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Update 16:
Recap:
Pichle update vich tusi padhya ke Amrit apni team naal plan nu anjaam den layi tayar si te oh Kiran te Komal nu apne plan anusaar fasa vi layndiyan ne.
Hun agge:
Sanglaan ne Kiran te Komal nu poori tarah jakad liya si. Dona janiaan hawa vich jhool rahiyaan san. Par dona vich jaan aje vi baaki si. Dona behoshi di haalat vich taan san par behosh poori tarah hoyiaan nahi san.
Baljeet, Amrit ate baaki sab de chehre te ik confident muskurahat si. Oh sab log dona janiaan nu injh dard vich vekh ke khush ho rahe san. Ate Raveena dooron hi sab operate kar rahi si. Baljeet Raveena nu Kiran ate Komal nu hethaan karan nu boldi aa te Raveena apne jadooi sanglaan nu command dindi thalle karna shuru kar dindi aa.
Sanglaan vich hoi movement karke Kiran di body vich fir ton dard hon lag janda aa te Komal jidi haalat pehlan hi Kiran ton vi zyada kharab si, usdi takleef hor vadh jandi aa. Dona is vele godeyaan bhar san, sanglaan karke ohna diyaan baaahaan bilkul sidhiyaan hawa vich latak rahiyaan san.
Baljeet tur ke dona de lagge aundi aa te Kiran de face nu thodi ton phadh ke uppar chak ke boldi aa, โHun bol kiven lag riha aa tainu? Tu is vele mere rehmo karam te aa. Tainu main kade vi maar sakdi aan.โ Par Kiran kujh nahi boldi bas us wal akhaan kadh ke vekhdi rahi aa.
Baljeet nu jado Kiran diyaan akhaan vich dar nahi disda ta oh apni baahaan nu agge lai ke aundi aa te panja bana ke jhatka dindi aa te usde gutte te lagge mechanical devices cho do blades bahar aa jande ne. Te Baljeet left te right ton oh Kiran di dhaun vich khoob dindi aa. Dove blades usdi dhaun de aar paar ho jande ne te Kiran de moonh vichon inni dard naal bhari cheek nikaldi aa ke je Raveena ne magic shield na banai hunda poora Chandigarh sun janda.
Idhar main bahut tej speed naal daud riha si ke meri poori body vich ik baari fir ton dard di lahar daud jandi aa. Main daudda daudda zameen te diggan hi lagga hunda aa ke main ik darakht da sahara lai ke bach janda aan. Par mere sir vich inni dard ho rahi si ke main zameen te hi baith janda aan te apna sir phadh lainda aan.
Mainu injh feel hon lag janda aa jeivein Kiran bahut dard vich hove. Mainu mere emotions te bilkul vi control nahi rehnda te meriyan akhaan vichon hanjoo nikalan lag jande ne te naal hi mere andar jeivein gusse da ubaal uth janda aa. Main fir ton uth ke Kiran de ghar di direction wal daudna shuru kar dinda aa. Main apni red vision vi on kar lainda aa te naal naal sab scan karda janda.
Hale mainu dauddiyan kujh second hi hoye si ke mainu sadak te Kiran di gaddi mil jandi aa, jo ke aggon tutt chukki si te us vichon dhuan nikal riha si. Mainu eh vekh ke hor vi tension hon lag jandi aa te main apni red vision da area hor wadha dinda aan. Te jo mainu disda aa oh vekh ke mere pair hi dagmaga jande ne.
Main Rabb agge dua karda us disha wal ho janda aa ke eh Kiran na hove. Par jado main us jagah te puchda aan te dikhda aan ke Kiran te Komal sanglaan naal zameen te godeyaan bhar latkiyaan ne te ik aurat Kiran di dhaun vich do blades khoob ke khadi aa, mera gussa phutt painda aa. Mere saare emotions mere te haavi ho jande ne. Mere andar rosh, dukh, dard ate badla lain di bhawna aa jandi aa.
Mere emotional breakdown karke Riya te Preet nu vi asahaj mehsoos hona shuru ho janda aa. Blood lure karke mere te ohna vich jo connection si oh activate ho janda aa. Ohna nu vi same emotion feel hon lag jande ne.
Riya te Preet jo is vele apne room vich san bahar aa jandiyan ne te ik duji nu same haalat vich vekh ke samajh jandiyan ne ke isde pichhe pakka koi tagra kaaran aa. Oh apne dil di gall suandiyan ne taan gaddi lai ke nikal paindiyan ne us disha wal jithe ohna da mann jaan nu keh riha si.
Main jor di hankaar bharda aan te us aurat wal daud painda aa. Par oh aurat pehlan hi tayar si kyunki jado main is ilaake vich kadam hi rakhya si, use pal hi Raveena nu is gall da ahsaas ho gaya si te usne sab nu dass ditta si.
Main do janiaan nu cross karda jeivein hi us aurat te hamla karan layi apna hath chukkda aa, use pal hi oh aurat phurti naal palat jandi aa te mere panje nu block karke mere dhidd te latt maar dindi aa. Main uddda darakht nu tod ke door ja digda aa. Oh saare mere wal palat gaye san te apne apne hathyaar lai ke mere te attack karan layi tayar san.
