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Bhai plz season 1 ka link da do ya pdf jis main complete ho ek ha mare pass incomplete wahan tak jah dev ki sisters ko paat chalta ha ki wo banya hoa ha

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UPDATE 24 – FEELINGS


Bike ka engine band hua, par Saloni Didi ki saansein abhi bhi tez thi.
Stand lagate waqt maine notice kiya ki unke haath handle grip ko itni zor se pakde hue the ki unki knuckles safed pad gayi thi.
Wo Scorpio ka scene, wo maut ka ehsaas... unke dimaag mein loop ki tarah chal raha tha.

Ghar ke darwaze par pahunchte hi maine unka thanda pada haath apne haath mein liya aur halka sa dabaya.

Main: “Didi, meri taraf dekhiye.”

Unhone palak jhapak kar meri taraf dekha. Unki aankhon mein abhi bhi wahi khauf tha.

Main (Naram par firm awaaz mein): “Andar Mom aur Dad hain. Agar unhe zara sa bhi shak hua ki aaj hum maut ko chhoo kar aaye hain, toh wo panic ho jayenge. Ghar ka sukoon bikhar jayega... aur shayad aapka college bhi. Aur main aapke college mein hoon, yeh mat batana yahan kisi ko bhi.”

Saloni ne ek gehari saans li, jaise wo hawa se himmat kheench rahi ho. Unhone apne dupatte ko theek kiya aur chehre par ek fake smile chipka li.

Saloni: “Main... main theek hoon. Bas traffic aur thakan... yahi bolna hai na?”

Main: “Bilkul. Muskuraiye Senior, aap duniya ki sabse safe jagah par hain... apne ghar mein.”

Humne doorbell bajayi. Andar se hansi ki awaaz aa rahi thi—ek aisa sound jo bahar ki khatarnak duniya se bilkul alag tha.




Darwaza khulte hi ghar ki usual Chaos ne humara swagat kiya.
TV par news chal rahi thi, kitchen se chai ki khushboo aa rahi thi, aur mahoul bilkul halka tha.

Mom: “Aa gaye nawabzaade? 5 baje ka time tha, 5:30 ho gaye. Chai thandi ho gayi tumhare intezaar mein.”

Main haste hue seedha sofa par Dad ke bagal mein gir gaya.

Main: “Sorry Mom, wo traffic police checking kar rahi thi. Aaj kal naye rules aaye hain, bas wahi time lag gaya.”

Chacha Ji (Samose ki plate se ek piece uthate hue): “Sahi kiya police ne. Aaj kal ke ladke bike sadak par chalate kam hain, udate zyada hain. Kyun Dev?”
Unhone haste hue mujhe kohni maari.

Main: “Bilkul Chacha ji. Par main toh 40 ki speed se upar jata hi nahi. Seedha sadha chalata hoon.”

Isha Didi (Garam pakode lekar aate hue): “Chal jhoothe! Kaiyi baar maine tujhe market mein dekha tha, tu kisi bike wale se race laga raha tha.”

Main (Haskar): “Didi ab main police wala khud hoon, ab kya apna challan main apne haathon se kaatu?”

Sab hass pade. Mahoul bohot pyara tha.
Bahar dushman jaan lene ko taiyaar baitha tha, par yahan andar... sab kitna innocent, kitna safe tha. Aisa hi toh hai ghar apna.

Tabhi seedhiyon (stairs) par dham-dham ki awaaz aayi. Kabir bhai daudta hua niche aaye.
Unke chehre par ek chamak thi aur haath mein phone tha.

Kabir: “Attention Family! Attention please!”
Sabne chai ka cup rok kar uski taraf dekha.

Dad: “Ab kya naya kaand kiya tune Kabir?”

Kabir: “Kaand nahi Dad, ‘Breaking News’ hai! Abhi-abhi message aaya hai. Humari ‘Dangal Sisters’ wapas aa rahi hain!”

Sab confuse ho gaye.
Chachi: “Kaun? Sikha aur Komal?”
(Sikha aur Komal - Kabir ki choti behne aur humari cousins jo videsh mein padhti hain).

Kabir: “Ji haan! Unke exams khatam ho gaye hain. Dono kal subah ki flight se aa rahi hain. Poore 1.5 mahine (Dedh mahine) ki chutti par! Ab ghar mein asli hungama shuru hoga.”

Ghar mein khushi ki lehar daud gayi.

Mom: “Haaye meri bachiyaan aa rahi hain! Kitne din ho gaye unhe dekhe. Kal main unke liye gajar ka halwa banaungi, Sikha ko bohot pasand hai.”

Chacha Ji: “Chalo badhiya hai, ghar mein ab raunak aur badhegi.”

Sab khush the. Ek-dusre ko mithai khilane ki baatein kar rahe the.
Sivaaye mere.

Main muskura raha tha, taali baja raha tha, par mere andar ka ‘Cop’ alert mode par chala gaya tha.
Mera kaam aasaan nahi, aur mushkil hone wala tha.

Kabir (Mere paas aakar kandhe par haath rakhte hue): “Kyun Dev bhai? Chehre ka rang kyu ud gaya? Sikha aa rahi hai... tera room capture karne. Darr gaya kya?”

Main (Hansi ke peeche tension chhupate hue): “Aane de. Is baar free mein room nahi dunga, kiraya vasool karunga usse.”

Sab wapas hass pade aur aise samay ne dimaag thoda cool kar diya.





(Raat ke 09:45 PM)

Dinner ke baad, sab apne kamron mein chale gaye the. Sone ki tayari chal rahi thi.
Main chhat (terrace) par tahal raha tha. Hawa thandi thi, par mera dimaag garam tha. Mujhe aaj raat nikalna tha — us mystery ko solve karne ke liye jo mere parivaar ke liye khatra ban rahi thi.

Tabhi peeche se dabe paon kisi ke aane ki aahat hui.
Palat kar dekha toh Saloni Didi thi. Wo ek shawl odh kar aayi thi, baal khule the aur chehra thoda utra hua tha.

Wo mere paas railing par aakar khadi ho gayi. Kuch der hum dono ne bas shaant sadak ko dekha.

Saloni: “Tu sach bol raha tha na?”
Main: “Kis baare mein?”
Saloni: “Wo accident... Wo galti se hua tha na? Ya koi...”

