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Scene 🖼️ #01


Subha k kareeb 4 baje

'Maalti.. Maalti'
Ye sabd aise thay jo lagatar Maalti ko uske kaano main sunai pad rahe thay.. par es aawaz ka estrot kaha hai ye wo dhund nahi pa rahi thi ki tabhi use ek thandi hawa ka kanpkapa dene wala jhoka mehsus hota hai

Hawa kuch jada hi thandi thi.. qki es ek pal main hi uska pura jism aise kaanp gaya tha maano sard ritu main kisi ne use purn nangi karke ratri main kisi nadi k beechon beech khada kar diya ho.. par ek min

Maalti toh sach main kisi nadi.. talab ya aisi hi kisi jagah thi, jaha dur dur tak jaha nazar daalo waha bus paani hi paani tha

"Ye.. ye.. main yaha kaise.. koi hai.. koi hai... ?"

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Maalti k andar bhay ka saaya ghar karne lagta hai, wo apne charo taraf dekhti hai jisse use jada dar mehsus hota hai use

Qki wo khud ko paani main khada hua paati hai jaha dur dur tak jaha nazar daalo waha sirf paani hi paani nazar aa raha tha

"Koi hai... Monu k Pitaji.. Savita Bhabhi.. Jeth ji... koi hai"

Maalti phir se darte hue apno ko yaad karti hai, par badle main pehle jaisa hi uttar milta hai, yaani purn shanti

Tabhi achanak use apne pairo k pass kuch halchal si mehsus hoti hai, wo paani main kuch kadam peeche hatti hai toh aisa mehsus hota hai wo apna pair hi na utha pa rahi ho, ya aisa laga ki kisi ne uske pairon ko apne majbut panjo main jakad liya ho

Par Maalti haar nahi manti aur apni purn taqat laga k peeche hatti hai

Tabhi wo dekhti hai ki paani ki satah se ek hath dhire dhire paani k uper aa raha hota hai.. phir uske baad ek chehra ubharna suru hota hai

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Maalti puri tarah ascharya main padi hui kabhi us aakriti ko paani se bahar aate hui dekh rahi thi toh kabhi apne charo taraf dur dur sirf paani ko dekhte hue aur jada gabra rahi thi

Achanak dur kabhi tez bijli khondhne ki aawaz sunai padti hai.. jisse Maalti ko us disha main dekhna hi padta hai

Par ye kiya dur dur tak ek baar phir se purn shanti thi.. Par es baar jab Maalti wapas paani main ubharti hui us akriti pe nazar daalti hai toh bus hairan hi reh jaati hai, qki ab waha ek stree khadi thi.. ha sayad stree hi thi

Par purn nangi avastha main jism pe ek kapde ka dhaaga tak nahi.. purn kisi navjat ki taraf bus nangi

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Wo stree muskurate hue achanak Maalti k samne khadi hui dikhti hai

Maalti ko samajh nahi aata ki achanak wo uske itne kareeb kaise aa gayi.. Jaise koi chalava ho

Tabhi us stree k mukh se sabd nikalte hai aur uske sath hi ek thandi sard hawa bhi Maalti k chehre se takrati hai.. Maalti ko aisa lagta hai jaise us stree k mukh k nikal rahe sabdo k karan uske chehre pe barf jamne lagi ho

Par Maalti k andar sirhan bharne ka kaam uske sabd kar rahe thay
"Tu badi khus hai.. tujhe lagta hai tera beta bach gaya.. ha hah ha hahaaaaahhaa"

Wo stree itna bol k aise hasti hai maano koi rakshak ho jiski karkas aawaz se Maalti ka purn jism thanda padne laga tha

Maalti- Kon.. Kon.. ho tum.. ?

Agle hi Pal us stree ne aage badkar Maalti ki kalai ko kaske jakad liya, uski pakad itni majbut thi ki Maalti ko apne jism main tevr thand aur kanpkapi si mehsus hoti hai

Stree- (Bhayanakar roop se haste hue) Maut hu.. tere bete ki maut

'Monu.................."

Maalti puri taqat lagakar apne bete ka naam leti hai kuch palon k liye uski aankhen bhi band ho gayi thi, par jab wapas wo apni aankhon ko kholti hai toh sab kuch badal chuka tha

Qki wo toh apni charpai pe laiti hui thi, sarir pe ek bhari razai thi par uska ek pair razai k bahar nikla hua tha.. jis karanwas use halki thand bhi mehsus hoti hai

Par es samay Maalti ko uski parwa nahi thi.. qki wo itna toh samajh chuki thi ki ye bus ek sapna tha, par aisa q tha ki ye sach se bhi jada sacha laga.. Maalti ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha

Use Mehsus hota hai ki itni bheesad thand main bhi, use paseena aa gaya tha.. wo jaldi se apne Pallu se apna paseena pochne ki liye jaise hi apna hath uthati hai uska purn jism maano kaanp uthta hai qki use apni kalai pe laal nishan dikhte hai maano jaise kisi ne uski kalai ko itne jor se pakda ho ki kuch palon k liye waha ka khoon jam gaya ho

Maali ka purn jism kisi nayi anhoni k bare soch k sihar sa jata hai, wo lambi lambi saanse lete hue khud ko kabu main karne ki purn koshish karne lagti hai.. tabhi use ehsaas hota hai subha ka aarambh ho chuka hai.. wo ghar main chappar k neeche hi sote hue Sonu, Sattu aur Satyam ko dekhti hai jaha teeno hi alag alag charpai pe besudh se so rahe thay

Maalti khud ko muskil se kabu karte hue apne pallu ko chor k aise hi apni khubsurat gadeiyon se apne chehra ka paseena pochne k liye jaise hi use chehre se lagati hai use kuch chipchipa sa mehsus hota hai.. par us chipchipahat main ek garmahat bhi thi

Es ehsaas ne Maalti k pure jism main ajeeb si sirhan bhar di thi use aisa lagta hai maano uska pura jism ek ajeeb se garmahat ko mehsus karne laga ho..

