Adultery Ayansh - Life where Death ends

[Naik]

Update 3 : ( The Golden Toy )

Pichle update me aapne padha ki sandhya aur shivani dono uss bacche ko dekh rahe hote hai aur hawa ke jhoke se wajah se unhe pahle baar unke khilone ka chehra dikhta hai.

Ab aage-
Sandhya aur Shivani dono kho jaati hai thik waise hi jaise Ravi aur Devki kho gaye the. Dono ki aankhein jaisi uski aankho se bandh gayi for. 2 min tak wo aise hi khade rahe. Dono ko kya feel hua ye to waqt hi batayega. Sandhya ko jaise hi hosh aata hai wo daud ke apni mumma ke paas gayi
Sandhya - ( Apni dono baahein failate hue ) - Mumma Idhal do mera khilona
Devki - (Thoda hichakte hue ) - Beta tum gira dogi ise
Sandhya - ( Zidd karte hue ) - Mai nahi gulaungi na
Tab tak shivani v aa jati hai waha…Devki unhe ander chalne ko kehti hai…Fir sandhya ko bitha ke uski god me bacche ko rakh deti hai.
Shivani bagal me baith ke uske pairo ki ungliyo ko chu rahi thi. Wo thodi shy this isliye hichkicha rahi thi.
Sandhya - ( Uske gaalo ko sehlate hue ) - GUDDA ! Mera pyala Gudda.
Ravi Devki ke paas aate hue tum sabka bas chale to bacche ka sara naam hi bigad do. Koi gudda koi lalla are bhai uske liye koi accha sa naam rakhte hai.
Tab tak unhe shivani ki dhimi awwaz aati hai jo uske maa-papa ki baato se bekhabar bacche ke saath khel rahi thi.
Shivani POV - Kitna pyara aur chhotu sa gudda hai . Kya ye gudda bada bhi hoga ? Iski aankehin aisi kyu hai ? bilkul sone ki tarah chamak rahi. Ise mai sona bulaungi. Pyara SONA ( Kal jab wo school gayi thi to usne apne dosto ko baat karte suna ki unki mam ne sone ki anguthi pehni hai. Jab usne dekha to wo uski chamak dekh kar use bhot pyara laga. Isliye jab usne bacche ki aankhein dekhi use compare karne ke liye pehla khayal sone ka aaya )
Ravi- ( Devki ki or dekhte hue) - Lo ek aur naam mil gaya tumhare lalla ko SONA.
Devki - ( Halka muskurate hue ) - Aap bhi ek rakh do.
Ravi - Tum sabne itne rakh diye kaafi hai. ( Firr thoda serious hote hue ) Kyu na kal pandit ko bula le kal namkaran karne ke liye aur kundali v banwa lenge.
Devki - ( Ravi ki or dekhte hue ) - parr paise.
Ravi - Tum uski chinta matt karo wo mai dekh lunga.
Ravi fir apni biwi aur betiyo ko bol kar bahar nikal jata hai lekin darwaze se bahar jaane se pahle wo ek baar piche dekhta hai aur tabhi wo baccha apna sar thoda sa ghumata hai aur uski nazre sidhe Ravi se milti hai. Ravi v ek pal ke liye chauk jata hai firr muskurate hue nikal jata hai aur apne aap se muskurate hue kehta hai. ( Kuch to baat hai iski aankho me sabko deewana kar rakha hai )
Ravi paidal hi nikal padta hai apni dukaan ki or aaj uski cycle nahi thi. Apni dukaan kholta hai. Mandir kaafi purana aur famous tha to bhot saare videshi log v aate the darshan karne ke liye. Tabhi ek videshi jo kaafi der se Idhar udhar dekh raha tha. Ravi bhi ye notice karta hai lekin aaj Ravi ke dukaan pe kaafi customers aa rahe the. Jo ki thoda ajeeb tha ( iska reason ye tha Ravi ka dukaan gali me sabse piche tha ) lekin bhot saare log waha aa rahe the.
Tabhi Rajesh uski dukaan me aata hai.

Rajesh - ( Character Information ) - Age 34 - Ravi ke puja dukaan ke thik bagal me ek dhaba hai. Jo ki akasar aise mandiro ke saamne hota hai. Rajesh uss dhabe ka malik hai aur Ravi ka bhot accha Dost. Ek bhot hi saral aur saccha dost.

Ragini - Rajesh ki wife -Age 32- Ek gharelu maheela lekin bhot mehnge sapne.Dekhne me bhot jyada khubsurat aur apne aap ko kaafi maintain kar ke rakhti hai. Dil se saaf hai bss mehngi mehngi chizo ka shauk hai. Kuch din pahle hi Rajesh se sone ki chain zidd karke kharidwayi. Unn paiso se jo ki Rajesh ne apni dhaabe ko maintain karne ke liye bachaya tha.

Rani - Age 4 - Rajesh aur Ragini ki ekaluti beti - Ye apne nana ke paas rehti hai Rishikesh me lekin harr mahine kuch dino ke liye ghar aa jaati hai.

