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KAHANI BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR CHAL RAHI HAI.TOH AB THIRD CHAPTER SAMAAPT HO GAYA .AUR FOURTH CHAPTER RUNNING HOGA .
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bhai ye post to kuch doubt ko solve kiya liken sabi doubt solve nhi hua.....aage jake pata chalega......waiting for next updateSAAJANNaya chapter shuru karne se pahle main kuch baate clear karna chahta hu...Jaisa ki abhi 5th janam ki love story running hai, to pahle usko complete karna mere liye jyada jaruri hai kyon ki unka gahra sambandh aane wale chapter se hai..kintu iska ye matlab kadapi nahi hai ki kahani aage nahi badhegi...present ke minimum 3 updates week me dene ki koshish karunga..lekin jyada priority past ki rahegi.
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Chapter-4 me logo ka rujhan bhi kahani ke prati kam hua lekin isse mujhe koi shikayat nahi hai kyon ki iski vajah main janta hu.. sabse pahli vajah to yahi hai ki update ka irregular hona jabki dusri vajah past ki kahani lambi hona...lekin past ko lamba dikhana meri vivashta hai... halanki ye flashback nahi hai..pichle janam ki kahani apne aap me ek complete thread hai..isko aap iss tarah bhi kah sakte hain ki saat full thread ka sangrah hai ‘SAAJAN’...kahani me kewal ek hi flashback hai aur vo hai raj ke bachpan me ghar se jane aur vapis aane ke beech ke 16 saal ka samay..jo ki flashback me ayega..aur iss flashback ke madhyam se hi raj ki sabhi shaktiyo ka pata chalega..aur sath me guru maa ke rahasya par se parda uthega.
Saajan ki kahani basically divya aur saajan ki love story hai...lekin divya hi kahani ki sabse main heroine kyo hai.. ? ye samajhne ke liye pichle sabhi janam ki story ko janna avashyak hai…present me bahut se character hain, jinke karan divya ka kirdar utne asardar dhang se nahi ubhar kar aaya hai.
Poori kahani me main teen hi kirdar hain divya, pari aur priyadarshini..aur inn sabka centre point hai saajan…bahut se aise raaz hain present ke jinka jawab past ki kahani se hi milega.
Teesra karan, kahani ka jo plot maine socha tha, (jo ki front page par maine pahle hi diya hai sabhi chapter ke baare me) vaisa continue nahi chal paya…jaisa ki pari ke raaz par se parda uthane ka maine 9th chapter me socha tha lekin reader’s ki demand par 3rd chapter me hi kholna pada..issi tarah rajgarh ka raaz 7th chapter me socha tha lekin usko 4th chapter me karna pada.
Kahani ka jab beech me plot change hota hai to kahani ki jo series chal rahi hoti hai vo toot jati hai..aisa hi kuch iss kahani me bhi hua..poora chapter 4 aage ka plot present me shift karne aur running plot ke beech samanjasya bithane me hi nikal gaya isliye update posting me bhi deri ho rahi thi…
Halanki iss chapter me bhi 9th chapter ke kafi ansh le raha hu lekin vo taalmel ab set ho chuka hai…ye meri pahli kahani hai, isliye isme galtiya bhi kafi huyi..khair galtiyo se sabak seekh kar hi aage badha ja sakta hai.
Punaravlokan dene ka mera uddeshya ye hai ki ek bar ab tak ki kahani ka punar mulyankan ho jaye…aur aage ki rooprekha bhi nirdharit ho sake..jisse aap ko aur mujhe bhi samajhne me sahuliyat rahe…kyon ki itni lambi kahani me itna piche ke updates khud mujhe bhi yaad nahi rahte utni achchi tarah se…halanki abhi kahani lagbhag 35% hi complete huyi hai.
Kuch cheeze ek bar main phir se yaad dilana chahunga..maine second chapter me ye baat bar bar dohrayi thi ki raj ke andar prakriti ke teeno guno ka barabar matra me samavesh hai..mera matlab sato gun, rajo gun aur tamo gun se hai..sath hi ye bhi dikhaya tha ki raj hi saajan hai lekin saajan, raj nahi hai..khair iska matlab 10th aur last chapter me hi khulega.