Ohna saareyan de chehre mere samne san te main pachhaan gaya si ke eh taan ohi ne jo us raat Riya te Preet nu bachaan aaye si. Main gusse vich uth ke khadda hoya te ohna wal daud la ditti. Oh vi mere wal unni hi speed vich daud paye te fir shuru hoi ik khatarnak ladai.
Kadi main Teji nu punch maarda te kadi oh block karke apne spike waale gauntlet naal mere te hamla karda. Usde har vaar naal meri chamri cheerdi jandi, par main apni super speed naal usnu phadh ke zameen te patak dinda te usdiyaan haddiyan tuttan di awaaz goonj jandi. Kadi Baljeet mere te vaar kardi te kadi Mehar mere te goli chalaundi. Main goliyan nu dodge karda te Mehar nu apne nahuna naal usde shareer te gahre ghaah kar dinda, jiss naal usdi cheek nikal jandi.
Par sab ton zyada mushkil mainu Amrit de hamlayan ton bachan vich aa rahi si. Usde hamle bahut steeak te jaanlewa san. Usde khanjar naal meri body te bahut katt pai rahe san par naal naal main heal vi ho riha si. Par main unni jaldi heal nahi ho paa riha si jinni jaldi oh mere te hamla kar rahe san.
Ohna sab vich coordination bahut vadhiya si. Chott taan main vi ohna nu pahunchaa riha si par pata nahi oh bahut jaldi sambhal ke heal hoye ja rahe san. Main Amrit nu phadh ke usdi gardan wal nahuna naal vaar kita par oh flip karke bach jandi aa te wapas meri pith te khanjar naal hamla kar dindi aa, jiss naal meri pith cho mera khoon bahina shuru ho janda aa.
Mera gussa vadhda ja riha si kyunki main ohna ton jeet nahi paa riha si te na hi Kiran de kol ja ke usnu bacha paa riha si. Main gusse vich inna andha ho gaya si ke main samajh hi na sakya ke oh saare mainu ik jagah wal lure kari ja rahe san.
Te jeivein hi mere kadam us jagah te paaye taan uthe lagga trap activate ho gaya. Do sangal zameen vichon nikle te mere donon latan nu cheerde hoye zameen vich dass gaye. Mainu inni dard hoi ke meri cheek nikal gayi. Par main inna hyper ho chukka si ke main us dard di parwah nahi kiti te poore zor naal ohna sanglaan nu zameen cho ukhaad ditta.
Par is chakkar vich meri nazar ohna sab ton maadi jehi hatt gayi aa te use pal ik chaaku aa ke mere modhe vich khoob janda aa. Us chaaku de khooban karke mainu dard de naal naal jalan vi mehsoos hon lag jandi aa. Par main us jalan te dhyaan nahi ditta te us chaaku nu apne vichon kadd ke zameen te sutt dinda aa.
Main uth ke jeivein hi dobara hamla karan layi ohna wal wadhya taan main ik invisible shield naal takra gaya. Mainu bilkul vi samajh nahi aayi ke injh kyon hoya. Main dobaara koshish kiti fir injh hi hoya. Main sajje khabbe har disha vich koshish kiti par main us invisible shield cho bahar nahi nikal paya.
Meri bebassi vekh ke oh saare hass rahe san. Te ohna di hassi mere gusse nu hor wadha rahi si. Main apni poori speed te taqat naal shield te takra te takra maar riha si. Par pata nahi kyon mainu kamzori feel hundi ja rahi si. Hareek takkar baad mainu injh lag riha si jeivein meri taqat ghatt di ja rahi aa.
Ate main vekhia ke oh aurat jissde hamlayan nu main bahut mushkil naal dodge kar riha si, usne apne kann te ik ungli rakhi te kujh boli. Main apni hearing sense naal sunan di koshish kiti par inna hi sun paya ke oh boli, โBass bahut khed liya is naal, do your job.โ
Usda inna kehna hi si ke zameen de vichon bahut saare sangal nikalne lagge te meri body cheerde hoye bahar nikalne lagge. Koi vi sangal jad mere lagda ta mainu inni dard hundi ke meri cheek nikal jandi. Mera vi haal hun Kiran te Komal warga ho gaya si. Main sangal te invisible shield de ghere vich phas ke reh gaya si.
Main sanglaan vich phasya tadaph riha si ke Baljeet mere wal tur ke aayi ate mere kareeb aake baith gayi. Ate oh apna chehra mere bilkul kareeb lai aayi. Main gusse vich apne dandaan naal us te hamla karna chahya par usne madha jeha apna sir pichhe kar lya te bach gayi.