Maalti jaldi se us garam chipchipi cheez ko apni ungliyon main leke pehle apni aankhon se dekhti hai toh uski aankhen khud hi failti chali jaati hai aur phir jab apni naak k nazdik laake uski ajeeb si kamuk sugandh ko mehsush karti hai toh use apne jism main ek sath laakhon chitiyon k rengne jaisa mehsus hota hai

Bina bina kisi vilamb k apne jism se razai hatati hai toh ek aur ajeeb sa ascharya uska intizar kar raha tha wo dekhti hai uski saree kuch jada hi uske gore gore pairon se uper tak uthi hui hai.. yaha tak usne saree k neeche ho laal rang ki penty pehen rakhi thi use wo tak nazar aati hai

maano jaise kisi ne jaan k uski saree ko uthane ki koshish ki ho, par aisa kaise sambhav tha.. kiya wo itni gehri neend main thi ki use paat hi nahi chala ya ye uski sirf ek soch hai

Maalti aur jada dairi nahi karti aur apni jagah se uth k aangan main hi ek kinare lage chote se seese k samne aake khadi ho jaati hai jaha ab wo apne khubsurat chehre ko dekh rahi thi, par es samay uske chehre pe uski kamuk muskan nahi balki kuch gaada chipchipa sa laga hua tha jo uske mathe se behta hua uske honthon tak aa raha tha

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Maalti ka pura sarir aise akad sa jaata hai ki jaise kisi ne use murti main badal diya ho, wo na chahte hue bhi apni jeebh ko bahar nikal k apne honthon tak beh k aa chuke us gaade safed malai jaise chipchipe pradharth ko halka sa chakhti hai

Maalti ko jaise hi uska swad milta hai uske pura jism machal padta hai maano kisi ne uske bade bade estano ko muthi main bhar k jor se dabouch diya ho

Maalti ka jism kanpkapa sa jaata hai aur wo ek baar phir se apni jeebh nikal k use aur jada chakhti hai aur phir chakhti chali jati hai

Haal aisa hone lagta hai ki wo apni ek ungli se apne mathe aur khubsurat gaalon pe lage us gaade virya ko bhar k use apni munh main bhar leti hai.. uski garmahat ne Maalti ko ek baat toh bata di thi ki kisi ne kuch samay pehle ne uske khubsurat chehre ko apne hawas waale paani se bhigoya hai .. par kisne ?

Maalti phir se chappar k neeche dekhti hai jaha teeno bache gehri neend main so rahe thay

Par Esse pehle ki wo aur kuch tay kar paati uska antarman use rokne ki ek koshish si karta hai
'Pagal hai.. kiya kar rahi hai ye.. janti bhi hai kiska virya hai jise tu swad leke chakh rahi hai, kaisi aurat hai tu ?'

Maalti ka antarman use es prakar se jhanjhor deta hai ki uska pura sarir kaanpte hue vastvikta main laut aata hai

Maalti jaldi se apne pallu dwara apne chehre ko saaf karti hai.. aur apne man main ek apradh bodh liye hue wapas apni jagah pe aake razai odh k lait jaati hai

Uska man ek ajeeb si kasmakash main fasa rehta hai, kabhi wo us ajeeb sapne k bare main sochti.. toh kabhi apne khubsurat chehre pe us garam virya k bare main sochne lagti
'Kon kar sakta hai aisi harkat.. ye dusri baar hai jab uske sath aisa hua hai ?'

Inhi uljhan k beech kab use neend aa jati hai eska khud use bhi ehsaas nahi ho paata



Scene 🖼️ #02

Subha k 8 baje

'Maaa.. Maaa"

Maalti ko apne kaano main prem se bhari hui aawaz sunai padti hai.. wo apni aankhon ko malte hue apni jagah se uthi hai toh samne Monu ko dekh k uska din ban jata hai

Maalti jaldi se
"Are khada q hai.. edhar baith, tujhe mana kiya tha na kamre se bahar mat aaya kar, kitna kamjor hai abhi"

Monu muskurate hue charpai pe apni Maa k bagal main baith jata hai
"Maa aaj teesra din hai.. ab main theek hue

Aap log toh mujhe kuch karne hi nahi deta.. bus pura din bistar pe pade raho

Ghar se bahar toh kadam bhi nahi rakhne diya hai

Are ab main theek hu"


"Ha.. ha pata hai tu bada bahadur hai, par abhi itne samay k baad tujhe hosh aaya hai, esliye tera sarir bahut kamjor ho gaya hai.. aur Tyagi Bhai sahab ka bhi kehna hai abhi tujhe aaram ki jarurat hai"

Ye baat rasoi se haldi wala doodh leke aayi Savita kehti hai, wahi apne Badi Maa k hathon main doodh ka glass dekh k Monu bura sa munh banata hai

Savita- munh mat bana.. peena toh padega

Monu- (Maalti ki taraf dekhte hue) Maaa...aaaaaaaa

Maalti- (Haste hue) mujhe na dekh, bhabhi ki baat talne ki himmat toh Jeth ji tak main nahi hai.. main kuch nahi kar sakti, peena toh padega hi

Savita- (Monu k baalon main hath firate hue) Bada aya Maa wala.. chupchap doodh pi

Monu- (Muskurate hue Savita k mote mote gaay k thando jaise stano ko dekhte hue) Piyunga badi Maa.. jarur piyunga

Savita, Maalti k waha hone k karan bus use muskurate hue ghur k dekhti hai kuch bol nahi paati

Monu doodh peene k baad uthkar wapas apne kamre main chala jata hai.. wahi Savita bhi Doodh ka glass leke rasoi ki taraf jane lagti hai toh Maalti uska hath pakad leti hai aur use apne pass charpai pe baithne ka eshara karti hai

Savita- (Baithte hue) Kiya baat hai ?

