Incest SAAJAN

[Naughtyrishabh]

SAAJAN
UPDATE- 300​

Payal didi mujhse lipat kar mere hotho ko chumne lagi…na jane kab tak hum ek dusre me khoye rahe…hosh aane par main unko le kar sab ke paas aa gaya…payal didi ko jinda dekh kar sab ki jaan me jaan aayi..

Ab maine tilism todne ka faisla kar liya aur sab ko le kar mahal ke uss kamre me aa gaya jaha par maa mahakali ki vishal bhavya pratima thi…maine snan karne ke baad unki aradhna karte huye jaise hi unke ek hath me vo kamal ka phool rakha vaise hi ….

Ab Aage……

Mata ke hath me vo tilismi kamal pushp rakhte hi vaha jaise bhuchal aa gaya..jamin jor se kampit hone lagi…sab idhar udhar ludhakne lage aur phir mata rani ki poori murti ek divya aloukik prakash se dedeepyaman ho uthi…unki murti se nikalne wala prakash punj itna teevra tha ki sabhi ko apni ankhe band karni padi..main to dhyan me leen tha to meri ankhe already pahle se hi band thi….phir uss kamal aur unke hatho me sushobhit talwar se hoti huyi ek roshni mere andar sama gayi.

Unki murti se nikalne wala prakash dhire dhire samuche vrihadpur me vyapt hone laga aur kuch hi kshano me poora vrihadpur ka rajya uss aloukik jyoti punj se oat proat ho gaya...iss divya roshni ka prakash vrihadpur ke bahar bhi door door tak yaha tak ki dev lok tak bhi mahsoos kiya gaya…ek bar poore vrihadpur ko apne prakash punj se akshadit karne ke pashchat vo divya roshni dhire dhire kam hone lagi aur phir vah vilupt hoti chali gayi.

Roshni ke vilupt hote hi jaise hi sabne ankhe kholi to chounk gaye..kyon ki unki ankho ke samne ka poora drishya hi parivartit ho chuka tha..jo rajmahal ab tak khandahar dikh raha tha vo ab ek bhavya alishan mahal ka roop le chuka tha…charo taraf ka vatavaran basant ke mousam ki tarah khil utha tha….ye dekh kar sabhi bhouchakke rah gaye.

Mamta (shocked)—ye sab kaise ho gaya…?

Ruchi (hairan)—itni jaldi ye khandahar itna vishal aur khubsurat mahal kaise ban gaya…?

Payal—raj, ankhe khol na..dekh..ye sab kaise hua…?

Roopaly—beta tere mama abhi tak nahi mile…?

Kiran—kya ye tilism toot gaya…?

Maine phir dhire dhire ankhe kholi aur mahakali ke charno me apna shish jhuka kar unka charanodak liya…mere sath hi sath divya ne bhi mata rani ke shree charan kamlo me apna sir jhuka kar unki charan dhuli ko unka ashirwad samajh kar apne maathe par laga liya.

Mere ankhe kholte hi sabne apne apne sawalo ki bauchhar karni shuru kar di…aur main sabhi ke mann ke bhavo ko samajhte huye unka uttar dene laga.

Raj—ye sab tilism ke tootne ki vajah se hua hai…ab yaha kahi par bhi koi tilism shesh nahi hai aur na hi ab yaha kisi ko koi khatra hai…jitne bhi log gayab huye the aur unme se jo jinda hain ab main unhe dekh sakta hu..

Roopaly—to phir beta apni shaktiyo se jaldi se dekho na…

Raj—mami iske liye mujhe dhyan me jane ki avashyakta nahi hai…ye khidki me jo kaanch laga hua hai na, isme dekhne par pata chal jayega..

Mamta (hairan)—kaanch me dekhne par…! Lekin kaise..hame to kuch nahi dikh raha hai usme…?