Oh meri is harkat te meena jeha muskurai te mainu vekh ke boli, โKyon kiven lag riha aa hun tainu, meriyaan kudiyaan da khoon peeta si na tu, udon main dari hoi si, tadaph rahi si, meriyaan kudiyaan dariyaan hoiyaa san, te vekh hun tu te teri maalkin da main ki haal bana ditta aa. Hun tusin donen mere rehmo karam te zinda ho.โ
Fir oh Kiran wal vekhdi aa, jo ke is vele khoon de hanjoo ro rahi si. Te usdiyan akhaan vichon khoon de hanjoo digde vekh main bin paani machhi wang tadaphan lag painda aan. Mainu injh tadaphda vekh ke Kiran mere wal vekh ke boldi aa, โMainu maaf kar de Sahil. Mere karke tu vampire baneya si. Te hun meri hi galti karke tainu eh sab kujh sahina pay riha aa.โ
Kiran di is gall da jawab dinde main bolda aan, โNahi is vich teri koi galti nahi aa, galti aa ehna di te ehdiyaan kudiyaan di jo ke pehlan saade ilaake vich aaiyaan. Asin ohna nu us gall di bas saza ditti si. Naale je mainu kujh ho vi gaya, main apne aap nu khushkismat samjhaanga ke main tainu bachaan layi jaan ditti aa.โ
Meri eh gall sun ke Kiran ik dard bhari cheek maardi aa te usde donon hathaan vich agg de gole bann jande ne. Te oh uchchi awaaz vich boldi aa, โHun vekhde aan tuhanu mere ton kaun bachaunda aa. Apni maut layi tayar ho jao.โ Te Kiran de chaare paase agg phailni shuru ho jandi aa.
Invisible shield da jo gola Kiran te Komal de aale duwaale baneya si, us poore gole vich agg phail jandi aa. Shield vich daradaan aun lag paindiyan aa. Par agle hi pal us gole de uppar ik hor laal rang da gola bann janda aa. Andron Kiran di cheekaan di awaaz uchchi te uchchi aun lag jandi aa.
Par shield vich jo daradaan aun lagiyan san oh us laal gole karke bandh hon lag paindiyan ne. Te kujh hi der vich agg hauli hauli ghattni shuru ho jandi aa te fir poori tarah bandh ho jandi aa. Kiran ne shayad apni aakhri bachi power da vi istemaal kar lya si. Is karke agg khatam hon ton baad usdi haalat hor patli ho gayi si.
Usne mere wal ik nazar vekhia, mainu usdiyan akhaan vich bebassi, pachhtawa, dard ate mere layi pyaar saaf dikh riha si. Usde moonh vichon bas halki jehi โsorryโ nikli te oh behosh ho gayi. Eh vekh ke meriyan vi akhaan jhalak gayian te main neemi paa layi.
Par eh dekh ke Baljeet te baaki hunteran da haasa uthe goonj pya. Baljeet mere kol aayi te boli, โLai teri maalkin ne apni aakhri koshish vi kar layi, je tere vich koi jaan bachi aa ta tu zor la lai jinna launa aa. Main meriyan kudiyaan de khoon di ik ik boond da hisaab laina aa tere kolon.โ
Main usdi gall da koi jawab nahi ditta, main hale vi neemi pai hoi si. Par mere andar te bhuchaal aaya piya si. Mainu apne aap te inna gussa aa riha si ke mera dil kar riha si ke main khud nu hi maar laan. Mainu inna dard mere shareer vich ghubbe sanglaan da nahi ho riha si jinna Kiran diyaan oh nazaraan yaad karke ho riha si.
Jithe main apne emotions vich jal riha si, uthe Navneet zameen te baithi apna dil te hath rakh ke kamb rahi si. Usda dil jo ke na maatar hi dhadakda si oh hun inni tez dhadak riha si ke usnu usdi awaaz takk sun rahi si. Usnu bahut hi bura hon da ehsaas ho riha si.
Mainu apne aap ton hi nafrat hundi ja rahi si ke ki bas mere vich inna hi dum si ke main apni gharwaali nu hi nahi bacha sakya, main khud nu hi kos riha si ke oh jo tainu inna pyaar kardi aa tere bina reh nahi paundi, bas tu usde layi inna hi kar sakda si. Laanat aa tere te Sahil laanat aa, ki tere vich bas inna hi dum aa saalya, uth bhenchodaa uth ehna di maan chod de.
Te udhar Navneet de poore shareer vich karant daur gaya, usnu kujh samajh na aaya bas oh akhaan vich hanjoo lai ke daud pai, usne kujh nahi dekhya ke saamne darwaza aa ke ghardiaan deewaraan, oh sab nu torddi othon daud pai.
Idhar mainu injh lag riha si jeivein mere andar koi jwalamukhi phatt gaya hove. Mere dimag vich bas Kiran hi chal rahi si te usdiyan bebassi naal bhariyaan akhaan. Mere andar da gussa jawar bhaata ban ke phutt pya. Main apni saari himmat te taqat ikathi kiti te apna poora zor la ke uthna shuru kar ditta. Sanglaan karke mainu inni dard ho rahi si ke main usdi vi parwah nahi kiti.
Ate apni poori jaan la ke khaddha hon di koshish karan lagga. Mere hathaan vich Kiran wang agg balan lag pai. Mere dand pehlan naalon hor vadde ho gaye. Mere hathaan de nahun pehlan naalon zyada lambe te tikkhe ho gaye. Meri taqat agge sangal tuttne shuru ho gaye.
