar use bahar khincha.

Nayna ; bahar nikal sale.

Kampar ko bahar khinchte hi nayna ne use khinch kar chata mar diya.

Darsal kampar ka maind itna kamjor hone laga tha ki uske man me alag alag dar bethne laga tha. Un atmao ka asar uske dimag par huaa tha. Jigar aur sahas ki jagah dar apna mukam bana raha tha. Kampar ko mar khate dekh Reeta gusse me chikh padi.

Reeta ; officer ye aap kya kar rahi ho. Kabhi firing karti ho. To kabhi hath uttha rahi ho. Hamne kiya kya he.

Nayna ko lag raha tha ki veer khatre me he. Vo bhi sab Veer ko bachane ke lie hi kar rahi thi. Kamini se jude hue log jese gayab ho rahe the. Vese sayad Veer ko bhi gayab kiya gaya tha. Hakim, Bhatnagar, kapadiya, Rohan Deepika seema, jitne bhi log gayab hue the. Sab ka jimmedar vo Kamini ko hi man rahi thi. Zatka to use tab laga jab rato rat Kamini ka ghar hi gayab ho gaya.
Net aur kai madhyamo se use ye bhi pata lag chuka tha ki ye sara mamla bhut pishajo ka he. Vo police se hatke kam karne lagi thi. Sayad isi lie vo kanun ko apne hath me lekar ye sab kam kar rahi thi. Ek bar Veer ne nayna ko tane ke roop me hi ek salah di thi ki homework kar ke aao. Ab tak nayna bas vahi kar rahi thi. Nayna ne Reeta ki taraf dekha.

Nayna ; (smaile gussa) kaha he vo???

Reeta ; (gussa) kon???

Nayna ; jyada natak mat kar. Vahi jiske lie tu kam karti he.

Reeta ; (gussa) dekho me kisi ke lie nahi kam karti. Aur tum hamare khilaf ese koi bhi karwai nahi kar sakti. Varna me tum par hi case thok dungi.

Nayna ko bat samaz aa gai. Ke vo kanun hath me le rahi he. Anan fanan me usne galti hi kar di. Itni sikh ke bad bhi.

Nayna ; hmmm sabut to vese ham police walo ko peda karne me do minute lagte he. Kher gadi ki talashi do.

Reeta kuchh nahi boli. Bas gardan hilakar hishara karti he. Jese le lo. Nayna ne sabse pahele pichhli dikki ko dekha. Fir aage aai. Uski najar un matkiyo par gai.

Nayna ; un matkiyo me kya he???

Reeta ko zatka laga. Kahi vo un matkiyo ko kholne ki kosis na kare.

Reeta ; unme mare hue log he. Use mat chhedo.

Nayna ; (smaile) hmmm.... Kholo.

Reeta ; please use mat chhedo. Varna gadbad ho jaegi. Usme tumhare kam ka kuchh nahi he. Nayna ne khud pichhli sheet ka door khola to Reeta ne dusri taraf ka. Jese nayna matkiyo ko chhune gai. Reeta ne uska hath pakad liya.

Reeta ; (gussa) please meri bat mano. Use mat chhuo.

Par nayna nahi mani. Thoda khincha tani me uska hath us chandi ki matki ko tach huaa. Jisme Kamini ke balo ke sath kai sari atmae thi. Nayna ke dimag me jabardast uthal putthal hui. Use ek sath kai bheed ki aavaj sunai di. Jese koi bheed ek sath khadi ho. Apas me bate kar rahi ho. Jese kisi bade se hall me kai log jama hue ho. Fir achanak aavaj badli. Ek sath kai aurato ke rone ki aavaj aane lagi.
Jese kisi ke mar jane par log ro rahe ho. Nayna ekdam se ghabra gai. Aur usne apna hath turant pichhe khincha. Uska chahera pila pad gaya.

Nayna ; kya he isme???

Nayna ko shant dekh kar Reeta ko bhi rahat hui.

Reeta ; dekho isme mare hue vo log he jo bhatak chuke he. Inhe shanti nahi mili. Me inka pind dan karne inhe mukti dilane ki kosis kar rahi hu. Tum jo bhi jan na chahti ho. Me tumhe copret karungi. Par please inhe mat chhedo.

Nayna ; muje sab jan na he. Me bhi shath chalungi.

Reeta ; par hamare pas wakt kam he.

Nayna ne apna phone nikala aur call kiya.

Nanyna ; hello bhide. Tum jipsy ......damp se mangva lo. Kisi ko bhej dena. Me aa jaungi.

Bhide ; par aap???

Nayna ; tum meri fikar mat karo. Me aa jaungi.

Nayna ne call cut kiya. Reeta ne kampar ko pichhe bethne ko kaha. Drive Reeta karne lagi. Aur Nayna uske pas beth gai. Vo aage badhne lage. Nayna ne Veer ki photo nikali. Aur Reeta ko dikhai.

Nayna ; tum janti ho ise???

Reeta apne bete ke photo ko dekh kar mushkurai.

Reeta ; (smaile) beta he mera. Ab najane kab milungi is se.

Nayna sock hui. Par vo Reeta ke face par Veer ke lie mamta dekh sakti thi. Use bharosa bhi ho raha tha.

Nayna ; par ye kese ho sakta he. Uski maa to kamini he.

Reeta ; maa to uski vo bhi he. Usi ne to use pala he. Mene to bas janam hi diya he.

Nayan ko zatke pe zatke lagne lage.

Nayna ; me kuchh samzi nahi.


Aage chalte Reeta Nayna ko sari kahani batati gai. Rat ho gai. Aur nayna bhi unke safar ka hissa ban ne lagi.
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It's my first comment on your story, very nice story mujhe bahut pasand aayi lekin update bahut delay aata h so plz update Thora jaldi post Kiya Karo, after all awesome story :perfect:
 
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It's my first comment on your story, very nice story mujhe bahut pasand aayi lekin update bahut delay aata h so plz update Thora jaldi post Kiya Karo, after all awesome story :perfect:
Bahot bahot shukriya Krishna. Filhal to meri tabiyat kharab he. Me fir bhi likh rahi hu. Par agar aap chhupe na rahe aur comments aur likes dene ka vada kare to har bar jaldi karne ki kosis kar sakti hu
 
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Bahot bahot shukriya Krishna. Filhal to meri tabiyat kharab he. Me fir bhi likh rahi hu. Par agar aap chhupe na rahe aur comments aur likes dene ka vada kare to har bar jaldi karne ki kosis kar sakti hu
Ofcourse m bhi like comment jarur karunga or God se pray karunga ki aap jald se jald thik ho jayo taki hum story bharpur anand utha sake
 
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