Maalti- (Ek lambi saans chorte hue) Pata nahi bhabhi.. aisa q lag raha hai jaise abhi khatra tala nahi hai

Savita uski baat se puri tarah sehmat hoti hui nazar aati hai
"tu fikr mat kar.. ek baar Kundan aur Bhanu, Monu ko leke Delhi chale jaye phir main batati hu kiya karna hai"

Maalti sawal bhari nazron se Savita ko dekhte hue, jispe Savita khud hi aage bolne lagti hai
"Maine suna hai abhi kuch dino pehle pados k Gaon main 2 bahut pahuche hue tantrik aaye hai.. par tu toh janti hai hamare yaha k mard aur khas karke tera aur mera pati ye sab nahi manta, esliye moka dekh k main khud jaungi unse milne.. bus ye baat hum dono k beech rehne chahiye"

Maalti ha main sar hilate hue
"waise aap janti ho kiya un tantrik ko.. kiya naam hai"

Savita- janti toh nahi, par Nasreen bata rahi thi bahut pahuche hue hai.. aur unke naam.. ha.. unke naam thay
"Heera aur Panna swami"

Savita apni baat purn karte hue uth k Rasaoi ki taraf chal padti hai ki tabhi Maalti use phir se aawaz dete hue kehti hai
"Bhabhi mujhe ye toh nahi pata us din Tyagi ji aur aapne kiya kara.. par uske karan mera bacha theek ho gaya, main apna jeevan deke bhi eska ehsaan nahi utar paungi"

Savita- Pagal hai kiya.. esmain ehsaan kaisa, Monu mera bacha nahi hai kiya.. ha bol ?

Maalti ki aankhon main aansu bhar aaye thay.. esliye wo bus ha main sar hila k reh jaati hai

Wahi Savita Rasaoi main aake glass rakhte hue 3 din pehle jungle k pass jo hua us baare main sochne lagti hai

Maano jaise sab kuch uski aankhon k aage chalne laga ho



Scene 🖼️ #03

Theek 10 gante pehle..

Sonu aur Satyam gaon k andhere ko chirte hue aage bad rahe thay

Sonu- Bhaiya maine kaha tha torch le lete hai.. itna andhera hai ki kuch sujhai hi nahi pad raha

Satyam- (Haste hue) Chote hum jis kaam k liye ja rahe hai uske liye aisa hi andhera chahiye

Sonu- (Satyam ki baat pe has padta hai) waise aapko yakin hai wo hamare liye wo dawa bana dega

Satyam k hath main ek jhola jaisa tha.. wo usko thapthapate hue
"Esmain bada dhum hai, tum bus dekhta ja"

Jaldi hi dono bhai Gaon k ekant main bani ek choti si Jhopdi k bahar khade thay

Sonu, Satyam ko dekhta hai.. qki wo thoda ghabraya hua sa tha par Satyam ko dekh k aisa lag raha tha jaise ye sab uske liye koi badi baat na ho

Satyam- (Darwaje pe dastak dete hue) Bankelal Chacha.. Bankelal Chacha

Ab batane ki jarurat toh nahi ki ye dono es samay Bankelal ki Jhopdi k bahar hi khade hai

Kareeb 2 min baad us Jhopdi ka darwaja khulta hai aur koyle jaisa kaala bankelal jisne es samay sirf ek dhoti pehen rakhi aur uper se purn nanga tha.. wo itna kaala tha ki agar thodi duri pe khada ho toh aisi kaali raat main nazar bhi na aaye

Bankelal dono bachon ko waha dekh k hairani se
"Are Satyam tu yaha kiya kar raha hai.. aur ye.. Veeru ka beta hai na"

Sonu ha main apna sar hilata hai

Satyam Bankelal ko kinare karte hue Jhopdi k andar aa jata hai aue uske peeche peeche Sonu bhi

Jaha Jhopdi k andar es samay chulhe pe kuch pak raha tha, ab tak bankelal bhi andar aa chuka tha

"Kuch kaam tha ?"

Satyam- Ha Chacha.. bahut jaruri kaam hai

Bankelal sawal bhari nazron se dekhta hai, par kuch kehta nahi

Satyam hi aage bolta hai
"Mujhe neend k liye koi dawa chahiye"

Bankelal- Matlab.. tu kiya karega uska ?

Satyam ek baar Sonu ko dekhta hai aur phir bankelal ki taraf dekhte hue aage bolta hai
"Are ek saand hai jo roz raat hamare kheton main ghus k fasal bardad kar deta hai, main soch raha hu khet k aage k hisse main wo dawa paani main mila k daal du taki wo saand use kha k puri raat sota rahe aur subha subha jaldi jake use kaalihaud waale se pakdwa du"

Bankelal ko na jane q Satyam ki baaton pe yakin nahi hota

"Theek hai.. main kal dawa bana k Mahendra Bhaiya ko de dunga, tum dono abhi jao bahut raat ho rahi hai"

Bankelal ki baat sunkar Sonu toh dar se kaanp hi jata hai.. par Satyam apna sayyam nahi khota, wo us jhole se daru ki bottle nikalte hue
"Pitaji ko esmain layenge toh ye thodi milegi"

Paison k chakkar main pichle kuch dino se daru k liye tadapta hua Bankelal daru ki bottle dekhte hai uspe lapak padta hai.. par Satyam antim samay pe daru ki bottle kheech leta hai

"Neend ki dawa.. aur ye baat sirf hum teeno tak rehni chahiye, main nahi chahta itni choti si baat k liye Pitaji ya koi dusra pareshan ho"

Bankelal sak ki nazron se Satyam aur Sonu ko dekhta hai.. par samne daru ki bottle hone k karan uski buddhi purn bharst ho gayi thi

Wo jaldi se apne bistar k neeche se ek kajal ki pudiya nikal k use Satyam ki taraf badate hue
"Ye bahut taqatwar neend ki jadi buti hai, esko jara sa chutki bhar bhi paani ya kisi cheez main mila k kisi ko de do toh wo aise soyega ki bade bade bhukamp k jhatke bhi use jaga nahi payenge.. par eska asar sirf 4 gante hi rahega"

Satyam us pudiya ko lapak leta hai aur daru ki bottle Bankelal ki taraf bada deta hai
"Yaad rahe ki.."

Bankelal- (Beech main hi Satyam ki baat katte hue) ha.. ha.. ye baat sirf hum teeno k beech hi rahegi

Satyam us pudiya ko apni jaib main rakhta hai aur muskura k Sonu ko waha se chalne ka eshara kar deta hai

Jaldi hi dono waha se kaafi dur nikal aaye thay

Sonu- Satyam bhaiya.. ye sahi toh hai na, mujhe dar lag raha hai

Satyam- Maalti chachi chahiye ki nahi ?

