Incest परदे मे रहने दो_परदा ना हटाओ

[THE snjv]

Bhanu or woh Banda Jo seedha chadhta jaa Raha tha uski achche gand todni chahiye
Maandakini ki kaha tow alag hi nikli yeh Pyar ki bhooki bethi h
Baherhal dekhte h ab aage kia hota h

Bhai jo socha hota aksar wo vaisa hota nahi __ different features nikal ke samne aate h jab usse jaanne lagte h toh aisa hee kuch ynha bhi h

 

[THE snjv]

Manna pdega kafi achi likh rhe ho story kafi intresting part de rhe ho suspense ke sath lekin ek bat samj nahi aayii achnak se sabhi dosto ke message ya call Q nahi aa rhe hai Hero ko ab or aakhir uski Family ka kya chkkar hai ya uski Family bhi wahe hai jaha wo khud hai lekin samne nahi aa rha hai koi ya janta he nahi hai ye bat koi

Bhai abhi itni detailing nahi aati h pr koshish jaari h ki aachi hee likhu __ sab samne hoga par apne waqt pe __ sukriya bhai

 

[THE snjv]

Bilkul sahi kaha bhai, interfaith me yaha story nhi likhi jati yaha bas samne wale ko nicha dikhana aur ek gharelu aurat ko kisi bazaru ki tarah dikhana hi inki kahani hai......

Par kya kar sakte h unka chalta h kyuki wo aise hee h aur syd uss tarah ki story demand karne wale bhi ussi categorie mey aate h

 

[THE snjv]

Waiting for update

Posted bhai

 

[THE snjv]

Bhai bahut time bad koi esi story padhi hai jise padhke curiosity badhti ja rahi hai aur tumhari kahani ka Hero to bhai ek number nikal, Hero sahi me esa hi hona chahiye jo samne wale ke samajh se pare ho,bahut hi badhiya likh rha hai Bhai, apne hisab se likhte rahna, yaha gyanchando ki koi kami nhi hai ha koi acha suggestion de to theek baki faltu me story bigad mat dena,.....

Bas ab is parde ke girne ka intezar hai....
Update regular dete rahna...
Good luck brother

Haa bhai jald hee gira dunga parda __ mera manna ye h ki bhale hee ye adult platform h par jo kahaniyaan likh rahe h wo kam se kam kahani ke sath insaaf toh kare pr aisa jyadatar storytelling mey nahi h __ bas ek tarfa chalta rahta h jaise wo Apni khud ki kahani likh rahe ho__ par koi na ynha aachi kahani bhi h aur mai compromise toh hargiz nahi krta na ynha na wnha __ sukriya bhai

 

[Akash18]

Haa bhai jald hee gira dunga parda __ mera manna ye h ki bhale hee ye adult platform h par jo kahaniyaan likh rahe h wo kam se kam kahani ke sath insaaf toh kare pr aisa jyadatar storytelling mey nahi h __ bas ek tarfa chalta rahta h jaise wo Apni khud ki kahani likh rahe ho__ par koi na ynha aachi kahani bhi h aur mai compromise toh hargiz nahi krta na ynha na wnha __ sukriya bhai

Bhai adult platform hai par iska matlab ye to nhi ke bas sex ke alawa kuch ho hi na story me, storyline jaruri hai yr....
bahut badhiya likhte ho tum aur I hope story me bahut twist and turn aane wale hai to intzaar rahega parda uthne ka...

 

[Gajodhar]

Nice update

 

[Kuchnahi24]

Good Storyline, story is progressing like a screenplay, a lot of things yet to come,
Writing style is very natural fells good without unnecessary hype. Great going bhai

 

[urc4me]

Romanchak. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki

 

[THE snjv]

Bhai adult platform hai par iska matlab ye to nhi ke bas sex ke alawa kuch ho hi na story me, storyline jaruri hai yr....
bahut badhiya likhte ho tum aur I hope story me bahut twist and turn aane wale hai to intzaar rahega parda uthne ka...

Baat toh sahi h bhai tum kuch different kyu nahi likhte apne tareeke se likho__ sab enjoy karenge