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Thriller The cold night (वो सर्द रात) (completed)

Avaran

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Khoob maje liye ho man, per apun bhi iska jabaab denga. :hide2:
Majee lene wale kam hi kiye .
Jawab ke liye Itna Lamba review likha Ju Malum pure 1.5 ghante mein likha Ye
 
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Story - The cold Night
Writer - Legend The Goat Raj Sharma
:thank_you:
Hero - shankar , SaJJan purush duniya ka masehaa . satya wadi har*****ndra
Sachai ka Rakshak Jisko Koi na hara Sakta .

*Seema ki ch*t bhi legaya
*Apne baap ko bhi Kiye ki sazaa Dilwa di kyuki Iske maa ke sath bura kiya Thaa .
*Court mein ek Acha sajjan Purush hone nate gawahi di aur romesh ko uske Karmo ke liye sajaa dilwa kar Nayay ki sthapana Ki .
*Baap ki property bhi Lile garibo mein baatega Ab.

Villain - Romesh bura Karne wala End mein kiye ki Sazaa mili .
*Jail gaya .
* duniya bhar ka kala paisa kamaya
* criminal ke cases ladta thaa Issilye writer ne isko Jail bhijwa diya
* vijay police wala Romesha ka Dushman thaa aur Vijay ke promotion badha mein daal Raha Thaa issilye Writer ne Romesh ko Jail bhijwaya .

Vaishali - Hamara villian Romesh isko chhichore ki Tarah chhed ta Thaa issilye viashali ne Case ladh kar romesh ko galat karne Par Jail Bhijawa diya .

Seema - charitra Waan aur Pati vrata mahila , Romesh iske sath hinsa karta thaa lekin fir bhi ye pati ki loyal Rahi kyuki Bahut sushil nari thee .Romesh se be Intehaan pyaar kiya lekin Romesh To gaddar Thaa ,Chhihora Thaa , kapti papi , buddhi heen, kala Paisa Rakhne wala Thaa Lekin writer ko laga Romesh samaj ke liye Theek nahi ek kaam karte hai iski Fielding laga dete hain .

Ye kuch character story ke thee .
:roll:
Lets Stars Review
Kahani ke STARTING 31 UPDATES absolute mindblowing bahut shandaar Har update mein Apna Alag Twist Rehta..
Lekin Ending ke liye jeetni gaali khao utna kam , kaam hi aisa kiya .
:hide2:
Starting hi ek Murder Mystery se huwi , shuru mein laga Vaishali story ki mukhya character Hai , lekin Romesh ke Entry ke Baad sare bharam Tutt Jate hai lekin Jis Tarah Ending mein vaishali sudden Rise huwi waha Fir laga ki vaishali hi mukhya character Thee .

Lekin fir bhi mere liye kahani ka sabse main character Romesh Thaa
Asli hero wahi tha dost, baaki to side character the:thumbup:
Romesh ki pehle Galti Apne samjhdari par ghamand karna Janardhan ke case mein Romesh ko laga sara khel wo khel Raha lekin asal khel shankar Mayadas aur seema khel Gaye .
Sahi pakde hain, dhokha hui gawa:sigh:
Dusri Galti seema par andha vishwash .
Ek baat kehna chahta hu shayad koi lady ya Man bura bhi mane lekin Fact hai
Late Night Party Karne Jaye aur Opposite Gender freind aapko ghar chhode aaye fir aise 90% logo ke partners hamesha dhoka ka shikaar hote hai .( Its an harsh reality in society )
Ye baat dono gender pe Lagu Rehti hoti hai .
Isse acha Partner ke Sath Dinner bahaar dinner kar aao .waise To daru buri cheej Lekin aadat Hai To friend ke Sath Ghar ke Roof Par drink Karo.Relationship ke liye Partner ke sath Jitna Jyada samay bitayenge Utna Relationship ke liye better Rehta .

Romesh ko bhi usse Patni prem ne fasa diya .shankar aur Mayadas iss game ke sabse badi khildi thee .
Bilkul theek kaha, patni prem hi use le dooba, varna Romesh ko hara sake wo sum vijay me aur uski biwi me bhi nahi tha:nope: Emotional fool ban gaya mera dost Romesh :cry:
Vijay aur Romesh dono kahani ke nayak thee , ant mein aagar Romesh Jeeta To vijay lose karta hi lekin yaha kuch Better hota aur solution Nikal Sakta thaa .
Kuch na kuch Rasta thaa jisse dono ko nuksan na Hota
Rasta tab bhi tha dost, bas Romesh khud nahi chahta tha.:cry2:
Mein samjhta hu Ju ka Point ki Romesh qatil thaa usee saja dilwani thee lekin
Kya usee bada ghunha shankar ne nahi kiya Kya , aagar ju chahte thee ki galat sandesh na Jaye To shankar kyo kaam sajaa mein bach gaya .