Wo sentence poora nahi kar payi, par unka darr saaf tha.
Mera mann kiya use gale laga loon, keh doon ki ‘Haan Didi, khatra hai, par main hoon na.’

Lekin abhi sach batana unhe tod deta.
Maine railing ke peeche unka haath apne haath mein liya. Unki ungliyan thandi thi.

Main: “Trust me Saloni. Jab tak main tumhare saath hoon... koi gadi, koi insaan, koi musibat tumhe chhu nahi sakti. Main deewar hoon is ghar ki.”

Saloni ne meri aankhon mein dekha, dhoondne ki koshish ki ki main jhoot bol raha hoon ya sach. Phir unhone meri hatheli par apna doosra haath rakh diya.

Saloni: “Pata hai. Shayad isliye abhi tak saans le rahi hoon. Par... darr lagta hai Dev. Tujhe kuch ho gaya toh?”

Main (Muskurate hue): “Mujhe kuch nahi hoga. Main ‘lambi race ka ghoda’ hoon.”

Saloni halka sa hansi.

Saloni: “Kal Sikha aur Komal aa rahi hain. Ghar mein bheed badh jayegi. Humein akele waqt kam milega.”

Main: “Chori-chuppe milne ka maza hi kuch aur hai, Senior. Bheed mein aankhein chaar karna zyada romantic hota hai.”

Saloni ne halke se sharma kar dhakka diya.

Saloni: “Chal, bada aaya romantic. Sone jaa rahi hoon. Tu bhi aaja jaldi.”

Main: “Goodnight. Tum jao, main thodi hawa kha kar aata hoon.”

Saloni chali gayi.
Jaise hi darwaza band hua, mere chehre se muskaan gayab ho gayi. Chehra ekdum sakht ho gaya.

Maine apni ghadi (watch) dekhi.
10:15 PM.

Maine side se ek hoodie nikala jo chhupaya tha.
Maine jaldi se apni Black Hoodie pehni aur chain upar kheench hi raha tha ki achanak chhat ka lohay ka darwaza phirse...
“Creak...” karke khula.

Mera haath chain par hi ruk gaya. Dhadkan ek second ke liye skip ho gayi.
Maine palat kar dekha.
Saloni.
Wo wapas aa gayi thi.

Mere dimaag ne turant bahana dhoondha. Maine hoodie ki cap theek karte hue ek casual acting ki.

Main: “Arre... wo... achanak hawa tez ho gayi thi na. Thand lag rahi thi, isliye hoodie pehen li. Socha thodi der walk kar loon.”

Saloni ne kuch nahi kaha. Wo bas mujhe dekhti rahi. Unki aankhon mein wo sawal nahi tha jo main expect kar raha tha.
Unki aankhon mein ek ajeeb si Kashish (Attraction) aur ek Darr tha—khone ka darr.

Wo dheere-dheere meri taraf badhi. Hawa unke baalon ko uda rahi thi.

Saloni (Halki awaaz mein): “Jhoot mat bol Dev.

Main chup ho gaya. Kya pakda gaya?

Saloni: “Tujhe thand nahi lag rahi... Tu bas mujhse door rehne ke bahane dhoondta hai.”

Wo ab mere bilkul kareeb aa gayi thi. Itne kareeb ki main unki saanson ki garmahat mehsoos kar sakta tha. Maine peeche hatne ki koshish ki, par peeche paani ki tanki ki deewar thi.

Main (Hichkichate hue): “Nahi Didi... wo baat nahi hai. Main bas...”

Saloni ne meri baat kaat di. Unhone apna haath badhaya aur meri hoodie ki chain ko pakad liya. Bajaye neeche karne ke, unhone use meri chest par halka sa kheench kar mujhe apni taraf jhuka liya.

Saloni: “Kal subah Sikha aur Komal aa jayengi. Ghar mein shor hoga, bheed hogi. Har waqt koi na koi humare aas-paas hoga. Shayad humein ek minute bhi akele na mile.”

Unki awaaz mein ek Desperation thi.

Saloni:Mujhe nahi pata kal kya hoga... par aaj ki raat... main tujhe door nahi jaane dungi.

Mere andar ka ‘Cop’ chilla raha tha ki ‘Jao Dev, mission zaroori hai’, par mere andar ka ‘Premi’ pighal raha tha.

Main: “Par Didi... koi aa gaya toh?”

Saloni (Meri aankhon mein dekh kar): “Aa jaane do.

Ye sunte hi mera control tootne laga.

Saloni ne apne thande haath mere gaalon par rakhe. Unka sparsh barf jaisa thanda tha, par unki nazron mein aag thi.
Unhone dheere se apne pairon ke toes par uth kar apna chehra mere kareeb kiya. Humari naak takra gayi.

Main: “Saloni...”

Mere mooh se ‘Didi’ shabd gayab ho gaya.

Unhone kuch bolne ka mauka nahi diya. Saloni ne apne honth mere honthon par rakh diye.
Pehle wo kiss halka tha—ek hichkichahat bhara sawaal. Jaise wo pooch rahi hon ki ‘Kya ye sahi hai?’
Par jaise hi maine response diya, wo sawaal ek jawaab mein badal gaya.

Maine apne haath unki kamar par rakh diye aur unhe apni taraf kheench liya.
Wo kiss gehra hota gaya.
“Mmm...” Saloni ke gale se ek halki siski nikli.

Aaj ka darr, maut ka wo scene, aur kal aane wali doori—sab us ek pal mein mit gaya.
Unke haath mere gardan ke peeche chale gaye, meri hoodie ke andar ungliyan phisalne lagin. Mera hoodie pehenna bekaar ho gaya kyunki ab thand nahi, jism mein ek alag hi garmi thi.

Humne ek-dusre ko aise jakad liya jaise agar chhoda toh toot jayenge.
Saloni ki saansein bhaari ho gayi thin. Wo beech-beech mein saans lene ke liye rukti, par phir dobara toot padti.

Maine unhe thoda utha kar deewar se sata diya.

Main (Saans chadhte hue): “Tum... tum pagal ho gayi ho aaj.”

Saloni (Meri aankhon mein nasha liye hue): “Haan... tere liye. Sirf tere liye.”

Unhone meri hoodie ke andar haath daal kar meri T-shirt ke upar se meri chest feel ki. Unka touch electric current jaisa tha.