Rajesh - Aur bhai koi madad chahiye ? aaj to kaafi grahak hai.
Ravi - ( Piche dekhte hue ) - Haa bhai aaja ...Piche wo batasho ( mithai ) ka box pada hai wo le aa bss.
Rajesh - ( Box le ke aate hue ) - Tujhe to ab daily madad ki zarurat padegi.
Ravi - ( clueless aur question bhare lehze me Rajesh ko dekhta hai )
Rajesh - Tujhe nahi pata kya? Jo piche ki deewar thi wo todd di gayi hai. Waha ghaat aur uske bagal me park banega. Udhar se hi aayenge ab sab log . Purana rast band kar diya jayega.
Ravi - ( Jise achanak khayal aata hai ki itne saare logo ko dekhkar usne dhyan hi nahi diya ki wo dusre taraf se aa rahe hai. Ye bhot badi khabar thi kyunki jo kal tak last dukaan thi wo ab first dukaan ban gayi thi. ) - Kya khabar sunai hai bhai. Dil khush kar diya.
Rajesh - Mai v khush hu bhai mera hotel v ab pehla ho gaya.
Ravi - Chal tune aaj ek khabar sunai hai to mai v ek khabar sunata hu. Lekin ye khabar bahar na jaaye
Rajesh - ( Thoda hairaan aur question waale lehje me Ravi ko dekhta hai )
Ravi - Mere ghar beta aaya hai
Rajesh - Kyaaa?!! Saale tune mujhe bataya bhi nahi bhabhi pregnant hai ! Kab hua ye?!
Ravi - Are bhai shaant-shaant,Wo baat aisi hai ki…Fir use puri baat batata hai.
Rajesh - To namakaran kab karna hai ?
Ravi - Kal hi karne ka socha hai shaam ko. Tu bhi bhabhi aur Rani ko le ke aa jana.
Rajesh - Haa Rani abhi yahi hai, Thik he, aa jaaunga. Lekin dekh naa kya sanjog hai ki kal tujhe tera beta mila aur aaj hi itni badi khushkhabri.
Ravi - Haa bhai humari zindagi me khusiya bharne aaya hai aisa lagta hai.

Tabhi wo videshi jo kaafi pareshan tha aur idhar udhar dhundh raha tha. Wo Ravi ke dukaan ke paas aata hai.
Videsh - Hello, I’m Tim, Can you help me ?
Ravi - Hello Tim, I’m Ravi , How can I help you?
Tim kaafi pareshan tha lekin Ravi ki English sun ke thoda hairaan hota hai. Ravi jo ki tour guide ka bhi kaam karta tha isliye usne English acche se seekhi thi.

Tim - I’ve got my shoes stolen and now I want to go for a hike in a nearby forest. I’m looking for some transport, maybe a bicycle.
( Mera juta chori ho gaya hai aur abhi mujhe bagal ke jungle me ghumne jana hai. Aap kisi cycle ka intezam kar skte hai kya )
Ravi - Rajesh se , Bhai mera cycle to kal tut gaya. Tu apni cycle de de na.
Rajesh - Bhai , Cycle to mai de du lekin agar ye bhaag gaya to. Aise kisi ajnabee pe bharosa nahi kar skte.
Tim ne in dono ki baat suni aur shayd wo thoda bhot samajh gaya tha ki kis baare me baat ho rahi thi.
Tim - Don’t worry about the security, If you want i’m willing to give you my SSN card and pay you some advance.
( Security ki chinta matt karo mai apna SSN card dene ko taiyaar hu aur kuch advance me payment v kar dunga ).
Ravi - Okay Tim, You can submit any Identity proof here with some security money. When you're back you pay the charge and take away your belongings.
( Thik hai Tim, Tum apna Identity proof aur kuch security ke liye paise jama kar do. Wapas aa ke apni chize le jana aur paise pay kar dena )
Tim - Thank you, Man. You’re a savior. I’m a wildlife Photographer this hike was really important for my competition.
Ravi - You’re Welcome, Tim. All the best for your trip.

Uske baad Tim Rajesh ki Cycle le ke chala jata hai. Rajesh v apne hotel chala jata hai. Ravi soch me pad jata hai. Yaha kitni saari chizo ki zarurat hai agar wo in sab ke liye kuch kar paye to kaafi acche paise kama sakta hai. Ravi ne mann hi mann nischay kiya inn sab chizo ko le kar kuch shurwaat karne ki.

Author - Chalte hai ghar ki or dekhte hai waha kya ho raha hai

Devki Kitchen me halka-halka muskurate hue khana bana rahi thi. Shandhya aur Shivani dono bacche apne Gudde or Sona ke saath khel rahi thi , Dono school nahi gayi thi aur Devki ne jidd v nahi kiya kyunki kal raat dono ke liye bahut mushkil tha. Sandhya to ab tak kitni baar uske gaalo ko chum chuki thi. Shivani bss pairo ko chukar hi khush thi firr use kuch khayal aaya aur usne bacche ke pairo ko chum liya. Bacche ke Jakhm ab thode bhar gaye the.
Devki ko khana banate hue achanak khayal aaya ki uska lalla v to bhukha hoga. Lekin ek baar bhi roya nahi ab tak. Devki daudte hue gayi aur turant lalla ko sandhya ke god se utha liya.
Sandhya - Mumma ! Mai khel rahi abhi gudde se
Shivani v yahi kehna chahti thi lekin apne shaant swabhav ke wajah se keh nahi paayi.
Devki - Beta abhi lalla ko bhukh lagi hai. Shivani ko dekhte hue beta tum kitchen dekh lena thoda.
Shivani ne bina kuch kahe kitchen ki or chal diya lekin palat ke ek baar apne SONA ko dekhna naa bhuli.
Sandhya - Mai khilaungi mumma apne gudde ko.
Wo kitchen me duad ke gayi Devki use aawaz deti rah gayi aur ek bowl ( katori ) me chawal nikal ke le aayi. Ek mutthi me jitne chawal aa sakte usne laaye. Chawal abhi abhi bane the to garm hone ke wajah se nikalte hue Sandhya ke haath thode jal gaye lekin bina dard ki parwah kiye wo le aayi.
Sandhya - Mumma ! Idhal do mai khilaungi.
Devki - ( Pahle hairaan hui fir muskurate hue ) - Beta ye abhi chhota hai na ye abhi ye sab nahi khayega abhi sirf dudh piyega.
Sandhya - Thodi udaas ho gayi kyon ki unke ghar doodh to tha hi nahi.
Devki - ( Sandhya ki halat samjhte hue firr muskurate hue ) - Chinta matt karo beta. Mai ise puja room le jaaungi na waha bhagwan lalla ke liye doodh le aayenge.Tab tak tum didi ki madam karo.
Sandhya - ( Khush hote hue ) - Thik hai mumma ! Bhagwan ko bolna. Dhel sara doodh pilaye GUDDE ko.
Firr Devki apne Lalla ko lekar puja wale kamre me chali jaati hai. Doodh pilane ke liye. Jaise hi Devki apne lalla ko dudh pilati hai wo wapas usi state me pahuch jaati hai. Jo apne lalla ko pehli baar dekhne pe thi.