Madhu—mujhe to sab kuch aar paar dikh raha hai…

Raj—maa, mami ..ye koi sadharan kaanch nahi hai..balki ye trikal darshi darpan hai..isme se ulta dekhne par beete huye samay ko dikhata hai jabki sidha dekhne par bhavishya dikhayi deta hai..

Kajal—agar aisa hai to tune pahle hi kyo nahi dekh kar pata laga liya apne mama aur uss aurat munni ka..

Raj—kyon ki pahle dekhne ka koi matlab nahi tha..uss samay hame vahi dikhayi deta jo yaha unke sath aate samay hamare samne ghatit hua tha…kyon ki vo poora kshetra hi tilism badhit tha..isliye tilism ke andar kya hai ya kya ho raha hai, ye dikhayi nahi deta…nah to mujhe payal didi aur janhavi ko dhoondne hi kyo jana padta..

Roopaly—jaldi dekh na beta..mujhe to isme kuch nahi aisa dikh raha hai..

Raj—aap ko isliye nahi dikh raha hai kyon ki aap ki kundalini jagrit nahi hai…isme se vahi dekh sakta hai jiski kundalini shakti jagrit ho….

Maine uss kaanch me jitne bhi log gayab huye the unka smaran karte huye usme dekhne laga…kuch hi pal me uss darpan me mujhe gayab huye logo me jo jo jivit the unki vartaman yatha sthiti dikhayi dene lagi….

Mamta—kuch pata chala beta…?

Raj—hmm maa…sab log aaj raat tak yaha pahuch jayenge..

Phir vaha tilism me jo sainik phanse huye the, tilism toot-te hi vo mahal ki taraf loutne lage..unke mahal aate hi maine unko har jagah ye ghosna karne ko kaha ki vrihadpur ab tilism mukt rajya hai..isliye jo jo log yaha se palayan kar gaye the, vo ab vapis lout sakte hain..

Kuch hi ghanto me ye khabar charo taraf aag ki tarah phail gayi..pahle to logo ko apne kaano par vishwash hi nahi hua lekin jab unhe pata chala ki saajan aur divya vapis lout aaye hain to logo ki utsukta badhne lagi..unhe kuch samay poorv mahsoos huye aloukik prakash ka tatparya bhi samajh me aane laga tha aur log ashcharya chakit ho kar mahal ki taraf aane lage..

Jitne bhi log gayab hone ke baad jivit the unki vartaman location bata kar unko laane ke liye maine sainiko ko bhej diya…raat hote hote tak sabhi log mahal me aa chuke the jinme mama ji aur munni bhi thi…gayab huye jyadatar logo me bachche aur ladkiya thi…bachcho ko bali dene ke uddeshya se gayab kiya gaya tha jabki ladkiyo ko sambhog ke uddeshya se…kyon ki sambhog tantrik kriya ke anusthan me ek anivarya ang mana jata hai jisme kuch khas prajati ki kuwari ladkiyo ke sath hi sambhog kiya jata hai kriya karne se pahle.

Munni aate hi mujhse rote huye lipat gayi..yahi haal mama ji ka bhi tha….mama ji ke sakushal milne se mami aur maa bhi behad khush thi…munni ko aise mujhse lipatte dekh kar payal didi ko achcha nahi laga to unhone turant hi munni ko khich kar mujhse alag kar diya.

Payal—(munni ko ghurte huye)..lipat ke rona jaruri hai kya…? Bina lipte nahi ro sakti…? (mann me)..jisko bhi dekho vahi raj se lipatne ka bahana khojti rahti hain..

Vo sabhi dus chudaile bhi vahi aa gayi thi…maine unn sabhi bachcho aur ladkiyo ke rahne ka prabandh vahi mahal me karwa diya kyon ki kamro ki koi kami nahi thi..sabhi bachche apni apni maa ke paas jane ke liye ro rahe the.

Maine har jagah suchna bhej di thi..isliye jaldi hi sab ke vrihadpur pahuchne ki sambhavna thi…bachcho ko sambhalne ka jimma divya aur priyadarshini ne le liya..jabki ladkiyo ka jimma ruchi didi aur maa ne…

Raj—didi, aap bhi maa ki help kar dena..

