Fantasy The Asura System

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𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝟒𝟒 𝐭𝐨 𝟒𝟖 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐛𝐞𝐞𝐧 𝐩𝐮𝐛𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐡𝐞𝐝. 𝐏𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐬𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝, 𝐞𝐧𝐣𝐨𝐲, 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐝𝐨𝐧’𝐭 𝐟𝐨𝐫𝐠𝐞𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐚 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞.

 

[RAAZ]

Chapter 36​

Zameen ke phatne ki awaaz kisi bache hue shahi nagade jaisi nahi thi, balki aisa lag raha tha jaise dharti khud dard se karaah rahi ho. Imperial Palace ki sunehri neenv (foundation) kaanch ki tarah chuna-chuna ho gayi. Neeche se ek kaala dhuaan nikalne laga jo itna sarda (cold) tha ki jahan-jahan wo dhuaan touch hota, wahan ki zindagi turant patthar mein badal jati.
Dhuaan dheere-dheere ek vishal aakar lene laga. Wo 100-foot uncha ek saya tha jiske haath mein ek ruyi (scythe) thi aur uske seene mein ek dhadakta hua kaala suraj tha. Yeh tha Shunya-Dev, wo prachin devta jise sadiyon pehle Asura Clan ne qaid kiya tha.
"Ek bacha... mere shahi takht par baitha hai?" Shunya-Dev ki awaaz se aasmaan ke baadal phat gaye. Usne apni ruyi hawa mein ghumayi aur ek 'Void Wave' release ki.
Aryan ne turant apne par (wings) failaye aur Kavya, Vanya aur Zara ko piche dhakela. Usne apni Shadow Fang se block karne ki koshish ki, lekin us wave ka dabav itna bhayanak tha ki Aryan ke wings se khoon nikalne laga aur wo seedha ek deewar se ja takraya.
"Aryan!" Kavya chillayi. Usne apna haath zameen par rakha aur poore square ko ek 50-foot moti barf ki deewar se gher liya. "Glacial Fortress!"
Vanya ne apni purple aankhein band ki aur Shunya-Dev ke charo taraf hazaron kaali zanjeerein paida kar di. "Shadow Bind: Soul Lockdown!"
Lekin Shunya-Dev sirf hansa. Usne apna haath halka sa jhatka aur Kavya ki barf mitti ban gayi aur Vanya ki zanjeerein dhuan ho gayin. Dono ladkiyan muh ke bal giri, unki cultivation base unstable ho gayi thi.
Aryan dhero se bahar nikla. Uska chehra ab puri tarah badal chuka tha. Uski aankhon se purple aag nikal rahi thi.
Ting!
[Warning: Enemy Power Level - True Sky Realm Stage 5!]
[Odds of Victory: 0.1%]
[Secret Feature Unlocked: 'The Trinity Fusion'.]
"System, yeh kya hai?" Aryan ne dimaag mein pucha, jabki wo apni Shadow Fang se Shunya-Dev ke ek aur waar ko rok raha tha.
[Trinity Fusion: Host can merge the elemental cores of his companions into his Asura Key. Warning: This will drain their cultivation for a month.]
Aryan ne piche mudkar ladkiyon ko dekha. Zara, jo ab tak shant thi, aage aayi. "Aryan, humari parwah mat karo! Humne apni zindagi tumhe saupi hai. Agar tum haare, toh yeh duniya bachegi hi nahi."
Kavya aur Vanya ne bhi sar hilaya. Unhone ek-doosre ka haath pakda aur Aryan ke charo taraf ek tri-kon (triangle) bana liya.