Idhar Ravi ki aaj acchi khaasi aamdani hui thi usne turant hi mandir ke hi ek pandit ko kal ke namkaran ke liye bula liya. Raat ko der se jab ghar aaya , Khana khaane ke baad jab sone ki baari aayi.
Sandhya - Mumma Gudda humale saath soyega.
Shivani ne kuch kaha nahi lekin uski aankhein dekh ke hi chal raha tha. Pure samarthan me thi wo iss baat ke.
Devki ek baar Ravi ki or dekhti hai.

Aaj ke liye itna hi…Aage kya hoga? Kya Sandhya apne gudde ek saath so paayegi? Namkaran ke din kya hoga? Kya Ragini koi hungama karegi? Kya hoga lalla ke kundali me ?!
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[Naik]

Update 4 : ( Ayansh - The Empty Vessel )

Pichle update me aapne padha ki Sandhya Devki se kehti hai ki wo apne Gudde ko apne paas sulana chahti hai.
Ab aage -
Sandhya - ( Apne dono hatho ko failate hue ) - Lao mumma mela gudda
Devki - ( Ek baar Ravi ki or dekhti hai fir sandhya se) - Beta lalla ko bhukh lagegi na raat me to ise bhagwan ji ke paas le jana padega na aur apka to school bhi hai subah.
Sandhya - ( Thodi udaas hote hue ) - Mumma Gudda kab humare jaise khana khayega?
Devki - Jab wo apke jitna bada ho jayega tab.
Sandhya aur Shivani dono samjh jaate hai ki unke gudde ko bada ke baad hi wo use apne paas sula payenge. Sandhya aur Shivani apne room ki taraf jaane lagte hai. Tabhi achanak sandhya wapas daudte hue aati hai aur apne gudde ke gaalo ko chum leti hai. Karna to ye shivani v chahti thi lekin apne nature ke wajah se kuch kar nahi paayi aur bss apne SONA ko dekhkar dono apne kamre me chale gayi.Ravi aur Devki ye dekhkar muskuraye bina rah nahi paaye. Sandhya aur Shivani hall me soti thi aur Ravi aur Devki bedroom me. Unke bedroom ke kone me hi puja ke liye bhagwan ki murtiya aur tasveere rakhi thi.
Devki - ( Ravi se ) - Suniye, Apne pandit se baat ki kya kal ke liye ?
Ravi - ( Muskurate hue ) - Begum, aap kuch kaho, aur hum na kare aisa kabhi ho sakta hai?
Devki - ( Blush karte hue ) - Hato ji, apko to sirf maske lagane hai.
Ravi - Waise tumhara ye lalla bhot kismat lekar aaya hai hamare liye.
Devki - ( Thodi hairaan hote hue Ravi ki or dekhti hai )
Ravi - Use aaj jo v dukaan pe ghatna hui aur aage jo karne ka usne socha hai bata deta hai.
Devki - ( Khush hote hue ) - Ye to bhot acchi khabar hai ji. ( Firr apne lalla ki or dekhte hue ) Ye sab mere lalla ke wajah se hua hai.
Ravi - ( Flirt karte hue ) - Thodi taarif meri v kar do.
Devki - ( Sudhar jaao thode waali look dete hue )
Ravi - Are zara hume bhi to khilano do mere sher ko.
Devki - Oohhoo , Sher ! Kal tak to humare naam rakhne pe bada suna rahe the.
Ravi - ( Halka muskurate hue ) - Aree jaan mai suna kaha raha tha.
Devki - Rahne do, Rahne do…
Fir Ravi bhi thodi der apne sher ki maalish karta hai aur sula deta hai aur ye dono bhi so jaate hai.
Idhar Sandhya aur Shivani dono ko hi neend nahi aa rahi thi. Dono ko rah-rah kar apne Gudde aur SONA ki yaad aa rahi thi. Lekin kaafi der jaagne ke baad dono so jaati hai.

Ab chalte hai Rajesh ke ghar Rajesh bedroom me Ragini ke saath tha.
Rajesh - Suno, Kal hume Ravi ke ghar jana hai.
Ragini - Kyu?
Rajesh - Unke yaha unke bacche ka namkaran hai.
Ragini - ( Shock hote hue ) - Baccha ! Konsa baccha ?
Rajesh - Use puri baat batata hai.
Ragini - Aise kaise kisi bhi bacche ko le aaye aur apna bana liya ? Pata nahi kiska khoon hai. ( Ragini ka dil saaf hai bss usne ye baat thode jalan me kahi thi kyunki uska koi beta nahi tha. )
Rajesh - Are bhagyawan zara uss bacche ke baare me to socho.
Ragini - Aap to kuch samjhte hi nahi hai. Samaj kya kya kehta hai aapko nahi pata.
Rajesh - Accha accha choro na wo sab, Tum bss Rani ko lekar chali jana thodi jaldi bhabhi ki madad ho jaayegi.
Ragini - Aur aap kab aayenge?
Rajesh - Mai Ravi ke saath hi dukaan se hi aa jaaunga pandit ji ko lekar.
Ragini - Thik hai ji ( Ragini thodi khush bhi thodi kyunki kuch din pahle jo usne gold chain kharidi thi wo sabko dikhane ka mauka milega. Yahi sab to chahiye tha use )


