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[mrDevi]

Dreams (Thriller)​

Written by- mrDevi ​

Rating – 8/10​

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Story Review:
A compelling psychological thriller that have elements such as murder mystery, betrayel and what not. Kahani Vikram Rathod ke ird gird ghumti hai jo hai to ek IT developer lekin uski life turn leti hai jab use ek murder ke liye frame kiya jata hai, Vikram ko sapne aate hai 'Dreams' jisme wo police officer hota hai aur usi crime ko investigate karta hai jisme wo fasa hua hota hai. It is revealed as memories from parallel world. Story craftfully builds necessary suspense and intersting twists and turns.
Pros : unique plotline is a major plus for this story kahani kuch hatke hai isiliye padhne me maja aata hai, sath hi aap reality aur dream me difference bata pate ho thanks to color and fonts. Main character strong hai hai well written hai sath hi narration ka flow bhi bahut badhiya tarike se maintain kiya gaya hai. Sath hi end bhi jordar hai jaha parallel world ki theory reveal hoti hai.
Cons: End jaha jordar hai wahi wo ek abrupt feel bhi deta hai, most of the things remain unanswered. Dreams kyu aa rahe hai, kya ho raha hai kyu ho raha hai, iska kahi bhi kisi bhi tarah ka koi explanation nahi hai aur ye kahani ko clueless bana deta hai jaha main motive hi clear nahi ho pata, antagonist fully developed nahi hai, thoda aur gehrai se plot par kaam karte to it could have been better. Overall a good read.

Thank you so much, will try to write much better next time..

 

[mrDevi]

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[Aakash.]

Congratulations harshit1890 sir SANJU ( V. R. ) bhai Riky007 bhai Euphoria

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[Aakash.]

Aakash bhaiya Thank you
And Congrats

Pleasure ​

 

[Aakash.]

Thank you so much everyone

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[Aakash.]

Congratulations all

harshit1890
SANJU ( V. R. )
Aakash. 2-2 award party chahiye mujhe
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vakharia
Shivani guptaa

Thanx aur party tumhe dena chahiye ​

 

[Aakash.]

Congratulations
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Aakash. Maha tharki lala
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aise kon bolta hai kallu ​

 

[Aakash.]

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