"Theek hai... chalo dikhate hain is 'Bhagwan' ko ki Asura kya hota hai!" Aryan ne chillaya.
Kavya se Blue Ice Energy, Vanya se Dark Shadow Energy, aur Zara se Golden Spirit Energy nikal kar Aryan ke seene mein maujood Asura Key mein ghusne lagi.
BAM!
Aryan ka aura itna badha ki poore Central Empire ki building kaanpne lagi. Uske wings ab do nahi, balki che (6) ho gaye thay. Uski Shadow Fang pighal kar uske haath se jud gayi aur ek aisi talwaar bani jo roshni aur andhere dono se bani thi.
[State Attained: PARAM-ASURA (The Supreme Demon).]
Aryan ne ek pal mein fasla khatam kiya aur Shunya-Dev ke bilkul saamne pahuncha.
"Asura Domain: ZERO MASS CRUSH!"
Shunya-Dev ka vishal sharir achanak nichadne (compress) laga. Wo devta pehli baar darr gaya. "Nahi! Yeh taqat toh sirf us 'Master' ki thi! Tum ek mamooli insaan hokar yeh kaise...!"
"Main mamooli nahi hoon," Aryan ne apni talwaar uske kaale suraj (heart) mein ghusa di. "Main wo hoon jise tumne tabaah karne ki koshish ki thi. Main tumhara Anth (End) hoon."
"TRINITY STRIKE: THE VOID EXTERMINATION!"
Ek bhayanak roshni phuti jo poore continent se dikhayi de rahi thi. Shunya-Dev ka vishal sharir hazaron tukdon mein bikhra aur ek-ek karke wo tukde raakh ban gaye. Uski scythe zameen par giri aur toot kar kanch ban gayi.
Mahaul achanak shant ho gaya. Kaale baadal chhant gaye aur mahino baad Central Empire mein asli suraj ki kiran padi.
Aryan zameen par gira, uska sharir itna thaka hua tha ki wo apni ungli bhi nahi hila sakta tha. Kavya, Vanya aur Zara uske paas aakar gir gayin, unki energy poori tarah drained thi par unke chehre par sukoon tha.
Arjun aur Savitri, Aryan ke parents, daudte hue aaye. Arjun ne Aryan ka sar apni god mein liya. "Beta... tumne is duniya ko us narak se bacha liya jisme hum qaid thay."
Aryan ne dheere se apni aankhein kholi aur apne charo taraf dekha. Palace ruins mein tha, Empire ka takht toot chuka tha, lekin uske paas uska parivaar aur uski haseenayein thin.
Ting!
[World Quest: The Fall of the Dark God - COMPLETED!]
[Reward: 1,00,000 System Points, Full Restoration, and The Key to the 'Upper Realm'.]
"Upper Realm?" Aryan ne badbadaya.
Ting!
[Yes, Host. Central Empire is just a small pond. The real experts and your Asura Clan's origins lie in the 'Divine Heavens'. Do you wish to ascend?]
Aryan ne Kavya, Vanya aur Zara ki taraf dekha. Unho ne bhi System ki awaaz sun li thi (Heart-link ki wajah se).
"Jahan tum jaoge, hum wahan aayenge," Vanya ne uska haath pakadte hue kaha.
Aryan muskuraya aur khada hua. Usne aasmaan ki taraf dekha jahan ek sunehra darwaza dheere-dheere khul raha tha.
"Theek hai System. Safar abhi khatam nahi hua hai."
Aryan ne Kaalu ko bulaya, jo ab ek 'Void King Dragon' ban chuka tha. Sab log Kaalu ki peeth par baithe aur us sunehre darwaze ki taraf ud chale.
Neeche, Empire ke log hairaan hokar dekh rahe thay us 'Asura' ko jisne unhe maut se bachaya aur ab khud ek sitara ban kar aasmaan mein vileen ho raha tha.