Eh hunda vekh Baljeet ghabra gayi te kann te ungli rakh ke boli, โTu vekh rahi aa na eh ki ho riha aa, apni jadoo di power vadha.โ Dooji side ton Raveena boli, โHaan mainu vi dikh riha aa, main power vadha rahi aan. Par eh shaayad mere ton vi zyada taakatwar aa, jo ke mere jadoo nu vi torr riha aa. Par koi nahi, shield te hai na, oh usnu nahi torr pavega.โ
Main sare sangal toแธ ke aazaad ho gaya si. Main apni poori speed naal daudde hoye ek punch maria par main fir shield nahi torr paya. Par mera gussa vadhda hi ja riha si. Meri pith diyaan haddiaan jhatkan lagdiyan ne te meri pith cho pankh nikaln lagge.
Mainu transform hunda vekh sare hunteran de rang udd gaye. Te Raveena jo door khadi sab vekh rahi si boli, โHe is the king vampire, mainu pehlan kyon nahi dassia ke asin king vampire da shikaar karan ja rahe aan. Main taan trap us hisaab naal set hi nahi si kiti.โ
Amrit: โMainu vi nahi pata si, naale eh taan kujh din pehlan bania vampire aa, eh taan shahi khoon vi nahi aa, eh kiven king vampire vich transform ho sakda aa. Sare janne meri gall suno, koi vi hun isnu halke vich laike nahi karega, sare apni poori jaan la deo. Te tu Mehar bilkul vi fight nahi karegi, tu bas apna support magic full use karegi sanu. Te haan Raveena teri vi madad lagni aa, tu vi sanu apne magic nal boost de. Tainu isde paise mil jaan ge.โ
Main poori tarah transform ho chukka si. Main ohna sareyaan nu kha jaan waliyan nazaran nal vekh riha si. Main full speed nal Baljeet wal daud peya. Te mere raste vich lagi shield kise kachh vang tut ke dig gayi. Te agle hi pal main Baljeet de lagge si te mera punch seedha usde dhidd vich lagga te oh udddi door ja digi.
Par tin jadugarnian de boost karke usnu zyada chot nahi pohnchi si. Oh mere hamle to sambhal paindi ke main fir usde samne si. Main uste apne nao(n)aan nal vaar karna hi lagga si ke left side ton Amrit da khanjar meri bakhi lagge pahuncha. Main us ton bachan layi side te ta ho gaya par is vich mere pankhaan ne meri madad kiti.
Phir shuru hoya dobara ladai da silsila, main ta badle te gusse di agg vich pagal ho chukka si. Main sab te harek vaar ohna di jaan lain layi hi kar riha si. Par oh sare ralle ke mere te attack kar rahe san te ik duje nu bacha vi rahe san. Par main ohna te bhaari peya si. Main Teji nu apne pankhaan nal uda ke zameen te patak dinda te usde spike nu usde hathan cho khich ke kad lia te usde viruddh hi vart ke main usnu ghaayal kar ditta.
Main usde face te enne mukke mare ke usdi naak tut gayi. Usda khoon bahauna shuru ho gaya te oh dard nal cheekhan laggi. Amrit nu main apni agg wale hathan nal phar ke jalaunda koshish kiti par oh bach jandi aa te mere te jawab vich hamla kar dindi aa.
Mainu khud te bhari penda vekh Amrit ne sab nu apna aakhri smoke grenade use karan da order de ditta te Raveena nu vi apni poori taakat nal hor shield banan nu keha. Mere aale dule dhuan failan lagga, mainu lag riha si ke eh sab oh meri vision block karan layi kar rahe ne. Par main is gall to anjaan si ke is smoke vich ki milaya gaya aa.
Kujh der te sab normal rahinda aa, main apni red vision on kar lenda aan taan ke smoke vich ohna nu vekh paavaan, te oh sare mainu dikh vi rahe san. Main ohna te hamla shuru kar ditta, par is vari oh sirf dodge hi kar rahe san, attack nahi. Te usda reason mainu kujh der vich hi pata lag gia.
Mainu kamzori hon laggi, mere pankh gaib hon lagge, mere nails chotte hon lagge, mainu kujh samajh nahi aa riha si ke mere nal eh ki ho riha aa, ki Rabb vi nahi chaunda ke main zinda rahaan te ik kudi jo mainu inna pyaar kardi oh mere nal hi mar jave.
Par main eh nahi hon dena si. Mera shareer paam reha si mera saath nahi de reha si par mera mann mere nal si. Main Baljeet te hamla karan layi agge ta vadya par meri speed bahut slow ho chuki si. Mera hamla us takk pahunchn penda us to pehlan hi Baljeet da chaaku seedha mere dil vich lag gia. Mere dil vicho khoon behna shuru ho gaya. Te main uthe hi godeyaan bhar dig peya.
Milde aan hun agle update vichโฆโฆ.
Recap:
Pichle update vich tusi padhya ke Amrit apni team naal plan nu anjaam den layi tayar si te oh Kiran te Komal nu apne plan anusaar fasa vi layndiyan ne.