Payal—dekh raj, mujhe tere alawa kisi se koi matlab nahi hai…main agar udhar maa ke paas chali gayi to tujhe koun sambhalega..? na baba na..main tujhe chhod kar nahi jane wali..

Raat me sabhi sone chale gaye...payal didi mere sath hi rahi raat bhar...agle din mahal me tilism tootne ki khabar sun kar logo ki bheed ekatthi hone lagi..janhavi ke mata pita bhi apne gurudev sahit pahuch gaye..dono apni putri ko jivit dekh kar bahut khush huye..

Sabse jyada utsaah to unn matao ke chehre par tha jinke nanhe balak unki mamta ke aanchal se door kar diye gaye the…vo sabhi apne apne balko se roti huyi gale se laga rahi thi..atyant karunamayi drishya tha vah..jise dekh kar patthar dil hriday bhi pighal jata.

Sabhi log apne samne saajan aur divya ko ek bar punah dekh kar atyant chakit the aur behad khush bhi…unn bachcho ki maaye mera abhivadan karne lagi.

Aurat 1—saajan, aapka ye upkar hum sabhi dukhiyari maao par ek karz hai jise kabhi utara nahi ja sakta aur na hi hum ye karz utarna chahengi kabhi..

Raj—maine aap logo par koi ehsaan nahi kiya hai…yaha jo kuch bhi hua kahi na kahi uska jimmedar main hi tha..isliye sabhi gayab huye bachcho ko unke pariwar tak sakushal pahuchana mera farz tha..maine apne ussi farz ko poora karne ki koshish ki hai..

Aurat 2—agar bhagwan ke shree mukh se nikla ye kathan satya hai ki ‘maa ka sthan sabse ooncha hai’ to hum sabhi maaye aaj unhi bhagwan ko unke iss vachan ki aan dekar tumhe ye ashirwad deti hain ki tumhari kabhi parajay na ho…iss poore srasti ki koi bhi shakti tumhara baal bhi banka na kar sake…

Mamta (bhavuk)—(hath jod kar)..aap sabne mere bete ko ye ashirwad de kar aaj mujhe kritarth kar diya…aaj main aap sabhi ki rini ho gayi…mera aap sabhi matao ko pranam hai..

Aurat 3—ye hum sab dukhiyari maa ke dil se nikli dua hai…jab bhi saajan par koi sankat ayega to hamari ye dua dhaal ban kar saajan ki hifazat ke liye samne khadi ho jayegi...bhagwan ko apne hi vachan ki laaz rakhni hogi..

Admi 1—saajan aur divya ke aane ki khushi me rajya me utsav hona chahiye..

Veer—to theek hai..kal vaise bhi holi hai..to aap sabhi kal yahi par holikotsav manaye..

Phir iske baad jo bhi aati kuch na kuch ashirwad deti jati..agle din holi thi isliye maine sabhi se iss pavan avsar par vrihadpur me rukne ka anurodh kiya..jise sabhi ne saharsh swikar bhi kar liya…poora din milne milane me hi nikal gaya.

Agle din kisi ke hotho ki tapish se meri neend khuli..jab ankhe kholi to dekha ye payal didi thi jo mere upar let kar mere hotho ko chum rahi thi..maine bhi unka poora poora sath diya…hamare hoth jaise hi alag huye vaise hi unhone apne hatho me liya hua gulal mere chehre par ragad diya.

Payal—happy holi raj..

Raj—ye kya didi..aapne to mera poora chehra hi kharab kar diya..

Payal—to tu mera chehra kharab kar de…tu bhi laga le mujhe..maine mana tujhe lagane se mana thodi kiya hai..

Raj—lagaunga, jarur lagaunga...pahle baki logo se to mil lu..phir aap ke sath holi khelunga..