Bohat khoob ek bohat bada sankar tal gaya but kia puri tarah yah aane Waley khatro ka yah ek trailer thaa. Woh to writer sahab hi batyenge. Aapki 4 stories me se sab se top story hai yah. Ab intezar rahega next update ka. Apna khayal rakhay.

 

[Haiwaan]

Chapter 36​

Zameen ke phatne ki awaaz kisi bache hue shahi nagade jaisi nahi thi, balki aisa lag raha tha jaise dharti khud dard se karaah rahi ho. Imperial Palace ki sunehri neenv (foundation) kaanch ki tarah chuna-chuna ho gayi. Neeche se ek kaala dhuaan nikalne laga jo itna sarda (cold) tha ki jahan-jahan wo dhuaan touch hota, wahan ki zindagi turant patthar mein badal jati.
Dhuaan dheere-dheere ek vishal aakar lene laga. Wo 100-foot uncha ek saya tha jiske haath mein ek ruyi (scythe) thi aur uske seene mein ek dhadakta hua kaala suraj tha. Yeh tha Shunya-Dev, wo prachin devta jise sadiyon pehle Asura Clan ne qaid kiya tha.
"Ek bacha... mere shahi takht par baitha hai?" Shunya-Dev ki awaaz se aasmaan ke baadal phat gaye. Usne apni ruyi hawa mein ghumayi aur ek 'Void Wave' release ki.
Aryan ne turant apne par (wings) failaye aur Kavya, Vanya aur Zara ko piche dhakela. Usne apni Shadow Fang se block karne ki koshish ki, lekin us wave ka dabav itna bhayanak tha ki Aryan ke wings se khoon nikalne laga aur wo seedha ek deewar se ja takraya.
"Aryan!" Kavya chillayi. Usne apna haath zameen par rakha aur poore square ko ek 50-foot moti barf ki deewar se gher liya. "Glacial Fortress!"
Vanya ne apni purple aankhein band ki aur Shunya-Dev ke charo taraf hazaron kaali zanjeerein paida kar di. "Shadow Bind: Soul Lockdown!"
Lekin Shunya-Dev sirf hansa. Usne apna haath halka sa jhatka aur Kavya ki barf mitti ban gayi aur Vanya ki zanjeerein dhuan ho gayin. Dono ladkiyan muh ke bal giri, unki cultivation base unstable ho gayi thi.
Aryan dhero se bahar nikla. Uska chehra ab puri tarah badal chuka tha. Uski aankhon se purple aag nikal rahi thi.
Ting!
[Warning: Enemy Power Level - True Sky Realm Stage 5!]
[Odds of Victory: 0.1%]
[Secret Feature Unlocked: 'The Trinity Fusion'.]
"System, yeh kya hai?" Aryan ne dimaag mein pucha, jabki wo apni Shadow Fang se Shunya-Dev ke ek aur waar ko rok raha tha.
[Trinity Fusion: Host can merge the elemental cores of his companions into his Asura Key. Warning: This will drain their cultivation for a month.]
Aryan ne piche mudkar ladkiyon ko dekha. Zara, jo ab tak shant thi, aage aayi. "Aryan, humari parwah mat karo! Humne apni zindagi tumhe saupi hai. Agar tum haare, toh yeh duniya bachegi hi nahi."
Kavya aur Vanya ne bhi sar hilaya. Unhone ek-doosre ka haath pakda aur Aryan ke charo taraf ek tri-kon (triangle) bana liya.
"Theek hai... chalo dikhate hain is 'Bhagwan' ko ki Asura kya hota hai!" Aryan ne chillaya.
Kavya se Blue Ice Energy, Vanya se Dark Shadow Energy, aur Zara se Golden Spirit Energy nikal kar Aryan ke seene mein maujood Asura Key mein ghusne lagi.
BAM!
Aryan ka aura itna badha ki poore Central Empire ki building kaanpne lagi. Uske wings ab do nahi, balki che (6) ho gaye thay. Uski Shadow Fang pighal kar uske haath se jud gayi aur ek aisi talwaar bani jo roshni aur andhere dono se bani thi.
[State Attained: PARAM-ASURA (The Supreme Demon).]
Aryan ne ek pal mein fasla khatam kiya aur Shunya-Dev ke bilkul saamne pahuncha.
"Asura Domain: ZERO MASS CRUSH!"
Shunya-Dev ka vishal sharir achanak nichadne (compress) laga. Wo devta pehli baar darr gaya. "Nahi! Yeh taqat toh sirf us 'Master' ki thi! Tum ek mamooli insaan hokar yeh kaise...!"
"Main mamooli nahi hoon," Aryan ne apni talwaar uske kaale suraj (heart) mein ghusa di. "Main wo hoon jise tumne tabaah karne ki koshish ki thi. Main tumhara Anth (End) hoon."
"TRINITY STRIKE: THE VOID EXTERMINATION!"
Ek bhayanak roshni phuti jo poore continent se dikhayi de rahi thi. Shunya-Dev ka vishal sharir hazaron tukdon mein bikhra aur ek-ek karke wo tukde raakh ban gaye. Uski scythe zameen par giri aur toot kar kanch ban gayi.
Mahaul achanak shant ho gaya. Kaale baadal chhant gaye aur mahino baad Central Empire mein asli suraj ki kiran padi.
Aryan zameen par gira, uska sharir itna thaka hua tha ki wo apni ungli bhi nahi hila sakta tha. Kavya, Vanya aur Zara uske paas aakar gir gayin, unki energy poori tarah drained thi par unke chehre par sukoon tha.
Arjun aur Savitri, Aryan ke parents, daudte hue aaye. Arjun ne Aryan ka sar apni god mein liya. "Beta... tumne is duniya ko us narak se bacha liya jisme hum qaid thay."
Aryan ne dheere se apni aankhein kholi aur apne charo taraf dekha. Palace ruins mein tha, Empire ka takht toot chuka tha, lekin uske paas uska parivaar aur uski haseenayein thin.
Ting!
[World Quest: The Fall of the Dark God - COMPLETED!]
[Reward: 1,00,000 System Points, Full Restoration, and The Key to the 'Upper Realm'.]
"Upper Realm?" Aryan ne badbadaya.
Ting!
[Yes, Host. Central Empire is just a small pond. The real experts and your Asura Clan's origins lie in the 'Divine Heavens'. Do you wish to ascend?]
Aryan ne Kavya, Vanya aur Zara ki taraf dekha. Unho ne bhi System ki awaaz sun li thi (Heart-link ki wajah se).
"Jahan tum jaoge, hum wahan aayenge," Vanya ne uska haath pakadte hue kaha.
Aryan muskuraya aur khada hua. Usne aasmaan ki taraf dekha jahan ek sunehra darwaza dheere-dheere khul raha tha.
"Theek hai System. Safar abhi khatam nahi hua hai."
Aryan ne Kaalu ko bulaya, jo ab ek 'Void King Dragon' ban chuka tha. Sab log Kaalu ki peeth par baithe aur us sunehre darwaze ki taraf ud chale.
Neeche, Empire ke log hairaan hokar dekh rahe thay us 'Asura' ko jisne unhe maut se bachaya aur ab khud ek sitara ban kar aasmaan mein vileen ho raha tha.

