Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

[Asif khan]

Waiting

 

[Jerry]

Waiting bha

 

[bondjamesbond09]

Ruhi ne “wait, wait, wait” kaha, phir thoda reverse lene ko kaha, Abhi ke left mein ek bahot khubsurat makaan tha jisski gate Shweta ko utar kar jaakar kholna tha, tab electronic door nahin lagaya gaya tha, (aaj woh gate remote se khulta hai)

Ruhi ne jhuk kar apne donon haathon

bhai yahan do jagah ruhi likha hai sweta ana chahiye tha

 

[Nayan Radhee]

Casi bhai plz update kardo yaar
Kahani ek aisi mod p ruki hai k wait nahin ho raha

 

[Casinar]

Casi bhai janta hoon weekend mein aap vyast rehte ho family ke saath fir bhi hamein intejar hai bhai thodi der se hi sahi update aega jarur

sahi kaha Bai, aaj wife k saath shopping ke liye jaana tha, magar update kal raat ko likh chuka hoon jo thodi der mein post karunga....
jaisa ke main ne pehle keh diya tha ke yeh kahani mere dil ke bahot kareeb hai issi liye issko weekends par bhi update karta hon der se hi sahi....
to kuch counter replies ke baad aaj ka update post karta hoon bai maybe 30 se 40mins baad thanks for waiting aap sab ko yaaro

 

[Casinar]

bhai yahan do jagah ruhi likha hai sweta ana chahiye tha

bahot shukriya James yaara... hahahahaha pata hai main aur kitne jagahon par ruhi likha tha?
bahot edit kiya post karne se pehle phir bi yeh reh gaya.... abhi correct karta hoon James bro, thanks very mich yaara
Kamaal hei itne logon ne padhke reoply kiye kissi ne bhi note nahin kiya ke Shweta ki jagah Ruhi ka naam likha tha main ne
Ab correct kar diya main ne James bhai

 

[Casinar]

Casi bhai lajawab story likhi hai aapne bilkul alag hi plot h iska ekdum naptol ke aapne har ek update me explain kiya hai.

Ek question tha bhai ki ye story real hai to kya iske characters bhi sabhi real hai kya?

55th update me jaise ki aapne explain kiya hai us hisab se lagta hai ki Shweta kahi na kahi Ruhi ki beti lag rahi hai ek andaza lagaya hai bhai mene ab kya ye shach hai ki nahi wo aap hi jane.
Very nice story bhai.

Mbindas bhai aap ka thread par tehe dil se swagat hai
main ne dekha tha aap ke likes pichle kuch updates par aur soch hi raha tha ke
banda padh to raha hai magar ek review kyun nahin de raha....
Bindas bhai, aap ko pata hi hoga ke ek writer ko sabse ziada passand wohi hota hai ke readers usski kahani ko padhe to kuch to kahe, har ek update ke badle ek do lavz to kahe, taarif nah sahi kuch to bole ke update acha laga ya nahin, main bhi issi intezaar mein rehta hoon ke padhne wala kuch to reply kare har ek update ke baad....
To jab dekhta hon ke aap baaki kahaniyon par ke har ek update ke baad replies karte ho baar baar, waiting bhi post karte ho, apni raai dete ho... to main sochne laga ke mere thread par kyun yeh banda reply nahin karta....
Aur aaj aap ki reply dekh kar mujhe bahot achcha laga aur khushi hui. isske liye aap ka aabhaari hoon bhai..
aap ne last update tak padh liya aur reply sirf ek aya
kitni khushi hoti mujhe agar aap shuru se saath saath padhte chalte aur har ek update par kuch nah kuch kahte to...
khair koyi baat nahin der aaye durust aaye, aur mujhe bahot khushi hui
jo sawaal aap ne kiya to haan.... yeh ek REAL beeti hui kahani hai... matlab hakikat mein sab guzra hua hai, ek ek pal jo iss kahani mein bayaan kiya ja raha hai sab hakikat mein hua hai bhai... jaise ke aap ne last update mein padha ke kamdev aur Vikram bhai ko iss sachayyi ke baare mein pata hai.....
raha Ruhi ki beti wali baat, mujhe pata hai tamaan readers ko shuru se hi iss baat par doubt hai to issko abhi ke liye spoiler kyun banyein bhai kuch aur updates ke baad sab saamne aa hi jaega...
aap saath bane rehiye bhai aap ko bhi pata chal hi jajega.
Haan characters REAL hein aur sab jivit hein ek ke siva....... Abhi character sab padh raha hai aaj...... naam of course badle hein main ne magar surname REAL hai Ruhi ki family ki.
Ruhi, shweta Abhi ye sab naam badla hua hai taake koyi real mein unnko pehchaan nah paaye.... jinn dinon Abhi ne uss aangan mein kaam kiya tha sab EXACTLY weise hi guzre the.... wo sab uss diary mein EXACT weise hi likha hua hai ENGLISH mein.... yahan main ne apne lavzon mein HINGLISH mein pesh kiya hai
bahot shukriya ek baar aur Bindas bhai sach mein mujhe bahot khushi hui aap ko iss thread par dekh kar

 

[aman rathore]

sahi kaha Bai, aak wife k saath shopping ke liye jaana tha, magar update kal raat ko likh chuka hoon jo thodi der mein post karunga....
jaisa ke main ne pehle keh diya tha ke yeh kahani mere dil ke bahot kareeb hai issi liye issko weekends par bhi update karta hon der se hi sahi....
to kuch counter replies ke baad aaj ka update post karta hoon bai maybe 30 se 40mins baad thanks for waiting aap sab ko yaaro

Bahot hi besabri se intazar hai bhai

 

[Casinar]

Bahot hi besabri se intazar hai bhai

15 mins baad post karta hoon Aman bhai

 

[Casinar]

Waah Bhai kya story likha h aapne
Khud me Abhi Ko imagine krta ab iss story ke update ka besabri se intjaar rhega

Thanks for sharing such a lovely story with us

Are bhai kahan the yaar. Aap ko miss kiya main ne iss thread par. Main to iss umeed mein tha ke aap ka saath shuru se rahega, magar aap to ghaayab the...
Anyway welcome bhai, ab saath bane rehiyega dost.
Thanks very much bhai.