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Bhai Main Koi Writer Nahi Ho Ye Story XP Par 2012 Main Issu Hoi Thi
Main Bas Ap Say Ye Story Share Karna Chahta Ho.
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Fantasy States War (Completed)
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Insano ki duniya se door ek doosri duniya jaha pe rehne wale log to aam insanoo ki tarah dikhte he lekin aam insano se kayi guna zyada takatwar aur jyada Powerfull.
Is duniya me 4 States he
1- Crystal State
2- State Of Hobbits
3- State Of Rainbow
4- Golden State
In sabhi State me Crystal State sabse Powerfull jiske wajah se baki ke 3 State Crystal State se bahut acche sambandh banaye rakhte he aur vaha ke Raja ki baat kabhi nhi kaatte
Crystal State- is duniya ki sabse Powerful aur sambridh State he yaha har koi khus he . Yaha ke Raja aur Rani apni State ka achi tarah se dhayan rakhte he . Is State me Jadoo ki kala me log bahut nipurn he baki Stato se .
State Of Hobbits- ye States Hobbits ki he . Inka Raja ek bakiyo ki tarah bauna he lekin bakiyo se toda bada he . Ye Hobbits Crystal State ki tarah Powerful nhi he lekin ye Hobbits bahut khatarnak he apne pe ajaye to kisi ko nhi chodte
State Of Rainbow- ye State apni khoobsurti ke liye jana jata he . Yaha ke Raja bahut aman parast he aur bina wajah koi ladai nhi krte
State Of Golden- naam se hi sab samjh gye hoge ki ye State gold ki he yaha ke logo ke liye sona lohe ki tarah he . Is State ke Raja ko apni daaulat ka bahut gamand he . Ye State bhi bahut Powerful he
Ye sabhi State me hazaro saal pehle ek contract sign hua tha jiske tahad ye bina wajah kabhi nhi ladege aur jisne bhi ye niyam thoda to baki State us par hamla kr dege
In 4 States ke alawa ek aur State he jiska naam he the Dark State . Dark State pe piishach, Vampire , witch aur adhamkhor janwar rehte he . Ye State pehle 4 State ke sath tho lekin inke Raja Agni ne ek baar baki States pe hamlla kar diya aur bina wjah bekasoor janta ko mara jiske wajah se inko baki State se alag kr diya gya
Aaj Crystal State me bahut khusi ka din he aaaj waaha ki Rani ne ek Bete ko janm diya he jiske wjah se sabhi log khusi mana rhe hote he . Is Ladke ke peeth pe ek Crystal( diamond) ka Nishan he jiske bare me pracheen kitabo mee likha he ki esa Ladka iswar ka avtaar hota he aur bahut hi khas Shaktiyo ka malik hota he
Raja apne raaj darbar me bethe hote he ki tabhi ek sainik aata he aur batata he ki Senapati ne hamare sath gaddari kar di aur Dark State ke malik Agni ne humpar hmla kar diya........
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Update 2
Raja jab ye khabar sunte he to turant yudh ke liye tayyar ho jate he aur sabhi sainiko ko ikhatta kar yudh ki tayyari suru kr dete he
Todi hi der me Raja aur sare sainik RAAKHA ki sena ka samna krte lekin Senapati ke dwara sare gupt raste aur hathiyaro ko kharab kr dene ki wajah se Raja ki sena harne lagti he
Raakha - suno Raja tum agar apni jaan bachana chahte ho to vo baccha mujhe de do jisko abhi tumhari Biwi ne janam diya he
Raja- hum Veer he tumhari madad krne wale is Senapati ki tarah kayar nhi jo peeth peeche warre kre aur rhi baat hmare Bete ki to vo tumhe nhi milne wala
Phir Raja apni sari Shaktiya ikahtta krke Raakha par humla kr dete he aur is waar se Raakha Dark State me chala jata he ye bandhan kawach itna Powerful tha ki Raakha isme pure 23 salo ke liye bandh jayega lekin apni sari Shaktiya istemal krne ko wajah se Raja bach nhi pate he
Raakha ke Dark forest me ked ho jata he lekin uski sena abhi bhi ajad rehti he aur poore Crystal State ko tabah krne lagti he
Jab Rani ko Raja ke marne ki khabar milti he to vo apne ek sipahi ko bula kar apne Bete ko us ko deti he aur kehti he
Rani- ab me ise tumhare hawale karti hoo aur tm ise insani duniya me chod aao ab ye wahi palega taki dusman isko kuch na kar paye aur ek din jb ye wapas ayega to Raakha se is State ka badla lega
Sipahi- lekin Rani sahiba jese jese iski Shaktiya ayegi ye vese hi iska pata dusmano ko chal jayega aur iski rakhsha kon karega
Rani bache ke sir par hath rakh kar kuch mantar padhti he
Rani- ab iski Shaktiya iske 22 saal pure hone par hi iske pass ayegi ab tum ise le jao
Inta bol kar Rani yudh ke liye chali jati he lekin vo bhi jyada der tak nhi teher pati he aur yudh me saheed ho jati he
Sipahi us Ladke ko nadi paar krake insani duniya ki aur le jarha hota he ki Dark State ke sipahi uspar humla kar dete he aur vo baccha nadi me gir jata he
Pura Crystal State tabah ho chuka hota he . Jo log bache the vo log gulam bana liye gye the aur baki ke State ko jab ye khabar pahuchti he to vo bhi apne States ko surrender kr dete he kyuki unke pass itni Power nhi hoti he ki vo Dark State ka samna kr sake
Raakha- kaha he vo baccha
Vampire- vo baccha mar gya
Raakha- hahha ab koi bhi mera samna nhi kar payega hahhaa
Insani duniya me ek Aourat nadi ke kinare bethi hui hoti he ki tabhi use ek tokri me baccha behta hua aata dikhayi deta he aur vo use utha ke khilane lagti . Usko gaod me leke kar vo apne mare hue Bete ko bhul kar use apna Beta maan leti he
Aourat1 - ye kiska Ladka utha layi ho devrani ji
Aourat2- Radhika Jiji ye Ladka behta hua nadi ke kinare mila us pahadi ke upar se aya he
Radhika- lekin Manjari ye itni uchi pahadi se girne se bacha kese
Tabhi vo log us bacche ko haweli me le jate he aur sabhi us bacche ke prati Manjari ka pyaar dekh kr use bache ko apna lete he
Sabhi log jab us Ladke ki peeth paar Nishan dekhte he to log samajh nhi pate ki itne chote Ladke ke sareer par ye Nishan kesa
Phir Bade Thakur us Crystal ke Nishan ko dekh kar us Ladke ka naam Almash rakh dete he
Character introduction ( every ones present age )
Almash- age 22 , fair tall 6.0’ blue with light green eyes muscular body and personality
Kafi sant swabhav jab tak koi chede na aur ek baar gussa ajaye to kisi ko chodena
Manjari(Maa) - 45 age , simple Lady
Radhika- Badi Thakurain (Tayi Ji)
Bade Thakur- Taya Ji
Aashi(Gudiya)-age 18 Taya Ji ki Beti
Rajesh Thakur-age 26 Taya Ji ka Beta.