Incest Raaz - Andhere Ka Raja

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Update mast hai
Par bahut dino baad diya hai to pahle ki sari story bhool gaye hai
Please is baar update jaldi dena

Thanks! Ik update late aaya hai but hey ishi liye 11k+ word count ka update aaya. Saath bane raho bhi aage Stroy mast hai.

 

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Bahut hi sandar apdet Bhai

Thanks Bhai.

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro

 

[Dolar]

Ik bhai, parsonal reasons ke wajah se update late aaya but hey isliye do-teen update ka material Ek Sath De Diya.

Ohh koi nahi bro, ab agla update possible rahe to jaldi dena..

Haan! Purnima ne Aryan ko kbhi nahi dekha, bas usse bataya gaya hai ki Jyoti ki ek ladka bhi hai.

Doubts usko phele se hi hai, aane wale updates Mein pata chalega.

Btw jab Aryan paida nahi hua tha us samay hi sabko idea tha ki Jyoti ke pat mai jo hai woh ghar ke liye accha nahi hoga yeh elders ne kaha hoga...

Isliye pankaj shuru mai hi Purnima ko apne sath lekr chala gya tha aur Purnima ko us samay pata tha Jyoti pregnant hai aur pankaj usse es tarah apne sath lekr ja raha hai, usse kab doubt ho sakta hai ki kuch gadbad hai..

Aryan ki body puri tarah change nahi huya hai, bas thoda sa hi change aaye hai. Haan! Biceps pe bhi kuchh changes aaye hai balki overall body mein bhi.

Han unhi changes ki baat kar raha tha..

Thanks for the review, saath bane rahiye aage ki kahani bohat mast hai.

Bro hum aapke sath hamesha hai bas weekly update de diya kariye, taki ek acchi khasi audience ban jaye..

 

[Smith_15]

Update 8

 

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Okay let's review, jaise ki pehle ke updates mein jo suspense aur emotional build up tha, woh yaha explode ho gaya hai.

Well explore abhi jiyada huy nahi, abhi baaki hai.

Starting from the beginning, Aryan ke awakening scene ko dekhiye woh bijli ka girna, dragon shape ke cloud, body ka uchalna aur ghawo ka khud se theek ho jaana, ye sab vividly accha se described hai

Thank you.

It's like a superhero origin, but with indian twist, nice. aur ye supernatural element ab story mein fully integrate ho gaya hai.

Superhero toh nahi nahi karunga, Aryan ko abhi hi Power mili. Woh khud nahi usko kya kya power mili hai expect me.

jo pehle sirf hints the. Aryan ka transformation bahut believable lagta hai pehle woh bewakoof, lachari wala ladka tha jo Myra ke prank aur Rohan ki pitai se toot gaya tha, but now, after this event, usme ek nayi energy aa gayi hai, jaise muscles badh gaye, shirt tight ho gayi, aur woh ab confident aur powerful feel kar raha hai. Ye change gradual nahi, sudden hai, lekin context mein perfect fit baithta hai.

Thanks Saath Bane raho.

But woh mysterious dragon and the mysterious eyes kaun the?

Ye spoiler Ho jayega bhai abhi nahi Bata Sakta.

Ab baat karte hain uss prostitute wali ladki ki uska character dil ko chhoo gaya! Pehle woh cute, seductive ban kar Aryan ko attract kar rahi thi. but jaise jaise story aage badhi, uski majboori saamne aayi maa ki bimari, desperation, aur phir woh boli lagna wala scene, ye sab itna heart-wrenching tha ki

Wo ladki ke bhi roll hoga next update mein bhi woh rahegi.

Aryan ka usko bachana, fight scene mein Lokesh maarna sab action-packed tha, aur satisfying bhi, because it shows Aryan ki nayi powers in action.

Thank you.

On the other side, haveli ka plot bhi equally gripping hai, Ria ka birthday party, family ka reunion with Pankaj, Purnima aur Bhavya.

but underlying tension Aryan ke death ko leke. Jyoti aur Anita ka silent Rehna, Bhavya ko jab pata chalega ki woh jiss bhai se milna chahti hai woh already Kai sal pahle dead ho chuka hai tab uska reaction Kya hoga?

Yeah, woh Samay pe sab samne aayega.

Mishka ka balcony wala scene sab se badhiya tha, uska "main usse bacha nahi paayi" yeha woh kisske bare mein keh rahi hai? Aryan ya Koi aur?

Yes! woh Aryan ke baare Mein hi baat kar rahi thi.

aur Ria ka "I hate him, that monster" ye lines toh goosebumps de deti hain, aur ye hint karti hain ki past mein kuchh dark secret hai jo Aryan ke saath hua tha.

Haan!

Bhavya ka excitement ek chhote bhai ke liye, jo actually Aryan hai, ye irony bahut achhi tarah se build ki gayi hai.

Naina ke saath Aryan ka bond bhi dikh raha hai, aur story ko emotional closure deta hai iss update ke liye.

Overall, writing style fantastic hai descriptive, emotional, aur fast-paced dialogues natural hain, aur suspense bana rakha hai.

Thanks for the review, Saath Bane raho.

 

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Mazedar update

Thanks Bhai

 

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Ye dragon story kr protagonists me ab aaya h,par kuchh update me to ye pahle aa chuka tha, to story present me h ya past me chal rahi h,baki achha tha update,4 -5 update aur doge to audience connect ho jayegi

Hmm past keh sakte ho but its important, yehi se khel suru hoga maybe 2-3 update ke andar stroy apni current time per pahunchegi.

 

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Outstanding and absolutely amazing update

Thanks Bhai

 

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Nice update bro

Thanks Bhai