Payal—nahi, pahle tu mere sath holi khelega..baad me kisi aur ke sath..samjha..

Raj—didi, aap ke sath to itminan se khelunga…aur har jagah rang lagaunga..

Payal (ankho me dekhte huye)—to laga na..tujhe roka kisne hai…tera jaha jaha lagane ka mann kare laga le..

Raj—tabhi to kahta hu ki fursat me lagaunga aap ko..

Payal—(rooth kar)..nahi, pahle mujhe…

Raj—lekin mere paas rang nahi hai abhi..

Payal—mere paas hai na rang..ye le..aur laga de jaldi se..

Raj—ok..to batao..kaha se shuru karu... ?

Payal—main to har tarah se tere rang me rang jana chahti hu...(kaan me)..vaise tu kaha lagana chahta hai pahle mujhe rang... ?

Raj (dhire se)—bata du... ?

Payal—hmmm

Raj (kaan me)—aap ko har jagah rang lagaunga..kuch bhi nahi bachega..

Payal (madhoshi me)—to laga de na...main to yahi chahti hu ki tu mere jism ke har hisse ko apne rang me rang de..kahi koi jagah baki mat rakhna aaj...

Maine dono hatho me gulal le kar apne hoth payal didi ke hotho se laga diye aur unhe chumne laga..sath hi apne dono hatho ko niche se unke kurte me daal diya aur bra ko upar khiska kar unki dono chuchiyo ko rang bhare hatho me thaam kar masalne laga...

Aisa karte hi payal didi madhosh ho gayi aur mujhe jor jor se chumne lagi aur main unki chuchiyo ko jor jor se dabate huye tab tak rangta raha jab tak ki vo skhalit nahi ho gayi...skhalit hote hi vo mujhse kas ke chipak gayi.

Raj (kaan me)—abhi aur lagau ya phir baad me fursat me...

Payal (sharmate huye)—jaha jaha bach gaya hai vaha ab baad me laga lena..

Maine unke hoth chum kar poore unke chehre par gulal lagane ke baad room se bahar nikal gaya aur sabse pahle divya ke paas pahucha jaha vo hatho me rang liye mera hi intazar kar rahi thi jaise...mere andar kadam rakhte hi usne balti me ghola hua rang mere upar udel diya..

Divya—hihihihihhii

Raj—ye kya kiya yaar.. ? meri jagah koi aur aaya hota to kya sochta…?

Divya—tab aisa kabhi hota hi nahi..

Raj—kyo nahi hota…?

Divya—kyon ki apne saajan ke aane ki aahat ko mera dil turant pahchan leta hai..

Raj—achcha, ruk abhi batata hu…

Divya—hihihihihi

Divya idhar udhar bhagne lagi..akhir me maine use pakad hi liya aur apni baho me samet kar uske chehre ko dekhne laga..mujhe aise apni taraf dekhte huye mahsoos kar ke divya bhi mujhme kho gayi aur na jane kab hamare hoth alinganbaddh ho gaye pata nahi chala…vo to priyadarshini ki awaz sun kar hum hosh me aaye…jo ki darwaje par khadi khadi hame dekhe ja rahi thi.

Mujhse lipatne ke karan divya ke kapde bhi rang me rang gaye the..maine uske gore gore gaalo ko chum kar gulal mal diya…vo ek bar phir se mere seene se lag gayi..divya ke seene se lagte hi aisa laga jaise sari duniya ki khushiya hi meri baho me simat aayi ho..dil ko ajib sukun milne laga.

Priyadarshini—saajan, bahar sab intazar kar rahe hain aap ka..

Raj—hmmm

Maine divya se alag ho kar bahar jate huye priyadarshini ko pakad liya aur uske gore mukhde ko rang se aur bhi gulabi kar diya.. shayad priyadarshini bhi yahi chahti thi..isliye koi virodh karne ki jagah usne apni baho ka ghera mere charo taraf kas diya.

Raj—bura to nahi laga na..?