Hun agge:
Sanglaan ne Kiran te Komal nu poori tarah jakad liya si. Dona janiaan hawa vich jhool rahiyaan san. Par dona vich jaan aje vi baaki si. Dona behoshi di haalat vich taan san par behosh poori tarah hoyiaan nahi san.
Baljeet, Amrit ate baaki sab de chehre te ik confident muskurahat si. Oh sab log dona janiaan nu injh dard vich vekh ke khush ho rahe san. Ate Raveena dooron hi sab operate kar rahi si. Baljeet Raveena nu Kiran ate Komal nu hethaan karan nu boldi aa te Raveena apne jadooi sanglaan nu command dindi thalle karna shuru kar dindi aa.
Sanglaan vich hoi movement karke Kiran di body vich fir ton dard hon lag janda aa te Komal jidi haalat pehlan hi Kiran ton vi zyada kharab si, usdi takleef hor vadh jandi aa. Dona is vele godeyaan bhar san, sanglaan karke ohna diyaan baaahaan bilkul sidhiyaan hawa vich latak rahiyaan san.
Baljeet tur ke dona de lagge aundi aa te Kiran de face nu thodi ton phadh ke uppar chak ke boldi aa, โHun bol kiven lag riha aa tainu? Tu is vele mere rehmo karam te aa. Tainu main kade vi maar sakdi aan.โ Par Kiran kujh nahi boldi bas us wal akhaan kadh ke vekhdi rahi aa.
Baljeet nu jado Kiran diyaan akhaan vich dar nahi disda ta oh apni baahaan nu agge lai ke aundi aa te panja bana ke jhatka dindi aa te usde gutte te lagge mechanical devices cho do blades bahar aa jande ne. Te Baljeet left te right ton oh Kiran di dhaun vich khoob dindi aa. Dove blades usdi dhaun de aar paar ho jande ne te Kiran de moonh vichon inni dard naal bhari cheek nikaldi aa ke je Raveena ne magic shield na banai hunda poora Chandigarh sun janda.
Idhar main bahut tej speed naal daud riha si ke meri poori body vich ik baari fir ton dard di lahar daud jandi aa. Main daudda daudda zameen te diggan hi lagga hunda aa ke main ik darakht da sahara lai ke bach janda aan. Par mere sir vich inni dard ho rahi si ke main zameen te hi baith janda aan te apna sir phadh lainda aan.
Mainu injh feel hon lag janda aa jeivein Kiran bahut dard vich hove. Mainu mere emotions te bilkul vi control nahi rehnda te meriyan akhaan vichon hanjoo nikalan lag jande ne te naal hi mere andar jeivein gusse da ubaal uth janda aa. Main fir ton uth ke Kiran de ghar di direction wal daudna shuru kar dinda aa. Main apni red vision vi on kar lainda aa te naal naal sab scan karda janda.
Hale mainu dauddiyan kujh second hi hoye si ke mainu sadak te Kiran di gaddi mil jandi aa, jo ke aggon tutt chukki si te us vichon dhuan nikal riha si. Mainu eh vekh ke hor vi tension hon lag jandi aa te main apni red vision da area hor wadha dinda aan. Te jo mainu disda aa oh vekh ke mere pair hi dagmaga jande ne.
Main Rabb agge dua karda us disha wal ho janda aa ke eh Kiran na hove. Par jado main us jagah te puchda aan te dikhda aan ke Kiran te Komal sanglaan naal zameen te godeyaan bhar latkiyaan ne te ik aurat Kiran di dhaun vich do blades khoob ke khadi aa, mera gussa phutt painda aa. Mere saare emotions mere te haavi ho jande ne. Mere andar rosh, dukh, dard ate badla lain di bhawna aa jandi aa.
Mere emotional breakdown karke Riya te Preet nu vi asahaj mehsoos hona shuru ho janda aa. Blood lure karke mere te ohna vich jo connection si oh activate ho janda aa. Ohna nu vi same emotion feel hon lag jande ne.
Riya te Preet jo is vele apne room vich san bahar aa jandiyan ne te ik duji nu same haalat vich vekh ke samajh jandiyan ne ke isde pichhe pakka koi tagra kaaran aa. Oh apne dil di gall suandiyan ne taan gaddi lai ke nikal paindiyan ne us disha wal jithe ohna da mann jaan nu keh riha si.
Main jor di hankaar bharda aan te us aurat wal daud painda aa. Par oh aurat pehlan hi tayar si kyunki jado main is ilaake vich kadam hi rakhya si, use pal hi Raveena nu is gall da ahsaas ho gaya si te usne sab nu dass ditta si.
Main do janiaan nu cross karda jeivein hi us aurat te hamla karan layi apna hath chukkda aa, use pal hi oh aurat phurti naal palat jandi aa te mere panje nu block karke mere dhidd te latt maar dindi aa. Main uddda darakht nu tod ke door ja digda aa. Oh saare mere wal palat gaye san te apne apne hathyaar lai ke mere te attack karan layi tayar san.
Ohna saareyan de chehre mere samne san te main pachhaan gaya si ke eh taan ohi ne jo us raat Riya te Preet nu bachaan aaye si. Main gusse vich uth ke khadda hoya te ohna wal daud la ditti. Oh vi mere wal unni hi speed vich daud paye te fir shuru hoi ik khatarnak ladai.
