Fantasy The Asura System

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𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝟒𝟒 𝐭𝐨 𝟒𝟖 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐛𝐞𝐞𝐧 𝐩𝐮𝐛𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐞𝐝. 𝐏𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐬𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝, 𝐞𝐧𝐣𝐨𝐲, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐝𝐨𝐧’𝐭 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐠𝐞𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐚 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞.

 

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[RAAZ]

Chapter 35
Shahi Takht ka Patan aur Asura ka Insaaf



Imperial Square ki sunehri dhool ab khoon se laal ho chuki thi. Princess Ling, jo kuch der pehle ek magroor malika ki tarah khadi thi, ab apne bhari shahi jode mein zameen par giri hui thi. Uska saans lena mushkil ho raha tha kyunki Aryan ki 'Abyssal Gravity' ne hawa ko itna bhari kar diya tha ki har ek saans kisi khanjar ki tarah uske phefdon (lungs) mein chubh rahi thi.
"Pitaji... bachaaiye!" Ling ne rote hue chillaya, uski aankhein darr se phati hui thin.
Emperor Vikramaditya ka chehra gusse se baingani pad gaya tha. Unhone apna haath hawa mein uthaya aur unke piche aasmaan mein barah sunehre darwaze khul gaye. In darwazon se barah yoddha bahar nikle, jinme se har ek Sky Realm Stage 1 par tha.
"The Twelve Celestial Generals!" bheed mein se kisi ne dehshat mein chillaya. "Yeh Empire ki aakhri dhaal hain!"
Aryan ne un barah yoddhaon ko dekha aur halka sa muskuraaya. Uske safed baal hawa mein aise lehra rahe thay jaise maut ka parcham ho. "Barah kide... kya tumhe lagta hai yeh mujhe rok payenge?"
Emperor ne garaj kar kaha, "Aryan! Tumne Asura Key ko absorb karke narak ke dwar khol diye hain. Aaj main tumhari aatma ko tabaah kar dunga! Barah Generals, MARO ISE!"
Barah Generals ne ek saath apni talwarein uthayin aur aasmaan se barah bijliyaan (lightning bolts) Aryan par giri. Poora square ek sunehri roshni mein doob gaya. Dhamaka itna bhayanak tha ki aas-paas ki imaaratein dhish-mish ho gayin.
Ling ne raahat ki saans li. "Marr gaya... gaddar marr gaya!"
Lekin jaise hi dhuaan hata, wahan ka nazaara dekh kar sabki rooh kaanp gayi.
Aryan wahan khada tha, lekin usne apni talwaar tak nahi nikaali thi. Uske charo taraf ek kaala ghera tha—'The Void Devourer'. Wo barah bijliyaan Aryan ko chhune se pehle hi us kaale ghere mein gir kar gayab ho chuki thin.
"Meri baari," Aryan ne dheere se kaha.
Usne apna haath hawa mein ghumaya aur un barah yoddhaon ki taraf ishara kiya.
"Asura Art: SOUL CRUSH!"
Achanak, un barah Generals ke piche kaali parchaayiyan (shadows) prakat huin. Wo parchaayiyan koi aur nahi, balki unhi Generals ke darr ka roop thin. Un parchaayiyon ne unke saron ko pakda aur ek jhatke mein unhe zameen par patak diya.
CRUNCH!
