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BAAT TO SAHI KAHI BHAI NE. BUT BHAI AAPKI KI BHI EK BAAT GALAT HAI AAPKE LAGBHAG HAR UPDATES ME REPEATED SEX SCENCES HOTE HAI. LAGTA HAI AAP SEX SCENE LIKH RAHE HOTE HAI BUT USME BHI KUCH KAHANI KE SENTENCE LIKH JAATE HAI. YAHA PAR LOG SIRF SEX SCENCES KE LIYE NAHI AATE. STORY KE LIYE BHI AATE HAI. TO MERI GUJARISH HAI KI KUCH SEX SE HALKE BHI STORY LIKHO.Chalo me bhi kuch bol deta hu me bhi kai story likhi puri ki h bhale ki me koi acha writer nahi hu par andaza h update likhane me kitan taim mehant lagti h lekin ek update mahine lag jaye dene me bhai 12 ghante kam karke aauga ek ghante roj dikhuga to mahine me do update to aaram se diya ja skata h
Me sochta hu mahine se jayda lag jate h ek update dene me to puri story puri hone me mere bache ke bache ho jayege
Mag karna mene apne man mi bat kahi kisi ko bura bhala nahi bola meri story ko mere chahane wale pyar dete h do me hames taim pe update deta hu bra nahi hota 4k word ka hita h lekin ek din chor ke update deta regta hu dekho achi story sochane likhane me taim lgta h lekin itna taim
Me to hamesa yahi sochta hu kab meri story puri ho aur me apne chahane walo ke liye nai aur achi story leke aau ek story puri laif leke chalna naa baba naa story jaldi puri ho is kiye me hamesa taim pe update deta rehta hu
Mera fisk h ek din chor dusare din update deta hi deta hu abhi tak wo rul mene nahi tora h naa koi story adhuri chori h
Khair dekhte h ye story end pe ja pati h ya nahi
BAAT AAPKI BHI SAHI HAI BUT KUCH SAMAY SE UPDATE EK DUM SLOW SLOW AA RAHE HAI. AUR KOI EK DAY COMFIRM BHI NAHI HOTA JIS DIN BOLA JAATA HAI UPDATE KA. APNI KAHI BAAT KA BHI KOI MOL HOTA HAI.Guys, maine yahan post isliye daali thi kyunki Wolfy abhi apne career aur personal responsibilities mein kaafi busy hai. Phir bhi baar baar update update karna honestly thoda unfair lagta hai. Thoda common sense bhi use karo yaar.
Woh XF par active nahi aa paa raha tha, isliye usne mujhe bola post karne ke liye. Aur tum sabne story padhi hai na, itni detailing, realism aur research ke saath likhna koi aasaan kaam nahi hota. Har chapter ke peeche bahut time aur effort lagta hai.
10-12 ghante office, uske baad family, friends aur real life responsibilities manage karna… phir uske beech time nikal ke likhna. Kisi ko criticise karna bahut aasaan hota hai, lekin consistently itni quality maintain karna utna hi mushkil.
Agar usse story band hi karni hoti, toh woh kabka kar chuka hota. But sach yeh hai ki woh har haal mein story complete karna chahta hai. Haan, thoda time lag raha hai, but iska matlab yeh nahi ki uski dedication kam ho gayi.
Bas itni request hai thoda patience rakho aur writer ko support karo. Pressure se stories better nahi hoti, support se hoti hain.
Aur haan, baat hui hai usse. Woh jaldi hi update dene ki koshish karega. Aur haa yeh story thread hai, please yahan spamming mat karo.
ISME KYA KARNA HAI BAS ID LOGIN KAR KE JO BHI PROBLEM HAI WO BATA DE EK STICKY NOTE LAGA KE. KAM KAM READERS KO YE TO PATA RAHEGA KI UPDATE KYU NAHI AA RAHE AUR YE KEHNA KI XFORUM PAR AA NAHI PAA RAHE HAI AUR KISI DUSRE KO KAHA HAI POST KARNE KE LIYE . YE TO GALAT HAI KEHNA. ITNA SAMAY TO SABKE PASS HOTA HAI.Woh XF par active nahi aa paa raha tha, isliye usne mujhe bola post karne ke liye
BAAT AAPKI BHI SAHI HAI BUT KUCH SAMAY SE UPDATE EK DUM SLOW SLOW AA RAHE HAI. AUR KOI EK DAY COMFIRM BHI NAHI HOTA JIS DIN BOLA JAATA HAI UPDATE KA. APNI KAHI BAAT KA BHI KOI MOL HOTA HAI.
ISME KYA KARNA HAI BAS ID LOGIN KAR KE JO BHI PROBLEM HAI WO BATA DE EK STICKY NOTE LAGA KE. KAM KAM READERS KO YE TO PATA RAHEGA KI UPDATE KYU NAHI AA RAHE AUR YE KEHNA KI XFORUM PAR AA NAHI PAA RAHE HAI AUR KISI DUSRE KO KAHA HAI POST KARNE KE LIYE . YE TO GALAT HAI KEHNA. ITNA SAMAY TO SABKE PASS HOTA HAI.
dekho bahot achi to nahi lekin me achi story to likh hi sakta hu me nya tha sex pe fokas karke apni man ke kar li bich me mene long story likhi sirf ek story jise pyar bhi milaBAAT TO SAHI KAHI BHAI NE. BUT BHAI AAPKI KI BHI EK BAAT GALAT HAI AAPKE LAGBHAG HAR UPDATES ME REPEATED SEX SCENCES HOTE HAI. LAGTA HAI AAP SEX SCENE LIKH RAHE HOTE HAI BUT USME BHI KUCH KAHANI KE SENTENCE LIKH JAATE HAI. YAHA PAR LOG SIRF SEX SCENCES KE LIYE NAHI AATE. STORY KE LIYE BHI AATE HAI. TO MERI GUJARISH HAI KI KUCH SEX SE HALKE BHI STORY LIKHO.