Kadi main Teji nu punch maarda te kadi oh block karke apne spike waale gauntlet naal mere te hamla karda. Usde har vaar naal meri chamri cheerdi jandi, par main apni super speed naal usnu phadh ke zameen te patak dinda te usdiyaan haddiyan tuttan di awaaz goonj jandi. Kadi Baljeet mere te vaar kardi te kadi Mehar mere te goli chalaundi. Main goliyan nu dodge karda te Mehar nu apne nahuna naal usde shareer te gahre ghaah kar dinda, jiss naal usdi cheek nikal jandi.
Par sab ton zyada mushkil mainu Amrit de hamlayan ton bachan vich aa rahi si. Usde hamle bahut steeak te jaanlewa san. Usde khanjar naal meri body te bahut katt pai rahe san par naal naal main heal vi ho riha si. Par main unni jaldi heal nahi ho paa riha si jinni jaldi oh mere te hamla kar rahe san.
Ohna sab vich coordination bahut vadhiya si. Chott taan main vi ohna nu pahunchaa riha si par pata nahi oh bahut jaldi sambhal ke heal hoye ja rahe san. Main Amrit nu phadh ke usdi gardan wal nahuna naal vaar kita par oh flip karke bach jandi aa te wapas meri pith te khanjar naal hamla kar dindi aa, jiss naal meri pith cho mera khoon bahina shuru ho janda aa.
Mera gussa vadhda ja riha si kyunki main ohna ton jeet nahi paa riha si te na hi Kiran de kol ja ke usnu bacha paa riha si. Main gusse vich inna andha ho gaya si ke main samajh hi na sakya ke oh saare mainu ik jagah wal lure kari ja rahe san.
Te jeivein hi mere kadam us jagah te paaye taan uthe lagga trap activate ho gaya. Do sangal zameen vichon nikle te mere donon latan nu cheerde hoye zameen vich dass gaye. Mainu inni dard hoi ke meri cheek nikal gayi. Par main inna hyper ho chukka si ke main us dard di parwah nahi kiti te poore zor naal ohna sanglaan nu zameen cho ukhaad ditta.
Par is chakkar vich meri nazar ohna sab ton maadi jehi hatt gayi aa te use pal ik chaaku aa ke mere modhe vich khoob janda aa. Us chaaku de khooban karke mainu dard de naal naal jalan vi mehsoos hon lag jandi aa. Par main us jalan te dhyaan nahi ditta te us chaaku nu apne vichon kadd ke zameen te sutt dinda aa.
Main uth ke jeivein hi dobara hamla karan layi ohna wal wadhya taan main ik invisible shield naal takra gaya. Mainu bilkul vi samajh nahi aayi ke injh kyon hoya. Main dobaara koshish kiti fir injh hi hoya. Main sajje khabbe har disha vich koshish kiti par main us invisible shield cho bahar nahi nikal paya.
Meri bebassi vekh ke oh saare hass rahe san. Te ohna di hassi mere gusse nu hor wadha rahi si. Main apni poori speed te taqat naal shield te takra te takra maar riha si. Par pata nahi kyon mainu kamzori feel hundi ja rahi si. Hareek takkar baad mainu injh lag riha si jeivein meri taqat ghatt di ja rahi aa.
Ate main vekhia ke oh aurat jissde hamlayan nu main bahut mushkil naal dodge kar riha si, usne apne kann te ik ungli rakhi te kujh boli. Main apni hearing sense naal sunan di koshish kiti par inna hi sun paya ke oh boli, โBass bahut khed liya is naal, do your job.โ
Usda inna kehna hi si ke zameen de vichon bahut saare sangal nikalne lagge te meri body cheerde hoye bahar nikalne lagge. Koi vi sangal jad mere lagda ta mainu inni dard hundi ke meri cheek nikal jandi. Mera vi haal hun Kiran te Komal warga ho gaya si. Main sangal te invisible shield de ghere vich phas ke reh gaya si.
Main sanglaan vich phasya tadaph riha si ke Baljeet mere wal tur ke aayi ate mere kareeb aake baith gayi. Ate oh apna chehra mere bilkul kareeb lai aayi. Main gusse vich apne dandaan naal us te hamla karna chahya par usne madha jeha apna sir pichhe kar lya te bach gayi.