Barah Sky Realm experts ke shareer mitti mein mil gaye. Sirf ek saniye (second) mein, Empire ki aakhri umeed khatam ho gayi thi.
Aryan ab Ling ki taraf badha. Ling ne piche hatne ki koshish ki, lekin wo hil nahi pa rahi thi. Aryan ne uski thodi (chin) ko apni ungliyon se pakda aur use upar uthaya.
"Ling... tumne mujhse Asura Key mangi thi na?" Aryan ne uske kaan mein whisper kiya. "Main tumhe wo nahi dunga. Lekin main tumhe wo ehsaas zaroor dunga jo mere parents ne hazaron saal jhela hai."
Aryan ne apna haath Ling ke maathe (forehead) par rakha.
"Abyssal Curse: Eternal Nightmare."
Ling ki aankhein puri tarah safed ho gayin. Wo zinda thi, lekin uska dimaag ab ek aisi duniya mein qaid ho gaya tha jahan wo har pal hazaron baar mar rahi thi aur dubara jee rahi thi. Wo ab ek 'Zinda Laash' ban chuki thi, jo sirf deewaron ko ghoorti rahegi.
"Ab teri baari, Emperor," Aryan ne Vikramaditya ki taraf dekha.
Emperor ne apni sunehri talwaar nikaali, lekin uske haath kaanp rahe thay. "Ruko! Mere paas ek raaz hai! Main tumhe bata sakta hoon ki tumhare Asura Clan ko asliyat mein kisne tabaah kiya tha! Wo main nahi tha!"
Aryan ruk gaya. "Bol."
"Wo... wo 'The Dark God' hai jo Central Empire ke niche sota hai! Main toh bas uska ek sevak hoon!" Emperor ne gid-gidate hue kaha.
Aryan ne Shadow Fang nikaali. "Toh us Dark God ko kehna... ki Aryan aa raha hai. Lekin pehle, mujhe apni ladkiyon ko azad karna hai."
Aryan ne apni Gravity power ko poore Palace par phailaya.
"COLLAPSE!"
Shahi jail ki deewarein kanch ki tarah toot gayin. Wahan se teen saaye bahar nikle. Kavya, Zara aur Vanya. Teeno zakhmi thin, lekin Aryan ko is roop mein dekh kar unki aankhon mein chamak aa gayi.
Vanya daudti hui aayi aur Aryan ke gale lag gayi. "Tumne kar dikhaya... tum sach mein Asura Overlord ban gaye ho."
Kavya ne Aryan ke safed baalon ko chua. "Tumne humare liye sab kuch tabaah kar diya..."
Aryan ne teeno ko dekha aur unhe apne seene se laga liya. "Ab koi humein nahi rok sakta. Na koi Emperor, na koi God."
Aryan ne Emperor Vikramaditya ki taraf dekha aur ek aakhri slash maara.
SHWING!
Empire ka takht (throne) do hisson mein kat gaya, aur saath hi Emperor ka ghamand bhi. Aryan ne use mara nahi, balki uski cultivation poori tarah tabaah kar di aur use ek bhikhari bana kar sadak par chhod diya.
Aryan ne aasmaan ki taraf dekha jahan uske parents (Arjun aur Savitri) hawa mein tairte hue niche aa rahe thay, Kaalu ke upar sawar hokar. Poora parivaar ab saath tha.
Lekin tabhi, zameen zor se hilne lagi. Palace ke nichle hisse se ek kaali aag nikalne lagi jo suraj ko nigalne lagi. Ek bhayanak awaaz zameen ke niche se aayi:
"Asura... tumne mere sevak ko hara kar mujhe jaga diya hai. Ab yeh duniya narak banegi."
Aryan ne apni talwaar dubara pakdi. Uska chehra ab aur bhi khatarnak dikh raha tha.
"Lagta hai vacation thoda delay ho gaya hai."
Aryan ne Kavya, Vanya aur Zara ki taraf dekha aur muskuraaya.
"Taiyaar ho? Agla shikar ek god hai."