Saloni:Promise kar... chahe kitni bhi behne aa jayein, chahe duniya idhar ki udhar ho jaye... Tu sirf mera rahega.

Maine unke maathe par apna maatha tikaya. Hum dono haanf rahe the.

Main: “Main tera hi hoon. Hamesha.”

Ek aakhri, intense kiss ke baad hum alag hue.
Saloni ka chehra laal tha, baal bikhre hue, aur honth soojhe hue. Wo kisi pari se kam nahi lag rahi thi, ek aisi pari jo sirf meri thi.

Saloni (Halki muskaan ke saath): “Ab ja... jo bhi karne ja raha tha. Par jaldi wapas aana. Main wait karungi.”

Mujhe hairani hui. Use pata tha ki main walk karne nahi ja raha tha. Use shayad ehsaas tha ki main kuch chhupa raha hoon, par usne sawal nahi kiya. Bas bharosa kiya.

Main: “Jaldi aaunga.”

Saloni ne ek baar mud kar mujhe dekha, phir sharam aur khushi ke mix expressions ke saath tezi se neeche bhaag gayi.

Main wahan khada raha, thandi hawa mein bhi pasina ponchte hue.
Mera dil abhi bhi racing track par daud raha tha.

(Self-Talk)

“Focus Dev. Focus. Ab mission poora karna hai. Taaki ye smile hamesha safe rahe.”

Maine hoodie ka cap wapas sar par daala, mask upar kiya, aur andhere mein gayab ho gaya par mere face par ek muskurahat thi... pata nahi kis feeling ki thi.








 

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UPDATE 24 – FEELINGS


Bike ka engine band hua, par Saloni Didi ki saansein abhi bhi tez thi.
Stand lagate waqt maine notice kiya ki unke haath handle grip ko itni zor se pakde hue the ki unki knuckles safed pad gayi thi.
Wo Scorpio ka scene, wo maut ka ehsaas... unke dimaag mein loop ki tarah chal raha tha.

Ghar ke darwaze par pahunchte hi maine unka thanda pada haath apne haath mein liya aur halka sa dabaya.

Main: “Didi, meri taraf dekhiye.”

Unhone palak jhapak kar meri taraf dekha. Unki aankhon mein abhi bhi wahi khauf tha.

Main (Naram par firm awaaz mein): “Andar Mom aur Dad hain. Agar unhe zara sa bhi shak hua ki aaj hum maut ko chhoo kar aaye hain, toh wo panic ho jayenge. Ghar ka sukoon bikhar jayega... aur shayad aapka college bhi. Aur main aapke college mein hoon, yeh mat batana yahan kisi ko bhi.”

Saloni ne ek gehari saans li, jaise wo hawa se himmat kheench rahi ho. Unhone apne dupatte ko theek kiya aur chehre par ek fake smile chipka li.

Saloni: “Main... main theek hoon. Bas traffic aur thakan... yahi bolna hai na?”

Main: “Bilkul. Muskuraiye Senior, aap duniya ki sabse safe jagah par hain... apne ghar mein.”

Humne doorbell bajayi. Andar se hansi ki awaaz aa rahi thi—ek aisa sound jo bahar ki khatarnak duniya se bilkul alag tha.




Darwaza khulte hi ghar ki usual Chaos ne humara swagat kiya.
TV par news chal rahi thi, kitchen se chai ki khushboo aa rahi thi, aur mahoul bilkul halka tha.

Mom: “Aa gaye nawabzaade? 5 baje ka time tha, 5:30 ho gaye. Chai thandi ho gayi tumhare intezaar mein.”

Main haste hue seedha sofa par Dad ke bagal mein gir gaya.

Main: “Sorry Mom, wo traffic police checking kar rahi thi. Aaj kal naye rules aaye hain, bas wahi time lag gaya.”

Chacha Ji (Samose ki plate se ek piece uthate hue): “Sahi kiya police ne. Aaj kal ke ladke bike sadak par chalate kam hain, udate zyada hain. Kyun Dev?”
Unhone haste hue mujhe kohni maari.

Main: “Bilkul Chacha ji. Par main toh 40 ki speed se upar jata hi nahi. Seedha sadha chalata hoon.”

Isha Didi (Garam pakode lekar aate hue): “Chal jhoothe! Kaiyi baar maine tujhe market mein dekha tha, tu kisi bike wale se race laga raha tha.”

Main (Haskar): “Didi ab main police wala khud hoon, ab kya apna challan main apne haathon se kaatu?”

Sab hass pade. Mahoul bohot pyara tha.
Bahar dushman jaan lene ko taiyaar baitha tha, par yahan andar... sab kitna innocent, kitna safe tha. Aisa hi toh hai ghar apna.

Tabhi seedhiyon (stairs) par dham-dham ki awaaz aayi. Kabir bhai daudta hua niche aaye.
Unke chehre par ek chamak thi aur haath mein phone tha.

Kabir: “Attention Family! Attention please!”
Sabne chai ka cup rok kar uski taraf dekha.

Dad: “Ab kya naya kaand kiya tune Kabir?”

Kabir: “Kaand nahi Dad, ‘Breaking News’ hai! Abhi-abhi message aaya hai. Humari ‘Dangal Sisters’ wapas aa rahi hain!”

Sab confuse ho gaye.
Chachi: “Kaun? Sikha aur Komal?”
(Sikha aur Komal - Kabir ki choti behne aur humari cousins jo videsh mein padhti hain).

Kabir: “Ji haan! Unke exams khatam ho gaye hain. Dono kal subah ki flight se aa rahi hain. Poore 1.5 mahine (Dedh mahine) ki chutti par! Ab ghar mein asli hungama shuru hoga.”

Ghar mein khushi ki lehar daud gayi.

Mom: “Haaye meri bachiyaan aa rahi hain! Kitne din ho gaye unhe dekhe. Kal main unke liye gajar ka halwa banaungi, Sikha ko bohot pasand hai.”

Chacha Ji: “Chalo badhiya hai, ghar mein ab raunak aur badhegi.”

Sab khush the. Ek-dusre ko mithai khilane ki baatein kar rahe the.
Sivaaye mere.

Main muskura raha tha, taali baja raha tha, par mere andar ka ‘Cop’ alert mode par chala gaya tha.
Mera kaam aasaan nahi, aur mushkil hone wala tha.

