Writer Bhai aapne ek achi story likhi tabhi to itni pages tak chli ayi
Aur mujhe padh ke aisa lga jaise aap Ravi naam ke charecter ke roop me khud ki fantasy likh rahe hai aur isme bhi koi shak nhi hai ki apko Deepika naam ke charecter se itna pyaar hai ki use kisi aur ke sath aap soch bhi nhi sakte
Lekin is lambi story me ek baat mujhe sahi nhi lgi ki ek taraf ravi jisko sab story ka hero keh rahe hai wo chut ka itna deewana hai ki usko jitni chute mile utni hi kam hai romantic sex bhi sirf Deepika ke sath karta hai baaki sabke sath apni garmi nikalta hai
To deepika jo ki achi mahila hai bhale hi wo ravi se pyaar karti hai lekin uske bhi Ravi ke alawa kisi aur ke sath bhale hi adhure man ke sath 1 ya 2 sex scene hone hi chahiye jaise ekbaar wo ravi aur neema ke bare me pta chalne ke baad gussa hui thi
Bhale hi deepika apne man se n sahi blki ravi se badla lene me gusse me ya jalan me ravi ke alawa kisi aur sath sambandh banati to story thodi balance hoti baad me jab Ravi ko ye jhatka lagta to use bhi ek sabak milta ki jab tumhare pyaar ke sath koi garmi nikalta hai to kaisa lgta hai jab tumhara pyaar kisi aur ke sath ye sab karta hai to kaisa lgta hai
Gupta ne jabardasti kiya wo bilkul support ke layak nhi tha lekin story ke charecter prakash ka use kiya ja sakta tha lekin afsos ye story sirf Ravi ki fantacy bn kar reh gyi
Baaki maine apki story padhi apke erotic scene bahut ache lge