Priyadarshini—aise mat kaho saajan, iss pal ke liye to main sadiyo se vyakul thi…hamesha yahi sochti thi ki kab main apne saajan ki baho me houngi..kab mera saajan mujhe apni baho me samet kar mujhe pyar karega…? Mere liye ye sirf gulal nahi hai, balki vo khushnuma ehsaas hai jinke liye main bahut tadpi hu…mujhe apne me sama lo saajan..mujhe itna pyar karo ki main apne saajan ke siwa baki sab kuch bhul jau.. yaad rah jaye to sirf saajan..mera saajan..

Maine priyadarshini ko utha kar vahi divya ke palang par lita diya aur uske upar aa kar hotho ko chumne laga..priyadarshini iss adhar chumban me madhosh hoti gayi aur akhir me mera sath dene lagi..divya vahi khadi hame dekhti rahi, phir na jane usko kya sujhi ki ek balti rang la kar phir se mere upar udel diya..iss bar mere sath priyadarshini bhi poori tarah rang me bheeg gayi.

Divya—hihihihihi…bura na mano holi hai….hihihihihi

Maine divya ko bhi khich kar palang par gira diya aur dono ko bari bari se chumte huye pyar karne laga..jab dono poori tarah se rang me bheeg gayi tab unse alag ho kar bahar sab ke paas aa gaya jaha log bhaang ghotne me lage huye the...mere mana karne ke baad bhi unhone mujhe pila hi diya..aur mrinal ne baki sab gharwalo ko sharbat bol kar pila diya...

Mrinal—ye balatkari ye le gadbad pi le...

Veer—kyaa kaha gadbad..kaisi gadbad... ?

Mrinal—are vo kya bola tha raj ne...haan, sharbat le pi le..

Veer—kya mila ke layi hai isme.. ? mujhe to kuch gadbad lag raha hai..

Mrinal—sab ne piya hai ye gadbad sharbat..chal ab tu bhi pi ja..phir tujhe aaj bahut balatkar karne hain..

Veer mana karta raha lekin mrinal ne uske dono hath pakad kar jabardasti char paanch glass bhaang ki pila di jisse uss bechare ki to halat hi dekhne layak ho gayi..aur usse bhi jyada halat kharab karne wali baat to ye ho gayi ki mrinal ne bhi jaldi jaldi do teen glass pi gayi..

Mrinal (jhumte huye)—hihihi…bahut mast gadbad sharbat hai ye to…dev lok me bhi aisi gadbad sharbat nahi milti..ye balatkari, aa ja aaj main tujhe kushti ladna sikahti hu…

Sab log dholak, harmoniyum aur baki vadya yantra liye holi ke geet ga rahe the aur ek dusre ko rang gulal laga rahe the..ek dusre se gale mil kar apni khushi jahir kar rahe the…

Admi 2—saajan, aap bhi kuch holi me sunaiye..

Maharaj—haan, saajan..aaj sabhi bahut khush hain aapke aagman se…apni praja ki ichcha poori karo saajan..

Raj—jaisi apki agya maharaj.....(harmonium le kar)..ye prasang tab ka hai jab bhagwan shri ram ka ayodhya lotne ke baad rajyabhishek ho raha tha..sabhi nagar wasi ek dusre ko rang laga kar apni khushiya mana rahe the...tab hanuman ji ke mann me ye abhilasha paida huyi ki kyon na main aaj prabhu shri ram ko rang lagau...aur phir jo kabhi yuddh se nahi bhage the unko hanuman ji ki mansha samajh me aate hi singhasan se uth kar bhagna pada..prastut hai vahi bhajan..