Nice n fantastic update bro

 

[krish1152]

nice update

 

[Sidh]

Mast update

 

[Rocky2602]

Nice n fantastic

 

[dc jutt]

Nice update bro

Shandaar update

 

[jattsingh1]

Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

 

[spritemathews]

Nice update bro

 

[king1969]

Excellent update

 

[Rex1]

Bohat khoob ek bohat bada sankar tal gaya but kia puri tarah yah aane Waley khatro ka yah ek trailer thaa. Woh to writer sahab hi batyenge. Aapki 4 stories me se sab se top story hai yah. Ab intezar rahega next update ka. Apna khayal rakhay.

"Bhai, itna bada compliment dene ke liye shukriya! Ye sun kar ki meri 4 stories mein se 'The Asura System' aapki favorite hai, meri mehnat safal ho gayi.

Aapne bilkul sahi pehchana—ye toh bas ek trailer tha! Abhi jo sankat tala hai, wo toh sirf aane wale bade toofan ki ek aahat hai. Central Empire ki politics, Princess Ling ka 'Forbidden' jaal, aur Aryan ka 'War Lord' banna... asli dhamaka toh ab shuru hone wala hai.

Aap bhi apna khayal rakhein aur aise hi support karte rahein. Aage ke update itna 'intense' hoga ki aapko har ek sawal ka jawab milne lagega.

Stay tuned, kyunki Asura ab rukne wala nahi hai!"

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Aap jaise readers hi meri asli taqat hain!'