Kabir (Mere paas aakar kandhe par haath rakhte hue): “Kyun Dev bhai? Chehre ka rang kyu ud gaya? Sikha aa rahi hai... tera room capture karne. Darr gaya kya?”

Main (Hansi ke peeche tension chhupate hue): “Aane de. Is baar free mein room nahi dunga, kiraya vasool karunga usse.”

Sab wapas hass pade aur aise samay ne dimaag thoda cool kar diya.





(Raat ke 09:45 PM)

Dinner ke baad, sab apne kamron mein chale gaye the. Sone ki tayari chal rahi thi.
Main chhat (terrace) par tahal raha tha. Hawa thandi thi, par mera dimaag garam tha. Mujhe aaj raat nikalna tha — us mystery ko solve karne ke liye jo mere parivaar ke liye khatra ban rahi thi.

Tabhi peeche se dabe paon kisi ke aane ki aahat hui.
Palat kar dekha toh Saloni Didi thi. Wo ek shawl odh kar aayi thi, baal khule the aur chehra thoda utra hua tha.

Wo mere paas railing par aakar khadi ho gayi. Kuch der hum dono ne bas shaant sadak ko dekha.

Saloni: “Tu sach bol raha tha na?”
Main: “Kis baare mein?”
Saloni: “Wo accident... Wo galti se hua tha na? Ya koi...”

Wo sentence poora nahi kar payi, par unka darr saaf tha.
Mera mann kiya use gale laga loon, keh doon ki ‘Haan Didi, khatra hai, par main hoon na.’

Lekin abhi sach batana unhe tod deta.
Maine railing ke peeche unka haath apne haath mein liya. Unki ungliyan thandi thi.

Main: “Trust me Saloni. Jab tak main tumhare saath hoon... koi gadi, koi insaan, koi musibat tumhe chhu nahi sakti. Main deewar hoon is ghar ki.”

Saloni ne meri aankhon mein dekha, dhoondne ki koshish ki ki main jhoot bol raha hoon ya sach. Phir unhone meri hatheli par apna doosra haath rakh diya.

Saloni: “Pata hai. Shayad isliye abhi tak saans le rahi hoon. Par... darr lagta hai Dev. Tujhe kuch ho gaya toh?”

Main (Muskurate hue): “Mujhe kuch nahi hoga. Main ‘lambi race ka ghoda’ hoon.”

Saloni halka sa hansi.

Saloni: “Kal Sikha aur Komal aa rahi hain. Ghar mein bheed badh jayegi. Humein akele waqt kam milega.”

Main: “Chori-chuppe milne ka maza hi kuch aur hai, Senior. Bheed mein aankhein chaar karna zyada romantic hota hai.”

Saloni ne halke se sharma kar dhakka diya.

Saloni: “Chal, bada aaya romantic. Sone jaa rahi hoon. Tu bhi aaja jaldi.”

Main: “Goodnight. Tum jao, main thodi hawa kha kar aata hoon.”

Saloni chali gayi.
Jaise hi darwaza band hua, mere chehre se muskaan gayab ho gayi. Chehra ekdum sakht ho gaya.

Maine apni ghadi (watch) dekhi.
10:15 PM.

Maine side se ek hoodie nikala jo chhupaya tha.
Maine jaldi se apni Black Hoodie pehni aur chain upar kheench hi raha tha ki achanak chhat ka lohay ka darwaza phirse...
“Creak...” karke khula.

Mera haath chain par hi ruk gaya. Dhadkan ek second ke liye skip ho gayi.
Maine palat kar dekha.
Saloni.
Wo wapas aa gayi thi.

Mere dimaag ne turant bahana dhoondha. Maine hoodie ki cap theek karte hue ek casual acting ki.

Main: “Arre... wo... achanak hawa tez ho gayi thi na. Thand lag rahi thi, isliye hoodie pehen li. Socha thodi der walk kar loon.”

Saloni ne kuch nahi kaha. Wo bas mujhe dekhti rahi. Unki aankhon mein wo sawal nahi tha jo main expect kar raha tha.
Unki aankhon mein ek ajeeb si Kashish (Attraction) aur ek Darr tha—khone ka darr.

Wo dheere-dheere meri taraf badhi. Hawa unke baalon ko uda rahi thi.

Saloni (Halki awaaz mein): “Jhoot mat bol Dev.

Main chup ho gaya. Kya pakda gaya?

Saloni: “Tujhe thand nahi lag rahi... Tu bas mujhse door rehne ke bahane dhoondta hai.”

Wo ab mere bilkul kareeb aa gayi thi. Itne kareeb ki main unki saanson ki garmahat mehsoos kar sakta tha. Maine peeche hatne ki koshish ki, par peeche paani ki tanki ki deewar thi.

Main (Hichkichate hue): “Nahi Didi... wo baat nahi hai. Main bas...”

Saloni ne meri baat kaat di. Unhone apna haath badhaya aur meri hoodie ki chain ko pakad liya. Bajaye neeche karne ke, unhone use meri chest par halka sa kheench kar mujhe apni taraf jhuka liya.

Saloni: “Kal subah Sikha aur Komal aa jayengi. Ghar mein shor hoga, bheed hogi. Har waqt koi na koi humare aas-paas hoga. Shayad humein ek minute bhi akele na mile.”

Unki awaaz mein ek Desperation thi.

Saloni:Mujhe nahi pata kal kya hoga... par aaj ki raat... main tujhe door nahi jaane dungi.

Mere andar ka ‘Cop’ chilla raha tha ki ‘Jao Dev, mission zaroori hai’, par mere andar ka ‘Premi’ pighal raha tha.

Main: “Par Didi... koi aa gaya toh?”

Saloni (Meri aankhon mein dekh kar): “Aa jaane do.

Ye sunte hi mera control tootne laga.

Saloni ne apne thande haath mere gaalon par rakhe. Unka sparsh barf jaisa thanda tha, par unki nazron mein aag thi.
Unhone dheere se apne pairon ke toes par uth kar apna chehra mere kareeb kiya. Humari naak takra gayi.

Main: “Saloni...”

Mere mooh se ‘Didi’ shabd gayab ho gaya.