Rang Le Ke Daude Hanuman Ji
Ram Ji Uth Ke Bhage..
Poonch me baadh ke Rang ki Balti ke dhaan ji
Ram ji uth ke bhaage
Rang le ke daude hanuman ji
Ram ji uth ke bhage

Desh Nirala kapi matwala,
Dhanya Ayodhya Ke Bhagya vishala
Bhakt ke mann ko bhanpe bhagwan ji
Ram ji uth ke bhage
Rang le ke daude hanuman ji
Ram ji uth ke bhage

Megh Ko Bole Kapi Jal Barsao
Indra fatafat tum rang ghulwao
Nabh me Samudra dev jal bhijwao
Awadh ki holi me hath batao
Dekh hanumat ke adbhut abhiyan ji
Ram ji uth ke bhage
Rang le ke daude hanuman ji
Ram ji uth ke bhage

Ram pukare bharat daudo hamko bachao
Bharat ji bole, bhaiya aaj hame na bulao
Lakhan ji chhup ke kaan khujaye
Ram ji bole, lakhan tum to bachao
Lakhan ji bole, kaan me ghus gaya pani,
bhaiya aaj mujhe kuch na sunaye
Siya mand mand chhede mushkan ji
Ram ji uth ke bhage
Rang le ke daude hanuman ji
Ram ji uth ke bhage

Maa kaushalya ne dhaank liye ram ko
Boli ab ram chandra nikalenge shaam ko
Kapi bole range bina ab na araam ho
Hey surya dev aaj mat hone dena shaam ho
Warna vanar ka koun hai thikana ji
Ram ji uth ke aa gaye
Bhakt se hardam haare bhagwan ji
Ram ji uth ke aa gaye
Ram ji aaye rang lagwaye, shri raghveer harashi ur laaye
Rang me range shri ram ji
Bajne lage holi ke baaje
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Ek admi—phir aage kya hua…?

Raj—phir..

Hori khele raghuveera awadh me hori khele raghuveera
Hil mil aave log lugayi bhayi mahalan me veera awadh me hori khele raghuveera
Holi hai..
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Sab geet par jhumne nachne lage..rango ki barish hone lagi…iske baad main sabke paas bari bari se ja kar rang lagane laga.. pahle maa ko lagaya..lekin bhaang ka nasha shayad unke upar bhi havi tha isliye mere sath aaj maa bhi kuch bahak gayi.

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

To tilism ka maya jaal toot chuka h or sab kuchh normal ho gya.
Man ko apne putra or putriyan mil gyi , raaj je mama or munni bhi aa gye.
Fir holi me to sabko jhooma diya sabse behtareen payal ke sath.
Divya or Priyadarshini ke sath bhi dilchasp raha.
Veer or mrinal to ekdam gazab.
Holi geet bhi shandar raha or last me ma bhi bahak gyi ????

Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjaar

 

[Akil]

Mast update bhai ye to payel jaise harkat kar raha hai kiya chitra hii is janam me payel bana hai dekhte hai aage

Bro yeh toh writer bhai ne pehle hi bata diya tha ki chitra hi paayal hai...
Uske behaviour aur hathiyaar se hi samajh jana chahiye tha...

 

[Reza]

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

 

[anandsngh12]

SAAJAN
PUNARAVLOKAN
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Naya chapter shuru karne se pahle main kuch baate clear karna chahta hu...Jaisa ki abhi 5th janam ki love story running hai, to pahle usko complete karna mere liye jyada jaruri hai kyon ki unka gahra sambandh aane wale chapter se hai..kintu iska ye matlab kadapi nahi hai ki kahani aage nahi badhegi...present ke minimum 3 updates week me dene ki koshish karunga..lekin jyada priority past ki rahegi.

Chapter-4 me logo ka rujhan bhi kahani ke prati kam hua lekin isse mujhe koi shikayat nahi hai kyon ki iski vajah main janta hu.. sabse pahli vajah to yahi hai ki update ka irregular hona jabki dusri vajah past ki kahani lambi hona...lekin past ko lamba dikhana meri vivashta hai... halanki ye flashback nahi hai..pichle janam ki kahani apne aap me ek complete thread hai..isko aap iss tarah bhi kah sakte hain ki saat full thread ka sangrah hai ‘SAAJAN’...kahani me kewal ek hi flashback hai aur vo hai raj ke bachpan me ghar se jane aur vapis aane ke beech ke 16 saal ka samay..jo ki flashback me ayega..aur iss flashback ke madhyam se hi raj ki sabhi shaktiyo ka pata chalega..aur sath me guru maa ke rahasya par se parda uthega.

