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[Dungeon Master]

Ju kidhar gayab rahte ho

Burr pradesh ka vaasi hu

 

[Rita Kumar]

Nazar se Nazar ab milayi gayi hai,
Mai peeta nahi tha pilayi gayi hai....
Rita Kumar ​

kisne

 

[Dungeon Master]

Dungu kiske saath hibernation me tha ju ​

Lamua ke sath

 

[Dungeon Master]

Kaise ho akuma bhai

masti me. Ju batao

 

[Bulbul_Rani]

Fir kya marna hai

Usse hi pooch lo

 

[Bulbul_Rani]

Ju ki cream se bhi chipakta hai kya?

Pta kro

 

[Bulbul_Rani]

Khul ke batao.. Bulbul_Rani ji taiyar hai

Mei to kab se taiyar hu pta lo mujhe miss call se

 

[Adirshi]

masti me. Ju batao

Sahi time pe tabut se nikla hai undertaker

 

[Samar_Singh]

Aakash.

देखा कन्फ्यूजन हो है न लोगों को, इसीलिए हीरो हीरोइन का नाम जरूर देने का

Naam jaruri nahi hai, lekin story ka style jo hai Past Present me baar baar switch hona. And kuch scenes jaise "shadi ke time par hero shruti ko dekhkar kehta hai ki uski khushi me khush hai."
"Phir accident se pehle shruti ka jikr, ki woh aane wali hai then accident hona"
Ye thoda confuse kar diye.

Review se pehle confusion durr hona chahiye so I asked
Aakash.

 

[Riky007]

Naam jaruri nahi hai, lekin story ka style jo hai Past Present me baar baar switch hona. And kuch scenes jaise "shadi ke time par hero shruti ko dekhkar kehta hai ki uski khushi me khush hai."
"Phir accident se pehle shruti ka jikr, ki woh aane wali hai then accident hona"
Ye thoda confuse kar diye.

Review se pehle confusion durr hona chahiye so I asked
Aakash.

Actually charecters ko space nahi diya, even hero heroin ko bhi nahi