Agle din subah dono thoda late uthti hai aur sabse pahle uthkar apne Gudde ko dhudhti hai.
Devki - Are kya kar rahi ho tum dono? School nahi jana ?
Sandhya - Mumma Gudde ko bhi hum apne saath school le jaaye ?
Devki - ( Hairaani se mann me ) - Iss ladki ka bss chale to ek second bhi mere lalla ko naa chore. Abhi ye haal hai pata nhi bade hoke kya hoga.
Devki - Wo abhi chhota hai beta jab bada ho jaayega tab tumhare saath hi school jaayega.
Sandhya - ( Gudde ke kaan me ) - Suna tumne mumma keh rahi hum saath me jaayenge. Tum jaldi jaldi bade ho jao.
Devki - kya keh rahi ho ?
Sandhya - Kuch nahi
Devki - Chalo-Chalo taiyaar ho jao dono.
Dono taiyaar ho ke school chali jaati hai. Ravi bhi mandir ke liye nikal jata hai.Devki aaj namkaran ke liye taiyaariya karne lagti hai. Ravi ke dukaan pe aaj bhi kaafi customers the. Ravi Rajesh ke saath milkar aage ke business ka plan banata hai. Rajesh ko v plan kaafi sahi lagta hai. Firr dono dopaher ko hi nikal jaate hai pandit ji ke saath.
Dono jab pandit ji ke saath chaurahe pe utarte hai tabhi unhe Ragini aur Rani dikh jaati hai.
Rajesh - ( Ragini se ) - Tum abhi aa rahi ho. Maine kaha tha thodi jaldi chali jana.
Ragini - ( Itrate hue aur apne haar ko chute hue ) - Wo bss thoda taiyaar hone me jyada waqt lag gaya.
Rajesh - ( Thoda sharminda hote hue Ravi ke saamne )
Ravi - Are koi baat nahi bhabhi ji chaliye. Aur Rani beta kaisi ho tum?
Rani - Mai acchi hu uncle.
Ravi sabko lekar ander aata hai. Devki ne pura ghar saja rakha tha.Padosh ki ek mahila Shushila chachi bhi aayi hui thi. Ragini pure attitude aur itrate hue ghar ke ander aati hai. Apne haar ko baar baar chute hue aur Idhar udhar dekh rahi thi taaki devki ko apna haar dikha sake.

Shushila Chachi - Are Devki dekho to sab mehmaan aaye hai.
Devki - Aayi kaki
Devki lalla ko apni god me liye bahar aati hai. Jaise hi Ragini ki nazar uss bacche ke nazar se takrati hai. Ragini sabkuch bhul jaati hai aur khadi ki khadi reh jaati hai. Rajesh v thode waqt ke liye thehar jaata hai. Rani v kho si gayi thi.
Devki aur Ravi jinko inn sab chizo ki aadat ho gayi thi. Wo jyada hairaan nahi hue. Lekin unhe shock tab laga jab pandit ji ko bhi khoye hue dekha. Thodi der baad sab hosh me aate hai Ragini ko chor kar.
Ragini’s POV - Uske mann ke saare vichar sunya ho gaye the. Uske dil ke paas ek ajeeb si sensation hone lagi. Heartbeat bhot tezz ho gayi thi lekin ek ek dhadkan ko wo araam se sun skti thi.Jaise hi bacche ki aankehin Ragini ki tarag mudi aur Ragini se bardaast karna mushkil ho gaya. Use jab apna dil bhot kamjor hote hue mehsus hua to wo uss state bahar aayi.
Wo dhire dhire kadmo se chalte hue bacche ke taraf gayi. Firr jo usne kiya use dekhkar sab hairaan reh gaye. Usne apna haath piche karke apna haar utara aur uss bacche ki god me rakh diya.

Author’s POV - “Ye bhi gayi.”

( Ragini ka dil humesha se saaf tha. Lekin uske itrane aur mehngi chizo ke piche jo wajah thi wo ye ki wo saamne walo ki aankho me apne liye wo maan dekhna chahti thi aur jaise hi aaj usne un do aankho ko dekha usme wo sab kuch tha jo use humesha se chahiye tha. Iss feeling ke ek chhote version ko samjhne ke liye agar aapne kabhi kisi se sacche dil se pyar kiya aur uske liye taiyaar hue ho aapki bss ek hi dua hoti hai ki ek baar wo shaqs dekh le. Ragini ke feeling ka bhaav bhi kuch aisa tha. Unn aankho me aaj usne wo sab kuch dekh liya tha Jo use chahiye tha. Isliye sabse pahle apna haar utaar kar de diya. Kyunki jis wajah se wo ye karti thi. Wo pura chuka tha )

Devki - Ragini kya kar rahi ho?
Ragini - Didi, ( Ye ek aur jhatka ! Ragini ne aaj tak Devki ko naam se hi bulaya hai.)
Ragini - Didi, Maine bhot dil se diya hai mana mat kijiye.
Devki - Lekin Ragini ye itna mehnga hum kaise le skte hai.
Ragini - Didi, Ye maine apne lalla ko diya hai.
Devki ko thodi jalan si jab Ragini ne use apna lalla kaha. Lekin tab tak Rajesh aa gaya jo ki apni biwi ke aisa karne pe kaafi hairaan tha. Lekin khush bhi. Usne Devki aur Ravi ko bhot samjhane ke baad. Haar rakhne ke liye mana liya.
Ragini bhi uss bacche ko god me lena chahti thi. Usne Devki ki taraf dekha.
Devki ne apne lalla ko Ragini ke god me de diya. Ragini ko aisa laga maano use sab mil gaya. Rani v aa gayi aur wo bhi apne mumma ke saath lalla ko khilane lagi. Tabhi school se Shivani aur Sandhya bhi aa gaye apne ghar pe itne saare logo ko dekhkar dono thode hairaan the. Fir Ragini ke god me apne Gudde ko dekh ke uski taraf chal pade.
Devki - ( Dono ko bich me rokte hue ) - Are are kaha chal diye jao pahle taiyaar ho jaavo aaj tumhare Gudde ka naam rakhna hai
Dono ko jyada samjh nahi aaya kyunki Gudde ka naam kya rakhna Gudde ka naam to Gudda hai na. Same soch SONA ko lekar Shivani ke mann me aaya.
Lekin Dono apni maa ki baat maante hue taiyaar hone chali gayi. Thodi der baad dono taiyaar hokar aa gayi.Tab tak pandit ji v baith chuke the.

