★☆★ XForum | Ultimate Story Contest - 2025 - Chit Chat & Discussion Thread ★☆★

[Aakash.]

Elon Musk_ bulbula me pin na maar de jra sabhal kar rahna

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[Aakash.]

Naam jaruri nahi hai, lekin story ka style jo hai Past Present me baar baar switch hona. And kuch scenes jaise "shadi ke time par hero shruti ko dekhkar kehta hai ki uski khushi me khush hai."
"Phir accident se pehle shruti ka jikr, ki woh aane wali hai then accident hona"
Ye thoda confuse kar diye.

Review se pehle confusion durr hona chahiye so I asked
Aakash.

Hmm koi nahi ab samjh gaye na tum itna kaafi hai ​

 

[Aakash.]

Kaamchor makku ​

 

[meerkhan]

masti me. Ju batao

Bahut time baad dikhe ju kaha busy rahte ho ajj kal

 

[Mak]

Story

 

[Mak]

Kaamchor makku ​

Very Hardworking.

 

[Adirshi]

Very Hardworking.

18 april ke liye advance me congrats men

 

[Aakash.]

18 april ke liye advance me congrats men

Byaah kar raha kya ye ​

 

[Adirshi]

Byaah kar raha kya ye ​

 

[Aakash.]

Very Hardworking.

Congrats men advance me ​