Galat yaha romesh aur shankar dono thee . sirf sahi sandesh ke liye sirf Romesh ki kyu bali di .
Real life games ki tarah khela hua yaha per, real life me bhi to aajkal yahi hota hai, yahi soch kar apun , yani Romesh ne ye nirnay liya tha:roll: Ab apun ko kya maaloom tha ju sab apun ko gaali doge:esc:

Yaha mein vijay se bhi khaffa hu kya vijay ka kartavy aur aadarsh Itna bade thee ki Romesh ke sath Jo huwa uska sach Janne ke baad bhi usne kuch na kiya .kya unki dosti yahi thee ki End mein Romesh ko fasaya gaya fir bhi usne kuch na kiya , aur case bhi Reopen hone se na roka .Yaha mein seema ke case baat na kar raha J n reddy wala case ki Baat Kar Rahaa . vijay End mein Apne Wardi ke Promotion ke liye gaya.
Jo ki dikhta Hai wo Bhi Selfish Thaa apni promotion ke liye .
Warna vijay ke pass choice thee ki Romesh ko bachaye Duniya ko bataye Romesh ke sath Kya khel khela gaya .Uh
Sab log selfish they bhai, bas Romesh and Vaishali ko chhod kar:cry2:
Yaha pura story ka summary Yahi Thaa
Romesh mohra Thaa Baji kisi aur ne kheli Romesh Samjhadar Thaa lekin Emotions mein Galati kiya .
Pehli walle murder ko analysis kare To Uss samay ham Romesh ko emotional ka bahana nahi de sakte kyuki wo murder Romesh ke Patni ke sath Jo kuch Huwa Uske bahut Time Baad huwa, uss samay romesh soch sakta Thaa . kyuki ek High Iq wala insaan Jaldi emotions ko control kar sakta thaa .
Uska emotional hona hi usko le dooba dost:sigh:
lekin dusra murder wo emotional thaa us Situation mein Romesh kya ache se acha samjhdaar vyakti apne partner ko kisi ke sath dekh yahi karta .
Unfortunately law emotions nahi dekte.
:yes1:And ju ye bhi to socho apun ko kitna law padhna pada hoga🙄
Aur Law ki dusri sabse badi khami law insaan ke Intentions nahi dekhta warna
JN reddy ke Jaise currpt logo marne walo ko Inaam dena chahiye ,

Romesh JN Reddy se public ko mukt hi To karwana chahta thaa , kya kabhi suna hai court ki wajah se neta ko suli par chadha diya .
Apun nawa nawa tha iss liye jaldi khatam kar diya, varna sabko acche se pelta:roll:
 
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Sarcasm kaisa thaa
:hide2:

Asli hero wahi tha dost, baaki to side character the:thumbup:

Sahi pakde hain, dhokha hui gawa:sigh:

Bilkul theek kaha, patni prem hi use le dooba, varna Romesh ko hara sake wo sum vijay me aur uski biwi me bhi nahi tha:nope: Emotional fool ban gaya mera dost Romesh :cry:
Ju ne hi Romesh ke l lagaye
Rasta tab bhi tha dost, bas Romesh khud nahi chahta tha.:cry2:
Romesh ke ya Writer nahi chahta thaa
Real life games ki tarah khela hua yaha per, real life me bhi to aajkal yahi hota hai, yahi soch kar apun , yani Romesh ne ye nirnay liya tha:roll: Ab apun ko kya maaloom tha ju sab apun ko gaali doge:esc:
Gaali wale kaam kiye To gali milega hi sahi
Real mein yahi situation dekhte hai issilye chahte hai ki real mein nahi sahi
Reel mein Hi nayay ho
Sab log selfish they bhai, bas Romesh and Vaishali ko chhod kar:cry2:

Uska emotional hona hi usko le dooba dost:sigh:

:yes1:And ju ye bhi to socho apun ko kitna law padhna pada hoga🙄
Its liye appreciation research kaffi karte ho ju story ke liye
Apun nawa nawa tha iss liye jaldi khatam kar diya, varna sabko acche se pelta:roll:
Hai isse pehle bhi story likhe ho aur hamare ko bol rahe nawa ho
 
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Sarcasm kaisa thaa
Must.. :good:
Ju ne hi Romesh ke l lagaye
:nana: Apun ne kuch na kiya, apun shareef aadmi hai.
Romesh ke ya Writer nahi chahta thaa
Maine nahi Romesh ne 👍 aajkal ki reality yahi hai, 5 me se 2 apradhi bach nikalte hai aajkal🙂 maine bas usko waise hi dikhane ki kosis ki hai.
Gaali wale kaam kiye To gali milega hi sahi
Real mein yahi situation dekhte hai issilye chahte hai ki real mein nahi sahi
Reel mein Hi nayay ho
Sab log end accha chahte hain, per bura bhi to ho sakta hai ? Khair apun samajh gaya ki Romesh ko bacha kar sankarwa ko fasana tha apun ko, next time mila to apun uski chaa mood dega:declare:
Its liye appreciation research kaffi karte ho ju story ke liye
karna padta hai varna apun ki story kon padega:suicide:
Hai isse pehle bhi story likhe ho aur hamare ko bol rahe nawa ho
Tumne padhi hai kya?:?:
 

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Tumne padhi hai kya?:?:

No Romance mein Na padhta jyada
Khass kar college wala romance

Romance ki wajah se hi mein yug purush 8 th semester bhi adhi bich mein break leli .
 