Phir bhi iske liye hint de deta hu..Kahani me sandhya aur raj ekdam ek dusre ke opposite chal rahe hain…jaha saajan apne har agle janam me aur taqatwar hota gaya aur ab uski shaktiya apne charam par hain..vahi sandhya ke sath iska ulta chal raha hai.. jaise jaise pichle janam ki kahani khulti ja rahi hai, vaise vaise uski shaktiya badhti ja rahi hain..aur jab kahani ka pahle janam ka adhyay khulega tab uski shaktiya apne charam par pahuch jayengi..tab uska roop behad khatarnak ho jayega…matlab ki saajan apne janam ke badhte kram me taqatwar hua to sandhya apne janam ke ghat-te kram me ..
Kahani me Yamraj ke baare me bhi bataya ja chuka hai…agar sabne dhyan diya hoga to ye pahchanna koi kathin nahi hai ki raj, veer aur sandhya me se koun, kis samay yamraj ke roop me samne aaya…? Kyon ki teeno me antar hai..jo ki yamraj wale updates ko dhyan se padhne par asani se samajh me aa jayega…. halanki ye yamraj ka aadha sach hi hai.
Kahani ka 5th chapter kahani ka centre point hai..jaha bahut se pending suspenses par se parda uthega to kuch naye suspense create bhi honge..jaise ki raj ke naam karan ke samay guru ji ne kya kaha tha, mamta aur kajal se…? pari ne unhe kya bataya tha..? aghori ne raj ko uss jungle me kya cheez di thi…? Ye sabhi suspense iss chapter me open honge.
Iske sath hi guru maa ka raaz, raj ke andar koun koun si shaktiya hain, raj ke bachpan se le kar jawan hone tak ka flashback, sher ki parchhayi ka rahasya..ye sab bhi iss chapter me clear honge…aur sabse badi baat…maine starting me hi bataya tha ki raj is the main hero and main villain of the story..to iss chapter ko padhne ke baad aap ko samajh me aa jayega ki maine aisa kyo kaha tha.
Ye upcoming chapter maimum mythology par adharait hai..main poori koshish karunga ki usme varnit sabhi dristanto ka kahi na kahi dharm granth me ullekh milta ho..phir bhi kayi baate aisi bhi ho sakti hain jinka kisi granth me jikra na hua ho lekin unki pramanikta saarvabhaumik hogi....iss chapter me aap ko prachin bhartiya sanskriti ki jhalak bhi dekhne ko milegi.
Maine kayi logo se suna hai ki agar mythology par baat ho rahi ho to vaha par sex ka jikra karna galat hai ya phir vo writer ghatiya soch wala hai jisne vaha sex ko include kiya…main iss sambandh me bas itna hi kahunga, vishwa vikhtat sahityakar KALIDAS ki amar krati ‘Megh Dootam’ me kalidas ji ne bhagwan shiv aur mata parvati ka detail se romance dikhaya hai, to kya vo ghatiya writer ho gaye…? Ya phir unki vo world famous rachna ghatiya ho gayi…? Aisa koi dharm granth hai jisme sex ka jikra na aata ho…?
Kisi ke mann me kahani ke prati jo bhi doubts hain ya kuch suggessions hain, vo khule dil se apni baat kah sakte hain..mera poora prayas rahega, reader’s ke vicharo ke anuroop kahani me parivartan kar use aage badhane ka…
Aagami Adhyay (5th Chapter) Ke Kuch Pramukh Vishay Anukramanika (Nirdharit Plot)—
Janhavi Ka Vivah
Raj Ka Rajyabhishek
Rajgarh Punargaman
Priyadarshini Ki Virah Vyatha
Priyadarshini Ka Swayamvar
Dev Raj Ka Abhiman
Namuchi Ka Dev Lok Par Aakraman
Guru Maa Ka Rahasya
Kuch Pouradik Kathaye
Raj Ki Shaktiyo Ka Rahasya
Patal Lok Adventure
Raktasur Vs Saajan (Barabar Ka Yoddha)
Yamraj Ki Dahshat
Pari Ek Bar Phir….
4th Janam Ki Love Story.
Rajgarh Ka Raaz Continues..
Raj Is The Main Villain Of The Story..
And Many More…….
First Update Of This Chapter Will Come Tomorrow….
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