Sonu jaldi jaldi ha main sar hilata hai

Satyam- (Muskurate hue) toh jaisa main kehta hu, karta ja.. phir dekhna wo din dur nahi jab hum dono milkar Maalti chachi ki chut aur gand main apna lund ek sath dalenge


Kareeb 2 gante baad ghar k aangan main pura pariwar jama hua tha.. sabhi bahut khus thay jiski wajah unke sath hi baitha hua Monu tha

Mahendra- Aakhir itne dino baad Tyagi ji ki mehnat aur unki jadi buti ne hamare Monu ko theek kar hi diya

Mahendra ki baat pe Bhanu ko chor k sabhi Tyagi ji ka gungan karne se khud ko rok nahi paate.. qki Bhanu k alawal kisi ko bhi Satya ka gyan nahi tha

Pura pariwar milkar aise hi agle 10-15 min tak baaten karte rehta hai ki tabhi Maalti kehti hai

"Aaj pata nahi itni neend q aa rahi hai ?"

Sattu- (Jo pass hi ek charpai pe baitha hua tha) Sahi kaha Chachi.. mujhe bhi aaj abhi se neend aa rahi hai

Mahendra apne hath ki gadi ko dekhte hue
"Raat k 11 toh baj hi rahe hai.. kal kaafi kaam hai, chalo sabhi log sone ki tayyari karo"

Savita- Sahi kaha aapne, par ab hume jaldi hi baki kamre kholne honge aur unki saaf safai karni hogi.. aise sab log yaha waha kab tak soyenge

Mahendra- Sahi kaha tumne.. ab tak Monu ki sehat ko leke hum itna pareshan thay ki kisi ko bhi apne aaram ki tanik bhi parwa nahi tha, par ab espe dhiyan dena jaruri hai

Mahendra- (Kundan ki taraf dekhte hue) Toh Delhi jane ka kiya hai ?

Kundan- Kal raat ki train hai.. par hum dono k jane k baad itne saare kaam.. ?

Mahendra kuch sochne k baad
"Tum dono uski parwa mat karo, Chakki ka kaam Veeru aur Sattu Sambhal lenge

Rahi baat Kheton ki toh.. Bhanu k kheton ki jimmedari main khud lunga, aur mere khet Satyam aur Sonu ki jimmedari honge

Tum(Kundan) aur Bhanu sirf jaldi se Delhi jake Monu k sabhi jaruri test karwao.. taki aage bhavishya main koi pareshani na ho

Par sath hi sath dono apna khayal bhi rakhna, qki khatra abhi tala nahi hai"

Es baar Bhanu bolta hai
"Tabhi toh main Kundan bhaiya ko akele nahi jane de raha hu.. khud bhi unke sath ja raha hu"

Bhanu ki baat sunkar sabse jada khushi Sheela ko hoti hai, ki uska Pati es pariwar k bare main kitna sochta hai

Wahi Bhanu man hi man
"Abhi main es sapole ko akela nahi chor sakta hu, kahi ese sab yaad aa gaya aur eski wajah se mera khel bigad gaya toh...

Nahi nahi.. abhi espe nazar rakhna bahut jaruri hai, aur agar jarurat padi toh Delhi k kisi samsaan main hi ese zinda gaad dunga"



Scene 🖼️ #04

Raat k kareeb 2 baje.. Maalti ki charpai k pass

"Satyam Bhaiya pakka na.. chachi nahi uthengi"

Satyam- tu dar mat, jo man chahe kar.. bus chudai hum tabhi karenge jab ye pure hosh main hogi

Sonu chappar k neeche padi charpai pe sote hue Sattu ko dekh k
"Aur Sattu bhaiya.. ?"

Satyam- Tu sochta bahut hai.. are wo neend ki dawa Maalti chachi k sath sath Sattu Bhaiya ko bhi di hai, esliye jada soch mat aur jut ja

Satyam ye kehte hue khud hi aage badkar Maalti k jism pe padi us bhari razai ko khech leta hai.. jisse saree main kaid Maalti ka husn khil uthta hai

Satyam itne pe hi nahi rukta.. wo jhukta hai aur Maalti ki saree ko uthana suru kar deta ha
i, aur tab tak uthata hai jab tak Maalti ki lala rang ki penty nazar nahi aane lagti

Wahi Sonu ne bina kisi vilamb k apne lund ko aazad kar diya tha aur es samay wo Maalti k khubsurat chehre k uper apne lund laate hue muskura k kehta hai

"Aaj toh Chachi ka chehra apne gaade virya se dhak dunga"

Continue...
Waah bhai kya come back kiya shukriya is dhamakedaar update ke liye
Aur bhai ho sake to ye laundo ki jagah kisi mature mard jaise bhanu aur malti ka scene create karwao bhai bahut intejar kr liya bhanu aur malti ka
Ab tak muje Mahendra aur malti satyam aur malti ka conversation jabardast lga
Bas ab bhanu aur malti savita tyagi ka scene create karwao bhai pls 🙏
 

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Update #14
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Scene 🖼️ #01


Subha k kareeb 4 baje

'Maalti.. Maalti'
Ye sabd aise thay jo lagatar Maalti ko uske kaano main sunai pad rahe thay.. par es aawaz ka estrot kaha hai ye wo dhund nahi pa rahi thi ki tabhi use ek thandi hawa ka kanpkapa dene wala jhoka mehsus hota hai

Hawa kuch jada hi thandi thi.. qki es ek pal main hi uska pura jism aise kaanp gaya tha maano sard ritu main kisi ne use purn nangi karke ratri main kisi nadi k beechon beech khada kar diya ho.. par ek min

Maalti toh sach main kisi nadi.. talab ya aisi hi kisi jagah thi, jaha dur dur tak jaha nazar daalo waha bus paani hi paani tha

"Ye.. ye.. main yaha kaise.. koi hai.. koi hai... ?"