Oh meri is harkat te meena jeha muskurai te mainu vekh ke boli, โKyon kiven lag riha aa hun tainu, meriyaan kudiyaan da khoon peeta si na tu, udon main dari hoi si, tadaph rahi si, meriyaan kudiyaan dariyaan hoiyaa san, te vekh hun tu te teri maalkin da main ki haal bana ditta aa. Hun tusin donen mere rehmo karam te zinda ho.โ
Fir oh Kiran wal vekhdi aa, jo ke is vele khoon de hanjoo ro rahi si. Te usdiyan akhaan vichon khoon de hanjoo digde vekh main bin paani machhi wang tadaphan lag painda aan. Mainu injh tadaphda vekh ke Kiran mere wal vekh ke boldi aa, โMainu maaf kar de Sahil. Mere karke tu vampire baneya si. Te hun meri hi galti karke tainu eh sab kujh sahina pay riha aa.โ
Kiran di is gall da jawab dinde main bolda aan, โNahi is vich teri koi galti nahi aa, galti aa ehna di te ehdiyaan kudiyaan di jo ke pehlan saade ilaake vich aaiyaan. Asin ohna nu us gall di bas saza ditti si. Naale je mainu kujh ho vi gaya, main apne aap nu khushkismat samjhaanga ke main tainu bachaan layi jaan ditti aa.โ
Meri eh gall sun ke Kiran ik dard bhari cheek maardi aa te usde donon hathaan vich agg de gole bann jande ne. Te oh uchchi awaaz vich boldi aa, โHun vekhde aan tuhanu mere ton kaun bachaunda aa. Apni maut layi tayar ho jao.โ Te Kiran de chaare paase agg phailni shuru ho jandi aa.
Invisible shield da jo gola Kiran te Komal de aale duwaale baneya si, us poore gole vich agg phail jandi aa. Shield vich daradaan aun lag paindiyan aa. Par agle hi pal us gole de uppar ik hor laal rang da gola bann janda aa. Andron Kiran di cheekaan di awaaz uchchi te uchchi aun lag jandi aa.
Par shield vich jo daradaan aun lagiyan san oh us laal gole karke bandh hon lag paindiyan ne. Te kujh hi der vich agg hauli hauli ghattni shuru ho jandi aa te fir poori tarah bandh ho jandi aa. Kiran ne shayad apni aakhri bachi power da vi istemaal kar lya si. Is karke agg khatam hon ton baad usdi haalat hor patli ho gayi si.
Usne mere wal ik nazar vekhia, mainu usdiyan akhaan vich bebassi, pachhtawa, dard ate mere layi pyaar saaf dikh riha si. Usde moonh vichon bas halki jehi โsorryโ nikli te oh behosh ho gayi. Eh vekh ke meriyan vi akhaan jhalak gayian te main neemi paa layi.
Par eh dekh ke Baljeet te baaki hunteran da haasa uthe goonj pya. Baljeet mere kol aayi te boli, โLai teri maalkin ne apni aakhri koshish vi kar layi, je tere vich koi jaan bachi aa ta tu zor la lai jinna launa aa. Main meriyan kudiyaan de khoon di ik ik boond da hisaab laina aa tere kolon.โ
Main usdi gall da koi jawab nahi ditta, main hale vi neemi pai hoi si. Par mere andar te bhuchaal aaya piya si. Mainu apne aap te inna gussa aa riha si ke mera dil kar riha si ke main khud nu hi maar laan. Mainu inna dard mere shareer vich ghubbe sanglaan da nahi ho riha si jinna Kiran diyaan oh nazaraan yaad karke ho riha si.
Jithe main apne emotions vich jal riha si, uthe Navneet zameen te baithi apna dil te hath rakh ke kamb rahi si. Usda dil jo ke na maatar hi dhadakda si oh hun inni tez dhadak riha si ke usnu usdi awaaz takk sun rahi si. Usnu bahut hi bura hon da ehsaas ho riha si.
Mainu apne aap ton hi nafrat hundi ja rahi si ke ki bas mere vich inna hi dum si ke main apni gharwaali nu hi nahi bacha sakya, main khud nu hi kos riha si ke oh jo tainu inna pyaar kardi aa tere bina reh nahi paundi, bas tu usde layi inna hi kar sakda si. Laanat aa tere te Sahil laanat aa, ki tere vich bas inna hi dum aa saalya, uth bhenchodaa uth ehna di maan chod de.
Te udhar Navneet de poore shareer vich karant daur gaya, usnu kujh samajh na aaya bas oh akhaan vich hanjoo lai ke daud pai, usne kujh nahi dekhya ke saamne darwaza aa ke ghardiaan deewaraan, oh sab nu torddi othon daud pai.
Idhar mainu injh lag riha si jeivein mere andar koi jwalamukhi phatt gaya hove. Mere dimag vich bas Kiran hi chal rahi si te usdiyan bebassi naal bhariyaan akhaan. Mere andar da gussa jawar bhaata ban ke phutt pya. Main apni saari himmat te taqat ikathi kiti te apna poora zor la ke uthna shuru kar ditta. Sanglaan karke mainu inni dard ho rahi si ke main usdi vi parwah nahi kiti.
Ate apni poori jaan la ke khaddha hon di koshish karan lagga. Mere hathaan vich Kiran wang agg balan lag pai. Mere dand pehlan naalon hor vadde ho gaye. Mere hathaan de nahun pehlan naalon zyada lambe te tikkhe ho gaye. Meri taqat agge sangal tuttne shuru ho gaye.