BAAT TO SAHI KAHI BHAI NE. BUT BHAI AAPKI KI BHI EK BAAT GALAT HAI AAPKE LAGBHAG HAR UPDATES ME REPEATED SEX SCENCES HOTE HAI. LAGTA HAI AAP SEX SCENE LIKH RAHE HOTE HAI BUT USME BHI KUCH KAHANI KE SENTENCE LIKH JAATE HAI. YAHA PAR LOG SIRF SEX SCENCES KE LIYE NAHI AATE. STORY KE LIYE BHI AATE HAI. TO MERI GUJARISH HAI KI KUCH SEX SE HALKE BHI STORY LIKHO.
BAAT AAPKI BHI SAHI HAI BUT KUCH SAMAY SE UPDATE EK DUM SLOW SLOW AA RAHE HAI. AUR KOI EK DAY COMFIRM BHI NAHI HOTA JIS DIN BOLA JAATA HAI UPDATE KA. APNI KAHI BAAT KA BHI KOI MOL HOTA HAI.
ISME KYA KARNA HAI BAS ID LOGIN KAR KE JO BHI PROBLEM HAI WO BATA DE EK STICKY NOTE LAGA KE. KAM KAM READERS KO YE TO PATA RAHEGA KI UPDATE KYU NAHI AA RAHE AUR YE KEHNA KI XFORUM PAR AA NAHI PAA RAHE HAI AUR KISI DUSRE KO KAHA HAI POST KARNE KE LIYE . YE TO GALAT HAI KEHNA. ITNA SAMAY TO SABKE PASS HOTA HAI.
dekho bahot achi to nahi lekin me achi story to likh hi sakta hu me nya tha sex pe fokas karke apni man ke kar li bich me mene long story likhi sirf ek story jise pyar bhi mila
Lekin ab sex sex story likhake me bhi thak gya hu jaldi hi long story suru karne wala hu jo meri ab tak ki sab se alag long story hogi jise me apne pure dil se likhane wala hu kisis karne wala hu sab nya alag hoga sirf sex nahi kahani bhi hogi baki![]()
Bro aab to kar do kuch intzar maat krwao abb![]()
Guy's yahan spam mat karo... Update aa jayega...Update 155 was posted on dt 20th June 2023….
After that Approximately 35 months and 58 updates….
1.65 update per month…. below 2….
Update never comes on the day promised by writer….
Target: 250 likes , story ko most replies wala banana hai aur viewship mein 1st number par aana hai….
Hume bhi pata hai hum paid nehi karte ….
Fir bhi sab chalta hai aur aesa hi chalta rahega….
Because this is one of the best free story…
Writer ka bhi personal aur professional life hai…
Respect that
Bhai tu rehne de mera kya hai mujhe to boldo mujhe ghanta fark nahi padta ki aap kya cahte ho kya nahi maine jo likha wo hoya baat khatam ab usse aage badho move on karo chill karoBAAT TO SAHI KAHI BHAI NE. BUT BHAI AAPKI KI BHI EK BAAT GALAT HAI AAPKE LAGBHAG HAR UPDATES ME REPEATED SEX SCENCES HOTE HAI. LAGTA HAI AAP SEX SCENE LIKH RAHE HOTE HAI BUT USME BHI KUCH KAHANI KE SENTENCE LIKH JAATE HAI. YAHA PAR LOG SIRF SEX SCENCES KE LIYE NAHI AATE. STORY KE LIYE BHI AATE HAI. TO MERI GUJARISH HAI KI KUCH SEX SE HALKE BHI STORY LIKHO.
Ye toh pakka daru pike reply de rha hai...wo bhi desi...iski speling se hi lag rha hai....Chalo me bhi kuch bol deta hu me bhi kai story likhi puri ki h bhale ki me koi acha writer nahi hu par andaza h update likhane me kitan taim mehant lagti h lekin ek update mahine lag jaye dene me bhai 12 ghante kam karke aauga ek ghante roj dikhuga to mahine me do update to aaram se diya ja skata h
Me sochta hu mahine se jayda lag jate h ek update dene me to puri story puri hone me mere bache ke bache ho jayege
Mag karna mene apne man mi bat kahi kisi ko bura bhala nahi bola meri story ko mere chahane wale pyar dete h do me hames taim pe update deta hu bra nahi hota 4k word ka hita h lekin ek din chor ke update deta regta hu dekho achi story sochane likhane me taim lgta h lekin itna taim
Me to hamesa yahi sochta hu kab meri story puri ho aur me apne chahane walo ke liye nai aur achi story leke aau ek story puri laif leke chalna naa baba naa story jaldi puri ho is kiye me hamesa taim pe update deta rehta hu
Mera fisk h ek din chor dusare din update deta hi deta hu abhi tak wo rul mene nahi tora h naa koi story adhuri chori h
Khair dekhte h ye story end pe ja pati h ya nahi