Wow bohat khoob update but Ling and Emperor ko zinda chorna bohat bada bewuqufi to nahi kar di waisay ab God se ladai shuru hone ko hain.
Maza aayega next update me. Intezar rahega.

 

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[Iron Man]

Chapter 35
Shahi Takht ka Patan aur Asura ka Insaaf



Imperial Square ki sunehri dhool ab khoon se laal ho chuki thi. Princess Ling, jo kuch der pehle ek magroor malika ki tarah khadi thi, ab apne bhari shahi jode mein zameen par giri hui thi. Uska saans lena mushkil ho raha tha kyunki Aryan ki 'Abyssal Gravity' ne hawa ko itna bhari kar diya tha ki har ek saans kisi khanjar ki tarah uske phefdon (lungs) mein chubh rahi thi.
"Pitaji... bachaaiye!" Ling ne rote hue chillaya, uski aankhein darr se phati hui thin.
Emperor Vikramaditya ka chehra gusse se baingani pad gaya tha. Unhone apna haath hawa mein uthaya aur unke piche aasmaan mein barah sunehre darwaze khul gaye. In darwazon se barah yoddha bahar nikle, jinme se har ek Sky Realm Stage 1 par tha.
"The Twelve Celestial Generals!" bheed mein se kisi ne dehshat mein chillaya. "Yeh Empire ki aakhri dhaal hain!"
Aryan ne un barah yoddhaon ko dekha aur halka sa muskuraaya. Uske safed baal hawa mein aise lehra rahe thay jaise maut ka parcham ho. "Barah kide... kya tumhe lagta hai yeh mujhe rok payenge?"
Emperor ne garaj kar kaha, "Aryan! Tumne Asura Key ko absorb karke narak ke dwar khol diye hain. Aaj main tumhari aatma ko tabaah kar dunga! Barah Generals, MARO ISE!"
Barah Generals ne ek saath apni talwarein uthayin aur aasmaan se barah bijliyaan (lightning bolts) Aryan par giri. Poora square ek sunehri roshni mein doob gaya. Dhamaka itna bhayanak tha ki aas-paas ki imaaratein dhish-mish ho gayin.
Ling ne raahat ki saans li. "Marr gaya... gaddar marr gaya!"
Lekin jaise hi dhuaan hata, wahan ka nazaara dekh kar sabki rooh kaanp gayi.
Aryan wahan khada tha, lekin usne apni talwaar tak nahi nikaali thi. Uske charo taraf ek kaala ghera tha—'The Void Devourer'. Wo barah bijliyaan Aryan ko chhune se pehle hi us kaale ghere mein gir kar gayab ho chuki thin.
"Meri baari," Aryan ne dheere se kaha.
Usne apna haath hawa mein ghumaya aur un barah yoddhaon ki taraf ishara kiya.
"Asura Art: SOUL CRUSH!"
Achanak, un barah Generals ke piche kaali parchaayiyan (shadows) prakat huin. Wo parchaayiyan koi aur nahi, balki unhi Generals ke darr ka roop thin. Un parchaayiyon ne unke saron ko pakda aur ek jhatke mein unhe zameen par patak diya.
CRUNCH!
Barah Sky Realm experts ke shareer mitti mein mil gaye. Sirf ek saniye (second) mein, Empire ki aakhri umeed khatam ho gayi thi.
Aryan ab Ling ki taraf badha. Ling ne piche hatne ki koshish ki, lekin wo hil nahi pa rahi thi. Aryan ne uski thodi (chin) ko apni ungliyon se pakda aur use upar uthaya.