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Maalti k andar bhay ka saaya ghar karne lagta hai, wo apne charo taraf dekhti hai jisse use jada dar mehsus hota hai use

Qki wo khud ko paani main khada hua paati hai jaha dur dur tak jaha nazar daalo waha sirf paani hi paani nazar aa raha tha

"Koi hai... Monu k Pitaji.. Savita Bhabhi.. Jeth ji... koi hai"

Maalti phir se darte hue apno ko yaad karti hai, par badle main pehle jaisa hi uttar milta hai, yaani purn shanti

Tabhi achanak use apne pairo k pass kuch halchal si mehsus hoti hai, wo paani main kuch kadam peeche hatti hai toh aisa mehsus hota hai wo apna pair hi na utha pa rahi ho, ya aisa laga ki kisi ne uske pairon ko apne majbut panjo main jakad liya ho

Par Maalti haar nahi manti aur apni purn taqat laga k peeche hatti hai

Tabhi wo dekhti hai ki paani ki satah se ek hath dhire dhire paani k uper aa raha hota hai.. phir uske baad ek chehra ubharna suru hota hai

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Maalti puri tarah ascharya main padi hui kabhi us aakriti ko paani se bahar aate hui dekh rahi thi toh kabhi apne charo taraf dur dur sirf paani ko dekhte hue aur jada gabra rahi thi

Achanak dur kabhi tez bijli khondhne ki aawaz sunai padti hai.. jisse Maalti ko us disha main dekhna hi padta hai

Par ye kiya dur dur tak ek baar phir se purn shanti thi.. Par es baar jab Maalti wapas paani main ubharti hui us akriti pe nazar daalti hai toh bus hairan hi reh jaati hai, qki ab waha ek stree khadi thi.. ha sayad stree hi thi

Par purn nangi avastha main jism pe ek kapde ka dhaaga tak nahi.. purn kisi navjat ki taraf bus nangi

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Wo stree muskurate hue achanak Maalti k samne khadi hui dikhti hai

Maalti ko samajh nahi aata ki achanak wo uske itne kareeb kaise aa gayi.. Jaise koi chalava ho

Tabhi us stree k mukh se sabd nikalte hai aur uske sath hi ek thandi sard hawa bhi Maalti k chehre se takrati hai.. Maalti ko aisa lagta hai jaise us stree k mukh k nikal rahe sabdo k karan uske chehre pe barf jamne lagi ho

Par Maalti k andar sirhan bharne ka kaam uske sabd kar rahe thay
"Tu badi khus hai.. tujhe lagta hai tera beta bach gaya.. ha hah ha hahaaaaahhaa"

Wo stree itna bol k aise hasti hai maano koi rakshak ho jiski karkas aawaz se Maalti ka purn jism thanda padne laga tha

Maalti- Kon.. Kon.. ho tum.. ?

Agle hi Pal us stree ne aage badkar Maalti ki kalai ko kaske jakad liya, uski pakad itni majbut thi ki Maalti ko apne jism main tevr thand aur kanpkapi si mehsus hoti hai

Stree- (Bhayanakar roop se haste hue) Maut hu.. tere bete ki maut

'Monu.................."

Maalti puri taqat lagakar apne bete ka naam leti hai kuch palon k liye uski aankhen bhi band ho gayi thi, par jab wapas wo apni aankhon ko kholti hai toh sab kuch badal chuka tha

Qki wo toh apni charpai pe laiti hui thi, sarir pe ek bhari razai thi par uska ek pair razai k bahar nikla hua tha.. jis karanwas use halki thand bhi mehsus hoti hai

Par es samay Maalti ko uski parwa nahi thi.. qki wo itna toh samajh chuki thi ki ye bus ek sapna tha, par aisa q tha ki ye sach se bhi jada sacha laga.. Maalti ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha

Use Mehsus hota hai ki itni bheesad thand main bhi, use paseena aa gaya tha.. wo jaldi se apne Pallu se apna paseena pochne ki liye jaise hi apna hath uthati hai uska purn jism maano kaanp uthta hai qki use apni kalai pe laal nishan dikhte hai maano jaise kisi ne uski kalai ko itne jor se pakda ho ki kuch palon k liye waha ka khoon jam gaya ho

Maali ka purn jism kisi nayi anhoni k bare soch k sihar sa jata hai, wo lambi lambi saanse lete hue khud ko kabu main karne ki purn koshish karne lagti hai.. tabhi use ehsaas hota hai subha ka aarambh ho chuka hai.. wo ghar main chappar k neeche hi sote hue Sonu, Sattu aur Satyam ko dekhti hai jaha teeno hi alag alag charpai pe besudh se so rahe thay

Maalti khud ko muskil se kabu karte hue apne pallu ko chor k aise hi apni khubsurat gadeiyon se apne chehra ka paseena pochne k liye jaise hi use chehre se lagati hai use kuch chipchipa sa mehsus hota hai.. par us chipchipahat main ek garmahat bhi thi

Es ehsaas ne Maalti k pure jism main ajeeb si sirhan bhar di thi use aisa lagta hai maano uska pura jism ek ajeeb se garmahat ko mehsus karne laga ho..

Maalti jaldi se us garam chipchipi cheez ko apni ungliyon main leke pehle apni aankhon se dekhti hai toh uski aankhen khud hi failti chali jaati hai aur phir jab apni naak k nazdik laake uski ajeeb si kamuk sugandh ko mehsush karti hai toh use apne jism main ek sath laakhon chitiyon k rengne jaisa mehsus hota hai

Bina bina kisi vilamb k apne jism se razai hatati hai toh ek aur ajeeb sa ascharya uska intizar kar raha tha wo dekhti hai uski saree kuch jada hi uske gore gore pairon se uper tak uthi hui hai.. yaha tak usne saree k neeche ho laal rang ki penty pehen rakhi thi use wo tak nazar aati hai

maano jaise kisi ne jaan k uski saree ko uthane ki koshish ki ho, par aisa kaise sambhav tha.. kiya wo itni gehri neend main thi ki use paat hi nahi chala ya ye uski sirf ek soch hai