Thodi der puja hua fir pandit ne Devki ko bacche ko lekar baithne ko kaha. Ragini dena to nahi chahti thi lekin beman se use dena pada. Pandit ji bacche ko dekhte hue kundali banane lagte hai Lekin unke chehre pe chinta dikhne lagti hai. Kaafi der ke baad bhi wo kuch bana nahi paa rahe the.

Ravi - Kya hua pandit ji? Aap chinit kyu dikh rahe hai?
Pandit ji - Iss bacche ki kundali khaali hai.
Sab shock hote hue.
Rajesh - Aisa kaise ho sakta hai pandit ji ? Jiska v janm hua hai uski kundali me kuch to hoga hi.
Pandit ji - Aap thik keh rahe hai lekin iski kundali me iski zindagi par kisi grah ka koi prabhav nahi janm ko chhod kar. Mujhe thoda waqt dijiye.
Pandit ji apni aankhein band karr ke kisi ka dhyan karte hai aur aankhein kholne ke baad muskuraate hue ye baccha apna bhavisya khud likhega. Fir unke chehre pe chinta ki laakerien aa jaati hai aur kehte hai ye baccha bilkul khaali hai lekin iski urja bhot jyada hai. Agar isme acchayi bhari gayi to ye to bhot accha banega aur sabka bhala karega. Lekin agar isme burayi bhari gayi to itna bura banega jitna koi soch na sake. Ye ab iss duniya pe hai wo ise kaisa banati hai.
Baccho ko to jyada samjh nahi aa raha tha lekin saare bade bhot tension me aa gaye.
Pandit ji - Chinta to mujhe bhi hai lekin jaisa maine kaha agar hum isme acchai bhare, ise acchi acchi chize sikhaye to ye bhot saare logo ka kalyan karega. Isliye aap sab chinta ko chhod kar iss bacche ko acche sanskaar dene ke baare me soche.
Ravi - Hum apni puri koshish karenge pandit ji. Lekin bacche ka naam kya rakhe.
Tabhi bahar aavaz hui…
ALAKH NIRANJAN !! ALAKH NIRANJAN !!
Sab bahar ki or dekhte hai to ek yogi, Bhasm me lipta hua. Sirf ek langot thi uske shareer par lekin uske pure shareer se aisa aura aa raha ki kisi ki himmat nahi hui aage badhne ki.
Wo dhire dhire devki ke paas aate hai sab darr gaye the sandhya aur shivani devki ke piche chipp gayi aur bacche ko dekhte hue kehte hai.


Aghori - “AYANSH” , ayansh naam hoga iska. Apne saath saath bahut se logo ka bhavishya likhega ye bilkul unki tarah . Fir Sandhya ko dekhte hue iska humesha saath dena beti.
Fir unhone jo kiya usse sab shocked rah gaye. Unhone niche jhuk kar Shivani ke pair chu liye. Shivani jhat se piche hatt gayi aur apni maa ke piche dubak gayi. Fir unhone Rani ko dekhkar uske sar pe hath fera aur Ragini ko dekh karr muskuraye aur use ek chhota sa box diya aur kaha ye tumhare lalla ke liye. Jab wo 18 ka ho jaaye use de dena. Sab hairan the. Aghori ant me Devki ke paas jaate hai. Devki unke paon chu leti hai. Wo Devki ko ek locket dete hai. Ye tumhare liye hai beti ise khud se kabhi dur matt karna. Itna kehkar wo bahar chal dete hai. ALAKH NIRANJAN !! ALAKH NIRANJAN !!

Devki - ( Piche se awaaz dete hue ) - Baba baba rukiye.. Kuch dakshina to lete jaaiye. Ravi tab tak kuch paise lekar aata hai.
Aghori - ( Gusse se ) - Murkh tumhe lagta hai in kagaz ke tukdo ke liye mai yaha hu!! Tumhare Kagaz ke tukdo ki itni haisiyat nahi ki mera aashirwad kharid sake!!
Ravi aur Devki dono seham jaate hai
Aghori - ( Gusse se ) - Dena chahte ho mujhe taza khoon do mujhe !!
Sab darr jaate hai !
Aghori - ( Thoda shaant hote hue ) - Tum nahi de sakte mujhe sirf wo de skta hai ( Ayansh ki taraf ishara karte hue )
Devki darr jaati hai kahi wo unke bacche ko kuch kar de. Lekin tabhi baccha jo haar uski god me tha uske pin se apne forearms ko ragad deta hai aur uske forearms se khoon nikalne lagta hai. Chhota sa cut lekin gehra tha lekin khun ki kuch bunde nikalne lagi. Aghori uske paas aakar. Uske haatho me lage lage cut se thoda sa khun ungliyo pe lekar apne maathe aur gale me vibhuti ki tarah laga leta hai. Firr Devki ko ek jadi-booti deta hai aur pyaar se kehta hai ye iske zakhm par laga dena beti. Unka gussa puri tarah se khatam ho chuka tha.
Fir bacche ko dekhte hue - Intezaar karunga tera.
ALAKH NIRANJAN !! ALAKH NIRANJAN !!
Aghori waha se chala jata hai. Sabko shock me chhod kar.

Aage kya hoga? Kya AYANSH ek accha insaan banega ya bura ? Kon tha ye Aghori kya AYANSH isse milne jaayega? Aghori ne Shivani ke pair kyu chuwe ?
Jawab janne ke liye bane rahe. Likes aur comments ko bhar-bhar ke kare.