Saajan ki kahani basically divya aur saajan ki love story hai...lekin divya hi kahani ki sabse main heroine kyo hai.. ? ye samajhne ke liye pichle sabhi janam ki story ko janna avashyak hai…present me bahut se character hain, jinke karan divya ka kirdar utne asardar dhang se nahi ubhar kar aaya hai.

Poori kahani me main teen hi kirdar hain divya, pari aur priyadarshini..aur inn sabka centre point hai saajan…bahut se aise raaz hain present ke jinka jawab past ki kahani se hi milega.

Teesra karan, kahani ka jo plot maine socha tha, (jo ki front page par maine pahle hi diya hai sabhi chapter ke baare me) vaisa continue nahi chal paya…jaisa ki pari ke raaz par se parda uthane ka maine 9th chapter me socha tha lekin reader’s ki demand par 3rd chapter me hi kholna pada..issi tarah rajgarh ka raaz 7th chapter me socha tha lekin usko 4th chapter me karna pada.

Kahani ka jab beech me plot change hota hai to kahani ki jo series chal rahi hoti hai vo toot jati hai..aisa hi kuch iss kahani me bhi hua..poora chapter 4 aage ka plot present me shift karne aur running plot ke beech samanjasya bithane me hi nikal gaya isliye update posting me bhi deri ho rahi thi…

Halanki iss chapter me bhi 9th chapter ke kafi ansh le raha hu lekin vo taalmel ab set ho chuka hai…ye meri pahli kahani hai, isliye isme galtiya bhi kafi huyi..khair galtiyo se sabak seekh kar hi aage badha ja sakta hai.

Punaravlokan dene ka mera uddeshya ye hai ki ek bar ab tak ki kahani ka punar mulyankan ho jaye…aur aage ki rooprekha bhi nirdharit ho sake..jisse aap ko aur mujhe bhi samajhne me sahuliyat rahe…kyon ki itni lambi kahani me itna piche ke updates khud mujhe bhi yaad nahi rahte utni achchi tarah se…halanki abhi kahani lagbhag 35% hi complete huyi hai.

Kuch cheeze ek bar main phir se yaad dilana chahunga..maine second chapter me ye baat bar bar dohrayi thi ki raj ke andar prakriti ke teeno guno ka barabar matra me samavesh hai..mera matlab sato gun, rajo gun aur tamo gun se hai..sath hi ye bhi dikhaya tha ki raj hi saajan hai lekin saajan, raj nahi hai..khair iska matlab 10th aur last chapter me hi khulega.

Phir bhi iske liye hint de deta hu..Kahani me sandhya aur raj ekdam ek dusre ke opposite chal rahe hain…jaha saajan apne har agle janam me aur taqatwar hota gaya aur ab uski shaktiya apne charam par hain..vahi sandhya ke sath iska ulta chal raha hai.. jaise jaise pichle janam ki kahani khulti ja rahi hai, vaise vaise uski shaktiya badhti ja rahi hain..aur jab kahani ka pahle janam ka adhyay khulega tab uski shaktiya apne charam par pahuch jayengi..tab uska roop behad khatarnak ho jayega…matlab ki saajan apne janam ke badhte kram me taqatwar hua to sandhya apne janam ke ghat-te kram me ..

Kahani me Yamraj ke baare me bhi bataya ja chuka hai…agar sabne dhyan diya hoga to ye pahchanna koi kathin nahi hai ki raj, veer aur sandhya me se koun, kis samay yamraj ke roop me samne aaya…? Kyon ki teeno me antar hai..jo ki yamraj wale updates ko dhyan se padhne par asani se samajh me aa jayega…. halanki ye yamraj ka aadha sach hi hai.