Maalti aur jada dairi nahi karti aur apni jagah se uth k aangan main hi ek kinare lage chote se seese k samne aake khadi ho jaati hai jaha ab wo apne khubsurat chehre ko dekh rahi thi, par es samay uske chehre pe uski kamuk muskan nahi balki kuch gaada chipchipa sa laga hua tha jo uske mathe se behta hua uske honthon tak aa raha tha

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Maalti ka pura sarir aise akad sa jaata hai ki jaise kisi ne use murti main badal diya ho, wo na chahte hue bhi apni jeebh ko bahar nikal k apne honthon tak beh k aa chuke us gaade safed malai jaise chipchipe pradharth ko halka sa chakhti hai

Maalti ko jaise hi uska swad milta hai uske pura jism machal padta hai maano kisi ne uske bade bade estano ko muthi main bhar k jor se dabouch diya ho

Maalti ka jism kanpkapa sa jaata hai aur wo ek baar phir se apni jeebh nikal k use aur jada chakhti hai aur phir chakhti chali jati hai

Haal aisa hone lagta hai ki wo apni ek ungli se apne mathe aur khubsurat gaalon pe lage us gaade virya ko bhar k use apni munh main bhar leti hai.. uski garmahat ne Maalti ko ek baat toh bata di thi ki kisi ne kuch samay pehle ne uske khubsurat chehre ko apne hawas waale paani se bhigoya hai .. par kisne ?

Maalti phir se chappar k neeche dekhti hai jaha teeno bache gehri neend main so rahe thay

Par Esse pehle ki wo aur kuch tay kar paati uska antarman use rokne ki ek koshish si karta hai
'Pagal hai.. kiya kar rahi hai ye.. janti bhi hai kiska virya hai jise tu swad leke chakh rahi hai, kaisi aurat hai tu ?'

Maalti ka antarman use es prakar se jhanjhor deta hai ki uska pura sarir kaanpte hue vastvikta main laut aata hai

Maalti jaldi se apne pallu dwara apne chehre ko saaf karti hai.. aur apne man main ek apradh bodh liye hue wapas apni jagah pe aake razai odh k lait jaati hai

Uska man ek ajeeb si kasmakash main fasa rehta hai, kabhi wo us ajeeb sapne k bare main sochti.. toh kabhi apne khubsurat chehre pe us garam virya k bare main sochne lagti
'Kon kar sakta hai aisi harkat.. ye dusri baar hai jab uske sath aisa hua hai ?'

Inhi uljhan k beech kab use neend aa jati hai eska khud use bhi ehsaas nahi ho paata



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Subha k 8 baje

'Maaa.. Maaa"

Maalti ko apne kaano main prem se bhari hui aawaz sunai padti hai.. wo apni aankhon ko malte hue apni jagah se uthi hai toh samne Monu ko dekh k uska din ban jata hai

Maalti jaldi se
"Are khada q hai.. edhar baith, tujhe mana kiya tha na kamre se bahar mat aaya kar, kitna kamjor hai abhi"

Monu muskurate hue charpai pe apni Maa k bagal main baith jata hai
"Maa aaj teesra din hai.. ab main theek hue

Aap log toh mujhe kuch karne hi nahi deta.. bus pura din bistar pe pade raho

Ghar se bahar toh kadam bhi nahi rakhne diya hai

Are ab main theek hu"


"Ha.. ha pata hai tu bada bahadur hai, par abhi itne samay k baad tujhe hosh aaya hai, esliye tera sarir bahut kamjor ho gaya hai.. aur Tyagi Bhai sahab ka bhi kehna hai abhi tujhe aaram ki jarurat hai"

Ye baat rasoi se haldi wala doodh leke aayi Savita kehti hai, wahi apne Badi Maa k hathon main doodh ka glass dekh k Monu bura sa munh banata hai

Savita- munh mat bana.. peena toh padega

Monu- (Maalti ki taraf dekhte hue) Maaa...aaaaaaaa

Maalti- (Haste hue) mujhe na dekh, bhabhi ki baat talne ki himmat toh Jeth ji tak main nahi hai.. main kuch nahi kar sakti, peena toh padega hi

Savita- (Monu k baalon main hath firate hue) Bada aya Maa wala.. chupchap doodh pi

Monu- (Muskurate hue Savita k mote mote gaay k thando jaise stano ko dekhte hue) Piyunga badi Maa.. jarur piyunga

Savita, Maalti k waha hone k karan bus use muskurate hue ghur k dekhti hai kuch bol nahi paati

Monu doodh peene k baad uthkar wapas apne kamre main chala jata hai.. wahi Savita bhi Doodh ka glass leke rasoi ki taraf jane lagti hai toh Maalti uska hath pakad leti hai aur use apne pass charpai pe baithne ka eshara karti hai

Savita- (Baithte hue) Kiya baat hai ?

Maalti- (Ek lambi saans chorte hue) Pata nahi bhabhi.. aisa q lag raha hai jaise abhi khatra tala nahi hai

Savita uski baat se puri tarah sehmat hoti hui nazar aati hai
"tu fikr mat kar.. ek baar Kundan aur Bhanu, Monu ko leke Delhi chale jaye phir main batati hu kiya karna hai"

Maalti sawal bhari nazron se Savita ko dekhte hue, jispe Savita khud hi aage bolne lagti hai
"Maine suna hai abhi kuch dino pehle pados k Gaon main 2 bahut pahuche hue tantrik aaye hai.. par tu toh janti hai hamare yaha k mard aur khas karke tera aur mera pati ye sab nahi manta, esliye moka dekh k main khud jaungi unse milne.. bus ye baat hum dono k beech rehne chahiye"

Maalti ha main sar hilate hue
"waise aap janti ho kiya un tantrik ko.. kiya naam hai"

Savita- janti toh nahi, par Nasreen bata rahi thi bahut pahuche hue hai.. aur unke naam.. ha.. unke naam thay
"Heera aur Panna swami"

Savita apni baat purn karte hue uth k Rasaoi ki taraf chal padti hai ki tabhi Maalti use phir se aawaz dete hue kehti hai
"Bhabhi mujhe ye toh nahi pata us din Tyagi ji aur aapne kiya kara.. par uske karan mera bacha theek ho gaya, main apna jeevan deke bhi eska ehsaan nahi utar paungi"

Savita- Pagal hai kiya.. esmain ehsaan kaisa, Monu mera bacha nahi hai kiya.. ha bol ?