Bahot badhiya shaandar update
Pehle bachcha Mila ek box me sawalo ki jhadi laga di ab yeh Aghori baba ne aakar salwalo ka poora pahad khada kerke chale gaye h
Baherhal naam achcha Dia AYANSH
Ragini tow bachcha ko dekh ker ek dam se badal gayi sahi h
Shivani ke pair kyon chuwe yeh sabse bada sawal h
Baherhal ab sab swalo ke jawab AYANSH ke 18 Saal poore hone per hi pata chalega
Ab dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behtareen shaandar lajawab update

 

[parkas]

Ayanshsingh707 bhai next update kab tak aayega?

 

[Ayanshsingh707]

Update 5 : ( Welcome to School )

Pichle Update me aapne padha ki Aghori bacche kaa naam AYANSH rakh kar waha se chala jata hai aur piche sab shock me khade jo hue un ghatnao ke baare me soch rahe the
Ab aage -

Devki - ( Abhi bhi sehmi hui si ) - Dekhiye na ji, Kitna khun nikal raha hai lalla ke haatho se.

Ravi - ( Paas jakar ) - Are Devu tum ro matt, Kuch nahi hoga humare Sher ko. Baba ne jo Davai di hai wo laga do. ( Ravi ke mann me pata nahi kyu un baba ke prati shraddha jaag gayi )

Devki - ( Thodi Chinta me ) - Kuch Hoga to nahi na

Ramesh - Haa yaar mujhe bhi bhaabhi ki chinta jayaz lag rahi hai. Kya pata konsi dawai ho. Aise hi laga dena thik nahi hoga.

Ravi - ( Dono se ) - Chinta matt karo aise lep ( paste ) maine pahle bhi dekhe the jab kuch yogi mandir me aaye the. Bharosa rakho sab thik hoga.

Devki - ( Khun ko dekhte hue aur fir apne pati ko dekhkar ) - Wo jadi-buti lep waha laga deti hai.

Ragini - ( Mahol ko halka karte hue ) - Waise naam to accha rakha hai baba ne “AYANSH”
Rani - ( Bacche ko dekh kar ) - Mumma kitna mushkil naam hai.
Ragini - ( Apni beti ke sir pe haath firakar muskurate hue ) - To tum hi koi naam bata do beta.
Rani - ANSH

Jaise hi rani ye naam bolti hai sab uske taraf dekhte hai kyunki ye naam sabko pasand aaya tha. Sab ne apne apne hisab se nickname to rakh liya tha. Lekin ye common naam sabko pasand aaya.
Ragini - Waah beta, Acha naam bataya. Ise yahi bulayenge.

Author’s POV - To finally hamare Hero ka ek naam decide ho gaya. Ab story me use Mai ya ANSH hi bulaya jaayega.But, ek waqt aayega jab “AYANSH” ka naam apna Jalwa dikhayega.

Sabne khana khaya , Rani bhi Sandhya aur Shivani ke saath milkar Ansh ke saath khelne lagi. Ragini,Devki ki madad kar rahi thi. Devki ke bhot baar mana karne ke baad bhi wo nahi maani aur kitchen me kaam karne lagi.

Raat ko jab jaane ki baat aayi Rani zidd karne lagi wahi ke liye. Rukna to Ragini bhi chahti thi magar waha jagah kam thi.
Devki - Rahne do na bacchi ka itna mann hai to.
Ragini - Lekin Didi, aisi akele kabhi bahar nahi rahi. Raat ko tang naa kare.
Devki - Are ye bhi to iska hi ghar hai. Tum chinta matt karo Shivani aur Sandhya ke saath so jaayegi.
Rani - ( Turant hi ) - Ha, Ha mai so jaaungi.

Ragini, Rani ko chor ke chali jaati hai. Lekin Ragini ko neend nahi aati hai baar baar use sirf Ansh ka chehra dikhayi de raha tha. Ramesh bhi ye notice karta hai.
Ramesh - Soyi nahi?
Ragini - Neend nahi aa rahi ji.
Ramesh - Kya hua ? ( Wo samjhta hai ki kuch to hua hai uski biwi ko )
Ragini - ( Kuch nahi bolti fir thodi der baad ) - Meri ek baat maanenge?
Ramesh - ( Thoda chaukte hue ) - Haa kaho na.
Ragini - Mujhe Didi ke ghar ke aas-paas hi kahi ghar chahiye.
Ramesh - ( Kahi na kahi samajh jata hai uske biwi ko Ansh ke saath waqt bitana hai . Muskurate hue kehta hai ) - Thik ha mai koshish karunga.
Ragini - ( Muskurate hue apne pati ko gale lagati hai )

Aise hi din bitne lagte hai. Sandhya aur Shivani jab bhi ghar pe hoti ek pal ke liye bhi Ansh ko akela nahi chorti. Rani kuch dino baad apne Nana ke paas wapas Rishikesh chali jaati hai. Lekin ab uska zara bhi mann nahi lag raha tha. Wo baar baar apni maa se zidd karti hai ghar aane ke liye. Idha Ravi aur Ramesh apne business wale idea pe pura kaam karke use suru karte hai. Business bhi kafi jaldi gati pakad leti hai kyunki jaise jaise transport aur road bante jaa rahe the,Tourist aur bhi jyada aa rahe the. Dono ne tourist ke liye aur bhi facility aur service badha diya.

Dono ne milkar ek ghar kharid liya aur sab wahi shift ho gaye. Ragini to ab koi aur hi ban chuki thi. Pura din bss Ansh ke saath rahti. Dudh bhi jyadatar wahi pilati. Devki ko kahi na kahi iss baat ki khusi thi ki Ragini uske lalla ko usse v jyada pyar karti thi lekin thodi si jalan bhi hoti thi kyunki Ansh kahi na kahi Ragini ke taraf jyada jaata tha.

2 years later : ( Year - 2008 )

Ansh normal baccho se thoda jaldi bada hone lagta.2 saal ka hone ke bawajood 3-4 saal ka lagta tha. Itne laad pyar ke wajah se kaafi ziddi bhi ho gaya tha. "Uske mann agar ye baat aa gayi ki koi chiz chahiye to harr haal me use wo chahiye". Devki kabhi kabhi use daanti thi to Ragini bich me aa ke bacha leti thi. Ansh ne apne aas-paas kewal pyar hi dekha tha isliye use sirf pyar hi aata tha. Chot lagne pe bhi muskurata rahta tha. Uski ek khaas thi baat thi agar kisi chiz ko dekhta to bss use dekhta hi rahta use aawaz dekar hosh me laana padta.