Kahani ka 5th chapter kahani ka centre point hai..jaha bahut se pending suspenses par se parda uthega to kuch naye suspense create bhi honge..jaise ki raj ke naam karan ke samay guru ji ne kya kaha tha, mamta aur kajal se…? pari ne unhe kya bataya tha..? aghori ne raj ko uss jungle me kya cheez di thi…? Ye sabhi suspense iss chapter me open honge.

Iske sath hi guru maa ka raaz, raj ke andar koun koun si shaktiya hain, raj ke bachpan se le kar jawan hone tak ka flashback, sher ki parchhayi ka rahasya..ye sab bhi iss chapter me clear honge…aur sabse badi baat…maine starting me hi bataya tha ki raj is the main hero and main villain of the story..to iss chapter ko padhne ke baad aap ko samajh me aa jayega ki maine aisa kyo kaha tha.

Ye upcoming chapter maimum mythology par adharait hai..main poori koshish karunga ki usme varnit sabhi dristanto ka kahi na kahi dharm granth me ullekh milta ho..phir bhi kayi baate aisi bhi ho sakti hain jinka kisi granth me jikra na hua ho lekin unki pramanikta saarvabhaumik hogi....iss chapter me aap ko prachin bhartiya sanskriti ki jhalak bhi dekhne ko milegi.

Maine kayi logo se suna hai ki agar mythology par baat ho rahi ho to vaha par sex ka jikra karna galat hai ya phir vo writer ghatiya soch wala hai jisne vaha sex ko include kiya…main iss sambandh me bas itna hi kahunga, vishwa vikhtat sahityakar KALIDAS ki amar krati ‘Megh Dootam’ me kalidas ji ne bhagwan shiv aur mata parvati ka detail se romance dikhaya hai, to kya vo ghatiya writer ho gaye…? Ya phir unki vo world famous rachna ghatiya ho gayi…? Aisa koi dharm granth hai jisme sex ka jikra na aata ho…?

Kisi ke mann me kahani ke prati jo bhi doubts hain ya kuch suggessions hain, vo khule dil se apni baat kah sakte hain..mera poora prayas rahega, reader’s ke vicharo ke anuroop kahani me parivartan kar use aage badhane ka…

Aagami Adhyay (5th Chapter) Ke Kuch Pramukh Vishay Anukramanika (Nirdharit Plot)—

Janhavi Ka Vivah
Raj Ka Rajyabhishek
Rajgarh Punargaman
Priyadarshini Ki Virah Vyatha
Priyadarshini Ka Swayamvar
Dev Raj Ka Abhiman
Namuchi Ka Dev Lok Par Aakraman
Guru Maa Ka Rahasya
Kuch Pouradik Kathaye
Raj Ki Shaktiyo Ka Rahasya
Patal Lok Adventure
Raktasur Vs Saajan (Barabar Ka Yoddha)
Yamraj Ki Dahshat
Pari Ek Bar Phir….
4th Janam Ki Love Story.
Rajgarh Ka Raaz Continues..
Raj Is The Main Villain Of The Story..
And Many More…….

First Update Of This Chapter Will Come Tomorrow….

 

[aman rathore]

Bhai bahot saare doubts iss punaravalokan ke dwara clear ho gaye hain,
next update ka besabri se intazar rahega bhai

 

[killar_back]

Anand Bhai.......
Sach mai aapki novel ki baat hi alag hai, isko samajhane ke liye extra efforts ki jaroorat hoti hai.....
Kafi deep mai sochana padta hai.....

Aapka bahut hi dhanyawad hai, iss prakar ki adbhut rachna ke liye

 

[Naik]

Bahot shaandaar di aapne
Bas update ka besabri intizar h

 

[Sanju]

Intazar rahega bhai update ka

 

[Black water]

Super Ananda bhai

 

[Vijay Sharma]

waiting for next update....