Unhone kuch bolne ka mauka nahi diya. Saloni ne apne honth mere honthon par rakh diye.
Pehle wo kiss halka tha—ek hichkichahat bhara sawaal. Jaise wo pooch rahi hon ki ‘Kya ye sahi hai?’
Par jaise hi maine response diya, wo sawaal ek jawaab mein badal gaya.

Maine apne haath unki kamar par rakh diye aur unhe apni taraf kheench liya.
Wo kiss gehra hota gaya.
“Mmm...” Saloni ke gale se ek halki siski nikli.

Aaj ka darr, maut ka wo scene, aur kal aane wali doori—sab us ek pal mein mit gaya.
Unke haath mere gardan ke peeche chale gaye, meri hoodie ke andar ungliyan phisalne lagin. Mera hoodie pehenna bekaar ho gaya kyunki ab thand nahi, jism mein ek alag hi garmi thi.

Humne ek-dusre ko aise jakad liya jaise agar chhoda toh toot jayenge.
Saloni ki saansein bhaari ho gayi thin. Wo beech-beech mein saans lene ke liye rukti, par phir dobara toot padti.

Maine unhe thoda utha kar deewar se sata diya.

Main (Saans chadhte hue): “Tum... tum pagal ho gayi ho aaj.”

Saloni (Meri aankhon mein nasha liye hue): “Haan... tere liye. Sirf tere liye.”

Unhone meri hoodie ke andar haath daal kar meri T-shirt ke upar se meri chest feel ki. Unka touch electric current jaisa tha.

Saloni:Promise kar... chahe kitni bhi behne aa jayein, chahe duniya idhar ki udhar ho jaye... Tu sirf mera rahega.

Maine unke maathe par apna maatha tikaya. Hum dono haanf rahe the.

Main: “Main tera hi hoon. Hamesha.”

Ek aakhri, intense kiss ke baad hum alag hue.
Saloni ka chehra laal tha, baal bikhre hue, aur honth soojhe hue. Wo kisi pari se kam nahi lag rahi thi, ek aisi pari jo sirf meri thi.

Saloni (Halki muskaan ke saath): “Ab ja... jo bhi karne ja raha tha. Par jaldi wapas aana. Main wait karungi.”

Mujhe hairani hui. Use pata tha ki main walk karne nahi ja raha tha. Use shayad ehsaas tha ki main kuch chhupa raha hoon, par usne sawal nahi kiya. Bas bharosa kiya.

Main: “Jaldi aaunga.”

Saloni ne ek baar mud kar mujhe dekha, phir sharam aur khushi ke mix expressions ke saath tezi se neeche bhaag gayi.

Main wahan khada raha, thandi hawa mein bhi pasina ponchte hue.
Mera dil abhi bhi racing track par daud raha tha.

(Self-Talk)

“Focus Dev. Focus. Ab mission poora karna hai. Taaki ye smile hamesha safe rahe.”

Maine hoodie ka cap wapas sar par daala, mask upar kiya, aur andhere mein gayab ho gaya par mere face par ek muskurahat thi... pata nahi kis feeling ki thi.








Bahut badhiya update Hai Bhai.....
Maaja aageya hai... Wah bhai wah....kya scene dala hai dev or saloni ka pehli baar kiss kiya...liken kiss karte wakt jo scene hota hai hai na ki jo scene sex wali story me dalta hai na waise thoda aur details me batate to feelings or baadh jata....waise bus me jo admi last me mar geya tha wo bola ki agli baar attack ander se hoga.....kahi kabir bhai V ke sath to nhi.....kyu ki pichle janam me bhi teen bhai uske khilaf the to issbar ho sackta hai....
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UPDATE 18 – THE TRAP INSIDE

Bus ka darwaza mere peeche Hiss karke band ho gaya.

Andar ka nazara bahar se bilkul alag tha.
Kaale paint ki wajah se ghut’ti roshni — sirf driver cabin ki dim light aur dashboard ke LEDs.

Hawa mein paseena, darr aur purani seat covers ki badboo.
Bachche seats ke neeche dubke hue, siskiyan bhi dabi hui.

Meri nazrein turant Scan Mode mein.

Threat Assessment:
• Target 1 (Joker Mask): Saamne, 5 kadam. Saloni Didi ko baalon se pakda hua. Gun temple par. Primary threat.
• Target 2 (Rear Guard): Pichle hisse mein. AK-Draco short. Bachchon ko cover.
• Target 3 (Driver Seat): Shotgun. Mirrors par dhyaan.

Status: Main unarmed + shirtless.
Time limit: Seconds.

Joker ne Saloni Didi ko jhatka diya — woh seat par giri, maatha lohe se takraya.

“Aah!”

Mera shareer aage badha, par maine pair zameen mein gadd diye.
Abhi nahi ek galat kadam aur didi ki jaan....

Joker (hanste hue): “Dekh raha hoon… aankhon mein gussa hai, pairon mein control.
V Sir ne sahi kaha tha… tu aam police wala nahi hai.


Main (shaant): “Saloni ko chhod de. Tera kaam mujhse hai na? Main aa gaya.

Joker: “Tch tch… itni jaldi nahi.
Pehle live stream on karenge. Duniya dekhegi Inspector kaise ghutno par gidgidata hai.”

Usne Rear Guard ko ishara kiya.

Joker: “Oye! Iske haath baandh. Tight.”

Target 2 rifle latka kar zip-ties le aaya.

Window of Opportunity.

Jab woh mere paas aaya — Joker ka vision block.

3… 2… 1…

Maine uski kalaayi pakdi — ek jhatke mein kheench kar Human Shield banaya.
Gala arm mein phasaya — Chokehold.

Joker (chilla kar): “Chhod usse!”

Gun meri taraf.

Main (gunde ke kaan mein): “Sorry dost.”

Belt se pistol nikali — tez movement, kisi ne dekha hi nahi.

Joker trigger dabane wala tha…

THAIN!

Meri goli pehle — seedha Joker ke dahine kandhe par.

“AAAAHHH!”

Gun giri.

Saloni Didi: “Dev peeche!

Driver shotgun ghuma raha tha.

Maine chokehold wale gunde ko driver par dhakka maara — dono narrow passage mein phans gaye.

Ab main free ho gaya thaa.

Joker zameen par, gun uthane ki koshish.

Main uske upar kooda — knee drop chhaati par.