Ansh jab 1.5 saal ka tha tab wo Ramesh ki god me tha , Ramesh ko kaam pe jana tha to Ramesh niche se hi Ragini ko aawaz deta hai - Ragini!. Ragini abhi-abhi naha kar bahar aa rahi thi. Isliye usne aawaz nahi suni. Tabhi Ansh jo Ramesh ko hi dekh raha tha. Ansh - Ragini!. Ramesh ko hakka-bakka reh jata hai uska aadha karan ye tha ki ye Ansh ke pahle shadh the aur aadha karan ye ki inn sabdo me zara bhi totla-pan(stammering) nahi thi bilkul saaf the. Ragini jo kamre ke se bahar aa rahi baalo ko pochte hue. Use ye awaz jaise sunai padti hai wo aawaz jise wo laakho ki bhid me bhi pehchan skti hai. Wo bhaagte hue niche aati hai baal abhi v gile the uske. Ramesh Ragini ko dekhta hai firr Ansh ko dekhta hai.
Ragini- ( Ramesh ko dekhte hue - thoda haafte hue ) - Aapne! Aapne suna isne abhi kya kaha?
Ramesh - ( Shock me tha ) - bss haa me sar hilata hai.
Ragini to maano hawa me udne lagi usne turant ansh ko apni god me uthaya aur lalla lalla karte hue gol gol ghumane lagi.
Devki - ( jo kitchen me kaam kar rahi thi )- Kya kar rahi hai Chhoti ?
Ragini - Didi, Didi aapko pata hai Lalla ne kya kaha?
Devki - ( Shock me ) - Lalla ne kuch kaha?
Ragini - Ha haa didi usne mujhe mere naam se bulaya.
Devki - Chal kuch bhi. Wo baccha hai abhi.
Ragini - Mai sach keh rahi hu didi aap chaho to unse puch lo.
Devki - ( Ramesh ki taraf dekhti hai ) - Haa bhabhi
Dhire-Dhire Ansh aur bhi bhot kuch bolne laga.

Author’s POV- Thoda iss naye ghar ke baare me bata du . Bhot hi pyara sa ghar tha 2 floor ka. Ghar ke saamne Garden tha. Khelne ke liye acchi khasi jagah thi. Ground floor par 3 kamre the jisme Ek me Ravi aur Devki rehte the. Ek Sandhya aur Shivani ke liye aur last wala ANSH ke liye banaya gaya tha.Ye Ragini ki farmaish thi lekin abhi to Ansh to Ravi aur Devki ke room me hi sota tha. Upar bhi 3 Kamre the. Ek bedroom tha Ragini aur Ramesh ka ek unhone Rani ke liye banwaya tha aur last wala. Ji haa sahi guess kiya ye bhi Ansh ke liye aur firse sahi guess kiya Ragini ke farmaish pe. Uska kehna tha agar uske lalla ko kabhi upar aakar sone ka mann kiya to?

Shaam ka waqt tha. Ragini ka phone bajta hai. Business acha chalne ke wajah se ab paiso ki kami nahi thi. Sare bade logo ke paas phone tha aur ghar me ek landline bhi.
Ragini - ( Phone uthate hue ye uske papa ka no. tha ) - Hello ?
Saamne se - ( Rone ki aawaz aati hai )
Ragini - Hello, Hello papa
Saamne se - ( Rote hue ) - Mummaaaa
Ragini - Rani, Rani Ro kyu rahi ho beta?
Rani - Mumma mujhe aap sabki yaad aa rahi hai.
Ragini - ( Use shaant karwate hue ) - Beta aap ro kyu rahe ho.. hum aapse milne aa jayenge sunday ko.
Rani - Nahi mumma, Mujhe aap logo ke paas aana hai.
Ragini - Kya hua beta ? kisi ne kuch kaha tumse?
Rani - Nahi mumma, Nana-Nani bahot acche hai mera bhot khayal rakhte hai. Lekin Mujhe aap sab ke saath rehna hai.

Baat darasal ye thi ki jabse Rani yaha aayi hai use baar baar Ansh ki yaad aati thi aur waqt ke saath ye yaad badhti hi gayi hai. Pahle to wo lagbhag har hafte ya mahine apne ghar chali jaati thi. Lekin business ke wajah se aur ghar shift karne ke wajah se use bula nahi paa rahe the. Haa 2-3 mahino me Ragini aur Ramesh mil aate the. Lekin ab uski tadap Ansh se milne ki badhti jaa rahi thi.
Ragini - Accha thik hai beta, Chup ho jao tum hum jaldi hi lene aayenge tumhe.
Rani - ( excited hoke ) - Sach me? Mumma
Ragini - Haa beta! Sach me.

Agle sunday ko Ragini aur Ramesh Rani ko lene jaate hai. Aaiye jaan lete hai Ragini ke family ke baare me.