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Romesh JN Reddy se public ko mukt hi To karwana chahta thaa , kya kabhi suna hai court ki wajah se neta ko suli par chadha diya .
Yahi to durbhag6a poorn hai dost :sigh:
Ju ne seema ke qtal , Jn ke qatal ka To Insaaf dila diya , lekin Jo shankar, mayadas , Seema Ne Romesh ke Sath kiya Uska Insaaf kon dilwayega Hai koi Answer .
Mayadas ko saja nahi mili kya? Waise Insaaf hum karunga.:roll:
Bure karm Ka Nateeza Kya Hota Hai ye To bataya Lekin ache Romesh ke ache Karma ka kya Sila milaa Usee , Kabhi Imaandaari nahi Chhodi jO dimag Uske pass Thaa aagar Pehle burai ka Rasta apnata To kali Duniya mein Raaz Karta Wo .
Beshaq, uske jaisa koi nahi.:approve:
Dhoke Baaz Patni ke liye ek Sajjan Imandaar vakil ne Ek Corrupt insaan ko Mara isse samjh lo Admi chahe Kitna bhi samjh daar ho lekin pyaar mein chutiya katwa leta hai .
Issilye Single Raho muth maro khus Raho .
:hehe: Sahi bola
Lugaai aadmi ke loye lagwa deti, apun ko hi dekh lo, priya darling ke peeche, lekin wo jyada bhaav khaati:sigh:
Ju ne sirf ek galati huwi ki shankar ko crime uske kiye sajaa kyo nahi dilwai why If shankar Jail mein Jaata mein isse best ending manta ( ab Ju bologe shankaar kyu Jail Jata wo Writer ka kaam hai ju karte prabhanand)
Ek nayay purn Ending Rehti ki Romesh Shankar ko bhi mar deta .
Ju satya ki Jeet Aaram se Dikha sakte Thee , court law ko Todhne walo ka Kya Anjaam Rehta puri nayay purn Ending Rehti wo .
Sudhaar lenge galti👍
main pehle hi keh deta hu 33 update ki chhoti kahani thi issilye sad ending mein bach Gaye . If supreme ye ghapla kiya fir dekh lena isme mein Itna na sunaya ki kaan pakk Jayenge ,
Sad and good ka to nahi bata sakta, but aisi story tumko xf per na milegi doosri, jaisi supreme hogi, xf ki history ki best story hogi wo, agar poori hui to. :declare:
Yaad Rakhna isbaar saste mein chhod raha mein , Next story mein aisa kuch Huwa To kattaa ka Intezaam Kiya Main .
:pray: Dhanyawaad
Ab Itna Sunaya kuch Appreciate Bhi karna chahiye
Ab Ham writer na Hai Ki bhai ko uske achai ke Reward na Kiye balki Galti Ki SaZaa diye .

Ham bara bar Nayay karega Hamare Raj Bhai ke Sath
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Lets start actual Review
(upper kuch Jyada bakchodi Pel di )

Shurwaat mein Kamal Thankur kuch Laga Thaa ki Shayad iska Role END Mein hoga Lekin aisa Kuch na huwa .
Wo sirf ek Invegastion ka hissa thaa .

Somu bichara Be MATLAB pela Gaya Ek baar Bachne par akal Na Aayi Jo Dusri Baar Marne gaya .
Bharosa or ehsaan, ye dono hi wajah thi uski🙄
Plot mein chahe Jo khamiya Nikalu lekin writings mein kuch galti na nilak saku ulta Tariff banti hai jo thrill suspense likha ek bhi update bore na kiya aur story ka 11 we update se jo sama bhanda Usko end karne ke baad hi utha mein ..
Aur Story Ka peak Jab Romesh baizath bari Hota usme Teen Gawa aate Tab
Ju Garda Udaa Diya .
Ab kya kare apna to dil hi kuch aisa hai dost, thanks :thank_you:
Bahut shandaar aati sunder Thriller
Iss platform par Ju mere Top 3 story writers mein se ek ho .
Thank you very much for your amazing review and superb support bhai :hug:
Mujhe Romesh Part2 chahiye hi chahiye
Romesh ka dark version chahiye sab kuch acha karne ke baawjudd Aise character ko saja dena Galat
🤔
Vichar karna isme part ka scope hai
Lekin iss bar acha Romesh Nahi dark Romesh burai ka Prateek Ghayal sheer wala Romesha .

Once Again its a awesome Story Romesh ka Character Dil Jeet leta Hai .

Waiting for Next Part
Let me think of it 🤔 try karenge, but filhaal focus on Supreme :approve:
Yadi Iska Aur Bada Review Chahiye To Apni Risk par Demand Karna :D
No way:nana:
 

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No Romance mein Na padhta jyada
Khass kar college wala romance

Romance ki wajah se hi mein yug purush 8 th semester bhi adhi bich mein break leli .
Koi baat nahi, take your time 👍
 
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