Fantasy 'सुप्रीम' एक रहस्यमई सफर

[Raj_sharma]

iss story mei bahut mehnat lagne wali hai apan ko....
Kuch aur naye log introduce hue hai abhi.....
dekhte hai aage kya milta hai

Itna easy nahi hai bhai Story dimaak ghumayegi hi, Thank you very much for your valuable review and support bhai

 

[Luckyloda]

200th page tak ship सुप्रीम को ले जाने की बहुत बहुत बधाई.....


जिस तरह के संकट इस जहाज पर आ रहे हैं मालूम नहीं कब डूब जाये

 

[Raj_sharma]

Last mein kahi kuch smjh mein nhi aaye toh Raj_sharma sir isko duba ke Titanic wale ending de denge

Abhi toh bahut game khel rhe hai

Aisa nahi hoga madamApun ko auro ke jaisa samjha hai kya? Aap bas padho, or fir batana aapka sil khus ho jayega

 

[Raj_sharma]

Raj_sharma men apan bahut mehnat karke padh raha hai.....har character ke liye ek chehra imagine karo.....aur bhi bahut mehnat kar raha apan....
Pichli story ki tarah nahi karne ka......Wo jasoos hi mar jaata hai.....theek hai marna tha to koi baat nahi par wo chomu villain kab se laga hua tha inn sab mein.....bahut se sawal rah gaye the uss wale mein.....
isme waise ekdum se achanak mat karna

No way brother Pahli baat to ye, ki ye story alag hai, doosri ye ki uska end natural type hi karna tha jaisa real life me hota hai, Rahi baat is story ki, To Ye mera wada hai aapka full entertainment hogaYou will definitely like the story

 

[parkas]

For completed 100 pages on your story thread....

 

[Raj_sharma]

To aakhir kar wahe hone jaa raha hai jise Suyash karna nahi chahta tha Badalte mausam ki wajh se Suyash ko majbooran Ship ko us ISLAND ki tarf jahaj modne ke leye order dena pada
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Dekha jay to Suyash apni jagh bilkul sahi bhi tha Q ki us jagh do log Gaye jinse contact toot chuka hai unka or unko mara hua manne ke eleva bhi koi rasta nahi tha unke pass
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Lekin ek bat smj me nahi aayyii ye Amuu kaha gayab ho gaya achnak se kahe kisi ne Gayab to nahi kar dia Ammuuu ko ya such me Ammuuu rasta bhatakane ke leye aaya tha ship per ya Ammuu ko bheja gaya tha
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Jane Q Esa lagta hai abhi kuch or bhi Anhoonee hone ko hai lekin kya pata nahi
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Kafi dilchasp update raha aaj ka
Very Incredible update Raj_sharma bhai

Sahi kaha bhai, majburan waha per jana pad raha hai suyash ko, waise aapne sahi kaha, mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai ki kuch ro gadbad ghotala hogaAb wo kya? Or kaisa hoga? Ye jaanne ke liye sath sath bane rahiye, aur maja lijiye, is kahani ka,
Thank you very much for your amazing review and superb support DEVIL MAXIMUM

 

[Raj_sharma]

Plan to avasyahi honge bhai, ab kitne criminal hai, wo bhi nahi pata unko, na hi koi naam aur photo
Thanks for your valuable review and support bhai

10 criminal hai......kya chomu Interpol wale hai men ye.....
photo wagera kuch to do.....
Bacche honge to criminal nahi ho sakte......ye sab ideas sahi hai.....par inke hisab se criminals ke pass bhi kuch plans hone mangte hai...

 

[sunoanuj]

२०० पेज पूरे होने की बहुत बहुत शुभकामनाएँ आपको मित्र !

 

[Raj_sharma]

Bahut hi shandar update he Raj_sharma Bhai,

Emu bhi pan kaam pura karke rafu chakkar ho gaya...........

Tufaan ka to bas bahan lag raha he.......................

Koi na koi baat jarur he us taapu me..........jo chaah kar bhi usase dur na jaa paa raha he supreme..........

Aakhirkar suyash ko supreme ko taapu ki aur modna hi pada.............

Ab shuru hoga asli khel..........

Keep rocking Bro

Bilkul bhai, asli khel to abb suru hoga, suyash ne ship ko to ghuma diya hai, per kya wo sahi salamat pahuch payenge? Emu bas sabko chutiya banane aaya tha Thank you very much for your wonderful review and support bhai

 

[Raj_sharma]

yahi ladki Kristi ko fasane wali hai wo shampoo ki smell aur jo kuch bhi tha unn sab ki wajah se

Ye kristi uski watt bhi lagayegi, dekhte jaao Thanks for your valuable review and support bhai