Rajiv Patel - ( Ragini ke papa ) - Age 54 years - Army me serve kar chuke hai lekin inhe sadharan life jeena pasand hai. Army wali discipline aur kadakpan na chahte hue v aa hi jata hai.
Nandini Patel - ( Ragini ki maa ) - Age 50 years - Bahot hi shaant aur suljhi hui mahila.
Ragini Patel - ( Rajiv aur Nandini ki eklauti beti )

Dono akele rehte hai isliye Rani ko apne paas rakhte hai taki dono ka mann behal jaaye. Subah ke 10 baje doorbell bajta hai. Rani jaa ke gate kholti hai Saamne apne mumma papa ko dekh ke khush ho jaati hai aur unhe gale laga leti hai.
Rajiv - Aao Aao beta tumhara hi intezaar kar rahe the.
Tabhi Ragini aur Ramesh side hote hai aur unke bich se Ansh aata hai. Ragini ne Ansh ko kaale googles pehna diye the. Use pata tha uski aankhein dekh ke sab kho jaayenge. Uska manna tha uske lalla ko nazar laga denge log.
Nandini - Ye ye , Ansh hai na ?
Rani - Jo tabse use dekh rahi thi. Ansh ka naam sun ke hosh me aati hai. Wo dekhti hai ki Ansh kitna bada ho gaya.
Nandini - Kitni baar kaha tha Devki ko ise saath lekar aaye. Chalo woh na aayi kam se kam ise to bhej diya.
Rani ko jab hosh aata hai Ansh ka haath pakad kar use kahi le jaane lagti hai. Ansh bhi Rani ko dekhta hai fir apni usual pyari si muskaan deta hai.
Ragini - Kaha le jaa rahi hai beta Ansh ko?
Rani - Maa hum dono khelne jaa rahe hai. Kheloge naa mere saath?
Ansh - Hmm Hmm me do baar sar hilata hai. Mai khelne jaa raha hu Ragini.
Ragini - Sharma jaati hai.
Ramesh ko chhod kar baaki sab shocked ho jate hai tab tak Rani Ansh ko apne kamre me le jaati hai.
Rajiv - Beta isne tumhe Ragini bola.
Ragini - Dubara thoda sharma jaati hai.
Ramesh - ( Haste hue ) - Papa ji, Fir wo puri ghatna bata deta hai. Uske baad Ragini ne sabko keh diya tha koi use ye naa bataye ki kya bolna hai. Use Ansh ke muh se apna naam sunna acha lagta tha.
Rajiv aur Nandini bhi hasne lagte hai.
Idhar Rani Ansh ko dher saari chize dikhati hai. Ansh sab acche se dekh raha tha.
Ragini - ( Nandini se ) - Maa hume ek baat kehni thi.
Nandini - kaho na beti.
Ragini - Wo hum chahte hai Rani ke saath saath aap dono bhi humare ghar chale.
Rajiv aur Nandini - ( Shocked ho ke ek dusre ko dekhte hai )
Rajiv - Lekin beti hum waha kaise reh skte hai.
Ramesh - Maa, papa aap dono yaha akele rahenge hume chinta rahegi. Aap dono bhi chaliye na hamare saath.
Bhot manane ke baad wo maan jaate hai.
Rani bhot jyada khush apne Nana,Nani bahot pasand the. Devki bhi khush thi uske, saas-sasur to nahi the kyunki Ravi ne 16 saal ki umar me hi ghar chhod diya tha. Jab bhi Devki ne wajah janne ki koshish ki Ravi ne beeti baato ko bhulkar aage badhne ki baat kehkar baat taal di. Isliye Rajiv aur Nandini ke aa jane se wo bahut khush thi.

Ese hi ek saal aur beet gaya aur finally aaj tha Ansh ka pehla din. Paise aa jaane ke baad saare bacche ab acche school me padh rahe the 2 saal se. Ansh ke dhyan dene ki capacity bhot jyada thi jiski wajah se wo apne umar ke baccho se kaafi tezz tha. Use pahle hi school bhejna chahte the lekin minimum age 3 years thi uss school ki.

Ansh - ( 3 years ) - class 1 ( Uske tezz dimag aur body ko dekh ke direct 1 me accept kar liya )
Sandhya - ( 6 years ) - class 2 ( Padhai me thodi kamzor thi haa sports aur maar-pit me bhot aage )
Shivani - ( 8 years ) - class 4 ( Padhai me bhot tezz thi )
Rani - ( 7 years ) - class 2 ( Padhai me bhot sharp, Isme aur Sandhya me bhot gehri dosti ho gayi )

Aaj Ansh ka pehla din tha. Devki ne subah-subah use utha diya.
Ansh - Mumma sone do na!
Devki - Nahi uth school jana hai tujhe
Ansh - Mujhe nahi jana. Ragini !
Ragini - Kya hua lalla.
Ansh - Mujhe school nahi jana.
Ragini - Lalla, School me bhot sare naye bache milenge tumhe aur chocolates bhi milenge.
Ansh - Sach me? Ragini ?
Ragini - Haa Lalla.
Ansh - Thik hai fir mai jata hu.
Ansh waise hi night dress me school ke liye nikalne lagta hai. Devki piche se awaaz lagati hai.
Devki - Lallaaa, Aree sun to sahi, school aise nahi jaate.
Ansh - ( Fir kaise ) - wala look deta hai.
Ragini use bolti hai chal mai tujhe nehla deti hu. Fir Ragini use Ready karti hai tab tak Rani,Sandhya aur Shivani bhi ready ho jaati hai.

Ramesh aur Ravi ne milkar ek car li thi. Ramesh tino ko school ki gate ke paas chhodta hai fir Ansh ka ek haath Rani pakad leti hai aur ek haath Sandhya.Ansh dekhta hai bhot saare parents baccho ko chhodne aaye hai aur bahot saare bacche ro rahe hai. Use kuch samjh nahi aata aur jab use samjh nahi aata wo pure dhyan se uss chiz ko dekhne lagta hai.

Kaisa rahega school ka pehla din ? Kya-Kya dhamaka hoga Ansh ke saath ? Kya hoga jab teacher chocolate nahi degi? Kya school me Ansh ko koi naya dost milega ? Story kya mod legi ?
Inn sab sawalo ke jawab janne ke liye bane rahe. Likes aur comments bhar-bhar ke kijiye.
Apke school ka pehla din kaisa tha? Comment me zarur bataiye.

 

[Savi Malhotra]

Superb n fantastic update bro,

 

[devi kings]

Nice update

 

[king1969]

Bahut hi mazedar update

 

[mass8787]

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[Rocky2602]

Nice n fantastic

 

[lovenaeem88]

Supper fantastic update janab