CRACK! (pasliyan tooti)

Gardan pakad kar zameen par patka.

Mask tedhi, khoon nikal raha.

Main (guraate hue): “Kisne bheja hai tujhe? Bol!

Peeche movement.

Target 2 rifle utha chuka tha — seedha aim.

Main Joker ke upar tha. Bachne ki jagah nahi.

Goli chalti toh main hat jata… par Saloni ko lagti.

Waqt ruk gaya.

Clock Mark sensation wapas — halki si.

Muscles vibrate.

Trigger dabta hua dikh raha tha — slow motion.

Maine Joker ki giri gun uthayi, bina dekhe peeche aim…

CLANG!

Goli seedha rifle ke barrel par — sparks, rifle giri.

Main palta — daud — Flying Knee seedha jaw par.

Woh behosh seat par gira.

Bus mein sannata.

Teen gunde.
30 seconds.
Khel khatam.

Main Joker ke paas wapas.

Mask nocha — military cut, gardan par tattoo. Mercenary.

Main: “V kaun hai? Woh mujhse kya chahta hai?”

Joker (khoon thookte, creepy smile): “Woh test le raha tha Dev.
Tumhari speed… accuracy… decision making.
Bina kisi bachche ko maare rok liya… toh tum Phase 2 ke liye qualify kar gaye.


Main: “Phase 2? Kya bakwaas?”

Joker:Phase 2… jahan dushman bahar se nahi aayenge…
Tumhare andar se aayenge.
V ne kaha hai… ‘Time God ka asli dushman Samay hi hota hai.’


Yeh bolte hi daant beech mein dabaye — Cyanide capsule.

Body akad gayi. Khatam.

Maine gusse mein zameen par mukka maara.

Damn it Madharchod sala..!

Tabhi halki rone ki aawaz…

Saloni Didi seat ke kone mein dubki hui — chehra safed.

Unhone mujhe gunde ko maarte, haath todte, goli chalate hue dekha tha.

Yeh woh Babu nahi tha jise woh jaanti thi.

Main dheere se paas gaya — haath pe khoon laga hua.

Main (halki aawaz): “Didi…?”

Woh peeche hati. Darr ke maare.

Maime haath peeche kiye.

Main: “Main hoon… Dev. Aapka bhai.”

Unhone aankhon mein dekha — purani masoomiyat dhoondhi.

Phir nange seene par purane zakhm dekhe.
Darr pighal gaya aur unhe sayad apna babu dikh gaya .

Woh aage badhi aur itni zor se gale lagaya ki saans atak gayi.

Saloni Didi (phoot-phoot kar): “Mujhe laga maine tujhe kho diya…

Main: “Kaha tha na… narak mein bhi chhupne ki jagah nahi milegi enko meri didi ko chua enhhone yeh esi layak the .
Main aa gaya Didi. Kuch nahi hone dunga.”

Bahar sirens.

Commandos ne darwaza toda.

POLICE! CLEAR!

SHO sabse pehle aaye — teeno gundon ki haalat dekhi, phir humein.

Unki aankhon mein respect.

SHO: “Dev… tu thik hai?”

Maine sir hilaya — aankhein boli: “V ko dhoondhna padega Sir. Yeh sirf shuruaat hai.

Bus se neeche utre hue, mujhe duniya hero ki tarah dekh rahi thi.

Par Saloni Didi ne mera haath itna kass ke pakda tha…
jaise chhoda toh main hawa mein gayab ho jaunga.

Aur shayad… unka darr sahi bhi tha.

Kyunki jis raste par main chal pada tha…
wahan se wapas aana aasaan nahi tha,woh kehate hai naa joh upper aapke liye likha jaa chuka woh badlega nahi chahe aap time traveller hi kyu naa ban jaaye.....
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Dev the lover

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Bahut badhiya update Hai Bhai.....
Maaja aageya hai... Wah bhai wah....kya scene dala hai dev or saloni ka pehli baar kiss kiya...liken kiss karte wakt jo scene hota hai hai na ki jo scene sex wali story me dalta hai na waise thoda aur details me batate to feelings or baadh jata....waise bus me jo admi last me mar geya tha wo bola ki agli baar attack ander se hoga.....kahi kabir bhai V ke sath to nhi.....kyu ki pichle janam me bhi teen bhai uske khilaf the to issbar ho sackta hai....
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Bhai, kamaal ka review!
Aapka feedback padhkar sach me energy double ho gayi 🔥
Kiss ka scene pehli-baar wali softness me rakha tha,
Par aage feelings aur gehri hone wali hain* —
jahan emotion + intensity dono ek hi frame me milenge ❤️‍🔥

Aur jo aapne “andar se attack” aur Kabir wala angle pakda…
wah bhai, observation top notch pichali story ke behalf par...

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Update 25
Smith bhai, full-on thanks shower! 😄




Thank you bhai! 🔥


Mazedar update
Shukriya king bhai!

Thanks bhai!
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UPDATE 24 – FEELINGS


Bike ka engine band hua, par Saloni Didi ki saansein abhi bhi tez thi.
Stand lagate waqt maine notice kiya ki unke haath handle grip ko itni zor se pakde hue the ki unki knuckles safed pad gayi thi.
Wo Scorpio ka scene, wo maut ka ehsaas... unke dimaag mein loop ki tarah chal raha tha.

Ghar ke darwaze par pahunchte hi maine unka thanda pada haath apne haath mein liya aur halka sa dabaya.

Main: “Didi, meri taraf dekhiye.”

Unhone palak jhapak kar meri taraf dekha. Unki aankhon mein abhi bhi wahi khauf tha.

Main (Naram par firm awaaz mein): “Andar Mom aur Dad hain. Agar unhe zara sa bhi shak hua ki aaj hum maut ko chhoo kar aaye hain, toh wo panic ho jayenge. Ghar ka sukoon bikhar jayega... aur shayad aapka college bhi. Aur main aapke college mein hoon, yeh mat batana yahan kisi ko bhi.”

Saloni ne ek gehari saans li, jaise wo hawa se himmat kheench rahi ho. Unhone apne dupatte ko theek kiya aur chehre par ek fake smile chipka li.

Saloni: “Main... main theek hoon. Bas traffic aur thakan... yahi bolna hai na?”

Main: “Bilkul. Muskuraiye Senior, aap duniya ki sabse safe jagah par hain... apne ghar mein.”