"Ling... tumne mujhse Asura Key mangi thi na?" Aryan ne uske kaan mein whisper kiya. "Main tumhe wo nahi dunga. Lekin main tumhe wo ehsaas zaroor dunga jo mere parents ne hazaron saal jhela hai."
Aryan ne apna haath Ling ke maathe (forehead) par rakha.
"Abyssal Curse: Eternal Nightmare."
Ling ki aankhein puri tarah safed ho gayin. Wo zinda thi, lekin uska dimaag ab ek aisi duniya mein qaid ho gaya tha jahan wo har pal hazaron baar mar rahi thi aur dubara jee rahi thi. Wo ab ek 'Zinda Laash' ban chuki thi, jo sirf deewaron ko ghoorti rahegi.
"Ab teri baari, Emperor," Aryan ne Vikramaditya ki taraf dekha.
Emperor ne apni sunehri talwaar nikaali, lekin uske haath kaanp rahe thay. "Ruko! Mere paas ek raaz hai! Main tumhe bata sakta hoon ki tumhare Asura Clan ko asliyat mein kisne tabaah kiya tha! Wo main nahi tha!"
Aryan ruk gaya. "Bol."
"Wo... wo 'The Dark God' hai jo Central Empire ke niche sota hai! Main toh bas uska ek sevak hoon!" Emperor ne gid-gidate hue kaha.
Aryan ne Shadow Fang nikaali. "Toh us Dark God ko kehna... ki Aryan aa raha hai. Lekin pehle, mujhe apni ladkiyon ko azad karna hai."
Aryan ne apni Gravity power ko poore Palace par phailaya.
"COLLAPSE!"
Shahi jail ki deewarein kanch ki tarah toot gayin. Wahan se teen saaye bahar nikle. Kavya, Zara aur Vanya. Teeno zakhmi thin, lekin Aryan ko is roop mein dekh kar unki aankhon mein chamak aa gayi.
Vanya daudti hui aayi aur Aryan ke gale lag gayi. "Tumne kar dikhaya... tum sach mein Asura Overlord ban gaye ho."
Kavya ne Aryan ke safed baalon ko chua. "Tumne humare liye sab kuch tabaah kar diya..."
Aryan ne teeno ko dekha aur unhe apne seene se laga liya. "Ab koi humein nahi rok sakta. Na koi Emperor, na koi God."
Aryan ne Emperor Vikramaditya ki taraf dekha aur ek aakhri slash maara.
SHWING!
Empire ka takht (throne) do hisson mein kat gaya, aur saath hi Emperor ka ghamand bhi. Aryan ne use mara nahi, balki uski cultivation poori tarah tabaah kar di aur use ek bhikhari bana kar sadak par chhod diya.
Aryan ne aasmaan ki taraf dekha jahan uske parents (Arjun aur Savitri) hawa mein tairte hue niche aa rahe thay, Kaalu ke upar sawar hokar. Poora parivaar ab saath tha.
Lekin tabhi, zameen zor se hilne lagi. Palace ke nichle hisse se ek kaali aag nikalne lagi jo suraj ko nigalne lagi. Ek bhayanak awaaz zameen ke niche se aayi:
"Asura... tumne mere sevak ko hara kar mujhe jaga diya hai. Ab yeh duniya narak banegi."
Aryan ne apni talwaar dubara pakdi. Uska chehra ab aur bhi khatarnak dikh raha tha.
"Lagta hai vacation thoda delay ho gaya hai."
Aryan ne Kavya, Vanya aur Zara ki taraf dekha aur muskuraaya.
"Taiyaar ho? Agla shikar ek god hai."