Maalti ki aankhon main aansu bhar aaye thay.. esliye wo bus ha main sar hila k reh jaati hai

Wahi Savita Rasaoi main aake glass rakhte hue 3 din pehle jungle k pass jo hua us baare main sochne lagti hai

Maano jaise sab kuch uski aankhon k aage chalne laga ho



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Theek 10 gante pehle..

Sonu aur Satyam gaon k andhere ko chirte hue aage bad rahe thay

Sonu- Bhaiya maine kaha tha torch le lete hai.. itna andhera hai ki kuch sujhai hi nahi pad raha

Satyam- (Haste hue) Chote hum jis kaam k liye ja rahe hai uske liye aisa hi andhera chahiye

Sonu- (Satyam ki baat pe has padta hai) waise aapko yakin hai wo hamare liye wo dawa bana dega

Satyam k hath main ek jhola jaisa tha.. wo usko thapthapate hue
"Esmain bada dhum hai, tum bus dekhta ja"

Jaldi hi dono bhai Gaon k ekant main bani ek choti si Jhopdi k bahar khade thay

Sonu, Satyam ko dekhta hai.. qki wo thoda ghabraya hua sa tha par Satyam ko dekh k aisa lag raha tha jaise ye sab uske liye koi badi baat na ho

Satyam- (Darwaje pe dastak dete hue) Bankelal Chacha.. Bankelal Chacha

Ab batane ki jarurat toh nahi ki ye dono es samay Bankelal ki Jhopdi k bahar hi khade hai

Kareeb 2 min baad us Jhopdi ka darwaja khulta hai aur koyle jaisa kaala bankelal jisne es samay sirf ek dhoti pehen rakhi aur uper se purn nanga tha.. wo itna kaala tha ki agar thodi duri pe khada ho toh aisi kaali raat main nazar bhi na aaye

Bankelal dono bachon ko waha dekh k hairani se
"Are Satyam tu yaha kiya kar raha hai.. aur ye.. Veeru ka beta hai na"

Sonu ha main apna sar hilata hai

Satyam Bankelal ko kinare karte hue Jhopdi k andar aa jata hai aue uske peeche peeche Sonu bhi

Jaha Jhopdi k andar es samay chulhe pe kuch pak raha tha, ab tak bankelal bhi andar aa chuka tha

"Kuch kaam tha ?"

Satyam- Ha Chacha.. bahut jaruri kaam hai

Bankelal sawal bhari nazron se dekhta hai, par kuch kehta nahi

Satyam hi aage bolta hai
"Mujhe neend k liye koi dawa chahiye"

Bankelal- Matlab.. tu kiya karega uska ?

Satyam ek baar Sonu ko dekhta hai aur phir bankelal ki taraf dekhte hue aage bolta hai
"Are ek saand hai jo roz raat hamare kheton main ghus k fasal bardad kar deta hai, main soch raha hu khet k aage k hisse main wo dawa paani main mila k daal du taki wo saand use kha k puri raat sota rahe aur subha subha jaldi jake use kaalihaud waale se pakdwa du"

Bankelal ko na jane q Satyam ki baaton pe yakin nahi hota

"Theek hai.. main kal dawa bana k Mahendra Bhaiya ko de dunga, tum dono abhi jao bahut raat ho rahi hai"

Bankelal ki baat sunkar Sonu toh dar se kaanp hi jata hai.. par Satyam apna sayyam nahi khota, wo us jhole se daru ki bottle nikalte hue
"Pitaji ko esmain layenge toh ye thodi milegi"

Paison k chakkar main pichle kuch dino se daru k liye tadapta hua Bankelal daru ki bottle dekhte hai uspe lapak padta hai.. par Satyam antim samay pe daru ki bottle kheech leta hai

"Neend ki dawa.. aur ye baat sirf hum teeno tak rehni chahiye, main nahi chahta itni choti si baat k liye Pitaji ya koi dusra pareshan ho"

Bankelal sak ki nazron se Satyam aur Sonu ko dekhta hai.. par samne daru ki bottle hone k karan uski buddhi purn bharst ho gayi thi

Wo jaldi se apne bistar k neeche se ek kajal ki pudiya nikal k use Satyam ki taraf badate hue
"Ye bahut taqatwar neend ki jadi buti hai, esko jara sa chutki bhar bhi paani ya kisi cheez main mila k kisi ko de do toh wo aise soyega ki bade bade bhukamp k jhatke bhi use jaga nahi payenge.. par eska asar sirf 4 gante hi rahega"

Satyam us pudiya ko lapak leta hai aur daru ki bottle Bankelal ki taraf bada deta hai
"Yaad rahe ki.."

Bankelal- (Beech main hi Satyam ki baat katte hue) ha.. ha.. ye baat sirf hum teeno k beech hi rahegi

Satyam us pudiya ko apni jaib main rakhta hai aur muskura k Sonu ko waha se chalne ka eshara kar deta hai

Jaldi hi dono waha se kaafi dur nikal aaye thay

Sonu- Satyam bhaiya.. ye sahi toh hai na, mujhe dar lag raha hai

Satyam- Maalti chachi chahiye ki nahi ?

Sonu jaldi jaldi ha main sar hilata hai

Satyam- (Muskurate hue) toh jaisa main kehta hu, karta ja.. phir dekhna wo din dur nahi jab hum dono milkar Maalti chachi ki chut aur gand main apna lund ek sath dalenge


Kareeb 2 gante baad ghar k aangan main pura pariwar jama hua tha.. sabhi bahut khus thay jiski wajah unke sath hi baitha hua Monu tha

Mahendra- Aakhir itne dino baad Tyagi ji ki mehnat aur unki jadi buti ne hamare Monu ko theek kar hi diya

Mahendra ki baat pe Bhanu ko chor k sabhi Tyagi ji ka gungan karne se khud ko rok nahi paate.. qki Bhanu k alawal kisi ko bhi Satya ka gyan nahi tha

Pura pariwar milkar aise hi agle 10-15 min tak baaten karte rehta hai ki tabhi Maalti kehti hai

"Aaj pata nahi itni neend q aa rahi hai ?"