Eh hunda vekh Baljeet ghabra gayi te kann te ungli rakh ke boli, โTu vekh rahi aa na eh ki ho riha aa, apni jadoo di power vadha.โ Dooji side ton Raveena boli, โHaan mainu vi dikh riha aa, main power vadha rahi aan. Par eh shaayad mere ton vi zyada taakatwar aa, jo ke mere jadoo nu vi torr riha aa. Par koi nahi, shield te hai na, oh usnu nahi torr pavega.โ
Main sare sangal toแธ ke aazaad ho gaya si. Main apni poori speed naal daudde hoye ek punch maria par main fir shield nahi torr paya. Par mera gussa vadhda hi ja riha si. Meri pith diyaan haddiaan jhatkan lagdiyan ne te meri pith cho pankh nikaln lagge.
Mainu transform hunda vekh sare hunteran de rang udd gaye. Te Raveena jo door khadi sab vekh rahi si boli, โHe is the king vampire, mainu pehlan kyon nahi dassia ke asin king vampire da shikaar karan ja rahe aan. Main taan trap us hisaab naal set hi nahi si kiti.โ
Amrit: โMainu vi nahi pata si, naale eh taan kujh din pehlan bania vampire aa, eh taan shahi khoon vi nahi aa, eh kiven king vampire vich transform ho sakda aa. Sare janne meri gall suno, koi vi hun isnu halke vich laike nahi karega, sare apni poori jaan la deo. Te tu Mehar bilkul vi fight nahi karegi, tu bas apna support magic full use karegi sanu. Te haan Raveena teri vi madad lagni aa, tu vi sanu apne magic nal boost de. Tainu isde paise mil jaan ge.โ
Main poori tarah transform ho chukka si. Main ohna sareyaan nu kha jaan waliyan nazaran nal vekh riha si. Main full speed nal Baljeet wal daud peya. Te mere raste vich lagi shield kise kachh vang tut ke dig gayi. Te agle hi pal main Baljeet de lagge si te mera punch seedha usde dhidd vich lagga te oh udddi door ja digi.
Par tin jadugarnian de boost karke usnu zyada chot nahi pohnchi si. Oh mere hamle to sambhal paindi ke main fir usde samne si. Main uste apne nao(n)aan nal vaar karna hi lagga si ke left side ton Amrit da khanjar meri bakhi lagge pahuncha. Main us ton bachan layi side te ta ho gaya par is vich mere pankhaan ne meri madad kiti.
Phir shuru hoya dobara ladai da silsila, main ta badle te gusse di agg vich pagal ho chukka si. Main sab te harek vaar ohna di jaan lain layi hi kar riha si. Par oh sare ralle ke mere te attack kar rahe san te ik duje nu bacha vi rahe san. Par main ohna te bhaari peya si. Main Teji nu apne pankhaan nal uda ke zameen te patak dinda te usde spike nu usde hathan cho khich ke kad lia te usde viruddh hi vart ke main usnu ghaayal kar ditta.
Main usde face te enne mukke mare ke usdi naak tut gayi. Usda khoon bahauna shuru ho gaya te oh dard nal cheekhan laggi. Amrit nu main apni agg wale hathan nal phar ke jalaunda koshish kiti par oh bach jandi aa te mere te jawab vich hamla kar dindi aa.
Mainu khud te bhari penda vekh Amrit ne sab nu apna aakhri smoke grenade use karan da order de ditta te Raveena nu vi apni poori taakat nal hor shield banan nu keha. Mere aale dule dhuan failan lagga, mainu lag riha si ke eh sab oh meri vision block karan layi kar rahe ne. Par main is gall to anjaan si ke is smoke vich ki milaya gaya aa.
Kujh der te sab normal rahinda aa, main apni red vision on kar lenda aan taan ke smoke vich ohna nu vekh paavaan, te oh sare mainu dikh vi rahe san. Main ohna te hamla shuru kar ditta, par is vari oh sirf dodge hi kar rahe san, attack nahi. Te usda reason mainu kujh der vich hi pata lag gia.
Mainu kamzori hon laggi, mere pankh gaib hon lagge, mere nails chotte hon lagge, mainu kujh samajh nahi aa riha si ke mere nal eh ki ho riha aa, ki Rabb vi nahi chaunda ke main zinda rahaan te ik kudi jo mainu inna pyaar kardi oh mere nal hi mar jave.
Par main eh nahi hon dena si. Mera shareer paam reha si mera saath nahi de reha si par mera mann mere nal si. Main Baljeet te hamla karan layi agge ta vadya par meri speed bahut slow ho chuki si. Mera hamla us takk pahunchn penda us to pehlan hi Baljeet da chaaku seedha mere dil vich lag gia. Mere dil vicho khoon behna shuru ho gaya. Te main uthe hi godeyaan bhar dig peya.
Milde aan hun agle update vichโฆโฆ.
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Sira update bhai hun dekhde aa navneet ki kardi aa
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YR AWE NA KARO JA TA JAD BALJEET AND COMPANY NU PATA CHALDA SAHIL KING VAMPIRE HAI UPDATE OS STAGE TE KHATAM KAR DENA C,, AWE KHADE LUN TE KULADI VAJDI HAI,, REQUEST HAI AWE NA KARO,, PLZZ AH TA HO NHI SAKDA KI KING HAAR JAWE EHNA JAWAKA KOLO
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Next update please Bhai chheti deo aa update bohot changa se