Humne doorbell bajayi. Andar se hansi ki awaaz aa rahi thi—ek aisa sound jo bahar ki khatarnak duniya se bilkul alag tha.




Darwaza khulte hi ghar ki usual Chaos ne humara swagat kiya.
TV par news chal rahi thi, kitchen se chai ki khushboo aa rahi thi, aur mahoul bilkul halka tha.

Mom: “Aa gaye nawabzaade? 5 baje ka time tha, 5:30 ho gaye. Chai thandi ho gayi tumhare intezaar mein.”

Main haste hue seedha sofa par Dad ke bagal mein gir gaya.

Main: “Sorry Mom, wo traffic police checking kar rahi thi. Aaj kal naye rules aaye hain, bas wahi time lag gaya.”

Chacha Ji (Samose ki plate se ek piece uthate hue): “Sahi kiya police ne. Aaj kal ke ladke bike sadak par chalate kam hain, udate zyada hain. Kyun Dev?”
Unhone haste hue mujhe kohni maari.

Main: “Bilkul Chacha ji. Par main toh 40 ki speed se upar jata hi nahi. Seedha sadha chalata hoon.”

Isha Didi (Garam pakode lekar aate hue): “Chal jhoothe! Kaiyi baar maine tujhe market mein dekha tha, tu kisi bike wale se race laga raha tha.”

Main (Haskar): “Didi ab main police wala khud hoon, ab kya apna challan main apne haathon se kaatu?”

Sab hass pade. Mahoul bohot pyara tha.
Bahar dushman jaan lene ko taiyaar baitha tha, par yahan andar... sab kitna innocent, kitna safe tha. Aisa hi toh hai ghar apna.

Tabhi seedhiyon (stairs) par dham-dham ki awaaz aayi. Kabir bhai daudta hua niche aaye.
Unke chehre par ek chamak thi aur haath mein phone tha.

Kabir: “Attention Family! Attention please!”
Sabne chai ka cup rok kar uski taraf dekha.

Dad: “Ab kya naya kaand kiya tune Kabir?”

Kabir: “Kaand nahi Dad, ‘Breaking News’ hai! Abhi-abhi message aaya hai. Humari ‘Dangal Sisters’ wapas aa rahi hain!”

Sab confuse ho gaye.
Chachi: “Kaun? Sikha aur Komal?”
(Sikha aur Komal - Kabir ki choti behne aur humari cousins jo videsh mein padhti hain).

Kabir: “Ji haan! Unke exams khatam ho gaye hain. Dono kal subah ki flight se aa rahi hain. Poore 1.5 mahine (Dedh mahine) ki chutti par! Ab ghar mein asli hungama shuru hoga.”

Ghar mein khushi ki lehar daud gayi.

Mom: “Haaye meri bachiyaan aa rahi hain! Kitne din ho gaye unhe dekhe. Kal main unke liye gajar ka halwa banaungi, Sikha ko bohot pasand hai.”

Chacha Ji: “Chalo badhiya hai, ghar mein ab raunak aur badhegi.”

Sab khush the. Ek-dusre ko mithai khilane ki baatein kar rahe the.
Sivaaye mere.

Main muskura raha tha, taali baja raha tha, par mere andar ka ‘Cop’ alert mode par chala gaya tha.
Mera kaam aasaan nahi, aur mushkil hone wala tha.

Kabir (Mere paas aakar kandhe par haath rakhte hue): “Kyun Dev bhai? Chehre ka rang kyu ud gaya? Sikha aa rahi hai... tera room capture karne. Darr gaya kya?”

Main (Hansi ke peeche tension chhupate hue): “Aane de. Is baar free mein room nahi dunga, kiraya vasool karunga usse.”

Sab wapas hass pade aur aise samay ne dimaag thoda cool kar diya.





(Raat ke 09:45 PM)

Dinner ke baad, sab apne kamron mein chale gaye the. Sone ki tayari chal rahi thi.
Main chhat (terrace) par tahal raha tha. Hawa thandi thi, par mera dimaag garam tha. Mujhe aaj raat nikalna tha — us mystery ko solve karne ke liye jo mere parivaar ke liye khatra ban rahi thi.

Tabhi peeche se dabe paon kisi ke aane ki aahat hui.
Palat kar dekha toh Saloni Didi thi. Wo ek shawl odh kar aayi thi, baal khule the aur chehra thoda utra hua tha.

Wo mere paas railing par aakar khadi ho gayi. Kuch der hum dono ne bas shaant sadak ko dekha.

Saloni: “Tu sach bol raha tha na?”
Main: “Kis baare mein?”
Saloni: “Wo accident... Wo galti se hua tha na? Ya koi...”

Wo sentence poora nahi kar payi, par unka darr saaf tha.
Mera mann kiya use gale laga loon, keh doon ki ‘Haan Didi, khatra hai, par main hoon na.’

Lekin abhi sach batana unhe tod deta.
Maine railing ke peeche unka haath apne haath mein liya. Unki ungliyan thandi thi.

Main: “Trust me Saloni. Jab tak main tumhare saath hoon... koi gadi, koi insaan, koi musibat tumhe chhu nahi sakti. Main deewar hoon is ghar ki.”

Saloni ne meri aankhon mein dekha, dhoondne ki koshish ki ki main jhoot bol raha hoon ya sach. Phir unhone meri hatheli par apna doosra haath rakh diya.

Saloni: “Pata hai. Shayad isliye abhi tak saans le rahi hoon. Par... darr lagta hai Dev. Tujhe kuch ho gaya toh?”

Main (Muskurate hue): “Mujhe kuch nahi hoga. Main ‘lambi race ka ghoda’ hoon.”

Saloni halka sa hansi.

Saloni: “Kal Sikha aur Komal aa rahi hain. Ghar mein bheed badh jayegi. Humein akele waqt kam milega.”

Main: “Chori-chuppe milne ka maza hi kuch aur hai, Senior. Bheed mein aankhein chaar karna zyada romantic hota hai.”

Saloni ne halke se sharma kar dhakka diya.

Saloni: “Chal, bada aaya romantic. Sone jaa rahi hoon. Tu bhi aaja jaldi.”

Main: “Goodnight. Tum jao, main thodi hawa kha kar aata hoon.”

Saloni chali gayi.
Jaise hi darwaza band hua, mere chehre se muskaan gayab ho gayi. Chehra ekdum sakht ho gaya.

Maine apni ghadi (watch) dekhi.
10:15 PM.

Maine side se ek hoodie nikala jo chhupaya tha.
Maine jaldi se apni Black Hoodie pehni aur chain upar kheench hi raha tha ki achanak chhat ka lohay ka darwaza phirse...
“Creak...” karke khula.

Mera haath chain par hi ruk gaya. Dhadkan ek second ke liye skip ho gayi.
Maine palat kar dekha.
Saloni.
Wo wapas aa gayi thi.

Mere dimaag ne turant bahana dhoondha. Maine hoodie ki cap theek karte hue ek casual acting ki.

Main: “Arre... wo... achanak hawa tez ho gayi thi na. Thand lag rahi thi, isliye hoodie pehen li. Socha thodi der walk kar loon.”

Saloni ne kuch nahi kaha. Wo bas mujhe dekhti rahi. Unki aankhon mein wo sawal nahi tha jo main expect kar raha tha.
Unki aankhon mein ek ajeeb si Kashish (Attraction) aur ek Darr tha—khone ka darr.

Wo dheere-dheere meri taraf badhi. Hawa unke baalon ko uda rahi thi.

Saloni (Halki awaaz mein): “Jhoot mat bol Dev.

Main chup ho gaya. Kya pakda gaya?

Saloni: “Tujhe thand nahi lag rahi... Tu bas mujhse door rehne ke bahane dhoondta hai.”

Wo ab mere bilkul kareeb aa gayi thi. Itne kareeb ki main unki saanson ki garmahat mehsoos kar sakta tha. Maine peeche hatne ki koshish ki, par peeche paani ki tanki ki deewar thi.

Main (Hichkichate hue): “Nahi Didi... wo baat nahi hai. Main bas...”

Saloni ne meri baat kaat di. Unhone apna haath badhaya aur meri hoodie ki chain ko pakad liya. Bajaye neeche karne ke, unhone use meri chest par halka sa kheench kar mujhe apni taraf jhuka liya.

Saloni: “Kal subah Sikha aur Komal aa jayengi. Ghar mein shor hoga, bheed hogi. Har waqt koi na koi humare aas-paas hoga. Shayad humein ek minute bhi akele na mile.”

Unki awaaz mein ek Desperation thi.

Saloni:Mujhe nahi pata kal kya hoga... par aaj ki raat... main tujhe door nahi jaane dungi.

Mere andar ka ‘Cop’ chilla raha tha ki ‘Jao Dev, mission zaroori hai’, par mere andar ka ‘Premi’ pighal raha tha.

Main: “Par Didi... koi aa gaya toh?”

Saloni (Meri aankhon mein dekh kar): “Aa jaane do.

Ye sunte hi mera control tootne laga.

Saloni ne apne thande haath mere gaalon par rakhe. Unka sparsh barf jaisa thanda tha, par unki nazron mein aag thi.
Unhone dheere se apne pairon ke toes par uth kar apna chehra mere kareeb kiya. Humari naak takra gayi.

Main: “Saloni...”

Mere mooh se ‘Didi’ shabd gayab ho gaya.

Unhone kuch bolne ka mauka nahi diya. Saloni ne apne honth mere honthon par rakh diye.
Pehle wo kiss halka tha—ek hichkichahat bhara sawaal. Jaise wo pooch rahi hon ki ‘Kya ye sahi hai?’
Par jaise hi maine response diya, wo sawaal ek jawaab mein badal gaya.

Maine apne haath unki kamar par rakh diye aur unhe apni taraf kheench liya.
Wo kiss gehra hota gaya.
“Mmm...” Saloni ke gale se ek halki siski nikli.

Aaj ka darr, maut ka wo scene, aur kal aane wali doori—sab us ek pal mein mit gaya.
Unke haath mere gardan ke peeche chale gaye, meri hoodie ke andar ungliyan phisalne lagin. Mera hoodie pehenna bekaar ho gaya kyunki ab thand nahi, jism mein ek alag hi garmi thi.

Humne ek-dusre ko aise jakad liya jaise agar chhoda toh toot jayenge.
Saloni ki saansein bhaari ho gayi thin. Wo beech-beech mein saans lene ke liye rukti, par phir dobara toot padti.

Maine unhe thoda utha kar deewar se sata diya.

Main (Saans chadhte hue): “Tum... tum pagal ho gayi ho aaj.”

Saloni (Meri aankhon mein nasha liye hue): “Haan... tere liye. Sirf tere liye.”

Unhone meri hoodie ke andar haath daal kar meri T-shirt ke upar se meri chest feel ki. Unka touch electric current jaisa tha.

Saloni:Promise kar... chahe kitni bhi behne aa jayein, chahe duniya idhar ki udhar ho jaye... Tu sirf mera rahega.

Maine unke maathe par apna maatha tikaya. Hum dono haanf rahe the.

Main: “Main tera hi hoon. Hamesha.”

Ek aakhri, intense kiss ke baad hum alag hue.
Saloni ka chehra laal tha, baal bikhre hue, aur honth soojhe hue. Wo kisi pari se kam nahi lag rahi thi, ek aisi pari jo sirf meri thi.

Saloni (Halki muskaan ke saath): “Ab ja... jo bhi karne ja raha tha. Par jaldi wapas aana. Main wait karungi.”

Mujhe hairani hui. Use pata tha ki main walk karne nahi ja raha tha. Use shayad ehsaas tha ki main kuch chhupa raha hoon, par usne sawal nahi kiya. Bas bharosa kiya.

Main: “Jaldi aaunga.”

Saloni ne ek baar mud kar mujhe dekha, phir sharam aur khushi ke mix expressions ke saath tezi se neeche bhaag gayi.

Main wahan khada raha, thandi hawa mein bhi pasina ponchte hue.
Mera dil abhi bhi racing track par daud raha tha.

(Self-Talk)

“Focus Dev. Focus. Ab mission poora karna hai. Taaki ye smile hamesha safe rahe.”

Maine hoodie ka cap wapas sar par daala, mask upar kiya, aur andhere mein gayab ho gaya par mere face par ek muskurahat thi... pata nahi kis feeling ki thi.








Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Dev the lover bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
 
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