Sattu- (Jo pass hi ek charpai pe baitha hua tha) Sahi kaha Chachi.. mujhe bhi aaj abhi se neend aa rahi hai

Mahendra apne hath ki gadi ko dekhte hue
"Raat k 11 toh baj hi rahe hai.. kal kaafi kaam hai, chalo sabhi log sone ki tayyari karo"

Savita- Sahi kaha aapne, par ab hume jaldi hi baki kamre kholne honge aur unki saaf safai karni hogi.. aise sab log yaha waha kab tak soyenge

Mahendra- Sahi kaha tumne.. ab tak Monu ki sehat ko leke hum itna pareshan thay ki kisi ko bhi apne aaram ki tanik bhi parwa nahi tha, par ab espe dhiyan dena jaruri hai

Mahendra- (Kundan ki taraf dekhte hue) Toh Delhi jane ka kiya hai ?

Kundan- Kal raat ki train hai.. par hum dono k jane k baad itne saare kaam.. ?

Mahendra kuch sochne k baad
"Tum dono uski parwa mat karo, Chakki ka kaam Veeru aur Sattu Sambhal lenge

Rahi baat Kheton ki toh.. Bhanu k kheton ki jimmedari main khud lunga, aur mere khet Satyam aur Sonu ki jimmedari honge

Tum(Kundan) aur Bhanu sirf jaldi se Delhi jake Monu k sabhi jaruri test karwao.. taki aage bhavishya main koi pareshani na ho

Par sath hi sath dono apna khayal bhi rakhna, qki khatra abhi tala nahi hai"

Es baar Bhanu bolta hai
"Tabhi toh main Kundan bhaiya ko akele nahi jane de raha hu.. khud bhi unke sath ja raha hu"

Bhanu ki baat sunkar sabse jada khushi Sheela ko hoti hai, ki uska Pati es pariwar k bare main kitna sochta hai

Wahi Bhanu man hi man
"Abhi main es sapole ko akela nahi chor sakta hu, kahi ese sab yaad aa gaya aur eski wajah se mera khel bigad gaya toh...

Nahi nahi.. abhi espe nazar rakhna bahut jaruri hai, aur agar jarurat padi toh Delhi k kisi samsaan main hi ese zinda gaad dunga"



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Raat k kareeb 2 baje.. Maalti ki charpai k pass

"Satyam Bhaiya pakka na.. chachi nahi uthengi"

Satyam- tu dar mat, jo man chahe kar.. bus chudai hum tabhi karenge jab ye pure hosh main hogi

Sonu chappar k neeche padi charpai pe sote hue Sattu ko dekh k
"Aur Sattu bhaiya.. ?"

Satyam- Tu sochta bahut hai.. are wo neend ki dawa Maalti chachi k sath sath Sattu Bhaiya ko bhi di hai, esliye jada soch mat aur jut ja

Satyam ye kehte hue khud hi aage badkar Maalti k jism pe padi us bhari razai ko khech leta hai.. jisse saree main kaid Maalti ka husn khil uthta hai

Satyam itne pe hi nahi rukta.. wo jhukta hai aur Maalti ki saree ko uthana suru kar deta ha
i, aur tab tak uthata hai jab tak Maalti ki lala rang ki penty nazar nahi aane lagti

Wahi Sonu ne bina kisi vilamb k apne lund ko aazad kar diya tha aur es samay wo Maalti k khubsurat chehre k uper apne lund laate hue muskura k kehta hai

"Aaj toh Chachi ka chehra apne gaade virya se dhak dunga"

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Nice update bro 👍 bahut der se diye par acha laga update
 
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Outstanding Update !
To Tyagi ne monu ko utha hi diya but kis kimat pe ?
Aur Sonu bhi malti maa ki lena chahta hai, Launda Jawan Ho Gya Hai !
Hira Panna Bhi Aa gye Baba Ke Character me, Dekhte hai kya karte hai ye dono
Banu Kuch To Planning Kar Raha hai Delhi Me Karne Ke Liye


Monu ke liye savita maa aur tyagi ke bich kya huwa iski jhalak ke intezar me !
Thank You R_Raj Bhai for Amazing Comment 🙏

Sonu ki jawani ki jhalak pehle bhi dikhayie thi par ab wo Satyam k sath milkar badi udhan bharna chahta hai

Savita aur Tyagi k beech jo hua wo sab aapko next update se pata chalega

Rahi Bhanu ki baat toh jaldi hi kuch kamuk hoga usse jod k
 
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Nice update bro 👍 bahut der se diye par acha laga update
Thank You insotter Bhai

Next update main koi dairi nahi hogi, almost 30% pura kar chuka hu

Complete hote hai aap sabhi k samne hoga
 
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Bhai waiting for more 🙏
Jaldi do bhai
Dhanyawaad Mitra meri himmat badane k liye 🙏@fuckre

NXT Update 30% pura kar chuka hu, jaldi hi pura complete karke Post karunga
 
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Waah bhai kya come back kiya shukriya is dhamakedaar update ke liye
Aur bhai ho sake to ye laundo ki jagah kisi mature mard jaise bhanu aur malti ka scene create karwao bhai bahut intejar kr liya bhanu aur malti ka
Ab tak muje Mahendra aur malti satyam aur malti ka conversation jabardast lga
Bas ab bhanu aur malti savita tyagi ka scene create karwao bhai pls 🙏
Shukriya Mukhtar Bhai for Amazing Support 🙏

Yaha Mature mardo ki koi kami nahi hai, par abhi kuch dino tak kahani main Bhanu aur Kundan Delhi k safar pe rahenge.. jaha unke apne kamuk adventure milenge

Aur yaha Gaon main Maalti aapko Tyagi, Rocky, Mahendra aur Satyam k sath kamukta ki udhan bharte hue nazar aayegi
 
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Thank You rkv66 Bhai for Like 👍 N Support
 
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Badi Maa 'Savita' is ready... 😉
 
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Dhanyawaad Rinkp219 Mitra for Like 👍 N Support
 
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