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[Rex1]

Chapter 36​

Zameen ke phatne ki awaaz kisi bache hue shahi nagade jaisi nahi thi, balki aisa lag raha tha jaise dharti khud dard se karaah rahi ho. Imperial Palace ki sunehri neenv (foundation) kaanch ki tarah chuna-chuna ho gayi. Neeche se ek kaala dhuaan nikalne laga jo itna sarda (cold) tha ki jahan-jahan wo dhuaan touch hota, wahan ki zindagi turant patthar mein badal jati.
Dhuaan dheere-dheere ek vishal aakar lene laga. Wo 100-foot uncha ek saya tha jiske haath mein ek ruyi (scythe) thi aur uske seene mein ek dhadakta hua kaala suraj tha. Yeh tha Shunya-Dev, wo prachin devta jise sadiyon pehle Asura Clan ne qaid kiya tha.
"Ek bacha... mere shahi takht par baitha hai?" Shunya-Dev ki awaaz se aasmaan ke baadal phat gaye. Usne apni ruyi hawa mein ghumayi aur ek 'Void Wave' release ki.
Aryan ne turant apne par (wings) failaye aur Kavya, Vanya aur Zara ko piche dhakela. Usne apni Shadow Fang se block karne ki koshish ki, lekin us wave ka dabav itna bhayanak tha ki Aryan ke wings se khoon nikalne laga aur wo seedha ek deewar se ja takraya.
"Aryan!" Kavya chillayi. Usne apna haath zameen par rakha aur poore square ko ek 50-foot moti barf ki deewar se gher liya. "Glacial Fortress!"
Vanya ne apni purple aankhein band ki aur Shunya-Dev ke charo taraf hazaron kaali zanjeerein paida kar di. "Shadow Bind: Soul Lockdown!"
Lekin Shunya-Dev sirf hansa. Usne apna haath halka sa jhatka aur Kavya ki barf mitti ban gayi aur Vanya ki zanjeerein dhuan ho gayin. Dono ladkiyan muh ke bal giri, unki cultivation base unstable ho gayi thi.
Aryan dhero se bahar nikla. Uska chehra ab puri tarah badal chuka tha. Uski aankhon se purple aag nikal rahi thi.
Ting!
[Warning: Enemy Power Level - True Sky Realm Stage 5!]
[Odds of Victory: 0.1%]
[Secret Feature Unlocked: 'The Trinity Fusion'.]
"System, yeh kya hai?" Aryan ne dimaag mein pucha, jabki wo apni Shadow Fang se Shunya-Dev ke ek aur waar ko rok raha tha.
[Trinity Fusion: Host can merge the elemental cores of his companions into his Asura Key. Warning: This will drain their cultivation for a month.]
Aryan ne piche mudkar ladkiyon ko dekha. Zara, jo ab tak shant thi, aage aayi. "Aryan, humari parwah mat karo! Humne apni zindagi tumhe saupi hai. Agar tum haare, toh yeh duniya bachegi hi nahi."
Kavya aur Vanya ne bhi sar hilaya. Unhone ek-doosre ka haath pakda aur Aryan ke charo taraf ek tri-kon (triangle) bana liya.
"Theek hai... chalo dikhate hain is 'Bhagwan' ko ki Asura kya hota hai!" Aryan ne chillaya.
Kavya se Blue Ice Energy, Vanya se Dark Shadow Energy, aur Zara se Golden Spirit Energy nikal kar Aryan ke seene mein maujood Asura Key mein ghusne lagi.
BAM!
Aryan ka aura itna badha ki poore Central Empire ki building kaanpne lagi. Uske wings ab do nahi, balki che (6) ho gaye thay. Uski Shadow Fang pighal kar uske haath se jud gayi aur ek aisi talwaar bani jo roshni aur andhere dono se bani thi.
[State Attained: PARAM-ASURA (The Supreme Demon).]
Aryan ne ek pal mein fasla khatam kiya aur Shunya-Dev ke bilkul saamne pahuncha.
"Asura Domain: ZERO MASS CRUSH!"
Shunya-Dev ka vishal sharir achanak nichadne (compress) laga. Wo devta pehli baar darr gaya. "Nahi! Yeh taqat toh sirf us 'Master' ki thi! Tum ek mamooli insaan hokar yeh kaise...!"
"Main mamooli nahi hoon," Aryan ne apni talwaar uske kaale suraj (heart) mein ghusa di. "Main wo hoon jise tumne tabaah karne ki koshish ki thi. Main tumhara Anth (End) hoon."
"TRINITY STRIKE: THE VOID EXTERMINATION!"
Ek bhayanak roshni phuti jo poore continent se dikhayi de rahi thi. Shunya-Dev ka vishal sharir hazaron tukdon mein bikhra aur ek-ek karke wo tukde raakh ban gaye. Uski scythe zameen par giri aur toot kar kanch ban gayi.
Mahaul achanak shant ho gaya. Kaale baadal chhant gaye aur mahino baad Central Empire mein asli suraj ki kiran padi.
Aryan zameen par gira, uska sharir itna thaka hua tha ki wo apni ungli bhi nahi hila sakta tha. Kavya, Vanya aur Zara uske paas aakar gir gayin, unki energy poori tarah drained thi par unke chehre par sukoon tha.
Arjun aur Savitri, Aryan ke parents, daudte hue aaye. Arjun ne Aryan ka sar apni god mein liya. "Beta... tumne is duniya ko us narak se bacha liya jisme hum qaid thay."
Aryan ne dheere se apni aankhein kholi aur apne charo taraf dekha. Palace ruins mein tha, Empire ka takht toot chuka tha, lekin uske paas uska parivaar aur uski haseenayein thin.
Ting!
[World Quest: The Fall of the Dark God - COMPLETED!]
[Reward: 1,00,000 System Points, Full Restoration, and The Key to the 'Upper Realm'.]
"Upper Realm?" Aryan ne badbadaya.
Ting!
[Yes, Host. Central Empire is just a small pond. The real experts and your Asura Clan's origins lie in the 'Divine Heavens'. Do you wish to ascend?]
Aryan ne Kavya, Vanya aur Zara ki taraf dekha. Unho ne bhi System ki awaaz sun li thi (Heart-link ki wajah se).
"Jahan tum jaoge, hum wahan aayenge," Vanya ne uska haath pakadte hue kaha.
Aryan muskuraya aur khada hua. Usne aasmaan ki taraf dekha jahan ek sunehra darwaza dheere-dheere khul raha tha.
"Theek hai System. Safar abhi khatam nahi hua hai."
Aryan ne Kaalu ko bulaya, jo ab ek 'Void King Dragon' ban chuka tha. Sab log Kaalu ki peeth par baithe aur us sunehre darwaze ki taraf ud chale.
Neeche, Empire ke log hairaan hokar dekh rahe thay us 'Asura' ko jisne unhe maut se bachaya aur ab khud ek sitara ban kar aasmaan mein vileen ho raha tha.

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro